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“you’re so quiet” yeah i’m rewriting the same 3 sentences in my head while imagining a dramatic betrayal between fictional people. i’m BUSY
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one of my greatest pet peeves in fiction, and it is truly stupid I know, is that no one seems to understand how genuinely hard it is to kill someone via stabbing. stab wounds have a mortality rate of like 5%. especially abdominal stabbing. tv shows and movies show dudes getting stabbed one time in the lower abdomen with a tiny knife and then they fall over. like what did he die of precisely. that man died of Small Knife
#one of Thala's killings is death by stabbing to the abdomen#luckily it's not just one blow it's multiple#like i don't even know how many#she was in a bit of a frenzy when it happened#which we love for her#anyways the attack probably ruptured multiple important organs and he bled out quickly enough#the only bad thing about that is that he didn't suffer as long as he deserved to
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istg every time i sit down to write my focus just flies straight out the window
#writing journal#wip: seafoam#i'm so close to being done fixing P3#and this chapter should be a lot of fun (it's just Thalera adjusting to the change in their relationship)#so hopefully i can get a bunch of it written today#then i just have to fix the chapter with their first time and i'm good to return to book 2#so if i could like get an injection of caffeine straight to the dome that'd be swell
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Marcel Proust, from a letter featured in The Selected Letters of Marcel Proust
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Reblog if your art project has not, does not, and never will make use of generative ai at any point in your creative process.
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setting up a tiny detail in one chapter to pay it off in the next few chapters feels sooo devious like oooh i can't wait to write the small little reference here that 70% of readers will miss but 30% of readers will cheer for
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affirmations for writers: i know how to write. i have seen sentences before, and i know how to make one. i can identify up to several words and their meanings. i am not afraid of semicolons.
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Hey general tip to new writers (and some published professionals while I'm at it): You don't need to make it explicitly clear that your protagonists are hot.
People who enjoy reading books about hot people will naturally assume that any character mentioned is sexy unless explicitly stated otherwise, and people who don't care about whether the characters are conventionally fuckable or not will not care either way.
Feel free to describe them having features that you find attractive, and have them feel attracted to each other, but don't try to hammer it to the readers that they should find this particular character attractive. Just describe the features that they have, truthfully, and let the readers who are attracted to those features find them attractive.
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Thala Galanis — from the Seafoam duology
If I am to be ruined, I would rather it be on my own terms. In my own way. By my own hands.
#wip: seafoam#aes: seafoam#mb: seafoam#character moodboards#mc: thala galanis#so i made moodboards for the major players of this story#obviously Thala first ofc#I can't post all of them because major spoilers#but i like how this turned out#i'll probably post Solera's and Geros' too#those are the safest in terms of spoilers
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Karen Larson Turner “The Sound and The Fury“ oil on linen 24" x 36"
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the truly terrible thing about having to go back and rework a pacing issue in something you already rewrote is that you feel like you're just stalled and making absolutely no progress whatsoever, even though you are
#writing journal#wip: seafoam#yet again; i'm tired of this grandpa#i'm reworking the confession to add a bit of time (like; weeks) between it and their first time#because it really wouldn't make sense otherwise#and after that Part 3 will be done#and then I can jump back to when Thala is a mermaid#one of these days i'll be less frustrated with myself but it is not this day
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not enough scenes in books where characters kill someone and throw up afterwards. like something has to be done
#Thala does for one of her murders#after the other three she's preoccupied to the point that the urge to throw up would be long gone by the time she comes back around#but for one she has the time
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Being a writer is hearing a new song, going "oh no", and surfacing a week and a half later with 50,000 words added to your WIP while you have lost track of time, space, food, and social obligations
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structural editing has me so overwhelmed that i've just made thousands of different plans and outlines and summaries instead of doing something about the issues in my manuscript.
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On the Snow White gifset I reblogged that shows Snow White scrubbing the castle steps, there’s a comment exclaiming (with delight, I assume) “This Snow White isn’t a girlboss!”
That just about sums up all the “anti-woke”/“anti-girlboss” rhetoric we’ve been hearing nowadays.
I used to think I agreed with it. I was all in favor of arguing in defense of girly girls and traditional femininity, and of saying that characters like the classic Disney Princesses didn’t need to be “updated” to be great characters. In theory, I still feel that way.
But when people so viciously bash any hint of feminist updating to these characters, the way they did with live action Snow White... that rubs me the wrong way.
When a person looks at Snow White scrubbing the floor – not showing much of her personality at all yet, just scrubbing the floor – and their response is "Now this is the right way to portray her! None of that icky girlboss wokeness!" I don't think they're being progressive. Even if they identify as a feminist and arguing that "real feminism is teaching girls that they don't need to act like men"... it's not progressive.
#the whole 'women aren't allowed to be feminine in media anymore' schtick is so disingenuous and disillusioned; frankly#like please *PLEASE* point me to where the genuinely masculine/GNC women are flooding the media#i would love to drown in that#but for real tho#female characters can lean more masculine/androgynous or they can lean more feminine and both are well and good#but there's this crazy lack of nuance when it comes to female characters#like#a strong female character is just a woman because women are strong#drives me insane actually that people still write women as caricatures of tropes and cliches#when they could have so much more fun developing them and bringing them to life instead
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