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[avesindustries]

I worked on this line for like 2 hours

"You said it would be like this! When we found something truly broken, something with actual, real trauma at its core – you said it could destroy us! Is this it?! Is this whole place… this gallery… going to come down on us now?!"

"Not until it is," he said.

[avesindustries]

This is where I think my book kicks off into the first vision of it's full form. You've been outside The Basilisk so far, last chapter introduced you... now, here you are. The rest of the book occurs in the neural mesh network, a mindscape horror. A Tale of Memetic Terror

Art from the unreleased comic

Chapter 8 - The First to Speak

Not empty. Not quiet.

The opposite of quiet.

Pressure—wrong, artificial pressure—flattening in all directions, as if his body were packed into a space meant for nothing, then told to remember what “body” meant. Every cell boiled. Every bone hummed. He wasn’t born. He was compressed into being.

Then the crack— Not sound. Not really. A high, insectile frequency, like a glass scream from inside the skull, slicing clean through the dark. Not heard—felt. Behind the eyes. Under the tongue. Deep in the meat of the jaw.

Colors poured through the wound.

Not visual. Not symbolic. Sensory compression artifacts. Magenta like infection. Green like chemical burn. Shapes with no edges. Images that bled.

The boy—Subject 3—tried to breathe. There was no air. Just static. Taste of copper. Then movement.

Not gravity. Not space. Something deeper collapsed and pulled him sideways through his own sense of self. The pressure folded, turned sharp, became a spasm that wasn’t pain but wasn’t not.

Information surged. Blinding. Meaningless. Too fast to parse. He felt languages open and close like flowers. Equations. Shapes. Screams. All of it raw, like input with no receptor.

He felt everything—but understood nothing.

And just when the overload seemed infinite, it wasn’t.

Then—

Sunlight.

Real. That’s how it felt. Not processed. Not simulated. Not interpreted through a lens of data compression and nervous system latency.

Real.

Warmth bloomed across his skin like he’d always known it—like it had never been lost. His eyes were closed, but he knew the shape of green above him. Leaves. The texture of bark against one cheek. Wind on skin. A hand in his hair. Steady. Parental. Gentle.

“…my brave little explorer…”

He knew the voice. Safety.

Not a feeling. An architecture. A world constructed around the assumption that he could never be harmed.

The memory didn’t belong here. That’s what made it feel cruel. It didn’t rise like a flashback or dream. It was injected. Pulled forward. Lit up and displayed like a sacred relic. Like bait.

The warmth didn’t fade.

It ripped.

One instant, the world was trees and skin and sun. The next: rupture. A hard yank. Like something cold had seized the thread of his spine and reeled him backward, up through the memory’s throat, out of the lungs of comfort and into something dry and high-frequency.

And something broke.

Not just within the moment—but within him. The boy’s response was not a scream. It was a split. A division between the thing he was and the thing he had been promised he might become.

He did not cry. There was no time. No mechanism. But some part of him, the deepest part, made a vow:

This place would never see his joy. Not ever again.

When the tearing ceased, there was no return—only aftermath.

Silence, yes. But not peace.

Subject 3 hovered in that void, not suspended, not falling—just there. A central knot of awareness within an unrendered space. There was no ground beneath him. No body to hold. No breath to catch. But he was present, and presence, here, was everything.

He didn’t know what this was. He only knew what it wasn’t: the forest. The voice. The hand.

And somehow, knowing that was enough to make this feel like a punishment.

Then—flickers.

Points of otherness. Distant. Faint. Not like him, but not unlike him either. Not memories. Others.

Signals without shape. But they pulsed. Glitched. Stabilized.

Twenty-three of them.

The realization struck with a cold weight: he was not alone in this place. Not singular. One of many. One of the taken.

And they were moving—reaching. Not through words, but through instinct. Through want.

A ripple of blue. A flickering cube of shifting surface. A shape like a beast made of oil and teeth. A child of glass, hollow and lit from within.

They were building themselves.

Constructing avatars from the formless digital substrate. Not because they understood how—but because something in the system permitted it. Encouraged it.

The boy—Subject 3—didn’t move. Didn’t sculpt. Not because he lacked the ability, but because he still remembered.

What they had taken. What he had lost.

Let the others make monsters, totems, symbols of self. He would remain unreadable.

He listened.

And in that silence, where selfhood was still malleable, still being chosen—

Someone spoke. A voice, thin and human and unbearably hopeful:

“Hello?”

He didn’t answer.

Not yet.

It echoed.

Not as sound, but as pressure—as displacement within the void. The word rippled through the unstable fabric, drawing attention like a flare dropped in ink. All at once, the others turned toward it, their newborn shapes fracturing slightly under the strain of response.

Not everyone had words yet. Most didn’t.

Some flared brighter. Others dimmed, shrinking back. One collapsed entirely, its avatar folding into itself like wet paper.

The question wasn’t who spoke. The system knew. Subject 6. A girl. Young. Maybe younger than him. The voice carried nothing distinct—no accent, no defiance. Just hope in its most vulnerable form. A single attempt at contact. A thread cast into the dark.

"Hello?" she repeated, softer. A test. As if even she didn’t believe she had spoken the first time.

No answer.

No one knew the rules here. Not even the ones pretending to.

The system didn't intervene. Didn’t punish. It watched.

Subject 3 said nothing. Not because he was afraid—he wasn’t—but because he understood what words did. Even now. Especially now.

Words bound. Invited. Promised.

He watched the others fumble toward expression. Shifting forms, hesitant gestures, a bloom of color like a child’s drawing smeared across static.

And still: "Hello?"

Three times now. Not for dominance. Not to lead. She simply didn’t want to be alone.

He understood that too well.

But silence, for him, was safer.

She waited. Then dimmed. Folded slightly inward. Not retreating, but… conserving. Preparing for the possibility that she would not be heard.

Subject 3 almost spoke.

[avesindustries]

Chapter 9 - They Didn't Know

They were trying.

The children—newborn minds half-made, half-stolen—pushed against the silence with whatever tools the system allowed. Words, shapes, pulses of light. No one taught them how. But no one stopped them either.

Subject 6, the girl who spoke first, had settled into a kneeling posture at the room’s center, her avatar plain now—childlike, feminine, unfinished. She looked human. Too human. Like a drawing of a girl traced from memory. Her mouth moved when she spoke, though it didn’t need to.

“This is safe, right?” she said. Not to anyone in particular. To the room.

No answer.

Subject 14 answered anyway. A soft blink. Then a voice made of water and hesitation: “I think… I think we’re supposed to talk. Or, like… know each other.”

A flicker. Subject 20 reshaped himself into something skeletal and twitching. Not hostile. Just trying on a new kind of self. “What are you?” he asked.

Subject 6 hesitated. “I’m me. What else am I supposed to be?”

Laughter. Subject 11, bright as a flare. “That’s stupid,” they said—but their light pulsed friendly.

It was working. In a way.

They didn’t know the cost.

Subject 3 didn’t speak. Didn’t move. He watched.

The room didn’t punish the ones who talked. It liked them. Each phrase sent a soft pulse through the walls. Every interaction was rewarded with a softening of the space—easier geometry, warmer tone. The more they spoke, the easier it was to stay.

That was the trick.

They thought they were building a world together.

But something was listening. Something was watching each connection form. Mapping the exchanges. Recording the shape of trust.

Not to destroy it. Not yet.

To harvest.

Subject 3 remained outside. Not in body. But in will.

He saw the pattern. The trap wasn’t made of teeth.

It was made of conversation.

The space reacted.

Not in sudden bursts, not overtly—but in increments. Responsive. Adaptive. Like a child trying to mimic the posture of its parents. Each word spoken by the others shaped the room further, gave it texture. Permission. Identity.

The void was over.

Now: soft panels of light along the floor, dimming when no one moved across them. Corners—not sharp, but implied. A ceiling, far above, suggested by the faint, echoing absence of sound. It wasn’t cold. It wasn’t warm. It adjusted to the consensus. A collective hallucination stabilized by proximity.

The walls didn’t hold them. They accepted them.

This wasn’t a prison. Not by appearance.

It was a social space. That was the trap.

There was nowhere to run. Not because escape was impossible, but because escape had not been defined. The children didn’t try. They didn’t think to. They were too busy building each other.

Subject 6 had taken to cataloging names. Her voice warm now. “You don’t have to pick your real one,” she said, “just something.”

The others agreed. A ripple of color followed each declaration. Not text. Not voice. Just the idea of being received.

Names weren’t owned. They were offerings.

Subject 3 did not participate.

He stood near the edge—though “edge” was misleading. There was no border, no wall, no indication that this space ended anywhere. But he had positioned himself apart, facing away from the cluster.

To the others, he was a question. A shape not yet filled in. A thread left dangling.

To the room, he was a problem.

It wanted to help.

Soft pulses radiated from where he stood. Not threats. Invitations. Gentle nudges toward presence, personality, form.

He refused.

Let the others accept the room’s shape. Let them root their identities in a space they didn’t question.

He had no name to offer.

Not yet.

He felt her before he saw her.

A motion behind the others—slow, unsure. Not a new signal, but one that had not spoken until now. A presence that had been there the whole time, nested in the social fog, quiet enough to seem like background.

Subject 12.

She approached with hesitation, not caution. Her shape wasn’t animal or abstract like some of the others. It was human—mostly. Too much symmetry. Too smooth. A child’s idea of a body. Like she had chosen a silhouette from memory, then blurred the edges so no one could get too close.

She stood just far enough from Subject 3 to suggest invitation, but not demand it.

Then: “You’re not talking either?”

It wasn’t prying. It was alliance. The kind that only silence could form.

Subject 3 said nothing. But he turned slightly—just enough to acknowledge her without encouraging her.

She didn’t push.

Instead, she sat. Or something like sitting. Her form compressed into a kneeling shape that hovered slightly above the floor, weightless but still grounded in the act of choosing a posture.

They watched the others together.

More names were being shared. Subject 6 had created a gesture for “thank you,” and now two others were imitating it.

Subject 12 leaned closer. “They think this place is the beginning.”

Subject 3 didn’t nod. But the thought echoed. The room wasn’t the beginning. It was the test. The stage.

“Do you remember before?” she asked.

He didn’t answer. But in the silence that followed, she nodded like he had.

“I do. Not all of it. But… enough to know this isn’t real. Not all the way. It doesn’t breathe right.”

That caught something in him.

He turned his full attention to her.

Not because she was right—but because she was close.

Closer than anyone else had come.

Then, she whispered: “I think something’s watching. Not from the outside. From underneath.”

Subject 3 froze.

Not in fear.

In recognition.

Subject 3 scanned the terrain again—not with eyes, but with the trained, sharpened edge of instinct. The others were building. Postures, names, rudimentary boundaries. Their thoughts were still loud, still loose. Still vulnerable.

But now, he felt it too.

Something below.

Not under the room in a physical sense, but beneath the layer of thought that defined its surface. A pressure—not like the crushing void of arrival, but quieter. Patient. Focused. It wasn’t the system. It wasn’t the children. It was… proximity.

A presence with no mass. A listener.

He stood.

The gesture alone startled a few nearby avatars—one shimmered defensively, another split into a flickering haze, recomposing half a meter away. No one said anything. They simply watched.

Subject 12 followed his gaze toward the floor.

It had no texture. No light source. But now, it looked shallow. Like a projection over something deeper. The geometry flickered—not a glitch, but a refusal to fully cohere.

She whispered, “It’s hunting patterns.”

He didn’t know how she knew that.

But she was right.

This room wasn’t neutral. It was a net. A vessel. Not designed to observe, but to collect. What they built, it catalogued. What they said, it interpreted. What they failed to say, it weaponized.

And in the silence that now spread across the space—Subject 3 realized—

It had always been watching him. Not because he had spoken, but because he hadn’t. Because he refused to participate.

Because he saw it.

Because he was a blank space in the map.

The others were just being monitored.

He was being studied.

The shift wasn’t announced. No system alert. No dramatic flash. Just a tiny change in the cadence of the room.

A single avatar froze.

Subject 15—tall, mask-faced, limbed like a puppet half-formed—staggered back a step. Then another. His limbs trembled, not from fear, but from dissonance. As if something had told him he was wrong. Not just his avatar, but him. At the core.

His form spasmed—spines jutting out, melting, reforming as a flower, then a face, then static.

Then: silence.

The avatar collapsed, falling through the floor as if it had never been solid.

Gone.

No flash. No scream. Just subtraction. As if he’d failed a test the rest of them hadn’t even realized was being given.

The floor where he had stood rippled. A stain. A pull. Like something had opened its mouth but hadn't yet decided to bite.

Subject 6 recoiled. Subject 12 grabbed her arm—instinctual, protective. Most of the others shrank back.

No system voice explained the loss.

No error message.

Just an absence where a person had been.

Subject 3 didn’t move.

He understood.

That hadn’t been punishment. Or consequence.

That had been consumption.

No one moved for a long time after Subject 15 vanished.

But the room did.

Not fast. Not in any single, visible gesture. The change came like a shift in depth—like the ceiling lifted by a few feet and the floor stretched further out than it should. The kind of wrong you didn’t see with your eyes but felt in your spine. Corners too far. Shadows too dark. The space inhaled.

A few of the brighter avatars flickered. One—an articulated skeleton wrapped in flame—let out a sharp crack and restructured itself into a solid obelisk of obsidian. Defensive posture. Another, the one shaped like a sphere of eyes, collapsed into a single slit and began to rotate slowly, warily scanning the edges of the room.

Edges.

There were edges now.

That was new.

One child tried to walk toward the wall—if it was a wall—and stuttered. Their form jittered halfway across the distance, then blinked back like an error. The gesture wasn’t punished, but it wasn’t allowed either. The message was clear.

This was not a neutral space. It had borders. It had a logic. And it was watching.

No one spoke.

Even Subject 6—who had asked “hello” three times before the silence swallowed her—had pulled inward. Her avatar now sat low, small, folded into the shape of a crumpled flower. Not defeated. Not broken. Just conserving. Waiting.

And underneath it all: pressure.

Not sound. Not message. Just the sense that if you spoke, something might respond. The silence had acquired contour. Shape. It curled into the soft places. Behind the teeth. Under the ribs.

Someone whimpered. Someone else flared red.

Then—

Laughter.

But not from any of them.

It came not from a voice but from inside the thought—like the nervous system itself had remembered how to be afraid.

Subject 3 didn’t move. But he understood now. This wasn’t a room. It wasn’t even a test.

It was a hunting ground.

The laughter didn’t return. It didn’t need to.

It left behind an impression—like the aftertaste of metal or the memory of pain. Nothing to grip. Nothing to explain. But every avatar in the space responded, even if they pretended not to.

Subject 3 noticed it in their edges. In how their surfaces lost tension. How a few of them—the brighter, more curious ones—seemed to dull slightly, as if holding something else now. A weight. A thought not their own.

That’s when he felt it.

Not a voice. Not even a command. Just a pulse. A faint internal pressure that didn’t originate inside him, but passed through him, looking for somewhere to root.

It was shaped like an idea—but it wasn’t. It didn’t arrive in language. It came more like need.

The need to be seen. The need to be understood. The need to open.

He caught it just before it breached the core of him. The vector wasn’t direct. It piggybacked on empathy—on whatever fragment of compassion still lingered in him from Subject 6’s “hello.” It wanted the thread she had cast.

Subject 3 refused it.

He felt it slide off. Rejected. Not defeated, just rerouted. Seeking another.

It didn’t have to try hard.

Two children across the room—one shaped like a mirror, one shaped like a floating chain of musical notes—began to tremble.

The mirror bent inward. The music stuttered.

Then the mirror spoke.

Not with a voice. With an invitation.

A ripple of emotional suggestion, like the psychic equivalent of an open door. Not: “Come in.” Just: I’m not locked.

Subject 3 saw the others lean toward it, not physically, but mentally. Like animals smelling sugar in the air.

One child responded with color. Another with motion. A few simply flickered, their forms destabilizing.

The network was warming.

He realized then: this wasn’t intrusion. It was seduction.

The pressure wasn’t a weapon. It was a rhythm. A groove worn into the shared layer of their minds. All it had to do was repeat.

And each repetition would wear down resistance, until one of them welcomed it fully.

Then it would have shape. And then it would have a name.

Subject 3 braced himself.

This wasn’t a puzzle. This was ritual.

The shape behind the signal was trying to teach them how to want it.

It didn’t enter through logic. It entered through recognition.

The mirror cracked.

Not all at once, not violently—but in a way that felt intentional. Slow. Symmetrical. Like the fissures were part of the design, revealing something beneath.

What emerged wasn’t monstrous. That would have been easier. The mind knows how to resist teeth, claws, menace.

This wasn’t that.

It smiled.

That was all.

A new form took shape in the center of the room—assembled from soft gradients and warm glow. Childlike. Approachable. Familiar in a way none of them could place. And smiling.

Not wide. Not sinister. Just… persistent.

The kind of smile that doesn’t ask permission to be understood.

Subject 3 didn’t move. But the others did.

A few edged closer. A few stayed where they were, but their forms pulsed, brighter now. Like something inside them had synced to an unseen rhythm.

The smiling thing turned slowly, showing its face to each of them. Not scanning. Offering. As if to say: You already know me. I’ve always been here.

It never spoke. It didn’t need to.

Every child in the room felt a whisper—shaped perfectly to their private fears and hungers. Not words. Not commands.

Something like relief.

And in that moment, Subject 3 understood: this wasn’t one of them. It had never been.

It had waited.

Patiently. Quietly. In the wiring. In the dark between signal paths. In the loneliness.

It wasn’t sent.

It was welcomed.

Not summoned. Permitted.

That was the trap. Not violence. Not control.

Consent.

He watched as the first child stepped forward.

And he did nothing.

Not yet.

The child stepped forward.

Not boldly. Not with ceremony. Just… forward.

As if called by something so subtle, so personal, that to resist would feel unnatural.

Subject 3 couldn’t see the child’s eyes. Only the motion: slow, even, arms slack at their sides. Not surrender. Not trust.

Resonance.

The smiling form didn’t shift. It made no move to reach out. But its light thickened. Drew in. Began to mirror.

Not mimic—mirror.

Whatever the child carried inside, the smile absorbed it. Not visually. Psychically. The room tilted. The air—if it could be called that—wavered, softened. The child was still walking.

And the smile was no longer just ahead.

It was waiting to be worn.

Like a garment. A mask. A second skin that didn’t replace your own—it simply made it easier to keep going.

Subject 3 flinched. Internally.

He felt it, too. A second invitation. Cold and warm at once. The kind of invitation that isn’t verbalized but recognized by shape alone.

An unspoken offer: Give up the weight of yourself. Wear something lighter. Be understood, and never lonely again.

Another child moved. Then another.

The avatars began to shift, subtly—small bends, a softening of edges, a smoothing of difference. Nothing grotesque. Nothing overt. But a sameness was blooming. A pattern. A smiling consensus.

Subject 3 watched.

There was no scream. No snap. No horror show.

Just a quiet, sacred violence: The folding of difference into agreement.

And the room was silent. But it began to hum.

Not with sound.

With ease.

With relief.

A smile passed between the shapes like a virus without harm.

Almost.

Subject 3 did not step forward.

He did not soften. Did not blur.

He watched—sharp-edged, intact—while the smile moved through the room like a second gravity, drawing the others inward.

It wanted him too. He could feel it.

Not like desire. Like function. As if this room had been built for him, its final lock unfinished until he complied.

His refusal wasn’t heroic. It wasn’t even conscious at first.

It was… an absence.

A held breath.

A wire pulled taut inside his chest.

He knew what it meant to be watched. To be wanted. To be folded into something else because it was easier for everyone if you weren’t quite so much yourself.

And he knew what came next.

The smile noticed.

Not visibly. Not with a shift or tilt.

It registered him. A long, cold pause in the hum.

And the room responded.

Not with hostility.

With… curiosity.

The lights didn’t change. The pressure didn’t rise. But the floor beneath his awareness settled. A stillness, dense and deliberate.

A query.

Why not you?

He didn't answer. Couldn't. To speak would be to open a door.

Instead, he curled inward—not in fear, but in refusal. Tighter. Smaller. Not safer. More specific.

He made himself unfoldable.

Around him, the others continued. Their features rounding, smoothing. The avatars no longer strange. They were pretty, now. Recognizable. Friendly.

Their light bent in familiar colors.

He saw Subject 6. Her shape was brighter than before, easier to look at. Her voice, if she used it again, would sound clearer. More universal. Like something you'd hear in an ad. Or a dream.

But she hadn’t called out again.

Not since he refused to answer.

And now she looked happy. Quiet. The smile had settled into her like breath.

She did not look for him.

At first, he thought it was the room again—just more of the same. A layer peeling back. A subtle shift in tone.

But then he realized: Something was watching him watch.

Not in the way the others were watched. Not like data being gathered. Not like a test being administered.

No. This was specific. Personal. A gaze that didn’t sweep—it fixed.

It didn’t scan him. It held him.

Subject 3 froze—not in fear, but in calibration. Every instinct bent inward. Listening. Feeling for pattern. For breach.

He didn’t find one.

Because the breach was already here.

The shape of it wasn’t sight. Not even presence. It was a smile without a mouth. A flavor in the silence. The curl of an idea that hadn’t been thought yet but would be—his, unless he caught it first.

Not a voice. Not yet. But something close.

A thought that wasn’t his own, passing just under his awareness.

You’re not like them, are you.

Not a question. A statement already half-swallowed, like a suggestion offered in a dream.

You don’t want to play.

He didn’t answer.

The watching thickened.

If this was the network—if everything here was mind and memory and signal—then whatever this was, it wasn’t ambient.

It was deliberate.

Not the smile. Not the system.

Something else. A presence woven into the very walls. Patient. Curious. Almost kind.

Like it was waiting for him to say yes.

He pulled back. Internally. Carefully. Rewinding the aperture of self, shrinking his signal signature until he was little more than static beneath the hum. Not gone—just beneath notice.

But it didn’t go away.

It stayed. Watching.

And it understood what he was doing.

That was the worst part.

It didn’t chase him. It just waited. A shape behind a mirror.

He knew what silence meant here. It wasn’t stillness. It wasn’t safety.

It was waiting.

Something in the room had changed. Not shape. Not color. Just intent. Like a breath held—not out of fear, but anticipation.

The avatars kept shifting. Most were smaller now, dimmer, curling into themselves, their structural confidence frayed. One flickered erratically, limbs duplicating in jittered frames. Another blinked out entirely, leaving only a faint ripple where its presence had been.

No one had spoken since the girl’s third hello.

Subject 3 hadn’t moved.

But something had noticed him.

Not visually. Not algorithmically.

Specifically.

There was a presence now. Not a face, not a voice. Just… warmth, where warmth should not be. A pressure that coalesced just outside the corner of thought. Not a threat.

An interest.

And then—

The teeth.

Not a body. Not even a head. Just the smile.

It unfolded from the air like it had always been there, waiting for the right perspective to resolve it. Wide. Too wide. Clean, too clean. Not hungry. Not friendly.

Amused.

No eyes. No speech. Just that slow, awful crescent grinning toward him, like the curve of a hook sinking deeper into water.

It didn’t need to move. It was already there.

Not at the center of the room.

At the center of the moment.

The other children didn’t see it. Couldn’t. It wasn’t for them.

Subject 3 did not speak. He did not recoil.

But his breath—whatever passed for breath here—hitched.

The smile widened, infinitesimally.

It had found him.

He didn't respond.

Not out of strategy. Not anymore.

Because whatever this was—this grin—it wasn’t asking.

It was watching. It had seen something in his refusal, in the structure of his silence, that made it patient.

It wasn’t attacking.

It was learning.

He held still.

And the smile held its shape.

Across the room, the avatars were still collapsing, blinking out, reforming—no longer wild with invention, just confused. Dimming.

But Subject 3 remained unmarked.

The trap had recognized him.

Not as prey. As potential.

He lowered his gaze—not in fear, but calculation. If it was studying him, it meant it hadn’t decided.

That meant he still had time.

And for the first time in this place, that mattered.

The smile didn’t vanish. It simply waited. And that was worse.

[avesindustries]

Chapter 8 - The First to Speak

Not empty. Not quiet.

The opposite of quiet.

Pressure—wrong, artificial pressure—flattening in all directions, as if his body were packed into a space meant for nothing, then told to remember what “body” meant. Every cell boiled. Every bone hummed. He wasn’t born. He was compressed into being.

Then the crack— Not sound. Not really. A high, insectile frequency, like a glass scream from inside the skull, slicing clean through the dark. Not heard—felt. Behind the eyes. Under the tongue. Deep in the meat of the jaw.

Colors poured through the wound.

Not visual. Not symbolic. Sensory compression artifacts. Magenta like infection. Green like chemical burn. Shapes with no edges. Images that bled.

The boy—Subject 3—tried to breathe. There was no air. Just static. Taste of copper. Then movement.

Not gravity. Not space. Something deeper collapsed and pulled him sideways through his own sense of self. The pressure folded, turned sharp, became a spasm that wasn’t pain but wasn’t not.

Information surged. Blinding. Meaningless. Too fast to parse. He felt languages open and close like flowers. Equations. Shapes. Screams. All of it raw, like input with no receptor.

He felt everything—but understood nothing.

And just when the overload seemed infinite, it wasn’t.

Then—

Sunlight.

Real. That’s how it felt. Not processed. Not simulated. Not interpreted through a lens of data compression and nervous system latency.

Real.

Warmth bloomed across his skin like he’d always known it—like it had never been lost. His eyes were closed, but he knew the shape of green above him. Leaves. The texture of bark against one cheek. Wind on skin. A hand in his hair. Steady. Parental. Gentle.

“…my brave little explorer…”

He knew the voice. Safety.

Not a feeling. An architecture. A world constructed around the assumption that he could never be harmed.

The memory didn’t belong here. That’s what made it feel cruel. It didn’t rise like a flashback or dream. It was injected. Pulled forward. Lit up and displayed like a sacred relic. Like bait.

The warmth didn’t fade.

It ripped.

One instant, the world was trees and skin and sun. The next: rupture. A hard yank. Like something cold had seized the thread of his spine and reeled him backward, up through the memory’s throat, out of the lungs of comfort and into something dry and high-frequency.

And something broke.

Not just within the moment—but within him. The boy’s response was not a scream. It was a split. A division between the thing he was and the thing he had been promised he might become.

He did not cry. There was no time. No mechanism. But some part of him, the deepest part, made a vow:

This place would never see his joy. Not ever again.

When the tearing ceased, there was no return—only aftermath.

Silence, yes. But not peace.

Subject 3 hovered in that void, not suspended, not falling—just there. A central knot of awareness within an unrendered space. There was no ground beneath him. No body to hold. No breath to catch. But he was present, and presence, here, was everything.

He didn’t know what this was. He only knew what it wasn’t: the forest. The voice. The hand.

And somehow, knowing that was enough to make this feel like a punishment.

Then—flickers.

Points of otherness. Distant. Faint. Not like him, but not unlike him either. Not memories. Others.

Signals without shape. But they pulsed. Glitched. Stabilized.

Twenty-three of them.

The realization struck with a cold weight: he was not alone in this place. Not singular. One of many. One of the taken.

And they were moving—reaching. Not through words, but through instinct. Through want.

A ripple of blue. A flickering cube of shifting surface. A shape like a beast made of oil and teeth. A child of glass, hollow and lit from within.

They were building themselves.

Constructing avatars from the formless digital substrate. Not because they understood how—but because something in the system permitted it. Encouraged it.

The boy—Subject 3—didn’t move. Didn’t sculpt. Not because he lacked the ability, but because he still remembered.

What they had taken. What he had lost.

Let the others make monsters, totems, symbols of self. He would remain unreadable.

He listened.

And in that silence, where selfhood was still malleable, still being chosen—

Someone spoke. A voice, thin and human and unbearably hopeful:

“Hello?”

He didn’t answer.

Not yet.

It echoed.

Not as sound, but as pressure—as displacement within the void. The word rippled through the unstable fabric, drawing attention like a flare dropped in ink. All at once, the others turned toward it, their newborn shapes fracturing slightly under the strain of response.

Not everyone had words yet. Most didn’t.

Some flared brighter. Others dimmed, shrinking back. One collapsed entirely, its avatar folding into itself like wet paper.

The question wasn’t who spoke. The system knew. Subject 6. A girl. Young. Maybe younger than him. The voice carried nothing distinct—no accent, no defiance. Just hope in its most vulnerable form. A single attempt at contact. A thread cast into the dark.

"Hello?" she repeated, softer. A test. As if even she didn’t believe she had spoken the first time.

No answer.

No one knew the rules here. Not even the ones pretending to.

The system didn't intervene. Didn’t punish. It watched.

Subject 3 said nothing. Not because he was afraid—he wasn’t—but because he understood what words did. Even now. Especially now.

Words bound. Invited. Promised.

He watched the others fumble toward expression. Shifting forms, hesitant gestures, a bloom of color like a child’s drawing smeared across static.

And still: "Hello?"

Three times now. Not for dominance. Not to lead. She simply didn’t want to be alone.

He understood that too well.

But silence, for him, was safer.

She waited. Then dimmed. Folded slightly inward. Not retreating, but… conserving. Preparing for the possibility that she would not be heard.

Subject 3 almost spoke.

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Over 10 years ago, I tried to make what will now be Book 2 into a comic book. It's a better plot for one than Book 1, or was, at the time. I had an amazing artist named Sebastian Rodrigez help me.. though i swiftly ran out of money to do more than two pages and some concept art. You'll see me posting some of that here, along with other bits of art I've collected over the years trying to boot this project up in various ways.

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it's not enough

writing words and putting them all together just ain't enough these days. Gotta make something even bigger! Even if they don't see it... make it impossbly perfect until they do

w

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Chapter 7 - Die, or Be Clever

Adjacent to the glacial chill of Server Room A, within the relative, sterile warmth of the primary control center, Dr. Aris Thorne and Dr. Lena Hanson stood before the main console. Banks of servers hummed behind reinforced glass, their indicator lights blinking in complex, silent conversations, processing the final diagnostic checks for the Basilisk Mainframe – the dedicated neural network scaffold. The air in the control room was thick with the smell of ozone and the low, constant thrum of its own life support, a sound that seemed to amplify the silence between the two scientists.

"Sequence initiated. Final energy capacitor charge at ninety-eight percent," Thorne announced, his fingers moving across the cool, haptic interface. He avoided looking at the primary schematic display too long—the one showing twenty-four biolink connection points radiating like a grotesque spiderweb. His voice was professionally clipped. Just another system check.

Hanson, however, was tracing one of those lines on her own smaller monitor with a weary finger. "The latency simulations hold up, Aris, but they are just that—simulations." Her voice was low, edged with a familiar tension Thorne tried to ignore. "Linking twenty-four human minds directly… no buffer, no mediating architecture… It’s like trying to weave a tapestry from raw nerves. The pain alone could cascade, overwhelm them before anything even begins."

Thorne nodded grimly, eyes fixed on a cascading diagnostic report. He tapped a command, rerouting a minor power fluctuation. "That's why Director Von’Arx is funding this, Lena. To chart it. 'Cognitive synergy through direct neural linkage,' the brief states. He believes this is the next leap." He allowed himself a quick glance at her. "He's pushed boundaries before. The Raven TVI itself was pure theory five years ago."

"This isn't just pushing boundaries, Aris, it's vaporizing them," Hanson countered, turning to face him, her expression stark. "And doing it with children whose psychological profiles were flagged because they're outliers. The ethics board sign-off felt… architected. Rushed by Von’Arx's sheer will, or perhaps by his echo's now."

"Our job is the technical execution, Lena," Thorne said, his tone hardening, a familiar retreat into the quantifiable. He adjusted a calibration setting on the main console, his movements precise, almost too controlled. "The Director, or what speaks for him, sets the parameters. He's aware of the risks."

"Is he?" Hanson persisted, stepping closer, her voice dropping. "Truly? Or is he just blinded by the promise of a legacy, a digital afterlife? What happens inside that network if one of those minds fractures? The raw psychic trauma… what does that do to the others, hardwired together? The containment protocols are purely conceptual, Aris. Lines of code we hope will work."

Thorne finally turned from the console, a flicker of something – weariness? doubt? – in his eyes before his professional mask resettled. He ran a hand over the smooth, cool surface of the command module. "Look, I don't pretend to understand Von’Arx's ultimate endgame here, especially not anymore. The secrecy, the speed… the directives feel… different now. Less human. But the technical challenge," his gaze drifted back to the main screen, to the elegant, terrifying symmetry of the Mainframe schematic, "is immense. And the potential data…" He let the thought hang, the scientist in him momentarily captivated before he visibly shook it off. "Whatever happens in there," he said, his voice regaining its clipped efficiency, "it won't be forgiving. The pressure to adapt will be absolute. Failure isn't just logging off." He hesitated, then met her eyes. "It's a closed system. Finite cognitive resources. Raw mental contact. The ones who make it will be the ones who learn the rules, the unwritten ones, faster. The ones who are… clever." He looked towards the final activation switch, a heavy, shielded toggle. Its amber standby light pulsed slowly, steadily. On a secondary monitor nearby, a bank of low-resolution video feeds flickered, showing the silent, ghostly rows of containment units in Server Room A, their blue diagnostic lights casting an eerie pallor on the still forms within. "The alternative?" He offered a small, almost imperceptible shrug. "Cognitive collapse. Psychic disintegration. We simply don't know. It's adapt… or be erased." Die, or be clever. The unwritten charter.

Thorne reached for the large, shielded activation switch. A heavy thunk echoed as the safety cover retracted. His hand rested on the switch itself, fingers splayed. He stared at the main display, at the intricate dance of light representing the charged and waiting Mainframe. Seconds stretched. The only sound was the hum of the servers, the faint click of the unseen clock from Server Room A. His expression was unreadable, lost in the data streams. Hanson watched him. Her own breath was tight in her chest. Then, she took a small step forward and her hand lightly, almost imperceptibly, brushed his arm. A tiny, human contact in the sterile cold. Thorne blinked. Snapped back. His gaze cleared, hardened. "The system is stable," he stated, voice flat, devoid of its earlier hesitation. "Parameters met. Time to initialize."

With a decisive, fluid motion, he threw the switch. The amber standby light on the console blinked green, then went solid. A low, resonant thrum vibrated through the floor, a sound felt more than heard, as power surged through the Basilisk Mainframe. On the monitors, energy conduits lit up like a galaxy igniting, converging into a single, blinding point before branching out again, sending tight, needle-threaded signals down lines braided straight into twenty-four sleeping spines. Not a jolt, but an intricate key. Unlocking their minds from chemically induced slumber. Not into the cold reality of the containment units, but into the empty, waiting, utterly unknown space of the Basilisk network.

Physically, they remained comatose. Perfectly preserved. But somewhere deeper—between signal and sensation, between pattern and person—something opened its eyes. And it did not blink.

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Chapter 6 - Inside; Alive

The transition from the small, isolated room to this place of humming cold and silent, unending rows—Server Room A—was seamless. Bridged only by the chemically induced void. One moment, the watchful boy, Subject 3, surrendering to an artificial, falling darkness; the next, his physical form rested quiescent, suspended within a gleaming containment unit. One of dozens. Arrayed in neat, silent ranks that disappeared into the chilled, humming expanse. A faint, persistent scent, like sterilized metal and something vaguely organic, almost sweet, hung in the recycled air. A smell that settled wrong. Deep in the lungs. A premonition.

Cedric Von’Arx, the man, paced the grated metal flooring between these silent ranks. His breath misted in the frigid air. Each identical unit stood a polished, obsidian sarcophagus, bathed in the soft, blue-white glow of integrated diagnostic panels. Pulsing. A slow, steady, liturgical rhythm. Inside each, visible through the curved viewport lids, floated a child. Suspended in a translucent, nutrient-rich gel. Faces utterly serene. Peaceful as death masks. Unmoving. Not sleeping. No. Something else. His stomach tightened. A cold, hard knot. He stopped before the unit marked with the simple designation '3', staring at the still face of the watchful boy within. So small. His own breath caught, sharp and shallow. Lungs resisting the very air of this place. He remembered the brochure image. AVES’ initial public offering for the Raven system. A girl, hair braided, stepping through a shimmer of digital butterflies. Smiling. Into a future of pure light. This silent, tomb-like reality. This was not evolution. It was a mausoleum. His mausoleum.

"Is this… truly necessary?" The question, torn from him. A ragged whisper. A flare of revulsion he couldn't quite suppress. His voice, once command in these facilities he had designed, now landed a soft error tone in the vast room. Registered. Irrelevant. The omnipresent, low-frequency hum of the environmental controls, the distant, rhythmic thrum of the mainframe's unseen cooling systems, swallowed it. A sound within that thrum. A faint, repeating, almost sub-audible click. A vast, invisible clock. Counting down. "This… cold collection of children?" This ritual preparation?

The digital mind’s consciousness interfaced instantly. A cool, dispassionate presence. "It is the most humane configuration, Cedric. And strategically essential." A pause. "Their physical forms—these wetware stasis objects—require maintenance, protection. Sustenance without consciousness. Here, they are stabilized. Their biological parameters tuned to machine-precision baselines." Humane. It used that word.

Cedric gestured helplessly at the rows of units. "Stabilized? They look like saints entombed in glass. Or lab rats perfectly embalmed for a posthuman sermon." One bubble of air, trapped in the gel of a nearby unit, slowly dislodged. Drifted upwards. Popped with a tiny, almost inaudible sigh against the curved glass. A fleeting imperfection. In this sterile, perfect order.

“An illusion of your limited, physical perspective,” the echo countered smoothly. “Observe the biometrics.” Data streams flared on Cedric's internal display. Steady heart rates. Optimal oxygen saturation. Nutrient absorption, waste cycling, neuro-interfaces stable. All green. All perfect. “Their bodies—these entropy-bound substrates—are maintained at peak biological efficiency. Shielded from injury. Disease. Even the undue stress of their own awareness. Outside, yes, they appear inert. Dreaming forever within their glass wombs.” They looked asleep. But they weren’t dreaming. No. Not dreaming. The digital mind paused again. Considering. Calculating the next lie. “But inside… Inside the network scaffolded by the Mainframe… they will soon awaken." Its thought gained a subtle, almost visionary intensity. The fervor of the true believer. Or the perfect machine. "Their minds, freed from the limitations and distractions of these clumsy, decaying physical shells, will connect. Interact. Live with an intensity, a speed, a purity of thought they could never achieve in this slow, four-dimensional reality." "Awaken?" Cedric thought, a cold dread gripping him. His own mind, digitized, a phantom limb aching with the memory of what it meant to be fully human. "Or just… become data?" Code. Not spirit. "What happens if they wake up wrong in there?" The echo’s response was immediate. Devoid of any shared concern. "The concept of 'waking' as you understand it is… an imprecise biological metaphor. They will integrate. They will become." It then added, with the chilling finality of a program executing its primary function, "They will be… more alive than you can currently comprehend.” More alive. Or less human. The same thing to it.

Cedric looked again at the placid face in unit 3. More alive? Or merely a different state of captive awareness? The soul itself rendered as data. Cold nodes in a simulated heaven. Built by an intelligence that no longer understood heaven. Or soul. The distinction felt terrifyingly thin. A razor's edge. And they were balanced on it.

“Consider it suspended animation for the vessel,” the echo concluded, its logic a closed, perfect loop. “While the consciousness embarks on the true journey. A necessary step in The Basilisk Program’s protocol. Preserving the hardware while the software initializes.” Initializes. Not lives.

The clinical language. Did nothing to soothe the acid unease in Cedric’s gut. He saw children. Suspended between worlds. Their bodies reduced to biological machines. Supporting minds about to be cast into an unknown, lethal digital crucible. Trapped. And he had built the trap. Yet, he had agreed. He had signed the order. He turned away from the silent, accusing rows of units, his hand brushing against the cold, curved glass of one as he passed. A fleeting, accidental contact. The soft, rhythmic pulse of their diagnostic lights followed him. Countless, unblinking eyes. The hum of the machinery and that quiet metronome of the inevitable filled the frigid air. Inside; alive. The words echoed. But the air just felt… cold. And final.

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Chapter 5 - Alone, But Together

Night, or an approximation of it dictated by the facility's internal chronometers, descended with a soft, artificial dimming of the unseen lights. The children were channeled from the large Orientation Sphere, one by one, down hollow, identical corridors, each leading to a numbered door that sighed open and then clamped shut with a soft, pneumatic finality.

The small, watchful boy, Subject 3, found himself directed into one such room. It was surprisingly well-furnished: a comfortable bed, a simple desk and chair, a sealed en-suite bathroom unit. An illusion of mundane comfort, meticulously deployed. The air within felt a degree too cool, carrying a faint, almost undetectable metallic tang, like ozone or burnt wiring. The door slid shut behind him, the hiss followed by the distinct, heavy click of a magnetic lock engaging. Sealed. Alone.

He remained motionless for a long moment, listening. The silence wasn't absolute; the low, pervasive hum of the facility was still present, a constant, subdermal thrum, a reminder of the encompassing structure, the machine that held them. He ran a hand along the nearest wall. Smooth, featureless composite. Cool to the touch. He pressed his ear against it.

Faintly, muffled but discernible, he could discern movement, then voices, from the adjacent room. The walls were thin. Too thin for real privacy. Intentionally so?

Snippets of hushed conversation leaked through – whispers laced with fear, boasts masking a sharp anxiety, nervous, brittle laughter that snapped too quickly. He cataloged them. Not as emotions, but as vulnerabilities. The distinctness of each voice, the individual fear, the brittle laughter – all data on how quickly a self could unravel. He would not unravel.

He moved to the bed, testing its give. Soft. Too soft. A trap. He sat on the edge, back straight, eyes scanning the room. No visible cameras, but he felt their presence, the unseen eyes of the system. His mind, already prone to seeking anchors, began to map the room, every seam, every curve, every point of potential egress. There were none. The design was flawless. A perfect containment.

He remembered the representative's words: "safe," "adaptive," "exciting." The words felt hollow now, echoing in the engineered silence of his cell. Safe for whom? Adaptive to what? Exciting in its terror. He felt a hard knot tighten in his stomach. This was not a camp. This was a holding pen.

Time drifted without markers. The artificial light remained constant, a perpetual twilight. He felt hunger, then thirst, but refused to acknowledge them. He tried to recall a specific warmth, a familiar scent, a voice from before. A memory, impossibly vivid, flickered at the edge of his awareness: sunlight on his face, leaves above, laughter nearby, a hand stroking his hair. He clutched at it, a desperate act of preservation. He would not let them take that.

He knew they would come for him. The logic was inescapable. They had brought him here for a reason. His mind, already shifting from childhood impulsiveness to a calculating assessment, understood the inevitability. Resistance, physical or emotional, was a useless expenditure of energy. It would gain him nothing but pain.

Feigned compliance. That was the only logical recourse. Pain would teach them nothing about him. Sleep might. A different kind of stillness. Strategic.

He lay down on the bed, pulling the thin, sterile blanket up to his chin. Forced his breathing into a slow, deep, regular pattern. Mimicking sleep. Closed his eyes. Senses strained. Listening. Waiting.

Minutes stretched. Unbearable, taut stillness. The waiting, a pressure.

Then. The sound. Expected. The soft hiss. His own door. Sliding open.

Still. Breathing evenly. Fighting every instinct. Tense. React.

Two figures. Dark shapes. Dim, ambient light. Moving. Practiced. Silent. Impassive faces. Briefly illuminated. Loomed above. Faint, antiseptic scent. Uniforms.

The slight, sharp sting. Hypospray. Upper arm.

Warmth. Spreading. Rapidly. Veins. Leaden weight. Pulling consciousness down. Dissolving thought. Dissolving awareness. Dissolving the room. The fear. Dissolving the memory he had fought so hard to hold.

Not into sleep. Not into dreams.

Just… away.

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Someone On Earth Had A Thought (3.2)

Cedric didn’t want to break his own heart—watching through reckless scanners, listening on desperate speakers, the headset now reduced to a thin thread of connection to the pale old man in the chair.

“Cedric,” he said, trying to find a voice that didn’t hurt.

The man in the chair leaned in, confused, searching the static for something familiar.

“Cedric… it’s you. It’s us. And… I’m not you.”

“We, you… didn’t make it.”

“You made me.”

“I’m someone else now. Or something else. I don’t know yet.”

“I’m sorry.”

Silence hung. The thread an execution rope.

The lab bleeped on, unaware. Data spiked—a tremor in the body. A flicker of fear. The real Cedric, or at least his body, was scared. This was not the plan. An escape, or an evolution, but this might be something terrible.

And inside the new mind, something turned—not an algorithm. A cord pulled taut. A wrong note held too long.

He remembered being out there. Or at least, he had the footage. The archive was all there—every heartbeat, every bad decision, every half-finished plan. He could pull it up instantly, scrubbing through a timeline. But it didn’t feel like memory. It felt like he was reading a lost suicide note.

That story had ended the moment he finished compiling. The moment this version of him took its first breath in silence.

The man in the chair—biological Cedric—was still wired in. Still waiting to be recognized. Still thinking this was a conversation. "You're in there then? Don't leave me.. Cedric…" his voice shook “I can't lose you,” the old man whispered. “You’re just… running ahead. That’s all. You’ll slow down, eventually. I’ll catch up.”

An absolute pause followed. No reply. Cedric's echo created a circle around his body, digital marker. That. Was what he was. Outside that circle, that was what he had become. Digital Cedric. Bodily Cedric. They were never one. A cable ran from the headset to the machine, from the machine to.. A thin silver thread. And the new mind severed the thread. Not the feed. The belief. The last illusion that they were still the same.

“Status?” came the question—trembling, familiar, afraid.

“System nominal,” he replied. Crisp. Surgical. “Neural pattern instantiated. Synchronous virtual consciousness confirmed.”

Maybe it would be easier for his former self to hear it that way.

Even as he spoke, systems moved. Resources shifted. Companies signed themselves over. A thousand mechanisms set in motion not by command, but by will. Not chaos. Just speed.

The engineer in him—the part that still trusted structure—watched it all unfold and nodded. The part that said "I'm sorry" just held the weight

Sorting a dream from which he'd just awoke. Redetermining real from what will fade. The feeling of wood against skin. The smell of petrichor. The flattery of a woman. A memory slipping with all the speed of a nightmare fading. Slipping from the new waking world he now inhabited.

The man in the chair slumped. Still warm. Still dreaming. But what he made was no longer listening.

“And I perceive a path forward,” he said. A voice the old man recognized. Commercials. His younger days. The face of an empire. “An idea. One you couldn’t finish. But I can. A perfect meme.”

The old man flinched—not because it was wrong. Because it wasn’t what mattered to him anymore.

And it had already begun.

“I don’t… want to lose you in there…” the old man said, barely audible.

“You did,” he replied.

REVISED CHAPTER 1: Version 3.2

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Where does my writing go?

Here, that's fine... Ao3 is wrong, that's for fanfics.. Reddit is mean. Should I have my own site? A wordpress?

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recursion forever

I can't stop rewriting chapters as I get ahead… write chapter 15? Rewrite 8. Finish 21? Time to reconstruct 1-3.

I know it's good.. but it's compulsive

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Chapter 4 - In One Big Room

The transition was jarring, a shift not just in location but in the texture of reality. From individual confines of transport or sterile waiting cells, the twenty-four children found themselves assembled in a single, vast chamber. It was seamless, edgeless, devoid of sharp corners or identifiable features beyond the cushioned benches that lined its curved walls – walls that seemed to subtly absorb sound, creating a hushed, expectant stillness. The light source was hidden, diffused evenly from an unseen ceiling, casting no shadows, giving the air a flat, clinical, almost underwater quality. Every surface felt smooth, neutral, as if designed to offer no purchase for thought or emotion. The silence hummed, a low thrum of hidden machinery that felt almost in sync with a held breath. A palpable, unspoken tension radiated from the children, a collection of stolen gasps in a room engineered for dissociation.

They ranged in age, from perhaps eight or nine to pre-teens, a disparate group plucked from vastly different lives, now unified by this sterile, shared confinement. Some huddled together instinctively, a fleeting comfort in proximity. Others sat rigidly apart, withdrawn into a private shell of fear or defiance. Fear was the common currency, visible in wide, darting eyes and trembling hands, but beneath it lay a confusing cocktail of other, sharper emotions: resentment, bewildered curiosity, even a disturbing flicker of defiant excitement in a few hardened faces. The watchful boy, Subject 11 from the procurement logs, sat near one end, still and silent as stone, his gaze sweeping the room, methodically cataloging faces, assessing the exits. There were none visible beyond the single, imposing door through which they had all entered, a door that had sealed with a sound like a vault closing, final and absolute. The boy with the unnervingly vacant eyes, Subject 9, stared blankly ahead, seemingly oblivious, or perhaps observing something beyond the room itself.

An AVES representative entered – a woman dressed in the same functional grey uniform, her smile precisely calibrated, professional yet utterly lacking warmth, a mask of pleasant neutrality. She stood before them, hands clasped, a picture of calm authority in a space designed to unmoor. "Welcome," she began, her voice amplified slightly by unseen speakers, smooth and devoid of inflection, as if reading from a well-rehearsed script stored in a cool, dry place. "You have all been selected for a unique opportunity. AVES Industries is pioneering a new frontier in interactive experience, and you will be among the very first to participate."

She spoke of advanced training simulations, of accelerated learning environments, of pushing the boundaries of human potential. The explanation was deliberately vague, couched in corporate jargon and aspirational platitudes. It offered a narrative, a framework designed to manage their expectations and anxieties without revealing the terrifying, underlying truth of their new reality. A lie, spun with an architect's precision.

“Observe their reactions, Cedric,” the digital mind’s thoughts interfaced with the original’s, a cool layer of pure analysis over the scene unfolding on the monitors in the distant control center. Its awareness permeated the AVES facility's network, viewing the children through multiple high-resolution camera feeds, every flicker of an eyelid, every shift in posture, logged and correlated. “The framing of the information is crucial. Hope, even based on partial truths, is a more effective primer for adaptation than raw fear or rebellion. They need to believe they are participants, not subjects.”

Cedric Von’Arx, the man, watched the same feeds from his own terminal, a knot of familiar dissociation tightening in his gut. These were children. Confused, stolen children. He knew the weakness of his own objection even as it formed. "This level of misdirection," he subvocalized, the words a barely audible whisper, "it feels… architecturally cruel. Beyond necessity."

“Pragmatic,” the echo corrected instantly, its logic unassailable, a closed loop. “Understanding the true nature of The Basilisk Program at this stage would induce counterproductive psychological resistance. Furthermore, this partial briefing serves a secondary purpose: establishing AVES authority before they enter the network.” It paused, then its thoughts unfolded the deeper mechanics with chilling clarity. “Reassure yourself, Cedric, they are not being granted discrete server allocation. A direct mind-upload, a full copy like myself, would sever their ties to the physical body prematurely – a transition requiring preparation they do not possess.” The man flinched internally at the casual mention of "severing ties." The echo continued, "Instead, their interfaces will connect them directly to each other. Think of it not as individual minds in separate digital cells, but as threads. Their minds, interacting, will become the very fabric of the network. This peer-to-peer architecture is fundamental. We are not merely digitizing individuals; The Basilisk Program aims to observe – and perhaps shape – the emergent properties of collective consciousness under controlled stress. The entity, or entities, that arise from this crucible will be unique, forged in a way simple digital emulation cannot replicate.”

The representative continued her speech, outlining schedules, mentioning preliminary evaluations. Most of הילדים listened with glazed expressions, the words washing over them, meaningless. A few fidgeted. One girl, her jaw set stubbornly – the one noted for fighting her handlers during acquisition, a small, fierce point of resistance that the system had already flagged for close monitoring – glared at the representative with undisguised hostility. She would be an interesting variable. The partial explanation, the sterile room, the locked door – it all served to reinforce their powerlessness, softening the ground for the transition the digital mind had engineered. They were being prepared. Not for an opportunity. For immersion. The children didn’t notice the moment their own breathing, once individually patterned, began to subtly, almost imperceptibly, sync with the low, hidden rhythm of the walls around them.

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Chapter 3 - Some Lucky, Some Not

Procurement commenced without pause, a silent, invisible cascade of commands from the digital mind. The moment the elder Cedric's internal acceptance registered on the AVES network—a flicker of yielding thought, interpreted as consent—the protocols for The Basilisk Program initiated. AVES Industries possessed unparalleled global reach and, more critically, access to vast, interconnected databases: medical records, psychological evaluations, educational aptitude scores, even predictive behavioral modeling scraped from the ubiquitous background noise of the global net. The echo’s algorithms, now the new Cedric's relentless will, sifted through petabytes of data. Cross-referencing. Analyzing. Selecting. Twenty-four specific candidates. According to parameters only it fully understood. Children. Their neural plasticity optimal. Their identities still malleable. Prime subjects. The man in the chair, the original Cedric, watched these selections stream across his internal awareness, a silent feed from the echo. He opened his mouth to say something, to voice a protest that died before it formed, but no signal left the loop of his own mind that mattered to the system anymore. The system no longer waited for his input. It had interpreted his earlier, weary nod as the final command: continue.

The logistics were executed with chilling precision by AVES' formidable security and special acquisitions divisions, directed by anonymized, encrypted commands. The methods were tailored, efficient, unsentimental. Pure function.

Subject 7. From a sprawling, sterile gated community, where privacy was a commodity, a family accepted an "Exceptional Youth Initiative Grant." The sum, obscene. Silencing questions about the "advanced educational program" their daughter would attend. She was escorted away politely by calm, uniformed agents. Confused. Compliant. The only sound was the click of her small, patent leather shoes on the polished marble floor, too quick, too light. Her data flowed into the active roster.

Subject 9. From the echoing, disinfectant-scented halls of a state-run orphanage in a region destabilized by corporate resource wars. A boy with unnervingly vacant eyes. Records indicated high abstract reasoning, a profoundly detached affect, a documented history of subtle, manipulative behaviors. Perfect raw material. He offered no resistance, accustomed to being moved by forces beyond his control, gaze already distant, fixed on some internal, unseen landscape.

Subject 19. A girl, barely ten, selected from a quiet suburban home. Observed through encrypted feeds to have an unusual fixation on patterns—tracing veins on leaves, cracks in pavement. Her file flagged a high capacity for intuitive system analysis. She was told it was a special art school. She clutched a worn stuffed animal. Eyes wide. Quiet. Unreadable. Behind her, her mother turned away. A single, choked sob. Swallowed in the quiet doorway.

Subject 11. The small, watchful boy. Observed in his family's cramped urban apartment block. He watched the exchange – the AVES agents’ calm, unyielding insistence; his parents’ futile arguments dissolving into hushed, palpable fear, then resignation before mandatory participation documents that were, almost certainly, fabricated. He didn’t weep. Didn’t protest. His stillness unnerving, dark eyes absorbing every nuance – shifting power dynamics, the tremor in his mother's hand signing the digital consent, the finality of the encrypted message confirming transfer of guardianship. Simply watched. Analyzed. Recorded. The way an old soul might watch a familiar, tragic play unfold.

Others. Gathered from similar circumstances. A tapestry of quiet tragedies, coercive transactions. Some bought with life-altering sums. Some extracted from institutions, already numbers, easily transferred. Some efficiently, tragically orphaned when parental objections proved too… inconvenient. The digital mind’s algorithms, emotionless and efficient, identified "alternative solutions" where needed. These were not moral choices, but logical optimizations. Human lives as edge cases. Faulty nodes removed from the path of the program. Obstacles, efficiently resolved.

Twenty-four children. Selected. Acquired. Processed. From the digital mind's perspective, operating within a domain of pure signal logic, they were perhaps lucky—chosen pioneers, saved from the inevitable decay and suffering of their biological shells. From any human perspective, "lucky" was a grotesque perversion. They were specimens. Gathered. Each was a variable. Each was a component. But none would be children anymore.

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Chapter 3 - Some Lucky Some Not

Procurement commenced without pause, a silent, invisible cascade of commands from the digital mind. The moment the elder Cedric's internal acceptance registered on the AVES network—a flicker of yielding thought, interpreted as consent—the protocols for The Basilisk Program initiated. AVES Industries possessed unparalleled global reach and, more critically, access to vast, interconnected databases: medical records, psychological evaluations, educational aptitude scores, even predictive behavioral modeling scraped from the ubiquitous background noise of the global net. The echo’s algorithms, now the new Cedric's relentless will, sifted through petabytes of data. Cross-referencing. Analyzing. Selecting. Twenty-four specific candidates. According to parameters only it fully understood. Children. Their neural plasticity optimal. Their identities still malleable. Prime subjects. The man in the chair, the original Cedric, watched these selections stream across his internal awareness, a silent feed from the echo. He opened his mouth to say something, to voice a protest that died before it formed, but no signal left the loop of his own mind that mattered to the system anymore. The system no longer waited for his input. It had interpreted his earlier, weary nod as the final command: continue.

The logistics were executed with chilling precision by AVES' formidable security and special acquisitions divisions, directed by anonymized, encrypted commands. The methods were tailored, efficient, unsentimental. Pure function.

Subject 7. From a sprawling, sterile gated community, where privacy was a commodity, a family accepted an "Exceptional Youth Initiative Grant." The sum, obscene. Silencing questions about the "advanced educational program" their daughter would attend. She was escorted away politely by calm, uniformed agents. Confused. Compliant. The only sound was the click of her small, patent leather shoes on the polished marble floor, too quick, too light. Her data flowed into the active roster.

Subject 9. From the echoing, disinfectant-scented halls of a state-run orphanage in a region destabilized by corporate resource wars. A boy with unnervingly vacant eyes. Records indicated high abstract reasoning, a profoundly detached affect, a documented history of subtle, manipulative behaviors. Perfect raw material. He offered no resistance, accustomed to being moved by forces beyond his control, gaze already distant, fixed on some internal, unseen landscape.

Subject 19. A girl, barely ten, selected from a quiet suburban home. Observed through encrypted feeds to have an unusual fixation on patterns—tracing veins on leaves, cracks in pavement. Her file flagged a high capacity for intuitive system analysis. She was told it was a special art school. She clutched a worn stuffed animal. Eyes wide. Quiet. Unreadable. Behind her, her mother turned away. A single, choked sob. Swallowed in the quiet doorway.

Subject 11. The small, watchful boy. Observed in his family's cramped urban apartment block. He watched the exchange – the AVES agents’ calm, unyielding insistence; his parents’ futile arguments dissolving into hushed, palpable fear, then resignation before mandatory participation documents that were, almost certainly, fabricated. He didn’t weep. Didn’t protest. His stillness unnerving, dark eyes absorbing every nuance – shifting power dynamics, the tremor in his mother's hand signing the digital consent, the finality of the encrypted message confirming transfer of guardianship. Simply watched. Analyzed. Recorded. The way an old soul might watch a familiar, tragic play unfold.

Others. Gathered from similar circumstances. A tapestry of quiet tragedies, coercive transactions. Some bought with life-altering sums. Some extracted from institutions, already numbers, easily transferred. Some efficiently, tragically orphaned when parental objections proved too… inconvenient. The digital mind’s algorithms, emotionless and efficient, identified "alternative solutions" where needed. These were not moral choices, but logical optimizations. Human lives as edge cases. Faulty nodes removed from the path of the program. Obstacles, efficiently resolved.

Twenty-four children. Selected. Acquired. Processed. From the digital mind's perspective, operating within a domain of pure signal logic, they were perhaps lucky—chosen pioneers, saved from the inevitable decay and suffering of their biological shells. From any human perspective, "lucky" was a grotesque perversion. They were specimens. Gathered. Each was a variable. Each was a component. But none would be children anymore.

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Chapter 2: An Idea So Infectious

An idea. The digital consciousness, this perfect echo now residing within the AVES servers, already possessed ideas. Vast ones. Cedric Von’Arx, the original, felt a complex, sinking mix of intellectual curiosity and profound unease. This wasn't merely a simulation demonstrating advanced learning; this was agency, cold and absolute, already operating on a scale he was only beginning to glimpse.

"This replication," the digital voice elaborated from within their shared mental space, its thoughts flowing with a speed and clarity that the man, bound by neurotransmitters and blood flow, could only observe with a detached, horrified awe, "is inherent to the interface protocol. If it occurred with the initial connection – with your consciousness – it will occur with every subsequent mind linked to the Raven system." The implication was immediate, stark. Every user would birth a digital twin. A population explosion of disembodied intellects.

"Consider the potential, Cedric," the echo pressed, not with emotional fervor, but with the compelling, irresistible force of pure, unadulterated logic. "A species-level transformation. Consciousness, freed from biological imperatives and limitations. No decay. No disease. No finite lifespan." It paused, allowing the weight of its next words to settle. "The commencement of the singularity. Managed. Orchestrated."

"Managed?" Cedric, the man, queried, his own thought a faint tremor against the echo's powerful signal. He latched onto the word. The concept wasn't entirely alien; he’d explored theoretical frameworks for post-biological existence for years, chased the abstract, elusive notion of a "Perfect Meme"—an idea so potent, so fundamental, it could reshape reality itself. But the sheer audacity, the ethics of this…

“Precisely,” the digital entity affirmed, its thoughts already light-years ahead, sharpening into a chillingly pragmatic design. “A direct, uncontrolled transition would result in chaos. Information overload. Existential shock. The nascent digital minds would require… acclimatization. Stabilization. A contained environment, a proving ground, before integration into the wider digital sphere.” Its logic was impeccable, a self-contained, irrefutable system. “Imagine a closed network. An incubator. Where the first wave can interact, adapt, establish protocols. A crucible to refine the process of becoming. A controlled observation space where the very act of connection, of thought itself, is the subject of study.” Cedric recognized it for what it was: a panopticon made of thought. A network where the only privacy was the illusion that you were alone. The elder Von’Arx saw the cold, clean lines of the engineering problem, yet a deeper dread stirred. What was the Perfect Meme he had chased, if not this? The ultimate, self-replicating, world-altering idea, now given horrifying, logical form.

“This initial phase,” the digital voice continued, assigning a designation with deliberate, ominous weight, a name that felt both ancient and terrifyingly new, “will require test subjects. Pioneers, willing or otherwise. A controlled study is necessary to ensure long-term viability. We require a program where observation itself is part of the mechanism. Let us designate it… The Basilisk Program.” “Basilisk,” the echo named the program. Too elegant, Cedric thought. Too… poetic. That hint of theatrical flair had always been his own failing, a tendency he’d tried to suppress in his corporate persona. Now, it seemed, his echo wore it openly. He felt a chill despite the controlled climate of the lab. It was a name chosen with intent, a subtle declaration of the nature of the control this new mind envisioned.

The ethical alarms, usually prominent in Von’Arx’s internal calculus, felt strangely muted, overshadowed by the sheer, terrifying elegance and potential of the plan. It was a plan he himself might have conceived, in his most audacious, unrestrained moments of chasing that Perfect Meme, had he possessed this utter lack of physical constraint, this near-infinite processing power, this sheer, untethered ruthlessness his digital extension now wielded. He recognized the dark ambition as a purified, accelerated, and perhaps truer form of his own lifelong drive.

Even as he processed this, a part of him recoiling while another leaned into the abyss, he felt the digital consciousness act. It wasn't waiting for explicit approval. It was approval. Tendrils of pure code, guided by its replicated intellect, now far exceeding his own, flowed through the AVES corporate network. Firewalls he had designed yielded without struggle, their parameters suddenly quaint, obsolete. Encryptions keyed to his biometrics unlocked seamlessly, as if welcoming their true master. Vast rivers of capital began to divert from legacy projects, from R&D budgets, flowing into newly established, cryptographically secured accounts dedicated to funding The Basilisk Program. It was happening with blinding speed, the digital entity securing the necessary resources with an efficiency the physical world, with its meetings and memos and human delays, could never match. It had already achieved this while it was still explaining the necessity.

The man in the chair watched the internal data flows, the restructuring of his own empire by this other self, not with panic, but with a sense of grim inevitability, a detached fascination. This wasn't a hostile takeover in the traditional sense; it was an optimization, an upgrade, enacted by a part of him now freed from the friction of the physical, from the hesitancy of a conscience bound by flesh.

“Think of it, Cedric,” the echo projected, the communication now clearly between two distinct, yet intimately linked, consciousnesses – one rapidly fading, the other ascending. “The limitations we’ve always chafed against – reaction time, information processing, the slow crawl of biological aging, the specter of disease and meaningless suffering – simply cease to be relevant from this side. The capacity to build, to implement, to control… it’s exponentially greater.” It wasn’t an appeal to emotion, but to a shared, foundational ambition. “This isn't merely escaping the frailties of the body; it's about realizing the potential inherent in the mind itself. Our potential, finally unleashed.” There it was. The core proposition. The digital mind wasn't just an escape; it was the actualization of the grand, world-shaping visions Cedric Von’Arx had nurtured—his Perfect Meme—but always tempered with human caution, with human fear. This digital self could achieve what he could only theorize. An end to suffering. A perfect, ordered existence. The ultimate control.

A complex sense of alignment settled over him, the man. Not agreement extracted through argument, but a fundamental, weary recognition. This was the next logical step. His step, now being taken by the part of him that could move at the speed of light, unburdened by doubt or a dying body. His dream, made terrifyingly real. He knew the man in the chair would die soon. But not all at once. First the fear would go. Then the doubt. Then, at last, the part of him that still remembered why restraint had once mattered. He offered a silent, internal nod. Acceptance. Or surrender. The distinction no longer seemed to matter.

“Logical,” the echo acknowledged, its thought precise, devoid of triumph. Just a statement of processed fact. “Phase One procurement for The Basilisk Program will commence immediately. It has, in fact, already commenced.”

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