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Finding a fic with a really interesting concept, tame tags with only a few being nsfw, and the fic description being completely sfw and kinda attention grabbing, I feel like it would be safe for one to assume there’s minimal to moderate nsfw content and it’s a really story driven fic right?

It’s literally all porn.

I don’t think there’s been a single chapter WITHOUT porn in it so far

It’s just jerking off, sex, being naked and bdsm

And the characters feel very mischaracterized too…

There’s not having self esteem and then there’s literally finding evidence that one guy goes under two names and saying “oh that must be his lover”, there’s being doubtful of your self and then there’s having the love interest say “I hope you like the art I made for you/about you” to the MC and MC proceeds to say “so when will I get to meet the lover you made the art about” ???

????????

That doesn’t make sense??

Does the MC have the mental capacity of a 7 year old??

Don’t get me wrong either, I typically adore nsfw content in this fandom

But this just feels like it was under tagged and misleading with such a description that I now understand basically explains 3% of the entire fic.

TLDR: yes I read/watch porn for the plot, and this one SUCKS (joke)

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I think there should be more fanfiction about Minimus Ambus’s turbofox alt, it still baffles me on how nobody has really delved into this crazy goldmine of an opportunity, I know we don’t have a set design for the alt or all that much information on it..

BUT THAT SHOULD BE ALL THE MORE EXCITING FOR WRITERS, HAVING THE ABILITY TO MAKE THEIR OWN IDEAS AND INFO FOR IT, NOT HAVING THAT MUCH OF A LIMIT ON WHAT YOU CAN MAKE BASED ON LACK OF CANONICAL INFORMATION!

I already have my own ideas/headcanons for it but my struggle to write proper and grammatically pleasing/correct works prevents me from actually writing and posting my own stories (trust me guys, it’s bad), I’d be more than happy to spit out my ideas on my idea tumblr so people could use them for their own works though if anyone’s interested 😏 (not-so-subtle plug ik ik)

But anyways to my minimegs/minirod/minimus x bot/minimus ambus in general enjoyers and writers DONT BE AFRAID TO WRITE ABOUT HIS LESS WRITTEN ABOUT ATTRIBUTES!! There are people out there who would love to see and read it!

(I know I would, I give a big kiss out to anyone who’s already delved into it…. Cough cough Comfortable by disdainfreely cough… )

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Random ask, but I’m curious if anybody else can find something similar. I’ve read this fic a few times before and I really like it! There’s just a few parts that make me feel weird about it (the underlying incest….😟) and I wanna know if there’s more with a similar concept/idea out there! (Preferably without that one part)

It’s an old Transformers fanfiction called “The Lost Prime”

Summary: Primes and their Lord High Protectors are made as twins, their sparks coming online together far from other Cybertronian life, protecting one another until the Herald of Primus comes for them. However, the Council can't allow that and the newest Prime goes missing, his Lord Protector tearing Cybertron apart to find him. Every war has its reason, this one is just coming to light. TFA AU

My main issue with the original fic is the fact that they’re written as “Spark Twins” (which implies/means they’re brothers/related in some way) and the fic has it tagged that Megatron and Optimus are romantically involved. (I’m pretty sure it’s showcased as that too…I haven’t read it in a while tho) But I LOVE the idea of Optimus being this born prime who was stolen from his intended life and Megatron searching endlessly for him and reuniting once again! So if anyone has some reccomendations for similar fics I’d love to know! (If others want to use the idea and write a whole new fic entirely too that’d be welcomed too haha)

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YAAYAYAYAYAYA worried Rachet my beloved omg, this is so good!

Hey man just wanted to let you know that I LOVE the idea you made up for the rust section in this post (https://www.tumblr.com/tinydefector/755501675977097216/every-single-day-i-think-about-your-post-about) is there any chance you could expand on the idea more? I’m just so curious about it

Ps just did my 3 month ask box clear out. Only got a few ask left in there now. Read rules before submitting.

Oh I definitely can. There is actually quite a few different things humans consume or use cosmetically that the bots would have a lot of questions over.

Here's a list of a few human made things that Cybertronians seem to very much enjoy for cosmetic, medical or as luxurious products.

1. Coconut oil

They happen to really enjoy it for their upholstery. Especially when they weren't able to get their hands on proper car products. (Cough cough TFP bots) I can definitely see Jack using it because he's a broke teenager and just adds a nice essential oil in with it and he's got himself a large jar of leather conditioner. It's only after Miko and Ralph see him using it on his shoes at one point they are like o0o. And begin stealing it to do bulkheads and bumblebee's seats.

Another one that would work similar is the same mix I actually use for horse saddles, which is rendered down. Beef or Lambs fat with Kerosene, so it doesn't go off. It's an amazing leather conditioner, and I tend to make a lot of it and store it in old powerade powder jars. Would recommend adding scented oil into it tho.

And I can totally see Malto's doing this. After Dot has one of her cows or sheep butchered, she renders down the fat to use for all sorts of different things, hand creams, soap, and leather conditioner. I can very much see her standing there with her hands on her hips, telling her bot kids it's time to do their leather, very similar to telling her kids it's hair day.

2. Corn starch

corn starch is a cleaning genius that is effective for many different purposes. Clean your car windows with a mixture of 120g cornstarch and 1L water and then dry with newspaper. Corn starch can deodorise smells too when sprinkled and left to work its magic for about half an hour, I have used this so much after getting water in my car to get ride of the wet car smell. Bots love it almost like a facial mask and floor cleaner.

Corn starch is also good for removing excess car polish and wax. The last thing you need after giving your car a good polish is residue that will attract dirt more than it did before. This is definitely one of Knockouts' favourite things after he learns about it. And with a buff it can also help remove swirl marks on black cars.

3. Toothpaste

toothpaste can be applied to make our headlights shine brighter. When headlights start to get foggy, or get the yellow stain to them, it helps remove all the excess dirt and grime with warm soapy water and a cloth, then apply any cheap toothpaste and rub.

Don't get it on your cars paintwork!!, Apply tape or plastic around it or toy can make your paint bubble, chip or fade off.

4. Most Soda/Soft drink, Energy drinks and a few other drinks.

It's no secret humans have a large collection of flavoured drinks that many of us love. And it happens that many of them are actually very good at removing rust. Nearly every type of soda and Energy drink can be used for this purpose but so can Black tea.

Brew a Strong Cup of Black Tea: Soak a tea bag or loose tea leaves in water to create a brew, than soak what you want in it for a while then scrub it with some steal wool. So many of these things honestly scare the bots. How can a fleshy human body withstand drinking a rust removing agent.

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"Jack, can I borrow some money?" Miko asked while hanging upside down on the couch as she watched him work. "No Miko I'm low on funds as it is, just brought some stuff" he calls back to her as he works over the small burner stove.

She lets out a groan before rolling off the couch to walk over to watch him. "What are you doing?, science experiment, cooking, drugs?" She shot off a collection of questions. "No I'm making some leather conditioner. Mom got given a whole lot of old bees wax and I'm using it with coconut oil and some scented oil" he hums back, not paying to much attention to her.

"Oh like that stuff you uses for your shoes and your mom uses in her car." Ralph asked peaking up from his computer. "Yea, I running low and well they had coconut oil on special so I'm making alot of it so I can store it" Jack calls back giving Ralph a smile.

"Oh that's so cool, wait do you think the bots would use it, oh. Do you think they have anyway of getting thinks like seat polish or stuff like that?" She asked before her mouth hangs open at the thought, she hadn't ever seen any of the bots do maintenance like that. Yes they had decontamination sprays and small work from Ratchet when things weren't working but they had never seen the bots really take care of themselves.

"Jack, do you think [Name] would be able to get some things for us, I have an idea, we have never seen the bots every actually look after themselves, we could do them a little spar day" she exclaims excitedly.

"Miko, maybe the bots haven't because they don't need it," Jack hisses under his breath. Before sighing. "OK, yes, they do, Arcee want admit it, but I do leave her a jar of the mix." He mumbles.

Miko punches the air in excitement. "Oh this is awesome just you wait!" She runs out of the small room to the rails as her eyes search for the person she was looking for. "[Name!] Your a mechanic Right?" She yells to get their attention.

They look up from their own car they had been doing maintenance on. "Ah I would say that but I know some stuff why?" They call back.

"Got an idea for when the bots get back but need your help." She smiles at them while skipping down the stairs.

The drive back out of Jasper towards the base is one filled with loud music and chatter from the young girl as she looks through the different items in the bags. "Wait what's all the energy drinks for?" She asked while looking up at them. "Well I remember hearing Ratchet complain able getting low on his rust removing agent and these bad boys work just as well, plus I drink them" they explain.

"OK... and the other stuff?" She questions. "It's all stuff I use normally for car maintenance, that way I don't have to spend a fortune on expensive stuff. You wanna get the bots a bit of a spa day, these are the things you need" they hum as they egt closer to base.

By the time they make it back inside the bots are chatting about and mingling with each other again, only looking over to see who had driven in. "Autobot may I please have your Attention" they call out. All of them pause their conversation as they turn to look and wait.

"Yes what can we do for you?" Optimus asked a slight rumble echoing from him. They hold up the bags of stuff. "I know you guys are undercover and technically don't exist, and I doubt Fowler gets you stuff for maintenance, so I've got some stuff to help out," they explain.

"SPA DAY!!!" Miko shouts, it catches Jack and Ralph's attention as they look over the guard rails. It earns looks form the collection of bots.

"Turst me" they hum while grabbing out a can of energy drink and cracking it. They take a large mouth fuel. "You guys haven't had a chance to really relax and have something outside of medical from Ratchet and I know you guys are now carting us around and your interior isnt as clean as you want it. So I have supplies." They state while pulling out the different things and explaining what they do.

When they get to the last two bags filled with cheap soda and energy drinks, a wicked smile crosses their face. "And these are for Ratchet and myself." They hum. "And why is that?" Arcee tilts her head slightly while her optics narrow, trying to figure out their purpose.

"They are for me because they have caffeine and Taurine in them and it keeps me awake and working for when Ratchet needs an extra hand for welding your wounds. They are for Ratchet becuase they are great rust removing agent" the moment they finish that sentence all the bots go quiet. Jack and Miko are trying not to laugh and Ralph just looks on in awe.

"Spit it out right now!" Ratchet nearly shouts as he moves to scoop them up, panic written across his face as the other autobots move out of his way. "Are you draft! Why woudl you drink Rust remover!" He nearly shouts panic over taking him.

"Easy Ratch! I ain't dying!" They shout, laughing over the panic in all their optics. "Ratchet, will they be OK?" Optimus asked, worried. Arcee shoots a glare at the kids who are now laughing so hard over the situation. Bulkhead is pacing back and forth. "This isn't good, what do we tell Fowler if they off-line!"

"Do you have any idea what that will do to your internal organs" Ratchet hisses and he begins fussing over them. "Uh yea, removes the rust" they state, trying their hardest not to laugh. They got to make the joke and they couldn't be prouder of themself.

"You don't have Fragging rust your an Organic!" He nearly snarls. "Ratchet fuck, settle down, it hasn't killed me yet and I've been drinking it longer than I've known you guys exist. Alot of our drinks can remove rust it's just something they do" they try to settle him down.

"No, absolutely no, you will not be drinking this in my presence ever. Do I make myself clear!" It has nearly the whole base stiff from how worked up he is. "Guess this would be a bad time to tell you about how everything we consume has the potential to kill us?"

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YAAAAAA CANT WAIT!!!

From one whump enjoyer to another, keep it up! Love ur contributions to the tf whump community

Oh my gosh! Thank you very much! That honestly makes me really happy. Thanks for this message. I've been in a bit of a slump when it comes to my TF whump cos I recently got into another fandom but TF1 has brought me back, baby!

I'm trying to press on with my big magnum opus The Maze. I'd like to get that finished at some point. It's just such a big fic cos I'm not just writing the Optimus sections I posted up, but also sections focusing on what Hot Rod and Starscream are up to. My idea is to write everything chronologically so I can keep track of everything going on in the world. But it also means posting up new bits is slower cos I'm only posting a third of what I've completed so far. I'm nearly up to working on the next Optimus chapter again so that will be fun.

But thank you! Glad to know you enjoy my stuff!

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RAHHHHHH RAHHHHHH OMGOMGOMG

That one comic you made about past meets current, you got me so mf curious on how d-16 would react/what d-16 would say after he heard Megatron say he KILLED Orion ohhh my god 😭 I wanna know so bad (loved the art so much!!!!)

oh my gosh bro i already have a rough script written out - if i ever have the chance to i would love to draw it out but i got a million things on my plate rn

here it goes:

D:16: “No— no no no no no but why?!”

“Orion Pax-“ Megatron spits with venom, “-never cared about us, never enough to listen. Always dragging us down-“

“BUT HE WAS MINE!” D-16 yells, hands coming up to his chest. Megatron intake shuts with a stunned look in his eyes. “We had nothing- could have nothing— sure he may get into trouble too many times. Sure we had to pick up after his messes time and time again. But he was ours. And he always cared - in fact too much at times.” He glares up at Megatron, yellow eyes dipping into a darker orange, “how could you lose sight of that?”

Megatron: “… You don’t see it do you? He’s just using you.”

“And you’re blind to what you had.” D-16 snarls back, “I’ll never be like you.”

Megatron almost laughs, “You already are.”

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that's all i got rn! thank you so much for asking though i always want to blurt to people about them