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koskela-knights Ā· 8 months
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Still can't handle the fact how unpopular the Koskelas are šŸ˜­ LIke yeah, obviously they did the funny commercials and were presented as these silly comic relief characters but there's so much more beneath the surface šŸ˜­šŸ’”
Welp, it didn't help that all scenes with them, safe for the Local Girl Watery scene were skippable and/or super missable. Even Ilmari in YY could be entirely skipped
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franeridart Ā· 6 years
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Do you care for any of the dekusquad?
I care for most if not all hero-related characters in bnha! But if with care you mean if any dekusquad member is between my favorite characters/if I care enough about any of them to draw them more than once every blue moon, then my Todoroki tag might tip you off, there lol
Anon said:Will you ever draw Bakukamikiri again? I rlly loved how you did them!!
Thank you!!! And I think I will, though I donā€™t have any project to do so in the near future, sorry!
Anon said:Soo KyouHaba day (6/16) is coming up and was wondering if you could do some seijoh next gen stuff. Yahaba is often forgot about a and Kyoutani isnā€™t really included in a lot of Aoba Johsai stuff. Feel free to not do anything just suggesting something
Aw sorry anon but I donā€™t have the time to do day-themed stuff right now! KyoHaba is currently the hq ship Iā€™m most likely to draw for, though, since theyā€™re the only ones Iā€™m still reading fics for! So I donā€™t think any will come around 6/16, but I donā€™t exclude I might draw them anyway in the near future! :D
Anon said:Omg your taking part in a zine!! Iā€™m so excited! And itā€™s a BakuSquad one too! Ik Iā€™m definitely going to be buying it when pre-orders open up!
Iā€™m taking part in TWO zines, actually!! Both the @takemyhandzine and the @sixthwheelzine !!!!! Iā€™ll be making comics for both, and if you do decide to buy either I really hope youā€™ll like them!!!!
Anon said:whats a zine?
In general, a zine is an amatorially published magazine! Specifically tho here weā€™re talking about fanzines, so magazines put together and published by fans for other fans! The ones Iā€™m taking part in are both about kiribaku, and will include both fanart (fancomics included) and fanfics! Depending on how much you wish to spend on it, you can also buy a bundle with fanmade merch too, and the Sixth Wheel zine is gonna have a pdf version too, in case youā€™d prefer to buy it like that! Theyā€™re super cool projects Iā€™m insanely happy I got invited to take part in!!!!
Anon said:Your art style is so pretty and I love to see your amazing bnha drawing on my dash
There is literally no way I could ever stop being into d gray man ever and Iā€™m also still following hqā€™s manga, yes! I dunno if and when Iā€™ll draw for either fandom next, tho, sorry! ;^;
Anon said:Everytime you draw kiribaku I gain 1 life,,,,, tysm I love ur art SM ur such an inspiration,,,šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’–
Oh my g o d s thank you so much ;^;
Anon said:Your Kiridragon is the cutest, I love him and want Katsuki to protect him forever. Thank you for sharing that last story with us!!! (Ps. Can we expect more Kiridragon adventures in the future? *puppy eyes*)
Thank you for liking him!!!!!! And if youā€™re talking about the fantasy AU in general, Iā€™ll 100% for sure draw more for it! If youā€™re talking about them as kids tho I canā€™t say for sure - I definitely want to, tho, right now!! ;^;
Anon said:As a suggestion, could you maybe do Kiri*Deku, whether it be romantic, platonic, or misinterpreted by Bakugou and he takes Kirishima because thatā€™s his sunshine boy thank you very much, get your own
Aw anon sorry but krdk isā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦. really not my thing, so I donā€™t take suggestions for it ;-; I might end up doodling them in the future anyway since I have in the past, but thatā€™s only gonna be if I find an idea I really really reallyĀ wanna draw, Iā€™m sorry
Anon said:Just wanted to say that I love your art and I just went through a majority of your blog. But I noticed you used to draw erasermic but havenā€™t recently and I was wondering if you still ship it??? Itā€™s okay if you donā€™t or if you just havenā€™t gotten the inspiration recently, Iā€™m just curious. Anyways, keep doing what you do and being amazing
Thank youuuu!!!!! And Iā€™ve actually always drawn erasermic super sporadically! Theyā€™re one of my main ships in the fandom honestly, but since theyā€™re sorta hard to draw for me I rarely end up drawing them? I do still love them with all my heart tho! You can expect to see more of them in the future, for sure ;u;
Anon said:I came for my kiribaku fix (it HAD to be him Iā€™m dying all over again) but. God ur art always blows me tf away ur so good and skilled and ur improvement in likeā€¦ everything inspires me SO much so bless u and I hope u have a WONDERFUL day
Iā€™m so glad I can inspire anyone, oh my g o o o o o o d ;O; thank you so so much!!!!
Anon said:Wow your dragon kiribaku art is so cute! Will there be a sequel!
Not for the immediately after, for now! Since Horikoshi is yet to give me the official design for Kiriā€™s mom //sob - but as I said up there I do want to draw more with them as kids in the fantasy AU, so maybe, yeah!!!
Anon said:I absolutely love EVERY SINGLE facial expression that Bakugou makes in your Fantasy Babies comic strip. Heā€™s such an unapologetic little shit.
THANK YOU!!!!! I was mostly trying to convey the fact that heā€™s too young to think about the consequences of his actions before doing stuff like calling the rage of a dragon mom upon his city l m a o glad you liked him!!! :D
Anon said:The way you draw the baby bois has me weak šŸ’–šŸ’•ā¤ļøšŸ’—šŸ’žšŸ’“šŸ’ That baby dragon Kiri šŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜Š
Thank you so muuuuuucccchhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anon said:EYYYYY! Love your art, the newest comic made me laugh so hard that I almost chocked to death :D (Jk, I just couldnā€™t breathe normally) God bless youuuuuuuuuu
Iā€™m SUPER HAPPY it made you laugh!!!!!! heck!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;^;
Anon said:You content makes my heart go doki doki doki doki doki
THANK!!!! YOU!!!!! SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
Anon said:the way you draw wings is so cool, i love it. your art is just amazing in ggeneral to be honest, like akjdjkhdlkdl
AAAAHHHHHHHH Iā€™M HAPPY YOU LIKE THEM I have so much fun drawing them, honestly!!!
Anon said:I love the fact that mina and kiri are cannonically childhood friends (middle school counts as childhood right??) Like I love their friendship so much and they both deserve the world.
Real, theyā€™re adorable and I wish Horikoshi would actually have them interact a bit more in the manga, since as for now their scenes together are pretty much non-existent aside from their backstory ;^;
Anon said:THEY ANIMATED IT!!! THE HAND GRAB!!! ITā€™S IN MOVING COLOUR!!!
HELL YES I DIED ITā€™S BEEN NEARLY A WEEK AND Iā€™M STILL DYING WHAT A BEAUTIFUL TIME TO BE ALIVE
Anon said:You with your beautiful beautiful art and Chonideno with her beautiful beautiful writing about Kiri and Bakugou makes my heart so happy and warm and justā€¦ Thank you for existing and love Kiribaku! I donā€™t know, your art makes me so happy
Ohhhhhhhhhhh boy what an honor to be put at the same level as mag ;^; I love her and her writing so much, honestly !!!!!! thank you so so much for the compliment, anon!!!!!!!!!!!
Anon said:Kirishima braiding his hair while he talks is both adorable and relatable. Thank you for that.
Iā€™m!!!! mostly happy you caught it hahahaha thank you !!!!!!
Anon said:Hey. You seem insecure but your art is great. What kind of color scheme do you see for Hawks?
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I honestly donā€™t like thinking about stuff I think Hori will give me in canon soon enough? But out of instincts I mostly imagined him in shades of brown, I think - typical birds of prey and/or aviator colors, you know!
Anon said:I love ur drawings but i also love reading ur tag. They re so funny sometimes
lmao thatā€™s good too!! As long as I can make people enjoy a couple of moments of their time I donā€™t really mind how I do it hahaha
Anon said:your art is beautiful anfndfnd
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!
Anon said:Hello fran, just wanted to say iā€™ve been here for a long long time (since the h/q times :ā€˜o) and today i was thinking about some of your old art and if you remember, you had a soulmates au for b/n/h/a that was super good and i really loved so i wanted to tell you!! You as an artist have such an impact on me and that au is my fave of yours!! ;0; have the nicest day ever!! -soulmates anon (4 future ref!!!)
OH MAN Iā€™m so happy to hear you still remember that one?? It was such a fun experiment to play around with, Iā€™m glad you liked it this much!!!! Thank you for telling me omg !!!!! ;^;
Anon said:Hi, so where did you go to watch Haikyuu (Iā€™m assuming probably Crunchyroll but ya never know) and where might I find the dubbed version?
Aw anon sorry I donā€™t watch the dubbed version! Since Iā€™m Italian, I donā€™t really have much use for the English dubs haha Iā€™m pretty sure you can find it on kissanime, tho!
Anon said:could you briefly go through the process of making and completing one of your comics? I wanted to start some short bnha comics but idk where to start, thank you!
Sorry this took me an age to answer - I have answered this question a while back, I think it might be in my art tips tag! But to go through it fast, my process is something like
find a line or an exchange I want to deliver, or a topic I want discussed (usually happens randomly as Iā€™m doing other things)
spend a million years just staring at a wall or at my ceiling or anything else as I build a whole scene in my mind to have the lines or topic take the form of an actual comic (might take two minutes, might take a month)
draw a rough sketch of the whole comic - I do this with all panels (and pages, when I separate a comic in pages) on the same canvas, so that I can look at the whole scene all together and get a good sense of the general flow of the storytelling. This process includes cutting panels, moving panels around, reshaping panels, trying different poses and angles for the same panels to find the right one, writing and deleting and re-writing lines till Iā€™m sure the wording is what Iā€™m going for*
line the panels - I mean the actual panels, the straight lines delimitating the panel, I line them all first and put them on a separate layer
line the people!! All the characters in every panel are lined in this stage
line the backgrounds! In case there are backgrounds and the comic is meant to stay in black and white, if not then color the backgrounds! (I always start coloring from the backgrounds cause theyā€™re the boring parts and if I leave them for last I never do them ever #rip)
in case of black and white comics, we fill in flat, gray-scale colors at this point (or, as Iā€™ve lately started doing, I only put down shadows and leave it at that). If itā€™s in colors, we color the people!
Write down the dialogue!! *at this point we change a lot of the dialogue again because enough time has passed since I sketched it that I changed my mind on everything, donā€™t be like me
youā€™re done!
All of it is done on one single canvas, unless itā€™s a comic with separate paneled pages in which case theyā€™re all done on their own canvas but still drawn all together. Thatā€™s about it, hope it was at least a little bit useful!
Anon said:Hi! I just wanted to thank you for your art, especially your KiriBaku. I was exactly in the same situation than Bakugou in the post tagged ā€œbakugou being blunt about his feelingsā€ (except we are 2 girls) , so I used it to confess to her. She said yes! X3
OH MY GOD Iā€™m so super happy to hear that!!!!! Congrats on your gf, anon!!!!!! *throws hearts at u*
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fantasyimmortal Ā· 6 years
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Review of "Satisfy me"
Since I said so, hereā€™s my detailed review of the positive things I picked up from your fanfiction. All of what I am saying is really just my personal opinion and what are my likes on it. But maybe it helps you a little and makes u happy too, Iā€™d be glad, if I could support u with my feedback. But I am not a professional writer nor professional reviewer myself, I just know the basics and stuff from the time I wrote fanfics myself. Itā€™s up to you, if you wanna publish the following or just answer me in private. So letā€™s get going:
+ The wording:
I wanna start with the obvious: The general writing style. I as a person who rarely reads anything and is hard to get hooked up on something, I have to say that this fanfic has the unique ability to make me keep reading. The way the sentences are phrased, very diversely that it doesnā€™t get boring. But I guess thatā€™s the experience and practice, since I looked though ur Master List, you seem to be a Writer for a little longer already. But yeah, I personally think the choice of words is interesting, keeps the reader reading and makes hungry for wanting to know more and thatā€™s always what keeps a story going.
+ The Story Idea:
Personally I am a huge fan of demon lore and everything surrounding it. So the first glimpse I got of the basic idea got my interest already. I have to say the lore is worked out so well, basing on real life christian religion ā€“ if i am not mistaken ā€“ that I can learn a lot more about it throughout the story. It gives the story depth and makes it tangible. I am simply in love with the concept of Saeran and Luciel being the demon princes of hell and the supporting characters surrounding them. I really dig how u adapted the other characters and made your own as well, fitting in and to the story. The dark fantasy concept is just amazing, since itā€™s already of my liking.
+ The first few Chapters:
I have to admit, I was startled at first by the approach of the first few chapters, but now that I gasped the full story so far, I have to say the first few chapters are the strongest, in my opinion. Not only come they off strong by their wording, but interpreting it makes oneself see, why. It gives the exposition to the character development. It gives actually the first hints of whatā€™s going to happen. It also gives something to compare, which measures character development. I am glad those first few chapters got me hooked up to read further, to get the whole image this far.
+ How the Characters are written:
Saying so already in the previous point, but pointing it out again: The character development, especially for Saeran. I could clearly see his progress in changing over the story so far and it really amazed me. I love comparing character to how they were in the beginning of a story and where they are standing now. It feels impossible that a character would do in the very beginning, what he does later on, and that shows the growth of said character really well. I am exited for how much further heā€™s going to change throughout the rest of the story. Because the development done so far, was a natural and reasonable transition. It wasnā€™t forced, just for the sake of development. Thatā€™s what makes it so great.
But not only he changed, but MC as well. But for her I think the strong points are, which a lot of people would probably point out: She is not the damsel in distress. She herself is a strong character, knowing how to talk and act on her own. One surprising point of how this MC is written, was also the inclusion of her mother. That took a really dark turn, but it compliments the story so well and gives it just even more depth.
Then, the inclusion of OCā€™s, they add up greatly with the already established cast. Also an obvious pick, but Ricward, especially in the latest chapter, is written so fitting for the story and gives a great contrast, to how most characters are portrayed (rather hectic and dramatic, while he is more on the calm and thoughtful side). He has his own charms and is a memorable character.
+ The Humor:
Most of the humor bases on sarcasm, tied to cursing, at least thatā€™s the impression I got. And this humor is simply the best humor, in my opinion. It entertains me a lot, since itā€™s exactly my kind of humor. Itā€™s apparent in scenes where itā€™s fitting for it to be. It loosens up the otherwise tight plot and scenes and shows off another side of the story. Again I have to say, it gives it a certain sense of ā€œrealityā€. And a little breath from all the stress which is otherwise omnipresent. It gives the reader a short break to be ready for the next big thing.
+ The approach on the topic of Sexuality in the story:
I wish to be especially honest with this one, I myself am not that interested in the sexual part of the story, sex is simply not not my thing. And thatā€™s why I think I might be over interpreting with this one. I guess the scenes were planned to pleasure the reader, while I myself have a more observing and analyzing look on those scenes. So my observations thus far are, that the story element of how sexuality is portrait, tries to teach something by comparing the very beginning to where we are right now:
At first the rough sex, iā€™d already call it rape, is presented as a simple and daily thing demons do: Not caring for the other part during it and just using the other person for their own pleasures, not even caring of the person gave their consent. Itā€™s portrait as: How things are in hell. And exactly that motive is still present later on again in the story (the whole arc with Dante so far). But it also shows the development Saeran goes through. He is still a perverted demon to this point, but he started caring for MC while they were having Sex and not only fucks around for fun anymore. Itā€™s a strong point, that you made clear, that he can only fuck her, if she really gives her consent, personally I think thatā€™s one of the most important aspects of it.
Where it really showed, that sex became something more meaningful to him, was the scene, where he showed MC how to masturbate correctly. Present in the same story arc, as the other extreme with Dante and even Saerans thoughts on what Dante was doing to that demon woman. A direct comparing of those two extremes presented in a way that it has a huge impact on the reader. Hands down, that writing deserves a round of applause.
+ The fluff:
Contrasting to the sexual part, I enjoy and love the rather fluffy and lovely parts of the fanfiction. Itā€™s not a silly, corny romance how itā€™s presented in the media all over, that makes us the viewer feel rather awkward watching. No, this one has spice. That makes it really unique, it keeps the rough features, which are mostly presented in the sex scenes, but tones them down, that it becomes adorable without being cheesy or embarrassing. In my opinion itā€™s the perfect way to show a romance in that setting. But I in general really dig this kind of stuff, so this one really reflects my own opinion on it.
+ The scenery:
From the castle in hell, to the setting on earth and especially the clothes they wear. Itā€™s simply my aesthetics. I mentioned it already, when I stated my opinion to the story idea, but I am really amazed by the whole setting. The fanfic gives me a clear image in my head on how everything looks. I know this is more on the interpreting side of things, but whatā€™s established in the story as locations and surroundings is stunning and amazed me to no end. One particular thing I kept in mind as stunningly beautiful ā€“ which I might gonna draw fanart of: Mcā€™s midnight blue dress. Which sadly only survived half a chapter, before Saeran decided to stRip it off her.
Now in the very end, I have a few questions left, Iā€™d like to ask.
Starting with a strange one:
How many pages is the fanfic so far?
I want it for my own comparison, since I mentioned in the very beginning, I am not really someone who reads that much.
Then the next question:
How many more chapters did u plan for the future? If you canā€™t answer that, maybe a rough calculation or a percentage, on how much u wrote so far?
And my last question, which is also personal interest, to review your writing a little bit more for myself:
Did you plan everything till now out from the very beginning? And what are things you added later on? Like a quick idea, inspiration of some sort, you only thought off during writing?
Tied to that: Did you plan on making this such a long fanfiction from the beginning on? Or did the plot and everything around it just developed on and on and on? My guess if that would be the case, itā€™s because of the good feedback of your readers.
Thatā€™s all from me, for now. I can say, I am exited to read more, I look forwards to every update. I am glad I got hooked up with this fanfiction. And if I get to it, Iā€™ll draw some fanart to it. I already made a little sketch inspired by it. But so far, pls keep writing. U are an amazing writer. And thanks a lot for reading all of this.
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Reply is under the cut ^^ <3
OH Wow!!! Iā€™m in awe at how much youā€™ve reviewed!!! Iā€™ll be honest, I was a bit nervous about what you would say ^^;;. I know you didnā€™t write the negative (which I appreciate it!!) but I hope the positive outweighed it!! This review means a lot to me!!! One of the negatives I could maybe guess though, is theĀ ā€œ______ā€ I put in my writing since it has come up before. If thatā€™s one of them, the reason I do is because MC or Y/N is cringy to me and I absolutely loathe using it. >_<
I actually only started writing fanfiction January of last year so it hasnā€™t been too long for me. Iā€™ve tried to write like someone is watching a movie, I watch scenes in my head and try to portray them into words. Iā€™m not expert and I know I need improvement with sentence structure and editing, which Iā€™ve actually thought about going back to school for because I would like some day to get published.
How many pages is the fanfic so far?Ā  I didnā€™t start putting the chapters on the same word document until chapter 31. But chapter 31-50 are 48 pages on Word. There is 70,423 total words currently in the fic.
How many more chapters did u plan for the future?Ā  At it stands I think Satisfy only has about 10 chapters left, depending on how I get to the main plot points. But Iā€™ve already been bouncing ideas off my friends for a sequel because of the ending I have planned.
Did you plan on making this such a long fanfiction from the beginning on? Iā€™m going to answer this one first because I NEVER thought that this fic would grow to what it has! Iā€™m still humbled on how many people enjoy and love it. I thought that it would be a WIP that I would abandon because readers would absolutely hate it! When I started to get so much positive feedback and interest I was getting I had the urge to continue.
Did you plan everything till now out from the very beginning? I did not. I had a few things planned at the beginning and sometimes I just let my mind wander and my fingers follow just to see what I would come up with. An example is Ricward. I had planned to have him in one or two chapters, and having his appearance at a minimum. As I was writing him though, I wanted him to show up more and more for the calm balance he brought. I have a backstory for him but havenā€™t shared it yet because it could be a spoiler on who exactly he really is.Ā 
Zophiel is another one. I havenā€™t decided yet if he will show up again right now but he will be in the sequel and will find out more about him. As Iā€™m writing the final chapters he may very well show up if I feel he needs to make an entrance to help tie the story together. I didnā€™t want to have the typical everyone in the RFA and wanted to give the story some things extra, which brought out the OCs, it also allowed me to be more creative.Ā 
All the ideas Iā€™ve had before writing arenā€™t set in stone because they could always change once I sit down and actually start writing. Getting from idea A to idea B could end up changing what I want to happen in plot point B (if that makes sense ^^;;)Ā 
At the beginning I didnā€™t plan on having other demons or torture and ended up researching both for hours trying to give some accuracy to my writing. With the scene being in Hell I thought that torture would be a good touch. I also wanted to get practice in writing different scenes for any future fanfictions I may write.
Thank you again for this review and putting in the time to write it lovely!! I would also LOVE to see some fanart. I fangirl all the time when I see fanarts!! To inspire anyone to want to draw something is such an amazing feeling!!!Ā 
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