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#bout didn’t make it 😂😅
trippin-chippin · 10 months
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My dumbass finding a glow squid plush in Walmart and carrying it around to try to keep from passing out 💀🤣
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keeheauxtales · 1 month
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We can just keep talkin' 'bout the last time
You were here, what we did
No sleep till morning
Only bubble baths and back rubs 🔞
— “So Anxious” - Ginuwine
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pairing: soft!dom!Keeho x fem!bodied!reader (with switch vibes)
genre: tub sex :) established relationship smut with minimal plot, y’all know the vibes?
word count: ~1.8k
content warnings: dirty talk, cunnilingus, nipple play + underwater handjob!, dick riding, edging, multiple orgasms (fem receiving), a bit of breeding 🫢 (& thus ‘daddy’ is used, among other nicknames)
author’s notes: I’m kinda making this a prologue of a new project of sorts titled my “S.I.S (Self-Indulgent Series).” A bit of excuse for me to start writing more of what I wanna write – for me, but y’all get the pleasure of reading it! 😅 also: guess who just finally figured out how to make the text smaller like I’ve seen so many other awesome writers do?! 🙌🏾😂
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“wanna join me? 😉🛀”
Your phone lights up with these lovely invitations masquerading as text messages as you sit in the hotel room across the hall from your boyfriend. A smirk creeps along your face as you rise up from your bed to discard of whatever clothes you have on. Throwing on a robe that typically rests in the room’s closet, you grab your phone and room key, and briskly make your way to your lover.
When you open the bathroom door, you’re greeted with the same thing those pictures were alluding to, along with a more delighted expression on the face of its sender. Keeho spots your bare shoulders as you had positioned your robe lower the moment you entered his room. “Well,” Keeho starts, “glad you decided to come over.” He hovers his phone over the bathroom floor before you take it into your own hands to bring it over to the counter with your items. “There’s only a couple things keeping you from where I want you to be,” he states, dragging a finger along your height in the air.
You gradually peel the robe (thing #1) off of your body before beginning to close the distance (thing #2) between you and the warm water that has already been enveloping your boyfriend, eventually stepping in to join him.
Soap-covered hands immediately emerge from the aforementioned water the moment that second leg is inside of the tub, caressing and pushing your thighs as far apart as can be allowed. You’re briefly stunned before catching Keeho’s wanton gaze trailing up every inch of you before his eyes finally meet yours.
“Don’t sit yet, babe, wanna taste you…” And just like that, Keeho spits on your pussy like it hadn’t already been wet since before he sent those pictures. He drags his tongue leisurely along your entrance, and as you set a foot up along the edge of the tub, you let out a long, loud moan you didn’t even realize you were holding in.
“Oh fuck, baby,” you blurt out, feeling Keeho’s tongue enter your dripping folds with incredible efficiency. You feel intense vibrations from beneath you as Keeho journeys up and down your inner cavern, moaning at how good you taste. You admire his consistency, how he enjoys you every single time like it’s your first time all over again. “Don’t stop…” you moan out, “until I cum in that f-filthy mouth of yours…”
Keeho only has it in himself to hum against you in compliance before beginning to make out with your cunt. You start to feel your legs shake as his big hands inadvertently lather your thighs with soap, caressing them while he sucks sweet juices – and even sweeter sounds – out of you. He raises his hands behind you to your lower back, giving you full reign to grind against his face, roping your fingers into his wet hair for some sort of leverage before throwing a leg over his shoulder.
The reality of him being the source of your evident pleasure riles him up further as his own moans match the magnitude of yours. Drowning out the wetness of the water itself is Keeho’s mouth unabashedly pervading your wetness, and by the time you regain consciousness you didn’t know you had lost, that knot in your stomach begins to tighten.
“Yes, Kee… Oh shit… Yeah… Fuck!” Before you could even warn him like you tend to do, you cry out as your legs quiver, exploding into his mouth just like you had wanted. You whimper at Keeho as he slurps as much of your essence as he possibly can, moaning lustily into your heat. Big hands grip your ass before he pulls away from you completely, licking his lips as he resumes his position in the tub.
Then I fill the tub up halfway, then ride it with my surfboard…
— “Drunk In Love” – Beyoncé
As you do your best to slowly enter more of your body into the water, you notice it rise by default. With your partner’s permission, you raise the nozzle to empty a small portion of the water before fully submerging yourself into some much needed relaxation.
All the while, Keeho’s hands have been caressing his own thighs underwater in an effort to calm himself down a bit. However, he achieves quite the opposite as your legs land on top of his. Your thighs act like magnets as far as Keeho’s concerned, the way his hands are back on top of them, caressing them just like when you were upright minutes ago.
The both of you cautiously work to close the distance before officially colliding toward the middle of the tub. With Keeho’s hands now going up and down your legs, one of your arms snake their way around his neck. As the other arm trails up and down his back, Keeho leans forward until his lips meld with yours.
Melting into the kiss, you feel yourself settle into the warmth of Keeho’s embrace, his hands now rubbing against your back with the soap lingering atop the water. After a few moments, you guide your hands to his chest, resting along his pecs. Your fingers maneuver around his nipples, thumbs treating them like gears on game controllers before your index fingers join in to pinch them. You hear your boyfriend begin to moan rather loudly, breaking the kiss to callously grunt into your gaping mouth.
“My dick is already so fucking hard for you, and you wanna play with my tits…” Keeho spits out provocatively. “Okay then,” he concludes before mirroring your exact fingering motions on your breasts, eliciting whimpers loud enough to overtake the sound of any wetness beneath you.
Keeho latches his thick lips onto your neck, and subconsciously, your hands leap into the water in search of this ‘hard dick’ he spoke of. You find it in no time, mere seconds after Keeho lowered his mouth onto one of your nipples. You lean back for comfort, and his brain short circuits feeling hands that aren’t his grip his cock underwater. He flicks his tongue rapidly before nipping at your areola as a response.
You release a deep groan from the back of your throat, your hands overworking to win the fight with buoyancy as they aggressively stroke Keeho’s bricked shaft in between the two of you. You feel a bit disgusted, knowing that your leftover arousal is dripping out of your pussy into soapy waters, especially with your thirsty partner shooting doe-eyed glances into your glazed-over stares at any given moment. Miraculously, you feel precum each time your thumb rolls along his tip.
Eventually, Keeho leans back like you did earlier, resting his flexed arms along the tub. You’d be lying your ass off to say that the sight of his toned chest heaving wasn’t turning your legs into mush. His entire stance was inviting you to just pounce on that dick your hands were wrapped around, and you knew it.
You carefully follow that thought, begrudgingly releasing Keeho’s cock from one of your hands for leverage. As a result, his deep moans halt momentarily while you position yourself on his soaking and loaded dick. One of Keeho’s veiny arms assist on your hip before you lower yourself back down, this time boarding the solid member that’s been heavily anticipating your warm cavern of a cunt this entire time.
In a fit of instantaneous weakness, you feel yourself shake once Keeho has entered you, your hands back caressing his neck. His hands slide down your back before they dive beneath your ass, kneading your cheeks. The both of you exhale a slew of obscenities at one another before you start to grind on his lap.
Once you both adjust to one another in this different environment, Keeho wills himself to fuck up into you as slowly as he can allow himself to. All the while, you can’t seem to stop your pelvis from moving, causing the water to splash a bit wildly. Neither of you could care to exercise caution, instead you both grow more and more careless the more you get lost in the lust of it all.
“Fuck, you feel so fucking good,” Keeho grunts, sweating around the wet bangs covering his forehead.
“Shit… Fuck, make me cum, baby!” You cry out as Keeho’s throbbing cock reaches your spot in those gummy walls he keeps pulsing deeper into.
“Call me ‘baby’ like that again…” Keeho spits out, already reduced to just sitting back and letting you ride, but not before one particularly deep thrust aimed directly at your clit unlocks another nickname in its stead.
“D-daddy!”
“Oh shit,” Keeho breathed out, feeling like he was drowning in that tub (and would’ve been okay with it after hearing something so rare leave your mouth like that). “You’re gonna fuck around and make me wanna become one for real, keep playing.”
And just like that, you feel a knot tighten deep in your stomach for a second time tonight, almost like it came into contact with your boyfriend’s cock drilled into your hole. “Then cum inside me, Steph,” you breathe in his ear seductively, “no sense causing such a sticky mess in this tub for housekeeping to have to clean up.”
“It may not matter once you’re cumming with me, sweetheart,” Keeho challenges in almost a whisper before he resumes rolling his hips up in time with your body damn near bucking against him.
You accept the challenge with so much composure as you grip the tub with your hand, your pussy gripping every bit of Keeho’s girth. Sensing a climax approaching from the both of you, he lowers himself back into the water with one of his hands clamping your waist, the other starting to squeeze your neck in that freaky progression that teeters between slight discomfort and alarming danger, and you could usually give a fuck… Keeho quite literally couldn’t stand to give a few fucks now.
“Is my baby gonna cum all on daddy’s dick like the good slut she is?”
You hum and nod in response, whimpering over his words.
“And are you gonna let daddy cum inside that tight… little pussy like you said?”
“Fuck, please!” you yell out, briefly realizing that he paused while awaiting your answer.
“‘Please,’ what?” he inquires as his voice drops a notch for an added edge.
“Please cum for me, baby! I want to feel your hot cum inside me, for fucks sake!”
Maybe it was the fact that the water was getting colder around you, or the way Keeho’s cock kept twitching inside of your swollen cunny, while denying himself of his own orgasm in the process, but damn, y’all were desperately determined to find release before leaving this bathtub.
After moaning your name, and lustily reiterating how good your pussy feels around him with his eyes rolling back, he gaspingly asks one more question. “Are you ready for this load, babygirl?”
“Oh god, yes, Kee– I’m cumming,” you exhale, vibrating around your lover as warm semen oozes out of the both of you. Keeho claws at your back as he fucks his own orgasm out, causing a chill to run down your spine as you fall forward onto his chest.
“Aww,” Keeho coos in your ear, smiling as you both unwind like you were planning to in the beginning of this impromptu date, “you did so good, mama.”
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ameliagiovanna0 · 1 year
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Chenford Week 2023 - Day 2: TV Tropes Day (Future Tropes)
This Is It
Tim can't hold it in anymore and asks Lucy to marry him
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AN:  I didn't do it on purpose at all, but this fic fits the song This Is It by Scotty McCreary literally perfectly. I genuinely don't know how I did it. I was trying to think of a title, and thought about the phrase "this is it" which reminded me of the song, and then I was like, "holy shit, how did I do that?" 😅😂 Adding the lyrics in was a total afterthought
Way up in the mountains, four thousand feet high There's a trail through the trees to a cliff where Carolina meets the sky Oh, and there's a view I just can't describe
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Well, I've been waitin' too, holdin' onto this ring And for the right words to say, for the right time and place, for me To get on one knee
This is it, this is now This is what I've been talkin' 'bout Lookin' out, can't you see forever? Take my hand, just take it in This is a moment we won't forget On top of the world here together If there ever was a time for a perfect kiss Well, this is it This is it
“Marry me,” Tim gripped Kojo’s leash just a little tighter as the words fell from his lips.
Lucy stood overlooking her favorite vista point at Runyon Canyon. Tim was behind her, gazing at her silhouette illuminated by the early morning sun, hair glittering and flowing in the breeze.
Tim knew he wanted everything with her when he asked her out for the very first time in front of the station. The thought was only further cemented in his mind when she told them that their make-up first date would be a better story for their grandkids. And the idea made something warm settle inside him. So, the next day, he bought a ring.
He knew it was irrational, illogical, simply ridiculous; buying a ring after only two dates, but he didn’t care. He’d known Lucy for years. He knew how good they were together, and he wasn’t going to waste another second. She was it for him.
“What?” Lucy squeaked as she turned around to face him.
“Marry me,” he said again as he stepped toward her, Kojo panting at his side.
He took her hands in his, the golden sky creating a halo around her head, “I love you. So much. You brought the light back into my life. You pulled me out of the worst part of my life and a spiral I didn’t even know I was in. You make me better; you make me want to be better. You love with your whole heart and give everything to the people you love. And I’ve had the privilege of experiencing that all-encompassing love first hand. You’re an amazing cop. You’re everything that’s good in the world.”
“Tim-“ she choked out, a watery smile spreading across her features.
He took a breath before continuing, emotion settling in his voice, “I knew I wanted forever with you when I asked you out the first time. Then you mentioned grandkids on our second date, and I knew you wanted the same thing. I don’t have your ring with me because this wasn’t planned, but I don’t want to wait to start the rest of our lives. I know we’re headed in that direction, so let’s just do it. Let’s get married and start forever now.”
He took a step back and planted one knee in the dirt, “Lucy Margaret Chen, will you marry me?”
“You have a ring?” she asked, eyes wide with tears falling down her cheek. It wasn’t what she wanted to come out of her mouth, but her curiosity and surprise got the best of her.
“Yes,” he said, chuckling.
“When did you get a ring?”
“Luce, the question-“
She took a steading breath, a warm and tranquil smile challenging the brightness of the sun in the distance.
“Yes, Tim, I will marry you.”
“Yeah?” he asked, smiling a smile he saved for her.
“Hell yes.”
He stood up at a dizzying speed, disturbing the dog that had, unbeknownst to them, laid down at their feet.
Tim’s hand found the sides of her face, pulling her in, as his lips met hers in a kiss Lucy felt in her bones. He poured all the love he had for her into that kiss. She ran her fingers through the short strands of hair at the back of his head, taking his bottom lip between her teeth before she pulled back to look at the most gorgeous shade of blue she had ever seen. His thumbs brushed her tears away, his lips following their path, his own tears threatening to spill over.
Lucy balled her fists in his shirt, pressing her forehead to his, “I love you so much. You make me so happy, and I can’t wait to spend the rest of our lives together.”
“That’s all I want.”
“Good.”
“Good.”
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They made their way down the mountain pressed as close together, their hands only separating when absolutely necessary, despite the 90 degree heat and Kojo occasionally weaving between them. They all piled into the truck, Kojo flopping on the backseat, slobber dripping from his tongue and onto the carpet. Tim felt Lucy’s eyes on him. He turned the key in the ignition, but before he could put the gear shift into ‘drive’ Lucy was in his lap.
His hands found her hips as he looked into her deep, soulful brown eyes, “Hi.”
“Hi. You have a ring?”
“I do.”
“What does it look like?”
He chuckled at her childlike questioning, “I’m not going to tell you. I might show you when we get home, though.”
“You might?” she raised an eyebrow at him.
“Yeah, might,” he paused, “Maybe I want to wine and dine you first. You know, make it special,” he shrugged.
Her hands sought purchase on his shoulders, “Timothy Alexander Bradford, this was absolutely special. It was perfect and so us. I loved everything about it. You caught me off guard and that just made it even more special. It’s perfect.
Give me the ring now or don’t. I won’t say no to a candlelit dinner with you,” she smirked, “but it’s not some kind of vital thing I need.”
“I love you,” he said, wrapping his arms around her waist and pressing his lips to her neck, tasting the salt on her skin.
“I love you, too. Now, take me home. We have celebrating to do.”
“Yes, ma’am.”
She curled herself against him even further, making a happy little noise and no effort at all to move off his lap.
“Luce, I can’t drive with you on my lap,” he chuckled, tapping her hip.
She gave him a pout, but eventually moved back into her own seat.
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After an enthusiastic celebratory joint shower, Lucy was tasked with making breakfast. It was 11 AM and they hadn’t eaten more than the smoothies Lucy insisted they stop for before their hike.
The sound of Taylor Swift echoed through the house as Tim rounded the corner from the living room hallway to the kitchen. Clad in his favorite black t-shirt and Lucy’s favorite gray sweatpants, he leaned against the doorframe fiddling with the velvet box in his pocket. He watched Lucy sing and dance along to a song he didn’t know, his breath catching in his throat when he saw what she was wearing.
It wasn’t uncommon, by any means, for her to steal his clothes, but it was her choice in his clothes that had him stuttering. She was wearing one of his old LAPD tees, but it was one of the few with his name scrawled across the back. He couldn’t help but think she chose that one on purpose.
“I know you’re there,” Lucy said from where she stood at the counter, not needing to turn around.
He padded toward her and wrapped his arms around her, his front pressed against her back, his chin tucked into her shoulder.
“Hi,” she said, tossing her whisk into the bowl of pancake batter as she squirmed to turn around now that she was in his arms.
“Hi.”
Tim pressed his lips to her tattoo and pushed the bowl and dry mix off to the side before he bent at the knee, placing his arms under ass. She understood what he wanted. She jumped and wrapped her legs around his waist. He placed her on the counter, but her legs remained wound around him.
He threaded his fingers through her hair in an effort to pull her closer. She leaned in, her bottom lip fitting between his.
Before he got too lost in her, Tim pulled back, “I have something for you.”
He saw the sparkle in her eyes, even as she desperately tried not to show too much excitement, not wanting to get her hopes up on the off chance he wasn’t about to give her what she thought he was.
He knew Lucy was right. Everything about his proposal had been so unplanned and in the moment, so unlike him. But so like them. She brought the unpredictability - and somehow stability too - into his life and showed him that a little spontaneity wasn’t always bad thing.
Attempting to continue embracing what Lucy taught him, Tim had pulled the ring out of the confines of the shoes we wore with his dress blues, shoes he kept in a box on the very top shelf of the guest closet.
He pulled the small velvet box from his pocket and held it between them for a moment, his eyes flickering between her and the object in his hands, before he opened it.
Lucy gasped, her hand instantly covering her mouth, “Tim…” she choked, “It’s beautiful.”
“You like it?”
“I love it,” she said as her eyes filled with tears.
Tim pulled the ring from the cushion and set the box somewhere on the counter. She held her hand out for him and he slid the ring onto her finger, eliciting a smile he wasn’t sure he’d seen before. She reached for him and he came willingly, tucking himself into her body.
“I still plan on taking you out to celebrate,” he mumbled into her skin.
“I’ll never say no to a date night.”
They stayed wrapped up in each other until Lucy squealed, “We’re getting married!” in his ear as if it was brand new information.
“That’s the idea,” he said as he squeezed her even tighter, the realization sort of really hitting him for the first time all morning.
This was it. She was it. This was his forever. Forever was right now. And he couldn’t wait to see what the rest of forever looked like.
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hsr-texts · 1 year
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Lmao the fact that welt had an accent and everything for this scene is hilarious 😂
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Also POM POM WTF EHHSJWJEEJKSJSJ when she appeared i straight up laughed
Also I know people might say when they did loucha’s quest they didn’t really find anything fulfilling but me personally I think that this gave us insight into that he isn’t really a bad guy per-say me personally I feel like he is more of a grey character but we don’t really know much about him yet
But a lot of people (march 😒) judged him but welt had every reason to judge this man because of what happened in HI3 and I can understand having his suspicions because of the messed up stuff he did.
The reason why I’m giving march the side eye 😒 is because she was soo quick to be impatient and snappy and it kind of annoyed me because of how quick to anger was too rash and wanted to hurry up the process of the case she got which was irritating not to mention she hates negotiating which is a very key in every transaction and if you want something you’ll have to sometimes charm someone for the right price that or to charm the person your getting information from for example, sampo.
How else do you think do you think he’s able to so easily charm his way into his victim’s hearts and scam them out of their money? He gets patient and waits for the right moment to strike I just get frustrated with march because these are things that your supposed to get used to and if you want something you have to work hard for it even if it’s tiring eventually you’ll get the results you wanted
Talking bout some “oh because we need this information” proceeds to have npc scam her out of her money. 😒 do get me wrong I love march 7th but she irritates me sometimes
I mean yeah that's pretty on brand from March considering how she treats Sampo 😅
I'm more surprised that the Realm-Keeping Commission just watched her do that whole roleplay thing without even going like "Yeah maybe this wasn't the best idea to ask complete strangers who are... very eccentric"
But I'm guessing they had to add more filler so that the ""plot"" could plot ;w;
And yes I'm aware the quest is meant to be like- A buffer to mitigate those "Luocha is Otto so he's a bad guy!!" ideas but I feel that this... was still not the best way to do it.
We only learn that he's not such a bad guy until the very end when it's revealed this whole goose chase was practically for nothing since all he did was save some two guys and gave them a prescription, then stopped people from getting spoiled.
People say that the companion quest is like this because MC hasn't met Luocha but... then they meet him on the Express after his quest bc Dan Heng apparently invited him there...
We also had a companion quest for a character we haven't officially met before and that was Silver Wolf. I'm pretty sure MC has only seen Kafka at the beginning before Kafka handed them over to the Express. You can also argue that she's possibly a bad guy since she's wanted criminal by the IPC for 5 billion credits.
Despite Silver Wolf not having as much screentime as the other characters in the quest, we still learn a pretty important part of her character. We get to see her motivations and what drives her actions. Even though the Stellaron Hunters' story isn't complete yet either. Plus we get valuable lore about her homeworld "Punklorde", which was very interesting to me.
But I digress. Ultimately, I'm speaking from my perspective as a writer. I have my own standards for what makes good character writing but people can have equally valid ideas for what they believe is good character writing as well. The fun of art is that it's subjective and everyone has a different interpretation.
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television-overload · 9 months
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Fanfic end of year asks:
1. favorite fic you wrote this year, 3. favorite line/scene you wrote this year, 5. most popular fic this year, 7. longest completed fic you wrote this year, 14. a fic you didn’t expect to write, 23. fics you wanted to write but didn't
Ooh yay! All great questions, let's see...
1. favorite fic you wrote this year
Man, I honestly don't know. For NCIS, probably How Does a Moment Last Forever just because I tend to be happier with one shots as a whole than with multichaps. Plus, I really love writing Tony and little Tali.
For X-Files, which I just watched this year and started writing for, probably Beautiful. I love writing bittersweet fics, if you can't tell.
3. favorite line/scene you wrote this year
Scene? Probably when Tony and Ziva are making dinner together in the Boxed In chapter of my Season 3 fic.
As for line... hmm, I don't know. Maybe something from the Star Wars Obi-Wan/Satine fic I'm writing, adapting The Sound of Music storyline 😂 but I usually only talk about that on my Star Wars sideblog lol
5. most popular fic this year
By hits for a fic *written* this year: Yeah, that's the Sound of Music Star Wars fic hahaha, and then my Season 3 NCIS story.
By kudos is actually sh-boom for the X-Files fandom, which kind of surprises me. It was the first one I posted for the fandom and was written on a whim, but I really do like it.
7. longest completed fic you wrote this year
"Completed" is the problem, here 😂. Beautiful (X-Files) is the longest at 4,985 words, because I'm excluding stuff I wrote years ago and only just uploaded to AO3. BUT the aforementioned Star Wars fic (incomplete) is the longest thing I've written ever, by far, at 40,057 words.
14. a fic you didn’t expect to write
Anything besides the big projects I'm working on is pretty much unexpected. The Tony and Tali fic was a pleasant surprise, as I'd been wanting to write something inspired by that song for literal years, and the answer just suddenly came to me. Also wasn't planning to jump into writing X-Files fic quite yet, so each of those was written in a sudden bout of inspiration.
23. fics you wanted to write but didn't
Oof. So many. I don't even want to think about the number of small (and not so small) snippets I have written both on my computer and on my notes app 😅
I've got one that honestly doesn't need much work to make it a publishable that I completely forgot about until just now. It's where Tony stays in Israel longer than in canon and is there when Ziva finds out she's pregnant. A tried and true trope, but I love every single one of those fics and would love to write one of my own someday.
For X-Files, there's this joke that Mulder and Scully have been sharing the same pair of glasses the whole time (because the actors often were on the show), and I was planning to write something about how that got started and progressed throughout the series.
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jjungkookislife · 2 years
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I finally had the time to read Bad Decisions and I read it as soon as I woke up. This might look all over the place cause as I read the story, I wrote in My Notes the comments and reactions I had of the scenes so sorry ‘bout that 😅
i want to have MC and Jimin’s friendship where they are so close that she can just casually wax his junk when he asks. That’s real friendship right there. Love that lol 😂
Also, Spider 🥹 that sassy and bratty cutiepie but she loves Yoongi more which was sad yet hilarious but honetly, same 🤷‍♀️
The matching shirts 🥺 they’re like a whole-ass family 🥰 plus possible matching tattoos of their fur baby’s initials? 😩
Orange haired Yoongi 👀
These two were so adorable. They get along really well together, they were practically bf&gf by the time they became Spidey’s pur parents 🙄😂
AND MATCHING SWIMSUITS?!? So adorable 😩
Idk if I’m stupid or what but I’m having difficulty imagining this scene: “You turn to look at Yoongi but he’s engrossed in a conversation, his phone in a woman’s lap.” Is it like Yoongi holding his phone and that hand that is holding his phone, is on the woman’s lap? Cause idk why the phone would be on the woman’s lap. This isn’t really a big deal, I’m just curious 😂
Jikook flirting 🥴🤭🫣
Wait, forget my question above. I understood it now. He was showing them pics in his phone. Stupid me, this is why I should really shut up and finish reading first before having questions 🙄
Yoongi being so clueless when he practically was showing off pics of MC and their cat together with him looking like a happy family, like it’s completely normal for “just roommates” 😂 Both of them are ignorant fools, just date already 😤
Yoongi admitting he had feelings for her when he moved in or maybe even before that 🥺
I love how he is so casually just calling her princess. Cute 🥺
MC simping on how pretty Yoongi is and how soft and fluffy his hair looks. Same girl 😉 I also want to run my fingers through his hair 🫣
Spider ruining their moment 😂
Ah, I love this Jimin 🥰 he’s that type of chaotic bff that also loves to meddle especially since he knows that they both like each other but just won’t see it and that there won’t be any progress if he doesn’t do anything. He represents us readers who wants to just make them kiss already 😂
Long and Shaggy Black-haired Yoongi 🙃
Yoongi asking her on a date and being all shy and nervous about it 🥺
Yoongi’s visuals in this fic is just 🤤
Their date was so 😍 their interactions were so cute, can’t get enough of them ☺️
But then they went to the bar/club and things finally got more interesting 👀
The first kiss 🫣
FINALLY! The confessed 🥹😭
That “Always,” from Yoongi 🫠
And then there’s Spider, ruining the moment again cause she’s HUNGRY 😂
I love every moment when they finally did the deed. As always, it was both 🤤🥴😛 and 🫠🥺☺️ and I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THEM 🥰 They just became part of my list of fav couples in your works too, man the list is getting long 😅
And the last part where Jimin walks in the apartment while they’re doing the nasty and takes her “cat niece” to get her away from there was so hilarious 😂 he was like, nope, this is not the kind of environment she should be in 🤣
All in all, this was an amazing read as always. I know I’ll never get disappointed with your writing. Good job in making me fall in love with your stories and its characters, AGAIN. And also, sorry if this is so chaotic cause I literally just woke up when I read this and honestly just wrote what I felt about the scenes 😂 I hope you didn’t overwork yourself with this one, take care always ☺️
Spoiler warnings for Bad Decisions!
I’m so glad you were able to read it so soon (ah as soon as you woke up!) 💜 ah Jimin and oc are something else lol I don’t think I could ever help someone wax 🤣
I love that you mentioned Spider being bratty bc she’s based off my cat lmao she’s a cutie but man she’s got an attitude and I love her for it but yes I am constantly fighting for her attention cause she loves my husband more 🥲
I think they’re next tattoos will be Spider’s paw print on their rib cage 😭 and orange haired Yoongi! I will never get over him 😭 and i totally brainstormed most of this at work and the matching swimsuits had to be included cause it gives couple vibes before they’re a couple and Yoongi was already so into her that he couldn’t say no and he didn’t want to say no bc everyone at the party would see they were matching like a COUPLE and know she was his 😭 (or assume at least and who’s he to correct them 👀)
No i totally get it! I reread it and I could have written that better lol but yeah he was showing everyone pictures of oc and spider when they’d stop to chat and they’d be like oh he’s taken 😅
Ah i live for the soft moments between them and of course jikook flirting at the party and Jimin being nosy. I think I project a lot onto Jimin just bc I’m nosy af and I like including myself that way 🤣
I’ve been working on this for months and every time Yoongi posted with his hair getting longer I just lost it and I HAD TO INCLUDE IT IN THE FIC plus cat!dad Yoongi dyeing his hair to match his kittys fur 😻
Yes! Him asking trying to be casual about it like ha it’s just dinner but if you say date I’m in lol im so bad at writing first dates or dates in general lmao but I tried to give them the best opportunity to kiss and get together and writing about the ride HOME and Yoongi’s hand on her thigh 😭😭😭😭
Lmao Spider ruining the moment is everything! She’s like hello, you’ve been gone for a few hours I require treats and attention and then she’ll sleep for twelve hours straight 🤣
I definitely think they’re one of my favorite couples know as well! They were fun to write for and I hope I can write a little drabble later on with Spider in it as well lol
Ah yes that was written before I even started the story. Another idea I had while at work lmao Jimin just coming over unannounced and lettting HIMSELF in bc what could they be doing lmao certainly not THAT lmao he was in shock! And he scooped his cat niece out of there 🏃🏻 I imagine Jimin would text oc and Yoongi once he gets home with a picture of Spider calling them nasty or maybe he sends a video of him baby talking to Spider saying “yeah your parents are nasty aren’t they, poor baby. You live here now” 🤣
Thank you so much! I always look forward to your reviews 💜 I’m so glad you enjoyed it and I hope you stay safe and get lots of rest 💜💜
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asknarashikari · 3 years
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Just so you know, i got the sinnoh remake of diamond and am currently trying to assemble a pokemon version of the cast of saber. I already have Reika the Dustox, Mei the Beautifly, Ryoga the Gyrados, Ryo the Ryhorn, and Kento the Pachirisu
Okay so Gen 4 was the first games I played and I’ve had some decent playthroughs so this is actually something I can offer some thoughts about.
A Pachirisu? I mean... if you can pull that off, ala Park Sejun, good for you, but... a Pachirisu? On a playthrough? It’s not really that good... Why not a Luxray, it’s got good coverage and it’s dark and brooding-looking like Kento is?
I’m worried about the 2 bug types- you might get some use out of Dustox’s Poison typing since Fairy is a thing now, and I know Dustox got buffed in Gen 5 or 6, but I think you’d be better served switching both out for something else.
Maybe Drapion? It’s not a bug-type but it could be bug-like enough to fit for Reika. And Gardevoir or Togekiss could be good rep for Mei. The latter has the advantage of being the choice killer of Cynthia’s Garchomp since it’s immune to both of its types (Fairy is immune to Dragon and Flying to Ground).
And... you didn’t say what your starter would be. If you’re going for the Saber theme then the obvious choice would be Chimchar for Touma, since Chimchar is themed after Son Wukong from Journey to the West, which is one of Touma’s Ride Books. Also adds a fire and fighting type to your party which you currently don’t have.
Also, no offense but your type balancing is really out of whack. I inputed your team into Marilland’s team builder and I counted 18 weaknesses, 4 of which are x 4 weaknesses.
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And you don’t really have anything good for... well, most of the gyms. Maybe one or two can be good for certain gyms and the Elite 4 but most would just deal neutral damage at best, and would just be utterly destroyed at worst. You could make up for it with the right coverage moves, but...
Yeah 😂 My honest thought is that this team... kinda sucks. Sorry bout that 😅
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giggly-squiggily · 3 years
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Ello!, so I've been thinking about it for awhile but can I request a fic where it's like at the beginning of Sword and Shield like the first time you battle Bede like in the mine, so like he's battling someone- (whether it be Sword, Shield, Hop, Marnie, reader, anyone tbh) and he sends out his Gothita making it use tickle (because I believe it knows that move-) but it totally backfires and his Gothita ends up tickling him and said person he's battling is just like standing there watching and laughing discovering that Bede is ticklish and ends up going to tickle him as well 😂. (I apologize if this is very long, I'm not good with wording things heh.. 😅)
Ooo! This looks fun! (Don't worry, anon, it was worded great! X3) I've gotcha covered! X3
EDIT: Decided to put this under the cut- I didn’t realize how long it was!
“Marnie, battle me!” Bede abruptly said one afternoon, his fairy Pokemon eager to try out their new moves. He had run into the punk rock girl during his hunt for Ralts, creating this impromptu pair up. He couldn’t tell you exactly why he wanted to battle her; he just wanted to.
Marnie blinked, looking up from her Pokedex with curiosity. “Right now? But wouldn’t you have the advantage?” Her team mostly consisted of Dark type Pokemon, making Fairy types an effective weapon against them.
“True, but you also have poison types. I want to see how effective my team is against yours.” The blonde’s words were genuine enough, though Marnie could hear a hint of mischief in Bede’s tone. What was he planning? “Alright. Why not?”
After their teams were picked, the pair crossed into the field, a fresh bout of determination in their steps. “I hope you're ready to be defeated, Marnie!” Bede reached for his poke ball, tossing it in the air with confidence. Marnie smiled and grabbed her own, readying to throw it herself. “We’ll see about that. Come on out, Scrafty!” She released her Pokemon, the lizard standing tall as they let out their battle cry.
Bede smirked and pulled out his own poke ball, readying his throw. “Get ready to lose! Let’s go, Gothlita!” Said Pokemon leaped out and landed daintily on her feet, posing. “Meet my newest team member. I found her around Giant’s Cap!” Despite the clear level difference, Bede looked pretty confident. Marnie bit down a smile. “Alright! Show me what you got!”
“With pleasure.” Bede grinned, pointing out at the Scrafty. “Gothita, show them what you can do! Use tickle!” Upon her trainer's command, the Pokemon leaped into the air, tiny arms spread. Letting out her battle cry, she landed on her target, scribbling away.
Only to land on the wrong target.
“Gah! Gothita! Nohohohohohoht mehehehehehehehehe!” Bede cackled, falling into the grass around him as his Pokemon tickled him silly, tiny hands flying across his body and poking at all his ticklish spots. “ Gohoohohohohohohothihihiihihita!”
Across the way, Marnie blinked at the scene, biting down her own giggles as she watched Bede squirm and squeak. “What did you say about being defeated?” She asked, walking up and watching him with fond eyes, kneeling so she sat beside the giggly blonde. “Mahahhahahahahharnie! Hehehehehehehehehelp mehehehehehehehehe! He pleaded, laughter growing louder when Gothita wormed her way beneath his uniform top, effectively driving him up the wall. “Nohohohohohohoho! Nohhohohohohoohhoh thehehehehehhehehre!”
"I don’t know... What do you think, Scrafty?” She turned to the lizard, who pulled on their pants in thought. When they turned to look up at her, their eyes were bright with amusement. “Hm...that’s not a bad idea. Alright, let’s do it.” Marnie decided, nodding.
Bede was too occupied with Gothita’s mischief to notice Marnie and Scrafty’s. “Gohoohohohohothihihihihta! Whahahahahhit! AHHH! AHHAHHAHAHHAHA! MAHAHAHHARNIE! NOHOHOHOOHOHO!” He arched with a squeal upon feeling Marnie’s fingers wrap around his legs, squeezing along his thighs and knees. Scrafty had made their way to his neck, their tiny hands scribbling and tickling along his neck and ears, snickering happily.
“Marnie, yes! Tickle tickle, Bede.” Marnie smiled, a teasing note in her voice. “You told me to help, so I’m helping.”
Bede could only laugh in response, tears of mirth dotting his eyes, threatening to spill down his flushed cheeks. Seeing this, Marnie finally decided to have mercy, gathering the Pokemon in her arms and sitting back, watching Bede recover.
“Heh….hehehe...heh…” The fairy gym leader gasped for breath, arms wrapping his arms around his torso as he recovered. When he finally did, he slowly sat up, shooting a halfhearted glare at the trio. “You three are too much…” He decided, pointing his glare at Gothita. “Especially you.”
The Pokemon merely let out a happy cry and jumped into his lap, planting a sweet kiss against his already flushed cheek. The dark gym leader laughed, her Pokemon snickering in her lap. Bede pulled off the Gothita, unable to hold back the laughter himself.
“Alright. Let’s try that again.”
I hope this was good! X3
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