Your first pages - 4 more book openings critiqued at @Litopia by literary agent @agentpete author @anniesummerlee and me!
I’ve just guested again at Litopia, the online writers’ colony and community. Each week they have a YouTube show, Pop-Up Submissions, where four manuscripts are read and critiqued live on air by literary agent Peter Cox @agentpete and a guest, or sometimes two. This time the other guest was longtime Litopian Annie Summerlee @anniesummerlee , who has published short stories in a range of online…
[ID: Animated Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint fanart. Kim Dokja is in Demon King form, and he's much bigger than Han Sooyoung, who's comparatively tiny and is clinging to his nose and face while furiously yelling and thrashing around as Kim Dokja nervously tries to appease her. End ID]
I am REALLY curious about how they are going to show the constellation messages in the ORV anime. Cause like, they are such big parts of the novel/webtoon and like,, it works well in those formats because you're /reading/ but it could be such a nuisance if they just have them on the screen cause like,, some of them are long. But I also think them being read out loud could disrupt the flow...
On the other hand, COULD YOU IMAGINE IT BEING FILMED LIKE ITS A TWITCH/YOUTUBE STREAM?? like they could do a constellation chat off to the side scrolling, that would be SOOOOOO FUN !!! There is so much potential with framing it like a stream and then taking that away when the dokkebai channels are off or gone (like at the beginning).
"Kim Dokja's breaths, his appearance, his laughter, and his manner of speech [...] And...
The glint in his eyes when he recalls the story he loves.
[...] 'I can just read from the beginning again'.
-CH. 438
(music cr: Train to Busan OST "Goodbye World" by Jang Young Gyu)