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brainstorming what kind of classes Alfea would actually offer

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lil Hazbin hotel opinion don't mind mee

this rant was provoked by the whole lavender town video about hazbin hotel, people's reaction legit boiled my blood.

I hate how the fandom disregards and hates artists who have literal college degrees in art the moment they give any kind of critique. Honestly it gets my blood boiling, this is a cartoon. End of. If you cant handel someone going

"hey the character blend too much into the background, they would look better of the background was a shade of purple or green or something, or if the characters had pallets that were contrast colours to the background"

"the character designs are too samy and all the characters have literally the same colour pallets with minor differences that aren't big enough to differentiate them from each other. plus having most of the main cast be skinny and spindly makes them hard to focus on , especially when there is allot of camera movements."

than like idk what tell you, you don't know what you're talking about. I'm sure there are more valid critiques but those are the main ones i see being said. what makes it worse is that the people calling these critiques bad aren't artists. Art, just like any other concept requires you to study and understand it if you want to do something with it.

for example, I can tell a chef that his food is good, but a fellow chef can tell him WHY its good and even tell him where the meal is lacking and how to improve upon it. I am not a chef, i cant give those critiques. I can say I didn't like a certain aspect about the food but i cant explain how to fix it beyond using a basic knowledge of cooking that is most likely wrong.

about the whole lavender town situation, yeah sure she got some things wrong but honestly her ideas aren't bad whatsoever. Yall legit get pissy each time someone doesn't know every nitty gritty detail about the show and start throwing a fit. this has been the fandom's reaction for years and I'm so sick of it, it's gotten to the point where I'm thinking of dropping the show.

I've been here since the pilot and have managed to avoid most of the drama to the point where I'm not aware of most of the things that went down in detail. Through the drama's ive seen , the only one that has any merit is Alastor's whole voodoo problem. And even than i can guarantee you Viv didn't realize what she did, those symbols are meant for summoning spirits. In the show they're just used as an aesthetic thing for his magic. Still doesn't make using them right but calling Viv racist bc of it is just plain disgusting.

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My boyfriend made me rate persona 5 characters based on vibes lmao, I know almost nothing about em , how cursed is this tier list?

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CHAPTER FIVE :  The Obsidian circle

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As everyone enter’s Obsidian, the winx notice how their energy is already being zapped , all except for Bloom, She suddenly starts sensing the dragon’s flame. Kind of like she did when Valtor was around but this is different. Suddenly their vision is blurred by an upcoming fog, with bugs slowly emerging from the cold surrounding them. As such, Mandragora emerges from a grouping of insects.

“Are you serious… haven't you had enough ?” Musa and Stella complained. The girls, and Nabu all gathered and transformed into Enchantix and began a short lived battle, midway through Flora managed to kill a ton of Mandragora’s insect army with her return to nature spell ,Helia suddenly grabbed her from the back and tossed her onto the floor. Which caught everyone off guard, they didn't know what was up with him but they didn't expect him to attack Flora.

This and the winx’s and Nabu’s diminishing spells resulted in Mandragora getting the upper hand. The other guys kept her army at bay for a bit. Flora tried confronting Helia but his eyes turned pitch black which made it very clear he was being mind controlled the whole time. The moment Flora realized this, she tried using her fairy dust on him but Mandragora caught on and called on the ancestor witches to separate the 2 groups from each other. 

This left the specialists to fight Mandragora which didn't go as well for her as she would have liked. Most of them don't have magical energy that can be zapped away, thus they stood a better chance. The group decided to protect Nabu as he’s the only one capable of snapping Helia out of his trance, this is where everyone gets to show off their weapon upgrades. Brandon using the geod’s and earth around him akin to an earth bender along with his sword to block, swoop and trap mandragora within stone. Sky using his hydro powers in combination with Timmy’s electrokinesis against Mandragora in order to make sure she has a hard time controlling Helia plus maybe exhaust her to the point where she cant fight.

Riven and Nabu mostly focused on Helia, using his own air abilities against him and trying to keep him still  so that Nabu could use his powers of clarity on him. Weirdly enough, Helia being on autopilot began using magic abilities of his own which made things harder and confused the hell out of the rest of the guys.

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Stella woke up from a heavy slumber in her childhood bedroom in the palace of Solaria. She emerged from her chambers and found her castle destroyed, her parents were butchered and a crowd full of her people’s bodies crowding what used to be the throne room. Stella was speechless, she couldn't scream, she couldn't move, she was completely paralyzed. Tears streamed down her face as countess Casandra and her daughter Chimera emerged from the hall of butchered corpses.

We transition to Aisha, as a living puppet on her throne along with a doll version of Nabu, her parents pulling the strings. All around her are giant versions of her servants, pushing her around, changing what she looks like until she’s completely unrecognizable. 

Tecna suddenly finds herself in her parents house, they’re arguing with her about how Alfea and especially the winx and Timmy ruined her. She used to be a person of complete logic and reason and now she’s acting like a completely reckless child with no regard for herself, Throwing herself into the Omega portal and almost dying for such an inconsequential world. This makes Tecna hyperventilate and she doesn't know how to respond.

Flora finds herself in a garden full of dying flowers, the pain of each individual plant is causing her immense pain and she stumbles to the ground, holding her pounding head. As she looks around she sees the other winx, the specialists and Helia along with her Mother and Sister berating her. How dare you do this to us?!! Fix us! Help us! Their voices echoed in her head. “I-im sorry!!” she screamed as the voices got even louder.

Musa finds herself in her Season 1 look, she’s running away from a crowd of witches trying to assault her. Suddenly she finds herself in front of Riven, begging for his help but he just looks at her and asks “why should i?”. Suddenly the witches catch up to her along with the Trix. She tried to transform but found that she couldn't, and before she knew it Icy encased her in ice while the other witches were preparing all of their spells to royally hurt her.

Bloom finds herself running through the remains of her palace, on that fateful night the all mighty realm of Domino fell. She catches a glimpse of herself in the mirror and sees that she looks like Daphne and in her arms is… her as a baby, crying her eyes out. Behind her were the ancestor witches running after her. Bloom as Daphne managed to find a hiding spot, opened a portal to earth and sent her child self through it. After which she ran to a room shaped like a Rontanda. It’s here that the company of light finds itself , awaiting for the ancestor witches. Faragonda, Saladin, and Griffin along with a few others were preparing themselves for the battle of life time. Suddenly Bloom felt a blade in her back, creating a hole in her chest. She couldn't help but breathe heavily and reach to touch her newly found wound.

Scene 3

We cut back to the specialists against Mandragora and it’s not going well for them, she managed to use their weaknesses against them and forced Sky, Brandon, and Timmy into cocoons. She then moved on to Riven and Nabu, As they began getting incased in the same cocoons as the other guys, Riven poured his heart out to Helia, telling him just how much he envies him and Sky and just wishing that he did better by them. Hoping that this would Snap Helia out of it but it didn't.

Mandragora began bragging about now that she’s done with these rats, she’ll move on to all the other girls. Starting with Bloom. Riven’s words began reverberating in Helia’s mind along with Flora. Flashes of their memories fill his mind along with a single misshapen spark. The conversation he had with Tecna echoed in his mind. Help the people who truly love you. That statement stayed in his mind. 

He began struggling against the venom in his mind, getting the attention of Mandragora. She tried regaining control of him but Helia didn't give up. 

“I'M NOT HIDING WHO I AM! NOT ANYMORE!”

Suddenly Helia’s body was encased in a magical glow which threatened to blind Mandragora, and with a sudden flash of light Helia found himself in a new shimmering attire with a small pair of wings flapping, holding him in the air, the venom completely disappeared from his system. Helia transformed into his basic fairy form. 

“Aww isn't that cute, you got your fairy wings. Too bad a sparkly outfit and a new pair of wings can't do the fighting for you!” Mandragora said before attacking Helia with a blast of energy, lucky Helia dogged it and found cover. He knew her attack magic was far stronger than his but maybe there was something he could do, he’s the fairy of self expression! 

He then sent out beams of mystical energy to the cocoons holding the specialists which broke them out from the inside, Afterwhich said magic flew up and separated into 6 pieces before scattering. Mandragora then tried attacking the specialists, but Helia blocked said attack with a barrier. As the other guys regained consciousness Helia tried apologizing especially to Riven but he told him that they can apologize later. For now, they need to beat her, regroup with their girlfriends and save Domino. 

Helia pushed Mandragora’s attack back , regrouped and jumped into action. 

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As Bloom feels the trickles of blood falling from her stomach, Helia’ magic suddenly manifests as the other winx + specialists. Tharma threw a beam of lighting at Bloom, a moment passed. And nothing happened, Bloom opened her eyes only to find the winx blocking the attack. Making the idea sink in for Bloom that she isn't alone and that she can do this. Her dragon flame dispels the illusions wound . She held out her hands and exclaimed: 

“Dragon flame’s sphere!”

This enveloped her environment in a bright flame, burning away the illusion. This transitions us to Stella as she snaps back to reality. 

“ I am the princess of Solaria.. The daughter of King Radius and Queen Luna. THIS IS MY KINGDOM!” Stella announced before Helia’s magic manifested as her ceptor, she then charged into battle, without a moment to spare she pierced Chimera and Casandra with a sun bolt. They melted away into shadows, afterwhich Stella used the ceptor of solaria to revive her people which destroyed the illusion around her. 

Bloom and Stella, now reunited, have both linked their powers to strengthen Helia’s dwindling magic to wake the other girls up. Despite not knowing where it came from or whom it belongs to , it’s clearly helping.

Flora is still being tortured by the voices of everyone around her, cupping her ears. Attempting to recollect herself. Helia’s magic manifested itself as a piece of origami which finally made Flora snap. She suddenly got up and told everyone to Shut up. She’s not here to fix their issues for them, she’s not here to be their mother. It’s high time they learned to deal with their own issues. With that, Flora used her return to nature spell which completely killed all the plants around her. Finally giving her the peace and solace to work on herself. She than finally woke up.

Tecna found herself at her parents door with her luggage, she’s being kicked out, her parents eyes holding nothing but hatred for her. Before she could cry, Helia's magic manifested around her, reminding her of the advice she gave him on Domino. She finally put her foot down, she didn't scream, she didn't say anything or do anything. She simply left, refusing to give them any more of her energy. As she walked out, she found herself with Flora, Stella , and Bloom

Helia’s magic manifested itself as a pair of scissors in front of Aisha, she grabbed it with the best of her ability and cut the restrictive strings keeping her in place. With this, she managed the strength to transform back into herself and fly out of the palace. Regaining her autonomy. She Then transformed and flew away from her castle, and down to her kingdom. Joining the people she’s sworn to protect.

Helia’s magic manifested itself as the other winx, on that fateful day back in Magix. Stella freed Musa from her clasure prison, after which they embraced her. They all transformed into their base forms , empowering Musa and allowing her to transform back into Enchantix to defend herself. As she defeated Icy, she finally woke up. As the girls reunited they all hugged, Comforting each other and reassuring each other that

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As they looked around they all search around to find that they're all amidst a frozen lake with cloudy skies. They all feel drained and exhausted from the visions they’ve experienced which was only made worse by the onslaught of sharp ice dager rain about to pierce their flesh. Instinctually Bloom and Stella cast a shield of pure heat which saved them but began melting much of the ice. 

Que a “oh shit…” joke as they all fall within the water's depths, everyone expert Aisha and Bloom started succumbing to hypothermia. Aisha used her ocean powers to gather the girls and create a Morphix bubble around them, Bloom used her healing flame of life to restore the girls body temperature to a normal level. The girls realize that this must be the ancestor witches because of the specific tactics they used being very similar to the Trix. This only terrified the girls since they could feel their powers fading, especially Bloom, having to use more and more of her stamina just to keep her form intact.

They decided that the only chance of survival they have is using convergence magic. Tecna scanned the Area and found the source of the magic being used on them, which she transferred to Musa who transformed said information into a song which she played to Stella. Allowing her to understand the location for the most part, through emotional resonation. She then used her teleportation powers which sent the girls to an open clearing with 3 stones bearing symbols on them and a stone statue in the middle reaching towards a flaming sword.

Bloom began floating towards the statue, caressing its cheek. “ that’s… Oritel… What is a statue of my father doing here?....”

“That’s not a statue you pathetic girl!” a shrill voice crocked. The ghastly demonic spirits of 3 old hags emerged which got the other girls guard up, spells at the ready. “That’s your father! Let's just say he’s had a rocky time! Why don't you say hello to your subjects, Princess Bloom!” Belladonna mocked as she gestured to a mountain full of petrified people, both young and old which horrified Bloom but also lit a fire within her. Without a warning she began attacking Belladonna while the rest of the group divided themselves into groups taking on the other ancestor Witches.

Stella, Tecna, and Musa taking on Lillis , Aisha and Flora taking on Tharma. Their spells began slowly diminishing as the fight went on however, thus the girls began fighting more defensively, using their environment to their advantage. During the fight, much to the Winx’s horror the ancestor witches began possessing Bloom’s subjects to have a corporeal form. 

As their magic was about to reach its limit, Lillis possessed Stella’s body but before she could do anything Stella forced her out before collapsing to the floor. The rest of the girls began slowly falling to the floor, their energy so low that they couldn't keep their forms intact and were forced to detransform. All except for Bloom, She was so caught up in fighting Belladonna that she didn't realize what happened to them until it was too late. 

She tried using her healing powers but she found that her powers were not functioning. The ancestor witches began mocking her about how she’s doomed everyone she loves to an eternity of rot, especially since Mandragora had already taken care of their little boy toy’s. Lillis projected an image of Bloom’s adoptive parents. They began threatening them which only pissed Bloom off even more but raised her anxiety to the point where she began shaking. Belladonna gestured at the sword and told Bloom that if she wanted to save the people who raised her from certain death then she should destroy the sword.

The sword holds the last spark of the Domino Bloodline separate from Bloom, the power of the guardians of the universe, the power of the dragon’s flame. Only she can destroy the sword, it has burned every warrior that’s tried using it along with the witches themselves. Bloom couldn't help panicking  but as she looked at the projection of her parents she noticed her dad playing around with a cat. Which made something click in her brain. Before the witches could notice she held out her hands and absorbed the flame from the sword to empower herself and blast the witches against the wall. 

This only aggravated them which began a fierce battle between all the ancestor witches vs A newly empowered Bloom.

Scene 6

We cut back to the guys barely managing to hold Mandragora off , Helia and Nabu have been completely incapacitated, leaving Riven, Sky, Timmy and Brandon to fend off mandragora. They've been managing to hold their own but even they are starting to lose energy slowly. It gets to the point where they all collapse.  Mandragora incases them in cocoons and leaves them off for her bugs to handle before traveling back to her masters as she feels their call.

Scene 7

As Bloom continued fighting the ancestor witches, her powers continuously kept diminishing despite the flame she absorbed, her blasts getting smaller and weaker until her form began distablizing, forcing her to fall to the ground in pain. 

“Even your powers are doomed to fade in this place, and it seems your incomplete Enchantix isn't gonna last much longer huh?” Belladonna mocked with a shrill voice.

Bloom gripped on to her fairy dust pendant, trying her best to keep her form intact before she looked at Oritel encased in stone and got an idea. Without a moment to lose, Bloom channeled all her fairy dust into one concentrated blast which she shot directly at her stone covered father. Losing Enchantix in the process and falling over in exhaustion.  

The ancestor witches tried to stop her spell from taking effect only to get burned in the process. With a sudden blast, Oritel was freed from his stone prison. The ancestor witches Cackled before going to impale him, thanking Bloom for making their job easier. Before Bloom could formulate a plan her body moved on its own. Their nails pierced her stomach.

 After a few seconds she collapsed in her fathers arms. As she looked into his eyes he managed to ground himself and realized who he was holding which made him weep. As the ancestor witches began gloating Bloom’s form began to glow, which only terrified the witches as they realized what they had just done. Bloom’s wound healed up, and as she awoke she fully transformed into Enchantix. Suddenly Bloom’s new mask emerged and Daphne emerged from her body, fusing with her.  

“I'm sorry everyone… I'm sorry I didn't kill these hags a long time ago!”

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Quick update! Chapter 5 is one scene away from being done ! I'm sorry for taking so long , I've been caught up in irl responsibilities and have had no real time to write but with the way thins are going right now I should upload the chapter ether tonight or tomorrow ^^

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i'm in a chaotic mood, while yall wait for the 5th chapter of my rewrite ( which is almost done ) what are yall's most unpopular winx club opinions? 

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CHAPTER FOUR :  The invasion of Alfea

Scene 1

We start at Alfea, with Helia being taken care of by the nurse and Riven in the infirmary while The rest of the group consult Faragonda on their findings. Flora’s visibly worried about Helia along with the rest of the group but they elect to concentrate on their mission. Faragonda, being the fairy of time and prophecy, maybe she could offer some assistance, since Tecna couldn't find anything, neither could Flora, or Musa and even the library of Solaria didn't have anything.

The myth is incredibly simple that it tricks you into thinking that it’s easy but the moment you start deciphering its contents nothing seems to make sense. Even Faragonda was having trouble. The only thing they managed to get out of it is where the ancestor witches might be.

The planet of Obsidian. An abandoned planet that used to be used as a prison for criminals that were considered unredeemable centuries ago before the creation of the Omega dimension. After a while it was deemed too cruel even for them and the magic council at the time tried their best to keep any information about Obsidian completely hidden except for the members within the council. Oritel and Mariam never told the company of light about their plans. They were very secretive to the annoyance of Griffin and Faragonda.

Flora mentioned that her parents used to scare her when she missbehaved a child , saying that they’ll send her there if she continues. To which Stella comments that “your parents have a tendency to do that huh…”

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We transition to Helia in his bed, with blurry vision, his head pulsating and his limbs weak. Through his eyes we see the woman who did this to him in the first place. Riven sees him waking up as he’s caring for him, the nurse leaves the room to get a few things which leaves them alone. Riven tries to apologize to him for what happened back on Domino, to which “Helia” answers : are you expecting forgiveness ? because I may be a lot of things but forgiving ? no not really and  i'm certainly not your friend.

This stings, but Riven can’t help but agree that he doesn't deserve Helia’s kindness or a place in their group after all the stunts he’s pulled. “Helia” agrees, only making the self hatred Riven feels worse. 

Scene 3

We transition outside Alfea, where the woman sees what’s going on through Helia and decides that now that they’re all concentrated and confused, it’s time to attack. She sends her bug army to the barrier around Alfea, all of them attacking it from all angles which alerts Faragonda. Suddenly the barrier shatters, and The woman sends her army down on the students. Alfea is under siege once more. The winx see the other students transforming and trying to defend their school but something about the power this army wields is too strong for the students. 

“The school year just started… Alfea is full of freshmen fairies'' Musa comments, meaning they cant Help the winx whatsoever. Before they get to say anything else, the woman ounces herself as Mandragora, the witch who carries the wrath of the three ancestral witches. Which get’s on Faragonda and Bloom’s radar.

“Mandragora!? She’s here?!” Faragonda exclaimed, she sent a giant bug to shatter the window in Faragonda’s office, the specialists decided to take care of this while the girls began running outside. When Bloom tried asking who Mandragora was, Faragonda shot her down saying that this isn't the time for explanations. 

The specialists minus Helia and Riven, are taking on this monster, their blades don't seem to be working. They jump out what used to be the window, Leading the monster on the quad. Sky pulled rank, telling them to surround it from all positions and to put their new upgrades to use. As they fight we get to see creative uses of their weapons, such as using the elements to deprive the bug of oxygen, water, trapping it within stone before infusing their weapons with said magic and slashing at it, cutting it in small pieces.

Que joke of them getting coated in the creature's murky blood and being grossed out.

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We transition to Mandragora obliterating sections of Alfea, the school having been infested by her insect army. A few fairies try to fight her, but before she got to kill them , one of Stella's barriers protects them, sending her attack back at her. The winx emerge from the building. “Cmon girls, let’s send her into oblivion along with her masters!”

The girls transformed into Enchantix and began their assault,but before they managed to get even one attack in Mandragora’s bug army paralyzed them and sent them falling to the floor. Before Mandragora’s killing blast managed to hit the winx, Grizzelda emerged, created a force field around them and told them to get inside before she gives them detention, after using a quick spell to heal the venom in their bodies. 

“ Hey ! you can’t talk to us like that anymore, we're graduates!” Stella complained. Suddenly Grizzelda’s shield began weining, almost as if a force was pushing against her, her legs were struggling to stand until she fainted and her barrier disappeared. 

“You old fool, none of you could even hold me back for a few seconds! Inside me rests the fury of the three ancestral witches!-” a sudden blast of green energy hit Mandragora in the back and made her eat shit on the ground. 

“WHO!? WHO DARE’S-”

“What were you saying dear?” Faragonda asked sarcastically as she emerged in her Enchantix form, the girls couldn't help but aw since well Faragonda never transforms. A ton of bugs began surrounding Faragonda but before any of the girls could do anything, they all froze, aged rapidly and fell to the floor. Much to the disgust of the girls and especially Stella. 

“All that power and your army is still no match for me? Uhmm how disappointing” Faragonda commented before Mandragora screamed in fury and attacked her, only for it to miss her completely. “STAY PUT , YOU SAD EXCUSE OF A FAIRY!!”  This began a fierce battle between the two. Faragonda gets to show off her powers on full display here, time spells, aging, predicting Mandragora’s movements and more.

While we get to see Mandragora using the 3 powers of the ancestor witches when she gets desperate and uses her powers to transform into different insects. Until one point where Mandragora got pinned to the floor and Faragonda regrouped with the rest of the girls as they joined her. Mandragora tries summoning her army only for Aisha to ask : “ Are you talking about them?” as they were floating in bubbles of Morphix. 

“Now winx.” Faragonda ordered.

The girls converged their powers :  energy of mother nature!, techno magical union!, pure enchanted Morphix!, celestial balance!, harmonic soul!, and the dragon’s fury!. All these spells came together to create a complex cage which put Mandragora in such agony that she could do nothing but scream. 

“ don't let go winx, now I don't know how you managed to crawl out of that deep, dark, frigid prison but by law of gravity and time itself I order you to reunite with the course of your magical energy!” as Faragonda exclaimed this, everything turned white, the only thing visible being Faragonda’s body as everyone’s ears began to ring. As the light faded, the girls regrouped to find that Mandragora was gone. Stella began to celebrate but Bloom looked in horror at what used to be Alfea.

Before long Faragonda began plummeting to the floor as her transformation dissipated, lucky Stella used one of her new anti gravity moon spells to give Faragonda a soft landing. 

Scene 5

We skip a few days, Cloud tower has sent in their brightest witches to help with tending to the several students and teacher’s injuries. Faragonda is currently resting in the infirmary, luckily she’s fine, she just used too much of her magic at once. The rest of the professors have all somewhat recovered, the rest of the winx along with some witches have been helping the students recover from their injuries, some of them even lost their wings. Luckily for them, that was easily fixed with a sprinkle of fairy dust.

Bloom walks alone through what remains of the hallowed halls of Alfea, where windows should have been were giant holes in the wall. She entered the infirmary to check on miss Faragonda, who’s actually awake this time around. Bloom sits down and apologizes for this, Mandragora was clearly after her.. She brought this upon the school but she promises that when she’s done everything will be fixed and returned to its former glory.

Faragonda doesn't really have the strength to speak, all she could muster was a look of pure unadulterated love, as if she were staring at a child. Bloom wished her well and began heading outside to reunite with the rest of the winx. 

Scene 6

Flora sees Helia and rushes to him to hug him but he pushes her aside before ignoring her, catching the attention of Musa who confronts him. He responds that Musa should stick to writing her pathetic little breakup songs,  plus told Flora to take her “ good vibes, love heart touchy feely goody goodness and to save it for someone who might actually care to listen to her pathetic nonsense” after which he turned to Musa.

“what else do you have going for you other than shouting about how desperate and lonely you are hmm?” The rest of the speacialists surrounded him, telling to back off. Helia reluctantly does and Flora gives him the most horrific death stare she could muster. Riven of all people asked Flora if she was okay, earning the ire of Musa but she kept it internal. The group wondered what the hell got into him while Musa did her best to comfort Flora. 

At the same time the rest of the winx joined, Bloom explained what their next course of plans is. They have to enter the obsidian planet in order to defeat the ancestor witches, which makes everyone look at her with pure bewilderment. A bit of silence followed before Musa asked if Bloom’s officially lost it.

Bloom proceeds to explain that they can't continue their search while the ancestor witches exist, they’ll just keep encountering more goons, or they’ll personally sabotage their mission which makes Helia grunt. So Bloom has decided to take the fight to them and than find her parents, she tells everyone that they’re free to leave. But this is something she MUST do, the others are a bit hesitant but elect that they’ve made it this far, they should finish what they started. 

The winx and specialists are talking to Griffin, discussing what they know about Domino and Mandragora. Considering the siege on Alfea, Griffin decides to grant them a portal to Obsidian. Since one of her newly graduated guardian witches is actually very gifted in interplanetary travel. 

Lucy, suddenly Mirta began running towards her. Lucy twirled her in the air a bit and kissed  her much to the surprise of everyone. Meanwhile Flora just shrugs, saying that she already knew with her and Mirta being besties and all. Griffin does warn them that once they set foot on the planet, their magical energy will slowly be drained until they cant move and eventually die.  

This made Helia giggle somewhat, weirding everyone out and honestly making them wonder if they should even bring him with them. But they all agreed that they need to put an end to the ancestor witches once and for all. Griffin nods and instructs Lucy on the spell required to enter Obsidian. Tecna asks how they'll be able to come back, to which Griffin explains that she’s sent a techno magic transport spell to Tecna’s phone. 

As the portal opened everyone mentally prepared before they all ran into the portal. Griffin could only hope that they make it back.

End of episode.

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CHAPTER THREE:  The book of fate 

Scene 1

As the ship approaches Domino they conclude that the atmosphere would destroy the owl. Bloom gets an idea, She uses a new spell of hers, inner flame. This gives all the girls, guys and ships an red aura which not only will regulate the temperature around them but will also protect them from the hail and winds. With this they enter Domino’s atmosphere which Bloom’s power barely manages to fight against.

As they land, the girls note that even with Bloom’s magic protecting them from cold they’re still not holding up that well. Bloom dawns Daphne’s or well , her new mask. She sees Domino as it used to be , lush and green. The plants having a dragon touch to them. Tecna suggests that they get on their bikes and ride to the point she calculated where the mountain of the rock resides. Que Riven and Sky racing and Tecna telling them off.

Flora senses lifeforce beaming from the mountain and she figures out that the mountain is actually a nest for a giant owl-like bird to rest within. Tecna scans the mountain , does some fast research using her new enhanced Enchantix powers and finds out that the bird itself is part of an old Domino legend. The bird of rock , which holds information about everything that’s ever happened since the creation of the magical universe. It used to be a beloved pet of the dragon herself before she merged with the Planet.

Rock has been entrusted to every member of the royal Domino Bloodline, also known as the custodians of the dragon’s flame. Stella then proceeds to punch Bloom’s shoulder, telling her to go up there and tell that thing to come down so they can enter its library. Bloom’s a bit hesitant, since she doesn't exactly know how to do that. Timmy gets the idea to simply climb it while it’s still asleep, they’re smaller than it so it’s not like it il notice them right ? 

Flora creates some vines for them to climb, the other girls are worried but Flora tells them that her vines are stronger than steel now.

Scene 2

As the guys climb higher and higher, Riven gets louder and louder much to the annoyance of the other guys. Helia in particular, he tells Riven to shut up which actually stunts the rest of the guys. Sky whispers to himself that he doesn't think he’s heard Helia this angry before. Before Riven managed to apologize, the owl of the rock began to rumble and shake. Before the guys knew it, the bird flapped its giant wings and took to the sky.

The girls saw this happening and Stella exclaimed that they need to transform and go after them only for Tecna to remind her that they can barely handle the cold down there with Bloom’s magic. They won't survive up in the sky, Bloom takes command and tells everyone to get on to the owl.

The guy’s are being carried on by a thread, all of them having to use their new weapon upgrades in passive ways to avoid falling to certain death along with Flora’s vines having a mind of their own and saving Timmy from a fall to certain death, they all start slowly succumbing to hyperthermia before Flora sensed this and converged her powers with Bloom to maintain the guy’s body temperature through her vines. 

The owl only barely managed to catch up to the bird but before the girls could come up with a plan to save the guys, fog covered their way. Stella, as per usual, took the opportunity to show off her new Enchantix powers by dispersing the clouds. Even so they still couldn't get close to it, which is where Tecna uses a new spell of hers: swift internet connection. Which makes the ship’s speed increase so much that they finally manage to catch up to the bird.

Musa and Flora combine their powers to read the bird’s mind, it’s not angry, it’s just scared. “So what, we need to sing this thing a lullaby?” Stella commented. Musa rolled her eyes before she tried to use her new crystal voice spell on the bird. This only made the bird more aggressive which made it attack the ship, sending it crashing to the floor. With the winx’s fates uncertain. Tecna got knocked out while the rest got thrown to the back of the ship. With some help, Tecna managed to wake up and retake control of the ship. 

This Time around, Bloom and Musa converge their magic to calm the bird down. After a few suspenseful moments, the rock finally calmed down and returned to its nest. The winx and specialists regroup and enter the library of the rock.

In the distance, an old hag on a giant bug holds an orb of magic. She can sense the amount of magical energy having been used. Even the dragon flame. She proceeds to follow their magic trail while cackling, Glad that she finally found what she was looking for.

Scene 3

As they enter, they decide to split up into 2 groups: Tecna, Aisha, Riven, Helia, Sky , and Brandon are the heavy hitters and the sneakiest of the group. They are in charge of patrolling the building inside and out. Meanwhile Bloom, Stella, Flora, Musa, Timmy,and  Nabu will be researching the rotunda library that seems to make up most of the building. 

The woman found their location rather easily, however, she knows she can’t take on all these powerful fairies at once… She suddenly gets an idea and sends out a bug into the library. Its goal is to go after the most mentally weak person.

As the group approaches the middle of the room, a book is displayed in the middle with the face of the great dragon on the cover. Before they open anything, Timmy scans the area plus the book.  Unfortunately, Timmy’s devices can't scan anything in this room. Bloom gulps before opening the book in the center of the room, expecting some sort of explosion. Nothing. So Bloom started looking through the book only to find… Nothing. Everything is blank. Everyone goans in frustration before the book begins to glow.

Bloom, Stella, Flora, and Musa prepared to transform while the guys prepared their magic and weaponry before a man emerged from the book’s pages. Clad in golden glory, Bartleby introduced himself as the keeper of this library and the book of fate. Addressing Bloom by her formal title. 

Scene 4

The other group spread around the building, naturally splitting off into teams: Helia and Tecna, Aisha and Riven, Sky and Brandon. Taking the role of leader and telling everyone to scatter. Helia and Tecna are patrolling the outside, with Tecna’s Tecnomagic and Helia’s aluf stealthy nature, nothing will be able to enter the building. 

Riven and Aisha are patrolling the inside, they’re the hardest hitters of the group. And Sky stood guard with Brandon ,close to the rontanda library, in order to report any issues to the other group.

Tecna decided to make an overall scan of the area, while doing so she decided to have a word with Helia, which only served to confuse him. Tecna could tell that there was something on his mind, enough to worry Flora. This caught Helia off guard as he did not exactly expect Tecna to be so insightful when it comes to emotions. Tecna pushes Helia to express his emotions and allow himself to feel irrational things. Even irrationality has its place and it doesn't get enough credit for the good it can do.

This leaves Helia perplexed, asking when Tecna got this wise. 

“Somewhere in between earning my Charmix and getting trapped in the omega dimension” Tecna giggled. Helia chuckled alongside her. He finally began to open up about something he’s been scared to talk about, even to Flora. 

The reason he’s returned to red fountain was because of his grandfather, truth be told he’d always preferred the idea of living a simpler life and that was his plan but as he grew up, magic began showing itself around him. Tecna questioned why he didn't become a wizard if that was the case, to which he responds that the magic, avoiding calling it his own , manifested itself as.. A pair of wings. 

Which shocks Tecna, she proceeds to explain that he should be proud of that. Not a lot of men end up with enough magical energy to become a fai- 

Helia caught her off. If he were to become… that, his grandfather would disown him entirely. He’s all the family he has left… Tecna asks why he thinks that to which he explains it’s because Saladin told him himself.

A long pause followed. Tecna then began explaining that her parents are much the same. Displaying emotions on Zenith is looked down upon, she was always looked down upon for any emotion she displayed that isn't rational.

When she and the others saved Bloom from Darkar, instead of being happy for her. They told her that if she ever pulled a stunt like that again then she can forget coming back home at all. 

“I didn't listen to them. When the Omega portal was going out of control i didnt think about them. I thought about the people who mattered most to me. My true family. The people who brought out the best in me and made me happy.” She then encourages him to let himself feel what he’s feeling. The people who matter the most will stay and support him just like he’s supported them. 

This brings Helia to tears and he hugs Tecna. Right at that moment that woman’s bug landed on his neck and bit him. A sudden rush of pain coursed through his body. He then collapsed, Tecna quickly began rushing him to everyone else.

Scene 5 

Bartleby get’s Bloom with her full title and then asks for what information she is here to seek, to which she answers that she wants information on her parents. As he opens the book to their chapter we get a ton of pictures of them growing up and eventually a picture of baby Bloom and Daphne which only served to make Flora squeal.  

“Bartleby ….. What does the last page of their destiny say ?...” Bloom asked, uncertain and kind of scared of the answer. Only for the last page of their destinies to be blank. He goes on to explain that it simply means that it’s not been written yet. In other words, they're alive. Flora then asked if they could see Bloom’s chapter, to which Timmy added that if Bloom’s destiny is to save her parents then that book can show them how to find them. Que cute friendship moment between Timmy and Flora.

Bartleby scrolls through Bloom’s section, to its most recent chapter. The ink begins shifting and changing. “Your destiny is actually part of an old Domino legend, princess Bloom.” 

“In the heart of all evil, a kingdom trapped within obsidian stone and rock will be seeked by the last air to the throne. A brave spirit will be required to vanquish the everlasting darkness. And what was lost, will be again as the seven of pure light shine bright against the dark.”

As Bloom tries to touch the page, the ink tries emerging to attack her but fails and returns to the book.

“Ughh …. Not to interrupt but Bartleby? You’re fading like cheap fabric.” Stella commented.

“I must apologize but time is of the essence” , Bloom begs him to stay , and she asks him what the last page of her book says, to which he once again shows that it’s blank. It 'll be up to her to decide how this tale ends. And he dissipates back into the book. Tecna rushes in with Helia, Flora gasps in horror as she sees him unconscious. Bloom made everyone back away from him and began using her healing powers on him. 

It didn't work. Which only made everyone panic. Tecna said that they should get him to Alfea, maybe Faragonda could help, Which gets the full attention of that woman. A grin forms on her face.

End of the episode.

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CHAPTER TWO: Rebirth from the Ashes

This episode/chapter kicked my ass. Enjoy XD

Scene 1

It’s 10 PM, Bloom’s bedroom is a total mess. Paper crowding her bed, the floor, with a few Techno magic screens around that have the information she’s found. Most of which involves Domino’s geography and its main cities plus a few historical figures. One of which catches Bloom’s eye but elects to move on as it doesn't really help her. There is also allot of information about different prisons in the magical universe to see where the coven could reside. Contacting them has become impossible.

We get a flashback of Bloom in cloud towers script with Griffin by her side. No matter what Bloom does, nothing happens. Griffin ponders that Bloom accidentally eradicated the remains of their magic by accident with her presence. The dragon flame and all. Which only makes Bloom’s frustration worse.

We cut back to the present where Bloom’s frustration boils over as she groans into her pillow. Bloom complains that it would be alot easier if she could talk to Daphne. After 30 minutes of groaning and wasting away in her bed, Bloom decided to ignore her problems for now, get dressed and go out.

Scene 2

Bloom decides to go to the Frutti music bar to relax, she’s having a grand old time, and even has a small conversation with one of the bartenders working there: Roxy. after which a band goes up to perform. Bloom’s not really paying attention as she’s too busy brooding. As the band plays the lead singer stares at Bloom a little, trying to make sure it’s actually her. After the performance he goes up to her and introduces himself as Andy.

Which surprises the hell out of Bloom, she didn't exactly expect to bump into her Ex at a bar while trying to drown her sorrows, her life seems to be getting better and better huh… She’s surprised he started a band, he wasn't exactly all that confident when they used to date, but to be fair that was 5 years ago. They start catching up ( with Bloom lying about where she’s been,) she ends up telling him she's been studying abroad in America, as a not the thought out cover-up for her studies in Alfea.

He proceeds to pour his whole heart out to Bloom, talking about all the horrible things went through after their break up, including his hard battle of questioning his sexuality. He tells her it was all worth it in the end though, revealing he is now in a happy polyamorous relationship with his bandmates. Which proceeds to give Bloom even more whiplash, she’s over the moon for him, nonetheless. She explains her own relationship status ect.. And that she recently graduated and that she’s just kind of unsure of what she’s doing, which Andy can definitely relate to.

“You could have fooled me, you look like you know exactly what you want”. To which he responds that he does in fact know what he wants, it’s the getting there that’s the tricky part. Which resonates with Bloom for obvious reasons. They exchange numbers and he asks if she’s still drawing . She tells him that she does, to which he asks if he could commission her any time since his band needs a few visual assets.

Bloom readily accepts the offer.

Scene 3

Bloom goes to sleep. This night is the first night she’s been able to dream at all, although it’s not as pleasant as she wished it would be. She sees all her friends around her but when she tries to touch them they disappear, even sky. Leaving her all alone as her wings vanish. In the distance, she hears her birth parents calling her name, the ancestor witches block off her path to them as she tries to reach them.

After which she gets a vision of Daphne saving her as a baby and fighting the ancestor witches, screaming that they’ll never get the power of the dragon’s flame. Bloom suddenly hears her sister's faint voice calling out for her. She slowly regains her wings as her environment turns from a white void and into lake Racalouce, where Daphne’s spirit greets Bloom. They embrace, and Bloom asks where Daphne’s been all this time.

She explains, to Bloom’s horror, that as Bloom gets stronger Daphne gets weaker, and after Bloom earned Enchantix she knew her time to dissipate was near. Bloom wasn't born with the power of the dragon flame, it was Daphne’s once. Just like it was their mother’s once and so forth. She simply gave it to her in order to protect the power since she knew she wouldn't survive the attack on Domino.

Speaking of, Daphne has important information for Bloom, she can find information about what happened to their parents and how to undo the coven’s destruction. She must go to the mountain of the rock and find the Book of fate, it holds information about the past, present and future of the royal Domino Bloodline. When Bloom asks why Daphne didn't tell her about the book before she explains that she thought it was destroyed.

They have a heartfelt conversation about each other and this serves as Daphne’s goodbye since she doesn't know when she’ll see Bloom again. Bloom tries to tell her to not leave and in response She hugs Bloom and tells her she’s never truly alone. Bloom ends her dream with the sentence “ we’ll be a family again, someday..” echoing in her head.

Scene 4

Bloom wakes up shaken in the middle of the night. The words Daphne said reveroborated in her mind. The thought of losing Daphne was just too much. She can't lose her, she just can't. She’s all she has that links her to Domino, she wouldn't have survived half the missions she’s been on without her. She CAN’T lose her.

We get a montage of Bloom’s daily life: waking up, going to work, working, going home, and sleeping. We see this about 2 to 3 times, each time Bloom seeming less and less energetic and more so apathetic. She isn't eating well, she isn't sleeping much, she’s neglecting her wants and needs in a desperate attempt to cling on to Daphne. She’s been trying to make art assets for Andy’s band during these insomnia episodes but everything she’s coming up with is terrible and bad in her eyes.

This is what she’s doing at the end of the montage, as Bloom hits another dead end she gets frustrated. With bags under her eyes, she walks downstairs and tries to make herself some coffee but Mike stops her. He gives her the dad look while she tries her best to look normal to no avail. He gets some sweet treats and a glass of milk before sitting at the kitchen table to talk.

He starts out the conversation in a tender yet confronting tone, telling her that he’s noticed her neglecting her own health. She tries denying this but he just ignores her and tells her that she needs to sleep, she barely eats ect… Bloom lets out a tired sigh and tells Mike what Daphne told her. Mike was extremely stunned and very confused on how to help her, thus he began asking her questions about how she feels, let her vent a bit.

Bloom expresses that she just doesn't know what to do, she finally has a lead to get her to her biological parents but losing Daphne would be devastating. She doesn't like the idea of losing anyone else, especially after Tecna threw herself in the Omega portal.

Her father doesn't know what to say and she simply said that she’ll try to sleep. Mike is left feeling unsure of how to help her as she walks back up to her room. Bloom obviously can't fall asleep so she elects to try and make something for Andy. She gets to work making a few concept sketches. She sends them to him and asks to meet up the next day since she gets off work earlier. He accepts.

Scene 5

Andy’s walking through his makeshift studio. The rest of his crue/partners are relaxing. As she walks in with her concept sketches and a few more she’s made, Mark already doesn't like her but hides it the best he can mainly because Andy made him promise to not antagonize Bloom. It doesn't work, Bloom’s aura reading ability making her see right through his act. She can tell it’s not personal and while unpleasant, she elects to ignore it.

Rio on the other hand, gets up and introduces everyone including himself and shows her around the studio, Explaining that they’re under the contract label of Jason. He’s quite sweet to Bloom, the moment she makes a self-deprecating comment he shoots it down immediately and tells her that from what he’s seen from her work and her general disposition, she should have more faith in herself. Bloom can't help but imagine Daphne in his place.

This only makes Mike’s dislike of her more palpable and so Bloom, wishing to avoid being even more mentally exhausted than she already is, elects to pitch her concepts to them. When Mike makes a critical comment about her work, instead of getting angry, she simply lets the frustration simmer and takes notes. This leaves him surprised which makes him ease up around her.

After they’re done discussing, she asks if it would be okay if she brought some of her equipment here so she could work with them. Mainly because she just needs to be around some more positivity and she feels comfortable here. The guys accept it with varying degrees of enthusiasm. We get a transition from day to night, with everyone having mostly left except for Bloom and Rio.

As he’s packing up, he tells her that it's time to go. She apologizes and starts getting her stuff, she just spaced out. The bags under her eyes are even more visible. He tells her to calm down, she has time. He sees right through her anyway, she’s avoiding something and she’s using this gig to ignore it. Bloom is speechless, he elects to tell her that she doesn't have to tell him. Simply that she should take more care of herself, or at least sleep a little.

She pours her heart out to him, while avoiding certain details to make sure he doesn't think she’s crazy. He listens intently, after she’s done Bloom just cries and he comforts her the best he can. He tells his own tail of how he lost his own sister, a few years ago he got into an accident while his sister was in the backseat. He was fine but she was in pretty rough shape. She was pronounced dead a few hours later, ever since than he’s blamed himself for her passing.

It’s taken a lot of time to come to terms with the idea that his sister wouldn't want him to destroy himself. And he reassures Bloom that Daphne would want her to be happy. This settles in for Bloom and a new fiery determination courses through her. Daphne wanted her to save their planet, their people and she now has a way of doing so. She can’t just sit there and rot.

Scene 6

Bloom is on her way home, walking this time. She just needed some peace and quiet to reflect. She can't hold on to Daphne forever, she’s grateful for the time she did get to have with her sister but now she’s ready to fulfill her goals without Daphne’s helping hand. She can do this on her own, she’s ready and Daphne deserves to rest.

Suddenly, Daphne’s mask emerges from Bloom’s chest and presses itself against her eyes, Through which Bloom sees an image of Daphne, Revealing Daphne's face for the first time. She floats to Bloom, hugging her. And she whispers : Bloom… I'm proud of you..

This causes Bloom to tear up, with a soft smile on her face, she looks at Daphne. “ thank you… for everything..” Daphne, with a tender smile begins to fade into small little fireflies which disperse into the air. Suddenly Daphne’s mask turns an amber red, the once soft lumps at each end of the mask sharpen, after which it vanishes into small sparkles and disappears into Bloom’s fairy dust bottle. A parting gift from Daphne one could say.

Bloom watches the fireflies become nothing but small flickering lights with a somber look on her face. She starts walking back home. Determined to find the book of fate, she calls the rest of the girls and specialists asking for a favor.

As she walks away, the fireflies lead the viewer from earth, to space, through countless planets before settling on a dark, almost invisible planet. Entering its atmosphere, traveling through countless mountains, and finding its way in a clearing with 3 rock formations, each having a symbole upon them. A snowflake , a lighting bolt, and an octopus. In the center, lies a stone statue of a man reaching out to a sword, the fireflies head directly to the sword, which results in a blue flame erupting from its blade.

Sudden shrieks erupt as these 3 mountains begin to glow a deep hellish red. 3 shrill voices begin to scream about how hot the sword is, almost like its very presence burns them.

Scene 8

The owl lands in front of Bloom’s neighborhood with all the specialists and the rest of the winx. All of them ( including Bloom ) with new looks. Bloom embraces her friends, exclaiming that it's been too long, and thanking them for coming to help her

Helia’s quiet which causes Flora to feel uneasy, to which he reassures her that he’s fine. Musa and Riven are completely ignoring each other, while the rest of the group organically keeps them apart.

A bit more laughter ensues before Bloom said that it's nice to see them again but if they don't leave now they’ll end up arriving on Domino at night, and if the cold during the day was enough to kill whatever remained on the planet, imagine what it il be like at night.

Timmy and Tecna answer in unison that they would freeze to death in a matter of seconds. Which results in some awkward silence before Brandon exclaims that there’s no time to waste then! As everyone enters the ship, Mike and Vannessa stop Bloom to tell her just how proud they are of her. They hug her, que cute parent child moment. They share looks of support as the winx and Specialists take off to Domino.

End of episode

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CHAPTER ONE: Graduation blues

Scene 1

The Winx all wake up in varying states of being hungover from a club they all went to the night before in order to celebrate their last day at Alfea before graduation. Stella seems to be just fine, she gets a bit snippy with the girls saying that they can't handle their drinks whatsoever, saying that only Bloom and Flora were able to keep up with her, quote “speaking of, where is Bloom?”

We transition into Faragonda’s office where Bloom is asking for information about other members of the company of light that might know what happened to the ancestral witches and or Oritel and Marium. Unfortunately Faragonda, Saladin, and Griffin are the only members left of the COL and the rest have died tragically or share the same fate as Bloom’s parents.

Bloom starts to explain that she’s been feeling panicked , like her time window to get her life together is closing yet everyone else has a clear path ahead of them. Faragonda explains that she has no need to feel shame in not having a path that's as clear or as fast as the rest of the fairies at Alfea, especially the other winx members. Faragonda continues to explain that Bloom shouldn't feel shame because her journey will take longer than everyone else. And while she’s proud that she’s doing as much work as she can to achieve what she wants, Bloom needs to be easier on herself.

Faragonda then desmises Bloom, explaining that Graduation will be starting soon.

Scene 2

Celebrations are currently happening at Cloud tower, many witches are becoming full fledged guardian witches, and Lucy is no different. Ever since Mirta transferred to Alfea, Lucy’s been able to find her footing in witchcraft as Mirta’s attitude while nice always distracted her from harnessing her inner darkness without letting it consume her. Leading to some choices she now regrets

*cue miss Magix flashbacks, god that episode was a fucking mistake, we dont stan making fun of Black women’s natrual hair you dicks*

However those days are behind her as she walks up to the podium and gets handed a ring with a clear gem which turns lime green as she dons it, which transforms her into a witch version of Enchantix and gives her a complete connection with her magic source. Becoming a guardian Witch of Delona, she looks at Griffin who gives her a proud look before ushering her to return to her seat. More witches follow after her as she sits with a proud feeling beaming in her chest.

Scene 3

We transition to Red fountain, where Helia’s calling with Nabu after the rest of the guys have already left their dorm. Helia and Nabu have been getting close recently to the point where they regularly confide in each other for fun or support when their girlfriends aren't able to be there, or when it’s something they’d rather not discuss with them.

Since Nabu’s the only magic inclined friend he has that isn't a fairy, Helia decided to ask a few questions, mainly: Does doing magic make you happy? To which Nabu explains that it does, more than anything. Magic is not a tool, it’s a friend to work with. Which results in an uncharacteristic mixed response from Helia, before Nabu is able to question this Helia gets dragged away for graduation.

Headmaster Saladin and Codatorta giving a speech on defending their homeworlds until the very end, as warrior Guardians of the magic demiton. As each student walks up to the podium to receive their graduation gifts as it were, Helia gets uncomfortable which the rest of the guys pick up on. It’s Sky’s turn who looks like he’s got mixed feelings about the whole thing but nonetheless stands proud as he receives a small chip which he inserts into his weapon, this connects to the gem on his cape At which moment his sword gains Hydrokinesis. And he gets a specialist license on said Gem.

The rest of the guys go through the same procedure, Helia get the power of Aeromancy,Brandon get’s the power of Geomancy, Riven gets Aeromancy strangle enough which confuses him but he doesn't make a fuss about it even though he and everyone else thought he’d get PyroKinesis , and Timmy gets ElectroKinesis

Scene 4

We transition to Alfea, Faragonda begins the ceremony with a speech congratulating the girls for persevering even when year after year, they’ve all had to deal with extraordinary challenges full fledged fairies have never had to deal with, while in training no less. As a special thanks to 6 fairies in particular, they get to go first.

The winx walk up to the podium and Faragonda hands them a few boxes that magically open. Inside them lie small colorless gems that once they touch morph into their fairy dust bottles. Once they donned them, it glamoured them to look like their base form, each of the girls getting varying reactions mostly nostalgic and enjoying it as much as they can, this is the last time they’ll see this form on themselves After All.

They slowly began to levitate and their magic began to expand, all except for Bloom. Flora could hear the plants and trees clearly and understand everything they were saying and feeling. Faragonda explained that is the difference between a fairy who uses nature magic and being THE fairy of nature.

Musa can now hear all the music in the world, especially the secret song in every person's heart. She’s basically a magical empath now , Tecna is now connected to each electronic device in the world and can even harness pure raw electricity akin to stormy, Aisha is now connected to all the water in the known universe to the point where she can pinpoint people’s location if they are within any body of water

The light of the sun, the moon, and the stars are now shining deep within Stella and she has now complete control over the weather along with some gravity spells, meanwhile Bloom’s dragon flame has been summoned and while she’s powerful she hasn't gained much. “I just don't feel anything…” echos in her head

At the height of magical energy their glamor dissipated to reveal their Enchantix forms, afterwhich a bright light encompassed the screen and they were lowered to the ground. “From now on, all your worlds will have brand new guardian fairies! You ! “ Faragonda said as the winx cheered, while Bloom fained excitement.

Scene 5

It’s party time at Alfea, drinks, dancing, music galore ( Musa’s collabing with Galatia on a duet of All is magic ) while this is going on Bloom is up in her room, still in her civilian outfit, Stella barged in since one Musa sensed how Bloom felt and told Stella to check up on her and second; Bestie instinct, Which she swears was it and not Musa telling her to do this, to which Bloom rolls her eyes.

Stella asks what’s wrong and tells her that Bloom can tell her anything. Bloom is hesitant but elects to reveal at least a little bit, she explains that Faragonda has so far been no help in finding her parents and the research she’s gathering on Domino isn't conclusive to much. When Stella asks about Daphne, Bloom explains that she hasn't been able to reach Daphne whatsoever, it feels like she’s slipping away.

Like her, whatever reserves of power she once had to communicate with her is now fading. And the worst part is the fact that she’s already a terrible guardian fairy. Stella challenged this, by telling her that she’s doing everything she can, it’s not her fault that some wretched hags destroyed the world she is meant to protect.

Which sparks some desperation in Bloom but Stella asks what she could have done. She was a baby, she didn't even have any magic to use, she couldn't have done anything , Which made Bloom start tearing up. Stella quickly hugged her and let her cry it out. Once Bloom calmed down a bit, Stella told her to wait a little and left the room. This left Bloom confused and suddenly guilty when the rest of the winx entered the room.

Claiming they heard someone was in need of a slumber party and a pillow fight- courtesy of the winx. Bloom told them to go back to the party, they should not miss their own graduation party just because she’s throwing a pity party but before she got to finish Musa told her simply put : if one of us isn't enjoying the night than some plans need to be changed, this is a night for all of us, we should enjoy it.

And she adds some side comments about being annoyed with Riven’s whole existence and attitude aka he didn't show up and has been ghosting her for a few days now.And when Bloom tries to ask about the music, Musa explains that Galatia can handle it herself, for now it’s time for a good old fashion pillow party!

And when Bloom goes: Don't you mean a good old fashioned pajama party ?? the other winx pulls out pillows to assault her as laughter erupts.

Scene 6

A few hours into the night the girls have fully changed into their pj’s and are chatting freely. Flora mentions that she can’t believe that they're all graduated, since the last 3 years felt like nothing on account of the world-ending threats that popped up. Bloom decides to take the opportunity to thank Everyone and Stella especially, if Stella never went to earth they never would have met and there wouldn't be a Winx club at all. Stella is the heart of the team.

They all decide to make a pact, no matter what happens or whatever life decides to throw at them, they will face it together and help each other at the drop of the hat. They all agree and do their Iconic : WINX CLUB! And cheer.

We transition to the morning , the other girls have already left for their home worlds while Bloom was asleep. She packed her stuff and right before she exited the school she caught a glimpse of Miss Faragonda who mouthed “ good luck, I believe in you" to her which put a smile on Bloom’s face. She then leaves the school with Kiko in soles.

Scene 7

This whole scene is a montage sequence which begins with Bloom knocking her adoptive parent’s door and them embracing. We transition to Aisha and Nabu on a fun date and being happy, a lot of adorable couple banter goes on between them. They’re talking about going to a concert being performed by their favorite band and they start debating which of their albums is the best.

Stella is stressed out as she sees just how much Casandra and Shimera fucked up her kingdom, and her father is too busy quelling the issues being had with the nobility after what happened and trying to avoid potential wars. Thus he gave Stella a good amount of power at her request so she can begin to fix things such as : the economy and bankruptcy of the planet, paying for reconstruction of certain people’s homes bc yes this bitch kicked people out of their homes just to have a fancy place to go to ect..

plus try to give to local charities ( she’s low key cursing herself for not asking for Tecna or even Flora’s help but her stubbornness won out and she convinced herself she can do this all by herself. )

Scene 8

Flora is currently talking to Helia, they’re both on a date in her mother’s garden- having a picnic. Everything is quite sweet but Flora can sense that somethings off with Helia. When he says that he feels uncomfortable talking about it, Flora suggests writing a poem about how he feels. He’s been pushing her to express herself more creatively, and she thinks this might help. Helia is hesitant but decides to try it anyway.

He writes a poem describing the feeling of being trapped and even when you do manage to escape , you find that you’re in an even bigger cage. This concerns her but instead of prying she elects to try distracting him from those thoughts with a little trick she’s learned after becoming a guardian fairy. Flora casts an old favorite spell of hers : nature’s symphony; but with an Enchantix twist. The spell gives Helia a temporary connection with the surrounding flowers.

This however only aggravated the situation and Helia had a panic outburst which made Flora stop the spell. After Which he left, saying that he needs time alone and Flora just sits there concerned and confused.

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Tecna is currently extremely stressed with constant guardian fairy duties , after one particular mission where she saved a few kids from falling to their death she gets back home where she collapses from the stress plus she’s just generally exhausted. On her phone we see a few encouraging texts from Timmy.

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This transitions us into a few texts between Musa and Riven. This whole part is silent happening in a recording studio before the start of Musa’s audition for a small band, the only kind of communication being used here is body language and texts popping up on the screen. Musa has decided she deserves better than the treatment she’s received from Riven

over the years and weirdly enough, Riven agrees. He uncharacteristically shows that he’s sorry and that he’s trying to work on himself with Helia’s help.

He enrolled into therapy and he starts in a few weeks. Musa doesn't know what to say considering she had planned to berate him, with nothing to say and apathy consuming her she simply ends the conversation, wishing him the best and then sitting down to try and get her mind off this by playing her flute.

But she can't seem to get anything to sound right, art block is hitting her hard and very evidently not allowing her to ignore her problems. She gets frustrated and starts crying. At that moment Aisha texts her in their group chat, they end up calling and Aisha tries to comfort Musa as we get a shot of her crying in her room.

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We come back to Bloom having a little snow fight with Kiko in the park, she’s calling with Sky, she’s currently venting to him about how she feels and they both proceed to trauma dump each other. Sky doesnt know what he wants to do with his future, he knows he’s going to be the king of Eraklion someday but he wants more out of life, not that he doesn't want to be king but he wants his own identity separate from his title as heir to the throne.

He mentions feeling guilty because unlike Bloom he at least has his kingdom and she will have to work her butt off just to get something that was part of her birthright. She reasurse him that his struggles are valid, sure her’s are a bit more daunting but that doesn't make his problems any less real.

She returns home, gets a cup of hot chocolate milk and sits outside, cradling Kiko as he falls asleep. This whole scene is cute but there’s an underlying feeling of dread. Her parents notice her brooding and look at her with concerned facial expressions. The last shot of the episode is of Bloom’s house as it’s snowing.

So dis was the first chapter of my rewrite :D yay

[winxrewrite]

asking for Critique on my winx club secret of the lost kingdom rewrite!

this is just the first draft so there are a few things ive changed, mainly in the girls character arcs

i feel like i didn't change enough but at the same time i tried keeping what i liked which ended up being allot.

BASE OUTLINE: 

Chapter 1: Graduation Blues

The Winx and Specialists graduate, becoming legal guardian fairies.

Bloom is the only one without a clear path, feeling left behind and uncertain about finding her parents.

Daphne is unreachable, and Faragonda can't provide much information.

Bloom returns to Gardenia with little direction.Each Winx member pursues their post-graduation path: Flora takes a part-time teaching assistant job in Linphea. Musa goes back to Melody to further her music career. Tecna becomes the new guardian fairy of Zenith. Aisha faces loneliness in Andros. Stella tackles Solaria's issues.

Chapter 2 : Bloom's Desolation

Bloom feels increasingly isolated as everyone moves on.

Mitzy's progress intensifies Bloom's sense of stagnation.

Bloom has a recurring dream with a fading Daphne.

Bloom wakes up determined, calls the Winx to regroup.

She has a lead on finding her parents and needs their help.

The Winx and Specialists gather on Domino.

Chapter 4 : The book of fate

Bloom uses Daphne's mask to find the library.

They encounter challenges, including a giant bird.

The Winx claim  the bird and find  the Book of Fate.

Daphne fully fades; her powers go to Oritel's sword.

Ancestral witches awaken, sensing the Winx.

Mandragora is summoned, stealing Daphne's spark.

Chapter 5 : Invasion of Alfea

Mandragora invades Alfea, causing significant damage.

Pixies arrive to help in the restoration.

The Winx share the prophecy with Faragonda.

The Winx get permission to go to Obsidian.

They gain a portal and arrive with the Specialists.

Dark energy of Obsidian affects the Winx but not the Specialists.

Chapter 6: The Obsidian

The Winx face illusions tailored to each of them.

The Winx regroup at the resting place of the ancestral witches.

Ancestral witches mock them and attack.

Aisha, Tecna, Stella, Flora, and Musa succumb to Obsidian's dark energy.

Bloom remains immune to Obsidian's dark energy.

The ancestral witches attempt to manipulate Bloom into breaking the sword.

Bloom fights back, risking her powers.

Using Enchantix energy, Bloom frees her father.

Bloom loses Enchantix and transforms back into her base form. The ancestor witches try going after her father, she then took the blow for him. Killing her instantly.

Daphne appears and possesses Bloom.

Chapter 7 : Reincarnation

Oritel and Daphne engage in a fierce battle.

The witches summon Mandragora.

Daphne defeats Mandragora alongside oritel.

Obsidian is destroyed, saving Domino.

Chapter 8 : Aftermath and Reflection

Daphne merges with Bloom's powers and moves on.

Bloom feels a mix of relief and uselessness.

We get a few flashes of resolutions for the girls.

A celebration ball is held in Domino.

Bartleby hints at more challenges for the Winx.