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#yeah bc for those who doesn’t know when Nao said that it was when he felt lonely hearing fireworks bc he doesn’t know where he and Natsuya
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Hiyori about Ikuya’s smile in episode 8 of dttf:
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Nao about Natsuya’s smile in Nao birthday story:
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Me: well the Kirishima sure have some damn smiles huh
#free!#free! dive to the future#nao serizawa#hiyori tono#natsuya kirishima#ikuya kirishima#natsunao#otp: i always know why you’re upset#hiyoiku#otp: you don’t have to wish on stars to make your dreams come true#Ikuya and Natsuya: smile#Hiyori and Nao: wow I sure hope it doesn’t awake anything in me#also yes I lowkey ref the damn smile meme lol#but more seriously this parallels#call back? reference? or whatever#live rent free in my mind#like the idea of Nao and Hiyori falling in love for Natsuya and Ikuya smiles make me so soft#or just seeing their smiles make the both of them so happy and make them feel safe just aaaaah so cute#yeah bc for those who doesn’t know when Nao said that it was when he felt lonely hearing fireworks bc he doesn’t know where he and Natsuya#will be next year and Natsuya laughed and smiled at him and he felt like at ease I just can’t it’s so soft#and I don’t think I have to explain about Hiyori and Ikuya’s smile#i just love this two ships so much#actually I can even stretch it with the fact that both Natsuya and Ikuya was the one reaching to Nao and Hiyori first#Natsuya asking Nao to enter in the swimming club almost drag him#and both in kindergarten and in America Ikuya was the one reaching and complimenting Hiyori first#hey even after their fight Ikuya was the one searching for Hiyori to talk once he got his shit together#like Natsuya and Ikuya are pulled toward Nao and Hiyori#it’s so cute#anyway a lot of thoughts about Hiyoiku and Natsunao bc I love those ships so much#living rentfree in my head for the time being
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ravenoftheskyes · 5 years
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Personas, Wildcards, and Families. (Part 1)
(AN: Time to start writing again! This is supposed to go to with my Mako-Fam fic that’s up on my blog, but it’s not necessary to read it to read this one. Once again, inspired by the Mako-Fam au on @thieves-in-the-palace’s blog. Also still a bunch of ships. Not gonna tag them all this time. This is gonna be Multipart Bc I kinda hit the paragraph limit.)
Makoto walks into her home, exhausted after a day of running around in Kaneshiro’s palace. The thieves were close to the treasure. A bit more and they could send the calling card. Makoto walked into her room and immediately fell asleep on the bed.
The next morning was luckily a Sunday. Ren had said they weren’t going into the palace today, citing the fact that it was Ryuji’s birthday and he needed to hang out with his boyfriend. Sae was out and Makoto was alone. Until she heard a knock at the door. She walked over and opened the door to reveal...
Akihiko Sanada, Chie Satonaka, and Naoto Shirogane. According to most people, the two officers and the detective were the best trio you could have on a case. Smart, Courageous, and Strong. However, Makoto knew them as her family. She stepped aside to let them in.
“Hm, Teddie’s here too?” She asked them, breaking the uncomfortable silence.
“Yeah...” Chie said, trailing off at the end.
“It’s beary quiet in here!” Teddie said to absolutely no one. Bless him and his talent for bringing smiles to everyone’s faces.
Small discussions grew and the house was filled with conversation and laughter. Teddie walked off to take a call from Yosuke.
“Yosuke and Sensei said that there was something important we had to talk about!” Teddie exclaimed.
Akihiko, Chie, and Naoto knew that it was probably some Shadow Operatives stuff, or something else important, but they hesitated to leave Makoto alone in the house. They knew how it felt to feel alone.
“Go. I’ll be fine.” Makoto said to them, not dulling their worries. But they had to go. So they did.
“We’ll be back soon.” Naoto promised the girl.
Makoto wanted to tell them everything. About how her persona made her feel. About everything they did.
Little did she know, there was a discussion going on.
Teddie walked over to a table.
“She’s awakened to her persona! My nose knows!” Teddie said to the rest of the Shadow Operatives.
“What did we tell you?” Minako said.
“How did you three know?” Mitsuru asked the Wildcards.
“Those labyrinth things we told you about. She was there, in the second one.” Minato said, for once not half-asleep.
Ken piped up from the back, asking about why only they remembered the labyrinths.
“Wildcard magic.” Yu said, and everyone accepted the answer.
“The real question is, how do we talk to her about it? Only other persona users understand personas. She isn’t going to tell us about it.” Akihiko says.
“...I don’t think they’ve gotten their permanent Navigator yet. It’s a bit too early to talk about them with her.” Yu says to the teams.
And so they agree to wait a few months. To let her team gain strength. To have her increase her bonds. Let her connection with Johanna get stronger. Let Queen rise to the occasion.
A couple of months pass. Futaba, Haru, and Goro join the team. Makoto and Johanna get better. They all agree that it’s time to reveal their Personas to her.
They come to Makoto’s house during a bad point. Sae’s doing her whole win/lose thing again. Sae hasn’t been acting right for a couple of years now.
“It’s either a win or lose, Makoto! You can’t lose!” Sae yells out to her sister.
“Sis! Calm down, please!” Makoto yells back, desperation evident in her voice.
Chie, Akihiko, and Naoto rush in.
“Sae! Calm down!” Chie yells out.
“She needs to learn! She’s not going to make her way in this world without knowing that losing is to be avoided!”
“But, Sae! Losing is inevitable! You aren’t going to win everything!” Naoto yells out.
The air becomes tense. It seems to be crackling with electricity. And did it just get colder in here?
“What do you know?! Everyone loves you! You’re winning 24/7!” Sae screams out.
The three of them get flashbacks to the fear during foggy days and full moons. To feeling hopeless and yet, continuing to fight.
“We’re not winning all the time.” Akihiko says to her, as he remembers October 4th, where his best friend, his brother, his rock since Miki’s death, fell into a coma that he wasn’t supposed to recover from.
“We lose a lot more than you think.” Chie whispers, as she remembers her shadow. How it said she only kept Yukiko around for her looks. How it said she didn’t really love her.
“It takes losses to get a win.” Naoto mutters, at a barely hearable level. She remembers Heaven, Nanako’s little place in the TV World. How it broke everyone, little by little when the girl died.
But then they remembered how Shinjiro woke up from the coma, how Chie’s shadow helped her save Yukiko, how Nanako came back to life.
How Nyx and Izanami were defeated. Even if for a few months, the Arisato Twins had to die. Even if for a few moments, the entire Investigation Team sacrificed themselves for their leader. Things worked out for them, because they were willing to take losses for the wins. Adachi, Takaya, Ikutski, Namatame... inconsequential at this point.
Until Sae screams out.
“What have you lost?! Don’t try to patronize me by telling me you’ve lost things too! Get out! And don’t come back!”
Okay, the air isn’t just crackling anymore. Makoto can feel the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. And seriously, when did it get so cold in here?
The three of them leave, not wanting to make things worse. Naoto pulls her phone out of her pocket, ever so slightly. Makoto gets it. Text them later.
And then Sae says that Makoto isn’t allowed to contact them anymore. She should just forget about them.
But Makoto’s a phantom thief now. She’s not going to go down so easily.
The next day, she asks Ren if she could borrow his phone. Ren gives it to her.
To: Naoto Shirogane
Ren: Aunt Nao, it’s Makoto. Sae said I couldn’t contact you anymore.
Naoto: ALRIGHT, I’LL TELL EVERYONE ELSE.
Ren: Class is about to start, so I have to go.
Naoto: WE’LL FIGURE THIS OUT. DON’T WORRY.
Makoto hands Ren his phone back, and bolts to class. She makes it with a few seconds to spare.
Now, Naoto’s at the police station. She switches text conversations.
To: Persona Losers
Naoto: WHO CHANGED THE GROUPCHAT NAME THIS TIME?
Yosuke: naoto stp txtin lik that.
Yu: Partner, your texting isn’t any better.
Yosuke: cmon ptnr
Minato: I’ve got a class going on, text fast.
Naoto: SAE SAID THAT MAKOTO COULD NOT TALK TO US ANYMORE.
Minako: Oh no.
Minato: Minako, you’re supposed to be watching my class?
Minako: Right, sorry!
Junpei: btw I changed the gc name
Yukari: I’m telling Mitsuru.
Junpei: wait no
Yukari: Too late, my beautiful wife is pissed.
Yukiko: Do you have to bring up the fact that you’re with your wife at every turn? I’m home in Inaba while my gf’s in Tokyo and I miss her.
Chie: I miss you too...
Akihiko: Back to the point at hand.
Minato: What, you don’t miss me?
Akihiko: Babe, this isn’t the time.
Minato: I know.
Minato: Oh, I’ve got to go.
Minato: Bye <3.
Naoto: I SHOULD GO AS WELL. GOODBYE.
Yosuke: bye u 2.
Akihiko: skshdjshshsisj
Chie: I can’t believe you killed Akihiko
Naoto pockets her phone, and walks over to Akihiko and Chie.
“So, can’t handle affection?” Chie teases a red-faced Akihiko.
“Shut UP. Can we get back to the point?” He replies.
“As much as I’d love to join in on the teasing, he’s right. We need to talk about Makoto.” Naoto joins in on the conversation.
“Yeah, how are we supposed to talk to her now?” Chie asks.
“We could... wait for her to tell us?” Naoto mutters.
“Naoto, are you kidding me? She doesn’t know we have personas. She thinks we’re not going to believe her.” Akihiko says to her.
“Okay but how do we do either? Sae’s cut off all communication.” Chie interjects.
“Rise or Fuuka?” Naoto asks.
“Rise’s on a tour and Fukka’s on special assignment back home.” Akihiko tells the detective.
“What about Mitsuru or Teddie?” Chie asks.
“They’re also busy.” Naoto says to her.
“...Teddie’s busy?” Chie says, shocked.
“Yosuke’s making him work double-shifts back home to pay for all the topsicles he’s been eating.” Naoto says, stifling a giggle.
“Wait... can’t we just talk to her on the way to school?” Akihiko whispers.
“...”
“Why didn’t we think of that?!” Chie exclaims.
The next day...
Makoto walks off the train, meeting with Ren to have a quick conversation.
“Hey, Makoto!” Chie yells out as they get close to her.
“Oh, hey! You want to talk right now?” Makoto asked them.
“We know you have school soon, but we have to tell you something. Could you come over to the place we’re staying after school?” Naoto asked them.
“Sure...” Makoto replied, feeling a bit nervous.
Makoto walked over to the small house where they were staying for the week while they worked on the case. She walked in, still feeling apprehensive. The Okumura incident had just happened, and they were cops. What if they realized that Makoto was a Phantom Thief?
“Makoto, we need to talk to you about something.” Naoto said, at a table in the middle of the living room.
Oh, no Makoto thought to herself. She’s been busted.
“Tomoe” Chie said to Makoto.
“What?”
“Tomoe, my Initial Persona’s name.” Chie told her.
“WHAT?!” Makoto screamed out.
“Sukuna-Hikona”
“Polydeuces”
“SERIOUSLY?! I’VE BEEN WANTING TO TELL YOU ABOUT JOHANNA FOR MONTHS NOW!” Makoto continued screaming.
After a while, Makoto chilled out.
“So, where do you go to fight Shadows?” Akihiko asked her.
“You guys don’t go to the Metaverse?” She asked them.
“No, Akihiko went to a place called Tartarus, and Chie and I went to the TV world.” Naoto replied.
“Wait... so the stories about the Tower at Midnight and the TV murderer... those were your persona exploits?”
“Yes” the three of them spoke in unison.
“So all those weird names... they were the names of everyone’s personas?”
“Yes!”
“Quick question, Lucia is who’s persona?”
“Fuuka’s.” Akihiko told her.
“So... should I take you to the metaverse?” She asked them.
“We’d appreciate it.” Naoto told her.
And so Naoto takes the three into Mementos.
“It’s very... red.” Chie supplies, unhelpfully.
“Whoa, what happened to your clothes?!” Naoto yelled out.
“Your clothes don’t change?” Makoto asked them. “Then how do you summon your personas?”
“How do you summon yours?” Akihiko asked.
“Oh, like this.” She said, as she removed her mask to reveal Johanna. “By the way, this is the Metaverse. Call me Queen. That’s my codename.”
“Well, Queen, we summon our personas in... other ways. It’ll be easier to show you.” Naoto tells her.
Naoto and Chie pull out a pair of glasses each, as Akihiko pulls out... a gun?
“Polydeuces!”
“Tomoe!”
“Sukuna-Hikona!”
They each summon their personas. Makoto stands there, shocked. And then one idea pops into her head.
“So, the ones from the TV world are the only ones that don’t have edgy summoning sequences?”
“Yes” Naoto tells her. “It’s kind of disturbing how the Phantom Thieves and SEES summon their personas.”
“It’s to signify acceptance of death, Naoto.”
“Still concerning, Akihiko.”
“I mean, the mask is supposed to signify your true self and how you break free from society’s way of saying what you are.” Makoto interjects.
“Still freaky!” Chie yells out.
“Wait... why did you summon your initial personas? Why not your ultimates?” Makoto asks.
“We’d rather show them off in a battle!” Chie yells out.
And then they see a shadow.
“It’s been too long since we’ve done this.” Naoto smirks, as she gets her gun ready.
“Yeah!” Akihiko and Chie scream out in unison.
Makoto goes for the attack.
Two High Pixies.
The battle goes by smoothly, and Makoto makes a mental note of their elements.
“What?! Why did that look like a persona our leaders could summon?!” Chie yells out.
“You mean your leaders don’t recruit personas by negotiating with them?”
“No, just fighting Hableries and Mayas.” Naoto cuts in.
“...What?” Makoto asks
“You... don’t know what a Hablerie or a Maya is?” Akihiko asks her, shocked.
“No, we fight shadows like Pixie or Bicorn...”
“Wait... what... so your Wildcard gains new personas by negotiating with these shadows and they just enter his heart?” Naoto says, with a perplexed look on her face.
“Yeah. How do your leaders get them?”
“Uh, our leaders just say a bunch of Tarot Cards appear in front of their faces and they choose as many as the weird voice allows them...” Chie says.
“That’s... weird”
“We know” the three of them say in unison.
And then chains start rattling.
“We should get off this floor...” Makoto mutters
“Definitely.” Akihiko says.
“What’s the problem? So, the reaper’s in a treasure chest.” Chie adds.
“Looks like the reaper follows Tartarus’s rules here.” Akihiko says.
And then the sense of dread meaning the reaper’s close by comes.
“Run!” Makoto yells, and they all take off towards the stairs.
After three dead ends and almost getting caught twice, they finally make it to the stairs.
“God, I miss the Monabus at times like these.”
“The what?” Naoto asks her.
“Uh... one of our team members is an anthropomorphic cat that insists he’s not a cat and he can turn into a van.”
“Oh. So a mascot.” Chie says “Kind of like Teddie or Koromaru.
“What about Teddie? And Koromaru has a persona?!” Makoto says.
“Teddie’s not actually a method actor. He’s a weird mascot bear suit shadow that grew a body. We don’t get it either.” Naoto supplies.
“And uh, yeah. Koromaru has a persona too. He can’t talk or anything. He’s just a dog.” Akihiko tells her.
“...Damn. Next thing you’re going to tell me Aigis is actually a robot.” Makoto said with a chuckle.
“She is.” Akihiko tells her.
“...What?”
“Aigis is actually a robot” Naoto says.
“Anything else I should know?!” Makoto yells out, which was probably a bad idea considering they were in the middle of Mementos.
“All those crazy stories we told you? Cover stories. Yu and Yosuke did not meet shopping for a TV. They met on the first day that Yu was in Inaba, at school and a couple days later, He, Yosuke, and I fell into the TV world and met Teddie.” Chie tells her.
“...I’m surprised you didn’t spill any of this when you took Goro, Ken, and I to Karaoke and got wasted.” Makoto said.
“Don’t remind me, the hangover was terrible.” Naoto stated, clutching her head.
“Didn’t Ken film everything...?” Akihiko asked her.
“Yeah. I have the video. So does Goro. ‘Blackmail Material’ as he called it. I’m just planning to use it whenever you try to act like mature adults.” Makoto says, stifling a giggle.
“What was the highlight?” Chie asked.
“It’s a tie between Teddie getting wasted and trying to score with everyone there and you and Yukiko forgetting you’ve been dating for the past 5 years and kinda just... getting together.” Makoto says.
“...How much did we drink?!” Chie yells out.
“Just know that Minato, Minako, and Yu are very sappy drunks.” Makoto says.
“Wow, wildcard squad actually shows some emotion?” Chie jokes.
“Wait. Minato, Minako, and Yu are the wildcards?” Makoto asks her.
“Yes, they are.” Naoto tells her.
“...So that’s why I was getting a similar vibe from them and Ren.”
“Ren... so that’s the name of your leader?” Naoto asks.
“Yeah, do the Wildcards always lead?” Makoto replies.
“Yeah. They’ve just got this natural charisma that makes everyone fall in love with them. They’re insanely flirty if you give them the chance to be.” Chie tells her.
“So it’s not just Ren. Wildcards are just gigantic dorks that can make you fall in love with them at the drop of a hat.”
“Yes!”
“Aren’t some of the personas they can summon kind of... concerning?” Makoto asks them.
“...We just ignore them.” Naoto tells her.
“We should probably get back soon, shouldn’t we?” Makoto asks them.
“You’re right, time passes here too.” Chie says.
“There’s no limit on how long you can spend in here, right?” Akihiko asked.
“Nope, just that all the time you spend in here translates into the real world. We came in at 8:24. Sis is going to be really upset if I don’t show up soon.” Makoto said.
“She’s right. As fun as it is fighting shadows in a new place, we can’t risk burning ourselves out.” Naoto mutters. “Not to mention Sae.”
“Yeah. I should get home. See you guys later!” Makoto tells them.
Makoto leaves Mementos, and turns to go home before realizing she has one more question.
“When did you three get your personas?” She asks them.
“Third year of middle school.” Akihiko tells her
“First year of high school.” Naoto speaks.
“Second year of high school.” Chie states.
“So, all before me, huh? I got mine in June of this year.”
“That just means you’re more ready for it.” Naoto tells her with a smile.
“Yeah. Wait, does Ken have a persona?”
“Yeah. He got it in elementary school.” Akihiko tells her.
“That young?!” Makoto screams out. After she comes to terms with the fact that literally everyone in her family besides her sister has a persona, she waves goodbye and walks home.
“Where have you been?” Sae asks her.
“Isn’t that Uncle Akihiko’s line?” Makoto quips.
“Don’t talk about him. Right now, all I’m focusing on is the Phantom Thieves. We’ve got intel that they’ll be infiltrating somewhere soon.”
Makoto makes sure she doesn’t visibly flinch. She knows the plan, but it still scares her. She still can’t believe Goro betrayed them. Betrayed her. His heart’s turned bitter. He’s done unforgivable things. And now he’s planning to kill Ren.
God, I should call Haru tonight... Makoto thought to herself. She needed her sweet, fluffy, girlfriend’s help to deal with everything tonight.
To: Haru Okumura
Makoto: Hello.
Haru: Hello.
Makoto: So you remember how I told you about those crazy adults that are pretty much my family?
Haru: Yes, I remember.
Makoto: They’re Persona users. All of them.
Haru: Wait, seriously?
Makoto: Yeah. I just took them into the metaverse and they summoned their personas easily.
Haru: How long have they had them?
Makoto: Since they were in high school.
Haru: Do any of them use axes?
Makoto: Yeah, Uncle Shinji.
Haru: I’ll have to “axe” him some questions.
Makoto: Haru... Please...
Haru: That was good, and you know it!
Makoto: Fine. I’ve got to go now, though. Got to get to sleep. Night, babe!
Haru: Night, Mako-chan!
Makoto stayed awake in her bed for a while. Her mind was flooded with information. They were going to infiltrate Sae’s palace on the 20th. Ren would be captured. She decided to go to the shrine tommorow. For this plan to work, the thieves would need all the help they could get.
Finally, the 20th arrived.
Joker, ever the showoff. Jumps out a stained glass window. Gets caught. Now the waiting.
...The waiting’s always the hardest part.
Makoto relaxes. Thinking that Ren had never let them down before. He won’t let them down this time.
...Right?
Makoto’s phone starts to ring.
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muggycuphead · 3 years
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TH!FPA_VB – Lord of Lies and Deceiving
Yo, been a while since I posted something on this account, but here we are, back at it again with a casual VB drawing like in good ol’ 2020
…Though, this time things got built on a different road of events as you can see, not to mention this is a spoiler to what’s to come for VB (but tbh I stopped caring at this point so yea)
First and for most however, there are quite a few questions surrounding this fic’s development I have to answer for our sake (mostly mine since I feel like mold spaghetti for not keeping up on things oml-)
Yes, I once said VB was on the way of getting completed and all that, I know
Problem is, the changes I want to do to the ‘lore’ (if you want to call it that way idk) are also retroactive to the events in the present timeline (aka past events that are mentioned but not entirely shown because ugh-), some characters that have some relevancy on the story but only come up at the very end chapters on VB itself, etc. etc. which are things that I personally find bothersome as its writer and the reason why I’d rather not make the ‘sequel-prequel’ of it where things get explained and all that
Instead, I’ll fuse both VB and TAF (the sequel-prequel’s name acronym standing for ‘The ‘ANOMALY’ files’ fyi) so it can focus on one party alone and I don’t waste any more time than what I already have done so (haha funny cuz me late to party amiriteeeimsorry-)
…And about the format for it, I’ve decided I’ll ‘upgrade’ it to a comic instead since y’know, I do art and it’ll also make my writing simpler so yea
Still tho, I’m kinda paranoic on if I should get going with the prologue by the time I finish its script or not since I don’t wanna make the plot a mess or leave things (important* things) unfolded by accident, but we’ll see how it goes (and hopefully I’ll make it out alive-)
Also, keep in mind that by the moment I’m writing this, I’m stuck in the Friday Night Fuc- I mean Funkin’ fandom, and y’all know what happens when the fandom switching happens…
My concept-creation-obssessive-self starts grinding gears like cuckoo -doesn’t mean I’ll abandon everyone else tho, it’s just that my focus splits on multiple parts and all that balloney
So, now that I did my little defense statement up there, let’s get rolling to the mainpoint down here
First, who’s this spider guy?
Well, he’s a ‘side’ antagonist, more specifically the person DPM is after (but doesn’t realize he is until very later)
His name is Q-Ross Sid, a ‘camel spider’ that lives in the Spider Kingdom as the royal executioner and prison head-guard/-caretaker
He’s what I’d consider to be an ‘anomaly’, since he’s a genetic fusion of graphite (20%), chalk (10%) and correcting fluid (70%), with the graphite being his ‘stabilizer’ component (osseous structure and skin/muscular tissue mostly) and the chalk his ‘cooler’ component (mostly on his defense and assimilation mechanism), not to mention he can only consume either correcting fluid matter derivatives…and/or ink matter derivatives, including living beings (mostly as an energy source and which his body somehow can partially convert into graphite)
…And by that fact alone you can tell that yes, he killed Isea -also known as Dizzy/Izzy Pants Girl (YESss I fINALLY GAVE HER A NICK ASDFGH-) in VB mostly due to her ‘special ability’ and stuff- by Queen Aris’ command. And yes, he can shapeshift, which explains why he got DPM to blame FPM for what happened, this that (but I think you might have figure it out already by the drawing alone so yea-)
However, although at first I thought his ability would be limited to mimick FPM’s appearance only, I now decided to amplify it a little, and instead he can shapeshift into any sketch/graphite-alike/related being, with FPM being his ‘link’ to them most of the time (stalkey tatics are not okey dokey my man but you do you I guess)
Though he can only shapeshift into stickfigs since he doesn’t have that much of ‘color filling’ for a human drawing itself (yeah ik they’re humanized in the story but things will make sense sooner or later I promise, for now just bear with me as we go on on this plz), and he cannot shapeshift into ink/liquid-alike/related beings because they’re not compatible and it’ll only lead him to corrupt his physical form –not meaning he can’t recover from it tho
But he can’t replicate them entirely, as his eyes and the ring are the two main red flags to spot him (but with some contact lenses and a little pocket, it can be fixed y’know-)
As for his robotic arm, it was after a fight that I’ll rather not explain due to not being that relevant; and even thought doctors refused to give him a prosthesis at first since he could simply let it rebuild naturally (yes he can regen too, but in a slower phase bc reasons), he got it anyways due to the fact limbs regen take way longer than physic injuries and/or internal damage (some even assumed that they probably wouldn’t actually regen anyway), which can be a bother on his job most of the time…and maybe out of spite too –he wanna look tough, yo-
Fun fact, during the hype I got from making this bad boi, I ended up attaching him to grandson’s song called ‘Blood/Water’ due to the lyrics kinda resembling his defamatory actions towards FPM (and also his wild and sometimes desperate hunger towards ink beings, yikes)
Second, what’s VB’s main plotline now and why did I expand it?
To resume it in the ‘signature phrase’ I made for the new version (which was also inspired on MARETU’s ‘Magical Doctor’ song –mandoilovethisvocaloidsongcomposerasdfgh)
**THIS WASN’T MEANT TO HAPPEN**
Venomous Bittersweet (which I’ll rename in the future due to the fusion with TAF) started off with a simple plot -FPM going on a mission for himself to get cured from a spider bite he got all of a sudden, but failing in the process (bc plot convenience idk) and CPG is the one who goes to his rescue instead while showing off the things she learned from him, this that, wholesome ending blah blah blah- you know the drill if you read it to end.
But by the moment I began making those little ‘inside stories’ –specially DPM’s backstory explaining why he became so reckless and outgoing- I started to extent myself on how things worked on this AU, even how drawings come to life (ik it’s weird but that’s how I though it to be so ff-), and by such I felt the urge to give almost everything a background story, such as Aris’ reason to kidnap and take control over FPM’s body and mind (and maybe his soul too oops-), the Spider Kingdom’s origin and even the portals and ‘reality deterioration’ in SFPA, passing by DPM’s origins and stuff.
And even if I felt like hitting walls and taking things a little too in-depth most times, I think it did bring some good things for the new plotline I’m going for now
So, in the new story, all the weird, whacky (and disturbing) things that happen after SFPA and during OG VB plotline came by what I’d express as some sort of ‘time-space anomaly’ that made everything slightly unstable on the ‘other side’ of the studio (I won’t explain too much my brain is about to boil rn so take that as you will for now tysm), having a passive (but not unnoticeable) effect on the sketchbooks.
I can’t give much context why, how or where did the anomaly came to be exactly (you can make theories if you like, I’d love to read them 4real <3), but it’s main purpose is to take control over all existing worlds just to corrupt them to its will, to the point there is basically nothing left but despair and desolation to which all entities will be forced to endure and all that edgy jazz.
…And by that, the ‘anomaly’ will create incompatible matter amalgams –ink and graphite being the most coming-to-mind example in the story so far- in order to conquer all the sketchbooks, but as a consequence of this ‘anomaly’s’ arise, new worlds came to be fully developed (in other words, they finally exist as a whole), and with that, new ‘heroes’ are brought into the situation, each representing a type of artistic material alone –watercolor, oil paint, etc-, heroes with which FPM will encounter and interact with, as he’ll also help them in how to use their abilities to fight the baddies and stuff.
And because we need conflict to make things interesting, Q-Ross and DPM indirectly (but kinda) ‘team up’ to fabricate fake evidence and such in order to mess with FPM’s reputation towards the heroes by incriminating him and/or even mislead his actions (confusing wrong by right and vice versa, etc.) (because ink man is salty and corrector ass is a dick by nature –ofc), and even ocassionally with Q-Ross starting the job, just to get DPM to finish it; and sometimes they get the aforesaid characters to hold grudges –if it comes to succeed, or instead making them get more on his side by the same feeling of doubt –if they mess up on something, no matter the size.
As about his sickness, well, it also got a little twist.
We know that new worlds and material compositions come with new squiggle types, and even if ‘dust-related’ types don’t affect him for too long –chalk being the closest example I can bring up-, liquid or clayish matters, such as oil and crayon squiggles respectively, are toxic towards him, so in the way the more he interacts with incompatible squiggles, the more harmed his health condition gets, to the point it grips into the weakest part of his body –his core (I’ll later explain this just…let me get this out first plz), which limits him on doing most things he’s used to do normally.
…And well, the spider bite (which is also an abnormal matter amalgam times two, though I’ll keep it secret for now) was the last nail in the coffin on fucking him up entirely to a new level of corruption (damn is that a stretch I’m seeing-)
Long story short, this was also because I wanted ArPM to have a backstory that’s more than just ‘I’m evil nao bc me get poisond and mindcontrold by spoders out of spite hahahaha-’
Third (and lastly), who’s Ahetzo exactly and what’s his main purpose on the story?
This is a short one
In case you didn’t see my tweet on my Twitter account (here a linkie), this is a side character I made that’s supposed to be some kind of ‘spirit’ or something alike who’s the one in charge of the studio while ya dev boi is gone
In other words, he’s basically like Brad’s subconscious self (IK YIKES- YOU CAN HIT ME WITH THE CHAIR NOW I WON’T MIND-)
…and even though he tried to keep the anomaly thing contained as long as he could while figuring out how to disarm it or at least neutralize it (yes it was there way before, like during fpaw3 events or before so because AU logic lol), the more he tried to condense it, the more it multiplied itself until, well, y’know, shit blew up and everything just sdfghjk’d
And yes, he was the one who released the new worlds to keep the crazy stuff at range, this that
Oml my brain-
And before I finish here, I’d like to make a little ‘self-critic’ regarding my artwork here…and I gotta say, I’m really proud of it on most parts
As I began to retake on digital art lately –mostly due to my slight entering onto the FNF/partially NG communities and other things, I’ve been testing out new techniques and stuffs on GIMP 2 with the ‘routes’ tool and all that (that’s also why it looks almost symmetrical, but don’t fool urself it did took its time-), I even corrected some of the lines to make them sharp and fancy (haha funi joek im so quirkee-)
In here, I wanted to try mixing both solid and blurry shadows as well as replicating a ‘crystalish’ effect –as seen on Q-Ross’ eyes- and some line effects with the ink tool such as the liquid dripping out of Q’s mouth (yes that correcting fluid saliva now stfu-) and the graphite/correctfluid webs coming out of his clawtips/fingertips
And though I haven’t made an official palette for him, I think the colors I picked here suit him well enough in my own idea of such
Overall, I had fun making this, and I love how it came out
Still though, any criticism, opinion and commentary is welcome, both about my art piece and my little showcase over here
That’s all I got for now, see you all later on
K bai-
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