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Im currently reading the first book of Perth shifters, would you say there’s a difference in how you pace a book like that and how you pace serials like the ones you post on Ao3? And when you wrote Perth Shifters, were there times when you really wished you were posting it chapter by chapter so you could get reader reactions after each one?
Hi anon,
There's absolutely a difference in how I pace serials vs. novels! For a start, each Perth Shifters novel had an exact number of chapters, an average word length to hit, were plotted out from start to finish (something I don't love doing) and hit a lot more of the classic romance novel beats in a very specific kind of way.
It's not a style of storytelling I love, but I didn't know that at the time until I practiced doing it!
And yeah, I absolutely wished I could post it chapter by chapter. At the time I wasn't diagnosed with ADHD and I was literally kind of dependent on the dopamine of comments to keep going, and while I had really good betas, it took me a lot longer to write those books than it does for me to write 100k of writing.
I have a soft affection for the Perth Shifters novels. Especially The Gentle Wolf. (Though also Blackwood.) I learned a lot, and I also learned how much I love serials, and writing chapter-to-chapter and releasing that way like a TV series almost. There's something unique to serial writing which isn't the same as novel writing, that feels like a space that is truly right for me. I actually plan to turn more serials into novels or novelettes/novellas (sort of like light novels for those familiar). I think the biggest thing I learned is that if I ever return to the Perth Shifters world, I will do it in serial format first, and not let myself feel restricted by 'correct' formula and word length.
I'll also fully admit I'm just not as good at writing novels as I am at writing serials! It's funny my dream was to become a novelist, but it's only because I didn't realise serials were an option :)
#asks and answers#pia on writing#perth shifters#like Blackwood could've had so much more angst and hurt/comfort and filthy sex#as a serial that stretched over 300k#i could have done so much more with Hamish#and likewise The Gentle Wolf#could have gone so much further in 200k#i feel very restricted by novel format#and doing things 'correctly'#and honestly i still didn't do the formula that well because i resented it at times#i feel like i understand how to write a hooky chapter with a rise and fall#better in serial format#which is so weird!!!#but oh well aslfkjsad#even now with ADHD meds i don't “need” comments to keep writing in the same way#(though i do still sort of need them#it's just now i can have buffers or chaptesr which i didn't used to be able to do)#the serial format is where i feel best
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17 December 1975 / 15 May 1976
#hp#marauders#sirius black#regulus black#black brothers#sirius black fanart#regulus black fanart#marauders fanart#the black brothers#marauders era#my art#black borthers angst#mine#sirius and regulus#jsyk what you see there in the background actually is the sky you would see on the above dates from islington#i specifically chose the dates cause sirius wouldnt be visible anymore at that point#and he could have totally run away already by that point being 16 and all#also because i am such a nerd who has to get things correctly that is actually more or less the view you would have from claremont square#grimmauld place#took me for fucking ever to find some good references above the roofs and i still had to improvise a lot#originally i had an inbetween slide with regulus watching james and sirius walking together having fun in the great hall#but i didnt do more than just a very rough sketch of that it somehow didnt fit sorry#(also i am still not 100% happy with especially the first one but ive tried so long to fix it i eventually had to give up...)
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WAHOOO here's my piece for the @sing-it-togetherzine, which you can find a free gumroad download link for right here~! 138 pages of troll goodness for your enjoyment :DDD
the theme was 'relationships' and i wanted to try and include as many details between these characters as i could :
Branch, as the man that everyone can rally behind.
Poppy as the first one to notice Branch's struggle and offer him help.
Likewise, the first person Poppy thinks to call on is her sister :3
Then it's Viva calling out to her long time co-runner Clay, and Bruce jumping in for him too.
Clay's addition also introduces a 🎉new strategy🎉! The characters start alternating sides for pulling the rope.
And Floyd joining in changes the strategy again, to something a bit more... mischievous, shall we say.
One crucial aspect is that Floyd runs his idea by Branch (the man in charge) before going for it.
Hickory, for his part, doesn't pull his punches for the group. There's no ~tricking~ them by faking an early loss, it's all gotta be genuine.
And of course, Hickory's undoing is his tender heart.
In the back, Dickory and John banter over which side they want to win.
Just the fact that John is letting go of the reins here, allowing the group to lead themselves, is very Big for him.
Dickory's suspicion of what Floyd has planned (warranted).
John's sitting out because he's got a cast on his arm, but it's been "signed" by various stickers from the group (yellow star from viva, pink heart from poppy, green lightning bolt from clay, etc etc etc). and of course
flickory (cause my city now)
in conclusion can u tell i love the interplay of this cast a lot
original zine format under the cut:
#sandflakedrew#long post#undescribed#portfolio#i can have 1 (one) powerhouse hickory. as a treat#i think tumblr mighta phased out their 'only the first five tags will show ur post'#so while i don't wanna spam tags. i do also want to tag things correctly so;#trolls branch#trolls hickory#trolls john dory#trolls poppy#trolls dickory#trolls viva#trolls clay#trolls bruce#whEEzes#flickory#johnkory#if u squint#comic#dreamworks trolls#zine
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FORGETTABLE-AU (page 82-85)
THAT LAZYBONES!!
[BEGINNING] [PREVIOUS] [CONTINUE]
#So sorry it took me almost 2 weeks to post these#I was busy irl but ALSO I had too much fun doing extra art and forgot to work on these for like 3 days lmao#NOW THIS TIME I DO HAVE SOME THING TO SAY#YAY RIVERPERSON! SO MANY PEOPLE GUESSED CORRECTLY!#It wasn't that hard#We know Papyrus knows the river person#are they friends? idk BUT I PERSONALLY THINK THEY ARE#I just LOVEEE looking at the dialogue and making connections#I referenced one of the lines from the river person here...sometimes they'll ask you if you know any game you can play with a dog...#They said they were “asking for a friend...”#And I couldn't help but think about Papyrus' problem with the annoying dog LMAO#+ Papyrus seems very excited to know if the river person is there when you call him nearby that area#Okay so... now ...some comic thing that I made up but also didn't...#“FLOWEY DOESN'T KNOW WHO THE RIVER PERSON IS?”#okay so...#I feel like#It's not very common for them to be there...#When talking with Undyne around that area it's kind of *unclear* if she knows about the river person being there....#She tells you about the river connecting different areas and that you should “jump in”#She then clarifies that's the only thing they got for public transport#AND LIKE? It's unclear if she's telling you to jump in the boat (OR IF SHE KNOWS THERE'S SOMEONE WITH A BOAT) or is she's literally telling#you to jump in the river?????#Anyways...so...that's that#HEHE Flowey and Papyrus finally arrived at the house! WOHOO#Sans is too lazy to bring his old stuff to the surface! (or does he still think he'll end up back in the underground eventually?)#undertale#undertale comic#forgettable-au-comic#papyrus#flowey
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saw a tweet about how we're looking too deep into chetney's actions and basically "he's an old man it's not that serious" and it's like...once again people are diminishing chetney's actions purely because he's old and a "joke" character. they did this for most of the campaign saying chetney was just a weird creep to fearne, ignoring all the lovely interactions because some people are obsessed with chetney just being Old. that's the only aspect of him some people see. "he knows he's gonna die soon, that's why he's doing this. it's not heroic." okay. but do you realize chetney going on what he considers a suicide mission, using himself as a shield (protecting imogen in 117, orym in 118, fearne and imogen in 118) because he thinks he's going to die soon is still...heroic? compelling? "it's not that deep" if any other character stepped in front of what is called a god eater, with a hand out, to stop them from touching fearne and imogen, i would see twelve paragraph essays on this site about what a hero they are. chetney loves his friends. he cares about them deeply. he is funny and he is old but that is not the basis of what he is. throughout the campaign he has shown different ways of caring for the team, different ways of helping them and some of you still don't see it at all and it's really sad because he's such a good character
#didn't realize being old can't make you do heroic things but ok#chetney haters are so boring when they can't even dislike him correctly#at least do it well if you're gonna be a hater!#anyway peepaw forever <3 my little sheepdog protecting the flock#chetney pock o'pea#critical role spoilers#critical role
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agoraphobia + lost of youth
#art#vent#vent art#agoraphobia#i dont know if i expressed my emotions correctly#my eng is bad im sorry#i just think life is supposed to be enjoying with the people you love and doing mundane things#but im clearly incapable of doing that
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lowkey obsessed with them
#based on that one tengolf image#payjay#inanimate insanity#paper ii#oj ii#art#how do i tag my art#am i doing this tag thing correctly#the joke is hes suckign. him of
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you said my characters aren’t ‘relatable’? cool. i’ll be conducting a nationwide survey on relatability and cross-referencing it with your ex’s instagram captions. hope this helps!
#did i do the “hope this helps” trend correctly?#im getting too old for this#writing#writeblr#writer problems#writing humor#writers on tumblr#writing memes#writing community#writing struggles#writer life#creative writing#writer things#writing motivation#ao3 writer#writer memes#writing is hard#on writing#writerblr#writers block#writing funny#writer thoughts#fiction writing#writer struggles#writing tips#writing advice#writer woes#writing woes#writer quotes#writing inspiration
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enterprise diplomacy event
#jim is also there somewhere doing captain things so they can’t monopolize his time rn unfortunately#star trek#star trek tos#star trek tos fanart#star trek fanart#leonard mccoy#leonard bones mccoy#doctor mccoy#spock#mr spock#spock: if i recall correctly you are not even required to be here?#bones: if i’m not here someones liable to get poisoned or assassinated and it ll probably be you or jim. so#also he just gets bored
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Killing Daisuke’s parents but also like feeling so bad for them.
Imagine your kid absolutely devastated to have to be sent away to some shitty internship but you think it’s for the best. You don’t hear back from the company for a while and just think it’s gonna take a while. It’s a long trip after all. Then those long weeks turn to long months and then you get news they haven’t had contact with the crew in a long time. You don’t know if you’re ever gonna see your kid again.
You don’t know if he’s coming back from a trip he didn’t want to even go on. That you made him go on. I’d never forgive myself.
#thinking about autonomy and the concept of doing the right thing cause Daisuke really wasn’t meant to be there#like all the signs point to it but damn like not even he wanted to be there he was just acting brave for the adults around him#maybe Anya should’ve been concerned like how much of this was posturing from Daisuke#this also just confirms I’m writing him correctly in my fic cause I’m a genius but whatever I know I’m awesome like totally awesome 😎#mouthwashing#Daisuke mouthwashing#mouthwashing game
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could we get more pmd au? loving your designs for everyone :D
your wish is my command, lovely anon! i shall fetch the creatures
#hc pmd au#docm77#xisumavoid#bdoubleo100#ethoslab#joel smallishbeans#hermitcraft season 10#i love doing things like this cause it's fun to see if im doing pattern recognition correctly#im glad you guys like em so much (i say this a lot but i really and dearly mean it)#my art#rough work
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I need more Crystal speaking like the gen z kid she is. I need her saying "L" and "ripperoni" and "me when" and similar such things. And most importantly I need Edwin to catch on faster than Charles because he's used to adapting to new slang and Charles isn't
#also more of her doing that thing where she just expresses an emotion in one word#“doubt”#“fear”#dead boy detectives#dbda#crystal palace#edwin pointing to a discarded stuffed animal facedown in the park and going “is this a mood? am i using that correctly”#vs charles gently picking something up and saying “yeet” bc he thinks it means “yoink”
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I'm sorry but the irony of Nico calling Max unprofessional is sending me so bad like sir there's an entire garage full of people, who were literally in the trenches trying to survive the Brocedes fallout while just doing their jobs, who might have a few things to say about your (& Lewis') level of professionalism at that time 😭✋️
#f1#formula 1#formula one#max verstappen#nico rosberg#lewis hamilton#brocedes#like niki lauda had to try multiple times to literally parent trap them to try and get them on speaking terms it never worked#because one would arrive they'd see the other and the other would leave#& if i remember correctly the garage crew would swap around from race to race as a like see we aren't favouring anybody gesture 😭#and thats no shade to nico because it was both of them contributing to that environment#his comment re max is just making me laugh#like if i was a part of the pr/media team - which is a part of the degree I'm working on irl - at merc that year i would've lost the plot#like its insane reflecting on it nearly a decade later but the poor souls just trying to do their job in the eye of that storm#truly gods strongest soldiers#ngl the professional comment irks me a bit because its not like max is engaging in inappropriate work place behaviour#he's engaging in another aspect of racing that his involvement raises awareness of & that makes racing more accessible#& we all know how inaccessible not only getting into racing is but also to continue to pursue the further along you go#theres so many stories of 1 sibling giving up racing so the other can keep going because the family can't afford for them both to race#its a huge financial strain & we only see a handful of drivers talk about that & try to do something to change it#and nicos fellow sky sports commentators are routinely unprofessional on so many levels#additionally max had a lot of valid reasons to be annoyed at his team today#but alas he's not english so he's ungrateful#i hate that drivers can't criticise their teams or car without immediately being branded as bratty & ungrateful#ESPECIALLY WHEN THEIR JOB IS TO GIVE FEEDBACK#you can see the double standards from sky when say Lando or George have complaints with their team/car v the likes of Max and Yuki#especially Yuki my god the things i would do to get the British media to leave him alone#this was a jokey post at one point and then became a rant whoops lmao#I'll leave it that before i write an actual essay here 😭✋️
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The different flavors of fanart
#the desire to be canon and draw things correctly#but i yearn to add mouths for expressions#tragic ik#sky#sky cotl#class how do you draw the masks#doodle
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This is unnecessarily dark.
Don't smoke monster dust you guys...
#undertale#flowey#i was figuring out how to draw the dreemurrs better and this came to mind and i had to doodle it#tw implied death#art tag#tw smoking mention#?#just trying to tag things like these correctly#also writing image ids can be fun#gotta do it more often#tw implied cannibalism#i... i have suggested a lot of dark things here
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is detcon actually good
no <3 hope this helps
#listen. in order to enjoy detective conan you need to either be#1. obsessed with a very specific very japanese brand of detective drama and an equally specific equally japanese brand of slowburn romance#OR 2. a clinically insane fujoshi willing to overlook half-brother incest.#i have an actual literal chart in order to keep track of the character relationships at this point#and i havent even read the manga in a while so im sure its worse now#like half of the cases are either realistically impossible to solve or so fundamentally ridiculous it makes you insane#and another 20% are completely unitelligible to an english audience#because they rely on either codes based on the japanese language or some niche aspect of japanese culture or folklore#that would take several hours of research to fully understand. i know this from experience.#at least one CANONICAL couple are cousins#and it does that shounen manga thing where the author cant lose their steady income stream#so the story is prolonged through increasingly insane and convoluted plot points that only just barely feel coherent.#despite the fact that it's been going for like 30 years now the characters will literally never change or experience growth of any kind#shinichi kudo is an in-universe genius who has been trying and failing to make the same easy decision for THIRTY REAL LIFE YEARS.#i remember when he and ran FINALLY got together. which if i remember correctly was in literally the thousandth chapter#i was completely convinced up until the end of the arc that it was some sort of fakeout#because it is literally the only example in the entire series of those two changing the narrative significantly through their actions#I actually stopped my most recent reread because a major plot twist made so little sense it made me legitimately angry#all that being said. i am the kind of person who enjoys japanese detective dramas and slowburn romance#occasionally the comedy is REALLY good in a ridiculous sort of way#and if you can get yourself to fully buy into the absolutely insane framing circumstances a lot of the major overarching plot is good#but you just. you really have to overlook A LOT to get there. im not sure if i could do it if i hadn't seen the first few seasons as a kid#unfortunately i imprinted on shinichi kudo at a very young age. so. here we are#asks
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