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trivia-yandere · 1 year ago

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with love... k.nj

your valentine's date with namjoon was a success - too bad you don't know who he truly is.

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warning: stalking, yandere themes, dark themes, non-con, unsolicited touching/groping/kissing, somnophilia, public indecency, masturbation, non-con oral, alcohol intake, nipple sucking, cumshot,

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“Nam…joon...” his name sounds so sweet coming from your lips, Namjoon thinks. It’s slurred only a bit due to the alcohol in your system.

“Yes?” Namjoon smiles down at you, a dimpled smile that has your heart racing because of how handsome he looks now. “Let’s get you home, Y/N.”

“Home…” you murmur.

Namjoon has a protective arm around you to keep you in place. You were heavily intoxicated and he was a bit tipsy, but he understood that in order to get you home safe he couldn’t drink as much as you.

The moon shines bright above the two of you as you both walk down the quiet road. It’s a bit chilly and Namjoon is thankful that he brought an extra scarf so that you'll remain warm in this weather.

“Did you enjoy yourself?” Namjoon asks rhetorically. He knows you did - you were nothing but fits of laughter all throughout the night. You danced and swayed your hips to the music, drank with no worries in the world and smiled so sweetly at him that it caused his heart to swell.

“Yes.” you murmur, your eyelids began to feel heavy and you wanted nothing more than to be greeted with your bed soon. “The date was nice. T-Thank you.”

Namjoon hums in satisfaction.

It was your first date with Namjoon - conveniently on Valentine’s day. He had mustered up the courage to speak to you after a few months of quietly gaining up the confidence to do so - his eyes setting on you each morning as the pair of you left for work. You lived directly across from him in an apartment you shared with your mother - a sweet lady.

Namjoon’s mind begins to recall the events of the date - it wasn’t typical as most Valentine’s dates are. Restaurants were booked to full capacity and even cafe’s appeared to be busy. You insisted karaoke was okay when he mentioned it, and thus started the date - you and him drinking while belting out lyrics like your lives depended on it.

The karaoke bar was nearly empty and that meant that it was something special for just the two of you - just you and Namjoon. You danced and swayed your hips as the alcohol ran through your system, a wide smile on your lips.

You were teasing him, Namjoon thinks. Teasing him with the dress you wore - a white dress that hugs you perfectly and left little to the imagination. He likes to think that you wore it specifically for him - wanting him to see just how amazing you looked in it; how perfect your ass sat in it.

Yes - Namjoon knows you teased him nonstop. In the karaoke bar when you chose that song - a song where you had to sway your hips and give him such sensual eyes. Tease him with how close you’d sit to him when the pair of you ate, how you’d touch him when he’d say a joke and you’d laugh heartily.

Even now, you continued to tease him. You leaned against his arm and held onto him so tightly that Namjoon knows you don’t want him to go.

The apartment building was now in sight and Namjoon knows that you don’t want him to go - you seem to clench on his arm even tighter at just the thought. “You should drink some water, Y/N. It would be good for you.”

You nod in agreement, the pair of you now strolling down the hall to your apartment. You and him are in front of your door and it doesn’t strike you as odd when Namjoon already knows the code to get inside.

Your apartment is similar to his as far as layout. He knows where the kitchen is and it's where he goes to get you some water. Again, it doesn’t strike you as odd as it should; how comfortable Namjoon is in your home.

Namjoon hears you shuffling down the hallway, no doubt to your bedroom. He rummages through your cabinets to find a cup - and when he does he fills it with ice and pours the water inside.

“Y/N-”

Namjoon sighs when he enters your bedroom - the door cracked slightly. There's little light, only from the moon shining slightly through your window.

You were asleep already, soft snores could be heard. Namjoon thinks you look cute - you didn’t even manage to get out of your clothes yet.

Namjoon shuts the door behind him with a huff, coming around the corner to your bed. He places the cup of water down on your bedside table. “You still have the flowers I sent you.”

You had them all, Namjoon notes, even the ones from when he first started to send them to you. They’re on both sides of your bedside table and even some on the floor by them - Namjoon couldn’t help but smile.

‘These are for you.’ your mother signs, pointing to the large bouquet of flowers in her hand. She had just walked through the door as you were finishing up washing the dishes.

You tilt your head, eyes scanning the large bouquet - it’s sunflowers wrapped neatly in pink wrapping. ‘Does it say who it's from?’ you signed back, taking a few steps forward to grab the bouquet. ‘There’s a note.’ you sign, grabbing the bouquet of flowers.

‘You never told me you had an admirer.’ your mother signs back, a smirk forming on her lips.

‘I don’t.’ you snicker to yourself, placing the bouquet of flowers upon your kitchen table and grabbing the note. It comes in a pink envelope sealed tightly.

“I repeatedly dream of you when my eyes are laid to sleep.

Often, I think of your golden hue whenever my mind plunges deep”

You re-read the words a few times before shaking your head. The bottom is signed - k.nj.

You don’t know anyone with those initials - but you don’t allow yourself to dwell. You’re sure that the flowers probably weren’t even for you and instead, were for someone else. Maybe it was delivered to the wrong house. Such sweet words can not be addressed to you when you are single.

However, you kept the flowers - what were you suspected to do? Throw them away? They were pretty and even if the card wasn’t addressed to you, you’d pretend they were.

“I know you enjoyed my little gifts, Y/N. I’d see the smile on your lips when you got them.” Namjoon murmurs to you, a hand gently stroking your cheek. “So beautiful, Y/N. Teasing me right now…”

There’s a whine that releases from Namjoon’s throat as his hand trails down your cheek to your jaw then your exposed neck. You had teased him relentlessly the entire night with this dress - the same dress that was now rising up your thighs to expose your smooth skin.

“You are such a little tease, baby. Wearing this dress knowing it would drive me crazy.” Namjoon shakes his head, his pants tightening with excitement. “You shouldn’t be sleeping in this. You’ll be uncomfortable.”

Namjoon was going to take off your dress and assure you were tucked in for bed like you should be. Your snores get softer as he hoists you up, his fingers grasping the small zipper behind your back. He slowly pulls it down, a hand rubbing along your bare back and he shudders.

“So beautiful.” Namjoon murmurs when your dress is off of you. Your breast naturally falls as he lays you back onto the bed, your nipples erect due to the cool air of your bedroom.

Namjoon gently folds your dress and places it aside. His eyes glance your way just as you shuffled. He begins to think you’re waking up, but you only move to get more comfortable - widening your legs slightly.

Namjoon hums. “You want me to look at you?” he asks, in a voice so soft that even he couldn’t believe he said it.

Namjoon swallows, his mouth beginning to salivate at the view of you. Your panties were what was drawing him in - simply because he was the one that got them for you. “Did you know it was me, Y/N?” Namjoon murmurs, his eyes zoning in on the lacy material that leaves little to the imagination.

Your pace begins to slow just as you reach your floor. On the floor right outside your door was yet another bouquet of flowers, this time an array of different types of flowers instead of the sunflowers of before. Right beside it is a gift bag with gift paper inside. “This can’t be for me…” you mumble to yourself aloud.

Nonetheless, you squat down to grasp the flowers and the gift bag, curiosity winning the game. You open the door to your home and go inside.

You place the bouquet on your kitchen table and go to open the gift bag. There’s a card inside the bag that you open.

“My devotion for you is not for any other

For some might say it is overdone

Together we have one another

So you shall not need anyone…

With love, k.nj…”

You blink at the card. Yet another poem-like note was left. You dig deeper through the gift bag and your hands touch a material. You lift it out and your eyes widen slightly. Heat rushes through you as you realize they’re panties - all different kinds. Seamless, lace, cotton and silk.

You inhale, throwing the panties back inside the gift bag and make your way towards your front door. There’s shuffling outside in the hallway and you slam your door open.

“I…”

You startled your neighbor with your actions. He flinches, dropping the plant he had in his hand with the loud slamming of your door opening. He turns towards you with wide eyes.

“Is everything okay…?” the man asks.

You nod your head frantically. “Y-Yes. Sorry about that.” you rush across towards your neighbor. “I didn’t mean to scare you.”

The man smiles a dimpled smile that causes heat to rush through you - similar to before. “It’s alright.” he assures, kneeling down to pick up the plant. “Was I making too much noise? Sometimes I get locked out of my apartment…” he trails off, glancing away with tinted cheeks.

“No, not at all. Just thought you were someone else…” you murmur. “I’m Y/N.”

The man nods his head, offering you the same polite smile. “Namjoon.” he replies.

“You had to have known it was me, baby. That’s why you kept all my gifts.” Namjoon was only torturing himself being around you for this long - but he couldn’t tear his eyes away from you. You were utterly beautiful; perfect. You didn’t throw away the gift like he initially thought you would have and now you were wearing it. “Yes…that’s why you agreed to go on a date with me, baby. You knew it was me…”

This had to be why you were teasing him. You knew he’d want you to be comfortable while you slept - that’s why you wore a dress. That’s why you fell asleep; so he’d be the gentleman that he was and remove it - so he could see that you were wearing his gift.

Namjoon’s fingers hook between the lacy material of the panties. “You’d want me to have a look, right?” he asks, eyes flickering up to your peaceful face. “That’s why you opened your legs for me, baby. You want me to see you like this.”

Namjoon begins to pull your panties down your legs, eyes widening at your bare pussy for his eyes to see. So perfect, he thinks. His mouth salivates at the thought of tasting you - to dip his face deep into your pussy and feast upon your essence.

“So perfect, baby. You don’t even realize how perfect you are.” Namjoon pushes your thighs apart to get a closer look at your pussy. “I can’t believe I’m seeing your pussy closer than before. Remember that time you touched yourself right in front of the window? It was like you knew I was watching you, baby.”

Namjoon understands that this was going overboard. It was different from him to catch sight of you as you both went to work in the mornings. He’d greet you and you’d greet him back with that soft, sweet smile. Now, however, he was watching you through your bedroom window - just out of sight. It’s a moonless night and you’ve just gotten out of the shower. Your bedroom lights are dimmed and you don’t notice that your window is cracked open when you left it closed prior to bathing.

Namjoon understands that this was going overboard - but he couldn’t help himself. You dropped the towel on the floor and began to lotion your skin - how he longs to touch it. How he longs to feel your soft skin beneath his hand, to smell your scent fresh from the shower.

You had to know he was here watching you - the way you touch your body as you lotion it. The way your hands grip your breast and bend down right in his view to massage your legs tells him that you were putting on a show for his very eyes.

Especially when you lay down on your bed and open your legs. Your hands dip between your thighs and your fingers would soon be playing with your clit. At this, Namjoon cannot help but do the same as you - right outside your window for anyone passing by to see. But it’s night time and dark, he’s completely in the shadows.

Namjoon wraps a needy hand around his cock, fully exposing himself. He doesn’t waste any time - he has to do this now. Your left hand grips your breast - he wish it was his. How erect your nipples were right now, so much so that he wants to wrap his tongue around them and suck until they’re numb.

Your moans are what’s driving him crazy and causing him to pump his cock harder. He spits into his hand for lubrication, his mind pretending that it’s your sweet essence. You sound so sweet and full of lust; fully stuck in the moment.

Namjoon’s eyes widen as your fingers dip inside of you and your moans grow even louder. You begin to pump your fingers in and out, your chest heaving with pleasure-filled moans. Your breast begins to bounce as you pump faster, looking for an orgasm that he wishes he was there to give.

It’s embarrassing knowing that Namjoon cums right in the palm of his hand right as you do around your fingers. You don’t know he’s there, he tells himself, but there’s a sick part of him that tells him that you did.

“You wanted me to do this, baby. That’s why you wore that dress and these panties.” Namjoon is holding one of the flowers he’s gotten you recently. “I’ll try to make it special, baby. It is Valentine’s Day.”

If Namjoon would have known that this is what you wanted, he would have planned something a bit more romantic. However, this wasn’t going to stop him. He removes the petals from the flowers and begins to place them around your bed. “Next time, I’ll make sure I have candles. That it’s more romantic for us.” he assures, murmuring to you as if you could hear him.

Namjoon undoes his pants and allows them to fall to the ground. He does the same to his underwear, getting out of them entirely. He dips onto the bed as gently as he could to not disturb you.

Your pussy is on full display for Namjoon, so much so that he shudders once more. He licks his lips, breathing increasing as he lowers between your legs. His tongue pokes out of his mouth and gently, he licks a stripe up your pussy to your clit. “Fuck.” he says against your pussy.

Namjoon couldn’t hold himself back anymore - not when you tasted this good. He dives deep into your pussy, ravishing you. His head bobs from side to side, his hands hooking beneath your thighs to keep you in place.

Namjoon can hear your sleepy moans and wonder if you’re dreaming of him at this moment - of him pleasuring you like he was doing now. Your thighs slightly twitch and you begin to shuffle in his grasp, but that doesn’t stop Namjoon. No, he only leans back to spit onto your already wet clit, then continues to ravish you like he was.

Namjoon just knows you’re loving what he’s doing to you. There’s soft pants releasing from your lips, even as you remain in a peaceful slumber. He’s positive that if you were awake for him, that you’d be moaning even louder than you were when you were pleasuring yourself - he just knows you would be.

Namjoon leans back to admire his work - your glistening pussy. He licks his lips as he gets on his knees, hovering slightly above you. “So, so beautiful.” he says with a bit of a whine in his voice.

Namjoon gives his cock a hard squeeze after he wraps his hand around it. “So perfect in every way possible. I knew this pussy would be the best ever since that day I watched you in your window.” Namjoon glances up at your window - the outside is just as dark as it was that day. For an odd reason, there’s a rush that goes through him thinking about someone walking by and seeing him and you like this.

“I could eat your pussy all night.” Namjoon continues to tug at his cock, his eyes zoning in at your wet pussy, arousal dripping from it. “You’d let me, too, won’t you baby?” he whimpers. “My perfect little Y/N…all mine.”

There’s a wave of pleasure flowing through Namjoon right now. It’s blissful to be with you like this - so close to you. The act is intimate - something he’d cherish for the rest of his life.

Kim Namjoon loves you with every fiber of his being. You were an angel in his eyes - ever since he first laid eyes on you months prior when you and your mother first moved in.

Namjoon isn’t sure what it was about you that drove him towards you. You were pretty, yes. You were quiet and polite, sending quick grins his way as he passed you in the hallway. He learned that you and your mother move directly across from him - a woman he’d soon realize was deaf when he saw you signing to her one day on his way out of his apartment.

Namjoon isn’t sure what it was about you that drove him to follow you like he did. You went to work and then home - and when you weren’t home, you were at cafe’s. It didn’t look like you had many friends; if any. You spent most of your time alone when you were at cafe’s, drinking latte’s and reading books.

Maybe it was your beauty that drew you to Namjoon. Effortlessly beautiful and you never had to try too hard.

Maybe it was your innocence - purely oblivious to your surroundings. Namjoon followed you constantly when he wasn’t busy - he knew the route you took home from work and the exact time you’d get home each day. He remembered your favorite drink at the cafe and just how long you’d stay there - no longer than two hours.

Namjoon isn’t sure what it is about you that draws so much of his attention towards you - but you’re undoubtedly you. You were a kind daughter who lived a simple life. You held no fear in your heart for the outside world or danger; luckily there was no threat wandering around you. He’d know if there was.

“It isn’t enough, baby.” Namjoon sighs with a shake of his head. “Your pussy’s so wet that I know it’d feel better than my hand.”

Namjoon grumbles when your thighs twitch. “Ah, you agree, right?” he questions, squeezing his cock tighter. “You’d let me, baby? You want me to feel how wet your pussy is for me…”

Namjoon inches closer to you, the tip of his cock already leaking pre-cum with just the thought of having a piece of you.

Namjoons brows furrow. He can feel his body flush with heat, especially his cheeks. He bites his bottom lip when his tip brushes against your clit. He groans, goosebumps erupting onto his arms. “Such a pretty pussy…” he rubs his cock along your wet folds, unable to take his eyes off of it.

Deep in Namjoon’s gut there’s pleasure building up, but he doesn’t want to cum so soon. No, he wants to feel your juices mixed with his precum, feel it drip down the shaft of his cock and -

“Shit, baby.” Namjoon moans aloud. He lets go of his cock to hold onto your hips, his hips thrusting so that his cock was rubbing directly against your clit. “You’re getting wetter by the second, baby. I know it feels good for you.”

Namjoon’s eyes, hooded eyes full of lust, flicker to your now bouncing breast. With the way he’s thrusting against you, it bounces beautifully.

“Wearing the panties I got you…” Namjoon grumbles, leaning down so his lips are right next to your nipples. “...not wearing a bra under this dress. You wanted me, my love.”

Namjoon wraps his mouth around your nipple, sucking on the sensitive bud like his life depended on it. He’s full on panting now, his breathing increasing erratically at how good you’re being for him.

Namjoon pops your nipple from his mouth to twirl his tongue on it, licking as though it’s a lollipop. There’s sweat lining his forehead and he never wanted this special moment between the two of you to end - not ever.

Namjoon couldn’t wait for this moment to happen again - to see you on his cock and your face contorting with different waves of pleasure.He wants to hear those same moans he heard while he stood outside your window - witness the same waves of pleasure go through you. Next time, he’d want to look into your eyes as he has you dive through your orgasm.

Namjoon’s teeth slightly bite down on your nipple, grazing it slightly. It doesn’t take a genius to know that he’s going to be cumming soon. “I’m gonna cum right on your pussy, baby. You’d let me, right? You’d want me to cum on your pussy?”

Namjoon grunts loudly at just the thought of doing so - his mind flashing with his seed dripping all over your clit and coating your inner thighs entirely. It’s the least you could allow him to do - after all, he has admired you for so long.

“So beautiful, baby,” Namjoon grumbles, his cock twitching for a release. “So beautiful and all mine.

Namjoon detached himself from your breast to lock his eyes with your pussy once more. It’s glistening with your own arousal - he knew you’d enjoy this.

“Fuck, fuck, fuck,” Namjoon whimpers out, your warm heat allowing him the release he wants. “Such a pretty pussy, my love. So pretty and all mine.” he grunts, thick robes of his cum shooting all over your clit, seeping down across your ass.

Namjoon doesn’t stop. No, not until your pussy is fully coated with his love for you, sticky and white and warm. And even then, Namjoon cannot bring himself to want to stop. “I could do this with you all night, baby. You’d want that, wouldn’t you?”

Namjoon leans down to press a soft kiss to your lips, whimpering right into it. “My pretty, Y/N.” he murmurs between kisses. “All mine.”

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forsaken-headcanons · 8 days ago

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in an AU where Chance is a robot...

[heavy credits go to https://pin.it/16oorotS4 THIS GUY for the inspiration I got to incorporate nuts and bolts into this gambler!]

[lots of these are based on how I play Forsaken]

-Over time, especially with older maps, Chance internally mapped out the whole layout of every map, and pointed out certain POIs. These include:

> The killer's relative spawn location, and the area farthest from it

> All known medkit spawns

> All possible generator locations

-He bleeds purple. Think of it like Thirium from DBH

-UNLIKE ME, he has immaculate aim. Unbarred from human error, as a machine, he is an absolute beast at aiming, coming outta nowhere from behind a wall to noscope the killer.

-[this is where I begin to take inspiration from the aformentioned user] Chance's glasses are literally part of his face. some visor shit. Taking it off is like taking off a TV's screen itself.

-on his torso is a literal coin slot. yes a coin slot. and that's how he's powered on, through the coin slot. like an arcade machine, one coin = one month of constant activity, if you don't count internal system repairs during sleep mode. Chance usually starts off with 12 every year, and has an internal alarm clock to remind him of when time is almost up.

-what remains of the cash in Elliot's wallet is literally the only thing keeping him alive.

-when he turns on, his glasses display a slot machine hitting 777s, or JACKPOT

-he has a full combat mode. like full on laser cannons for arms type of deal. but y'know the Spectre, THAT GUY probably somehow blocked off the directives concerning that full combat mode.

-he programmed a string of code so that when he successfully shoots someone, internal audio plays the jackpot sound effect (this is true for me, I have that set as my hitsound)

-he's VERY good pals with Builderman, being the only mechanic amongst them. asks for repairs and maintenance from him a lot, which led to them becoming close buddies.

-his creator is named Lady Luck. not much is known about her except for that she's one of the richest people in Robloxia, barring Admins. they are mother and son :)) [she's fucking dead by the way]

Might add more. Remember this signature

- 🌟

Ooooh, robot chance..... neat. Also, I'll try to remember you, 🌟 anon :)

Quick edit to add in the Pinterest img, posted by the original artist on there. Their @/s are labeled on the image and typed in the alternate text.

#forsaken #forsaken roblox #roblox forsaken #forsaken headcanons #🌟 anon #chance forsaken #Mod Two Time🗡

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bonny-kookoo · 1 year ago

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Jungkook

𝐒𝐞𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐀𝐧𝐱𝐢𝐞𝐭𝐲 | Part 13

He'll show you it was worth it.

Tags/Warnings: Game Designer!Jungkook, Brat Tamer!Jungkook, kinda himbo!Jungkook, Non Idol AU, established relationship, minor angst, he's in love ew [Tags will be different for every part!]

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You arrive about half an hour later, and you can't help but sit up straighter as Jungkook pulls up into the driveway of the Airbnb he's rented.

Up until now you've not seen any pictures of it at all- Jungkook being adamant on making sure that you don't ruin the surprise along the way, distracting you whenever you'd bring up the topic at all. So to say that the surprise definitely landed would be an understatement, as you look at the small but very fancy looking house he's currently parking the car at.

A lady walks out, flowery print on her dress while she smiles happily, visibly excited as you and Jungkook exit the car. "Oh you must be the young couple-" She beams, walking towards you with a bit of a limp- probably from old age catching up to her. He gives Jungkook and you a hug before she leans back, looking you up and down. "Well, you weren't lying when you said your girl is pretty!" She compliments, and you have the urge to hide behind your boyfriend for a good moment- only saved by said man taking over quickly, telling Maria to go inside as you both take your stuff with you.

Of course he argues as you want to take your bag- taking it himself instead, absolutely not admitting to any form of struggle at all.

"So! I stocked up the fridge, there's wine too- and I baked something small, just because I had the time left over." She giggles, as Jungkook sets the bags down near the front door for now, walking up to the elderly woman that's standing in the middle of the large interior. "Oh, and I asked my husband about the carpet, and he told me to tell you not to worry about it-" She says a bit more serious. "-Apparently you can just wash these kinds of stains out, no worries there." She winks towards Jungkook, who nods, hoping you don't hear the hidden implications of that statement-

though the glare you send him makes it clear that you do.

"So! I reckon you have the general layout still in mind- treat it like your own home as long as you here." She offers with a gentle hand on Jungkook's shoulder. "Go wild, you're only young once! Ah, and before I forget-" She perks up, before she pulls Jungkook away to whisper something into his ear- something apparently very important, because he looks oddly serious as he nods towards her, the woman patting his back in encouragement of something you're not sure of.

You're busy exploring the holiday home for a good moment, when Jungkook brings the last of your luggage into the bedroom, balcony door opened as you stand on it to look outside. "So? Do you like it?" He asks, standing behind you now, warm body pressed against your back while his chin leans on your shoulder.

"It's.. Jungkook this must've been so fucking expensive, what the hell?" You worry. "And also there's so many towels in the bathroom-" You begin, making him laugh.

"Oh yeah, I told maria you're kinda messy- and since I'm planning on catching up to my highscore while we're here you'll definitely need them-" He begins, making you turn around and smack his pecks- hard. "Ow!" He whines playfully, pouting at you.

"What do you mean, you told Maria about our sex life?!" You complain, and he shrugs.

"Hey I'm pretty proud of our-" He begins, but your glare shuts him up. "Listen, I didn't know if there was like.. a cleaning fine if we mess up stuff too much. And I wanna love you a lot while we're here, so I wanted to make sure I thought of everything!" He explains himself, and you just run a hand over your face. Well, what did you expect anyways?

This is Jungkook, after all. This man coded a full on sex-diary app just for the two of you.

"You know I've been wondering.." You say, leaning your arms over his shoulders, back pressed against the edge of the balcony as he leans in closer, gaze hooded now. "...what spot are you in right now?" You ask, and his face immediately morphs, eyes sharp as his tongue presses into the inside of his cheek.

"..maybe third." He mumbles, before he pulls you back inside by your waist sitting on the edge of the soft bed with you on his lap, eyes hungry while his hands travel beneath your shirt. "But I'll sure be first again once this trip has finished." He tells you like a decision made, no arguments allowed.

"You sure about that?" You wonder, pushing him against his chest until he's left laying on the mattress below, your hands pressed into the softness.

"Absolutely." He says, before pulling your face towards him, licking up all remnants of your strawberry lipbalm and sweet icecream treat you had earlier before arriving. Your hips grind on him without any shame, sounds that escape him singing of his own growing arousal as he lets his fingers dip between the fabric of your pants and your skin. They know exactly where they want to go, moving around until he's got a full hold of your ass, only removing his palms from beneath your jeans to slap back down with open palms.

You move to throw your shirt over your head- his fingers eager to unhook your bra for you, when he sees them.

His movements stutter a bit, face showing utter devastation as his round eyes find yours with worry. "You changed them." He says out of breath, quietly, and you look down at your chest, noticing that yes- you did change the jewelry.

"Oh.. yeah." You admit, making his hands gently hold your tits just to run his thumb over the two little wings on each side of your nipples. They're cute- very fitting, and he wonders where you bought them. But they're also not the little silver hearts you both always wear ever since your second big date.

"...I'll make you love me again." He promises, pulling you down again to kiss you, before he rolls you both over, pressing eager kisses to your neck.

"I still love you-" You argue with a giggle, removing his shirt to be met with the familiar metal jewelry you used to wear as well before you changed them out of pettiness.

"Then I'll make you love me the same as you did before I was a jerk." He urges, pushing you up on the bed a little to properly climb on it, knees dipping down into the soft bedding below you.

"I do that too!" You laugh, and he playfully bites at your collarbone, before looking at you with a gaze made of thousands of lifetimes worth of affection.

"Then I'll make you love me even more." He offers, while you hold his cheeks in your palms, equally as struck by cupid's arrow.

"Impossible.." You say, pulling him closer. "But you're welcome to try."

#bts imagine #bts fanfic #bts fic #jungkook imagine #jeon jungkook x reader #jeon jungkook imagine #bts jungkook imagine #bts smut #jungkook x reader #bts jungkook fanfic #jungkook smut #bts jungkook x reader #jeon jungkook imagines #jungkook imagines #bts jeon jungkook imagine #jeon jungkook fanfic

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SAILOR SENSHI 20TH ANNIVERSARY ALUMNI REUNION - FANSUBBED

EDIT on Jan 3rd: SORRY. I couldn't stand how many mistakes I see in my edit despite multiple checks I've done before Jan 1st... I ended up reuploading the videos instead. Can't guarantee it's perfect now, but it's much better (from the creator's perspective.) Anyone who reblogged before Jan 3rd will have the old link that's now broken.

This is the TV version, aired on CBC in Japan on December 25th, 2023.

Due to YouTube's upload length limit, the show has been split into 3 parts based on the provided commercial breaks. The videos are unlisted on YouTube, so cannot be searched, instead only accessed by the proper web link.

Some notes & disclaimer:

1. I’m not a fluent Japanese speaker, but I do know Hiragana, Katakana, basic Japanese grammar and kanji, and a few good tools to use for translation. All’s to say, all mistakes are mine. Sorry if there’s any!

2. I’m also not a professional translator. Due to the grammar differences between Japanese and English, some sentences will sound awkward in English for the conversation to make sense.

3. This really was a casual chat for the ladies, so they kept talking over each other. I tried to highlight all the chit-chats with colour-coded subtitles matching their Senshi colours. Because of this I tried different formatting and decided on the layout you see now, even if it's still a bit messy, and some subtitles are quite fast-paced. Sorry if it doesn't look good or is tough to read. :(

4. The character “会”(kai) in “戦士会” (senshi-kai) can be translated into: - “Club”, a noun for group; - “Meetup” or “reunion”, a noun and synonym for “event”. Depending on context, you will see “戦士会” (senshi-kai) translated into “Senshi Club” or “Senshi Reunion.”

PART 1

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PART 2

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PART 3

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Upcoming:

I will be working on a subtitled version of Miyuu's behind-the-scene video of this program. (JAN 7th EDIT: The subbed version is available here!)

A Director's Cut version will be made available in Japan on Jan 9, 2024. I'll keep an eye out if there's a copy floating around. If there's any difference in that version, I'll also make a subtitled version for sharing as well. If there are any translation mistakes I've made in this current round of subtitling, I'll also take the chance to rectify them in the new version.

PLEASE ENJOY, REBLOG AND SHARE! 🌙

#pgsm #pretty guardian sailor moon #sailor moon live action #kitagawa keiko #sawai miyuu #izumi rika #komatsu ayaka #azama mew #sailor senshi 20th anniversary alumni reunion #pgsm 20th anniversary #pgsm cast #pgsm cast reunion #senshi reunion #khmyh translates #khmyh's fansub & translations #Youtube

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e-rated-beardo · 7 months ago

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Scorn and the Saint-Maker, chapter 17: I’d like for you and I to go romancing

Scorn and the Saint-Maker is a murder mystery/ineffable husbands romance/who-turned-them-human Good Omens fanfic, set at a university in Scotland, with lots of (as-yet skippable) level-5 smut, ✨sexy maths✨ (reportedly), and one trans angel

Chapter details and art WIPs below ⬇️⬇️

Chapter 17 summary: Fell and Crowley take a day trip to Edinburgh to gatecrash a conference. We discuss maths, strangers, and nomenclature.

Rating: Chapter rated M for a tiny smut (literally one sentence; skippable). Fic rated E.

Excerpt:

Fell smirked his most bastardly smirk and turned his head in the direction in which the stranger had left. “You told that gentleman… that…” Anthony Crowley, quickest mind in Aberdeen (probably), needed several seconds to realise that Fell wasn’t taking an artful pause with a hand still mid-gesture, but had in fact lost his train of thought entirely. Cleverly deducing that his intent stare must mean he had seen something interesting, he followed it with his own, further into the cemetery. Crowley could not be certain that he and Fell were looking at the same thing, but there certainly weren’t many things in sight that caught Crowley’s eye quite as effectively. “That’s a big-ass angel,” he commented.

Read chapter 17 on AO3 ➡️ or start from the beginning ↩️ (71k words, WIP)

"Professor Agarwal, you're an idiot" 🎨

I had to redraw this three times. Bloody thing caused me a crumpled-up sheet of aquarelle paper! That never happens. And it was all Crowley's fault: the How's Your Naked Man Friend reaction face is an absolute joy and worked out brilliantly every time.

The lecture hall background, general layout, and bits of Fell's position (even the sceptical lady in the back) used a House MD shot as reference, by the way. @firstvisittoearth might be interested to know that the House-coding is showing in the art now. 🙃

Besmirching Edinburgh 🎨

In case you didn't see my sketch yesterday (which is already my most popular post this month, ok ok I get the message I'll draw more smooches ❤️)

This had me move stuff around A LOT while editing. I also tried out a new set of watercolours that my partner's gifted me. Verdict: eh, good and bad. Definitely need to play around more to figure them out. I ended up using the old ones for the faces and some of the sky anyway (and still had to adjust digitally, idk if I should take a bloody class or if I just need more skintone colours to play with...)

Read chapter 17 on AO3 ➡️ or start from the beginning ↩️

@goodomensafterdark

#good omens #fanfic #my fics #fic update #scorn and the saint-maker #ineffable husbands #aziraphale #crowley #e-rated #fanart #india ink #watercolour #art wip #colour-switched ineffable husbands #redhead angel blond demon #omg statue #what can be #✨mystery✨#is it a ✨Clue✨?

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underthebluerain · 4 months ago

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FAVE CREATORS ART CHALLENGE

The premise is simple. Just think of your fave creators on this site and write a post listing some of your fave creations that were made by them. Tell them why you like it, if the coloring is pretty, if the blending is top notch, if it inspired you or just gush about the characters... And don't forget to tag them so they can see it.

Radskier Kiss by @misterkarchie

What goes through my mind when I see this art is "Since the invention of the kiss, there have been five kisses that were rated the most passionate, the most pure. This one left them all behind." Enough said, I think. Actually, no. I really like that it's b&w -some pieces look better like that than in color, imo. Love the pose and the hand-holding, and how soft the hair looks!!! The lil' tear in Radovid's eye GOT ME. This looks so romantic and sweet I want to look at it forever.

Rhaenicent Appreciation Week Day 2 by @maxanor

Oh, you feel the show's relationship between Alicent and Rhaenyra wasn't heartbreaking enough? Gifmakers got you covered! In all seriousness, the blue&gold compliment each other so well here. The blending is fantastic (special shout-out to the first gif with its mirroring tree scenes). The quote is as melancholic as these two, and the waterdrop effect... and the fact that it's used to transition from present to past… and how it makes it feel like tears falling on it because of the nostalgia of their happy memories??? Wow.

16 Years Of Merlin by @ughmerlin

I absolutely dig the VHS edits I've seen around this year, and this one is fantastic. Love that each season is color-coded and how each gets a few iconic scenes (and it can't have been easy to pick!). The blending is amazing, and the little circles with a choice quote are a cute touch. BBC Merlin was the very reason I joined tumblr, I can't believe it's been that long since it aired, and I can't believe that not only the fandom is still active but also making such cool pieces. I don't recall if I was still using VHS by the time I watched it, but this makes me feel like I can just pop it in and relive my first tumblr hyperfixation.

Family Tree Of House Nymeros Martell Of Sunspear by @ivashkovadrian

I've never been in a book fandom so dedicated to facecanons, and they're super fun! This one must have been A LOT of work. So many different characters from different pieces of media being brought together to represent characters that are unseen on screen, plus all the planning and organization to make everything fit and look good. Love the backgrounds, with a texture that reminds me of old parchment -special mention to the first gif with the gorgeous sea shot, and the second where the army appears to be riding into the unknown sandy void of the desert. And lastly I love to see fictional family trees, it kind of scratches an itch in my brain.

The Borgias Costume Appreciation 56 by @lady-arryn

As a costume-obsessed viewer, I have reblogged my fair share of costume edits on tumblr, and I can say with certainty lady-arryn's are the best. Eliza manages to gif crisp even the little details of the clothing and does gorgeous collections of outfits in different media. Although an incredible gifmaker overall who also has fantastic concepts, blending, fonts and coloring in other types of edits, I think making these costume edits is deceptively difficult! I could've pulled up any example, but I chose this one because this dress is one of my favorites. Along with that gauzy, dreamy sharpening, the coloring makes the red POP in a beautiful way. I once kept this gifset open on my browser for like an hour while doing other things simply because I wanted to keep looking at it.

Radskier + And If He Sinks To Darkest Night by @naumaxia-art

Kit is one of the visual artists who has been keeping this fandom watered throughout the drought, and I am very thankful for it. I love the layout of this piece in particular, which calls to mind the kings of a deck of cards. The cloudy orange to dark works wonders as a background that's pretty but doesn't steal attention away from the main event. LOVE the details (the tiny buttercup on Radovid's hand! The signet ring on Jaskier's! How soft and flowy the hair looks in the breeze!). And how they're together but back to back, separated but thinking about each other. The star-crossed lovers of it all......... Yeah.

Snow White And The Seven Dwarfs + flowers by @endiness

Kai's colorings are always incredible, animation or live-action, it does not matter. I LOVE the sheer vibrance of them, taking me right back to the time in tumblr where this kind of extremely colorful gifs were everywhere. I struggled to pick one, but Snow White was my favorite movie as a child, and I love to see people giffing it, especially so beautifully. Plus, my grandmother watched this film in theaters and she absolutely loved it and was mesmerized by its color (I mean, it was 1937!). I wish I could show her the even more intense coloring of this gorgeous gifset of a simple lovely scene.

Kanthony + The Seven Stages Of Falling In Love by @crowley-anthony

There are many fandoms that have incredible talent (many of which are on this list), and Bridgerton is absolutely one of them. From the winning combo of blue&pink coloring (I am still amazed that people can just change a scene's coloring so dramatically and still make it look great), to the tiny quotes at the top of bottom that remind me of a movie poster, to the flawless blending, to the subject (who else is doing it like them, they're unhinged) to the level of detail (I did not notice the novel-esque writing background in the rings LITERALLY until i was writing this!!), this is an amazing example of that talent.

The Hunger Games Appreciation Week Day 01 by @nataliescatorccio

The best thing about finally watching this film for me was finally being able to unblock the tags and finally reblog all the beautiful edits people made of it. And this is the perfect example because!!! this!!! coloring!!! Becca's colorings being incredibly gorgeous is not new (her tutorials have really helped me this past year), but this set I feel is one of her best. I love an orange&teal combo, it's a trope for a reason (oxidized copper is such a beautiful color palette, a wise tumblrina once said). The blending is so good as usual. Putting this pairing with the Wuthering Heights quote is nothing short of brilliant, it fits scarily well. And the ombré in the font...

The Witcher: Wild Hunt Intro Monologue by @seance

As someone who this past year enjoyed The Witcher show, books and game, I love to see edits mixing and matching them, especially considering the frequent negativity one sees when it comes to this franchise. Pairing the truly epic monologue that begins the videogame with scenes from the Netflix show, this eerie edit blew me away with its incredible blending and striking coloring (and managing to make all these different scenes look well together in such intense yellow/blue can't have been easy). It managed to get me pumped for both the show and the game!

#tumblr #fave creators art challenge #my post #you're all amazing #thank you for releasing your beautiful art into the world!#❤️

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angryaggoria · 3 months ago

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Huuuuuughhh saw your werewooves AU. I need to know the details about this AU’s wooves. What are the romantic implications (like Crozier/Sophia) - is marrying a woof taboo or considered honorable? Do some wooves try to hide their lycanthropy or is it obvious to everyone. Do they turn on the full moon or can they control it? Do you need to get bit to turn? WHO BITES JOPSON TO TURN HIM???? PLEASE I GOTTA KNOW!!!!!

oh boy let’s go (or, as i’ve typed it initially, let’s ho)

it turned out quite lengthy (1k words what the FUCK????) so i'm putting it under a readmore

1. ROMANTIC IMPLICATIONS

this one has puzzled me the most because there are a LOT of possible layouts and it feels too important to ignore or blur out or be careless in hope of retconning it later if some better idea comes. still not sure that i've dealt with it the way i'm 100% satisfied with but it's a start nonetheless.

the safest statement is that commonfolk werewolves are allowed to marry one another rather freely -- there is always a community of civilian lycanthropes and you cannot just... enlist them all at once or something. you have to let people live a relatively normal life, or there may come larger concerns than just a relatively small and idle population of half-wolves. i guess it is also possible to marry into such, but it is considered a taboo -- there are superstitions, and there is also collective memory of times when the relationship with lycanfolk was not that peaceful.

now, we also have completely different breed, all military and navy officers -- that's quite a decent party here! the church made terms with the idea a long enough time ago for such a marriage not to be scandalous nor innovative, and it requires a reasonable amount of registry paperwork. however. it is one thing to be born into a 'military' or 'naval family' and be likely to follow it the steps of your ancestors and completely other to have to do it. you're already born a perfect soldier, my dude, there is no way around it, and no-one lets you downshift straight into the slums and ghettos.

and this is not a social contract that most of the families -- and women -- are eager to comply with.

(i'm specifying women because, well, for obvious reasons it is a gendered question. it also leads me into thinking about what happens to girls born into such families but it's a matter for another... ugh... processing-through-a-longpost session.)

this is what, among a plethora of other things, influenced crozier and sophia's relationship! at the back of her mind she's rightfully afraid of what might come when they have kids and she has to send them out to who-knows-where, while sir john and lady jane are too familiar with this life to wish it for their beloved niece.

2. SECRECY & STATUS

victorian society is all about manifesting social status and disposition (as well as ranks, attitudes, etc.) through material attributes and fashion codes, so lycanthropy should be demonstrated in some way. for institutionalized werewolves it may be certain insignia, like an ornament or a badge on their epaulette. in daily life, maybe some fabric colours and patterns are considered to demonstrate their imposing and beastly nature lol -- that is sure to be popular among 'lycanthrope and proud' kind of guys; maybe it is considered an act of conscientiousness to wear something as a warning of your state or, on the contrary, to appear normal. it's a plethora of things to think about really! (and i'd be glad to hear your thoughts! because as enthralled by fashion i am, costume design and visualization has always horrified me)

speaking of physical differences between lycanthropes and ordinary people, i don't think there are any, so hiding your identity is entirely possible -- after all, that is why it has been an issue for years back. a person might lead a life without anyone knowing that they may somewhat effortlessly maul a sheep with their teeth and their teeth alone. however, if they get caught, they are certain to face repercussions, extant of which is defined by the amount of time they have lived like this and possible connection to crimes previously committed.

and it is happening -- way more often than they would desire, in fact.

3. MOON FRENZY & CONTROL

irresistible influence of the (full) moon is a cheesy little detail that i really like so why not! yet again, it adds to the whole 'werewolves are dangerous and need to be stopped contained under watch' thing. and oh boy do they get creative with the ways to suppress the thing.

to be clear: werewolves are able to control it themself but it takes training and a lot of self-discipline to resist a compulsion like this. the ways are taught inside the community, or by peers and superiors. and there is always a chance of failure, whether it be ill fate or external influence like certain substances or environmental variations (namely: prolonged moon exposure in the polar regions. yeeehaw).

that's why you need to know your werewolf suppression 101 kit!

first and foremost, we have good old physical restriction -- straps, shackles, cuffs, you name it. it is the cheapest and widely available way but they must be really sturdy. to tie them down before it's too late may be the safest option; maybe they will even ask you to do it themself! it is also possible to lock them up until it's finished, but watch the door. werewolves don't get dumb, you know -- they know it opens.

however, it renders a lycanthrope immobile and mostly insensible for a good deal of time -- and it is not easy to treat someone dear to you like this. that is why apothecary solutions and concoctions have proven to be instrumental in moonly matters. there is nothing impossible for a dose of laudanum! be careful with the measures though -- it is a nasty habit, especially for someone big and toothy.

4. SPREAD

of course you need to get bitten. at first i thought that there must be some difference between a bite and a bite in order for werewolves to be useful in combat & the spread to be really controllable, but that’s my vampire admiration blending in i guess. no such shit in our wolfish business. we’re talking BIG stakes here.

any bite may pass the infection. there are various theories on the exact principles of the process; regardless of them, in medical practice the method considered most effective to cease lycanthropy development is bloodletting -- however, it must be done during the first hours and does not guarantee success.

there is always a risk of occasional bite -- some lycanthropes are rather liberal in following Royal Medical Society's Guidelines, and even the most responsible individuals are not immune to misstep or wicked blunder. in such cases bite victim is devoid of punishment and offender's perspectives depend on their remorse.

if it was consensual intent, then well... you are considered equally responsible. don't attempt turning into a werewolf folks it's bad for your life expectancy

4a. who bites jopson?????

it is crozier who orders the promotion so imo it's only right, both in moral and administrative sense, for him to offer the bite. not laudanum nor coca wine could be as successful at relieving this simmering pain as gratitude and -- that jopson would have denied -- pleasure of sensing his devotion being returned.

#this has took me quite a while for which i'm sorry but this is the price of a slow bake #it's mostly dry as hell but you can fish out juicy parts #takes a bit of squinting though #can't tell if i'm doing good job with mixing Victorian Attitudes:tm: in but it's fun as hell (in a mental puzzle way)#terror werewooves #the terror au #the terror #textie #askie

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archoneddzs15 · 3 months ago

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Nintendo Game Cube - P.N. 03

Title: P.N. 03

Developer/Publisher: Capcom

Release date: 27 March 2003

Catalogue Code: DOL-GPNJ-JPN

Genre: Action Shooter

PN03 is a solid arcade-style shooter set in cool, slick, sci-fi environments. It's short on story for a reason - it's just a lady who loves dancing to techno beats and blowing up robots! Who needs a story? You run around, adapt to the evolving AI, blast robots, and - congratulations! - go to the next level of running around and adapting to the evolving AI and blasting robots. It's the kind of heart-pounding, adrenaline-pumping action that made such classics as Berzerk and Galaxian/Galaga and Robotron 2084 and countless others into, well, classics! Add the nice graphics power of the GameCube with its beautifully cold environments and the lovely toe-tapping heroine, and you've got a, well, classic! The most common gripe about PN03 is repetition. Yes, it is repetitive, but not in a bad way. When you get into a room that is familiar in layout, you think "ah! I've been here before... I know exactly what to do!"... and then something new happens! The repetition of rooms is there to make you hone your skills, not to be cheap. Need I say it again? It's just a fun shooter! Just shoot and have fun!

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#nintendo gamecube #capcom #Youtube

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tenaciouschronicler · 6 months ago

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November 16 2024 2009

Welp. Lots happened in the past two weeks so this is gonna be longer to get through it all.

Nov 6

Finally we get to see Dave's strife animation. It wasnt what I expected but given all the context it makes sense. Dave is a bonafide fighter with 8 options with the new ones being:

Abuse - treat with cruelty

Accuse - claim someone commited offense

Assail - make a planned, violent attack

Assault - physical attack

Unfortunately, Bro slashes his options leaving Dave unable to us them. This is the first fight were we cannot do anything but watch Dave get beatdown by a puppet. Thats right, Bro isnt even seen beyond a few flashes. The main fight is with Lil Cal.

We switch over to Jade who is talking with Rose back before Rose loses power. Jade continues to be cryptic about her knowledge in the whole situation but its not too bad as weve already seen parts unfold.

We switch to Rose back in the mausoleum, grabbing Jaspers and decending into the secret passage Mom revealed.

We go back to Jade (lots of switching perspectives this day) whos finally decided to go downstairs.

Nov 8

But before she actually descends we get to see John! Very cool idea using the color reminders for transition.

John is in the middle of a fight loop with the two ogre halequins we saw scaling the platforms Rose created. There are some great movements as John powers up his pogo hammer to try and attack but unfortunately he gets beat back with the Sassacre book. From there hes flung around with the tire swing and deftly saved and healed by Nanna.

Nov 9

We jump to the far future with Peregrine Mendicant who is very surprised by the worm that appeared from the apple and vice versa. This worm decides the mailboxes are a great snack much to PMs disdain. They are fitted with a very nice black sword that does not bode well for the worm.

The gameFAQ page is updated by John. A twist but very welcome. I wonder when he had time to do so. I didnt get to fully explore the punch card code before the reveal of how it functions so I only figured out half of it (being that the code on the back was base64) while John figured out the binary part first to convert to the captcha code. For supposedly not knowing how structures work, John is surprisingly very knowledgable! Im gonna have to place John very firmly in my 'favorite characters' list. We have a lot in common honestly and Im curious on how the game will change him over time.

We are back with Rose after this who is now exploring the secret lab. Above the door is a SN logo (skaianet?) with and atom symbol on the top of the S and the spirograph on the bottom.

Nov 10-12

In the lab we find a giant HUBGRID of what I believe are server drives. The pattern of the layout is very familiar, a checkerboard devided into four parts glowing in pulsing green.

Back with Jade, we get to see some levels of the house filled with her Grandpas interests. The Harleys seem to like breaking established patterns as Grandpa does not have a single interests instead he has:

big game

valient knights

decrepit mummies

beautiful portraits of ladies bleached blue by the sun

Out of these I would be happiest if he stuck with knights. On the last level is a giant worm creature which looks very similar to Johns Typheus browser.

Before we get any further to the outdoors, one of those Trollslum people finds a way to pester Jade. New character unlock? (imagine this said in the most scathing polite southern church goer accent for maximum enjoyment) CarcinoGeneticist seems like *such* a pleasant fella, they have manners but bless, they dont say much.

Truly though, whoever this is seems inordinately angry over what is happening. Who is this and why does it matter to them? Apparently they know the world is ending, believe its Jades fault, believe it was going to be so, and then fail miserably to live up to the troll name. Just calling someone stupid isnt enought to really troll someone, friend.

Going back to Rose, we use the kiosk to see the grid better with the third hub encompasing 0288-0431 is unlocked. In the center of the hub is a transportalizer, though Rose doesnt know it. Rose shows she is just as bad at modi systems as everyone else, grabbing her laptop and transporting Jaspers to who knows where. After switching to leaf instead of root, Rose finds the unlocked hub (which after counting is #0413) and plugs in her laptop which leads to some of the coolest visuals of sylladex operations as the cable connects the two cards.

At the back is a countdown (Hussie really likes countdowns) that for us starts at 3 min and 14 sec until 'unestablishment'.

Nov 13

We jump to PM who has gone through the whole rigamaroll WV did to start the timer to also start a journey to, hopefully, where WV landed. The worm was beheaded, the 'apple' is sideways, and three more worm 'legs' appear to right it before takeoff.

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(I wanna say again, thank yall for understanding me taking time away from this. I really wanted to at least read the updates but even that was hard. But Im back and better so lets see where this comic takes us!)

#homestuck #homestuck replay #hsrp liveblog #hsrp lore #chrono

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Big City Re-EWE-s #1 – Biz-BAAH Differences (“In the BAA-ginning”)

If you want to know how this review series works, please read #0 first as I will explain how I rate these episodes:

Since this is the first part of Big City Re-EWE-s, I decided to might as well begin with the episode that started it all; “In the BAA-ginning”.

The plot is about Sheep fleeing to the Big City after General Specific threatens to destroy Farmer John's farm if he doesn't hand him over for his sheep-powered ray-gun. Farmer John misses Sheep very much and tries to find him in the Big City, only to then work together with General Specific after making an offer of returning Sheep to the Farm on weekends.

Before I get into the story of the pilot, I'll explain how does it represent the series... To be honest, it isn't great.

One problem I have with it is how inconsistent it introduces its major characters.

Lets start with the positives first; General Specific and Farmer John's introduction, their personalities and their connection with Sheep are well-written. Their portrayal in the pilot matches up with their series counterpart; with General Specific still being the general who wants to capture Sheep while being a little buffoon at times and comes up with bizarre code-names, and Farmer John missing Sheep very much and having a strong bias towards him to the point of taking drastic measures just to see him again and/or take him back to the farm.

Sheep and Private Public's introductions are alright. How the pilot portrays Sheep's experience and life in the Big City is very inconsistent and even half-inaccurate compared to the series (I'll get into that later), but does a good job at representing him as a sympathetic character that we, the viewers, want to root for. Private Public barely gets an introduction, as he just appears alongside the Angry Scientist and could be mistaken for a background/joke character until sometime later in Chapter 1, where he is often with General Specific and tries to help him capture Sheep. Like General Specific, his portrayal is accurate to his series counterpart.

Lastly, and least, is the Angry Scientist, Little Bo Peep, and Ben Plotz's introduction. They are not good, to put it simply. The Angry Scientist could be seen as a minor character, as he only appears in one scene stating that he made the sheep-powered ray-gun and constantly corrects others when they call him or his inventions mad. Little Bo Peep could too be seen as a minor character as she suddenly appears in Chapter 2 and doesn't make much of an importance, just saying that her name is Little Bo Peep and she's the cutest girl in Happy Land, until the ending of Chapter 3 where she saves Sheep from General Specific, Private Public, and Farmer John. Not to mention that she was supposed to be a major character in the series before getting scrapped and (most likely) replaced by Lisa Rental. Ben Plotz is presented as an off-screen character in Chapter 1, before the pilot quickly reveals that he has a design the viewers can see at the start of Chapter 2.

In addition, some major characters that are important to Sheep don't appear in this pilot, notably Swanky and Lady Richington. Sure, that lady who kicked Sheep away in Chapter 3 could be seen as Lady Richington, but her design is so different compared to her series counterpart and, like the Angry Scientist, barely makes an appearance. As a result, she could be seen as a completely different character all together. Whether or not she was Lady Richington is really up to personal opinion.

Another problem I have with the pilot is the difference in art-style and structure. Don't get me wrong; I do love the animation and layout of this pilot. My point is that its so different compared to the series, and that can be quite surprising to first-time viewers. In this pilot, there is no Ranting Swede at the end, skits in-between chapters, and Oxymoron commercials (their name is only seen in background props); then they get introduced in Episode 1 (“Be Still My BLEAT-ing Heart”). I understand that pilots often differ with the series that they're about to become in many ways, but that usually isn't a problem because they're mostly never aired on TV. This pilot, however did air twice before the series' premier (November 17th, 2000), during Cartoon Cartoon Summer (August 18th, 2000), and a week prior (November 10th, 2000); as the series' introduction.

Lastly, some parts that the pilot introduces later get retconned in some episodes. For example; Sheep's experience in the Big City is seen as a good life and he has a job as a telemarketer. In the series, Sheep doesn't have that job any more and his life is either very contradicting or similar to the pilot. To be fair, this happens a lot in the series just so a plot for an episode can happen... *cough* "Can't Live Without EWE" *cough* "Beauty and the BLEATS" *cough*

Another example is Farmer John's name. In the pilot, his first name was Farmer because he loved farming so much. In “Belle of the BAAAAH”, his first name was Far because his parents wanted him to go far, and his middle name was Mer after his aunt Meredith.

First impressions matter, and it's important that you show all the basics that your work has to offer at the start, which gives the viewers a good idea on what it will be like going forward.

Despite its flaws, the pilot does a great job at showcasing the style of jokes that the series will have; focusing on literal humor and sometimes being self-aware about it, but goes along with it anyway.

“I'm surrounded by Buffoons” - General Specific

“You heard General Specific, turn this place upside down.” - Private Public

“The Big City is not for you... Your life will be mystery here... That doesn't make sense, shouldn't that be misery?” - Farmer John

With that all out of the way, time to talk about the story. I think the story is decent. Not perfect, but decent.

What I love about it is how it portrays Sheep and tells the story about why he fled to the Big City, why was he specifically needed for General Specific's sheep-powered ray-gun (looking at you, General Dentistry), and how he feels about his old life at the Farm. We are able to understand how Sheep is feeling through all of this, despite never talking once since he can only bleat, and sympathize with him whenever something bad or concerning happens to him. A perfect example of “Show, don't tell”.

Another great thing I want to point out is General Specific's deal with Farmer John on returning Sheep to the Farm on weekends if he helps him. It is really thought out well and a genius way of getting these two to work together. Sure, it is bad for Sheep, but a win-win situation for General Specific and Farmer John. Not only General Specific would have the sheep needed for his ray-gun, but Farmer John would also have the sheep he cares so much back at the farm. I'm a little disappointed that the series never tried something similar again, as it is so epic and interesting to see such a dynamic.

One problem I do have with the story, however; is the ending. I didn't like how it just ends after Little Bo Peep saves Sheep, and Sheep deciding to stay in the Big City. There is no proper conclusion. It just ends... Speaking of conclusion.

Overall, the pilot doesn't really do a great job at introducing the series to the audience. From the different style and structure, to even retcons. Some episodes after it are required a watch in order to fully understand the series. However, the pilot does has a very decent story, good jokes, and likable characters.

“In the BAA-ginning” is worth a watch for what it is.

Final Score: C+

Featured Quote:

“Fine! I can accept that a sheep, desperately wanted by the military, for a ray-gun can get a job! But an apartment in the Big City? Hello?!” - Ben Plotz

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