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#i had a dream abt skipping ahead too tho
saddlepunk · 9 months
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keep flipflopping between writing brother rabbit as one continuous piece and jumping around from plot point to plot point. im currently writing it in the order i think everything should be presented and its WORKING, im still writing daily and it isnt terrible even when it also isnt great. i think my current frustration is just coming from the fact that im writing a pov that Isnt Aliss and i want to Write Aliss Again. i could do that, i know where to pick him up after im done with this section, but theres two issues w that idea:
1) those other povs will still need to be written and putting them off wont make them easier
2) i can sometimes be bad abt remembering to actually... go back. which is why i stopped writing out of order in the first place.
maybe ive gotten good enough at my editing to not have to worry as much about that though like. for clarifications sake: i write everything longhand in a notebook, and recently ive finally gotten around to transcribing/editing often rewriting all that into scrivener, and thats been going well, so maybe i /can/ trust myself to actually write those bits when i Need To but...
i dunno!!! i do not know-
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missr3n3 · 26 days
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also who wants to hear abt my weird af (yet kinda cool?) cabin tales roulette dream i had last night
so to start off, here are some Dream Logic things i Knew from the start:
i was seeing everything from roderick's POV and could control him like a video game player character, even though i didn't feel like i was playing a video game bc there was no UI or controls
i was at the ending, which was wildly different from the actual episode's end
basically in turned out kevin was possessed by a powerful, reality-eating demon during his big argument scene (which was also the Mastermind behind the saw trap), and when he died that set the demon loose and it killed sam and jeremy. roderick somehow got away tho
the "game" ends with roderick escaping the basement into this old haunted-looking victorian mansion. he reaches a library/study room and finds a bunch of comic books scattered around depicting earlier scenes in the story, revealing to roderick that he's a fictional character.
this pisses him off, and he tries to make a break for it through the back garden but gets stuck at a locked door and is eaten by the demon
i had an overall sense of being pressed for time, like "ok i'll get to the ending real quick and then i have to go do the dishes 😒" or smthing like that
so the dream started with roderick in the victorian mansion, and i'm wondering how i want to handle the ending scene, bc having to watch roderick die from his POV spooked me in a major way the last time i got there. roderick reaches the study, and i think "hm what if i skip the books and just go outside right away?"
so i have roderick look at one book (bc it uses my designs and i think thats fun lol) and then make him go outside.
it turns out this gives me/roderick a head start against the demon as it hasn't reached the garden yet. i/roderick can hear its voice though, and it's mildly amused that roderick escaped outside so quickly.
while the demon is talking, i notice the locked door that gets roderick killed is surrounded by a chain link fence and think "i bet he could climb that and actually get outside."
so i make roderick hop the fence (if this causes him any pain i can't tell) and he escapes into like. a really shitty & sparse public park. the kind that's all half-dying grass and maybe 5 trees. at this point the demon is back to taunting him, saying "it doesn't matter if you get a head start or even if you hide from me, i'll just destroy your reality until i find you >:)" (if this frightens roderick i can't tell)
i/roderick start running through the park, hop another fence, and at this point i've forgotten about whatever other commitment i was supposed to do bc i'm like "oh shit! i just discovered a new ending! :D"
roderick hopes another fence and now he's on some kind of paved trail next to a concrete river (image for if you've never seen such a thing). i know that's way too big for him to jump, so i have him run along the river hoping to find a bridge, even if this means losing the head start. i spot a bridge up ahead, but i also hear big, heavy footsteps in the distance
then i woke up lol
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An Imperfect Cup of Coffee
Hello, @ifirestone​, I’m your secret Santa for @mlsecretsanta​ this year! I had so much fun writing this, and I hope you enjoy reading it!
Also, thank you @ninoirs​ and @zoenightstars​ for helping me so much with the texting sections (and in some cases rewriting them entirely). The trouble with texting like a grandma.
Another note: the contact names are what the recipient has in their phone (so, ladyblogger is what Nino has as Alya’s contact name and so on).
After racing to reach her 7:00 class on time only to find it cancelled, Alya was ready to go home and sleep through the rest of her morning. In fact, she had rushed out the door so fast, she hadn’t even grabbed her morning coffee, which probably explained her sour mood and pounding headache.
She barrelled into the first coffee shop she could find and scanned the store for anyone who could help her. Of course, no one was there. Given how the rest of her morning had gone, she shouldn’t have been surprised.
Alya groaned and turned around, ready to stomp her way out of the shop, but she was stopped by a light and cheerful voice from the back. “Be right there!”
After a second’s hesitation, Alya returned to the counter.
When the woman in the back walked out, Alya was beyond thrilled that she’d chosen to stay.
“What can I get for you?” she asked, much too bright and happy for the hour in Alya’s opinion, but she was pretty enough for Alya to forgive that.
“I’ll take, um…” Alya made a show of looking over the menu, but really, she was looking at the light color in the woman’s cheeks and the way the light caught in her dark hair. “Whatever you have with the most caffeine.”
“Coming right up.” She chuckled as she tapped a few buttons on the register. “Will you have it here or are you taking it with you?”
“I’ll drink it here,” Alya answered instantly.
“Okay.” She smiled, and Alya was pretty sure she was in love with this woman already. “Would you like anything to eat with it?”
“Eat?” Alya floundered for a moment while her brain caught up to the present. “Oh, yeah, sure. What do you recommend umm…” She looked for a name tag, but the ladybug print apron the woman wore only had the name of the cafe. “Sorry, what’s your name?”
“Marinette.” She pointed to a small offering of pastries next to the counter. “And all of this is made fresh every morning by a local bakery, so you really can’t go wrong. If you like sweets, though, the pain au chocolat is pretty amazing.”
“Thanks. I’ll take one.” Alya tugged out her wallet to dig out her card.
“Great! What’s your name?” Marinette paused, then nearly stumbled over her words when she added on, “So, um, so I can call you when it’s done, I mean.”
“Alya.” She passed over her card and hoped she wasn’t imagining that Marinette might actually be blushing. “Thanks.”
“Go ahead and take a seat.” Marinette passed her card back after running the payment through. “It should only be a minute.”
“Sure, no problem.” Alya tugged out her phone while she found a seat that offered the best view behind the counter. It was easy enough to sneak glances while she texted Nino about the woman she was already planning to marry.
NiNOT MY BF: seriously?
NiNOT MY BF: how long have you known her
ladyblogger: ...
Alya paused to watch Marinette glide through the kitchen with a clean cup for her coffee before she continued.
ladyblogger: the point is i met my future wife
NiNOT MY BF: congrats
NiNOT MY BF: do u know her name tho
ladyblogger: yes???
NiNOT MY BF: good
NiNOT MY BF: is she single
ladyblogger: she has to be
ladyblogger: after my morning hte universe owes me
The tap of ceramic on wood and the smell of fresh coffee recaptured her attention. Alya set down her phone and sent Marinette a smile. “Thanks!”
Marinette grinned and set down a plate with her freshly warmed pain au chocolat. “Enjoy!”
Alya watched her go, quietly enjoying the view, rather than her food, but once Marinette was out of sight, Alya reached for the cup to try it.
She nearly spat it back out once she tasted it.
NiNOT MY BF: thats not how the universe works al
ladyblogger: NINO
ladyblogger: she works at a cafe
ladyblogger: but
ladyblogger: this is literally THE WORST coffee ive ever had
NiNOT MY BF: is the marriage over already
ladyblogger: no??? i can make coffee
ladyblogger: marriage is abt compromise and MAKING SACRIFICES
NiNOT MY BF: whatever u say
Alya grimaced and stared down the food on her plate, almost afraid to taste it. After the bitter mess still stinging her tongue, she wasn’t sure she could trust anything Marinette brought her.
“How is it?” Marinette called from behind the counter.
Alya sighed and took the plunge, biting down on one edge and hoping for a miracle or a really, really good lie. “Whoa…” she murmured before taking a second, larger bite. “This is amazing!”
“I’m glad you like it!” Marinette scooped up a rag to wipe down a nearby table. “They’re actually from my family’s bakery. I made this batch myself.”
“Really?” Alya sank back in her seat. “It tastes great!”
“Thank you!”
ladyblogger: update
ladyblogger: she can bake
ladyblogger: im in love
NiNOT MY BF: u have my blessing
NiNOT MY BF: only if you get me free food tho
ladyblogger: not a chance
Alya took her time finishing her food, watching Marinette and the occasional customer while she pretended to study. She even considered skipping a class so she could stay longer, but she really couldn’t afford to miss it. “That was the perfect recommendation.” She stood and brought her dishes to the counter. “I’ll have to come back sometime.”
“Oh, sure.” And maybe Alya was projecting, but she could have sworn Marinette almost looked disappointed. “Do you want any coffee to go?”
“That’s okay,” Alya answered too quickly. “I probably need to cut back on the caffeine anyway.”
“Okay! Ummmm…” She ran her thumb over the edge of the cup, avoiding Alya’s eyes as she spoke, “You know, if you’re interested, we have a, uh… A discount club. We text you coupons if you give me, I mean,” She blushed and glanced at Alya, “Give us your number.”
“Yeah, sure.” Mainly because Alya really, really liked the idea of Marinette asking for her number for any reason whatsoever. She scribbled it down on a napkin and handed it to Marinette.
“Thanks.” Marinette hesitated, for a moment looking like she wanted to say something else, but then she shook her head and carried the dishes to the back.
“Sure! Thanks for the great breakfast!” Alya called on her way out the door.
“You, too!” Marinette answered with a wave.
Alya almost didn’t notice that her response didn’t make sense.
The next day, Alya slipped out of class early just so she could go visit the Ladybug Cafe. On the way to class, she’d definitely seen Marinette behind the counter again, and she hadn’t been able to think about anything else since.
“Morning!” Marinette called from the back. She peeked out and brightened when she saw Alya. “Hey! You came back!”
“I told you I would.” Alya leaned against the counter and waved. “Any recommendations for me today?”
“Well…” Marinette scanned the offering of baked goods at the end of the counter. “There’s some lavender macarons that are pretty impressive.”
“Did you make them?”
“No.”
“Not interested.” Alya had no plans to be even remotely subtle today. “What did you make?”
A smile tugged at the corners of Marinette’s lips. “I overslept today, so I just helped with the croissants.”
“I’ll take two.”
“For here?” Marinette asked as she rang it up.
“Please.”
On her third visit, Marinette hovered near her, cleaning tables and rearranging whatever happened to be close to Alya’s seat.
“So, are you a student near here?” Marinette finally asked.
“Yep.” Alya closed the book she’d been pretending to read. “Studying journalism. How about you?”
“Well, I’m saving up some money while I decide what to study.” She polished the end of a table that was already gleaming. “My mom suggested business, since I’ve been so helpful with their bakery, and my partner said I should study design since it’s my childhood dream, but I’m not even sure if I still like it.”
Alya stopped listening the second she heard it. All at once, all the lovely dreams about waking up next to Marinette and bringing her excellent coffee while Marinette baked delicious breakfasts came crashing down. “Partner?”
“Oh!” Marinette waved a hand. “No, not that kind of… I mean, business partner. Adrien and I are friends.”
And just like that the wedding bells were ringing again. “Ohhh!” Alya relaxed and leaned forward. “You know, you can sit if you want.”
“Well, I should…” Marinette glanced at the door, then back to Alya. “It is time for my break.”
Apparently breaks for cafe partners lasted hours, because Alya only realized the time after she missed half her afternoon lecture.
By the fifth visit, Marinette stopped pretending to clean and simply rang Alya up and joined her.
“You have how many sisters?”
Alya shook her head. “Honestly? Too many. It must be nice being an only child.”
“I don’t know.” Marinette smiled. “I think it would have been nice to have a sister.”
“Trust me.” Alya sighed dramatically. “I don’t know what was worse, when they borrowed my stuff without asking or when they decided to embarrass me in front of my first crush.”
Marinette laughed. “Okay, maybe not those parts, but having someone to talk to and ask advice. I mean, I could usually go to my mom, but… you know.”
“Well, I guess that part’s not so bad.” Alya nodded. “Besides, Ella and Etta are such a handful right now, mom doesn’t have time to hound me about grades, so that’s a plus.”
“Now I’m really jealous!” Marinette drooped forward. “My parents are worried and keep asking about my plans. I don’t have plans. I’m just trying to figure something out.”
“Tell me about it.” Alya rolled her eyes. “Alya, when are you going to settle down? Oh, I don’t know, maybe when I meet someone interesting.”
“Is that all you’re looking for?” Marinette teased.
“Well…” Alya let her voice trail off while she looked Marinette over. “Not the only thing. I have high standards.”
Marinette blushed, but she still managed to raise a brow and shoot back, “You’re not the only one.”
“Really? So, you-”
The door opened behind them, startling them out of their conversation. “Sorry,” Marinette murmured as she rushed back to the counter. “How can I help you?”
By the time she came back, the moment had passed, and Alya left an hour later, still internally raining curses down on the unfortunate man that interrupted them.
By the tenth visit, Nino was curious.
“So, you still haven’t asked her out yet?”
Alya scowled. “I’m going to. The timing just wasn’t right.”
“Right, but you’ve gone every day for two weeks?”
“Almost.”
“And you still haven’t asked her out,” Nino repeated.
“Listen, I’m in it for the long haul. I’m willing to wait. Marriage isn’t something you rush into.”
He chuckled. “Okay, but you still don’t even have her number.”
“Shut up,” she shot back. “At least I’m talking to my crush.”
“Rude,” he grumbled.
“You earned it.” She turned the corner and saw the cafe across the street. “I’m here. I’ll call you with an update later.”
“Oh, good. I can’t wait,” he muttered before she had the chance to hang up on him.
“Morning!” Alya called when she walked through the door. She froze when she saw who was behind the counter. “You’re...not Marinette.”
The blond behind the counter paused and looked over at her. “No? She’s off today. I can…” Suddenly, he grinned. “Wait, let me guess. You’re Alya?”
She raised a brow. “You are?”
“Adrien.”
“Oh, the business partner.” Maybe it was a little petty to put unnecessary emphasis on the business part of business partner, but he’d single handedly ruined her day, so she felt a little pettiness was justified.
“Marinette hasn’t stopped talking about you.”
That caught her attention. “She hasn’t?”
“Nope.” He chuckled.
“Well, in that case, maybe you could do me a favor and tell me where to find her.”
He shook his head. “I’m not sure. She keeps her phone on her if you want to ask her yourself, though.”
“I...don’t exactly have her number.”
“You don’t? Well,” Adrien pulled out his phone. “It’s…” He paused, then a positively wicked look lit up his eyes. “You know, I just remembered I need to deal with a delivery in the back.” He tapped the screen a few times, then handed her his phone. “Here’s her number.”
Except it wasn’t Marinette’s number. It was her messaging history with Adrien. At least, Alya assumed the contact named “scroll up, Alya” was Marinette.
give the puns agreste: It’s fine. I’ll cover for you.
scroll up, alya: i cant
scroll up, alya: ill miss hre
Alya did exactly what he suggested. Not that she needed the permission, since she would have done it anyway, but the message meant Nino wouldn’t have a reason to try and make her feel about it when she called him later. In fact, she scrolled all the way up to the day she first met Marinette.
scroll up, alya: im in love
scroll up, alya: i know customers are off limits?? But
give the puns agreste: I never said that.
scroll up, alya: good because i met the future mrs dupain-cheng
Alya laughed, half out of relief that Marinette definitely liked her too and half because apparently they were even more perfect for each other than she could have imagined.
scroll up, alya: i made up a rewards program so i could get her number
scroll up, alya: hope thats okay
give the puns agreste: Did it work?
scroll up, alya: sort of
scroll up, alya: i didnt give her mine
“Yeah, no kidding,” Alya grumbled, almost regretting that she didn’t find a reason to ask.
give the puns agreste: Can’t you text her?
scroll up, alya: no!!! then shell know!!
give the puns agreste: Know what?
scroll up, alya: that i made it up!!!
scroll up, alya: plus she said thanks for the food
scroll up, alya: and i might hve said you too
scroll up, alya: so theres that
give the puns agreste: Really? That sounds...
give the puns agreste: pawkward
scroll up, alya: shut up adrien
scroll up, alya: dont mock my pain with puns
She chuckled and scrolled past conversation about things to reorder for the cafe, only pausing when she caught sight of her name.
scroll up, alya: alya came back!!!!!!!!
give the puns agreste: Did you get her number?
scroll up, alya: she just walked in
scroll up, alya: not yet
The next text was a few hours later.
scroll up, alya: id idnt get her number
scroll up, alya: *didnt
give the puns agreste: Why not?
scroll up, alya: got distracted by her face
scroll up, alya: and her hair
scroll up, alya: and her laugh
scroll up, alya: and all of her
give the puns agreste: Wow. You really like her
scroll up, alya: im marrying her
scroll up, alya: of course i do
Alya read through the rest of the conversations, and to say the entire experience was a confidence boost would be a serious understatement. Marinette was easily as enamored as Alya, which meant only one thing.
unknown number: wanna get dinner?
unknown number: this is alya btw
unknown number: adrien gave me your number
Alya only had to wait for a moment before she received an answer
future wife: yes!!!
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