#prompt: “you're no better”
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For Good
Warnings: referenced captivity, referenced torture, medication, unconsciousness, passing out, hurt/aftermath, hurt/recovery
"Whumpee, Whumpee, let me help you," Caretaker said as they hurried to Whumpee's bedside. Whumpee had been ordered by the doctor to stay in bed so that they could recover from everything Whumper had done to them. Caretaker still hadn't been able to ask Whumpee about everything. Hadn't been able to hear and hadn't wanted to trigger Whumpee.
"I'm fine. I'm fine," Whumpee said gruffly. "I should be able to go to the bathroom to wash my face by myself."
"Whumpee, you're really hurt. Please, let me help you."
Whumpee hissed with pain as they tried to sit up further. "I don't need help! Damn it!"
Caretaker tried not to take Whumpee's anger personally. They were in pain. They had endured so many unspeakable things. They were angry. But they needed help. "Are you in pain?"
"What do you think?" Whumpee said angrily. "Of course I'm in pain."
"Then please take your medicine, Whumpee. It's there to help you."
Whumpee frowned. "I won't."
"It's for your own good, Whumpee," Caretaker said exasperatedly. "Please, just take it. Let yourself sleep. Let yourself heal."
"You're always trying to drug me. Always trying to get me to just lay here. You're no better than them," Whumpee sneered.
Caretaker flinched. They were sure they knew who Whumpee meant. But they had to confirm. "Who, Whumpee?"
"Whumper."
The silence was thick and painful. Caretaker swallowed as they tried to gather themself. Whumpee had been so angry since they had gotten back. But to compare them to Whumper? That wasn't fair at all. "That's not true, Whumpee. Look," Caretaker said as Whumpe opened their mouth to protest, "you are in pain. This is pain medicine. Take it. Go to sleep. You'll feel better. It's that easy."
Whumpee held out their hand for the pill, glaring at Caretaker the entire time. They took the pill from Caretaker's hand and dry swallowed the pill. "I'm sure you just want me to pass out so you can do whatever you want to me."
Caretaker kept their expression blank. Kept Whumpee from seeing how much their words hurt Caretaker. "I want you to feel better, Whumpee."
"Yeah, right," Whumpee mumbled angrily as they blinked heavily. Fortunately the medication worked quickly--Whumpee was so weak from their ordeal. "That's what they said, too," they muttered as sleep sucked them under.
It was only after Caretaker was sure Whumpee was deeply unconscious that they allowed their mask to crumble. That they allowed themself to breakdown. They cried for themself. They cried for the situation. And most of all, they cried for Whumpee and everything that had happened to Whumpee.
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#serickswrites#whump#whump community#whumpblr#whump writing#tw referenced captivity#tw referenced torture#tw medication#tw unconsciousness#tw passing out#hurt/aftermath#hurt/recovery#whumptober#whumptober2024#no. 25#prompt: “it's for your own good”#fic#oc#angstober#angstober2024#day 25#prompt: “you're no better”#ailesswhumptober#ailesswhumptober2024#day 23#prompt: passing out#queue
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being at a restaurant because of a blind date set up from a friend but the thing is you don't remember his name, or what he looks like- did she even tell you what he looks like?
you quietly sit there, fingers tapping a restless rhythm on the polished mahogany tabletop, your wine glass stained red with tonight's indulgence, stands as empty as your stomach. just when you're about to wave a hand to your waiter, a massive brute of a man crashes into the chair across from you with so much force that you can hear the wood groan under his bulk.
he settles into it, unhurried, as if he wasn't 20 minutes late, his worn leather jacket creaking as he does before leaning forward and resting his forearms on the table, and the silver wear rattles with the impact.
then he looks at you with an unsettling intensity, irises so dark they blend into the pupils and asks if you've been waiting long.
you've a mind to leave him there but you're hungry- starved, really- and he's going to cover the check so you might as well stay and get your free dinner. "doesn't matter now, does it?"
you shoot a quick text to your friend, telling her that he- simon- is here and slip your phone back in your bag, not reading the messages she sends back until the morning after, when your head pounds in rhythm with your sex.
who's simon?
#how he got here isn't important#it's the fact that he saw a PYT all by their lonesome and he said yoink#i'd say it's serendipitous#and he'd have no problem strong arming your actual date out the door#simon ghost riley x reader#simon ghost riley x you#tbh the real prompt was him knowing what was happening#and decided you're better off with your pussy in *his* mouth#big ass bear of a man only knows how to take ok its in his DNA
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Danse Macabre
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#dungeon meshi#dungeon meshi spoilers#marcille donato#winged lion#better drawn mdzs#<- art tag I really need to change.#Turns out the secret to drawing better was having someone offer you money to draw.#I jest. I just had a blast with this prompt and I seriously appreciate the commissioner for letting me have the chance to push myself.#And for giving me permission to post! Hi! If you're seeing this: thank you again!#Let me be clear: no I don't quite know where this came from. It just happened. My chakras unblocked for a few hours.#You too can unblock my chakras with money and commission me to draw cool art B*)#We are so far off from when this is relevant so this one is really just for the manga readers. *****Spoiler notes ahead:#So...As someone who read dungeon meshi monthly for many years....I admit to not seeing Marcille becoming the dungeon lord coming#Hilarious too; re-reading and watching the show made me realize that this outcome is pretty strongly foreshadowed.#Ryoko Kui distracts you by putting the focus on Laios being the 'one to break the curse' but nope!#This was the culmination of her goals and desires.#And - for those who did not have to suffer as us monthly readers did:#YES. WE NEARLY ALL THOUGHT THAT MARCILLE HAD TO DIE.#The last 20 or so chapters were a constant spiral of: 'Oh this story isn't going to have a happy ending is it?'#She just keeps losing herself! The winged lion plays her like a puppet and she is his perfect doll! So full of conviction!
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Escaped clone au
You know all those fics where Danny and Damian are twins but everyone first assumes Danny must be a clone? How about an au where Danny is Damian's clone who escaped the League after he was assumed dead. Damian could even have been the one to have "killed" him, back when Danny was a newly created, fully brainwashed clone minion and trying to kill Damian himself.
Danny gets adopted by the Fentons and canon goes on as normal, until Dan. Witnessing what would happen to the world should he turn evil really drove home to Danny how dangerous he is.
Even if he was confident he could be trusted with his absurd amount of power (which he isn't), what if the League of Assassins found out about him? Does he still have programming triggers from his evil assassin clone conditioning?
So, Danny does the responsible thing: he goes to Batman to turn himself in.
Cue Danny showing up on Bruce's doorstep with ghost hunting equipment, intel on the afterlife, and an almost unbelievable backstory. Somehow he still managed to be more well-adjusted than Damian.
More thoughts under the read more
Here's how I'm thinking Danny leaving the League went down:
After surviving his wounds but failing his mission, Danny (then an unnamed potential Damian replacement) knew there was no point in returning to the League. As a failure, he was meant to be disposed of. He even thought of simply allowing himself to perish, since that was what the League would do.
But he couldn't help but feel as though that would be a waste of a resource. Surely he could be of more use to the League alive than dead?
That tiny bit of rebellious logic is what caused Danny to go into hiding, only living on based on the off chance he would find opportunities to further the League's goals. Obviously, that mentality didn't last long after being exposed to the real world and meeting one Jazz Fenton.
Being adopted by the Fentons was the best cover Danny could have asked for, since any odd behavior he couldn't hide while he was learning how to be "normal" was totally overshadowed by the sheer bizarre eccentricity of his new parents. He was still the neighborhood weird kid, but even that was a major upgrade from disposable tool, so Danny considered it a win.
Anyway, if anyone likes this idea, please feel free to have at it! Interpret it as you please :)
#dpxdc#dpxdc prompts#dawningwrites#Danny: I'm too powerful help please accept this 10 step guide that MIGHT give you a prayer of defeating me#Bruce: and you're saying that on top of all your potentially apocalyptic abilities you're also the ruler of another dimension??#Danny: I know right?? they wouldn't listen to me when I said a teenager wasn't qualified. and technically I'm only 5 years old!#Danny's better adjusted than Damian bc he had Jazz to help him#and he didn't have to be anything other than a “normal” teen until his accident#whereas Damian had a bunch of traumatized and emotionally stunted vigilantes with a complicated family dynamic he walked into#Alfred did his best but there was only so much he could do without undermining Bruce or interfering with their vigilantism#Dan happened before Dani so she might not be in this (yet)#but if Danny's clones are still a thing I think he'd be even more traumatized by most of them melting#Dani: you don't know what it's like to be made by a rich supervillain to replace your original and then be discarded as a failure#Danny: ha ha so funny story#damian wayne#damian al ghul
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*shaking you by the shoulders* don’t you understand that Relvin Temult's life is a tragedy?? The he knew Liliana was going to go somewhere else one day but he thought he'd be enough for her to want him with her and then he wasn't and she slipped away piece by piece until she was gone?? that he didn't want Imogen to be haunted by the same things as her mother but was utterly powerless to stop it and thought the best he could do was shield her from the little information he DID know before whatever got ahold of Liliana sunk its claws into her too?? that he watched imogen slip away, piece by piece and then all at once, just like her mother, and now there's no need for extra kitchen chairs because there's no one to have dinner with anymore so why bother??? have you read Our Wives Under The Sea????? You understand
#lollipop for anyone who gets what I mean about our wives under the sea in this context#if you also see it you're a real one#anyway I have relvin brainrot always#he's so tragic. it's so gutting. wanting to do better but being unable to. I love him#this was prompted by nothing except that I thought of him. beloved cowboy#critical role#relvin temult
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Alrighty. I hate saying this, but. I'm probably going to delete the ship discourse asks in my inbox. Too many in there now and my mind is too clear to want to answer them
I think we've all been harsh with each other recently. Shouldn't have had to sleep on that, shouldn't have taken me longer than a few minutes to realize that, but idk. I went to bed last night and woke up this morning and... remembered how old I am and that I have better things to care about lol. But seriously, this recent update has really gotten to people's heads, mine included unfortunately, so I think we all need to take a step back and reevaluate ourselves
To try to explain (not excuse) myself personally. I, my friends and acquaintances, and our little fan community have gotten so much harassment for so long that now that the story is sort of tipping in our favor, I felt... vindicated. TOO vindicated this time around lol. For years and years now we have all been viciously mocked, shunned, called misogynists, called abuse apologists, we've been told to kill ourselves, we've been told bad things should happen to our loved ones. I couldn't help but feel smug when episodes 7 and 8 dropped, and then episodes 9 and 10 pushed me into being legitimately petty and mean. Like, all of this harassment was already pointless, now it's even more pointless because BxA is canon. Sore winner, "they hated Jesus because he told the truth" type shit lol
But... That's dumb. All of this is dumb. They're just video game characters. I'm an adult with adult responsibilities lol. None of this is worth getting bent out of shape about, on any side. Nothing wrong with respectful conversation and debate, but it hasn't really been that this time around. It's been gloating. Teabagging. And that's not cool. So I'm sorry for that. I'm sorry if I've upset anyone with anything I've said. I'm happy about Eternalberry but I've gotten TOO happy haha. I've regained mental clarity and thus the realization that I've started becoming part of the problem. I'm genuinely sorry for that. I want to go back to regular dork levels. Being spiteful and petty sucks, even if it's "justified"
Since I feel bad for leaving those asks awaiting deletion, A) mea culpa mea maxima culpa to those who sent them, nothing against any of you I just want to put the discourse to rest, and B) they all more or less say the same things so I'll just go ahead and bullet point my responses:
TikTok is perhaps the worst social media app ever created, it is an actual blight on society to almost biblical proportions, you are a fool if you listen to anything anyone has to say on there, your first mistake was going there in the first place, Tiktok Delenda Est
Twitter is definitely the worst social media app ever created, it is a blight on society that John meant to record in the Book of Revelation but didn't know how to describe it properly because the internet didn't exist 2000-ish years ago, you are a fool if you listen to anything anyone has to say on there, your first mistake was going there in the first place, Twitter Delenda Est, let's all point and laugh at the Trump-Musk divorce instead
Hero/villain ships are as old as human civilization and fandom nerds today have gotten really uptight about them, it's dumb and honestly really bizarre considering how prevalent it is in almost every piece of media, if someone doesn't like the trope that's perfectly fine it's not for everyone it does get pretty dark but a lot of people seem to put on gestapo uniforms when they're brought up now and it's a waste of time and energy. No one is holding a gun to your heads you guys, you don't need to do it to anyone yourselves
It's nice that I've apparently managed to convince some people to be more open-minded about BxA and hero/villain shipping as a whole, welcome to the club glad to have you, I'm sorry you've had to see some of us do our "obnoxious clown" routine recently, don't worry I'm washing my makeup off rn
I'm disappointed but unsurprised that BxA fans have been getting death threats in places, unfortunately that's how it's always been and it will continue to be that way even if all 5 pairs marry and have sex onscreen. No amount of canonizing in the narrative will change some people's minds. No amount of reasoning or olive branches will make them realize how ridiculous they are. Just have to accept it and ignore them
Cookie Run Kingdom is Baby's First Fandom for a lot of people, and a lot of them are actual, literal children, so all the black and white thinking and lack of understanding and respect makes sense, sadly. This is why I put my age in my blog description haha
Rule of thumb for me personally is to just block people who post hate in ship tags tbh. Spare us both the trouble. I've only responded to one post ever, and it was because the person was asking an honest question in a reasonable way so I thought it was fine to engage. I'd rather not engage people who want to attack and not actually talk. Blocking does us both a favor, I don't have to see meaningless hate on my dash and in tags I follow and they don't have to see content about ships they don't like from me. Win-win
Now, with all that said, I want to say some things I've said before, but would like to reiterate loudly and clearly one more time:
You do not have to like Beast x Ancient. It's perfectly fine and reasonable if you don't. It's not for everyone. Whatever your reasons are, I believe and accept them. I post about them a lot because I love them a lot, and I like talking about things I like. I do my best to tag properly so my weirdo babble is easier to filter out. My posts are more or less just preaching to the choir, I think lol. It's fine if you don't like that, it's fine if you don't like BurningCheese or Eternalberry, it's fine if you don't like Beast x Ancient. I am not your mortal enemy if you don't like them. I'm happy to talk to and be friends with people who don't. I already do so often haha
Furthermore, I want you all to know that no matter what I say about ships I don't like, I don't care if you do like them. I am not out to get you for liking things I don't. Which dolls you decide you like to make kiss is not my problem. I am not your mother, I am not your dictator, I am not God. My opinions are just that, no one is obligated to listen to me or take anything I say to heart. Yes, there are ships I legitimately hate with a passion, but I do not hate the people who like them. Not at all. That's a stupid thing to dislike someone for. I talk to and am friends with lots of people who like things I don't, both on here and irl. The world gets really lonely really fast if you refuse to engage with people who don't march lockstep with you. Especially with regards to fucking Cookie Run lol
Let's all give this nonsense a rest now. This is dumb. I'm dumb. We're all dumb. Let's stop being dumb. I'm happy to coexist peacefully with others. We'll all live happier lives focusing more on things we love than things we hate
#something else I'll say. no matter how much I might dislike a ship. I'm willing to acknowledge good art and writing for it#i cannot stand hollyt4ya but I've read a couple of good fics about it and have liked fanart on here just because they really were that good#I'm able and willing to appreciate things on their own merits. even if the subject matter isn't one I personally care for#i think it would help a lot of people to adopt that mindset haha#but yeah regardless. I've been a jerk the past few days and I really am sorry#i FEEL like a jerk lol. and i feel stupid. I'm better than this and so are all of you#sincere apologies to everyone for being so obnoxious. I'm washing my clown makeup off#keeping in line with this I'd really appreciate if people didn't send me asks about ship discourse anymore#you're welcome to ask my opinions on ships but I don't want to engage in full blown discourse. I'm tired#i'll keep my responses clean and crisp if prompted but that's it. no more rambling. rambling is for good and happy things#I'm happy to hear from people. I'm touched people care what i have to say. i didn't really have that for most of my life#I'm not really used to people actually... talking to me and listening to me#but I'd rather talk and listen about nicer things from now on if it's all the same to you guys#anyway I'm gonna go hang out with my SO and my dog lol. and work on the time travel AU draft#gave myself a deadline of Sunday evening to force myself to be more productive about it#been sitting on that story for too long. I'm dying to tell it#y'all have a nice day. god bless you. no matter who you are or what you like#cookie run kingdom#beast x ancient
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"i can't come up with a fantasy name for my world so i HAVE to use chatgpt to get the gears flowing" have you all forgotten what fantasynamegenerators.com has done for you
#we literally already have the resources people claim ai has introduced#'you're discarding a very helpful tool' we already have that tool in a thousand different varieties#and with the added bonus of not plagiarizing/lying/being utterly horrible for the environment#there are tons of prompt and name generators made for this exact purpose!#there are worldbuilding resources and lists all over the place!#need some music to listen to for inspiration? look up ambience playlists and you'll find tons with Real Songs!#there are whole composers on youtube who make fantasy specific music using talent and brains and it sounds better than ai cobbled noise!#people in creative communities have already used more functional forms of ai + actual brainpower to make you these resources!#if you would just spend 2-3 minutes googling you would find them!
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I didn't see till I got off work 😔 45. "Oh, love..."
Mikey doesn't need the chains to hold you in place anymore, but they look so pretty pressing into your skin that he can't bring himself to dismiss them. The soft orange glow provides just enough light to see in the otherwise dark closet, and you look so perfect, bathed in his color, gazing up at him like he's the only thing that matters in the world. You've got that hazy look in your eyes that means the drugs have fully kicked in, and when he crouches in front of you, brushing the backs of his fingers across your cheek, you lean into the touch like you're desperate for it.
Well. You are desperate for it. That's the beauty of it.
His hand slides down to loosely wrap around your throat, and a smile tugs at his lips when you try to speak. All you can manage is a wordless moan, and - oh, he wants to hear you make that sound over and over and over. He uses his free hand to nudge your knees farther apart, then lightly trails his finger along your folds. The chains clink as you jerk in response, a pretty whimper slipping out of you, and he tightens the hand wrapped around your throat before starting a slow drag of his finger, back and forth, over your clit. Your throat convulses beneath his hand, and you manage one word. “Please.”
“Oh, love…” He leans forward, pressing a kiss to your forehead. You blink, tears gathering in your eyelashes, and his smile sharpens. “We're just getting started.”
#asks#turtlecleric scrolls#rise!mikey#yandere#?#short and sweet is better than nothing right?#ty for the prompt gornack! hoping you're well#ask games
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Lawlight Week- Day 2: Soulmates
tw: blood According to Greek mythology, humans were initially created with four arms, four legs and a head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus splits them into two separate parts. Condemning them to spend their lives in search of the other half. And when one of them meets the other half, something wonderful happens. The two are stuck from their senses by love, by a sense of belonging, by desire. And they don't want to be separated from the other. Not even for a moment... -Plato, The Symposium
#lawlight#lawlightweek2024#light yagami#l lawliet#l x light#light x l#my art#dn fanart#this took foreverrrrr#I know there are so many anatomy mistakes idk what i'm doing what even is drawing#also click on pics for better quality tumblr butchered them a bit lol#second tumble post i'm nervousssss#saw the prompt and thought about the movie The Half of It and bam whatever this is#tw: blood#tw: violence#just to be safe#when youre soulmates but also toxic and doomed and you're a danger to yourselves and others#fanart#art#death note#death note art#l death note#death note fanart
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okay but like here's the thing with chatgpt. outside of the negative environmental impact chatGPT and similar programs have, there is also a high chance that whatever you have it do for you is wrong. sometimes it is something small and inconsequential, but it can also be dangerously wrong. because what it does is it's looking on the internet for a source, and it will give you whatever source it finds (seemingly at random? i'm not 100% sure how chatGPT works but it seems very much like it's just picking something and spitting it out). i'm not even that old and i'm still an average college age but i remember commercials and ads telling people to not trust things you see on the internet because you don't know what is or isn't true. you might come across something that seems entirely legit, but is complete and total bullshit. that is something to keep in mind when using chatGPT that i think people don't consider. it may be wrong. it very likely is wrong. you won't be certain that it's wrong unless you ask it for its sources and examine them yourself which at that point you may as well just be doing your own research without AI anyways.
#anti genAI#me and my family joke around about things on the internet being “totally 100% reliable” <- sarcasm#but like. i can make anything up and post it on tumblr and there will be at least one person who doesn't think to look it up but doesn't#know any better so they take me at my word. then chatGPT can stumble across it and use it as a source when someone prompts it#for a related question. this might very well be misinformation because im not a genAI dev. i don't know how it's programmed.#but i've seen some of the sources that google gemini uses and that's. essentially what it does#is it grabs a source and gives it to you as essentially the top result#old google used to do something similar except it WAS with the top result. which was usually a wikipedia article.#idk about other institutions but my uni considers generative AI use for assignments plagiarism when you're using it to do the assignment fo#you. which means you could get expelled if you keep using it.#personally i don't want to take the chances plus i know my reading comprehension isn't up to par#(autistic burnout will do that to you)#so i need to exercise it otherwise it could just end up getting worse#plus i like writing essays and reports and stuff. it's. well enjoyable isn't the right word but its stimulating for me
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Hi yes ever since i was plagued by the prospect of yandere Dabi i was plagued by:
He's thinking about getting his hands on you and and wanting to absolutely smother you. He did not get enough love and affection so naturally he has to give you too much- Thinking about all of the things he wants to do, to you, with you, for you, etc.
Deep, deep in the thoughts, is the feeling of he could totally make a cute little family with you. Could have all the fun making the little babies and then have you just around so you're all safe, keep you warm, etc. Also maybe he thinks you look real good with a baby in there... his baby.
Then he can help take care of them because he's fully committed to proving he can do better.
#Violently assaulted by the concept of yandere dabi having breeding kink#But also desperately wanting to prove he can do so much better than what he got.#He's definitely weird petty so you're having at least four.#Yandere mha#Yandere bnha#Yandere prompts#Yandere imagines#I think at least lmaoo#Yandere dabi#The Yan! Bin
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Doodle some Miphlink, if you want to!
I hope you're having a great day :3

What a great suggestion! I was watching Disney's Robin Hood and Maid Marrian and Robin fit Miphlink so well. A princess and a commoner childhood sweethearts who were separated and then came back and were together again. So I doodled a rough sketch!
#thank you so much snails! I loved this#it got my creative juices going and the art block is being fought off!#Robin Hood#maid marian#disney's robin hood#miphlink#mipha#link#botw#tloz#today is going better than expected#which is nice! having a fun art prompt definitely made the day improve. and also there are cupcakes in my house which makes everything bett#hope you're having a great day too!!
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checking in............. i miss y'all 🥺
#i think........ i'm gonna poke at a couple of the prompts from that last meme i reblogged soon...... like fr this time#i wanna come back i wanna write i wanna keep playin around with my lil problem child#mental health is. idk. kinda the same. maybe a little better??#been up. been down. i think i'm evening back out again but i am thinking 'bout y'all more n more so#yeah. think the slow comeback is happening soon. like Actually soon this time.#hope you're all doing well tho!!! and tysm to those of you who've checked in on me or even just messaged me in the last month or so#about literally anything. it's so nice to know people're still thinking bout me and my muse(s) ;~;#━━ ˟ ⊰ ✰ ooc ⋮ don't @ me.
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im so serious when i say you need to advocate for disabilities that you don't have too
#this might sound obvious but like#disability discussion online has become so individualised#especially with increasingly more wellknown/common disabilities#that i keep seeing people say that they're disabled advocates#but when you actually get into what they're saying they're only advocating for themselves#and i think its becoming a really big problem especially when you're also trying to combat stigma and misinfo from able people#i hope im explaining this well bc i said something a lot more poorly worded on twt relating to this#and someone called me a out a little and prompted me to go like#“ohh okay yeah i should probably explain this better”#disability
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✒️We're halfway August so it's time to start thinking about Inktober lmao✒️
#I'm not going to use a prompt list this year - not even a self made one#I'm just gonna draw whatever I want for as many different books/shows/movies as possible hehe#also for previous inktobers I took requests - but if I'm going to do that it's for specific fandoms that I wanna draw#like - I might ask for atla requests bc I haven't watched it in a while and I don't feel inspired yet#you know what - if you're reading this and wanna request something: my pinned post has a list of fandoms#they're sorted into different lists and I'll accept requests from the 😍 and 🥰 ones heeh#I have ideas for some of them but maybe I like yours better ;)
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Next time, put more thought into your fics! That recent Harmione with alive jily was so DUMB! It doesn’t have to follow the canon plot points, fools! He and the trio would NOT go on horcrux alone when his parents are literally there to HELP!!! AND… no matter how much your idiots think otherwise, James and Lily won’t let dumbledore entrust so much responsibility to a teen. Nor would Ron be an insecure little shit(seriously, how UNORIGINAL! What the fuck is the point of an AU if some idiotic things are the SAME😡)! Let me guess, that A-hole Snape probably teaches at Hogwarts too. Another OOC moment jily, letting their son be picked on by that man child. Next time, think before writing. Waste of time!
Whoaa this is so WRONG for so many reasons.
First of all, I accept CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and this is not one of them. This is a straight insult to my work and my thinking process and OF COURSE you hid behind ANON for this comment 🤡
Second: there are approximately two different ways to write a fic. You can either ignore the original story using it as just an input, OR you can try to be as close to canon as possible to use the "real" character development even while going out of canon. I love both the structures and if it's not your taste, that's a YOU problem.
Third, I'm not a professional writer, I don't get paid, and I offer this "prompt service" for fun!
Also, in my idea (which I agree I didn't actually put in the fic but as I said, I was in a rush because I became a pinch hitter last minute and I needed a fast prompt) the parents as well as the other members of the order continued their fight.
I mean, Ron's parents didn't go with them as well, as Remus didn't. Sure, there were reasons but Dumbledore STILL entrusted Harry for this search, and I don't think it would change if they were still alive.
AND where did I say Ron was an insecure little shit? I love him and still I agree the moments under the influence of the medallion were the worst. I hated him.
So yeah I kept it, but the only thing I said was that he wasn't that great at consoling Hermione, which is non canon since in the books/movies he actually gets it.
What's wrong with this choice?
I've never mentioned Severus... again, your point?
The main reason you think this is DUMB is because you didn't like my choice of using canonical events to write a NON-CANON fic, and it's DUMB on your part because it's a personal OPINION.
I never realised there were Karens on Tumblr as well!! 💀
Don't you know that when you don't like something (THAT'S FOR FREE 🤌🤌🤌) you can just say "oh well that's not my thing" , close it and read something else?😃 that's the beauty of this 😃 it's for free and your doctor didn't prescribe this fic reading to you 😃 amazing right?
Folks, I like comments because I can either bathe in sweet appreciations or learn something from a suggestion.
But don't be an ass and be respectful towards others, because I laughed reading this, but someone else might get seriously offended.
Writing is a way of escaping the real world so don't try and bring your negativity.
The world would be so much better if we could only be more careful and concerned about each others feelings💕
PS: If you're the one that requested the fic, next time mention your DnWs, it usually helps 🥱or even better, don't ask me anything else, I prefer to write for someone that doesn't try to just offend me. Also, if you didn't like this, don't waste MY time with something else. Because you took how long to read? 2 minutes? I can tell you that it takes longer to write, as you prob don't know. I genuinely hope you're not a writer because we should support us
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