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how do you outline/plan your plots? Less about coming up with the actual points more about how you place them down on the google doc
i am not the person to come for this sadly most of the time I simply just keep it in my noggin until I put it down in my google docs into a script. I have tried to outline several times and it almost never works for me, they often feel like I write too much or I write not enough that I get stuck in a lot of places. What I generally (have been trying to do) is just have a big block of text talking about the main things I want out of the story. Some more based on vibes and less based on scenes. These are what I had for COB and WAC respectfully (There's some stuff that's not canon anymore present but stuff that's blacked out is stuff are spoilers.)
(I DID make a whole outline for cob, but it barely resembles what I actually ended up writing, while the blurb is still pretty accurate to the story)
And then I basically try to start scripting off of this, sometimes less! I like stories that are more character focused than Plot focused so it's much easier for me to go off vibes and let the characters do their thing than plan out every single Important Plot Thing that needs to happen.
also if i give a basic vibe thing like this there's a lot less pressure for me personally to stick Exactly To It and to just do what feels right and change shit.
It's honestly one of the reasons I'm having a tad bit of trouble with bbd at the moment lol. there's some plot stuff I need to set up early and allow to get built up outside the character drama, and I am just really really weak at writing actual plot stuff. It's like my main weakness I feel like everything just becomes so stilted and clunky writing wise.
#ask#basically i am very loose about the actual writing part#i currently need to do major reworks on the last 3 chapters of cob#no major plot points change#but motives and dialogues and scenes have bc i'll never be satisfied.
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is detcon actually good
no <3 hope this helps
#listen. in order to enjoy detective conan you need to either be#1. obsessed with a very specific very japanese brand of detective drama and an equally specific equally japanese brand of slowburn romance#OR 2. a clinically insane fujoshi willing to overlook half-brother incest.#i have an actual literal chart in order to keep track of the character relationships at this point#and i havent even read the manga in a while so im sure its worse now#like half of the cases are either realistically impossible to solve or so fundamentally ridiculous it makes you insane#and another 20% are completely unitelligible to an english audience#because they rely on either codes based on the japanese language or some niche aspect of japanese culture or folklore#that would take several hours of research to fully understand. i know this from experience.#at least one CANONICAL couple are cousins#and it does that shounen manga thing where the author cant lose their steady income stream#so the story is prolonged through increasingly insane and convoluted plot points that only just barely feel coherent.#despite the fact that it's been going for like 30 years now the characters will literally never change or experience growth of any kind#shinichi kudo is an in-universe genius who has been trying and failing to make the same easy decision for THIRTY REAL LIFE YEARS.#i remember when he and ran FINALLY got together. which if i remember correctly was in literally the thousandth chapter#i was completely convinced up until the end of the arc that it was some sort of fakeout#because it is literally the only example in the entire series of those two changing the narrative significantly through their actions#I actually stopped my most recent reread because a major plot twist made so little sense it made me legitimately angry#all that being said. i am the kind of person who enjoys japanese detective dramas and slowburn romance#occasionally the comedy is REALLY good in a ridiculous sort of way#and if you can get yourself to fully buy into the absolutely insane framing circumstances a lot of the major overarching plot is good#but you just. you really have to overlook A LOT to get there. im not sure if i could do it if i hadn't seen the first few seasons as a kid#unfortunately i imprinted on shinichi kudo at a very young age. so. here we are#asks
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When a plot point YOU wrote comes back to bite you in the ass
#svsss#shang qinghua#SQH#scum villian self saving system#scum villain#scum villains self saving system#like he really thinks all those wife plots and plot points AREN'T GONNA GET HIM???#LIKE SURE SHEN QINGQIU IS GETTING THE MAJORITY OF IT BUT YOU CHANGED THE STORY TTOO#YOU'RE BOUTA GET PLOTTED BY YOUR OWN HAND#“God is so mean to me” YOU ARE GOD YOU DID THIS TO YOURSELF#Im obsessed with him btw#my art#nibbelraz
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If you’re still doing sketch requests, Shatterproof Hyrule my beloved? If I missed the window no worries <3
He also wears red :)
#my art#linked universe#lu#lu Hyrule#doodles#last request I’m doing#:)#thanks guys!#shatterproof#not that it really shows#tbh part of the point of shatterproof is that the story is like exactly the same. some relationships and details are different#but their disabilities dont necessitate a major change in the plot or anything#its a piece of it not all of it :)
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Stranger Things would be so good if only it wasn't written by cishet white male nerds with an inferiority complex.
#yes I'm thinking about Lucas Sinclair#I have a list of specific plot points and lines I would change to make Stranger Things good#lmk if you want to hear them#Stranger Things#duffer brothers#Lucas Sinclair#eleven hopper#eddie munson#steve harrington#Robin Buckley#mike wheeler#nancy wheeler#jim hopper#will byers#jonathan byers#max mayfield#media criticism#my stuff#me on my film major shit#anti stranger things#but only very gently
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if i'm being honest i actually don't believe the georgebertha divorce will happen because i don't think julian fellowes has the guts to go through with it.
#a georgebertha divorce would fundamentally change the show. and julian doesn't do that shit.#he literally only does it if forced at gunpoint. example: killing off sybil and matthew because dan and jessica wanted to leave#this is the same reason why i couldn't take the van rhijns losing all their money plot line seriously#he isn't brave enough.#i think they'll probably fight most of the season and then reconcile at the end.#the closest they will come to a divorce is either george considering drawing up papers#OR bertha telling george that there are rumors about them divorcing#either one has george crash out and kiss her. and then they're fine.#HASHTAG TRUST.#i also think with the amount of focus the press releases / teasers have done on a divorce plot line...#idk it'd be kinda stupid to just. announce one of the major arcs of your season so explicitly ?? does that make sense#like aren't we supposed to watch and find out. if every article is telling me they're divorcing what's the point of watching.#the gilded age#ace.txt
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honestly nothing is funnier to me in keeper than the sheer amount of people who care about sophie's love life. i have yet to encounter a single other middle grade novel where everyone so directly discusses the main character's relationships in the way kotlc does and it's fascinating
#kotlc#tbh i don't even feel like sokeefe/sophitz is even that central to the plot#what would it change if sophie and fitz never dated. if sophie and keefe had a background slow burn that only got resolved at the very end#or if sophie and fitz were dating the whole time and it was just. minor#like the plot is the same it just relies on keefe being a major character#and the earlier books rely on fitz being a major character too i guess#i suppose the unmatchable thing/sophie finding her parents is the only point that's influenced by her romantic relationships#but even then. sophie wants information. she'd figure that stuff out anyway
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don't know how people multi-fandom. dipped my toe into another one and immediately backed out bc everyone there was insufferable.
#ok i do know how ppl do it. the secret is having other moots in those fandoms#but i am an analysis and yapper girlie and reading the majority of y*ellowj*ckets takes are driving me up a WALL#[sorry y*llowj*ckets fandom rant starts here. tags contain spoilers for the s3 finale]#like i've lurked on the reddit and so many ppl there are dumb as rocks they don't even realize when a MAJOR PLOT POINT happens#but there are also some good takes on there once in a blue moon#and i enjoy how it's The Norm to call ppl out for being dumb as rocks abt things lmao. i love the argumentative nature of it#even tho i don't post there#on here tho? you get more nuanced takes but then you also get like 95% of the fandom who are blinded in various directions over their faves#and their rarepair / random ships. (and god forbid you express disliking a character. for valid reasons!)#and half of the fandom thinks everything they personally don't like / understand is Bad Writing#and another sizable part of the fandom is constantly chanting 'they're all bad! just pick ur fave and go!' whenever anyone wants to have#and nuanced discussion abt character morals / motivations or dares suggest that some of them are indeed less morally corrupt than others#a bunch of ppl are disappointed that they didn't get to see ALL the girls go feral and become 'crazy cannibals'#in the specific way they were imagining it would go from the pilot now that their time in the wilderness is pretty much up#EYE on the other hand enjoy the fact that most of the girls never truly descended to that level. never truly gave in to the wilderness#there have been moments for all of them sure. but in the end when it came down to the pit girl scene? the reality is most weren't into it#at all. the only ones who were really giving in were sh*na and l*ttie but everyone else was distraught over m*ri's death.#even with other characters using the hunt to conspire to take out sh*na l*ttie and possible t*issa like. in the end NONE of them could#go thru with it. which i think SAYS SOMETHING abt their character#sure they can plot all they want but when it came down to it m*lissa couldn't finish the job#and ahk*la realized that killing l*ttie in the caves would let IT in and change her forever so she backed down#ANYWAYS. just needed to Vent lol#maybe i will make this all a real post later lol (on my main bc that's where i post / rb yj content)
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i should watch bravern at some point. i like the ridiculous robot. and the guy who suffers more than jesus who i recently learned is 24 and not in his 30s like i thought he was
#spoilers bc i spoiled myself on important plot points->#i think lewis can still change into a robot after right. like they say it in the extra stories?#because otherwise it'd be like the beast from beauty and the beast turning into a regular clean shaven man at the end of the movie#im like...90% sure he can. robotfucking win!#i think lulu is the only major woman but i think her plot is interesting. i'd have to watch it to judge#my post#bang brave bang bravern
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"just focus on book 1 without mapping out the entire trilogy" I need you to understand how much I cannot do that
#and not just bc I'm distractable#because the whole thing needs to cohere!!!#also I'm considering adding back in a major plot point from starlightverse version 1.0 bc maybe 14yo me was onto something after all#anyway I find it baffling how apparently so many authors publish a first book without even having drafts of the next ones?#like if it's a planned series don't you need to write the whole thing at least once before committing????#how does their process work like does the entire plot come to them all at once like holy vision and then they jsut#write it all in order without changing anything????????#what if you really needed to change something in the first book to make the ending work but it was already published?#I live in fear
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im watching the station eleven miniseries after reading the book a few years ago and i gotta ask. Why did they changed it so much:(
#I know i know its to fit the runtime but like does adapting something to the screen really necessitate changing major plot points in favor#of added dialogue which states the themes of the show repeatedly#My god. it could have been really good. but without reading the book you'd think this story was just Babys First Postapocalypse#Also why did they make arthur leanders backstory so different when he/his past are like the main catalyst for the events#Props to the lead actresses though both kirstens and the guy who plays clark are absolutely perfect in role. and miranda
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POOKIE WE HAVEN'T TALKED IN SO LONG BUT THANK YOU FOR THE BUNGO ON MY DASH OH EM GEEEE
DUUUUUUUUUDE /gn HOW’VE YOU BEEN???
You’re welcome for the BSD spiral consuming my soul lately - watching it with a friend rn and I’m losing my mind you have no idea

#still in beginning season 2 so no spoilers (even though I know some major plot points BUT STILL)#sage answers#theballadear#LIKE#THE CHARACTER COMPLEXITIES#THE IMPACT OF BELIEFS AND CHOICES#THE HOPE FOR CHANGE#‘this is for people who aren’t good at living’ asagiri I love you#consider this a guarantee of more bsd on my blog#bsd#bungou stray dogs
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coming to the realization that my critter troll universe is kinda its own au n it feels like many doors have opened askdjhjdf
#its rewrite-esque but im not changing major plot points im just messing with the lil details hehe#having fun!!!!!!!!#sketch speaks#sketch's critterverse au
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The pattern is that people straight up do not read™. or they read a 3-5 tweet summary of what happened and treat it as if they did. or because shonen expectations based on "the classics" is bullshit and significantly rotted people's brains when deciding wether an ending is good or not.
Which could be nothing right
yeahhh. i will forever regret reading the last chapter through leaks because it was a dreadful experience, and watching everyone ever shit on it for like a week after genuinely made me want to just get off the internet forever or something because i felt like an idiot for liking the ending (all this is my fault for getting too invested in both tumblr and mha etc etc).
All the "it's rushed" and pacing complaints barely matter to me at this point because you just cannot feel the pacing of something correctly when you're reading it exclusively through leaks. you can't absorb info like that. And don't get me started on the number of complaints and criticisms I've seen of the last chapter that are just provably bullshit (I saw someone say Izuku didn't get a statue lmao. yes he did, you just read the fucking leaks and watched twitter drama unfold instead of reading the actual chapter i fear).
#i just. do not think it is as bad as some people want to make it seem. i know not to take people who make cashier peaked in high school deku#jokes but like some of yall are treating this as if it's a major failure of the manga ? ? ?#it's underwhelming if you want#it didn't touch on stuff you wanted it to touch on whatever#i personally think that it did okay with the constraints it clearly had#like even without going into shonen jump conspiracy theories horikoshi had been doing 15 pages chapters for a while now#I also think that a lot of disappointment comes from fanon interpretations becoming canon in people's minds especially regarding izuku#and like do not get me wrong i had mixed feelings when i read the chapters i still have mixed feelings on some aspects (hawks what r you#doing etc etc)#i dont blame people who didn't like the ending for not liking the ending#i am just very annoyed by some justifications for not liking the ending#i don't even bother arguing with anyone at this point bc i don't want to be that person (too often) and because it just straight up makes m#feel bad lmao#anywayssssss i probably wanted to say something else but i forgor#oh no yeah listen. maybe you think it's lazy and maybe it is lazy to do an 8 years timeskip and leave a lot of stuff up to the reader#i personally really like this choice. important points were addressed and the rest can be speculated upon by the fanbase and by god.#we are the mha fandom guys. we can speculate. we love to speculate. we have EIGHT YEARS#you can do literally whatever you want man#i already have my personal canon for what happened during the eight years and believe me it helps a lot with the mixed feelings lmao#again. horikoshi did Not have a lot of space the story clearly had a lot of plot changes halfway through. i really do think this is more#than okay. this ending is not the end of the world i promise.#anyways i originally started like citing bs criticism i saw and then i thought ok lets not. inside thoughts etc etc.#i am not a meta analyzer i regularly learn i've misunderstood something about something or misremembered a plot point i am Not the person#for actually good meta and a lot of very insightful stuff on how we are very much not the target audience and lack cultural context go see#pikahlua lmao#mha manga spoilers#mha 430#mad mha ramblings//#ask//#i almost want to say ask to tag lmao? i have the mha cri/tical tag blocked so if anyone needs the opposite for me being overly positive
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Im only a few episodes into s3 but Im starting to remember why I dont like the latter seasons of TMA as much as the early ones. Its the plot. There is too much of it. The change feels really sudden between seasons 2 and 3. There is a pre-statement plot section and post statement plot section (or maybe more than one) in every episode. Wherein s1 and s2 it was usually one or the other and not every episode even had a plot section (and s2 sections were not as intrusive)
Im here to listen to statements about fucked up happenings in ghostville with sprinklings of plot, not plot with sprinklings of statements
#tma#the magnus archives#at some point I just start skipping the non-statement sections#something something plot ahoy#i also dont like major changes in setting so as you can guess this also adds to my dislike of the later seasons
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My favorite bit in the City of bones movie is that they made up a piece of lore about how bach, the musician, was a shadowhunter, and if you play a certain Bach song you can detect demons? And I'm trying to understand why they did that because that isn't anywhere in the book, and i think they just wanted to speed up a certain fight from the book but it ended up being just really stupid?
#the movie baffles me#they try to keep every major plot point in some way but they make so many changes that even if it hits all the same beats#its a completely different plot somehow#all this to say madame dorothea is a lot cooler in the book :/ rip dorothea#also rip the greater demon that possessed her it sounds so epic in the book and its so goofy in the movie
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