the worst thing about realizing you have a great narrative opportunity to kill off one of your characters in a meaningful way is trying to argue w yourself about it and, through this, only making it more narratively interesting likeglkjdlfkjf
‘god, not them, anyone but them’ -> the weight of the meta emotional loss matches the stakes
‘but they’re connected to the people around them, they’re an essential part of the story and other characters’ -> the weight of the in universe loss matches the stakes, and enforces the themes of loss and the violence of systemic institutions and how losing one person effects all of us
‘they’ll leave behind someone who loves them’ -> and that person will fight for their memory now, won’t they? that will effectively set up act 3, won’t it? avenging your love (who did everything to save you, who gave it all up so you could still be breathing, and it isn’t fair, it isn’t fair that they fought for you and gave up their own life so you could stand here, alone) is often a more effective motivator than avenging yourself.
‘this isn’t supposed to be a tragedy’ -> bestie babe YOU are the person who put a dozen people in a government torture facility what the fuck do u think you’re writing
like girl help me ghlkjblkjsf
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Louie gets high at Mei’s party and texts Nemo and Tae.
@justkeepdancing-nemo @moon-yeongtae
Louie: holy shit u guyyyyyy
Louie: shit has been going dowwwwwwwwn. Or upside down? down and up really lol
Louie: i may not have muscles n shit but guess WHAT I DID
Tae: hulked out and killed someone?
Louie: woah man no! Duuuuuude have u seen me? impossible
Louie: i'm too cute to go to jail yet
Louie: i mean EVER
Louie: im too cute to go to jail EVER
Louie: did a keg stand lol. sorta
Tae: whoa nice
Tae: how you feelin?
Louie: a m a z i n g
Louie: you won't BELIEVE how good i am
Louie: i felt like IRON - no. i felt like CAPTAIN AMERICA. LIKE A KICK ASS
Louie: GUY
Tae: nice dude i'm glad ur having fun
Tae: is mark there
Louie: he was here somewhere. he asked me to come
Louie: dunno where he went. maybe he's with johnny idk
Louie: but who cares lol
Louie: i'm great
Louie: no more sads
Tae: wow you're really drunk huh?
Louie: nooooooooooooo
Louie: haha I was gonna drink
Louie: but then this weird girl showed up
Louie: and now i'm super
Tae: but you said you did a keg stand
Tae: that's like drinking isnt it?
Louie: is it? i thought it was just a hand stand on a keg lol
Louie: who knows? not me
Tae: i mean i guess
Tae: what weird girl
Louie: idk blond. weird. she wanted me to CHEAT ON MARK WTF
Louie: i mean she seriously helped me out but
also
Louie: wtf
Louie: weird. so weird. but we went to the bathroom and she
Louie: gave me t his stuff n i'm like
Louie: wow i mean i can't stop talking
Louie: i think I've said some seriously stupid shit
Tae: wait
Tae: what?
Louie: what? i didn't tell you anything stupid did I?
Louie: i don't think i did. thank god. imaigngi f i told u that
Louie: lololol i'd die forever
Tae: louie what are you taking about what stuff
Louie: stuff? which stuff
Louie: im not tellig
Tae: what did she give you
Louie: ohhhhhhhhhhh
Louie: oh i can tell u that haha
Louie: she called it all kinds of weird stuff like snow white or whatever which is bizarre af but whatever
Louie: i like sniffed it and it felt super whack
Tae: LOUIE WHAT THE FUCK
Louie: and then it was like
Louie: wow
Louie: idk man i wanted to not feel sad and i feel good now
Tae: holy shit what the fuck i cannot believe
Tae: louie that was so dumb
Louie: you're so dumb!
Louie: no that's not true
Louie: you're my faovriedgof person ever
Tae: where the fuck is nemo why isn't he here to tell you how stupid that was where are you
Tae: you're at mei's right
Louie: yeh i crashed lol
Louie: well no mark and johnny wanted to crash
Louie: and since mark's been cool and let me stay at his place i was like
Louie: well i should probs go
Tae: yeah well THAT DOESN'T MEAN YOU SHOULD'VE FUCKING DONE COKE OR WHATEVER YOU DID jesus fuck
Nemo: wait wtf did i just read
Tae: yeah
Tae: i have to go fucking get him
Louie: why are you maddddd? im not bugging anyone! i'm having fun!
Nemo: wait whats going on!
Nemo: louie are you okay?
Louie: i'm FINE
Louie: i'm super
Nemo: he did cocaine?
Louie: super human
Tae: he's at mei's party and he fucking YES
Louie: you could say
Louie: ughhh stop making this so big
Tae: do you know how many kids my brother had to see in the hospital bc of drugs louie?
Nemo: yeah that stuffs really bad
Nemo: its human chemicals
Nemo: do you feel okay? are you dizzy?
Louie: do you know what else is bad? life. being sad. freddie mercury leaving too soon. presidents. earthquakes
Nemo: louie D:
Louie: tthe hunger games
Tae: hey louie seriously how are you feeling like
Tae: in your body
Louie: that's a weird thing 2 akks dud
Louie: im fine!
Tae: okay but like
Tae: if u close ur eyes and like idk try to feel what's happening like is your heart beating really fast? do you feel like puking? do you feel like you're moving?
Louie: oh i mean yeah lol
Louie: my heart is skipping faster n when i
Louie: wait i gotta shut up shut up
Nemo: tae yah is that bad?
Nemo: would jun hyung know?
Tae: i'm asking him right nwo
Louie: so fussy you guys are fussy im gooood
Nemo: louie just keep texting u ok
Louie: look how good i am
Louie:
Nemo: very pretty
Tae: yeah gorgeous how's your breathing
Louie: wouldnt u like 2 kno
Louie: how's your butt
Louie: bet its still kicckable
Tae: you have literally never kicked my ass at anything
Tae: nemo does your appa know about this stuff? you probably shouldn't ask him huh?
Louie: DON'T AOISFJPDOGN
Nemo: its human drugs
Nemo: so not really
Louie: 4 THE LOV OF GOD
Louie: that guy lredy probs haaaaaates me
Nemo: his magic wouldnt work either i dont think
Louie: im a toxin to freidn parnets
Nemo: yeah if he ever finds out we woudl be banned from being in the same school i think he'd transfer me to that catholic place and appa hates catholicism
Nemo: this is why you shouldnt do drugs louie :heart: dont yu wanna keep being my friend
Louie: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Louie: you're my best mate wgodidpsdggdfh
Louie: you too tae
Tae: wow rude
Tae: oh okay
Louie: wow
Louie: dont be such a bitch tae
Tae: well you started it when you did cocaine
Louie: i used to think u were the coolest but maybe im demoting u n promoing
Louie: nemo
Louie: nemo ur the new hottie
Tae: the what
Louie: what?
Tae: louie i'm coming to get you
Louie: whyyyyy the partys still partying
Louie: ppl be FITIN
Louie: man ud fit right in with your muscle bod
Louie: well cept one fitghts girls
Tae: where are you in the house
Louie: idk the dance place. the life space
Louie: where everyone is?
Nemo: is jun going too?
Nemo: aghaldkfjaskldfj
Tae: yeah
Louie: wait wait wait wait wait
Nemo: ugh im sorry i cant be there
Louie: where u going
Nemo: louie im so sorry just keep texting us
Louie: no
Louie: i should dkslefadkad
Tae: hey louie what's your favorite queen song
Louie: skedlolde
Louie: what? ohhhhh wow tough choice man i mean
Louie: there are soooo many good SONGS
Louie: lately i've been listening 2 somebody to love a lot cause i been dfpsogdpsjsd
Louie: buuuuuut
Tae: i like don't stop me now
Louie: that's my OTHER FAVORITE
Louie: man u vibe so well with me i hate it
Louie: ha ha ha
Louie: j k this is why we're bffs
Nemo: hey queen was on the CD you gave me
Nemo: ive been listening to it!
Louie: reallyyyyy? did you like it?
Louie: hey hey tae tae. taeeeeeeee. tae you should send a slefdie
Louie: slefit
Louie: sel fie
Nemo: course! i love it
Nemo: maybe i'll pick a song and choreo a dance for it
Tae: you want a selfie?
Louie: oooooo yes please nemo
Louie: and def yes pls tae
Louie: do smehthing cute
Nemo [deleted]: ugh louiealkf
Nemo: where's mark again?
Nemo: im gonna text mark
Louie: idkkkkkkk
Tae:
Louie: he went to do some stuff with johnny
Louie: woahhhhhhhhh
Louie: waogdisjdpsgjosg
Louie: shit
Tae: that's me coming to get ur dumb ass
Louie: wait ur coming to get me?
Louie: shit shit shit wait i gotta skedoled
Louie: skedadled
Tae: what?
Louie: well much as i think ur great im ok
Louie: also i thinkk hoooo shit
Louie: gotta ifnd a window lol
Tae: louie if you don't stay there i will fucking murder you
Tae: i'm serious
Louie: deth by tae or tdeth by uncle d when he fins out
Louie: shit mn if i stay its a double featur
Nemo: :/
Nemo: please louie, we're worried about you
Nemo: we love you! we just want to make sure you're okay
Tae: yeah
Tae: you're gonna stay the night with me okay
Louie: oh god
Tae: it'll be great
Louie: hahaahahahahahaha
Louie: N E M O
Louie: tell him why i suddenly
Louie: sgosigdsgsdg
Nemo: louie i think you should
Nemo: um drink water
Louie: im good ill just find
Louie: makr
Louie: mark
Nemo: that's also good please find mark
Louie: n go to his place?
Tae: what did i say
Nemo: nothing he's on drugs
Tae: i said stay put
Louie: im really good thouuuugh
Louie: n mark will look out for me
Louie: marks nce
Tae: well mark left u alone and you did cocaine so i mean not that that's his fault i'm just saying
Nemo: ugh what if mark did cocaine
Nemo: u dont think mark did cocaine did he
Louie: dont blae me him 4 ME BEING ME
Tae: DID MARK DO COCAINE
Louie: honestly i dont dieossgodkh
Louie: NO
Tae: fuck
Nemo: he might not have! we dont know
Louie: i dont deesrve mrk naywayl ol
Tae: nemo never do cocaine please
Nemo: i cant see mark lee doing cocaine unless someone told him it was fun dip
Louie: he n johnny were just doing fun stuff 2gether
Tae: lmfao
Nemo: id probably DIE if i did cocaine so dont worry ahha
Nemo: big no no for fairies
Louie: speaking of immenditd death
Louie: we sure windows r no go
Nemo: which is why u shouldnt do it solidarity c'mon louie
Tae: if you aren't there when i get there i will be very upset
Nemo: he will be
Nemo: wont u louie
Louie: im scared i dont want the lady 2 yell at me
Louie: pls i wanna leave
Tae: I'm almost there
Louie: DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD=
Louie: what if i hid in the bathroom
Nemo: its gonna be okay louie :heart:
Nemo: just um, sing a little queen
Louie: no its not ill be ded 4ever n dragged home n stuck with my asshole fam n never escape n ded
Nemo: you won't be dead you'll be safe
Louie: shit someone said its the COPS
Louie: im double triple dead
Louie: n thats bullshit
Louie: my fam isnt safe they suuuuuuuck
Tae: WHERE ARE YOU
Tae: fuck there are so many people
Louie: trapped in the prison of xistance
Louie: a house of horrs
Louie: horors
Tae: i'm serious louie i can't find you
Louie: just make urself taller
Louie: ill see you
Tae: i'm gonna yell for you
Louie: ok ok ok
Nemo: ugh fksjf
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chapter 3 opens with stiles lying to coach about scott's whereabouts and listen this dialogue really is spot on like the writing style i don't love but she's got their way of speaking down PAT like their exchange is so funny i wish i could c/p it all
OHHHHH MY GOD FIRST DEREK POV SECTION HELL YEAH THIS IS WHY I'M HERE
teen wolf is over but i still get new officially liscensed derek hale content. this is the last time
mostly this is a recap of the shit kate pulled in 1.05 but also he recalls peter being a prankster with a wicked sense of humor. tbh if only it was that instead of "manipulative dick"
he's still working out bc he wants to be ready to tear her apart ):
ok so he had the same fire dream as scott (despite the fact that he "never dreams" that's pretty interesting idk if i buy it tho) and apparently his woke him up at 3am, "the hour of the wolf" WHAT DOES THAT EVEN MEAN
oh, this is interesting: in his dream, he actually fought the alpha, and while he was thinking "i can't win this" his "wolf brain" (lol) was thinking: "Kill him. Before he kills you. Because he will. He will come at you and at you— / There will be many Alphas, other Alphas; each one you kill will bring another. There will be blood on your hands forever. This one, today; another one, tomorrow. / And on Wolf Moon . . . legions. / Humans will try to destroy you. / If they fail, an Alpha will succeed."
(im copy-pasting from the FFN version to paste long quotes lol i dont wanna retype them. bless whoever decided to do that im only sorry they couldnt get thru all 19 chapters)
anyway this sounds like alpha pack stuff? i would be floored if they had thought that far ahead back in season ONE but theyre doing jackson's parents so maybe they did????
aw, apparently derek has a sleeping bag. this poor guy i hope he's not too uncomfortable ):
OHHH WE'RE GETTING TO THE GOODS we're back to hale fire angst
gonna c/p a long section:
There are a few people I'd like to kill, he thought, but no way would he put himself under the control of an Alpha he didn't even know. And besides, what he'd told Scott was true: as a werewolf, he, Derek, might be a predator, but he wasn't a killer. There was a difference, and anyone who'd been born a werewolf and raised by werewolf parents would know that. Scott had simply been bitten, apparently at random, and if he, Derek, didn't teach him how to deal with it, Scott would wind up either under the control of the Alpha or dead.
Dead, because Derek would kill Scott himself rather than allow him to expose the existence of werewolves to the humans who lived in Beacon Hills. Scott had threatened to tell Chris Argent everything. That was when Derek had taken Scott to see Uncle Peter, make him see that the Argents were ruthless killers. Eleven members of Derek's family had died in the fire that had swept through this house six years ago. Men, women, children. Not all of them werewolves.
And none of them deserving of the hideous, fiery death dealt to them by the Argents.
like...oh my god. derek is truly in a kill or be killed mindset holy shit it's Bad he's like so hellbent on getting revenge!! his anger is using him, not the other way around! like sure helping him keep control, because he wants it that badly and feels that strongly about it but when you are considering killing sixteen year olds There Is A Problem we do not kill children! that's bad! even the argents SAY they don't kill children and most of them are batshit insane!
would also like to take a moment to appreciate the "i'm a predator but i don't have to be a killer" bit bc that became his anchor in My Fanfiction instead of anger and i love that he says it as early on as s1, repeatedly, what a good choice i made
about kate: "cold-hearted bitch. if ever someone deserved to die..."
and then he immediately growls JUST AT THE THOUGHT OF HER and redoubles his workout routine efforts by switching his push-ups to single-hand so he can be Ready - "or the next time the fire came, it might devour him too"
good GOD we haven't even gotten to the kate angst yet and i'm already feeling #validated this was my exact interpretation of season 1 derek he's a fucking asshole because everybody fucking died and he doesn't want to be next because he's got to avenge them
more interesting werewolf lore via derek's internal monologue: "But that wasn't the entire dream, he reminded himself. I dreamed about other Alphas coming after me. Why? It' s not a crime to kill an Alpha. I'm a werewolf. The way we progress in status is through challenge. If my opponent won't back down, it's within my rights to take what's mine in any way I can. Even death." i...don't think that's how it works really? like by the end of the show alpha are implied to be more like parents and the thing to do is wait for them to pass and have the power be handed down to someone else in the pack like how laura got it after their family died. they're not animals and to people killing another person is a big deal?? i can see why among other reasons they decided this novel wasnt canon
he's so stressed he went out to jog shirtless (an important detail that they felt the need to mention) and now he's monologuing about how even though his life is horrible he wouldn't trade it for the life of a human for ANYTHING i love this born werewolf boy it's just so intricately part of who he is you can't take it out of him anymore than you could take the demon out of jesse he just wouldn't be the same person season 4 must have been so AWFUL for him ))))):
ohhhhhhhhhhh boy. "he used to work off all the extra testosterone by swimming laps. Tthat was how he had met HER"
i read a meta about this and it was not pretty i'm ready to be validated and also very sad
derek smells a real natural not-werewolf somewhere in the forest is it that white one from earlier why is there a wolf in california
haha then derek smelled scott ("spying?!") and got mad and wanted to shift, but he didn't because it's day and you never know who's watching, or plotting. "like i am"
this poor guy he's like so distinctly miserable
i don't really like the STYLE of this writing and i feel like the PLOT is going to be cardboard-thin at best but the CHARACTERS are coming through loud and clear so on that front it's very well done. i actually am enjoying myself a bit which i did not expect
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