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professoredu · 1 year ago
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Top 5 Tips for Avoiding Run-On Sentences
1. Break Long Sentences: Divide lengthy sentences into shorter, clearer ones. Aim for one main idea per sentence.
2. Use Proper Punctuation: Ensure each independent clause is separated by appropriate punctuation (comma, semicolon, or period).
3. Utilize Conjunctions: Connect related independent clauses with conjunctions like "and," "but," "or," or "yet" to create compound sentences.
4. Employ Transitional Phrases: Introduce dependent clauses with transitional phrases like "however," "therefore," or "in addition" to enhance coherence.
5. Proofread and Revise: Review your writing for run-on sentences during the editing process. Read aloud to identify any awkward phrasing or lack of clarity.
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warmwittywords · 6 years ago
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granitemoon · 3 years ago
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Darius Origin Part 11
But not for long. Suddenly he was surrounded in a courtroom of abominations. All in various lawyer uniforms. They all put their hands in thumbs up positions. Then the floor swayed and bucked. Then it opened up into a hole, pulling him in to it. Next he saw the different ways abominations have been used throughout time. He was shocked. They don't teach this at school. At school abominations were used to tasks, basically servants. But here they looked more… like friends.. Companions even. He liked it. Then an abomination who had been putting flowers in a girls hair, noticed him. He waddled up to him and placed a set of flowers on his head. The abomination put its hand on his shoulders and thrust his head into Darius's and all of a sudden he was an abomination. They had merged. They were one. He spent a lot of time in this new form learning to maneuver and shape weapons with his hands. It felt so free. And unrestricting. It just came and was done. 
No spell circle, it just..was. As walked around he eventually discovered a lake. He didn't know what to expect but when he looked down all he saw was his, but not.. His face was goopy. His hair was like a cloud shifting and changing above his head. He leaned closer to the water. Now he was  in the water. Then everything went black again. Next thing he knew he was up. How long has he been asleep? He paddled downstairs, where he saw the amount of plates his parents must have boright him while he was asleep. They were out again, of course.  With a most recent plate of a breakfast burrito and appleblood. From the looks of the plates, and finding the calendar it was sunday. OH NO!! It was the day of the fight! How’d he sleep for that long?? It was going to be tonight at 8. He checked outside and breathed a sigh of relief. It was bright outside. To confirm, he ran into the living room. Yes! It was 9:00 am! He still had time. Now coming down from his panic he started to wonder. Did anything change? He raced upstairs to look in the mirror. “OH MY TITAN!” he exclaimed. Looking back at him was himself, but with green eyes and his hair was like in his dream. It was fluffy and abomination colored. His hair still flowed to his shoulders. However he noticed that there was now an abomination in it. “What will people say? If I enter like this, they will know something is up. Could he change it back? He owed himself to try. He concentrated on his hair. It was hard, like moving a boulder. But slowly it became to settle down, the abomination color turned back to black. The eye disappeared. 
The only difference is that the lighter patch of his hair was a tad lighter. He breathed a sigh of belief. Now they eyes he said. He concentrated like he did with his hair. But they didn’t change back. No matter how much he tried. Eventually he gave up and tried to find an excuse that he could use. His grandmother on his father’s side had had green eyes and maybe his greater grandfather too. Maybe the genes just awoke? Yeah, that would have to work as an explanation 
Anyway he couldn't focus on that. He needed to practice these new abilities. He must win! With that pondering in his head, he went out to the back yard. He first attempted to summon an abomination. It was so easy and fluid to make a spell circle. To test it he used it to punch some trees. Which it decimated easily. He let it loose form and tried to form it again without a spell circle, and again it formed easily. He performed the same test and it was the same, if not better. He felt the anxiousness leave his body. He felt so light. The experiment actually worked. “It worked!!” he shouted to the air. Raising his arms up above his head in victory. As he did so, his arms turned into abomination arms and furthermore turned into axes. “UHHHH” he began. He quickly tried to shake them off. It didn’t work. He tried to purposely throw them. That didn't work. By this point he started really freaking out. His shaking of his hands became more erratic. But he breathed in and out. He steeled himself and concentrated. This time with his eyes opened he saw the process of his hands reverting to his normal hands. He breathed with relief and tried again this time staying calm and focused. This time his hands changed to a blade. He swung it around and hit a tree. The tree gout pierced. He practiced turning it back. 
Accustomed to it now and it is changing back and forth. He wondered about his dream. Could he really become an abomination? He decided he wanted to try it but he also wanted to know what he looked like. So he quickly ran inside the house to grab a handheld mirror. He grabbed it and briefly caught a glimpse of himself and his new green eyes. He got back to his spot and he closed his eyes and he called the vision into his mind, then looking down  at the mirror he opened his eyes. As abomination enveloped him the last thing he saw was how his new green eyes turned into having black sclera and a bright green iris with another green ring around it. Then it cut to black for a second, then when he could see next he was not a lot higher off the ground. 
Raising his arms to his face and looking down he could see that he  was completely encased in abomination. “Holy titan!” his voice sounded deeper and grasper.  “He could actually win this,” he thought. Continuing on “ it’s also super unique, so that would get belos’s attention. He dispelled the form and he lowered himself easily with the remaining goo. Now it was time to rest as the fight was very soon.  He got himself some apple blood and  relaxed on the couch. To make it on time he was going to leave in 10 minutes to make it on time. 
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stalkersquirrel · 3 years ago
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Hi. o.o
I am a learning writer that gets inspo from youtubers and twitch streamers.
Currently I am writing:
The Creature [Inspo created by Twitch Streamer: Unic0rnym0us]
We Are Survivors [Inspo created by Twitch Streamers: PlayguePals]
Chaos We Made [Inspo created by Twitch Streamer: MaysieMoon]
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wondryearsblog · 4 years ago
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ONLINE CUPCAKE BAKING workshop. Baking for many is a stress reliever. Baking for some is pure passion. Where as there are many who are desperately wanting to learn to bake. So here we are at WondrYears, with baking workshop for all age groups. For all the little ones, make sure your parents are there to help.
What do we need to keep with us before joining this workshop
1. All purpose flour 2. mango 3. powdered sugar 4. baking powder 5. baking soda 6. milk 7. oil 8. vanilla essence 9. vinegar.
For free demo class we can go for mango cupcake along with mango ganache icing.
Join this workshop at 6 pm, Wednesday by clicking on
https://www.wondryears.com/skills-and-hobbies-online-live-class/online-cupcake-baking-hands-on-workshop
Or
call : +91-93734-87168 +91-99200-40024 +91-98180-26372 Email : [email protected]
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her-wanderingthoughts · 4 years ago
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Some memories don't fade...
Do they??
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