Hi there, just want to give a little feedback for 'Do you feel my hand, it is there' (you don't have to publish this ask). Y/N developed feelings for Minho way too quickly, there was little build up over there. For a doctor and someone who's in his late 20s, the way Minho’s character was portrayed did not mirror that. It was as if he was still in his early 20s and still a little immature. Doctors or someone with a fancy lifestyle don't really drink using a red solo cup, it's more fit for a uni student.
The chapters were also very short. The whole fic could've been combined in 4 chapters. The itilicization was very confusing and overused as well. It was all over the place.
Overall, you're heading in the right direction. Just a few adjustments here and there. I hope to see more of your works in the future!
oh no, I'm gonna publish this ask alright... 😇
first of all, I find it extremely hilarious how you've sent this on anon. you're truly a coward, to want to shit all over me and my work and then keep yourself on anon. that's literal clown shit right there. 🤡
second, let me make it CRYSTAL CLEAR that I do not need your feedback. whether it's good or bad. and if you have nothing good to say, keep it your fucking self.
y/n didn't develop feelings for minho too quickly. if you fucking READ between the lines throughout the fic, you'd realize that she always had a thing for him, but had been suppressing her feelings. but it's alright, I know your tiny, pea-sized brain could never grasp such a concept... 🥺
also, news flash - most men don't fully mature into their well into their 30s. even as adults, everyone acts immature at times. and when you've been under such pressure and repressing things for so long, I'm sure YOU'D act immature if you were in Minho's shoes. also, this is FANFIC. this aren't supposed to be wholly realistic. so use your fucking 💫 imagination 🌈 and realize that.
lmao and how the fuck do you know what doctors do and don't do?! 😂 you're getting butthurt over a single cup that was mentioned like, 2 times. get over yourself. 💀
I love how you're shitting all over my work under the guise of 'giving feedback' and then you're complaining about the chapter lengths. bitch, if you don't like it so much, STOP READING. no one's holding a gun to your head and forcing you to read my work. and I enjoyed splitting the fic up into separate parts, it made things fun. 😉
haha now you're criticizing my style... wow, you're truly on a roll now!! if the italics bothered you sooo much, you should've stopped reading. not everyone is going to mesh with my style and that's okay, but I sure as hell don't appreciate someone like you sending me this long ass 'advice' over how I write.
last time I checked, YOU weren't writing a 40.k word fanfic!! 🧐 and let me kindly remind you that I don't owe you a damn thing. I can write however I want, whenever I want. I'm not writing for anyone else's approval and I'm sure as hell not spending a month of my time writing a fic like this that has meant a great to me personally, only to have someone like you criticize almost every part of it.
get the stick out of your ass and go live your life instead of spending your time sending comments like this to writers who break their backs to MAKE FREE CONTENT FOR YOU. and I don't appreciate your little 'adjustments' at all. so I'm going to keep living my life and thriving while writing the shit I WANT to. and for your information... no, I won't stop using my style, so you can just fuck right off completely disrespectfully and go to hell. I hope you have a horrible day. 🙃
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Inktobertale?
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:D INKTOBERTALE DAY 6!
Ink sans belongs to Comyet
It's my birthday!!! I made sure the clock remembers what is the birthday of its owner >:D
It was a bit of an inactive year on the internet but I feel so good uploading Ink drawings <3 I hope to do it more often 💖
Without more to say I hope you have a nice week, sweetie!
-Kers Seeri
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