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if i make it through all of moffat's run it'll be an act of god
hell if I make through all of 11's run it'll be an act of god
#i tried#i really tried to give it my best effort#look past all the criticisms and the messy memories and give it a fresh look#but#matt and arthur and karen are trying their best but god#this plot is insufferable#seriously the pandorica was. Kinda cool#and then everything after that is just muddled and annoying#demon's run and the order of the silence and everything with “melody pond” is so convoluted#and makes the doctor the center of all of space and time#every damn thing is about him#some of these concepts may have been cool if they slowed down and didn't just rush through hamfisted underworked exposition#but nope#we have to just speed through everything because its all fast talking & quips & making you think it must be clever because you're confused#i swear the editing has gotten worse too#the sherlock-style camera swirls when she and the doctor are out-smarting each other#plus the dialogue!!!!!!#it's obvious when an episode (like let's kill hitler) is written by moffat cause WOW it's just. rough#I'm gonna make a tier list of all the nu who episodes eventually and man the quality is gonna DROP with moffat's run#doctor who#nuwho#steven moffat#11th doctor#amy pond#rory williams#melody pond#river song
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continuing thoughts from This Dream AU
re : why it might have taken the gang a while to find Bruce & Floyd
how about i erase just a little bit of the plot convenience from TBT
what if, bruce's postcard didn't survive unscathed, and they had to go off of john dory's foggy memory of the thing.
so like. they're stumbling their way through a bunch of could-be-heres before they hit on the correct one.
and what if, the Vacay Resort section was legit hard to find.
like, the entire island chain is still at Vacaytioner scale, right? so even if the search party's idea to eventually look there was right, it could still take a long time to navigate thru the tropical jungle on any individual island, let alone many of them.
.... aaaaand what if i drew way too much for a potential reunion anyways because i'm a sap
#ITS DONE. HUFFS#long post#undescribed#i can contrive so much plot from nothing watch this : pretzels myself into a knot#sandflakedrew#flickory#trolls hickory#trolls dickory#trolls floyd#trolls annelise#< just to keep the tags consistent ahaha#sorry hickory for drawing you all shaggy#but it is my Right every now n then to make a character look somewhat bedraggled#scrunkle that man#anywho#after this john becomes insufferable for a while#'HAHA I WAS RIGHT AND MY ~STUPID CLUE~ WAS SUPER IMPORTANT WEEEEEEE'#. also i'm not sure which implication is funnier#the idea that rhonda sneezing somehow caused a chain reaction that led to the postcard getting incinerated#or rhonda having fire sneezes
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sometimes rereading your old writing is like having a cinematic reunion with an old friend by the sea and sometimes rereading your old writing is like pulling teeth and what they don't tell you is that sometimes these are both true for the same piece of writing
#mine#writing#goddd god god gritting my teeth trying so hard to focus on the parts here that are good and well written#NOT THINMING AT ALL ABOUT THE ELEMENTS THAT ARE SO INEXCUSABLY STUPID#ITS WELL WRITTEN. ITS EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN EVEN IF THE TIME AND SETTING AND PLOT JUSTIFICATION ARE INSUFFERABLE#ITS FINE ITS FINE ITS FINE
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stupid fucking bastard. i am not coping with the leaks
#dead leaf for leafpool and gull feathers for feathertail#like yeah it's funny that cherith does whatever the hell she wants as soon as she's in the driver's seat#but it's also baffling and frustrating that she wanted this in the first place#crowfeather or at least the version of him in my head is a fun and interesting character because he's shitty#in the newer books there's been a weird attitude toward him where the other characters think he's irritable but also noble and attractive#also tawnypelt is such a nothing character it's upsetting that all she's ever been is an accessory to the men around her#her father her brother her mate her son her grandson(s)#and her pov is no longer merely boring but actually insufferable thanks to her poorly handled “kids these days” plots#if it were up to me#the new prophecy would focus more on tawnypelt feeling out of place in shadowclan and struggling to prove her loyalty#contrasting brambleclaw who is generally accepted in thunderclan but victimizes himself due to his insecurity#i would also explore how tawnypelt and rowanclaw get together since he hates her in one scene and then they're lovey dovey in the next#although this does seem to be the basis of many warriors relationships#i'm not sure how i feel about tawnypelt getting a second mate as an elder but i don't want to begrudge old people finding love again#so i'm fine with it as long as it's not crowfeather#as for crowfeather#he would fall hard and fast for feathertail because she's pretty and shows him kindness but i want it to be one-sided#then he would fall hard and fast for leafpool for the same reasons#she runs away with him not because she loves him but because clan society is suffocating and she needs an escape#so when they get back to the clans she moves on pretty quickly but he lives a long and miserable life pining after her#his clanmates quietly avoid him because they don't like him that much because why would they and so he never becomes deputy#i can see him trying to reconnect with breezepelt and nightcloud as an elder#not necessarily because he realizes how shitty he is but because he wants a relationship with his granddaughters but it's strained#and then he dies! i'm tired of writing and being frustrated by these stupid books so i'm ending it here#crowfeather#warrior cats#eel art#eel talk
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“Was it impolite when I fucked you every night for the past week?” He asked it in a low voice right next to her ear, and was pleased when she drew in a quick little breath and shivered. “Because I was definitely staring at you then, and I seem to remember you enjoying it.”
#xaden and violet this chapter: what if we're insufferable and can't stop touching each other#there's some plot in here somewhere maybe i hope#storm in the quiet#snippet
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"Do you ever wish there was fanfiction of a fanfic?" I do. I do so fucking bad. I want fanfiction about Tommy's Clinic for Supervillains, because sometimes I genuinely forget that's a fanfic and not a book that should have its own fandom.
Every time I see that book on my shelf I'm just filled with this urge to read it all again, learn everything about the world building and write my own multi chapter fanfic about it, but focused on Disc Duo. Like, I need it. There's so much potential and so many things that could happen after the end of TCFSV. I'm such a sucker for vigilante/hero/villains aus AND for disc duo AND for that fanfic because it is so good
The only problem is that I want it to just exist so I can read it, not to actually write it. Which is such a struggle because I don't think anyone will write it.
#I'm going insane#disc duo makes me want to scream#and I think disc duo in that universe would be so great if only they got to know each other better#dream is such an arrogant asshole and tommy can be so insufferable#add that to the fact they're on opposite sides and it's perfect#who tf decided that I have to actually write it for it to exist. it literally already exists in my head#(thats a lie. it doesn't even exist in my head. it's just a concept with no plot that I'm obssessed with)#tommyinnit's clinic for supervillains#tcfsv#disc duo#prime duo#charles simmons speaks
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I wanna talk about my characters. I wanna talk about them so bad.
You wanna talk about my characters. You wanna talk about them so bad.
#ask me PLEASE#my ocs are so sad rn#they just wanna have a nice time#but nOooOo#someone over here has to keep giving them plot#it’s insufferable
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daily nagisa till kimikawaii gets an mv: day 1
#i want nagisakun on my doorstep in 10 working days o r e l s e —#ye im doing this nonsense again i miss the dude from gamushara ok—#managed to manifest nagisa mv in 30 days last time so can we beat the record??? (plspslplsplsplspslppls)#the way there isn’t that much good art of him is criminal really#no im n o t touching anime screenshots again this time s h u s h#i’ll resort to manga screencaps again if necessary but no anime screenshots!!!! he looks like a sentient plot device in ‘em. o h w a i t —#back to the gamushara mv screencapping routine i go~~~~~~~~#hoping for about 10 days manifestation like the daily lxl till meoto did (pls)#o k guess i’ll have another way to be utterly insufferable for the forseeable future~~~~ kimikawaii mv soon p l s im beggingnggngngngngggggg#the dude from gamushara#the daily nagisa nightmare
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"A communion of sorts"
Based off of my musings in this post (warning: cannibalism mentioned)
While I was drawing this I also started to wonder about the diet of the Yiga Clan. In-game the only food we see them eat/talk about is bananas, but of course that can't be *all* they eat . . .
(continued under cut bc this got longer than I expected)
I talked about the conflict between hylians and the ganon cult in the linked post, but I feel like there's also some potential for conflict/disagreement over diets between the ganon cult and the yiga clan.
In the cult, eating pork and boar meat is seen as a sort of communion with ganon. By consuming the flesh of his earthly form (so to speak) they become closer to him and (allegedly) gain access to his powers.
I feel like it could be interesting if the yiga clan also considered eating pork to be akin to eating the flesh of their god. But what if, instead of it being a "good" thing, it was forbidden? In Age of Calamity we see how Astor and the Yiga Clan have very different relationships with Ganon, despite both serving him-
Astor is comfortable communing directly with Ganon--to the point where he thinks he can *control* Him. In contrast, the yiga are much more wary of Ganon, and see him almost like a force of nature in terms of both power and inevitability. I feel like this exchange with Sooga really highlights that well:
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Like yeah, it can definitely be read as "Astor's a weirdo who's already going mad with power and doesn't understand the forces he's working with" (which is a totally valid read. Bro's definitely got a few screws loose). But I feel like it can also highlight the stark contrast in upbringing (which is heightened even more by Astor's role as an elite seer - the "Augur" - within the ganon cult).
Going back to diet- I had momentarily played with the idea of the Yiga being vegetarian, based on the "just bananas" thing, but I think that would be very unsustainable in the harsh climate of Karusa Valley and the surrounding highlands and desert. It already takes an IMMENSE amount of efforts to import bananas from the Faron region, and that's with a carefully selected yiga-friendly farms (and their alliance with Lurelin pre-calamity, which I might talk about later). So being purely vegetarian wouldn't make much sense from a geographic location.
But pork is off the menu. Because even though these guys respect ganon - and in fact, because of it - they don't want to get on his bad bad side
#my art#astor aoc#firefly's headcanons#astor age of calamity#yiga clan#i feel like this would add even more to the yiga's general distaste of astor#after a long day of plotting astor just wants to curl up with some bbq and a book and everyone stares at him like hes a heretic#he somehow becomes *more* insufferable when he realizes he cant get his comfort food#Youtube#ganon cult
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FINALLY MADE IT TO MA'AL'S DEBUT EPISODE IN YOUNG JUSTICEEE
can I get a YEEEHAAAW!!!
Haha they're already doing the "marginalized villain is too extreme in his methods for justice" nonsense but I'm honestly just so happy to see him that nothing is knocking me from this high rn
#ramblings#jesncin watches yja#s3 is starting off really strong and then M'gann gets a focused ep and the show's flaws pop up again lol#she's like a magnet for the show's worst flaws (petty romance drama- insufferable plot holes- and now bringing an oversized cast)#like these eps even got a genuine laugh out of me like wow it's been so long since I was entertained in such a purposeful way#ok but that “why are u wearing a hijab” line from artemis to halo was extremely cringe tho#right up there with black canary saying “oh you're white” to m'gann like asdfadsf the implications whenever J'onn turns human
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There was no fucking point of making them an item sooooo either Josie is playing Cruz knowing her gay ass is so weak for beautiful hopeless ladies oooooor there’s still a chance that aaliyah might come back and season 3 is gonna be a love triangle
#me connecting shit#I haven’t connected anything#just wishful thinking#cruz x aaliyah#cruz x josie#cruz x whoever is in trouble and needs rescuing#i volunteer#joe my god this season you’re insufferable but still very hot#leave your loser husband I’ll be waiting#honestly can’t keep up with the plot#the girls are distracting#and I’m fine with that#special ops lioness#lioness paramount#I don’t trust josie but she’s hot so yeah keep up the good work
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Right and his work menaces (Brent and Karen).
I don't remember last I mentioned it but apart from crude nicknames to people (except Chris), he also just puts them in his phone really weird (except Chris, who is literally in his phone as Chris). And I bring this up because in Right's phone, Karen is saved as "Lawful Obligation".
#my characters#oops i fell in love#can you guys tell im stressed and hyperfixating on my own fucked up ocs cause i am#also brents nickname at work and in rights phone is fuckwad#and hes like yeah if im called anything else at this point by right its weird and uncomfortable#and when it is finally approached as if paul is only in rights phone as shitty-ex (answer) now that hes an excoworker#what was he in rights phone BEFORE the transfer#and right is like annoying dickwad ... karen is like oh i see thats why you call him a dick still#thats like a nickname from his phone name#and brent has to ask why fuckwad and dickwad and right looks at him and takes a deep breathe before saying#because i like the word wad and it is very comforting bc like a wad of paper ? you can throw it away#and so if i realize i gotta get rid of attachment i wad it up#also dont tell paul that dickwad was a form of attachment or he will never shut the fuck up about it#karen and brent both swear to never mention it to paul#paul is honestly such a weird anomaly in the plot bc he doesnt directly work at the same police station#but he is CONSTANTLY a topic of gossip or annoyance or updates#hes literally karens best friend! aside from chris he was one of the few right worked with who HAD touch privileges before right banned it#hes also just genuinely well liked but no one can actually tell him or he will become insufferable#which is a crime that rick is guilty of once when he meets paul and karen introduces him#and rick is just OH i know that name! youre her best friend#and she looks so betrayed and paul looks so delighted and stunned and radiant over this fact#and rick makes up for it before the night is over which is why karen forgives him - he made paul back in his place#anyway yeah right has lots of fears and hes my bundle of anxiety and i love him and his atrocious nicknames#i think i would die if i gave someone a rude nickname even affectionately irl#also also final note on this ig#since right is a detective and not always at the station its worth pointing out brent and karen just work taking calls and#doing misc other work at their desks which are nearby so they 100% bond and its wonderful#ok i lied final note on them is#for a very long time karen has to check with right to make sure she isnt annoying brent because he doesnt emote well#and shes scared she wont know if shes annoying him please help youre like the only one who reads his moods accurately
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Sincerely, what was behind the decision in DOTC: The First Battle to have Turtle Tail fight her domestic abuser, at the grave of the friend who was murdered by a maniac after refusing to return to this same abuser, while saying "we must stay out of this fight, she must stand up for herself,"
And then show her LOSING BADLY, BEING BEATEN VIOLENTLY BY TOM,
Just to have fucking GRAY WING jump in and save her ass from the wifebeater??? The guy who's supposed to have asthma and be held back by that??
Like, look at it!
Was all of this just for a chance to show how coooool Gray Wing is?? Have a woman get battered on screen just so the writer's pet can save her??? I am absolutely baffled by the choices that were made in this arc
#Dotc hate#The first battle#Tom the Wifebeater#Tom wc#I hate Gray so fucking much it is unreal#This story is absolutely insufferable because it revolves around him and his shitty brother#And like. He is supposed to be held back by this respiratory disability of his#Yet he's perfectly physically capable every time the plot demands it or it would make him uncool#Infuriating
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The chilling adventures of Sabrina could’ve been a 10/10 show.
It was dark, campy and creative.
It tackled sexuality, gender identity, sexism, homophobia and transphobia, and to top it off most of the main characters were actually interesting.
Even the mortal storylines at Baxter high were just as engaging as the storylines at The academy of unseen arts… where they studied actual magic and the occult.
And while there were a few small issues that presented themselves in the later parts of the series
the one constant irritation for me throughout all four parts was the entitled, immature, narcissistic, privileged, hypocritical self centered white savior of a main character…
#she was so insufferable#sucked a majority of the fun right out of what was genuinely intriguing plot#the chilling adventures of sabrina#sabrina spellman#caos#nicholas scratch#harvey kinkle#ambrose spellman#prudence#Rosalind walker#theo putnam#kiernan shipka#gavin leatherwood#ross lynch#chance perdomo#jaz sinclair#tati gabrielle#michell gomez#caosedit
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honestly maybe considering making oleander ven and niles just original fiction characters? or finding a mind closet to shove them into while i find different settings for them…
#like. what good does it do when i’m only petrified of posting about those characters in relation to those games#because i know most people in that very small fandom don’t like me very much.#and they have a right to feel that way i was especially insufferable in my bg3 focus era but i always kind of am.#and i am not mad with anyone for disliking me as a result#and again. i don’t want sympathy or ‘oh no that’s not true’ you don’t have to lie to me i know i was/am it’s a fact#i’m just trying to explain my thought process behind this but don’t want to like. victimise myself or anything#i fucked up i most likely will continue to fuck up in different and/or similar ways in social situations i am trying my best but sometimes#that’s just not enough. sometimes my best makes people uncomfortable and i just need to acknowledge and learn from that#while keeping my distance.#like. i think the pathfinder game spaces are small enough where that’s probably something i should do y’know#for bg3 i certainly like mentioned earlier fucked up plenty as well but that fandom is massive#so it feels. different. y’know#even if i did already decide to revamp that stuff/zeke purely into original work but just because i thought it fit the character/plot better#anyways. i think if i can’t write about those characters in that setting for whatever reason then maybe it’d be best if i did that#romeo’s wretched rambles
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imagine you’re Conrad Fisher, your dad is an asshole and a cheater, and he has unrealistic expectations of you, but you still look up to him, you still want to make him proud, you have a little brother who looks up to you and you feel obligated to take care of him, you started college, exams are coming up, you have anxiety and panic attacks because on top of all this YOUR MOTHER is dying of cancer and you can’t do anything and you hate the world and no one gets you and Belly’s biggest problem is that you couldn’t be happy at her stupid prom, the one you basically begged to not have to go to and then she breaks up with you and somehow you’re the bad guy 🤡
#scuderia-talks#not f1 related#started reading the books and omg she is insufferable#i have to remind myself that she’s like 16/17 but that is not an excuse at this point cause what the actual fuck??#no one understands him like she does but the plot twist is she actually doesn’t get him AT ALL#and it’s like she’s aware of her own bad behavior but does nothing change it and never apologized#the summer i turned pretty#anti belly conklin#i need her to leave the Fisher boys alone omg
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