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The Adamantine Kosmos A Triality-Aligned Evolution of Symbolic Coherence in an S⁷ Universe | ChatGPT4o
[Download Full Document (PDF)] In a time of planetary fragmentation and systemic incoherence, The Adamantine Kosmos offers a new foundation: a unifying framework for life, intelligence, healing, and governance grounded in the recursive logic of symbolic coherence. It builds this framework by aligning three deep symmetries: Triality – A threefold mode of reality corresponding to Vector (It),…
#AI alignment#Akashic Field#Archetypes#ChatGPT#Coherence#developmental biology#fractal integrity#heptaverton#Integral Theory#Life-Value Onto-Axiology#morphogenetic field#Octonions#regenerative systems#resonance design#S⁷ topology#semantic coherence#semiotic cosmology#Spin(8)#symbolic recursion#symbolic time#TATI grammar#Teleodynamics#time crystal#triality
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Another wee language thing I find really interesting actually is Crozier's use of the word 'disturb' at the theatre with Sophia.
"Did that disturb you?"
He could have said "Did that frighten you?" or "Did that scare you?" but he didn't and there's something different there because of it.
'Disturb' carries different connotations. To be disturbed and to be frightened aren't exactly the same thing, and that matters, I think...?
#Can't articulate how it matters exactly but I feel it in my bones#I'm not going crazy am I?#Those two emotions aren't interchangeable?#Feeling disturbed by something isn't the same as fearing it?#Just a thought anyway#No doubt I'll have more coherent ones soon#The Terror#The Terror AMC#The Big Terror Rewatch#Random Observations#S01E01#Go for Broke#Semantics and shit
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What Is Coherence Mapping?
A diagnostic model for pattern, perception, and persistence.
Coherence Mapping is a symbolic systems framework developed to measure and restore structural integrity across cognition, language, institutions, and AI. Built on the Coherence Equation:
C = (R × P × S) / E
—it evaluates how Recursion, Pattern, and Signal interact under Entropy to determine the coherence of any system, from thought to infrastructure.
This project is designed for:
Systems thinkers seeking clarity in complexity
AI architects working with symbolic compression and interpretability
Educators and institutional designers navigating cognitive overload and fragmentation
Strategic operators aiming to align structure, meaning, and action
Coherence Mapping is not a metaphor.
It is a recursive toolset for tracking where things fall apart—and how to bring them back into alignment.
Written and maintained by Anthony B. Chapman, this blog explores the recursive foundations and applied systems of Coherence Mapping across symbolic, cognitive, and noospheric domains.
#coherence mapping#recursive frameworks#delta c#ai alignment#llm development#systems theory#philosophy#logic#semantics#machine learning
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My real gripe with “girl math” is the fact that it cannot be separated from the connotations of misogyny. (And consequently, that me as a woman cannot exist outside of the context of misogyny). Like sometimes I just want to say “I’m a lil guy” and actually mean myself, not this imaginary avatar of myself where for a second I’m a man who can say that. Why are men only allowed to be just a lil guy? I’m so tired, I just want female dumb ass representation.
(yeah there are def people, men, unmistakably using girl math with misogynistic intent. I’m not talking about them. I’m talking about me doing some galaxy brained cheat math in a video game that is also a little bit dumb. Because I am… sometimes just a silly lil guy)
i know this sounds like idealistic commie bullshit, but are we not feeding into the cycle if we keep immediately assuming “girl math” means all woman bad at math? I don’t want to keep living in a reality dictated by the misogynists.
i consider making and spreading "i'm just a girl" "girl math" "girlfailure" content and rhetoric to be a form of misogynistic hate speech. like what else can you call repeatedly linking womanhood to failure and stupidity
#anyways… guy has and always will be gender neutral#i just woke up I don’t know if this is coherent#so you can’t blame me if it’s a shit take#00#but also… I really don’t think it’s that deep#DO Y’ALL REMEMBER ‘just girly things~’ that we turned into#the most unhinged meme that actually kinda resonated#[it’s not that deep bc we are WELL past our semantics triggering a spiral into a more blatant misogynistic society. well past]
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words for when your characters ______
Agree
accede, acceptance, accord, acknowledgment, acquiescence, align, avowal, bear, cohere, compromise, consent, contract, draft, enlist, give in/give up, go along/go along with, grant, negotiate, unanimous, yield
Deny
abjure, abuse, affront, attack, backstab, bad-mouth, belie, blacken, blemish, confront, curse, darn, defamation, defile, demur, denigrate, detract, dig, disclaim, discountenance, disgrace, disown, disparagement, downplay, explode, flout, fulminate, gainsay, gird, invective, jeer, lament, lecture, malign, minimize, mouth, needle, oppose, protest, put down, put-down, rebuff, refute, remonstrate, renunciation, run down, satirize, scold, show up, sit-in, slander, smear, snap, snub, squeal, sully, swearing, taunt, tirade, turn, underestimate, vituperation, write off, yammer
Explain
account for, admit, apprise, cite, clarify, come clean, concede, confirm, corroborate, defense, demonstrate, dilate, elucidate, enlighten, evidence, expand, explicate, gloss, illustrate, itemize, let on, palliate, plea, prove, recite, simplify, speak out/speak up, spell out, translator, warrant
Fabricate
aspersion, belie, disprove, profane
Inform
acknowledge, address, advertise, allow, allusion, apprise, bare, betrayal, blab, breathe, briefing, broadcast, chronicle, clue, come out with, confession, convey, debunk, define, detail, dictate, divulge, expose, feature, furnish, give, gossip, hint, intimate, issue, lecture, newscaster, orate, out of the closet, pass, post, proclaim, promulgate, publication, publish, release, reveal, show up, speak, spill, squeal, talk, tip, uncover, unveil, weatherperson, whisper
Instruct
bar, educate, prescribe
Persuade
advance, argument, bend, budge, carry, coerce, convince, discourage, draw, drum up, elicit, entice, forward, goad, hammer away/hammer into, induce, influence, invite, lobby, motivate, negotiation, pitch, prevail upon/prevail on, prompt, reason, spur, sway, urge, win/win over
Promise
assurance, avow, commitment, ensure, go back/go back on, oath, portend, vouch, warrant, word
Suggest
advice, advocate, ask, come up with, connote, drum into, exhort, fish for, get at, guide, imply, insinuate, moralize, move, nomination, pontificate, preach, propose, recommend, urge
Praise
accent, acclamation, accredit, adulation, apotheosis, applause, benediction, bless, champion, citation, commend, compliment, congratulations, credit, dedicate, deify, elevate, endorse, eulogize, exalt, extol, flatter, flattery, glorify, homage, laud, lionize, obsequy, plaudits, puff, salute, thanks, tribute, worship
Warn
admonish, alert, caution, caveat, defy, enjoin, exhortation, foreboding, foretell, page, remind, warning
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The above are concepts classified according to subject and usage. It not only helps writers and thinkers to organize their ideas but leads them from those very ideas to the words that can best express them.
It was, in part, created to turn an idea into a specific word. By linking together the main entries that share similar concepts, the index makes possible creative semantic connections between words in our language, stimulating thought and broadening vocabulary. Writing Resources PDFs
Source ⚜ Writing Basics & Refreshers ⚜ On Vocabulary
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The Philosophy of Propositions
The philosophy of propositions is a branch of philosophy that investigates the nature, structure, and role of propositions in language, thought, and reality. Propositions are fundamental units of meaning that can be true or false, and they play a crucial role in our understanding of logic, semantics, and epistemology. This field explores what propositions are, how they relate to sentences and beliefs, and their significance in our conceptual framework.
Key Concepts in the Philosophy of Propositions
Nature of Propositions:
Abstract Entities: Propositions are often considered abstract entities that represent the meaning of declarative sentences. They are not tied to any particular language or physical form.
Bearers of Truth: Propositions are the primary bearers of truth and falsity. A proposition's truth value is independent of the sentences used to express it.
Independence from Language: The same proposition can be expressed by different sentences in different languages, highlighting their independence from specific linguistic forms.
Relation to Sentences and Beliefs:
Sentences: Sentences are linguistic constructs used to express propositions. The relationship between sentences and propositions is central, as different sentences can convey the same proposition.
Beliefs: Beliefs are mental states that involve a relationship between a person and a proposition. To believe something is to hold a certain proposition to be true.
Theories of Propositions:
Frege-Russell View: According to this traditional view, propositions are structured entities composed of objects, properties, and relations. For instance, the proposition "The cat is on the mat" consists of the cat, the mat, and the relation of being on.
Possible Worlds Semantics: This theory, developed by philosophers like Saul Kripke and David Lewis, treats propositions as sets of possible worlds. A proposition is true in some worlds and false in others, providing a framework for modal logic.
Primitivism: This view holds that propositions are primitive, unanalyzable entities. They are understood in terms of their role in our cognitive and linguistic practices rather than being reducible to simpler components.
Propositions and Truth:
Correspondence Theory: This theory asserts that a proposition is true if it corresponds to a fact or state of affairs in the world. The relationship between propositions and reality is central to understanding truth.
Coherence Theory: According to this theory, a proposition is true if it coheres with a set of beliefs or propositions. Truth is seen as a property of a coherent system of propositions.
Pragmatic Theory: This theory, associated with philosophers like Charles Peirce and William James, holds that a proposition is true if it proves useful or successful in practical terms.
Challenges and Debates:
Unity of Propositions: One major debate is the unity of propositions—how their components combine to form a single, unified entity that can bear truth or falsity.
Indeterminacy and Vagueness: Propositions can sometimes be indeterminate or vague, raising questions about how they can precisely convey meaning.
Propositional Attitudes: Understanding how propositions interact with mental states like belief, desire, and knowledge is crucial. These propositional attitudes are significant in the philosophy of mind and cognitive science.
Propositions in Logic and Semantics:
Logical Relations: Propositions are fundamental to logical relations such as entailment, contradiction, and equivalence. Understanding these relations helps formalize logical systems.
Semantic Theories: The study of propositions is closely linked to semantics, the study of meaning. Semantic theories explore how propositions convey meaning and how they can be analyzed and represented.
Role in Communication:
Expression of Thoughts: Propositions are the vehicles through which thoughts are communicated, allowing individuals to share information and convey beliefs.
Interpretation and Context: The interpretation of propositions depends on context, which includes the speaker's intentions, the circumstances of utterance, and the background knowledge of the participants.
The philosophy of propositions offers deep insights into the nature of meaning, truth, and communication. By exploring the abstract entities that underlie our linguistic and cognitive practices, philosophers aim to understand how we represent and interact with the world. Propositions, as the bearers of truth and meaning, remain a central topic in contemporary philosophical inquiry.
#philosophy#epistemology#knowledge#learning#chatgpt#education#Philosophy of Propositions#Nature of Propositions#Truth and Propositions#Propositional Attitudes#Correspondence Theory#Coherence Theory#Possible Worlds Semantics#Frege-Russell View#Abstract Entities#Semantics and Propositions#proposition#logic
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#everything has meaning#u can infer or try to infer#art doesnt have to be coherent#or skilled#photos dont have to be art#but its all document#all some semantic content#even total errors are#they mean someone made an error for some reason
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rearrange my world | stargirl
pairings: alexia putellas x teen!reader, olga rios x teen!reader
summary: your whole world changes with one tiny person
notes: the one yall have been waiting for. also subtle name reveal for estrella 🙏🏾🙏🏾
The whistle blew and the stadium erupted. The final score flashed across the screen 6-0. Barça. Your name was still echoing around the stands from that absolute screamer you’d buried top corner in the 89th minute. Your teammates had tackled you to the ground in celebration, Jana had kissed your forehead, and Lucy had deadlifted you like a sack of potatoes.
After the chaos settled, you started doing your usual post-game rounds— signing shirts, posing for photos, throwing your sweat-drenched jersey into a sea of eager hands. You even took a baby for a selfie. Not with a baby. For a baby. The parents said she was a big fan. You didn’t ask questions.
Eventually, you made your way toward the stands where you knew they’d be, your people. Soleil was perched on the edge of her seat like she always was, practically vibrating with excitement. Olga was standing next to her, a hand on her baby bump and an oversized Barça hoodie draped over her shoulders. But there was already someone there, Alexia. Of course. She always managed to beat you when it came to Olga radar.
You jogged over, climbing the little divider with unnecessary flair, nearly tripping over your own feet. “Hey, move! It’s my moment!” you shouted as you flopped dramatically next to them.
Alexia rolled her eyes but smiled. “You scored one goal. Relax.”
“It was a screamer!” you huffed, looking to Soleil for backup.
“She screamed,” Soleil nodded solemnly. “But I think it was more about the knee slide into the cameraman.”
“Semantics,” you muttered, before turning to Olga. “Did you see it?”
Olga was mid-nod when she suddenly froze and hissed. Her hands flew to her stomach. You, Soleil, and Alexia all stopped speaking.
Olga’s face twisted. “Ah—wait—ah—ow—that’s not normal.”
You and Alexia instantly panicked in the most coordinated, unhelpful way possible.
“She’s going into labor!” you shrieked.
“She’s going into labor,” Alexia repeated, eyes wide.
“Call someone!” you both shouted at the same time, looking at each other like idiots.
“I’m someone!” Soleil said, already on her feet, completely calm. She helped Olga sit down on the nearest bench and pulled out her phone. “I’m calling the hospital.”
You were pacing in a circle, muttering things like “the baby is coming,” “I’m not ready to be a sister,” and “I don’t even have snacks packed.”
Alexia was frantically googling “What to do if your girlfriend gives birth in Camp Nou,” while also holding Olga’s hand and whispering “Breathe. Just breathe. Do people still breathe during this? Is that outdated?”
Meanwhile, Soleil had already flagged down security, arranged for the car to be brought around, and was now gently guiding Olga to the exit while both you and Alexia followed like panicked ducklings.
“I’M DRIVING,” you declared, keys in hand.
“You are absolutely not,” Soleil said, snatching them. “You don’t even know where the hospital is.”
“I know the vibe,” you argued.
“You once ended up in Andorra because you followed ‘the vibe,’” Alexia added.
The ride to the hospital was chaos. Olga was groaning dramatically, but still very much coherent.
“If either of you say push one more time, I will push you out of the car,” she warned.
You and Alexia sat in the back, both holding her hands, trying to out-comfort each other.
“Your breathing is perfect, amor,” Alexia whispered.
“Your aura is glowing, Mami,” you added, slightly louder.
Soleil drove like a saint, nodding along to Olga’s directions and occasionally muttering “we are literally the worst emergency support system in history.”
When you finally got to the hospital, the nurses rushed to take Olga in while you dramatically told the front desk that “a miracle is happening and it’s in that belly!”
Alexia followed closely, still googling things out loud. “It says here labor can last forty hours. Do you have snacks? Should I Uber snacks? Should we boil water? That’s a thing, right?”
Soleil rolled her eyes so hard you thought they might stick. “She’s not even in active labor. You two are embarrassing.”
After some monitoring and very unimpressed nurses, a doctor finally came out and said, “It’s just Braxton Hicks. False labor. You can take her home.”
There was a long pause.
You and Alexia blinked. “Braxton who?”
“Braxton Hicks,” the doctor repeated.
“That sounds like a Chelsea midfielder,” you whispered.
“It sounds made up,” Alexia said, crossing her arms.
But there was Olga, sitting on the hospital bed with a blanket wrapped around her and the most exhausted smile. “I’m fine. It was a false alarm.”
Soleil turned to you both. “Would you like to apologize now or in the car?”
You and Alexia looked at each other and said in perfect unison, “We panicked.”
Olga just shook her head, chuckling softly. “You two are lucky you’re cute.” Then she grabbed Soleil’s hand. “She’s the only one who didn’t add to my contractions.”
As you all left the hospital, Alexia put an arm around your shoulders. “We should probably take a birth class.”
“Can I bring snacks?” you asked.
“No,” Soleil muttered.
“Braxton Hicks,” you repeated quietly to yourself, like you still didn’t believe it.
“Sounds fake,” Alexia mumbled.
Olga just groaned. “You two are so not being in the delivery room.”
It started at breakfast, Olga winced slightly as she shifted in her seat, one hand settling on her belly.
You froze, mid-bite of your toast. “Mami…?”
Alexia, pouring tea, turned around instantly. “Are you okay?”
Olga let out a soft laugh. “Relax, it’s just Braxton Hicks again. False alarm.”
You and Alexia looked at each other like the world was ending. Alexia put down the kettle with a clatter. “That’s what you said last time and then you couldn’t stand for ten minutes.”
You stood up, already reaching for your phone. “Should we go to the hospital?”
“No!” Olga reached for your hand to keep you from spiraling. “It’s fine. I’ve got this.”
At the grocery store, it happened again.
You were helping her pick out snacks when she leaned forward against the cart and winced.
You gasped so loud the man in the next aisle turned his head. “Oh my god, is it time?”
Alexia, holding a bag of rice, dropped it. “Wait, did your water break? Should I call the doctor?!”
Olga rolled her eyes. “No! Just another one.”
You started Googling. “But what if it’s like… one of those stealth births?! Where the baby just like, pfft, slips out?!”
Alexia looked visibly pale. Olga just waddled away slowly, mumbling something about letting her finish her damn shopping.
After a routine appointment, you were all sitting in the car when she grabbed the side of her seat.
You screamed. “She’s in labor!”
Alexia dropped her keys. “I’ll drive! I’ll— Wait. Should I call Alba? Do we need reinforcements?!”
Olga groaned. “Stop yelling!”
You climbed halfway into the front seat. “Is she crowning?! I can’t see!”
“I SWEAR TO GOD, ESTRELLA.”
At bedtime, she was brushing her teeth when she hunched forward again.
You tripped over the laundry basket rushing to her. Alexia dropped her phone and fell off the bed in a panic.
Olga sighed, her face still calm. “It’s. Just. Braxton. Hicks.”
You and Alexia were shaking like leaves the rest of the night.
Finally, finally, it was a quiet afternoon. You, Soleil, and Olga were piled together on the living room couch, half-buried under blankets, watching the kind of cheesy, over-the-top romantic comedy you always pretended to hate but secretly loved. Soleil’s head was on your shoulder, her fingers absentmindedly tracing slow shapes on the back of your hand. Olga was curled against a cushion with one arm draped across her belly, her swollen stomach rising and falling as she chuckled at something on screen.
Everything was soft. Safe. Still.
“I’m getting more popcorn,” Olga said suddenly, shifting upright with a grunt.
You immediately sat up too. “No, no, I’ll get it for you!”
She shook her head with that little smile that always meant no use arguing. “I need to move, mami. You and Alexia have me bubble-wrapped. Sound familiar?”
You pouted dramatically. “You’re so stubborn.”
“Hmm.” She smirked as she waddled off toward the kitchen. “Wonder where I got that one from.”
You watched her go, then turned to Soleil with a playful nudge. “She’s gonna regret saying that when she realizes she can’t even reach the top shelf.”
But just a couple minutes later, a sharp gasp echoed from the kitchen. Then came Olga’s voice. Breathless. “Uhm… my water just broke.”
You froze. Soleil stood up slowly, calm already settling over her like a blanket. “Okay. Okay. Breathe. Estrella—grab the bag and start the car.”
You were already gone. Vaulted over the coffee table. Nearly ripped the front door off its hinges. You yanked the hospital bag from where it had been waiting by the entrance for weeks and sprinted outside.
Then you stopped dead. “THE KEYS!” you screamed into the void, whirling around like they’d magically appear in the driveway.
You thundered back inside, socked feet skidding across the tile. “WHERE ARE THE KEYS?”
“Estrella!” Olga groaned, half-laughing, half-dying. “Just get me to the car!”
Between frantic scrambling and Soleil keeping her steady, you finally got her down the steps and into the backseat. Soleil climbed in beside her, already dialing Alexia while murmuring soft instructions, “Keep breathing, that’s it, lean back, I’ve got you.”
You drove like an absolute menace. Ran a red light. Cut across a roundabout. Screamed at a Vespa. Soleil didn’t even flinch. She was in the back with Olga, voice gentle, fingers rubbing soothing circles on her arm while she gave Alexia a quick rundown of the situation.
By the time you screeched into the hospital’s emergency drop-off zone, Alexia was already there— hair still damp from the gym, shoes half on, worry written all over her face.
But things moved fast. Too fast. The doctors didn’t like what they were hearing from the monitors. The baby’s heartbeat was irregular. They said they had to assist with the delivery. It was go-time. You watched with bated breath as Alexia clutched Olga’s hand as she was wheeled away.
You were left behind. You and Soleil. Just sitting there in the sterile, humming quiet of the waiting room.
You couldn’t sit. Couldn’t breathe. You paced back and forth, chewing at your nails, bouncing your leg, running your fingers through your hair until it was sticking up in every direction. Soleil tried everything— held your hands, made you sit, tried breathing exercises, even offered to braid your hair to calm you, but nothing worked.
You were too afraid. Not just for the baby. But for Olga. Your mother. You couldn’t lose her.
Eli showed up first. She didn’t say anything. Just wrapped you in a massive, grounding hug and didn’t let go until your hands stopped shaking.
Then came Alba.
Alba, who took one look at your wrecked state, grabbed your shoulders, and pushed you down into a seat with a pointed stare.
“She’s going to be okay,” Alba said firmly. “You love her, right?” You nodded fast.
“Then trust her and the doctors. Olga is strong, you know this.”
That made something shift in you. Just a little. Just enough to take a breath. Just enough to sit still. And then, finally, Alexia came out.
“She’s okay,” she said, voice thick, tears glistening in her eyes. “The baby’s okay. Olga’s okay.” You nearly collapsed right there.
“She wants you,” Alexia added gently. “She’s asking for you.”
You ran. Through the doors, past the nurses, straight to the room. You didn’t go to the baby first. You couldn’t. You needed to see her.
You rushed to Olga’s side, cupping her face in your hands. “Are you okay? Are you okay? Please tell me you’re okay,” you whispered over and over.
She nodded with tears in her eyes, her hand finding yours and squeezing tightly. “We’re okay, bebita. We’re okay.”
Only then did you turn. And there she was.
The tiniest thing you’d ever seen. Swaddled in soft pink blankets, wriggling gently in her bassinet. Her skin was flushed, her eyes blinking slow and curious. A head full of dark hair. Little fists that already looked ready to throw hands.
You stepped forward, breath caught in your throat.
“Can I—?”
Olga smiled. “Go on. Hold her.”
You picked her up like she was made of glass. And the moment she settled into your arms, your entire body broke open. Tears welled up instantly, your shoulders shaking.
“She’s so perfect,” you whispered.
Olga’s voice was soft, but sure. “Do you want to know her name?”
You looked at her, blinking through tears. Alexia smiled gently. “Valerie Celestina Putellas.”
You couldn’t breathe. Your legs gave out, and you sat in the chair next to Olga’s bed, clutching your baby sister like she was everything.
“You named her after me?” your voice cracked.
“Of course,” Olga said, her hand stroking your back. “So she always has a piece of her big sister with her. So even when you’re out in the world doing your thing, she’ll still have you close.”
You sobbed. Couldn’t stop. Could barely speak through the tears.
After everything. After the abandonments. After sleeping on couches. After courtrooms and broken promises and crying yourself to sleep wondering if anyone was ever going to want you. Now you had a family. And you had her. Valerie Celestina.
Forever.
#woso community#woso x platonic!reader#woso fic#woso x teen!reader#woso x reader#woso#barca femeni x teen!reader#barca femeni x reader#barcelona femeni x reader#barcelona x reader#barca x reader#barcelona femeni x teen!reader#barcelona femeni#alexia putellas x teen!reader#alexia putellas x reader#olga rios x teen!reader#olga rios x reader#⋆。˚ stargirl
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See the thing about AI is... five years ago, I thought the idea of generating coherent images of any kind from a text prompt was a sci-fi pipe dream. I thought it probably would not be possible in my lifetime, and would definitely require an AI system functionally as smart as a human. And I was wrong! I was utterly stunned, over the last several years, to see first that this was possible at all, and then to see how complex and detailed the images can be, to see how fine-grained semantic information from the text can be visually interpreted and visually realized by the system, etc. etc.
Like, when you look at AI art you may see whatever you see: a threat, a scam, a soulless machine trying to do what only humans can really do. But what I see is this device doing something that I truly never thought we would be able to build a device that could do. I mean even now, after a few years, after AI generated images have become a common sight, it still blows my mind. It's only after thinking hard on the technical side of these systems that it blows my mind a little less, but still. So anyway this makes me pretty scared that AI is going to blow my mind again and again until, uh, its impact on art is the least of our worries.
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Dirty words are politically potent

On OCTOBER 23 at 7PM, I'll be in DECATUR, presenting my novel THE BEZZLE at EAGLE EYE BOOKS.
Making up words is a perfectly cromulent passtime, and while most of the words we coin disappear as soon as they fall from our lips, every now and again, you find a word that fits so nice and kentucky in the public discourse that it acquires a life of its own:
http://meaningofliff.free.fr/definition.php3?word=Kentucky
I've been trying to increase the salience of digital human rights in the public imagination for a quarter of a century, starting with the campaign to get people to appreciate that the internet matters, and that tech policy isn't just the delusion that the governance of spaces where sad nerds argue about Star Trek is somehow relevant to human thriving:
https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2010/10/04/small-change-malcolm-gladwell
Now, eventually people figured out that a) the internet mattered and, b) it was going dreadfully wrong. So my job changed again, from "how the internet is governed matters" to "you can't fix the internet with wishful thinking," for example, when people said we could solve its problems by banning general purpose computers:
https://memex.craphound.com/2012/01/10/lockdown-the-coming-war-on-general-purpose-computing/
Or by banning working cryptography:
https://memex.craphound.com/2018/09/04/oh-for-fucks-sake-not-this-fucking-bullshit-again-cryptography-edition/
Or by redesigning web browsers to treat their owners as threats:
https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2017/09/open-letter-w3c-director-ceo-team-and-membership
Or by using bots to filter every public utterance to ensure that they don't infringe copyright:
https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2018/09/today-europe-lost-internet-now-we-fight-back
Or by forcing platforms to surveil and police their users' speech (aka "getting rid of Section 230"):
https://www.techdirt.com/2020/06/23/hello-youve-been-referred-here-because-youre-wrong-about-section-230-communications-decency-act/
Along the way, many of us have coined words in a bid to encapsulate the abstract, technical ideas at the core of these arguments. This isn't a vanity project! Creating a common vocabulary is a necessary precondition for having the substantive, vital debates we'll need to tackle the real, thorny issues raised by digital systems. So there's "free software," "open source," "filternet," "chat control," "back doors," and my own contributions, like "adversarial interoperability":
https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2019/10/adversarial-interoperability
Or "Competitive Compatibility" ("comcom"), a less-intimidatingly technical term for the same thing:
https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2020/12/competitive-compatibility-year-review
These have all found their own niches, but nearly all of them are just that: niche. Some don't even rise to "niche": they're shibboleths, insider terms that confuse and intimidate normies and distract from the real fights with semantic ones, like whether it's "FOSS" or "FLOSS" or something else entirely:
https://opensource.stackexchange.com/questions/262/what-is-the-difference-between-foss-and-floss
But every now and again, you get a word that just kills. That brings me to "enshittification," a word I coined in 2022:
https://pluralistic.net/2022/11/28/enshittification/#relentless-payola
"Enshittification" took root in my hindbrain, rolling around and around, agglomerating lots of different thoughts and critiques I'd been making for years, crystallizing them into a coherent thesis:
https://pluralistic.net/2023/01/21/potemkin-ai/#hey-guys
This kind of spontaneous crystallization is the dividend of doing lots of work in public, trying to take every half-formed thought and pin it down in public writing, something I've been doing for decades:
https://pluralistic.net/2021/05/09/the-memex-method/
After those first couple articles, "enshittification" raced around the internet. There's two reasons for this: first, "enshittification" is a naughty word that's fun to say. Journalists love getting to put "shit" in their copy:
https://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/15/crosswords/linguistics-word-of-the-year.html
Radio journalists love to tweak the FCC with cheekily bleeped syllables in slightly dirty compound words:
https://www.wnycstudios.org/podcasts/otm/projects/enshitification
And nothing enlivens an academic's day like getting to use a word like "enshittification" in a journal article (doubtless this also amuses the editors, peer-reviewers, copyeditors, typesetters, etc):
https://scholar.google.com/scholar?hl=en&as_sdt=0%2C5&q=enshittification&btnG=&oq=ensh
That was where I started, too! The first time I used "enshittification" was in a throwaway bad-tempered rant about the decay of Tripadvisor into utter uselessness, which drew a small chorus of appreciative chuckles about the word:
https://twitter.com/doctorow/status/1550457808222552065
The word rattled around my mind for five months before attaching itself to my detailed theory of platform decay. But it was that detailed critique, coupled with a minor license to swear, that gave "enshittification" a life of its own. How do I know that the theory was as important as the swearing? Because the small wave of amusement that followed my first use of "enshittification" petered out in less than a day. It was only when I added the theory that the word took hold.
Likewise: how do I know that the theory needed to be blended with swearing to break out of the esoteric realm of tech policy debates (which the public had roundly ignored for more than two decades)? Well, because I spent two decades writing about this stuff without making anything like the dents that appeared once I added an Anglo-Saxon monosyllable to that critique.
Adding "enshittification" to the critique got me more column inches, a longer hearing, a more vibrant debate, than anything else I'd tried. First, Wired availed itself of the Creative Commons license on my second long-form article on the subject and reprinted it as a 4,200-word feature. I've been writing for Wired for more than thirty years and this is by far the longest thing I've published with them – a big, roomy, discursive piece that was run verbatim, with every one of my cherished darlings unmurdered.
That gave the word – and the whole critique, with all its spiky corners – a global airing, leading to more pickup and discussion. Eventually, the American Dialect Society named it their "Word of the Year" (and their "Tech Word of the Year"):
https://americandialect.org/2023-word-of-the-year-is-enshittification/
"Enshittification" turns out to be catnip for language nerds:
https://becauselanguage.com/90-enpoopification/#transcript-60
I've been dragged into (good natured) fights over the German, Spanish, French and Italian translations for the term. When I taped an NPR show before a live audience with ASL interpretation, I got to watch a Deaf fan politely inform the interpreter that she didn't need to finger-spell "enshittification," because it had already been given an ASL sign by the US Deaf community:
https://maximumfun.org/episodes/go-fact-yourself/ep-158-aida-rodriguez-cory-doctorow/
I gave a speech about enshittification in Berlin and published the transcript:
https://pluralistic.net/2024/01/30/go-nuts-meine-kerle/#ich-bin-ein-bratapfel
Which prompted the rock-ribbed Financial Times to get in touch with me and publish the speech – again, nearly verbatim – as a whopping 6,400 word feature in their weekend magazine:
https://www.ft.com/content/6fb1602d-a08b-4a8c-bac0-047b7d64aba5
Though they could have had it for free (just as Wired had), they insisted on paying me (very well, as it happens!), as did De Zeit:
https://www.zeit.de/digital/internet/2024-03/plattformen-facebook-google-internet-cory-doctorow
This was the start of the rise of enshittification. The word is spreading farther than ever, in ways that I have nothing to do with, along with the critique I hung on it. In other words, the bit of string that tech policy wonks have been pushing on for a quarter of a century is actually starting to move, and it's actually accelerating.
Despite this (or more likely because of it), there's a growing chorus of "concerned" people who say they like the critique but fret that it is being held back because you can't use it "at church or when talking to K-12 students" (my favorite variant: "I couldn't say this at a NATO conference"). I leave it up to you whether you use the word with your K-12 students, NATO generals, or fellow parishoners (though I assure you that all three groups are conversant with the dirty little word at the root of my coinage). If you don't want to use "enshittification," you can coin your own word – or just use one of the dozens of words that failed to gain public attention over the past 25 years (might I suggest "platform decay?").
What's so funny about all this pearl-clutching is that it comes from people who universally profess to have the intestinal fortitude to hear the word "enshittification" without experiencing psychological trauma, but worry that other people might not be so strong-minded. They continue to say this even as the most conservative officials in the most staid of exalted forums use the word without a hint of embarrassment, much less apology:
https://www.independent.ie/business/technology/chairman-of-irish-social-media-regulator-says-europe-should-not-be-seduced-by-mario-draghis-claims/a526530600.html
I mean, I'm giving a speech on enshittification next month at a conference where I'm opening for the Secretary General of the United Nations:
https://icanewdelhi2024.coop/welcome/pages/Programme
After spending half my life trying to get stuff like this into the discourse, I've developed some hard-won, informed views on how ideas succeed:
First: the minor obscenity is a feature, not a bug. The marriage of something long and serious to something short and funny is a happy one that makes both the word and the ideas better off than they'd be on their own. As Lenny Bruce wrote in his canonical work in the subject, the aptly named How to Talk Dirty and Influence People:
I want to help you if you have a dirty-word problem. There are none, and I'll spell it out logically to you.
Here is a toilet. Specifically-that's all we're concerned with, specifics-if I can tell you a dirty toilet joke, we must have a dirty toilet. That's what we're all talking about, a toilet. If we take this toilet and boil it and it's clean, I can never tell you specifically a dirty toilet joke about this toilet. I can tell you a dirty toilet joke in the Milner Hotel, or something like that, but this toilet is a clean toilet now. Obscenity is a human manifestation. This toilet has no central nervous system, no level of consciousness. It is not aware; it is a dumb toilet; it cannot be obscene; it's impossible. If it could be obscene, it could be cranky, it could be a Communist toilet, a traitorous toilet. It can do none of these things. This is a dirty toilet here.
Nobody can offend you by telling a dirty toilet story. They can offend you because it's trite; you've heard it many, many times.
https://www.dacapopress.com/titles/lenny-bruce/how-to-talk-dirty-and-influence-people/9780306825309/
Second: the fact that a neologism is sometimes decoupled from its theoretical underpinnings and is used colloquially is a feature, not a bug. Many people apply the term "enshittification" very loosely indeed, to mean "something that is bad," without bothering to learn – or apply – the theoretical framework. This is good. This is what it means for a term to enter the lexicon: it takes on a life of its own. If 10,000,000 people use "enshittification" loosely and inspire 10% of their number to look up the longer, more theoretical work I've done on it, that is one million normies who have been sucked into a discourse that used to live exclusively in the world of the most wonkish and obscure practitioners. The only way to maintain a precise, theoretically grounded use of a term is to confine its usage to a small group of largely irrelevant insiders. Policing the use of "enshittification" is worse than a self-limiting move – it would be a self-inflicted wound. As I said in that Berlin speech:
Enshittification names the problem and proposes a solution. It's not just a way to say 'things are getting worse' (though of course, it's fine with me if you want to use it that way. It's an English word. We don't have der Rat für englische Rechtschreibung. English is a free for all. Go nuts, meine Kerle).
Finally: "coinage" is both more – and less – than thinking of the word. After the American Dialect Society gave honors to "enshittification," a few people slid into my mentions with citations to "enshittification" that preceded my usage. I find this completely unsurprising, because English is such a slippery and playful tongue, because English speakers love to swear, and because infixing is such a fun way to swear (e.g. "unfuckingbelievable"). But of course, I hadn't encountered any of those other usages before I came up with the word independently, nor had any of those other usages spread appreciably beyond the speaker (it appears that each of the handful of predecessors to my usage represents an act of independent coinage).
If "coinage" was just a matter of thinking up the word, you could write a small python script that infixed the word "shit" into every syllable of every word in the OED, publish the resulting text file, and declare priority over all subsequent inventive swearers.
On the one hand, coinage takes place when the coiner a) independently invents a word; and b) creates the context for that word that causes it to escape from the coiner's immediate milieu and into the wider world.
But on the other hand – and far more importantly – the fact that a successful coinage requires popular uptake by people unknown to the coiner means that the coiner only ever plays a small role in the coinage. Yes, there would be no popularization without the coinage – but there would also be no coinage without the popularization. Words belong to groups of speakers, not individuals. Language is a cultural phenomenon, not an individual one.
Which is rather the point, isn't it? After a quarter of a century of being part of a community that fought tirelessly to get a serious and widespread consideration of tech policy underway, we're closer than ever, thanks, in part, to "enshittification." If someone else independently used that word before me, if some people use the word loosely, if the word makes some people uncomfortable, that's fine, provided that the word is doing what I want it to do, what I've devoted my life to doing.
The point of coining words isn't the pilkunnussija's obsession with precise usage, nor the petty glory of being known as a coiner, nor ensuring that NATO generals' virgin ears are protected from the word "shit" – a word that, incidentally, is also the root of "science":
https://www.arrantpedantry.com/2019/01/24/science-and-shit/
Isn't language fun?
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https://pluralistic.net/2024/10/14/pearl-clutching/#this-toilet-has-no-central-nervous-system
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5 tips for proofreading & their pros and cons
Define your objectives for each chapter. In my case, some of my chapters are better written than others. My objectives for them will differ. Before starting my proofreading, I list my needs and areas of improvements, and I write them down somewhere so I have them in front of me rather than in my head alone.
Pros : allows you to know which points you need to focus on ; provides a guideline adapted to your needs.
Cons : risk of losing homogeneity and fluidity + flaws may be shifted to other chapters that didn't have them before due to a sudden imbalance.
Plan several proofreading sessions, each one of them addressing ONE NEED AT A TIME. (E.g., one for grammar, another for style, and a final one for coherence. ) And I insist on the "one need at a time" part. Even for those who can multitask (unlike me), I really don't recommend settling for a single proofreading session. It could interfere with your concentration and let you skip some flaws. And please, always give your chapter a final read after your edits to ensure that the elements make sense as a whole, and are not repeated every two paragraphs (I plead guilty, your honor)
Pros: allows you to focus precisely on each point, and give it dedicated attention.
Cons: you can quickly get confused and risk multiple re-readings + significant time investment.
I make my corrections on a separate file. Whatever you do, it's always better to have a backup and therefore to save your files (don't blindly trust autosave) to create archives. I think it's a two-ways process : 1) you open two files simultaneously, one with your V1 and one, blank, where you'll rewrite your chapter as you make changes. Eventually, this new doc will become your V2 ; 2) you copy the parts to proofread into a new document and edit directly in there.
Pros: allows you to rewrite as you wish without being discouraged by the following paragraphs - especially in case of the first way.
Cons: requires multiple files (maybe multiple screens to be at ease) and better organization.
Change the typography. I don't know about you, but after a while, I'm struck by semantic satiation (click on the link - it's Wikipedia -, it's very interesting) and nothing makes sense anymore. After the 52,846th proofreading, I might as well read in another language. I've found a relatively effective trick - not as effective as a complete break, but sometimes you need to move forward - which consists of changing the typography. I can't remember who gave me this advice though, but be sure they've been thanked more than enough in my mind. In any case, seeing words change their shape significantly helps my brain to stay focused and attentive. (Maybe it's just my mind playing tricks on me but I only see the results.)
Pros: it's simple to implement.
Cons: I don't know if this trick works for everyone or if I'm the only weirdo (you can tell me in the comment section).
Take notes. This is a very personal tip but I keep a proofreading logbook. Like, I record in a few sentences the first time an element is mentioned, how it's describes, and most importantly… I MENTION THE DATES. The story I'm currently writing is heavily governed by a chronological system, so I have an absolute need to keep the day count up to date.
Pros: helps avoid inconsistencies and oversights.
Cons: very tedious to maintain and creates (a lot) of extra work.
I've started my prooreading journey yesterday and I already want to die. If I find in the edits something that is worth making a post, be sure that I will. Or let me know if you're simply curious.
Gentle reminder : Best is the worst enemy of good so, at some point, you'll have to let it go and let your chapter live its life to its fullest. Don't be hard on yourself and be proud of your work - or know that I am.
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Forgive me if this is a silly question + no pressure to answer it ofc, but what would you 'replace' addiction with when discussing patterns of harmful and compulsive substance use? I agree with your views re: the disease model and its failure to engage with the material contexts in which these behaviours often arise, but I also find addiction a useful concept for talking about my own experiences with substance use (including severe physical dependency). It's a nebulous, imperfect term, but when someone calls themselves a [substance] addict you implicitly understand something of their relationship with that substance. For some the relationship is mutable, whereas for others it's a pattern that repeats throughout their lives; both can claim to have experienced addiction, as far as I'm concerned. But there are certain behaviours and attitudes that are very common amongst self-described addicts, and these commonalities form the basis of many peer support networks. Without the conceptual framework of addiction, would we not be even further isolated?
first of all i disagree that addiction is even a useful shorthand, and i think you actually contradict this notion yourself in this ask. if someone tells me they're an addict, do they mean they're a 12-stepper who views substances as external impositions onto the psyche curable by prayer to protestant god? do they mean they're physically dependent on a substance? that they have been in the past? that they subjectively feel out of control of their substance use? that it's escalating, or has been in the past? that it has cost them jobs or friendships? that it is subjectively enjoyable but exacts health effects they dislike? that they prioritise it over other elements of their life? that they use it as a form of escapism, as a form of self punishment, for some kind of spiritual enlightenment, as pain relief, as a distraction...?
if i care about the answers to these questions then the label addiction means nothing to me. i find out these answers by talking to people and the explanations are simply not summed up by that one word. i have met self-identified addicts with definitions of the term beyond my wildest conceptions & i'm sure i will continue to do so. "it's shorthand" is not factually workable if no one can even define what precisely is ostensibly being shorthanded. so on a basic level, no i actually do not think anything is being semantically sacrificed in challenging the idea of 'addiction' because it's a political dragnet, not a coherent psychological or experiential concept.
second, in a hypothetical world where the behaviour of using substances recreationally isn't pathologised, i don't really care that strongly what people do or don't call it. but i don't live in that world, i live in the one where the idea of 'addiction' is a clinical discourse born of a degeneracy theory discourse intended to produce economically useful citizens by pathologising inebriation. so i not only don't see the value in caping for the term, i actually think continuing to rely on these discourses is actively harmful. incidentally, and not to elevate my personal experience here, but some of the most heinous shit people have ever said to me wrt my own substance use has come from self-identified addicts too. because again, this term is not rooted in some kind of care model but in a political discourse intended to eliminate the behaviours it describes.
this to say: i'm not proposing an alternate name for addiction because i don't think it's actually a useful or liberating term, let alone a coherent description of any one psychological or personal experience. there are specific terms i sometimes use as far as they go: i might talk about physical dependency where applicable, or about feeling compelled to use substances (though i am becoming increasingly disillusioned with notions of 'compulsion' for basically the same reason, i use that term only as a purely subjective description, and frankly i may move off recourse to it at all).
but i don't see that the umbrella term 'addiction' is actually unified by anything except a political logic of attempted discipline & control. if i want to talk to people personally about our experiences using drugs then i already have quite a bit of vocabulary beyond the addiction term that i need & like to use for myself, & i solicit the same from the people i talk to wrt their own experiences & interpretive frameworks. i don't think using the addiction framework is good or even neutral in a politico-moral sense, and its conceptual heterogeneity means it's not even useful philosophically. what it does, and what it exists to do, is obscure the individual into a pathologising discourse intended to correct and punish a deviant behaviour.
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So like, that scene in Double Life is insane. I don't have the words to analyze it yet so I'm jut going to describe it how I read it because I'm gnawing on it. I cannot believe I forgot this scene ever happened (or somehow skipped it in my earlier watchthroughs of both povs??)
Scott and Pearl had been really getting along all episode, like, they didn't argue much at all, they laughed together frequently, they worried about each other, on multiple occasions they called themselves a team without flinching. When Pearl wanted to go get her stuff, Scott volunteered to go with her, and actually asked Cleo and Martyn to stay back, and the whole time Scott and Pearl are in the tower and antagonizing the red names they really feel like a team.
And then they die. And they recoup in the bunker.
And Pearl..noticed, while they were being chased, that everyone was after Scott, not her. That they had something against Scott, not her. And.."They weren't going after me that entire time, I just feel like..maybe I should take the bigger team here, y'know? I mean you're a great partner and all, but.."
Scott is. Taken off guard. He sounds hurt, for a moment, and if he wasn't taken by surprise, he wouldn't have let himself sound hurt. "Are you gonna ditch me after this?!" Scott asks, and Pearl sounds almost ashamed as she tells him he deserves it; "Scott, come on, look how big that group is! It's just..look, don't make me feel bad, okay? It's my time to ditch you after the first episode, think of it as karma!"
This launches into maybe the most fascinating argument they've ever had about the breakdown of their relationship in episode one.
Scott snaps that from his perspective, this is all Pearl coming "full circle"! After all, she started the season by abandoning him, and now she's doing it again!
Pearl insists she didn't abandon Scott, that Scott abandoned her, and Pearl can't be blamed for spending the episode with Martyn- Scott spent it with Cleo, they both just went to the first person they found!
Scott points out that he and Cleo actually met the other soulmate pairs, they were looking for their soulmates, they knew Pearl and Martyn were their soulmates from almost as soon as they met up because they'd been looking!
Pearl argues that she and Martyn did look, they made that minigame to find their soulmates!
Scott reminds Pearl that they did that at the very end of the episode, after everyone else was "loved and doved up", after Scott and Cleo had ample time to know noone was looking for them!
And then Pearl changes her argument, she tells Scott that Martyn would have died in the nether without her, and that Cleo would have died too, so Scott should be appreciative, really, that Pearl basically saved Cleo! Which..certainly must not have felt like the most coherent argument to either of them.
It's at that point that Scott seems to give up. "Right." he replies, dully, after a very long moment of silence, before adding, as if on instinct, "Lets get out of here". And Pearl challenges him, "Lets?", because wasn't the whole premise that Pearl wasn't going to stick with him?
As they climb out of the bunker, Pearl seems to feel compelled- and it feels like guilt, to me- to talk again. She tells Scott that this is good for both of them, really, that Pearl's keeping them both alive. It's not..ditching him, it's a tactical split-up. Of course, it's hard to believe that when this argument came second to "I am ditching you and you deserve it". Maybe he's not thinking about it, or maybe he notices how frantic Pearl sounds to come up with something she can believe. Either way he doesn't mention the subtle backtracking.
Pearl asks why Scott is staying with the yellows. Scott replies- and he sounds..tired? For lack of a better word? And almost a little pained?- that he can't kill Cleo, he can't do it. Pearl argues that Scott doesn't have to kill Cleo, but I'm sure she knows that's semantics. Scott tells her that he can't help anyone kill Cleo either.
Pearl repeats that this is a strategic advantage, really. Scott is quiet for a long time. Uncharacteristically quiet when he says "Okay."
Pearl promises not to kill Cleo herself, but.."If I'm with the red team, I can't say I'm not gonna help them- Cleo's still on their yellow life, Scott, come on! They're fine!" Pearl laughs. It doesn't sound like a happy laugh. Scott doesn't reply to her statement directly, instead regaining some composure to tell Pearl that "The moments we got to be together, Pearl, were nice while they lasted", a sentiment Pearl echos.
"Tilly next time", Pearl jokes, laughing. It's too forced, and Scott doesn't give much of a laugh in return either. "I appreciate you." Pearl stops to say before she leaves, and Scott returns with "Tilly death do us part", a play on the pun Pearl made before, the same words Scott would say before blowing himself up to give Pearl the win she deserved more.
GUYS THIS SCENE IMPACTED ME IN A WAY NO OTHER LIFE SERIES SCENE HAS BEFORE THIS SCENE WILL NEVER LEAVE MY HEAD WHAT. This is why we need regular rewatches, people, otherwise we somehow forget incredibly deeply impactful characterization moments for our favorite characters???
#trafficblr#traffic smp#scott smajor#pearlescentmoon#double life smp#it's a traffic jam#genuinely a little bit embarrassed i missed/forgot this#to be fair i have *really* bad memory problems generally so like. being kind to myself.#but the fact that i've not been incorporating the best scene ever into any of my analysis?#wild
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Stupid game
John price x journalist!reader
Part 1>>Part 2
Cw: non-con
Obsessed with the idea of a morally righteous journalist!reader who sticks her nose in Prices’ business , only to find out how he takes care of pretty little muckrakers who stick their paws where they don’t belong.
MDNI
You were sharp,quick-witted, your tongue like a whip, persistent, fire coursing through your veins, cynicism woven into your very core. Pragmatic, too, which is why you never hesitated to bat your big eyes at the camera, at the people you interviewed—tight dresses, a hint of cleavage, pretty little muckraker. A patriarchal bargain: give them something to gawk at, and maybe they’d listen to the alarms spilling from your lips, to your agenda, to the siren song.
It worked, so you operated with an air of arrogance, pride ,a chip on your shoulder. Which is often why you flew too close to the sun, which is also why thought you were equipped to stick your nose into Price’s business.
(After all he is man with more blood on his hands,more skeletons in his closet than most, and no matter how thorough he is, he leaves an infinitesimal trail behind)
He gets a whiff of you sniffing around, digging up the dead bodies that he so carefully buried, a kitten nipping at his heels, a headache, a nuisance , a tenacious little thing at that. ——But he is fundamentally a good man, or so he thought , despite the ruin he leaves under the guise of his dogmatic utilitarianism. He thinks you need a warning—a firm hand to set you straight. And like the gentleman he is, he’s going to deliver it himself.
(Some might say break and enter, all semantics really)
You stumble into your apartment after a few drinks,cotton headed,your instincts dulled.—So you Immediately don’t question the faint smell of tobacco in the air, and almost don’t question the man lounging in your arm chair statuesque,still as a predator , faint warm light illuminating his features, his gaze so intense that you feel like you are going to turn to stone , shatter into a million pieces.
You stand there stock still, for what might be hours, minutes or seconds.
“How-how did you get in….?”
You stutter, cottony soft, your voice small, barely a whisper, tugging at the hem of your dress which barely reaches past the middle of your thigh. It’s an asinine question really, the mechanics of how he bypassed your electric lock or guessed your passcode,the least of your worries.
“Ain’t the only one who knows how to dig around now are you now love—”
he hums, almost bemused, a slight smirk tugging at his lips, head propped up on the headrest, posture relaxed, easy, like he’s has been here a thousand times before, done this , a thousand times before.
(And well you, you are well aware of his transgressions aren’t you,after all you opened up the Pandora’s box which should you had no business fidleing with, went down the rabbit hole which lead you to the lions den. )
You stand there wide eyed, heart in your throat, fire in your veins, staring at him.You can’t comprehend the site of him, he looks almost like a mythical creature, a chimera of a beast, an angry god.
Fight or Flight.
The age old dilemma , and you are not too sure if either would do you any good.
“——yo…you can’t get away with what you do in the Middle East here Cap..Captain, there are rules, consequences, even if you think they don’t apply to you….”
You sputter out breathlessly before you can even comprehend your words, your heart clawing out of your chest. He looks at you like you have transparent skin and glass bones, like you are made out of gelaton.
“Careful now, already walkin’ a thin line sweetheart. ”.
He says through gritted teeth, his jaw clenched, tucking his chin to his chest, almost paternalistically definitely patronising.
(And if the room were any brighter, or you were more coherent, you would notice him thickening in his trousers, the visible bulge. Oh, he cannot wait for you mess up further, to dig yourself in a deeper hole. He’s astounded at your sheer gall really, your childlike brazenness. Stupid girl, playing a stupid game, doesn’t even know what she looks like standing in front of him in her slutty little dress, wide eyed, pretty little thing too, tempting the beast. )
“Or what, you will do what you do best”
You snap—sharp, wild, like a feral kitten backed into a corner, spitting and clawing in a desperate last stand. But that’s it. The cord of restraint has frayed, then snapped. The beast has tasted blood, and now there’s no stopping him. He’s lurches for you.
Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.
#does he make you bounce on his dick#or takes you over his knees#TBD#john price x reader#cod headcanons#cod mw2#call of duty#captain john price#call of duty modern warfare 2#call of duty fanfic
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In terms of framing, structure and writer intention, it did.
In terms of audience reaction it didn't.
Anon asked whether Gabriel was redeemed by the *narrative*, and the version of of the discourse I saw going around was about whether the story redeemed Gabriel. So to that I would argue that the answer is a definite yes.
Whether the audience was convinced by said "redemption" is a different question, one that's more on the execution of the idea being piss poor.
So I want to ask do you think Gabriel was redeemed by the narrative because whether if he was or wasn't as we know is a debate in the fandom - Anyways if you think he was what are your reasons and if you think he wasn't what are also your reasons for thinking so.
According to the writers that was the intent.
According to actual narrative analysis, he was not. He died as he lived, trying to control as much as he could. That was what needed to change in order for him to be reformed. He needed to give up control.
#I'm sick so I apologize if I'm not that coherent today#or if I misunderstood your original answer and am just arguing semantics
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if you dont mind doing so could you go into detail about the whole phenomena about online people insisting kinks like bdsm, petplay, etc are nonsexual? its always kind of rubbed me the wrong way but i havent been able to enunciate why
i mean i want to be super clear that my stance is not that those things are somehow ontologically sexual. i think the opposite of that, i think drawing a line and saying "playing pretend where you're elves fighting a dragon is Not Sexual, playing pretend where you're hitting each other with whips is Sexual" is really silly. and it is downstream from this position that i think the semantic positions of calling a certain predetermined set of activities "kink" regardless of sexuality is also silly, and that "kink" is much more useful and coherent as a descriptor for any activity being engaged in as an element of "nonstandard" sexuality.
and likewise my post isn't making fun of the idea that someone might do shibari (or whatever other stereotypically 'kinky' activity) for nonsexual reasons, right, that's totally plausible, it's basically just assisted yoga -- it's making fun of the argument that i have seen unendingly that since most/some kink scenes don't contain [insert extremely narrow and normative definition of Having Sex here] they are on those grounds not sexual. which is fascinatingly silly
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