#redmourhq

[jacobclordi]

Have you every thought what life would be like if supernatural beings were real? What if they were exposed? Have no fear because Redmour is the best safe haven for supernaturals. All different kinds coming together in one town, but with the government knowing of the safe haven, something just doesn't seem right. ~ Hey Andie! Can you please give us a shoutout? Thank you so much!

you bet ! check these guys out !

--SHOUTOUT !

[jacktherph]

Hey Jack! Hope your day is going well! I was wondering if you could give us an opinion? That would be great! Thanks!

hi there @redmourhq! i’m happy to give you an opinion. you specified public as being okay, but let me know if you want me to take it down at any time.

NOTE: all opinions expressed here are mine, jack’s, belonging to jack. i make no claims to knowing what is best for every group – i only offer advice based on my experiences, what i’ve seen in the community, and my personal knowledge. no one person knows what is best for you or any group other than yourself; because you were the one who put all of this together in the first place. so take everything i say as a suggestion, and remember that you have accomplished so much!!

and if you have any questions, want feedback on something specific, or want elaborations on anything said in this opinion, don’t hesitate to message me!!

start: 1.12 | pause: none | end: 1.30TOTAL: 18 minutes to read all pages; not including character bios, supernatural lore

So on first glance at the main, while personally I’m not a big fan of contained themes (something I say in a lot of my opinions but seriously, it’s the choice of the admins) you guys have definitely utilized the space and what you’re given to the best ability. Personally I’m not sure having to scroll for long asks works well with your page but if you haven’t had any problems with it so far I don’t see a problem with it in the long run. Your color palette is really interesting -- like that lighter tone but with the muted psd that ends up washing out the color tones? Normally for a supernatural rpg I’d say something darker might be what you want to go for but in this case it actually works?? When you look at the encompassing plot to take the color scheme in, I mean. I also like that you have the admin names and timezones listed at the bottom, though it took me a minute to realize they’re hovers.

The one suggestion I’d make is your main links don’t have a hover to tell you what they are: if you know how to add that I’d suggest you do so, just to make it easier for people. [ In the code, go to where your links on the main page are, should be something like: (symbol code), all you have to do is put this in: title=”ASKBOX”>(symbol code) and you’re good! If you choose to pursue this let me know and I’d be happy to help. ]

For your Collapsible Sidebar: I think it’s a great idea and I don’t know if it came with the code or if you guys manually put it in, but it really works in providing more information for people like me who aren’t too fond of the minimalist structure of contained main themes. One thing: “truly” is misspelled as “truely.” Like with the ask portion I don’t think having enough content to make it need a scroll is a good idea, simply because of the space it takes up? You don’t end up needing to scroll to see anything hidden but it does have a small scroll bar that sort of makes things uneven. Maybe cut a line of text? I like all the links your provide as well, because they’re informative, clean, and give a potential member what they would need.

So in looking at your Plot page is when I noticed the contrast between the text color and the background color on the posts is kind of similar -- it might be harder to see for people with selective color blindness or who have worse eyesight than I do, and I have four eyes already. Maybe consider making one lighter or the other darker? Just to emphasize the difference between them for accessibility sakes. The content however is good and summarizes everything well while also giving that sort of “previously on…” vibe needed for rpgs like yours with a bit of background knowledge needed in order to engage a character fully in the group.

Your Rules are good and cover all the bases I look for in an rpg, however there are a few things I had questions about/wanted to bring to your attention. For one thing, your first point about “all adult content being under a read more” sort of contradicts/confuses itself with a later point about “all smut/nsfw content must happen on a different server and not on the dash.” Do you see what I mean? Because reading the first point makes me think I, as a potential member, can write smut so long as it’s under a read more, and then you tell me I have to write it somewhere else. Maybe find a way to put those two points together and say “yes, smut needs to be on a different server, but when you post it please use a read more.” Also, “NSFW” is a tag now flagged by tumblr’s updated content policy, so you shouldn’t ask your members to use it lest their blogs be flagged; “smut” is the current workaround used by other rpgs including my own. Your members will understand.

Your informational pages (Districts, Species, Founders, etc) I’ll compile into one paragraph because I don’t want to waste your opinion on things that you created and I really don’t have a place to judge. I will say that because of the large amount of content on your Locations page you might want to consider condensing it or finding a page theme that suits your needs? There was just a lot of scrolling and I ended up getting lost after a while. Also, you might have Funeral Home listed twice?? You definitely do but I couldn’t tell if they were different locations. For your Founders page look at the theme you use and see how it looks outside of the text box; because it does look a little disjointed. Separating them with line breaks like

might help, but otherwise maybe change up the stylizations you use to show they are different contents.

Your formal Character Page is probably the best I’ve seen out of all uses of that theme -- including my own. The fact that you guys have painstakingly taken the time to crop and design each unique person’s image with the same background and fit them to the psd coloring you use is, honestly, it’s like a designer’s wet dream to be honest and I love it. While the dozen or so filter categories ends up being “a lot” after a while I can understand why you wanted to do it and what you’re trying to achieve with them. Just so you know, under the Halfling section you have a character listed as a “Half Elf” but she doesn’t appear on the “All” section of the halflings. Might be an error but I wanted to point it out.

Your Applications (Wanted included) and forms in general are well formatted and easy to navigate and understand. I like that you included a sample application at the bottom! Is there a reason the only different applications are for the Ghosts and Demons but not the other species? If so, ignore that question! I trust y’all to know what you need for your group.

My FAVORITE THING about this rpg: the completion of your concept. You guys knew you’d have a lot to include and work on in what you were thinking and there’s honestly nothing that I’m not given that leaves me thinking “I need more information on this.” Or at least nothing that I don’t feel like I can reach out to the admins about, you know? So well done on taking your idea and bringing everything needed for it to the table.

My LEAST FAVORITE THING about this rpg: your spelling and grammar errors. I debated finding everything I could catch and including it but it ended up being more of a chore on my part than anything. There are many places where things are misspelled, the incorrect tense is used, the it’s vs its rule isn’t followed, and other grammar choices aren’t followed correctly. This totally happens! Nobody's perfect. But I had grammar hammered into me so I notice it more than most. My recommendation is just go through each of your pages and either put them through a check like the one provided on Microsoft Word or find another way to go through your content with a spell/grammar checker. It does a world of good for professionalism and just looking like a more well-run rpg.

OVERALL I’m a fan of your group! I like the fresh take on the supernatural-people-living-in-a-town concept and the way you change up the genre in your own way. You’re complete, like I said earlier, but there are just a few extra steps that can be taken to turn this good rpg into a great one.

Sincerely,Jack

[reedrph]

Hi Reed! I was wondering if you could give us a shoutout? Please and thank you! Supernaturals are no longer in hiding! Redmour is a safe haven to help protect and give those in need a place to call home. Humans are welcomed as well! We come together as a community, but not everything is always peachy. What can go wrong if you put different kinds of supernaturals in one town? We are appless, so applying is easy as can be! We are always excited for new people and the amazing plots they bring!

[complimentsrpt-blog]

redmourhq should receive more attention! The admins are super sweet and dedicated, and they've worked hard on their rp to make it stand out as much as possible!

@redmourhq

The plot definitely sounds super cool and here is to their admins, reminding them that their members have such a positive view of them and that should encourage them even more! Keep it up!

[taeycngs]

Hello! Was wondering if you could give an opinion on our rp? We are a semi appless, mainly oc, supernatural rp. Thanks in advance!

i just wanna apologize for how delayed this is since my mood the past few days hasn’t been the best and i didn’t want my negative mindset to be transferred over to your opinion. my opinion will be under the read more and just a general disclaimer that this is just my opinion and in no way meant to discourage or hurt feelings !!

first impressions: what i’m first introduced to is your icon and url which both have me intrigued to look further into your plot which always good !! they don’t give away too much which ( in my case ) can capture the interest of someone scrolling through the tags and give your group a look. i like the theme you’re using because it’s very concise and gives off a professional type of vibe rather than the current rp themes being used that are more aesthetically pleasing to the eye. i like how the links are all at the top with the header. the header is fairly simple which is never a bad thing -- although i’m not much of a fan of the font used for the ‘come, be safe’ part but i think the other you’re using fits well with the whole time period of the group. so perhaps change it unless you like it bc then my opinion is irrelevant !! tbh i know a big issue with groups nowadays is that it’s p much a pissing contest over best theme and graphic but i actually like how simplistic your header is ?? bc the main point is about the writing and the character and the graphics have not much to do with development of a muse

plot: i’m actually seriously intrigued and impressed at the amount of detail there is to the plot ?? given i’m always a tad wary when it comes to supernatural groups but that has more to do with intimidation on my part rather than any potential faults of a group. i haven’t seen a concept like this in my many-a years tumblr rp’ing .. unless there has been and i just didn’t catch it. but two thumbs up from me in regards to plot bc it really is interesting and gives a good sense of urgency with the governmental hunters / fleeing to the safe havens.

pages: just a quick lil heads up, the links you set up in promo links lead to a different url which i imagine is an old url / main of this group in a previous run ?? but aside from that, i’m looking at the different pages you have set up for species, districts, locations, etc and i love the attention to detail ?? it gives great insight to everything happening around town as well as specific lore you have tied to the species. overall, i really adore the attention to detail on each of the pages and it really shows how much thought you put into the group -- dedication as well. 

overall: tbh i’m a fan of it and i really hope to see you guys thrive with a dedicated set of members who are just as invested as you guys are !! with it being oc, you allow potential members to build their own character within the lore you provide which can up enthusiasm !! even with answering asks, you both elaborate on species and give thoughtful answers which i appreciate. all the best to you guys bc you deserve it !!

[rutherford-writes-blog]

Hey! Question, are you apart of any rps??

hello sweetness! i am, actually. i am in @redmourhq && it’s a hella rec from me if you like supernatural rpgs, you should check ‘em out!!

[grantgustn]

Hi Abby! I was wondering if you could give us a shoutout? Please and thank you! Supernaturals are no longer in hiding! Redmour is a safe haven to help protect and give those in need a place to call home. Humans are welcomed as well! We come together as a community, but not everything is always peachy. What can go wrong if you put different kinds of supernaturals in one town? We are appless, so applying is easy as can be! We are always excited for new people and the amazing plots they bring!

shoutout !!

[hallyurps]

Welcome to Redmour, Washington! Our goal; to keep you safe. It's been a few years since everyone was outed, and tensions are running high. That demon over there looks shady, and the vampire is giving you looks. Can you spot the Hunter spy? Because the founders can't. [Good morning! Can we please get a shout out? Brand new supernatural safehaven, we have 4 open founders and the rest of the muns are oc. We can't wait to meet your chara!]

shoutout for this new group! follow and join @redmourhq if you’re interested!

[kittenrph]

redmourhq is a rec!

Thanks for the rec, bean!!

I’ll be sure to check it out!

[lacirph]

Hello Laci! Happy New Year, I was wondering if you would be able to give us a shoutout if possible to help us out, pretty please! We're a supernatural, safe haven style RP based in a fictional town called Redmour, Washington. We're OC friendly and semi-appless although we have 3 currently open characters who have pre-made bios if people need any inspiration. Thanks in advance!

Shout out!

[brujawrites]

Hello! Was wondering if you could give your opinion on our rp. Thank you in advance!

of course!! it already sounds like something a bit mystical or at least medieval from the url so i’m a bit nervous bc i don’t particularly like those type of roleplays, but it seems very well put together so those who do will surely like that. i’m not a big fan of the theme, simply because of personal reference and how the information is laid out. the admins should consider using smaller gifs that don’t quite take up as much room in the posts as it can be sort of an eyesore for visitors -- i’d also suggest talking about what the roleplay is about during ur promo posts. that tends to catch more people’s attention that “hey we’re taking apps” it’s an interesting plot and i like how thoroughly its written out, as well as the rules. seems like loads of fun for those interested in the subject matter. you haven’t got that many skeletons out but that’s okay! im a bigger fan of smaller groups. i think the characters each have an interesting thing or two about them and the bios give off enough info to promote muse -- which is amazing! this really isn’t my cup of tea, but it is well done. of course, it wouldn’t hurt to add more personal touches to the promo posts and maybe darken the font slightly. S I X / TEN.

[smolhermes]

redmourhq is a rec! They are semi-appless with 3 open skeletons, they do accept OCs though.

It looks pretty nice, but I’m more of a literate, full bio rp type of person! Thank you for the rec though! :)

[hepburneds]

redmourhq is a rec!

is this just the running gag of my blog now

[ladvbirds]

older fc's: REDMOURHQ, SUNSETACADEMYRP, MERCYSHQ

i was actually eyeing that last one earlier today, thanks for the recs!

[taeycngs]

definitely look into redmourhq if you have no already!

rip .,, unfortunately supernatural groups aren’t my cup of tea at the moment but i really do appreciate you sending this in !! if anyone’s looking for a spn based group to join then pop on over !!

[alexiisms]

Hey! Redmourhq is a rec!

so ngl supernatural rps aren’t exactly my cup of tea, but the main looks really nice in case anyone out there is looking for a supernatural rp !