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[your-ne1ghbor]

Ohhh this man...THIS MAN 😃😃😃

Punch him? I'll send him into a active volcano in order to hurt his ego, even just a little bit

2. I wouldnt be able to convince her, but my royals def would...through bribery 🙏

Which btw, they can get a lot of different kinds of wines from all over the Metteranian Sea since Rosas gets a lot of imports from trading (basically Rosas is a hot spot for trade so yes WoaS Amaya would be getting a lot of good wine from almost everywhere).

3. Ik this is a bonus one for the vainful Mags, but I find it hilarious from how night and day both of our Mags are.

Like WoaS Mag is just a insufferable piece of trash that for some reason doesn't think themselves as such and is incredibly vainful, meanwhile, Magnus is the complete opposite. It's kind of interesting since unlike WoaS Mag who thinks he is...well essentially everything and posts themselves all over the kingdom, Magnus isn't really like that? Like yeah few tapestries here and there but frankly Magnus genuinely doesn't like seeing his face that often lmao (not because of how he looks, it's more on how he is presented basically)

I won't dive so much into that here, but for example the mirror thing WoaS Mag has is pure insanity like wtf is he even on??? Wish drugs??? /j 😭😭

For the mirror thing for Magnus, yes there are a few mirrors but they always break whenever he's around them. Mirrors do not like this man, and Magnus doesnt like mirrors too...keep him away from them🙏

4. Oh right one last thing

Had Magnus tweaking there like wtf-💀🙏

✨️The relationship of the WoaS Royals (or:

WoaS!Magnifico being himself.✨️)

Hello! Today I'll be doing something I usually don't do and tag other rewriters to ask them this:

@starss-artss @your-ne1ghbor @spectator-zee @rascalentertainments @evestarsart @chillwildwave @cielos-pintados @ceyasstuff @pinkninja0708 @thesafireartist @uva124 @snackara @cerulean-crow @a-storytellers-wish @annymation @natsuki208 @tumblingdownthefoxden @oh-shtars @ishadow246

-Would you want to punch WoaS!Magnifico in the place where it hurts him the most? (Aka: His ego)

-Would you/your Royals advise WoaS!Amaya to divorce this man?

-A bonus question to the rewriters who's Magnifico also has the vain personality: Would you think that WoaS!Magnifico is even more vain then yours lol?(I'm sorry if this question or the other two seem rude in some way, that'd not my intention.)

(If you're wondering why I'm doing this, a friend said that it would be fun to see your reaction to my Mag's personality and relationship with his wife lol. I'm sorry if this comes across as annoying or something.)

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Before we start with listing the good stuff about their relationship, let's get the bad stuff out of the way first:

WoaS!Magnifico has a very, very big ego. He loves to carry a mirror around so that he can always see his face. (He also wears foundation to hide any wrinkles and takes about 2 hours to get ready.)

He actually has a whole collection of these hand-mirrors, one for each day. They also all have names, which he memorized. (Does he remember his wedding anniversary? No, but that's not important to remember anyways.)

Those aren't his only mirrors, because 1000 mirrors isn't close to enough. He also has big mirrors hanging around the castle so that he can look at himself while walking through his home. And because he is just so handsome, he naturally has alot of portraits of himself hanging around, because the more of him the better!

Of course there are portraits of his family too: Of his son, Magnifico Junior (everyone besides his dad calls him Nico, no need to explain why), his wife and their cat. (Oh and his daughter too of course, but then again she dosen't need any portraits. She knows what she looks like and the less portraits of her, the more portraits of him!)

If you are wondering, yes, WoaS!Magnifico had to ask his wife if they could name their first child Magnifico Junior. Did he annoy her with that question so much until she said yes just to get him to shut up? Yes, but he got his way and that's always good. She sadly didn't allow him to name their daughter "Magnifica", which made him very upset.

(WoaS!Magnifico and Nico (7 years at that moment))

He is also always honest with what he's saying. If his wife asks him if this dress makes her look a little fat, he'll say "Not just a little, but extremly." because he dosen't like people who aren't thin. That's why his kids aren't allowed to eat much. But I'm sure it's fine, it's not like we need food or something like that lol.

WoaS!Magnifico is also always right in his mind. In his oppinion, wanting to use magic to create art is much better than actually having to work for it. (This is supposed to mirror A.I being used to generate art. Something I'm very much against.) Working is for peasants only, and his daughter, who is weirdly against him using magic to create art. He dosen't get why she's doing this labour of drawing stuff by hand, but then again: She is a girl, so of course she's not bright. Because really, what's the use of his daughter? In his eyes she's not pretty, not smart, too loud and very annoying. Her only use to him is that she gets married and has a bunch of kids, just sons and no daughters, which she then has to raise to be just like her dad. The same goes for Nico if he gets married and has kids one day. Because what the world needs is of course more WoaS!Magnifico. If his kids don't agree with what he's saying, he will hit them. He did it before and he still does it to this day. WoaS!Amaya dosen't do that anymore though.

(Speaking of that, he can also clone himself using mirrors. The clones will help him with stuff in the story, but he mostly uses them to boost his ego.)

Another thing he's right about is that the earth is flat. Sure, there are multiple sources confirming that the earth is round, but those sources are clearly false. If he dosen't believe it, it just isn't true.

All of this is really getting on his wife's nerves. It's not like she dosen't try to talk with him about it, but he ignores her because his reflection is just more important. WoaS!Magnifico is also very much oblivious to the fact that nobody really likes him.

WoaS!Amaya usually solves her problems and frustration like any normal person: with a glass of wine (which usually turn into more than one). And because of that and because she's gotten used to her husband's ego, she genuinely does not care about anything anymore and is just done with everything.

But she can't leave Rosas. Otherwise she has no place to go and she's also the only one who actually takes care of the political things and other stuff that WoaS!Magnifico should be doing as the king. In his eyes, WoaS!Magnifico has done enough for the kingdom: He defeated the star king and thus ending war, he created the force-field around Rosas and, most importantly, he's handsome. But still he thinks that he's really the one doing all the hard work because he's the best in everything.

But back then before the war, the two actually had a better relationship.

(The Royals but younger, in their 30's. WoaS!Magnifico is just really short and wears the high heels as an ego boost lol.)

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And that's all I have to/can say about my Royals and their relationship right now. If you have any questions about them or anything else, don't be afraid to ask!

Again, I'm very sorry if it seemed rude in anyway that I tagged you all today. I didn't mean to show off my characters or want to say that they are better. All rewrites are equally good and equally unique ✨️

I hope you have a good day/after-noon/ evening 👋

[your-ne1ghbor]

How To Train Your Dragon "Remake" Review (FW: Long Post/Spoilers)

How To Train Your Dragon is a very personal film to me, as it is to many other people. To say that it was a phase is an understatement. To this day, the franchise has been very much an inspiration for a lot of things I like to do, read, or watch in the media. I still have a lot of the merchandise for when the 3rd movie came out. I remember drawing my "oh so original dragon ocs" that obviously was just Toothless reskinned. I still vividly remember going to the library when I was a kid and picking up cases of the Rise of Berk show, more specifically the episodes with the screaming death and when hookfang almost died back possibly around 2012 to watching Race to the Edge on Netflix either in 2016 or when it was releasing its final episodes in 2018. It got me into a lot of fantasy books like Wings of Fire or the Rainbow Magic series, plus many more, plus made me believe that dragons were real for the longest time…anyways-

And to this day, I love to rewatch both the movies and the show on occasion, either because I’m bored or just for comfort when I’m down. This franchise is very dear to me. The swelling music, the memorable characters, the worldbuilding all touched to my younger self personally. Hell, I even read some of the original books just out of curiosity, and it was because I watched this film that caused me to want to read the original source material.  

When I heard about it getting a remake, needless to say was that I was very…very worried. One thing that I was hoping for when it was announced was to reintroduce some characters from the shows, like Heather or Dagur into the movies so we would get a more onscreen appearance from them. Since they were going for a more diverse berk with people from multiple tribes, it wasn’t off the table for me to image Heather being apart of the Hooligian tribe with Dagur being apart of the dragon army that would later in the second film become a good guy. Almost like the same arc in the Race to the Edge show, however would be different enough so it is something new. Which is all I wanted for to remake. To bring something fresh to the table that previously wasn’t in the original film. When the trailer came out, both the teaser and official…it was not what we got. Instead it looked like a copy and pace of the original film, which made me a bit more irritated. I’m not saying that I hate live action versions of animated films, I just want them to do things differently and actually do more with the source material and make it more into an adaptation, instead of a remake. There are good live action remakes out there like the 2015 Cinderella from Disney, or the 2010 Alice in Wonderland by Tim Burton to name a few. 

Needless to say, I still ended up watching the film. Now I’m not making a review on this film because I liked the original film and wanted to see how horrible it was to prove that the original film was better, since lets be honest, we didn’t need a live action remake on this movie. I did want to see it, more so out of curiosity on how they were going to adapt one of my faviorate childhood movies on screen again, and I got that wish when my aunt decided to take me to go see it as a birthday present. I don’t want this review to have nostalgia glasses on, I want to go over the stuff that I liked with what they added to the stuff that I didn’t like/what they removed and try to be as fair as I can between both films to the best of my abilities as this film stays fresh in my head.

The Movie

The film opens up the same as the original with some key changes. Something that I liked about the opening was not just the music, but also the logo itself. Dreamworks back them before they changed it actually added fun things for the guy on the moon to do. Although he didn’t do anything here, if you squint hard enough, you can see toothless flying in the background. It is a easy to miss part of the beginning of the movie, however it gets you more immersed into the movie before the logo fades into the water. Although I could have missed it, I didn’t see that detail in the film, however they did keep the part of the log fading into water part which I liked a lot. I’m mentioning this little detail because these little details are what makes the original film such a good watch. And you’re going to see why a bit later. 

We then are introduced to Hiccup’s voice. No shame to the voice actor, they are trying their best with the huge role they were trying to fill. However, the voice of the original Hiccup is so unique that hearing it being played by someone else was jarring to me. Mason Thames performance of hiccup is okay though.I don’t want to hate him on that, since again, it a huge shoe to fill (heh get it?), and they at least tried. There was some parts where some of his lines were hard to hear, either because he is saying it quietly or that the music is very loud to where I cannot hear him. Overall, he did an alright performance for the role he was given in the film. I would also like to mention that the sarcasm part of his character is somewhat not really there or just doesn’t hit as hard for me as it did in the original, which is a shame because it was the best part of the original's character.

The beginning of the film is the same as the original, with some line changes here and there. Off topic, but they should have gotten someone else to play gobber. He doesn’t have that deep voice in the original, and is often drowned out from the music. I wouldn’t say his performance was bad, I’m just saying they either get someone to do a deeper voice for him, or  not have the music to be so fucking loud. 

Off topic, again,  one thing I do not like about the film is unfortunately the music. At some parts it is super loud to where it is off beat to the scene playing in front of you, and it is very..very noticable. Although it is for adding or removing scenes, it just didn’t work. They should’ve went with a more different yet familiar sound track than obviously copy and pacing the music with a few noticeable key differences, almost like the Lion King Remake…

yeesh-

When we are introduced to Astrid, played by Nico Parker, she is mentioned to be the leader of the fire guard, yk the people who put out the fires in the original film.. Needless to say, for what they were “fixing her” to be a more independent person, which  they were wrong for changing the character, I don’t see her as another Astrid, . Although she shares the name,  I’d say she gives off more heather vibes than Astrid vibes. This version of her is a bit more intense and aggressive, with a underlining softens to it, almost like Heather in a way, moreso when she was upset, however it is not/doesn’t feel like Astird in my opinion. Astrid did have a sharp personality, and of course wanted to kill the dragon (They gave dragon training a new name, which I did like however names escape me so I don’t remember lol), however she has a understanding for Hiccup and his empathy for dragons after that scene of them flying in the sky and finding the dragon queens nest. I will get to those scenes in a moment, but this Astrid character is not that much samey as the original however there was some new scenes they added which I actually liked, but I’ll get to that in a moment. Although I’m not entirely sure if I like this Astrid, as I said, I liked the new added scenes, and the context that she came from nothing. I don’t hate it, but I don’t like it either if that makes sense. She’s just, alright. 

For the rest of the other dragon riders, I’ll go by quickly. Ruff and Tuff aren’t that annoying in the film as they are in the original film/as silly. They didn’t have fun stuff, and they also changed Ruff’s personality to be more chiller than her devious counter part. They aren’t as mischievous as the original counterparts, which is unfortunate since it is a key part of their characters. I know a lot of people within the fandom has spoke of their annoyance of the Twins, but its literally the point of their characters- And frankly, It is quite charming since I dont get annoyed by them, I found a lot of their scenes together both in the movie and show to be funny to me personally, and its kinda disharnenting that they also aren’t as annoying as the originals, and shall I say...

funny?

 For Fishlegs, I’m not entirely sure if I liked how the actor, Julian Dennision, played him, however one detail they added which I loved was them giving him the dragon cards which was introduced in the 2nd film. I liked that! It was honestly pretty cute and a good way to connect the 2nd and first film. This is honestly what I wanted the entire movie to be. To make changes that link either the movies or shows together through tiny details that can go overlooked, AND THAT IT MAKES SENSE AND DOESNT TAKE YOU OUT OF THE STORY!

But the one that did take the show out of these background characters was surprisingly Snotlout (I was actually really delighted for what they went with)

He is still the snotty guy he is, but what made him stand out in this film was that he interacts more with his dad and asking for more approval from him, as Spitelout just gruffs and ignores him. I liked it personally because they were not only adding new things, but also connecting some parts of the show, like Spitelouts and Snotlouts relationship in the Race to the Edge Series to this movie. And it somewhat reflects Hiccup’s relationship to his father in a way, WHICH I LOVE SO MUCH SINCE THEY POINTED THIS OUT IN THE SERIES!!! And through Hiccup, Snotlout gained approval of his dad with Hookfang, (which he wouldn't have really had gottenw ithout Hiccup) but also somewhat respects Hiccup a bit more.

Its SO good, I love it I love it I LOVE IT!!

(BTW THE ACTOR THAT PLAYED SPITELOUT LOOKS EXACTLY LIKE SPITELOUT IN THE FILM ITS SO COOL)

Anyways same shenanigans go down. Hiccup hits the night furry and is rediculed by Stoick, his father. I’m so glad that they got the original voice actor of Stoick to actually voice him. I liked seeing him on screen and the way he talks is just as moving as the original films. Some added/changed things was when they were having the meeting part, he was talking about the legacy of the ribe, how they all came from different regions and came together to fight off the same enemy. I liked it, and his speech is very moving. Its just that I kinda wished they kept the “Those who stays, looks after hiccup” and everyone raises their hands to go with him back for searching the nest because it tells us a lot about how the village see’s hiccup. Although it is somewhat there? It isn’t as noticeable as it was in the original. They also mentioned Hiccups mom, both by mom and by name multiple times throughout the film, and I liked It so much. You have no Idea, and like I said, I like it when they change or add a few things that doesn’t take away from the film, and links the stories more together. I like it too because that moment when hiccup gently puts down his breast hat (which I do like how he does it gently instead of tossing it), holy shit I felt that anger from Stoick as Hicup trys to talk some sense into the tribe, but I’m getting ahead of myself. 

One thing they removed, before the meeting was that Hiccup was imitating Stoick on how he was a talking fishbone. I was kinda upset about it because BEING SARCASTIC IS HIS ENTIRE CHARACTER AND THIS IS A GOOD MOMENT TO SHOW IT- I was so sad man…I love that joke so much and they removed it- I mean gobber did say he was skinny in the dragon training section, but man….that joke is a iconic part of his character that it sucks that they removed it (and I'd argue it is a important part of his character because it shows his insecurity).

When we get to hiccup exploring the environment, Something that I nociced was that the CGI for the islands is somewhat inconsistent or doesn’t match up with the environment Hiccup is in? It is more noticeable when he is flying with toothless though, but I guess it is just a nitpick-

The enviroment is better in the original film in my opinion-

Not saying there isn't good enviromental shots in this film, just the island shots aren't as good as the original. That is all. (It seemed they also had scale issues too but I'd have to watch it again to see for mself)

We then meet Toothless. Now, he doesn’t look awful- however he doesn’t match in with the other dragons. As the others look more sharp, toothless looks out of place with the others. In my opinion, they should’ve had the other dragons also somewhat match Toothless so he doesn’t feel out of place or doesn’t look uncanny. I’m not entirely sure about the model for toothless for this version, but I will say that the original design/model for Toothless is peak and cannot be replaced-

They also tried to imitate that cuteness, but it just comes off as a bit weird. 

Now the part where Hiccup is talking about carving out his heart and giving it to his father when he found Toothless was entirely removed and replaced with weird hollow shots of him (there is a bit of weird shots that feel empty btw) looking at Toothless, contemplating on killing him, before ultimately not doing it. I wished they kept more of that dialogue in the film because it adds to his character. Hiccup is ridiculed by his father and tribe for being small and weak, (empathized by his sarcastic remarks about himself like that joke that was removed). He believes by doing this viking act will get him the respect that he wants, but then he ultimately doesn't because he saw himself in toothless. Someone just as scared as he was. Its a important moment and shows his pacifism and compassion. Yes, what he said his graphic, but its a key moment. Removing and replacing it with weird shots makes it feel like something is missing. I wouldn’t had minded if they cut it, but replaced it with different dialogue instead of ultimately removing that entire dialogue from that scene. Now I know that some parts of HIccup’s character was changed, to where he does want the approval of his father, but also is ridiculed by Astrid for being his son because of how small and weak he is (Astrid even told him directly that she wants to be chief 💀). Yes he is physically small and weak, but his wit and compassion is what makes him strong and a good part of his character. It is luckily still there, especially with Toothless where we see it the most as in the original film, I just wished they showed that insecure part of his character more from his sarcasm, because not only is it funny, they could've explored it more. I mean they did, but just without the sarcasm (or it was there but it was either very quiet or the music was so loud to where I COULDN'T HEAR THEM-) it just feels off/something is missing. If they were trying to tone down that sarcastic part, I guess it is fine? Though I'd have to rewatch it to see the parts I missed if they didn't remove it.

The dragon book scene is by far one of my fav scenes in the original film. Surprisingly in this film, although didn’t show us a lot of pages or dioluge, did something better: and it is before when Hiccup opens the book. 

Before that scene, We find out Fishlegs is making cards from how many times he had read it (AND IT MAKES SENSE, AND I LOVED IT!!) And what was amazing, THAT I ACTUALLY LIKED A LOT- Was that Hiccup and Astrid TALKED before she left. IN the original she said, “Read it.” and left

BUT IN THIS VERSION- Hiccup stops her before she leaves and actually tries to give her a different perspective on the dragons, even going as far as saying that “maybe we’re part of the problem.”  (I LOVE THAT LINE SO MUCH-) Astrid’s responds is reasonably like how she said “pick which side you’re on” is somewhat said here, however shows her confusion to Hiccups question. And from her gestures, it seem liked she is somewhat considering it, but because of how stubborn she is, she somewhat dismisses it. Yes this scene is good, yes, I liked the diologue shared between her and hiccup, however, I feel like they didn’t utualize this scene more when she find’s out hiccup is training a dragon. Regardless, this is the best scene of the film. It adds more depth, it adds something new to the table, and I like it. Although we don’t see the dragon book much, I’d say this is better than the original in a way, because it deepens the relationship between Astrid and Hiccup, and places some doubt on Astrid with her perspective of dragons before she meets Toothless that she didn't have in the original film because that scene wasn't there.

Same sequence of events happens as the original with minor changes, including Hiccup training Toothlesss, however something I want to critic about this version of Toothless is that he doesn’t feel as…alive as the original film. As the other dragons feel a lot more alive/animal like, I don’t feel a lot of personality when I see him, nor do I see a good friendship between him and Hiccup and feels rushed. But this is because they removed key elements or rushed them. That flying moment where they rest and brilliantly showed how the queen will be killed through Terrible Terror is cut. Its not there, and when that amazing scene of the queen comes, it makes it seem out of nowhere because this shot was cut. Toothless in the origninal acts like a animal through his movements and facial expressions. Although it is there in this movie, he feels very static-

And it's not a good thing because the movies are about Hiccup's relationship between him and Toothless, and they could've done it a bit better (not like it is bad, its just because they rushed or cut some scenes it just doesn't make it as deep as the original film)

Something I forgot to mention is that some added things was a fight with the dragons when they get to Hellhind’s Gate. IN this film, they show the fight that took place a bit, but I’d argue that they didn’t needed it, and I think it should’ve been the same as the original just so we get more scenes of the other characters and their relationships with each other more, and it unfortunatly does take away from the cilmax.

SORRY I KEEP FORGETTING BUT GOTHI IS HERE BY NAME AND I LOVE HER NEW DESIGN!!!

(only image I found of her unfortunatly- however its really good in my opinion and she stays mute!!! YIPEEEEE!!!)

Back on track, the training ensues, Hiccup wins, and we get to the part with Astrid finding out about Hiccup training a dragon. Its still the same where she wants to know what was going on, and still leaves to snitch on him.

Now on the flying sequence with Hiccup and Astrid, the best I can say was…that they did try. I understand the limitations with real people and CGI, especially recreating a scene like the original. Just the original is better than this one, but I am glad that they tried to make it good. It Just didn’t do it for me (but I want to just acknowledge that they did try at least, and that is better than not trying, even if it isn't that great).  

The scene that they changed, which I’m very mixed on, was Astrid’s comment on her admitting that she was wrong. IN the original, she says: “Okay, I Admit it. This is amazing. He is amazing”, and she continues her concern for HIccup after a moment since he is supposed to kill the dragon. However in this film she says: “OKay I admit it. This is amazing, but it doesn’t change the fact that you’d have to kill the dragon.” This feels super off because of that convo with Hiccup and Astrid that placed her doubt on her perspective on dragons should’ve shined here, but it didn’t.  She should’ve been somewhat more like the original here. Yes she is a bit of a different character here, but I think she should’ve been more in awe here and acknowledge that hiccup was right. Hell it could’ve been in a more reluctant tone here. Just something that isn’t this line. I guess she shows her concern before the dragon fight and after the dragon hive. But I'm not entirely sure. Im just mixed.

Also there was other scene during the fight that also made me itch in the wrong way was that instead of 

We got:

" Don't get involved. "

Not about Toothless, but its more directed towards her. And she ofc does get involved, but this minor change undermines HIccup's and Toothless' relationship. Yes he loves Astrid, but he cares about Toothlesses well being because if you think about it, Toothless is his first real friend that doesn't see him as weak and small, except as someone equal. Here, this change shows that he values his love for Astrid more than Toothless, who Astrid throughout this film, constantly didn't value him and saw him just as the village saw him: small and weak. At least thats what I got from it. Honestly it would've been better to have both of these in!

Like this:

" Astrid, if something goes wrong...just promise me one thing: Don't get involved. No matter what, just don't get involved, and don't get Toothless involved. We both know what they'll do to him. Do it for me...please..Astrid. "

Ik it can be written better, but this example I provided above expresses his concern for both Astrid and Toothless because he cares about both of them deeply. I just...wish it was that instead of what we got. And it effectively makes them have their cake and eat it too!

Now we get to that scene. That scene where he thows the breast hat.

Although the original is better, there is postitives here too. Hiccup in this film takes a more calmer approach, by gently placing it down instead of tossing it. I can see the tossing part (since it was made from part of his mother's breast plate) can be seen as disrespecting his mother in a way. Here, he respects his mom by gently putting it down, but it can still be disrespectful because he is still removing the hat and chose the dragon side. And thats disrespectful enough because this film acknowleges that Valka was eaten by a dragon and is brought up a lot! Both are good in my opinion, and Stoicks crash out is still just as reasonable as it was in the original.

Now when Toothless saves Hiccup and goes after his dad was Astrid telling Stoick that he wasn't going to hurt him. But because of Toothless being aggetated and threated by the others around him, Toothless does attack. It is a minor scene but at least it shows Astrid trying not to get Stoick Involved, even if she herself is.

(Which makes me wish they just had that toothless line in there too but whatever sigh)

Now another best scene in the original film is Hiccup's and Stoick's argument. I'm happy to say that it is just as good as the original. There are some lines that do feel awkward, but the fact that Stoick angirly says "THEY KILLED YOUR MOTHER" sent chills. And Hiccup doesn't even respond to that because right know they think that she is dead. ITS SUCH A GOOD AND VALID WAY TO BRING UP HOW BOTH SIDE SUFFERED BY USING SOMEONE PERSONAL TO BOTH HICCUP AND STOICK!!! Also that scene where he says, your not my son, made me fly into panic mode because after he said that, Stoick REGRETS WHAT HE SAID. And I was worried that they weren't gonna have that in, BUT THEY DID AND I WAS SO RELIEVED.

Imma stop here for now because the climax should be a seprate post of its own and because I reached the 30 image limit on Tumblr lol

Anyways, I hope you liked half of this synopsis and my opinions on this film. I'll give more opinions in my next post about the climax.

Until then, I bid you Aduie ✨

@oh-shtars @watchingthewalls (Idk who else to tag sigh)

[your-ne1ghbor]

I'm so close...

Magnus you were a pain in the ass to work with design wise but I might be getting somewhere 🙏

(Non colored because I'm not super set on it yet)

[your-ne1ghbor]

The Gods will make him know...

Let's see if we can get through all of Epic the musical

I'll go first

Alright, my brothers, listen closely

[your-ne1ghbor]

OH MY GOD HE IS FINALLY DONE IDK WHY IT TOOK THIS LONG BUT YKYK

OKOK SO this is Axe, he is a scammer and yes he did on occasion sell drugs but its was the only way for him and his twin to survive soooo likee🤷‍♀️

Okay, he's literally Hermes, but if he had a trench coat👹✨ He can control plants and stuff but he doesn't really know how to use it very well so he has a dagger on his leg as added protection

Anyways it took me forever to decide on a design because for some reason I cannot for the life of me figured out what he should've looked like but hey we got his design now sooooooooooo 💃💃💃

I don't have his twin's design yet, HOWEVER, I do have some concept art that i'd like to share so here you guys go:

(still is a hater btw and I like the legs in that concept art I might use it UGHGUj)

My guy went through th 5 stages of grief before I figured out his design literally last night at 1 am 😭😭

Anyways ughuh yeah this guy is a menace to society! KILL HIM!!!/j

KSXJJRDJDKJSNDNDEJNDND FINAL PROTAGONIST OF PREDESTINED PATH OS HERE🗣️🗣️🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️

THIS IS AXE1!1!1! THE THRID AND FINAL PROTAGONIST

Bros an epic troll™ and according to him

"I can grow anything, and that includes weed!" I wonder if that's concerning to the others- oh well, their relationship isn't the best anyway 🥀💔

Bro also has a twin...but, is she still alive?

(design looks a lil different from the banner cuz reasons)

Deisgn: @your-ne1ghbor

co creators (LAST TIME IM TAGGING YALL): @cowerbummer @pennysucks @sephhtiss @watchingthewalls @andfishwhostumblristidonthave

[your-ne1ghbor]

Nobody would like him if he just randomly apeard in my au lol

Alcor would be rather annoyed than anything at him "flirting" (harassing) with TKORAT! Asha and would take the more tame route of putting him in his place.

And as a shapeshifter, they can give SS! Flazino a big scare. Serves him right. (I. HATE. THIS. GUY. 🙏)

Now..I know that the royals are villains. But given how Asha is their daughter and they CARE about her...

The royals would not like him. They probably just get paranoid over his sudden appearance and his "flirtatious behavior" towards Asha. It would be awfully suspicious to them and they would do something about it.

Right guys?

. . . Wait where is Flazino?

Oh the paranoia got to then again-

Sigh they need to keep it in check 🙄

SS!Flazino: "Hey, baby. You must be new in town..."

WG!Asha: *rolls eyes* "Don't even think about it."

SS!Flazino: "What? I didn't do anything. I'm just...admiring the view." 😏

WG!Asha: "Its only fair to warn you that Star can be really overprotective. Especially around creeps."

SS!Flazino: *Scoffs* "What's that idiot gonna-"

(Star's not really a jealous type, but the second your harm or threaten Asha, he's immediately an Eldritch being)

@starss-artss You're gonna need to get a net to fish him out. 😂

(Sorry if the sketches are a bit messy)

[your-ne1ghbor]

I love my son ❤️

Also YES ROUTE AGAINST THIS MAN!!! THIS VILE CREATURE!!!

And we love brothers or people protecting Asha from that stupid SS! Flazi that is always harassing her lol

Now grab a missle launcher and send it to flazi. Nothing bad would totally happen to him!!

@pinkninja0708 , I had the motivation to draw them together lol.

Supportive Brothers, we love to see it🎀

And here's what my Flazino has to say:

@your-ne1ghbor ,you've raised your son right🎀

(Tagging Time: @starss-artss @spectator-zee @rascalentertainments @evestarsart @cielos-pintados )

[your-ne1ghbor]

@snackara

I resent that statement! 🫵

I obv have a character who is happy, and they are one of my villains in a completely different story!!!

But if we're talking about the au....ehhhhhh 😬

Nvm valid statement 💔

Just happens to be that Magnus and Agatha are my favorite character 🥀

Hi Aled :3

Hiii Bo!...It's been a while, hasn't it? lmao

I wanted to stop by to say hello to everyone! Hope you are doing well :] Sorry if I disappeared for a while, I lost a bit of motivation to draw in the last year but I'm out of creative block so it's all good :D, how are you doing in the wish rewrite fandom? I know I won't be in the fandom as much as before but I'd still like to say that wish rewrite was the best community I've ever joined, everyone is so nice and shares amazing ideas and I hope you keep creating your stories! I didn't want to come empty handed so I made this for you guys.

@oh-shtars @spectator-zee @your-ne1ghbor @chillwildwave @annymation @emytellsrandomstories

don't think I'm forgetting you @rascalentertainments

I LOVE THE WAY YOU DRAW NEMBUS AND NAOS MY BABYS LOOK SO ADORABLE :´D

I love how almost half of the starboys when they see Naos and Nembus remember the stars from their home, it's adorable, although it makes Nembus' death more painful 😔

Anyways there you go!

And talking about Nembus dead...

That's all from me for now! I hope you like these sketches, I'll try to see if I can be more active around here, I'm starting some personal projects like a comic I'm doing so I'm a bit busy, but as I said before I appreciate you all very much! the wish rewrite fandom is one of the healthiest out there and I hope it keeps going like this! I love you all very much guys

[your-ne1ghbor]

ALEDDD YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME-

*agressive sobing on Nembus death*

Desided to draw them both Hugging cause seriously loosing a loved one is horrible MAN HADEUS NOOOOOOOOOOO

ALSO I LOVED HOW YOU DREW ASHA AND ALCOR (yes I finally gave them a name) LIKE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ❤❤✨✨

AUGH MY KIDS 💔💔💔💔

ALSO DONT WORRY ABOUT BEING ON A CREATIVE STUMP, I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND MY G 💔

ANYWAYS ITS AWESOME TO SEE YOU ONCE MORE HAMJKLSL:

Hi Aled :3

Hiii Bo!...It's been a while, hasn't it? lmao

I wanted to stop by to say hello to everyone! Hope you are doing well :] Sorry if I disappeared for a while, I lost a bit of motivation to draw in the last year but I'm out of creative block so it's all good :D, how are you doing in the wish rewrite fandom? I know I won't be in the fandom as much as before but I'd still like to say that wish rewrite was the best community I've ever joined, everyone is so nice and shares amazing ideas and I hope you keep creating your stories! I didn't want to come empty handed so I made this for you guys.

@oh-shtars @spectator-zee @your-ne1ghbor @chillwildwave @annymation @emytellsrandomstories

don't think I'm forgetting you @rascalentertainments

I LOVE THE WAY YOU DRAW NEMBUS AND NAOS MY BABYS LOOK SO ADORABLE :´D

I love how almost half of the starboys when they see Naos and Nembus remember the stars from their home, it's adorable, although it makes Nembus' death more painful 😔

Anyways there you go!

And talking about Nembus dead...

That's all from me for now! I hope you like these sketches, I'll try to see if I can be more active around here, I'm starting some personal projects like a comic I'm doing so I'm a bit busy, but as I said before I appreciate you all very much! the wish rewrite fandom is one of the healthiest out there and I hope it keeps going like this! I love you all very much guys

[your-ne1ghbor]

You're not gonna like what imma upload later😔💔

Shhhh the royals are sleeping ✨️

(Quick doodle)

^full image

Dontt wake them up 🫵👹

Anyways-

ignore the lack of lines and blocks I did this at 1 am last night 🥀

I love them a lot ughshsnndns

I have too much lore for them it's kinda crazy 🧎

[your-ne1ghbor]

they forgot about that creature feature that came to earth 🙏

Shhhh the royals are sleeping ✨️

(Quick doodle)

^full image

Dontt wake them up 🫵👹

Anyways-

ignore the lack of lines and blocks I did this at 1 am last night 🥀

I love them a lot ughshsnndns

I have too much lore for them it's kinda crazy 🧎

[your-ne1ghbor]

Shhhh the royals are sleeping ✨️

(Quick doodle)

^full image

Dontt wake them up 🫵👹

Anyways-

ignore the lack of lines and blocks I did this at 1 am last night 🥀

I love them a lot ughshsnndns

I have too much lore for them it's kinda crazy 🧎

[your-ne1ghbor]

Magnifico across the wishverse attending the "Star Hate Club"

@starss-artss (for the idea inspo with the Amaya lol)

Bottom is a more close up rendition of the AUs

@rascalentertainments @oh-shtars @thesafireartist @jojo-ker06 @pinkninja0708

@tumblingdownthefoxden @a-storytellers-wish

Bonus:

They need their wives to contain some of their sanity for most of them at least

[your-ne1ghbor]

I paced around for 40 minutes just to apprecatate and love this art. THIS IS JUST SO PRETTY AUHGHHHH I LOVE ALL THE OTHER AMAYA VARIENTS SO MUCH IM LIKE GHSDBJAKN ALSO I LOVE YOUR ART STYLE SABJDKHNLMK

I felt like drawing some queens✨

@jojo-ker06 @oh-shtars @your-ne1ghbor @rascalentertainments @a-storytellers-wish @ceyasstuff @thesafireartist @annymation @uva124 @gracebethartacc @pinkninja0708

(I'm sorry if designs are outdated or if I got some details wrong🎀)

[your-ne1ghbor]

Dw I got you here as well lol

I don't have Star's human form done or completed at all, only their true form so I'll show that instead

Asha:

Star (True Form)

(Star couldn't fit the page 😔)

Yo wish re-writers!

I thought about doing this for a bit, but I wanna see refs of your Asha and starboy designs!

Why? Cause I wanna draw them lol. (may or may not make animatics with them too lol)

So uh yeah! I wanna draw your Asha's and Starboy's (maybe some personality/lore bits about them too lol)

Cheers!

Tags: (sorry if I missed any)

@rascalentertainments @your-ne1ghbor @jojo-ker06 @thesafireartist @uva124 @snackara @cerulean-crow @chillwildwave @a-storytellers-wish @annymation @natsuki208 @tumblingdownthefoxden @spectator-zee @starss-arts @oh-shtars @evestarsart @ishadow246

[your-ne1ghbor]

I gotchu bro

I alr have Agatha's enitre character sheet done, I just only have Magnus' design with no color at the moment lmao

Anyways

Left Agatha

Right Magnus

Btw His forearms, legs, and hands, have armor plates, just letting you know💃

(DW about the cape, I dont really draw him with it anyways😭 )

Yo wish Re-writers (again lol)

So last minute ask, I also wanna draw your villain re-designs too lol. Show me your Magnifico and Amaya refs!

Cheerios!

Tags: (sorry if I missed any)

@rascalentertainments @your-ne1ghbor @jojo-ker06 @thesafireartist @uva124 @snackara @cerulean-crow @chillwildwave @a-storytellers-wish @annymation @natsuki208 @tumblingdownthefoxden @spectator-zee @starss-arts @oh-shtars @evestarsart @ishadow246

[your-ne1ghbor]

Official redesign of

the one...

the only...

Queen Agatha !!!

(Design Update) (FW: Missing Eye)

So here is my new design of our Queen, Agatha!

Now you may be wondering:

What was wrong with the old design? Why did I change it?

Well, I have a few reasons why I wanted to change it.

(FW lots of words lol)

NUMERO I

First of all, her old design was very bland to me. It followed really only 2 main colors and didn't have any patterns as I would have liked it too.

At the time that I was making this dress, I wanted it to be a blend of european and greek dresses, but I later went on full greek because I honestly thought it would just fit her better, plus lowkey greek dresses are cool af.

Not only that, I'm not very good with patterns. Patterns for me don't come as easily-

So my goal with this new dress is to not only make it look visually better, but also allow me to experiment with patterns that I pretty much easily came up on my own with some ideas from my friends like @xesnox for helping me with the color pallet.

detailed top ^

Better look at bottom ^

I like to think that the bottom of her new dress is to represent petals, however has a close up flower and thorn embroidery throughout to make it look like there could be something wrong, or that she is hiding something (there is more of that but that's for you to interpret for yourself :DD).

I stuck with the gold since I overall liked it on her originally, and used a cooler color like green to counter act with the warm colors. I did have green in her original design, but it was only as a ear piece, so I really wouldn't call it very present.

Also for a random design detail mention (probs not important but thought it would be fun to mention) since in my AU, she is technically also a archer, I do imagine her to be a bit bulky. I think it overall makes sense since she is a archer, she will probably be very fit lmao

NUMERO II

2nd of all, is for lore reasons. I changed the placement of the scar since how she got her eye removed is very different from how it originally was. It still sucks for her, but it still generally looks better.

(forgot her hair streak here lmao)

So in my version of the story, Agatha is not only a alchemist, but she is a archer as well. It's to follow the design themes of the sun and moon dyamic I have for both Agatha and Magnus that lacked in the original design.

Agatha more so listens to her enemies, to learn more about them, before striking. However I'm mixed if she is more in the public eye than Magnus since they both fr do weird things in the basement 😭

I also wanted to weaponise this in a more fun way that represents how she acts, and the bow fits way to well for her. Not only that, but she can use the arrows to attach her potions to so when they land on her opponent, they're in for a nasty surprise. It's also kind of scary when you don't know where she is. Especially when she uses a specific potion that produces fog.

In my anniversary post, although I did say she was a great archer, I would want to just confirm that she on here yk?

I did show art of her younger self holding bows before too lmao. Tid bit of foreshadowing heheh 👹

^younger self with bow n arrow

HOWEVER, she does indeed have flaws with her bow. During the war and before the incident, she has been able to shoot her targets very well. The way she held it then is different from how she holds it now. Her left arm held the bow, and her right arm held the arrow and string, and used her right eye for the aim. When she lost it, she had to switch to her left eye to become her dominant eye in archery, including changing her positioning (although I was reading somewhere that they don't have to change it but Im not sure if that will be in the overall cannon unless otherwise mentioned).

Ofc when when reducing your vision to one eye, you tend to have a problem with aim and depth of field. Not only that for some people it can be very disorienting or uncomfortable, especially when not using their dominant eye for aim. During some parts of the story, (maybe a introduction?) she is shooting arrows at the targets missing just by a few centimeters. It still would show she is a good archer, but needs practice. Or maybe that is for when she started picking it up again after the incident and she started doing a lot better on that. I do want some struggle, even if it is a little bit.

And no, she didn't learn it for the sake of warfare, she learned it because she wanted too and is one of her hobbies. Agatha was able to combined both her favorite things that she is passionate about into something that is quite deadly. One of the other things she did learn for warfare is a sword, but it is really incase she ends in a close combat fight (which is more on Magnus' fighting style than hers).

Also I feel like Magnus and Agatha would train together! Its cute tbh they do it often to be genuinely be more prepared in case anything bad happened (they have a serious case of starnoia) or for fun lol

For the type of bow that she should use I'm SUPER mixed on. I've been learning and researching a bit on weaponry especially on bows and arrows, so I'm not super knowledgeable on what bow + arrows would accurately fit her design at the moment or what type it should be appropriate for. If someone randomly on here has suggestions on what type of bow she should have, let me know :D

I just know how most of them should be shaped 💔

^ btw this is a horse bow which is genuinely used more for fast reloading. There is a variety of different shapes, some that work differently than the one I showed above, I just wanted to show a example of a bow for an idea.

Extra

Thats all my main reasons for why I changed her outfit.

Though I how I came up with it was honestly really fast. It was like I knew what I wanted to fix and did it ykyk

Anyways-

These were my original sketches of her new design. I went with a combo of the first and 2nd one since the cape was there for like potions, but then I thought it would just be better for a utility belt for her potions instead of a cloak for it.

The utility belt will be for occasions for when she is in a battle. She doesn't wear it often, though her reg belt has attachments for her stuff in case she needs it.

And as I said before I wanted the outfit to have more patterns and have a better shape, and I think this design does better capture how I wanted her to look ✨️

Character Sheet

Here's her Character Ref for anyone who wants to draw her :D

also one of my friends said that she reminded them of Artemis from Greek Mythology, and lowkey that fits her too well soo yeah✨

Hairstyles

I wanted to do this for Asha in her character sheet but I'll add that later for her.

Just know that Agatha and Asha does have multiple hairstyles that would vary on what they are doing or as character development.

I had said in her original character design sheet that in the past she always put her hair in a braid to show how put together she is as her hair not being in a braid shows her how not well she is doing mentally.

This is still somewhat cannon, just that it is slightly different. It's just was more in a tight ponytail instead of a braid for her past self since thats how she always styled it in war.

Between Agatha's current self and her past self, I would say that her hair back then was put up nice and tight, as her current self keeps it more loose.

Agatha would put her hair up though, but for special occasions:

Making potions

Going out in public

Gathering materials

Hunting a certain...someone

Just saying that her hair really depends on the situation, it's just more loose than how it was back then.

Updated lore

Not much was very updated from my old ref sheet on Agatha, just some added things.

Agatha saved Magnus from the incident (given how he got his scar on his face, it's safe to say that he was knocked out afterwards so that's nice 😀)

She did indeed go to War (probably had said it a lot but I just wanted to confirm it)

She is from Greece ✨️

Agatha sometimes has to hide animals from Asha that she needs for potion making since Asha will free them (annoyingly)

She self taught herself alchemy (said it in my anniversary post, but wanted it here too)

Certified Star and heretic hater 👹

Around 6'0 tall (always has been taller than Magnus lmao)

^incident Agatha and Magnus

Thats all I can say without spoiling more. There is definitely a lot more negatives, but that is just VERY spoilery.

if you want to read more on her lore, heres what you can read on my old ref sheet here.

Anyways uhhh yeah.

Concluding Thoughts

I don't really have anything else to add lol

uhhh anyways yeah thats her new design, hope you guys like it as much as I do 😀👍

Btw Magnus and Agatha don't hate each other or anything, they love each other passionately if you're curious to know on how their dyamic is presented in my au.

And Asha can confirm it, she lives with them 💀

(I think my post on Game Night really hammers it home...)

(Ooo spooky glimpse of Magnus' updated design crazyy)

Uhm yeah

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