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It's the FINAL COUNTDOWN!
Thanks to the many, many artists who have already ranked the pitches and put in their bids for a teammate!
If you haven't joined us yet, consider taking a look and joining in on the fun!
Artists of Dragon Age!
Only THREE MORE DAYS to claim a fic!
*If you have already signed up as an artist, you should have the link to the Claims form in your email. Please do not submit duplicate sign ups.
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create at least one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, check out our participation requirements and dive in!
👉Sign Up* to read the 80+ Pitches!
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Artists of Dragon Age!
Only THREE MORE DAYS to claim a fic!
*If you have already signed up as an artist, you should have the link to the Claims form in your email. Please do not submit duplicate sign ups.
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create at least one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, check out our participation requirements and dive in!
👉Sign Up* to read the 80+ Pitches!
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IF YOU PREVIOUSLY SIGNED UP THIS YEAR, DO NOT SUBMIT ANOTHER SIGN UP!
If you signed up before August 2, you were emailed the claims site and form and instructions!
Artists! Claim a Dragon Age Fanfic!
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create at least one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, look no further.
Sign Up and Claim a Fanfic Here!
Claims are not first-come, first-served, and our form will remain open until the end of August 10.
▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
Artist Participation in Brief
Work Time: August 14 - October 31.
You will produce a polished illustration tangibly inspired by the fanfiction you’re paired with.
You are not required to be a professional or experienced artist to join. We’ll need artists interested in illustrating a wide variety of topics, including characters and events from all three Dragon Age games. We will also need artists comfortable being associated with NSFW fics, including darkfics.
👉You can choose to depict the featured characters, a specific scene, or something broader, like the kind of image that might be used for a book cover. This is up to your discretion, and you’re encouraged to talk to your writer for inspiration - but this is not a commission, so you are encouraged to follow your imagination!
From August 3-10, any artists who sign up will be able to read every single story pitch from the Bang and rank their top 3 choices. Pitches will be anonymous (you will not know the author). You can find an example of what information writers will provide you with here.
The stories pitched to us range from Teen to Explicit ratings. There are many different relationships represented, including platonic and crossover ships, and we have writers focusing on both canon characters as well as OCs.
If you’re an artist who would like to take inspiration from a Dragon Age fanfiction and make an illustration based on it, please submit a sign up, view our writers’ pitches, and rank your choices!
You can also (optionally) join our Discord server to get on in the hype and stay on top of announcements.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Artists! Claim a Dragon Age Fanfic!
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create at least one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, look no further.
If you SIGNED UP BEFORE AUG 2, check your email!
Otherwise:
Sign Up and Claim a Fanfic Here!
Claims are not first-come, first-served, and our form will remain open until the end of August 10.
▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
Artist Participation in Brief
Work Time: August 14 - October 31.
You will produce a polished illustration tangibly inspired by the fanfiction you’re paired with.
👉You can choose to depict the featured characters, a specific scene, or something broader, like the kind of image that might be used for a book cover. This is up to your discretion, and you’re encouraged to talk to your writer for inspiration - but this is not a commission, so you are encouraged to follow your imagination!
You are not required to be a professional or experienced artist to join.
We’ll need artists interested in illustrating a wide variety of topics, including characters and events from all three Dragon Age games. We will also need artists comfortable being associated with NSFW fics, including darkfics.
From August 3-10, any artists who sign up will be able to read every single story pitch from the Bang and rank their top 3 choices. Pitches will be anonymous (you will not know the author). You can find an example of what information writers will provide you with here.
The stories pitched to us range from Teen to Explicit ratings. There are many different relationships represented, including platonic and crossover ships, and we have writers focusing on both canon characters as well as OCs.
If you’re an artist who would like to take inspiration from a Dragon Age fanfiction and make an illustration based on it, please submit a sign up, view our writers’ pitches, and rank your choices!
You can also (optionally) join our Discord server to get on in the hype and stay on top of announcements.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide
Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected]
All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Artists! We need YOU for the Bang!
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, follow our blog, and
✨Click Here to Sign Up!✨
Total Art Time: August 14 - October 31 Quick Links: ▸ What is This Event? ▸ Schedule ▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
Artist Participation in Brief
You will produce a polished illustration tangibly inspired by the fanfiction you’re paired with.
What does tangibly inspired mean? You can choose to depict: 👉 the featured characters 👉 a specific scene from the fic 👉 a broader, more symbolic illustration, like might be used for a book cover What route you take is up to you! You're encouraged to talk to your writer for inspiration, but this is not a commission, so follow your imagination and inspiration.
Do I need to be a professional or experienced artist to join? What if I only like certain Dragon Age games or content?
We accept artists of all skill and experience levels! You do not need to be professional or experienced, and there is no application/jurying period for this type of event. Once you sign up, you're in! Our writers' fics cover all four Dragon Age games, with themes ranging from modern AUs to canon retellings to NSFW & darkfic. Whatever part of Dragon Age is your favorite, we have a fic that will interest you!
About Claims & Matching:
Anonymous pitches will be available from August 3rd - 10th to artists who submit a sign-up. You must submit a sign-up form to access the pitches! The fics on offer range from Teen to Explicit and have a variety of relationship types, including platonic and crossover ships. Some of our writers are focusing on canon characters, while others are including OCs. You can find an example of the information provided in the pitches here. After reviewing, you'll be asked to rank your top 3 choices, and the mods will match up writers and artists based on those rankings.
If you’re an artist interested in creating an illustration based on a Dragon Age fanfic, submit your sign-up at the link above and follow us here on tumblr (notifications on) to stay in the loop!
You can also (optionally) join our Discord server to get on in the hype and stay on top of announcements.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide
Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected]
All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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If you indicate on your sign up that you want access to the secret artist discussion channels...
You actually need to join the server before we can give you access!
There is an invite link in the sign up form, and on every post on our blog :) Come chat!
Discord is not a requirement for the event. We will communicate redundantly through email and this Tumblr. All of our event information is also included in our Big Bang Guidebook!
But we do have some cute EXCLUSIVE discord emojis of our mascots, made by @ exalted-dawn! And the camaraderie of other creatives working on a challenge like this can make an event extra special. It can be the gateway to friendships and future collaborations too!
Join the 2025 DA Big Bang Discord!
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Unlike some other forms of events, this Big Bang is open to all and there is no screening or "application" process!
The signups help us as moderators gauge how many artists we have to match to stories, and what kinda of stories you want to do art for!
Take the challenge! Join a team! Have some fun with us this summer! 🥰
Artists! We need YOU for the Bang!
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, follow our blog, and
✨Click Here to Sign Up!✨
Total Art Time: August 14 - October 31 Quick Links: ▸ What is This Event? ▸ Schedule ▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
Artist Participation in Brief
You will produce a polished illustration tangibly inspired by the fanfiction you’re paired with.
What does tangibly inspired mean? You can choose to depict: 👉 the featured characters 👉 a specific scene from the fic 👉 a broader, more symbolic illustration, like might be used for a book cover What route you take is up to you! You're encouraged to talk to your writer for inspiration, but this is not a commission, so follow your imagination and inspiration.
Do I need to be a professional or experienced artist to join? What if I only like certain Dragon Age games or content?
We accept artists of all skill and experience levels! You do not need to be professional or experienced, and there is no application/jurying period for this type of event. Once you sign up, you're in! Our writers' fics cover all four Dragon Age games, with themes ranging from modern AUs to canon retellings to NSFW & darkfic. Whatever part of Dragon Age is your favorite, we have a fic that will interest you!
About Claims & Matching:
Anonymous pitches will be available from August 3rd - 10th to artists who submit a sign-up. You must submit a sign-up form to access the pitches! The fics on offer range from Teen to Explicit and have a variety of relationship types, including platonic and crossover ships. Some of our writers are focusing on canon characters, while others are including OCs. You can find an example of the information provided in the pitches here. After reviewing, you'll be asked to rank your top 3 choices, and the mods will match up writers and artists based on those rankings.
If you’re an artist interested in creating an illustration based on a Dragon Age fanfic, submit your sign-up at the link above and follow us here on tumblr (notifications on) to stay in the loop!
You can also (optionally) join our Discord server to get on in the hype and stay on top of announcements.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide
Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected]
All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Artists! We need YOU for the Bang!
From light-hearted backstories, to daring adventures across Thedas, to epic, spicy smut, our writers have been hard at work getting ready to share their works with you.
We are looking for a variety of artists to join our Big Bang and create one illustration per fic, tangibly inspired by that story. There is a story to suit every taste!
If you’re an artist who would like to work with a writer for inspiration, follow our blog, and
✨Click Here to Sign Up!✨
Total Art Time: August 14 - October 31 Quick Links: ▸ What is This Event? ▸ Schedule ▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
Artist Participation in Brief
You will produce a polished illustration tangibly inspired by the fanfiction you’re paired with.
What does tangibly inspired mean? You can choose to depict: 👉 the featured characters 👉 a specific scene from the fic 👉 a broader, more symbolic illustration, like might be used for a book cover What route you take is up to you! You're encouraged to talk to your writer for inspiration, but this is not a commission, so follow your imagination and inspiration.
Do I need to be a professional or experienced artist to join? What if I only like certain Dragon Age games or content?
We accept artists of all skill and experience levels! You do not need to be professional or experienced, and there is no application/jurying period for this type of event. Once you sign up, you're in! Our writers' fics cover all four Dragon Age games, with themes ranging from modern AUs to canon retellings to NSFW & darkfic. Whatever part of Dragon Age is your favorite, we have a fic that will interest you!
About Claims & Matching:
Anonymous pitches will be available from August 3rd - 10th to artists who submit a sign-up. You must submit a sign-up form to access the pitches! The fics on offer range from Teen to Explicit and have a variety of relationship types, including platonic and crossover ships. Some of our writers are focusing on canon characters, while others are including OCs. You can find an example of the information provided in the pitches here. After reviewing, you'll be asked to rank your top 3 choices, and the mods will match up writers and artists based on those rankings.
If you’re an artist interested in creating an illustration based on a Dragon Age fanfic, submit your sign-up at the link above and follow us here on tumblr (notifications on) to stay in the loop!
You can also (optionally) join our Discord server to get on in the hype and stay on top of announcements.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide
Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected]
All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Writer Pitch Submissions now OPEN!
Writers! At long last, it’s time to submit your pitches! These pitches will be presented anonymously for artists to choose which fics they’d like to illustrate. Be honest and detailed on the form so your artist can have the clearest expectation of what they’ll be working with.
The Pitch Form has been ✨EMAILED✨
👉The form is open July 15 - 31. 👉You will receive a confirmation email after you submit. Check your spam! 👉Do not submit a duplicate form. 👉Remember: Even if you submit a pitch, you will only be matched to an artist if you meet the 7500 word cut-off by August 8th. This form was emailed on July 15.
For your formal pitch, you will need to provide:
Estimated word count (25k+)
Anticipated Rating
Anticipated Sexual Content
Major Pairings, Characters, & Fandoms
Content Warnings & Additional Tags
A detailed summary of your fic (4000 characters max, roughly 1-10 sentences)
See here for Example Pitch 1 and Pitch 2, and a pro breakdown for what makes a good pitch
If you have any questions about preparing your idea pitch or matching, please check out the Event Guidebook or reach out to the mods as noted below.
We look forward to seeing everyone’s ideas!
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord |email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Check in closes EOD tomorrow, July 14!
If you do not submit this form, you will not be continuing as a writer!
Non-Zero Word Count Check-In
Hi writers! It’s time for our first word count check-in. Please complete this form to help the mods update the estimate of how many artists we will need and show that you are thinking about/developing your idea.
✨Submit Your Check-In Here✨
This form will be open until July 14th. If you do not submit this form, you will not be continuing as a writer.
Reminders
👉 ANY non-zero word count at this point will qualify you to submit a pitch for artist matching, starting July 15th. 👉 In order to receive an artist match, you must reach a minimum of 7500 words on your project by August 8th. 👉 You should already be thinking about & compiling your formal idea pitch! See this post or the Event Guidebook for more info.
If you have any questions about writing, preparing your idea pitch, or any upcoming deadlines, please check out the questions we’ve already answered on Tumblr. If you still haven’t found an answer on Tumblr or in our Event Guidebook, please reach out via Tumblr ask, in our Discord Q&A channel, or email us at [email protected]
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods:ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Non-Zero Word Count Check-In
Hi writers! It’s time for our first word count check-in. Please complete this form to help the mods update the estimate of how many artists we will need and show that you are thinking about/developing your idea.
✨Submit Your Check-In Here✨
This form will be open until July 14th. If you do not submit this form, you will not be continuing as a writer.
Reminders
👉 ANY non-zero word count at this point will qualify you to submit a pitch for artist matching, starting July 15th. 👉 In order to receive an artist match, you must reach a minimum of 7500 words on your project by August 8th. 👉 You should already be thinking about & compiling your formal idea pitch! See this post or the Event Guidebook for more info.
If you have any questions about writing, preparing your idea pitch, or any upcoming deadlines, please check out the questions we’ve already answered on Tumblr. If you still haven’t found an answer on Tumblr or in our Event Guidebook, please reach out via Tumblr ask, in our Discord Q&A channel, or email us at [email protected]
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods:ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Calling All Artists! We Need YOU!
With over ONE HUNDRED new longfics underway, we are looking for just as many DRAGON AGE FAN ARTISTS for our Big Bang!
Sign ups begin July 15. Artists must submit a sign up in order to participate in the claims period from August 3-10. Get ready to read the enticing summaries of these Dragon Age fanfics—and decide to make an illustration inspired by the fic of your choice. Total Art Time: August 14 - October 31
Quick Links: ▸ What is This Event? ▸ Schedule ▸ Rules ▸ Code of Conduct ▸ Content Guidelines ▸ Writer Requirements ▸✨ Artist Requirements✨ ▸ Answered Questions
In the meantime, follow this blog to stay in the loop for announcements! You can also optionally join our Discord server to cheer everyone on, but Discord is not required for this event.
Artist Guidelines, Deadlines, and Example Pitches can be found here.
If you’re interested in joining us as an artist, you will be able to sign up beginning on July 15, and claim fics beginning on August 3!
If you have any questions about participating as an artist, please check out our Event Guidebook or reach out to the mods as noted below.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods:ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Anonymous Question: About Crossovers
Can I write a crossover where characters from another fandom go into Thedas?
This event does allow crossover works! However, written works must be primarily for the Dragon Age franchise, even for crossovers:
“Geralt of Rivia with Templar Abilities, but still in The Continent, and no Dragon Age characters appear” is probably skirting the line, but “Geralt of Rivia is sent into Thedas” or “Cullen Rutherford as a Witcher in an AU version of Thedas” are probably okay.
Your crossover idea might be an edge case if there are no DA characters at all. That would probably be more of a Dragon Age AU other-fandom fic, as opposed to a primarily Dragon Age fanfic, so probably not the best fit for this event. If characters from another fandom are coming into Thedas and interacting with canon characters or events, that is a solid crossover for this event.
If you have other questions about whether or not your fic idea qualifies for this event, check out the Work Requirements listed in the Writer guide!
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected] DABB 2024: All Work Posts | Wrap Up Post | AO3 Collection
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✨Writing Begins Today!✨
It's July 1st and we are THRILLED to have over ONE HUNDRED writers at kickoff!
Writers, read on for some upcoming deadlines, but know that Noodle and the mods are rooting for each and every one of you!
Writers should begin writing with an eye to the upcoming deadlines:
👉 Non-Zero Word Count Check-In Form will open July 10 - 14 👉 Pitching for Artists Form will open July 15 - 31 👉 7500 Word Cut-Off Form will be open August 1- 8*
* Remember, you MUST meet the 7500 word cut-off by August 8th in order to continue participating in the Bang!
‼️Don't forget, your bang project must remain completely ANONYMOUS until after artist matching‼️
Please do not discuss your idea, share WIPs, or otherwise mention information that may de-anon you to potential artists. If you would like to discuss your bang project with fellow writers, you can Join our Discord Server and do so in the secret writer channels!
Start thinking about your story pitch for artists! We have example pitches and guidelines in the Guidebook - and a pro breakdown for what makes a good pitch thanks to Joly, one of your fellow participants!
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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DA Fan Writers! Two weeks left to join!
Our writer sign up CLOSES JUNE 30, and writing will BEGIN July 1.
Check out our Writer Requirements and Writer Guide.
✨Complete the Writer Sign-Up Here!✨
This sign up is a participation form for the 25,000 word minimum Big Bang Challenge, not an "application." All Dragon Age fics are welcome! Please see our FAQ and our Event Documentation below for more information.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collection
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Can writers be a duo who write a single story and then collaborate with an artist? Or must it be one writer for one piece of fiction?
Hi there,
This particular event does not accept co-authored stories. One writer is being challenged to write a brand new fanfiction of 25,000 words or more in the given time frame.
Event Info: Full Guidebook & Rules | Artist Guide | Writer Guide Contact The Mods: ask | discord | email: [email protected] All 2024 Work Posts | 2024 Wrap Up | 2024 AO3 Collecti
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A Guide to Pitching for the Bang!
Our writing period officially begins July 1, and the next phase of the Bang - Artist Claims - will follow before you know it. Here's what you should be thinking about as we prepare for the Bang!
Formal pitches for your fics can be submitted via our form between July 15-July 31. These are what Artists will see as they rank fics to work with. @theshirallen is our guest today, graciously sharing some tips for Bang pitches! ▸ Writer Requirements ⤷ Example Pitch 1 | Example Pitch 2 ⤷ this post in doc form
How to write a good pitch:
Remember that the idea is to present your work as appealing! You are hoping an artist reads your pitch and feels interested and inspired.
Your pitch can be anywhere from 1-10 sentences (4000 characters), and length isn’t always an indicator of quality.
Details matter!
Provide enough information that artists have a solid understanding of your concept. Don’t be afraid about ‘spoiling’ the ending - this summary isn’t for potential readers, it’s for artists to get inspired by your work, and a twist or a plot beat might be that inspiration.
Pitches are anonymous. Avoid names for characters that would “give away” your identity (Consider saying “Hawke” or “Brosca” instead of their first name or using a title for your OC).
Critical things to consider including in your pitch:
▸Who?
Who are the main players in the cast? What is their involvement with your story and each other?
▸What?
What are they doing? Consider including some story beats to provide an idea of where the plot will lead and what the purpose of the journey is.
▸Where/When?
Dragon Age is a vast timeline and world! Where is your story set and when is it happening? What influence does the setting have on the overall piece?
▸Why?
Now we know who and what and where…why are things happening? What is the Event that sets things into motion? What is the problem they are trying to address or the question they are trying to answer?
Bonus things to consider including in your pitch:
These can help artists understand what to expect on a deeper level.
▸Mood/Tone
What’s the vibe? Is this a fluff piece, a big pile of whump, hurt/comfort, a murder mystery? Words that have visual meaning are also helpful: dreamy, glossy, gritty, dark, moody, etc.
▸Purpose
What is the overall theme? Is there a lesson or a moral or a purpose to the story you want to tell?
Keep in mind that this is not the place to play coy! You’re proud of your story, tell us about it.
Some example pitches are shared below in various levels of polish, from "poor" to "refined!" Let's break down their strengths.
Pitch #1: Poor, Good, and Refined
POOR
The spymaster of Fen’Harel’s rebellion wrangles with their poor choices and messy hair. Solas sits with them and talks them through their problems, hoping to help them understand that there is still a job to do and a future to fight for.
What it has: there is a who and a bit of a what.
What it lacks: there are few details to provide insight on the feeling of the fic, no clear setting, and no context. From this pitch, it is difficult to know tone or purpose, and the summary doesn't really invite inspiration or curiosity.
GOOD
When Fen’Harel’s spymaster compromises their position in Mythal’s court, they lose the Rebellion access to valuable intelligence. Lost for what to do next, the spymaster sits themself down for some much-needed TLC and spends time unbraiding their hair while Solas talks them through their current predicament. In the end, they find themself willing to accept what they cannot take back and solidify a plan for moving forward themself while also serving the needs of their People.
What it has: we have a who, a what, a when and a little of why. We know more or less what the fic is about and where it is going.
What it lacks: while there is some touch to the tone and purpose of the fic, there is still a bit missing when it comes to hooking the reader and inviting someone to imagine the heart of the piece. This pitch might hook a reader, but it could be improved.
REFINED
Fen’harel’s friend has spent centuries filling the double role of Rebellion Spymaster and high-ranking servant of Mythal. When their choices compromise their place at court, they return to the Lighthouse in shame. No longer capable of maintaining their long-held position within Mythal's court, where they were privy to the secret plans of the High Evanruris, the rebellion's spymaster must re-evaluate how they approach their work, and reckon with the understanding that some mistakes cannot be undone. In the Lighthouse's meditation room, they welcome Solas's counsel as they consider their options, their skills, and how to move forward in a way that continues to serve their goals, and the goals of the rebellion. Solas helps them unbind their hair and their frustrations, and they begin to understand that while choices often have consequences, it is rarely the end of all things. So long as they have their skill and their wit, there will always be hope for their future, and for their people.
What it has: there is a clear setting, cast, and premise. We know why things are happening and what things to expect. Tone is communicated with clear words like “shame” and “frustration” as well as the presentation of a problem to solve. We are also provided with a vision of the resolution.
What it lacks: no pitch is perfect! If clarity is the goal, it could be added by specifying that this is an introspective conversation between two friends, a hurt/comfort piece, and that it is intended to explore some world building and Arlathan lore.
PITCH #2: Poor, Good, and Refined
Poor
Fen’Harel’s spymaster must brave Elgar’nan’s court to plant eavesdropping devices. It’s dangerous, complicated, and messy. They find themself cornered in their own past, and relive a trauma in order to succeed. In the end, the devices are planted and they have managed to secure a more stable position within Mythal’s court.
What it has: there is a clear ‘what’ presented, and hints of tone. We know a little of what to expect from the resolution of the story.
What it lacks: Who is the spymaster? The introduction of an OC could be strengthened with a little more context. Why Elgar’nan’s court? There is a teaser here about past trauma which may be intended as a hook, but with so little context it isn’t likely to draw attention. Filling this pitch out with more details would strengthen it.
Good
In the early days of Fen’Harel’s rebellion, much of the intelligence gathering was left to the Spymaster alone. As the movement grew, the need for more immediate information grew, too. The Spymaster must plant the first of many eavesdropping devices. They begin in the court of Elgar'nan, though matters are complicated by the politics that muddy the waters between courts, their own uncomfortable history with the All-Father and his First, and the negligence of the partner Mythal has assigned them.
What it has: There is a clear setting and premise. We know who is doing what, when they are doing it, and a bit of why. We also are given pieces of tone.
What it lacks: From this pitch alone, it is difficult to tell precisely what to expect beyond planting the eavesdropping devices. We don’t know what the history is, as this is an OC, so the teaser is less effective than it might be for someone whose backstory is well-known. Why has Mythal assigned them a partner? What is their role and how did they fail? This pitch has good bones, but could be strengthened by providing clearer context in order to invite a collaborative partner.
Refined
In the earliest days of Fen’Harel’s rebellion Solas’s friend and spymaster helps develop magical eavesdropping devices. From their position embedded within Mythal’s court, they must plant the devices and provide the rebellion with access to immediate information. Though the task is risky, they begin at the court of the All-Father. They must make themself vulnerable and endure the pain of their past in order to accomplish their goal, overcoming barriers in the form of political intrigue and their own trauma. In Elgar’nan’s courtroom, they are confronted by his right hand, a spirit of Fear made flesh, only to be rescued by Justice, his counterpart from Mythal’s court. They must be clever and cunning if they want to succeed without compromising their mission. What they must endure from Fear they need not tolerate from Justice. Featuring a cast of high-ranking court members, this fic explores the inner workings of the Evanuris’s reign and the efforts taken to dethrone them.
What is has: A clear indication of who the fic is about, what they are trying to accomplish, and where they will begin. We have a sense of the fic’s conflict and tone, and the indication we will be introduced to some world building during the time of the ancient rebellion.
What it lacks: This pitch could be improved by the addition of a clear hook, as well as information that could clarify the tone of the piece.
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