2020 Fic Meme
It happens every year like clockwork. The Fic Round-Up Meme. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t looking forward to it this year because I’ve written so much. As usual, compiled from ancient Livejournal fic memes. I like doing it as kind of a time capsule of my writing. If anyone else wants to take a crack, feel free. I love reading writers’ throughs on their own work. <3 No tagging because that is PRESSURE.
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12 Days of Fic-Mas (Twilight, WIP) Day 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 + Christmas Eve
Twelve days of fic extracts, previews, and drabbles focusing on Alice Cullen and Jess/Jasper Hale: Anathema, the KidFic, Married in Vegas, Daemons, Memento Vivere, Human Alice Kills James, Jess and Alice do Prom, Forgotten, Vampires in Vegas, Shadow to Light Missing Scene, Hybrid, Cowboys and Angel Solstice, and All These Broken Things
Afterglow (Alice/Jasper, AU, Romance, G) There were three things of which she was certain. The first was that her name was Alice. The second was that she was born an angel. And three, she was getting ready to die.
Against a Wall (Alice/Jasper, Human/Vampire AU, Romance, Angst, PG) If you asked anyone with the surname ‘Whitlock’, they’d tell you that the family was cursed. It was the Whitlock Curse to blame the day the bank took the ranch away from Jasper’s own father.
And Found (Alice/Jasper, Soulmark AU, Romance, PG) The soul mark appears when Alice is six. It is a twisted ribbon of a mark, from the inside of her left elbow, up her arm, over her shoulder, along her clavicle, over her right shoulder and down to her right wrist. What ugly, soulless individual could inspire such a mark?
Jar of Hearts Pt 1 Pt 2 (WIP) (Alice, Emmett, Seth, MCU xover, Angst, PG) The snap came for everyone - “He said he’d never leave me,” she says in a wobbly voice. “He promised me.”“It wasn’t by choice,” Emmett rushes to tell her. “You were his last thought; he tried so hard to get home before he…”
Never a Question (Alice/Jasper, AU, Angst, G) Carlisle is quite sure that he’s watching his son’s heart break into a million pieces as he stares at his human mate, slowly dying alone, not a single person allowed to hold her hand.
Hand in Hand (Alice/Jasper, AU, Fluff, G) “Never,” he swears, pressing a kiss to her cheek that makes her beam - “There’s not a single moment I can think of that cannot be improved by your presence, darlin’.”
Love & Duty (Alice/Jasper, AU, Romance, G) A trainee witch is sent to treat a wounded cowboy from her brother coven.
Shadow to Light (WIP) (Alice/Jasper, AU Angst, PG) In 1918, Jasper lures the newborn known as Mary-Alice back to Monterrey. He is lost to her before it even begins. (Ch 6-8)
The Way of Things (Alice/Jasper, AU, Drama, M) She truly doesn’t know what comes next. He truly doesn’t know if it will be good or bad. They will live this life for as long as it lasts, long may it last, surrounded by the people they love and trust.
What You Say (Alice/Jessamine, Canon, Angst, M) Edward might have thought Aro was their reckoning, but Alice knows for her, it is Jessamine’s hurt.
Total number of completed stories: ELEVEN.
Total word count: 90,155 words were formally posted - not including snippets, previews (aside from FicMas) or anything that was shared on the Discord server.
Looking back, did you write more fic than you thought you would this year, less, or about what you’d predicted? I fucking nailed it. Like, seriously. THREE chapters of Shadow to Light? Every single day of JaliceWeek AND FicMas? I mean, I think the lockdown definitely helped with free time, and not going to lie, the iOS shutdown of Fortnite probably assisted my productivity.
What pairing/genre/fandom did you write that you would never have predicted in January? The Discord has so much to answer for. I wrote porn. Like, what. What. What. What. I find this bizarre and did not have ‘let’s just go full NC17 in 2020′ on my bingo card, but it happened. In fact, 2019 Lexie has just gone full spit-take and yelled, “WHAT?!” at the top of her lungs.
And to make it more surprising, it’s both het and f/f porn. Like, mind-blown. Who am I anymore?
What’s your own favourite story of the year? Not the most popular, but the one that makes you happiest? The Way of Things, What You Say, And Found, & Afterglow. All fics that came together really well, that felt like *me*, and had hopeful endings. I’m really proud of them.
STL doesn’t get an opportunity to be apart of this til it’s finished.
Did you take any writing risks this year? What did you learn from them? The porn.
Apparently, I can write it. Who knew?
I definitely threw caution to the wind with JaliceWeek and just went for whatever crossed my mind and stopped worrying so much. Like, whatever, this is what I want to write so I will. I mean, the MCU crossover is happening in a slightly more obscure way than I initially envisaged it, it’s definitely a better fic for it.
I joined the Discord, and that’s been amazing. I’ve spent my last few fandoms existing in kind of a vacuum because of bad experiences and the fact I’m usually doing something niche, so having people to talk to who are so nice and welcoming and are happy to ignore my special brand of obnoxiousness is so lovely and has had such a good affect on my mental health. Sometimes you need people you can be your dorkiest self with.
My instincts are pretty good as far as fic goes, people are awesome, and I can write sex scenes. It’s been a learning curve, let me tell you that.
Do you have any fanfic or profic goals for the New Year? I have to balance grad school, my business, and my writing, so that’s going to be interesting. I think I need to look at my fic more as downtime than a high-stress ‘job’ because I LOVE writing it. I love writing. I love reading. But I get in my own head and overthink. So my goals are BALANCE and RELAX.
My best story of this year: Oh man, that’s not something I can judge. I am so incredibly proud of how Afterglow, And Found, and The Way of Things turned out. Especially considering I was so behind with JaliceWeek, and I think I was putting out a fic a day, and freaking out because I was lacking ideas, so when these three just came together exactly how I wanted them, it was a good moment.
My most popular story: Shadow to Light. Look, if that’s my legacy to fandom, I’ve done pretty damn well. I’m really, really appreciative of how enthusiastic people are about this ‘verse. I don’t always understand it, because I can see how my writing has changed and how the story has evolved massively (first it was supposed to be a one-shot, then five chapters.) I hope that it ends up being satisfying for everyone because I have LOVED writing it, even if I am slower than molasses.
Story of mine most under-appreciated by the universe, in my opinion: Everyone is always so damn enthusiastic about my writing. I think maybe Hybrid is kind of a big question mark for everyone at the moment because there are so many questions and no answers yet.
And any of the Jessamine/Alice. That’s a new niche, I get not everyone is into it. But it’s happening and will continue into 2020.
Most fun story to write: What You Say or Jess and Alice at Prom. Jess is a little snarkier than Jasper, less controlled, and the girls are super fun to write, even high-tension scenes.
Most Sexy Story: Oh, I can answer this now! Um, maybe The Way of Things or Jess and Alice at Prom? Yup, those are my picks.
Story with the single sexiest moment: The Way of Things. This happened before the Discord Intervention, and I’m genuinely not sure if I’m happy with the end of the Prom fic, so it might be reworked slightly in the future. But The Way of Things I was really happy with because it covered so many ideas I had in a way that fit together well.
That’s where she makes good on her unspoken promises from aeons again, of their private victory celebration. She sits astride him, her hips rolling hard against his, drawing out his groans and growls as he grips her thighs almost tight enough to crack. Their gazes are locked the entire time, her tongue skimming over her lips, as she lets her emotions tell him everything that she wants and everything she plans to take.
He remembers fucking her in the dirt in Dacia; his mouth between her legs as she hollered obscenities in a Paris attic; and the urgent, passionate loving-making of a marriage finally consummated.
She remembers bloody emeralds looped around her throat and resting between her breasts as she gets down on her knees and takes him into her mouth, his fingers tangled in her hair; the delicious weight of him on top of her, their sweat mingling and cooling in the frozen night as their flimsy bed creaked against the wall; and his soft encouragement in her ear as he grasps her around the waist, their hands resting together on the gentle swell of her stomach.
Most “holy crap, that’s wrong, even for you” story: I think I restrained myself from anything too dark or twisted this year, actually. Oh, wait, Vampires in Vegas. That one has some pretty dark implications about Alice’s life, about the vampire underworld, and Jasper’s behaviour, especially as it goes one. No fic that deals with someone being put into sex work without educated consent is going to avoid being dark, and I think it’s logical that vampires would have their hands in a lot of illegal yet profitable areas.
Story that shifted my own perceptions of the characters: Anything with Jessamine/Alice because, like, Jess isn’t a name-swap of Jasper, and the relationship dynamic shifts with the slight personality shifts. And then you have to consider the family and social dynamic of two women in the relationship, so working all that out was fun.
Jar of Hearts is another one, because I had to work out who the fic was going to follow and what was lost. And Emmett and Alice pretty much don’t interact in canon, but they were chosen for a reason. I’ve stripped them down to their worst, most isolated selves without their ‘true north’ (Rose and Jasper) or their moral center (Carlisle and Esme), or even their secret weapon (Edward). Seth, too, has been isolated from his family and friends, and is especially ‘other’ in this situation. This is an MCU crossover, so we’re kind of following a heroes’ journey with the last of Forks’ supernatural creatures.
Hardest story to write: Shadow to Light because of the way I have to use language, because of the plot strands from canon when I hate writing canon material, and how the characters have changed and how this new version reflects the old version.
Against a Wall, as well, because of the in-verse time crunch I had - I needed Jasper damaged, military-minded, and changed by age 19. And I needed the boy broken. I’m happy with it, the story is done and dusted, but it didn’t quite turn out how I planned. And that’s okay, because I like this version. But I think I tackled something a lot bigger than I anticipated with it.
Most disappointing: Look, I love the verse and the set-up, but I think Love & Duty could do with another 2k words for build-up. I just ran out of time, honestly, to build up that mutual attraction between Alice and Jasper.
Easiest story to write: Anathema, because Alice’s voice was so clear in it. Anathema!Alice knows exactly who she is, and that’s always fun. And the Shadow to Light Missing Scene; it wasn’t as long as I hoped, but it turned out exactly as I imagined it happening.
Biggest surprise: Everyone really, really liked Forgotten. And Vampires in Vegas, which I honestly thought were the weakest offerings during FicMas.
Most unintentionally telling story: The Way of Things. There’s so little dialogue, and it’s covering such a massive amount of time and story that it’s intentionally written to tell.
Story I’d like to revise: Love & Duty, and Married in Vegas. A little polish, a little shine, it’s fine. For Love & Duty, it’s definitely the time crunch I need to go back and fix; for Married in Vegas, it’s just reflective of how long ago I started it. I’m a better writer, I know the characters more, and I’m less prone to overly dramatic plot twists.
Story I didn’t write but will at some point, I swear: Look, let me lay the groundwork now so that no one who isn’t on the Discord isn’t startled.
There’s going to be a Jess/Jasper/Alice threesome fic, and I regret nothing.
I really, really want to get All These Broken Things redone and posted because it’s getting silly how long it’s just been sitting there.
I want to actually write Monster, which is a fic I don’t talk about much but I want to write. It’s a question about who the monster of the story is, and I’m not sure I’m as skilled as I should be, to write it, but I want to try.
And one of my numerous attempts at a Haunted House Cryptid fic. It has to happen, I have so many ideas!
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Little Arrow Chapter 4: How This World is Ended
Solavellan, Post-Trespasser Kidfic. Ongoing.
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Someone tried to tell her about the Dread Wolf, once. Evie doesn’t remember how young she was at the time. Before she met Solas, she thinks. Very young, either way.
She doesn’t remember who it was—someone who had an accent like Mamae’s, she thinks. Maybe Una, who always looks after her while Mamae’s away.
She remembers only a little of it. Sitting on her lap, while Una—or not-Una—spoke in a soft, low voice, the kind people only use for the most important stories. Like when Cassandra talks about Andraste, when she thinks Evie can’t hear.
She doesn’t remember much of it. Only that Fen'Harel tricked someone, but she doesn’t think it was a very good trick. And that after he did it, he laughed, and laughed, like the bad guys in Varric’s stories.
Mamae had been very angry, when she’d found out. Evie remembers that.
Now, she thinks she understands why.
The people who have taken her won’t let her walk—and they keep whatever spell they’ve cast on her going, so she’s too dizzy to even if they tried to make her. It comes and goes—she thinks they must have to recast it, or maybe they lose concentration.
She only catches snatches of their conversation as they make their way through a world of broad shadows and impossibly bright lights.
“Looks like Fen'Harel’s following that false trail you laid,” one of them says, right before they shove Evie to her knees in front of a lake. The cold of the water on her palms is what shocks the worst of the spell away from her mind. She feels it rushing over her fingers as they dig into the riverbank for balance, hears the movement of water and thinks—not lake, river.
“How do you know?” someone else asks, frantic. “How do any of us know? What If he’s just behind that tree, waiting to turn us all to stone?”
She tries to remember any of the people coming to visit her talk about a river, but the only one she knows is the one that winds through camp.
Someone laughs. It sounds low, and a touch desperate. “We’ve got a worse fate than stone waiting for us if the Dread Wolf catches us.”
Evie opens her eyes, but the light reflecting off the water is awfully bright. It makes her head spin, and her stomach roll, and she nearly collapses face first in the mud.
That voice…
That’s the man who…
“Make her drink,” he snaps. “She’s useless to us dead.”
That’s the man who killed Mamae.
Evie tries to get up—get to her feet, grab his leg, shove him in the river, do something—but she feels a heavy hand on her neck, and her face is shoved into the rushing water.
She reaches, instinctively and blindly, for her magic, even as she breathes in a mouthful of river water. It sparks around her, frantic and useless, still too weak for her to call on with any strength, but it makes whoever’s holding her let her go, surprised.
Before she can react though, someone else grabs her.
“Idiot!” he shouts. And then he yells some other things, too, but that hazy spell is falling over her again, and everything just sounds far, far away.
Sometimes, she comes to, only to find herself slung over a shoulder as they move through places where she looks up and sees ground, or there are bushes with leaves of colours she’s never seen before—
She tries to scream, and struggle, and bite the ear of the person carrying her or dig her nails into the gaps in their armour. From the moment that fog begins to lift to the moment it falls back over her mind again she fights, and hot, angry tears stream down her face.
“You killed her,” she screams, as loud as she can, over and over.
One time, she hears the person carrying her call her, “Fen'Harel’s demon brat,” just before the spell slips into place again, and her every thought is jumbled up, her vision fogged over, her limbs limp.
Every time she comes out of it, each time opening her eyes to somewhere completely different from the last, her panic rises.
Where are they taking her? How long has she been out?
How long has Mamae been lying there? Did Cole find her before she…
Could Evie had helped her, if she screamed louder? Fought harder? Ran faster, back to camp, where everyone could help?
And then, after all those thoughts race through her head, she’ll hear the voice of the man who killed Mamae, and the only thought she has is, this is your fault, and the only thing she wants to do is make him hurt.
And that’s all she tries to do, until they put the spell on her again.
They won’t let her sleep. Even if they did, she doesn’t know what she would tell Solas. She can’t seem to collect her thoughts enough to figure out where she is—she couldn’t even tell him what the trees look like, or what time of day it is.
All she knows is that she gets thirstier, and hungrier, and weaker, every time she comes around.
They stop trying to make her eat and drink because she just keeps biting their hands.
Who is Fen'Harel, she has time to wonder, one near-lucid moment. It’s raining, hard enough she can’t hear anything but the hammer of water on stone and the long, drawn out roll of thunder in the sky.
Her father, apparently. And a frightening enough figure that everyone who has taken her is utterly terrified of him.
And that… that just gets her mad all over again.
Because—because if she’s important enough to matter, to keep in some bubble and never be let out, to chase down when people take her, then why was he never there?
Mamae was there, she thinks, sullenly. Cole. Dorian. Sera. Bull. Solas…
Solas.
Whose eyes are just grey, and it doesn’t mean anything that hers are, too. Who is just kind to her because he’s in love with her Mamae.
And now Mamae’s…
“It’s fading again,” someone mutters, and Evie realises she’s crying as she chokes on a sob.
“We’re almost there,” another person says, as they cast the spell again.
--
She comes to for the final time on a hard, cold stone floor. People are shouting, but her head is spinning too much still to make out what they’re saying.
No one’s holding her, though—and though people seem to be pacing, she doesn’t think they’re running for their lives anymore. It’s dry, but she thinks she can hear thunder in the distance—or something loud, anyway.
She risks opening her eyes. It’s dark enough that she’s not immediately dizzy, but there is a weird green light somewhere in the room that casts everything in misshapen shadows.
She’s hungry, so hungry that her stomach feels tight and hard, and it honestly just hurts more than anything. She’s thirsty, too. Her mouth is dry, her throat rough, her lips cracked and bleeding. She curls her fingers on the stone, and they tremble as she moves.
One of her nails is broken in half. The exposed nail bed is covered in old, dried blood, and dirt, and the pain is a dull, lingering throb that is answered by an ache that burns throughout her whole body.
But it’s the nail bed that she stares at. Swollen slightly, probably infected. Left to heal on its own, no attention given to clean it or treat it.
Mamae never let her go without cleaning the smallest cut, and bandaging it up nice, or asking Dorian or Vivienne or Solas to heal it for her.
Mamae…
Her eyes hurt. Her everything hurts.
But focusing on the hurt slowly clears the fog from her mind. As she blinks, the world gets a little easier to make out, she can make out more of the room she’s in. She can see people pacing back and forth, and their words become less and less hazy until she can almost understand them.
Almost.
Then someone kneels in front of her, and helps her sit up against something hard and cold at her back. She tries, weakly, to struggle, but she can’t. And they are gentle, surprisingly--their hands unfamiliar, and rough, but they do not grab at her, or cover her mouth when she makes a small noise of protest.
They press a hand to her forehead, and Evie feels the veil shift, and all of a sudden the fog lifts from her mind.
She gasps, blinking rapidly at the man kneeling before her. He has very yellow eyes, and he has very hard features, but he is looking at her with something like pity, or regret.
He brings a cup with water to her mouth, and she drinks, greedily.
“Slowly, da’len,” he tells her when she chokes. “Slowly.”
Everyone else in the room has stopped arguing. They’re all so quiet, Evie can hear sound coming in from outside.
It’s far away, but it sounds like… like metal on metal. Like spells being cast. People shouting.
Kind of like how Varric describes great battles, when he tells his stories.
When Evie takes the cup from the man he stands and walks over to the others, who stand on the other side of the room and stare at Evie like she’s about to explode. It’s the people who took her—the man who killed Mamae, and everyone with him.
Beside them, on a pedestal of stone and casting that weird green light all over the room, is the orb from Solas’s dream.
“What have you done?” the nice man asks in Elvhen, and the silence in the room is broken.
“Only what I had to,” the man who killed Mamae snaps. “Only what my hand has been forced to do, Sorrow, by those who are too weak to act.”
She thinks she’s heard wrong, at first—Solas and Mamae have been teaching her, but she still makes mistakes sometimes—but then she realises that the nice man’s name is Sorrow. Abelas.
Abelas crosses his arms over his chest. “Taken a child from her mother? Nearly killed her on the way here? If you expect to blackmail the Dread Wolf with the life of his child, you could have brought her any place but his own stronghold, and perhaps bothered to feed her.”
“That’s no child,” someone snaps. “That demon nearly bit my hand off.”
“I can’t imagine what you might have done to deserve that,” Abelas retorts, dry.
They start talking too fast, and all over one another, too fast for Evie to understand. So she drinks the water—the cup, it seems, never gets empty—and reaches, tentatively, for her magic.
It answers, and she has to bite back a sigh of relief. It’s as strong as if it never left her, and though she’s tempted to call up a barrier and make a run for it, the only door she can see looks heavy, and when she looks at it more closely, she can make out the shimmer of magic keeping it shut—just a force spell, like Dorian sometimes uses to lift things.
Weird, she thinks. Wouldn’t it just be easier to ask the Veil to do it?
But the Veil feels strange, here. Hard and brittle, like the thin layers of ice that sometimes form at the edges of the river when it’s very cold out. But also like something is building behind it—something old and very, very angry—and all it needs is one little crack to break free.
The orb sits in the middle of it all—the Veil thinnest around it, and it feels like that angry thing pressing the hardest right there.
Every time she looks at the orb, it almost feels like whatever that thing is looks right back at her, and she feels something like a hot breath or a flame on the back of her neck.
Someone shouts, suddenly louder than all the others, and Evie’s attention snaps back to the argument in the middle of the room.
“You have ruined the cause you claim you are furthering,” Abelas shouts. “Our forces are divided, slaughtering each other just outside that door while both the Inquisition and the Dread Wolf draw closer, and for what? To hurt him? To force him to rend this world asunder, by placing his child in harm’s way?”
“I had children,” the man who killed her mother snarls. “Two of them, boys, with their mother’s eyes. Do you know how they died, Abelas, while you were holed up in your temple and mourning the loss of a monster? When the Dread Wolf put up his veil? They were in the city of glass, in the crystal lake. Serving a noble who worshipped Falon’Din, and when the magic left, the water rushed in. They drowned, trapped in a glass room, the air just above them, and they could not reach it.”
“Many children died,” Abelas retorts. “If you think bringing down the Veil will bring them back, then you are mistaken.”
“I don’t care what it does,” he snaps, his eyes hard, magic crackling at his fingertips. “I care that he hesitates now, when we are in ruins. Not when it could have saved my children—not when it could save anyone but his own flesh and blood.”
Abelas seems to realise something, then, even as everyone else in the room just begins to look more confused.
“Sarvis,” someone says, “what are you saying? What about the empire? You said she could bring it back, just like Fen'Harel.”
“You’re mad,” Abelas says, slowly uncrossing his arms and reaching for his sword.
“This world was never meant to be,” Sarvis says, “and I don’t particularly care how it is ended.”
Abelas draws his sword at the same time as Sarvis drops to one knee, and a rush of magic surges out from him, crashing over everyone in the room.
They all go flying—Evie is just out of the blast range herself but she watches with wide eyes as they all hit walls, crying out, and fall to the ground in heaps of limbs and clothing.
Abelas crashes into the wall near her, almost close enough for her to reach. He hits the ground and rolls a little, and she stares down at him as he gasps for breath, like all the air has been sucked out of his lungs and he can’t get it back.
“Run,” he coughs out, in Trade.
In the center of the room, Sarvis stands and dusts off his hands, as if he has been cleaning out an aravel. The orb is glowing brighter now, and the presence on the other side of the veil feels like it’s all around her, like a heavy smoke tainting the air.
As Sarvis starts to walk towards her with urgent strides, Evie tries to stand up.
Her legs give out from under her, too weak to use, and she crashes hard to the floor.
She throws up a barrier, frantic, desperate, but the Veil is too brittle for it to work properly, and before she can strengthen it Sarvis is there, dispelling her efforts with a thought and grabbing her by her arm.
“Let me go!” she shouts, her voice scraping at her throat, but no matter how she tries to struggle Sarvis only yanks on her harder. She tries to make him let go—but there’s nowhere to dig her nails in, nowhere to press or pinch that isn’t covered in armour. Any spell she tries fails, useless, as he drags her toward the orb at the center of the room.
All the while, the thing on the other side of the veil presses closer, and closer, and it almost feels like it’s grabbing at her. Pushing her closer, because Sarvis isn’t moving fast enough.
She struggles, and she fights, and she yells, but in the end Sarvis drags her up to that pedestal, and presses her palms flat against the orb.
It’s very, very cold.
And then suddenly it’s not. It’s—it’s hot. The light from the orb rushes out, and she feels energy wash over her, through her, and she feels like every bit of her is full of static, all of a sudden, and then the static turns to fire, and it starts to burn—
And then, just when it starts to hurt, all that energy shifts. She can still feel it, filling her up, but it moves from her skin to Sarvis’s armour, where he’s holding her wrists, and as she stares up at then as the magic starts to eat away at the armour, like the river pulls at the bank.
It happens so quickly, she barely sees it. It’s like she blinks, and Sarvis doesn’t have hands any more. And then his arms are gone, and he’s screaming, and—
And then he’s not screaming any more, because he doesn’t have a face.
Evie watches in horror as the light begins to reach out from the orb in thick, heavy tendrils—almost solid enough to touch. It passes over her, briefly, before snapping out like a whip, directly at the closest person lying on the floor.
It eats his leg before he can even start screaming.
And it’s not enough. It’s going to keep going—whatever it’s looking for in her, every time it washes over her like a wave, she doesn’t have enough of it. She tries to pull her hands off the orb but it’s stuck, so she only succeeds in falling over and hitting the ground hard.
She manages to sit up just as the second man vanishes into thin air, dissolved by twisted magic. And then it snaps out again, reaching right for Abelas this time—
Evie closes her eyes and does the only thing she knows how—she throws up a barrier around herself, as hard and fast as she can.
Something’s different about it, this time. She doesn’t just pull at her own magic—she feels something else guiding the Veil along with her magic, drawing it in a wide circle around the center of the room, curving over her like a dome.
It takes so little effort. She just thinks about it, and it’s done.
She looks up, wide-eyed and breathless. She can see her barrier, glowing with a strange green light, and trapped within it is the energy coming off the orb. She can see what was left outside slowly disappearing into the air, suddenly harmless.
What remains within, however, still hovers in the air—it moves along the edges of her barrier, searching for a weakness.
And when it doesn’t find one, it all pulls back into Evie.
She screams. And screams. And screams.
It feels like every nerve in her skin is on fire—like every part of her body is burning, or maybe like a big flame has just caught in her chest, and it’s rapidly spreading to the rest of her. She tries to let go of the orb, tries to throw it across the room, but nothing works—it’s like it’s been burned into her skin, and it’s carving a path along every vein from there to her heart, and holding her with an iron grip.
She doesn’t know how long she stays like that—it feels like forever, but it could only be a few minutes—before she hears the door burst open with an explosive force, and the rush of armoured feet running on hard stone floor.
“Evie!”
She looks up, towards the source of the voice. “Dorian?” she asks.
And—there he is. Rushing up to her barrier so fast as if he could barrel right through it. But he can’t pass through, so he only hits it uselessly with his fists. At his side is Bull, sword drawn and his eyes wide with fear, Sera just at his back looking even more frightened, Varric with Bianca, and…
And Solas.
Solas looks terrified.
“Da’assan,” Solas calls, “It’s going to be alright, I promise. Just—just hold on.”
He looks like he’s in physical pain, and Evie—she can’t even look at him, right now, so she drops her gaze back to the orb in her hands.
She hears a dull, echoing thud as Dorian pounds on the barrier. “Let us in!” he calls, “Evie, drop the barrier. Drop it now.”
Evie tries to shake the orb out of her grip one more time, but it’s useless. She shakes her head, furiously.
“Come on,” Varric says, “we’re not mad you snuck out. I frankly can’t believe it hadn’t happened yet. Let’s just all go home and talk it over, okay? Just drop the barrier.”
“No,” she says, and it sounds broken to her own ears. Rough and raw. “I—I can’t. It’s—It’ll kill you, if I do.”
“We don’t have time for this,” Dorian says.
“No!” Solas shouts, and everyone stops.
It’s so loud and sudden that Evie looks up at him, startled.
His jaw is tight, and he has his hands flat on the barrier. “She doesn’t have the strength to power the orb,” he says, and she’s never heard him sound like this before. Like he’s trying to sound calm, but there’s something about the way he’s speaking that just sounds frantic. “Look.”
Evie glances over to the pedestal, which is slowly being eaten away by magic.
“If she drops that barrier,” Solas finishes, “we all die.”
“If she doesn’t?” Sera yells.
The pedestal vanishes, and the magic surges back to Evie again. She screams, doubling over the orb in pain.
“Then she loses concentration on the barrier and we all die,” Dorian finishes.
“Or the orb kills her first,” Solas corrects. “Da’assan. Evie. Look at me.”
She does. It’s hard to see him through her tears and the storm of magic raging around her but there he is, his fingers curling against the barrier as if he could walk through it and hold her. As if he desperately wants to.
“I can help you,” he says. “But you need to let me in.”
“I thought we just said don’t do that,” Sera shouts, but Bull hushes her.
“You just have to guide the barrier to let me pass. Just—just don’t drop it, alright? Just allow one person through. That’s all.”
Evie looks back down at the orb and shakes her head.
“Da’assan,” he says. “Please. I can help you, please.”
“No,” she says, her voice catching. Her tears are falling in big, ugly drops onto the orb, and hissing away into steam the moment they touch it. “No—you have to go. Before—before it hurts you, too.”
“Evie—”
“They killed Mamae,” she shouts. The orb flares in her hands, so bright that for a moment everything is white, but her barrier holds, and the magic doesn’t stop burning her. “They killed her because of me and—and I can’t. I can’t let that happen again. If I let you in, you’ll die, and—”
She sobs, so hard that she can’t speak for a moment. Her whole body trembles as she curls around the orb, as if her body can protect everyone else in the room from it.
No one says anything, while she collects herself.
“Solas,” she says, “I know—I know that Fen'Harel’s my father, now. But I—but I always wanted you to be my Papae instead. So please, go. I can’t—I can’t—”
It surges again, and she screams so hard that it feels like a knife splits open her throat—and it burns, but she can’t keep screaming so she stops, and just breathes, and cries.
Solas lets out a small, pained sound. Kind of like it’s supposed to be a laugh, or it would be in any other place. At any other time.
“Da’assan,” he says, “I am Fen'Harel.”
She looks up at him. Through her tears, she can see that he’s crying, too.
“I am your father,” he says, his hands flat on the barrier, pressing as close to it as he can. “I created that orb in your hands to end this world, but—Evie, the moment I met you, I lost all resolve to do what had to be done. I was only too foolish to see it.”
He tries to smile, but it comes out as a grimace.
“Evie,” he says, “I have—I have ruined so many beautiful things in my life. I can’t watch that happen to you. Please.”
She just keeps staring at him. Like—like maybe he’s lying, or maybe she hasn’t heard him right. Like the pain is making her think that what she wants to happen is happening, or she’s dreaming and she’s not supposed to say yes—
But it’s not a dream. And he’s standing there, crying, and no one else is saying anything at all, and he just looks so frightened and so, so desperate.
“Okay,” she says. “Okay. Tell me—tell me what to do.”
His shoulders sag with obvious relief, but the worry in his expression does not ease.
“It’s like—it’s like finding me in the Fade,” he begins. “But I will reach for you, instead. You’ll feel it on the barrier—you just have to guide the barrier along the path I show you, but do not let it break.”
Evie closes her eyes. “What if I can’t?”
“Evie, look at me,” Solas says. “You chased me halfway across the dreaming without knowing what you were doing. You escaped a barrier crafted by the brightest mages of this era. You’ve just now made a barrier to keep an ancient magic at bay—you can do this. But we have to act now. Are you ready?”
“Wait,” Dorian says.
When Evie looks at him, he’s staring at her—his hands balled into fists at his side. There’s a big cut on his forehead, and a smeared trail of blood running down his face, like he’s wiped at it with the back of his hand a few times. As he glances at Solas, then back to Evie again, his eyes look… utterly lost. Like he can’t decide what to do.
“How can we trust that this wasn’t all some trick?” he asks. But he doesn’t sound like the last time Evie heard him speak with Solas—not angry, not demanding anything. Just… pleading. “How do I know that you’re not—not lying to us all? That you didn’t orchestrate every second of this?”
Solas just meets Dorian’s gaze, either one looking every bit and lost and desperate as the other.
The power surges again—and as Evie screams her vision goes white, for a split second, and she can’t feel anything but heat and pain, so intense that when she blinks it takes a moment for her to see anything at all.
Everyone is shouting all at once.
Solas is screaming her name.
“Papae,” she whimpers, curling over the orb in her hands, and it’s the only plea she can make.
She feels Solas reach for her, then—feels it almost like a physical thing, like his hand on her shoulder. Or just behind it, rather. As if it’s that simple—as if he’s just moving to reassure her after she’s had a bad dream and he’s helped her out of it, and he’s waiting to see if she wants him to comfort her.
It’s the most natural thing in the world to say please, help me.
It doesn’t seem like anything changes. Her magic shifts, and the barrier holds, and she wonders if she’s done it right.
But then Solas is there, crushing her to him. The orb pressed between them as his arms wrap around her and pulls her as close as he can, as he kisses her forehead and says, “I’m here, Evie, I’m here.”
Part of her worries that it’s going to eat him up, like everyone else. But she doesn’t have the energy to pull away anymore—she can barely even lean into him, and let her tears fall on the soft fabric of his vest as she breathes in the smell of him. He smells like ash, like blood, like sweat, like smoke, burnt hair and skin—and underneath all that he smells like the Fade, like the air before a storm, like the forest that is her home, like a campfire with fir bark in it so it’ll burn hotter in the cold winter air.
As if from somewhere far, far away, she can feel his magic whirling all around them, so dizzyingly fast that she can’t even dream of keeping up.
Something hits the top of her barrier and shatters. She distantly feels Solas turn from her a little—shouting over his shoulder, “Get everyone out of here!”
She doesn’t know if they listen to him--all she can hear is the storm whirling around her, and Solas’s voice as he draws her tighter still.
“Hold on Evie,” he begs her. “Hold on, please.”
She can’t answer him. Everything hurts, and it’s all too bright, she feels like the whole world is burning too hot and too fast, and he’s her only anchor in this storm that’s howling around her so loud that soon she can’t even hear him, and after a little while she can’t even feel his arms around her, or his heart hammering against his chest where he’s pulled her so close.
She doesn’t know how long it goes on. It could be forever—it could be a minute.
But eventually, something gives with a great, mighty shudder. And then, bit by bit, she starts to feel things again—the throbbing of her broken nail. The dry, chapped skin of her lips. Cold, hard stone under her—the warmth of Solas’s chest against hers, his hand in her hair as he rocks her back and forth, his sobs as he begs her to wake up.
“Papae?” she chokes out, uncertain.
She can’t tell if the sound he makes is a laugh or a sob.
“Da’assan,” he says, and she can feel his tears in her hair when he pulls back and kisses her forehead. “Oh, da’assan.”
And then he pulls back again—looking her over with red, puffy eyes, as he tries to wipe old tears from her face with his thumb.
Above him she can see the sky. It looks like a storm has just passed—little straggling remnants of dark, dark clouds lingering on a backdrop of a dark, clear twilight sky.
She curls her fingers in his vest—and that’s when she realises that she’s not holding the orb any longer. She looks for it, frowning—even just moving her head feels like too much but she does it anyway, even though it makes her dizzy.
It takes her a minute to find it. It’s on the ground, just beside them. She doesn’t see it at first because it’s not glowing anymore—it’s broken clean in two, nearly indistinguishable from the rubble lying all around them. Like it’s some other part of the building come down around them.
Then Solas is taking her hands and casting healing magic on them. It takes him longer than normal, Evie realises dimly. Like he’s been drained nearly dry.
“I broke your orb,” she says. It hurts to speak, and her voice comes out cracked and rough.
He makes that sound again—but it sounds more like a laugh this time, she thinks. “It’s for the best,” he tells her.
And then his magic falters, and he leans forward a little—resting his forehead against hers, as his fingers curl over hers, protectively.
She can hear someone calling her name—Dorian, she thinks, just as he’s joined by Sera, and Bull, and Varric.
Solas turns, and she can see her aunts and uncles clambering over what’s left of the building around them. And she watches as, one by one, their expressions shift from panic to relief as they see her and Solas sitting in the rubble.
Behind them, approaching hesitantly, are more elves that she’s never seen before.
“Lord Fen’Harel?” one of the elves says. “What… what happened?”
He turns back to Evie again, and his expression softens. He cups her face with one hand, very gently, before saying, “It’s over. It’s… it’s over now.”
No one says anything at all for a long, long moment. Solas pulls Evie close once more, and she doesn’t resist—just lets herself be held, and buries her face in his vest, closing her eyes and just breathing, for a moment.
“Holy shit,” Sera says, finally breaking the silence.
For once, no one tells her to watch her language.
--
Dorian heals her hands, when Solas finally lets her go.
Some of the strange elves linger, but most of them seem to wander away. She can hear them arguing among themselves, for a while—in Elvhen, and too far away for her to make out the details.
“They gonna be trouble?” Bull asks, as he helps Solas stand.
Solas’s mouth twitches downward. “I don’t know,” he answers.
Dorian ends up carrying Evie away from what’s left of the ruins—Solas leans heavily on Bull, who walks with his sword drawn, and Varric and Sera flank them on either side, Bianca and bow in hand.
No one bothers them, as they walk through the old, crumbling city. As Doran carries her over the old road, as he whispers for her not to look as they pass people lying on the ground who aren’t moving.
She looks anyway. Until Dorian turns her so that her face is towards his jacket, and she curls into him, but does not close her eyes.
It gets dark quickly, but they walk by the light of Dorian’s staff until they pass through a mirror, into a place that makes her skin tingle with magic, and then back out again. And they don’t stop until they reach a clearing, and Dorian sets her down on a soft patch of moss.
“I’ll set wards,” he says, as Bull settles Solas next to Evie. “And a barrier, for good measure.”
She leans into Solas, not even thinking twice about it, and he wraps an arm around her shoulders just as easily.
Just as Dorian turns to go, Evie asks, “Is Mamae really gone?”
Solas’s arm tightens around her, ever so slightly.
“We don’t know,” Bull answers, his big hand coming to rest on Evie’s knee. “She… she told us which way they’d taken you, and there wasn’t time…”
He trails off, helplessly. Not saying it, but Evie knows—they might have saved her, if they had gone after her instead.
As if he can read her thoughts, Dorian sighs. He turns back and sits on the ground beside Evie, reaching into his jacket.
He pulls something from around his neck. Evie’s seen it before—it’s that crystal he and Mamae use to talk to each other sometimes, when they’re far away. He’s let Evie use it before, once or twice, when he was with her and Mamae wasn’t.
He takes her hand and presses the crystal into it.
“She used this,” he says. “And—she made us promise to find you. Not to wait around for her—just to get you back.”
“Hero and the Kid went to look for her,” Varric offers, settling down on the ground just in front of Evie. “So… maybe…”
The crystal in her hand is still, and silent. She doesn’t know if that’s good, or bad.
“Whatever happens next,” Dorian says, “we’re here for you, Evie. That’s a promise.”
He waits until she nods, and then he stands up and starts to set wards around their makeshift camp.
“Can you find her in the Fade?” Evie wonders, looking at Solas.
“Only if she’s asleep,” Solas replies, his voice thick. Every other possibility left unspoken.
She exhales. “I’m scared.”
He does not reply—but she remembers what he said, about the perfect things that he’s destroyed, so she shifts closer—and he shifts in turn, until his arms are wrapped around her, his face buried in her hair.
She can feel his heart pounding against her back.
She reaches up and pulls one of his hands from her chest. She twines her fingers in his, and then brings their joined hands down to her lap.
“Can we look for her together?” Evie asks.
He huffs a breath into her hair.
“Of course,” he says.
It takes them a long time to fall asleep—even as she lies there, uncertain of what awaits in dreams, Solas lying on the ground at her back, their clasped hands resting on the ground just beside her, the steady rise and fall of his chest lulling her, slowly, into dreams, even as he grips her hand tightly, terrified of what waits for them there.
She doesn’t know how long it’s been since she slept. Everything hurts, even the bits of her Dorian healed. Even the bits that she hadn’t known, before today, even could.
“What if she’s not there?” she asks, her eyelids drooping. “What do we do, then?”
He sucks in a slow, uneven breath. “I don’t know, da’assan.”
“Will you leave again?”
His grip on her hand tightens.
“If you want me to,” he says.
She shifts a little closer to him. “I don’t, though.”
He exhales into her hair. He sounds like he’s crying again.
She shifts in his arms, turning around so she can hug him back. And he is crying, and it gets worse when she wraps her arms around his neck, even though he pulls her closer still when she does.
“You deserve so much better,” he tells her. “You deserve a better father. Someone who—who wasn’t afraid—Evie, this is all my fault. Ir abelas.”
She presses her face into his shoulder. “Tel’abelas,” she mutters against his clothes.
“All of this happened because of me,” he insists, clinging to her like he’s terrified she’ll let go. “Your mother—Evie, if she’s gone, it’s my fault. My—my indecision caused this. I’ve—I’ve ruined everything I’ve ever tried to save.”
He chokes on a sob.
Evie feels like she should be crying too—because he’s upset, and she doesn’t know how to comfort him. But she feels like she’s cried enough for a lifetime, now, and even though this feels so important, she can feel exhaustion settling into every bone in her body, now that the danger has passed and they have stopped.
“You saved me,” Evie offers, but it doesn’t seem to help.
Anything else she might say is interrupted by a high, bright sound. Almost like the cry of a very strange bird, but just a little different.
Solas is upright in a heartbeat, clutching Evie to his chest, and he tries to stand up but he still doesn’t have the strength, so he kind of just lands in an awkward sitting position, and he has to let go of her a little bit to steady himself.
Evie turns around in his arms again, trying to blink the sleepiness out of her eyes as she looks in the direction of the sound.
Sera, nearby, has an arrow to her bow, pointing in the same direction. Varric’s got Bianca ready too, and she can see Bull reaching for his sword, and Dorian grabbing his staff—
“Dorian Pavus, if you do not drop this miserable excuse for a barrier this instant, I will be forced to dispel it myself.”
“Aunt Cassandra?” Evie blurts, incredulous, immediately recognising the voice ringing through the woods.
“Evie?!”
Evie and Solas suck in a breath at the same time.
“Mamae?” she calls back, because—because—
Because she doesn’t quite believe it.
But she hears someone curse—Uncle Thom, from the sound of it—and then someone she doesn’t know scolds, “You have a stomach wound, slow down, she’s not going anywhere.”
“Blondie,” Varric says, almost exactly like he says thank the Maker.
Dorian waves his hand, and the barrier must drop because Evie sees Cassandra charge into their little clearing, sword drawn.
And right behind her, an arm thrown over Thom’s shoulder, is Mamae, her eyes wide and desperate.
“Where is she—oh.”
Uncle Thom can’t move fast enough for Mamae once she sees Evie, Solas clutching her on the ground.
Solas doesn’t even move—he’s sitting stock still, just as stunned as Evie is, so when Mamae manages to break from Thom, stumbling a few steps to more or less just fall on them both, he barely even manages to catch her.
Evie actually has to check if she’s dreaming. And then check again, just to be certain.
“Da’vhenan,” Mamae cries, clinging Evie to her. “You’re alright. You’re alright.”
Crushed between Mamae and Solas, her fingers curling in Mamae’s clothing, Evie breathes and she smells her Mamae—camp fires and her sweat, the trees that line the river, under the smell of elfroot and dried blood.
“Mamae,” she says, and no matter how much she’s just cried, suddenly she’s crying again.
“Did they hurt you?” Mamae asks, but Evie’s crying too hard to answer.
“Yes,” Solas says for her. He sounds like he’s just come up for air.
Mamae pulls back a little, then. Evie looks up, and Mamae and Solas are staring at each other, tears streaking down both their faces.
In the silence, she can hear Thom say, “Stepped on the damn crystal when I found her, or we would have used it ages ago.”
“Stepped on—that is a priceless artifact, and you stepped on it?!”
But Dorian doesn’t sound as angry as he wants to, Evie thinks, watching as Mamae breaks into a smile, even though she’s crying. Watching as Solas’s expression cracks, and he leans forward in the same moment Mamae does, and as Evie’s pressed between them she can feel Solas’s chest shake with a laugh that’s half a sob, and she can feel Mamae’s shake too, in turn, as she rests her chin on Evie’s head, burying her face in Solas’s shoulder and he, presumably, presses his to her hair.
Evie feels the arms of her parents wrap around her—around all three of them, together, and as she cries it feels good. Even though she still hurts, even though she’s shaken, she still has them.
Mamae, herself, and Solas—Papae, now. Together.
And right now, that’s all that matters.
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