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[ketrin1607]

I'm still working on the world setting. I got involved with the detailed description and disclosure of minor characters, namely the Egyptian gods. I can't reveal them without explaining (at least to myself) where they came from. I didn't want to reveal it and get into this mess, but it fits perfectly with the main theme of the story (about improper upbringing), so I'll have to do it.

At the same time, I decided to throw on the proportions of the Ata character and change the clothes a little for them. According to the idea, if she's going to be shown as a 13-year-old teenager, I need to set her design to match. True, her previous design is cuter and I liked it better, but it won't do. According to the plot, due to the onset of puberty, she will begin a secondary arch. According to the old design, she doesn't look much like a teenager, she could have been given a maximum of 9-10 years.

Damn, now I have to rethink why Lilith originally hid Ata's gender from Lucifer😅 The character's design is tied to this, as is her conflict with Lucifer. While I was writing down the influence of Lucifer on the main plot, his conflict, etc., I changed his character in an order, and with that, his arc with Lilith and Ata. I had a feeling that the old plot would be thoroughly redone as soon as I started writing everything down in more detail😬 But I'm glad that I was able to rewrite so that the arcs of other characters had more influence on the main conflict and somehow reflected / told the main theme of the story.

It feels like I'm not writing a script, but stitching a blanket from different pieces of fabric😅

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29.1.2022

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[ketrin1607]

For "Fiasco", I added the loglines of the secondary arches of the comic. At least for season 1, I turned on exactly what I wanted. For the rest of the seasons, perhaps some more will be added along the way, but that's later. The backbone of season 1 is there. As I write out the synopsis for each created story arc, it will be possible to arrange the events according to the structure of the comic: into series and scenes. It is necessary to firmly understand where a particular arch will begin and where it will end.

As a result, there were only 17 story arches for the entire comic. Half of them - 7 arches will begin in the 1st season. 3 arches of them will be completed in season 4. It is necessary to paint them for each arch: the exposition, the beginning, the drinking, the climax, the denouement and the finale.

I read that for minor arches, the synopsis is not prescribed when writing the script. For series, only a synopsis of the main storyline and loglines for secondary ones are written. However, it will be easier for me to come up with twists and turns and understand whether there is an action or conflict in the arch if I describe it in more detail than the logline.

I understand that in the storyboard, in the actions or dialogues of the characters, it is more interesting to present the essence of the storyline than in a brief description, as well as to reveal the characters themselves), but the storyboard has yet to be reached. For now, to understand what kind of arches and what they will be about, I will briefly describe the resulting secondary lines for season 1.

The confrontation of demons against Yahweh.

Astaroth Research

The Head of Abyss

Who is her father?

Lilith's Revenge

A fallen friend

Temptation for Asmodeus

The more detailed content of these storylines is separate:

The arcs of the plot. Part 1

The arcs of the plot. Part 2

[arselim]

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[ketrin1607]

Some thoughts on the script. Brevity is not my thing here😅😅

I am currently writing biographies of Egyptian characters in order to determine their relationship to each other and begin writing the script in more detail. Otherwise, I scattered the basis of the story by season and episode, but then it goes in fragments: either I can delve into the detailed writing of the scene of the conflict I like or the dialogue of the characters (which is well represented in my head), or just briefly write what should happen in the scene / dialogue. But how to approach this has not yet occurred to me.

I think this is precisely due to the fact that I did not prescribe a biography for the separately created characters to match their roles and tasks in the plot, the matter does not stick further. It is important to understand where a character's motivation comes from, and what set of knowledge and skills he has. In general, it helps to feel the character better and present his actions and words convincingly.

Most of all, Seth's family will have to be prescribed, because he is the main character of the entire plot. And his conflict with Osiris, how it ended, why Seth came to power with such a crime, why the other gods didn't do anything about it - it's important to think about everything, because I want to reveal this story in more detail (season 3 will be about half or more devoted to these issues). Something to which the myth itself does not provide an answer or explanation, but leaves with questions.

It is somewhat similar to how in their works D. Milton and Vondel Joost Van Den revealed in the biblical myth those details about which the Bible did not explain.

For example, I've always wondered how Lucifer got so proud. Out of the blue? He served God as usual, until one day he was struck by lightning or faced with a thundercloud? What was the trigger of his jealousy/envy/pride? I was wondering what served as the starting point for it, but since the biblical myth was written to tell how the Jewish people came to be and reveal their relationship to their god Yahweh, neither angels nor demons are revealed there.

Actually, wanting to reveal in more detail how the riot happened, how it started, and what the exiled angels did afterward, I wanted to make a comic strip. I liked the version of Lucifer from the poem Paradise Lost, but I decided to fix some details in my own way, as I see this character. Initially, Lucifer was supposed to be the main character, but after one idea that, as it seemed to me, no one had implemented yet, the story moved towards Egypt and Seth became the main character of the plot.

I repeat, but it's probably already clear even from the line of characters what Seth has to do with it and what role he will play in the biblical myth (I just want to ask you if the main plot twist is immediately clear from the outside or not😅 If you've read up to this point, please share🙏)

If spoilers don't spoil your interest in how this turn happened, under what circumstances, and how the characters reacted to it (I'm always interested in this when I find out a spoiler), then I can write you a concept idea for the whole story in one sentence (it contains a spoiler)

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[ketrin1607]

Updates to the script

Over the past week, I've reviewed the prescribed minor story arcs of season 1. I decided to reduce their number, there are too many of them for season 1. I found it necessary to remove 2 arches:

❌1 arc "Lucifer's Lie". She has no antagonist, as such, and no goal that Lucifer would pursue in order to develop the arch. In it, he rather seeks to leave everything as it is, while Moloch, with the arch "Head of the Abyss", trying to achieve his goal prevents Lucifer. So I'll just drag the events from the unnecessary arch into the "Head of the Abyss" arch. In addition to revealing Lucifer, she influenced the events of this arc.

Lucifer is supposed to lie not only about what Yahweh did to him in Eden. This event, like the defeat in the 1st uprising, will have to physically and mentally affect him. This influence will force Lucifer to convince the demons to stay in the Abyss, but by lying about his real motive. It is Lucifer who will slow down the new rebellion against Yahweh, that is, the main plot of the entire season, again for his own reasons, and Moloch will oppose him.

❌The 2nd elimination arc is "The Adventures of Belial". In my opinion, it was a pretty stupid idea to give this character such a goal. Of course, this reveals his character, which is what the arc was planned for, but his character will already be eloquently shown in other arcs, where he triggers events - "Temptations for Asmodeus" and "Former Friend" (renamed fallen). In the rest of the arcs, he is not such a full participant, but against the background, through relationships with other characters, he will be sufficiently revealed. So I'm going to remove this disgusting arch for this ridiculous purpose. Otherwise, the character comes out pretty lopsided.