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Falling for Jaxon: A Review of Fall With Me by Becka Mack

Oh man, Becka, I asked and you delivered, girl! I love you for this. Jaxon is a swoon-worthy airhead I didn’t know I needed in this installment. I totally get that he might not be everyone’s favorite in the Playing for Keeps series, but for me? He’s tied for first place with Carter.

Jaxon

Jaxon is such a multi-layered, complex character. Sure, he’s flawed, but the way he thinks he’s emotionally unavailable– while actually being incredibly emotionally present— completely baffled me in the best way. It reminded me so much of real-life relationships, where the small, quiet gestures can mean everything. Even when someone doesn’t realize the depth of what they’re doing for the person they love… they’re loving them all the more for it. It’s so cute, I can’t even.

The way he stepped back and let Lennon handle Ryne? I was crying in five different ways. And then that monologue a few chapters later when he thought Lennon was moving out? Honestly, it was more adorable than Adam calling himself “Dad” for the first time. It was emotional, raw, and some of the best romantic writing I’ve read in a long time (without involving an apocalypse, anyway).

What I appreciated most about Jaxon’s story was how naturally it evolved. It felt real. That lingering question- “Am I deserving of love?”– hit me hard. Reading it from a male POV felt fresh, relatable, and universally human. If there are any men reading this book, I hope they can see themselves in Jaxon’s journey in Fall With Me.

Lennon

Lennon is a firecracker. She’s confident, bold, and everything I may aspire to be. She brings out the best in Jaxon, and while she goes through her own self-love and growth arc, this book is absolutely centered around Jaxon– and I loved it.

Their relationship is balanced. Lennon might come across as reserved at first, but underneath she’s adventurous and sure of herself. I was totally giddy when they were looking at their house for the first time together. “Kids and shit. Do you? Like kids and shit?” line? It’s such a huge topic in any relationship, but they way it flowed between them? Romantic. Natural. Adorable.

The Vibe

This book struck the perfect balance between emotional depth and humor. It’s light, not overly high-stakes, and that made it such an easy, comforting read. I flew through it– even when I could only read a few pages at a time. It might not be a twisty page-turner, but I still found myself constantly wanting to see what came next between these two.

Also.. maybe I’m biased toward the forced proximity trope (that’s how my partner and I got together too!), but it was done so well here. It did not feel gimmicky. In terms of tone, characters, and pacing, the story unfolded organically, with plot moments simply flowing from who these people are and what they’re going through in real-time.

Sometimes, you don’t need big, dramatic moments to make a story resonate. Sometimes, the real story is internal. It’s in the emotional growth, the quiet gestures, the conversations over breakfast. It’s the kind of love that sneaks up on you and changes your life. It could be as simple as meeting someone on vacation… and suddenly your world shifts.

Final Thoughts

Technically, this book can be read as a standalone, but I wouldn’t recommend it. The rest of the Playing for Keeps cast is absolutely swoon-worthy in their own books, and it’s so worth it to see how each of them ends up. Watching it all come together is such a satisfying experience. Becka Mack has this gift for tying everything up in a way that feels complete– no loose ends, no unnecessary drama. Just a heartfelt, bow-tied conclusion that leaves you smiling long after you’ve finished the last page.

Maybe the most important part of this book? Sometimes you are good enough for people. You just don’t realize it. You can go years believing you were the worst thing that ever happened to someone, but if you step back– just slightly– and shift out of that negative mindset, you might finally see what’s been right in front of you the whole time.

We can all learn something from Jaxon and his last thoughts. We really are all out here, doing the best we can, with whatever life throws at us. Let’s all try to be kinder– to each other, yes, but especially to ourselves.

My Rating: 4.5/5 Stars

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No Notes, Just Swoons: A Review of Unravel Me by Becka Mack

If this kind of book isn’t normally your thing, I totally get it- but you have to admit: this guy is GOOD. Adam is a serious contender for Best Book Husband in all the hockey romance series I’ve read, and honestly? It’s going to be hard to top him.

He’s a perfect step-dad, and he’s emotionally stable. A man who literally knows what he wants and goes after it. I have no notes. He’s thoughtful, grounded, and romantic in a way that feels so intentional- and not an ounce of performative. That quiet, steady kind of love that is so all encompassing to you kind of love? Swoon.

Rosie

Rosie might just be the cutest human alive. Her energy is all sunshine and ambition, wrapped up in a woman trying her best to be a great mom, partner, and person. She respects boundaries, leads with kindness, and (somehow) manages to radiate strength while being vulnerable. I rooted for her the whole way through- and maybe wished I had just a sliver of her resilience in any situation.

Their Chemistry

Yes, their connection is a slow burn- but once it lights up? It burns. The kind of tension that has you grinning at your Kindle and kicking your feet under the covers. Adam’s gentle words, small but meaningful gestures, and those quiet “you matter to me” moments? Gold. Their love is built on learning to be vulnerable with themselves, and it’s a refreshing shift from the over-the-top romance we often see.

With Connor, Adam, and Lily? I love this family. Their dynamic is one of the most heartwarming I’ve read in a while. It’s tender and joyful without ever feeling forced, and really gave the story that extra layer of warmth and connection.

Final Thoughts

This book took me a while to get through- not because I wasn’t enjoying it, but because I had to keep icing myself down between fighting off the fiery venin for a romantic goalie. But we persevered.

My only qualm? The miscommunication trope, again. I get it, I do- but watching it play out here left me a little frustrated. I’m hoping that in book four (Jaxon and maybe Lennon?)we finally get the funny miscommunication. The kind that the girlies know is coming and love every second of.

This book is everything I love in a comfort romance: steady love, character growth, cozy chaos, and found family done right. As I head into the fourth book (because let’s be honest– I will finish it before I even glance at my physical TBR), I’m so intrigued to see who Jaxon becomes beyond just the comic relief. I’ve got a feeling it might finally be his time to shine.

Mittens needs a mama!

My Rating: 4/5 Stars

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Blessed Mother Lumnos, That Was a Lot of Pages: A Heat of the Everflame Review

Going into Heat of the Everflame, I was honestly ready to fly straight back into the world of Emarion and figure out what the hell was going on-- especially after that absolute shitshow of a coronation. I did not expect it to take me forever to finish, but here we are.

(Spoilers Ahead)

World-Building: A Tour of Emarion

One of the strongest aspects of HOTE is the immersive world-building. I loved seeing more of Emarion as Diem traveled through the deserts of Ignios, the jungles of Arboros, and icy tundra of Montios. Experiencing the different regions and elemental landscapes through her eyes helped me stay engaged, even when the plot dragged. The way each region's magical properties aligned with Diem's challenges was clever and gave the setting more meaning-- especially during her so-called "rise to power"-- if we can even call it that.

Crowns: They Suck

Can we all agree that every crown in this world just... sucks? We meet the faces of Emarion's fractured leadership, and wow-- a walking, taking checklist of red flags. Umbros is probably the only semi-redeemable one, and... well, we all see how that went. I won't spoil anything further but let's just say: Fuck Sophos and Ignios. That's it.

Diem & Luther: The Slowest Slow Burn That Ever Burned

The romance? Painfully slow. And not in the angsty-good way-- more in the "please let them catch a break for once" way. Penn Cole has us 2,000+ pages in, and we're still running in circles. And that ending was just rude for how long we have had to wait. Can he just admit that they are mates already? He's always like "You are my-" and then boom, something interrupts. Every. Single. Time.

I've followed Diem's journey through all three books, and while I respect her and Luther's restraint, it's just not clicking for me emotionally. Same goes for her overall journey. She seems to make the same reckless choices over and over, expecting the people who love her to just deal. Her growth in this book didn't land for me-- it felt repetitive, not revelatory.

Theory Time (Spoilers)

Let's talk Ophiucae. I'm convinced he's going to save Diem again, because she's marked. But will it count as her "third" save? He said something ominous about that, but I'm not convinced he meant it. There's too much weight in that connection for it to just fizzle. Anyone else?

The Struggle Was Real For Me With This One

I genuinely almost DNF'd. The book felt bloated, like it was trying to do too much without giving me enough payoff. I stuck with it mostly out of sheer commitment to finishing something this massive, but I closed my kindle with more questions than answers after that ending-- and not in the satisfying, "give me book four now" kind of way.

Heat of the Everflame is a book I respect more than I enjoyed. It's ambitious, rich in world-building, and clearly made with care, but pacing, repetition, and frustrating character choices dragged it down for me. I'll probably keep reading-- because at this point, I have to know how it ends. But I sincerely hope the next installment tightens the story and gives Diem (and us!) a real breakthrough.

My Rating: 3.5/5 Stars

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Slow Burn, High Stakes, and One Girl Caught in the Flames: A Glow of the Everflame Review

Woo hoo! We are done with Glow of the Everflame now! I can’t believe I’ve finished the second book already, but here we are. Glow was a longer read for me than Spark. I don’t know if that’s because of the immense amount of world-building Penn Cole is weaving in, but wow– this world is incredibly easy to fall into.

That said, Book 2 didn’t totally live up to the high expectations that Spark set for me. This is strictly personal though. A few reasons: this was the slowest slow burn I’ve ever read (I’m suffering), and the world-building felt jam-packed into a short amount of narrative time. I was just as overwhelmed as Diem at the ball! So yes, this one gave me slightly a middle book slump energy and took me longer to get through– but ultimately? Still incredibly satisfying.

Diem

In Glow, we see Diem thrown headfirst into a world of political intrigue, betrayal, and a crown she never even wanted in the first place. I truly feel for her. She’s fiery, bold, and caught in a storm she didn’t create- but she is the one who can save Emarion.

She’s also an unreliable narrator in the best way: she has no idea what’s going on, and neither do we. And that somehow works. She’s slowly stepping into her leadership role, especially during The Challenging. That scene where she annihilates that bastard who killed his own hald-descended child? BAD. ASS. I almost cried.

But by the end of this book, Diem still feels stuck at a crossroads. People keep making decisions for her. She needs to take the reins- and I need her to start making her own choices as a Queen, a woman, and a badass that she is!

Luther & Henri

Fuck Henri. That’s the whole section. I’m doubling down. He’s giving Chaol energy in the worst ways: not trusting Diem, potentially hiding things from her, and not fully accepting who she is. Nope. Done. Bye. I’ve seen this film before and I didn’t like the ending!

Luther, though? Slowly warming up to me. Very slowly. Just like this slow burn romance that is testing every ounce of my patience. If we don’t start getting some real heat in Book 3, I might DNF out of pure romantic frustration.

That said, I do feel like we’re on the cusp of something good. They promised honesty, which is great… but where is the honesty for Diem? Everyone’s been hiding things from her, and I want her to be met with the same vulnerability she’s shown others. I kept begging for these two to finally do the damn thing and break the tension. But I know we had to wrap up the Henri plot first (ugh). Still, we better not start Diem and Luther’s story on shaky, secretive ground. The tension can’t slow burn forever. I’m begging.

Boats & Hoes

The second that I saw Diem on a boat, I knew things were about to pop off. But did I expect a whole assassination attempt on every crowned monarch of Emarion? Absolutely not.

Diem survives The Challenging, completes her Rite of Coronation, and then? BAM. Henri, Luther, Vance, & Aurilie, still lurking in the shadows, helping in ways that ultimately hurt her. I get that he thinks he’s helping the cause– hurting the Descended as vengeance– but it’s just more manipulation. Two sides of the same coin.

By the end, the stakes are sky-high… but I still feel like I have more questions than answers. Especially after that epilogue. I’m screaming.

Final Thoughts

Fate vs. Choice continues to be at the heart of this series, and it’s honestly what’s keeping me latched to Diem’s story. I need her to grab fate by the throat and choose something- anything- for herself instead of being a pawn in everyone else’s game. She’s earned that much.

And with the way Book 2 ends (yes, I’m still yelling about that epilogue) we’re clearly in for another emotional rollercoaster of deception.

So while Glow didn’t quite live up to the electric energy of Spark, I’m continuing on. The world is bigger, the danger is louder, the secrets are deeper, and Diem? She’s standing at the edge of something massive.

Here’s hoping Book 3 finally gives her agency she’s been denied– and finally gives us the payoff this slow burn has been teasing since page one.

Let’s light that Everflame all the way up. 🔥

My Rating: 3.75/5

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No Thoughts, Just Knives & Banter: A Spark of the Everflame Review

park of the Everflame by Penn Cole is fast-paced, easy to devour, and honestly exactly what I needed after my Onyx Storm slump. Some fantasy authors drown you in world-building, and I end up flipping back like, “Wait, who’s fighting again?” But Penn? She feeds it to you in manageable bites. I might have been confused at times, but it felt like I was learning the world with Diem. No harm, no foul!

Let’s talk about Diem. She’s messy, complicated, and incredibly unreliable– and I love her for it. Watching her not fall for Henri? A personal win. (THANK GOD! He was giving Chaol. Sorry Chaol stans.) I’m not here for the “I want you to unknowingly drop everything you stand for and join my side of the war, but I’m going to give you no backstory and keep you in the dark because it amuses me” trope. No thanks! I’ve seen this film before… and I didn’t like the ending!

But Diem herself? I felt so drawn to her. She’s constantly questioning herself– wanting to fight for what’s right, realizing maybe she picked the wrong side, and loving people who might not deserve it. Her father figure and Henri taking opposite stances in the war just deepens the internal tug-of-war. She feels unreliable, but maybe she’s just overwhelmed- and who wouldn’t be?

Now Luther… oof. I want to be into him, but something’s just not clicking. If Henri wasn’t such a walking red flag, I’m not sure I’d be rooting for Luther and Diem. There’s mystery, there’s hear, and he clearly cares about her– but he’s still a bit too enigmatic. I personally need more. More softness, more depth, more something to balance the powerful broody energy. Still, that knife scene when he checks her for weapons? I could eat that up every time. Maura was internally screaming with her little cane and so was I.

The world of Lumnos is brutal and beautiful, and the story blend magic, rebellion, and inner conflict seamlessly. One theme that really stood out was Fate vs. Choice. Diem doesn’t know the full prophecy for herself yet, but you can feel it simmering just underneath the surface of Spark of the Everflame. I’m sure the next one will rip it right open.

Vibes-wise, it gave me From Blood and Ash meets The Cruel Prince— not in plot, but in vibes and energy. There’s political tension, coded language, dramatic reveals, and that delicious banter. No bully-romance here, but Diem definitely knows how to spar.

Closing the last page, knowing what Diem is probably going to face next? Yeah… we’re in for a wild rife. Bring on Glow of the Everflame.

Rating: 3.75 / 5 Stars

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Onyx Storm Ruined Me: Theories, Screaming and Mild Delusion

It took me weeks to write this review because Onyx Storm affected me so much. I want to keep it spoiler-free, but I have many feelings, wild theories, and questions that will linger until Book 4.

I’m distraught. Unwell. Thinking about dragons 24/7.

I truly don’t know how the characters in Yarros’ world will fix what’s been broken without major loss in the upcoming novel. I know death is inevitable– but that doesn’t make it hurt any less. Especially not after suffering alongside these characters for 1,000+ pages.

Spoilers Ahead. Turn back now unless you want to feel pain.

Xaden’s Love for Violet: Beautiful… and Annoyingly Tragic

Xaden’s love for Violet is so real in this book it actually made me nauseous– in the best and worst ways. This whole book felt like one long love letter from him to her… dropping the nickname of Violence in exchange for “love”… but the miscommunication trope? I’m begging for mercy.

I get it– he knows it’s only a matter of time before he turns venin. But instead of fighting harder, he shuts down. Broods. Stops asking questions. Gives up. And we, the readers, are robbed of the love story we deserve.

Whether they had their emotional breakthroughs off-page (boo) or Imogen wiped Violet’s memory (we’ll get to that), it hurts. Their bond is supposed to be forged through war, loss, and chaos. And yet the minute they’re tested– they break? Again?

I know they love each other. I feel it. But damn if this book didn’t make me question it more than I wanted to.

Here Comes the Waterworks

I never want to feel the emotional devastation of losing a dragon. When Andarna left Violet, I spiraled. It felt like losing a pet. A soulmate. A piece of your own soul.

Her return, after her time with the Feathertails, made one thing painfully clear: Andarna is crucial. I’m calling it now– Violet is going to use Andarna’s scales the way Mira used her dragon’s scales for Violet: for protection, and transformation.

Also: I’m so happy Andarna finally got answers she’s needed for so long…but please, girl, stop shaking the entire squad to the core every time you enter a scene.

And don’t even get me started on Tairn and Sgaeyl’s bond being severed. I knew it had to happen. But I’m still screaming into the void.

Things That Have Kept Me Up at Night

(Take what resonates, leave what doesn’t– unless I’m right, in which case you heard it hear first.)

What if Violet is the weapon? Not her power. Not her dragon. Her. What if Brennan and Carr aren’t protecting Violet from the war- but protecting the world from her? We know her father experimented with Feathertail DNA. What if Violet is the result? A living weapon. Her silver hair. Her connection to Dunne. Aaric’s foresight about her needing to save the temple. It’s all adding up to me and I hate it.

Imogen has BEEN erasing memories, and we’re not talking about it enough. Those “timeline gaps” and “I don’t remember” moments. Who the fuck is Lewellen? Bodies aching in the morning even though you had a great night sleep? EDS, stress? Maybe! But what if Imogen has been wiping Violet’s memory far more than we realized? She always shoes up when things get weird. She has that power. What if she’s working with someone else, quietly pulling the string? If this turns into a “you’ve lived this before” reveal, I will scream.

Xaden didn’t turn for Violet.. he turned for Sgaeyl. I said it. The Sage prophesied, “You will turn for love”– but that love was never Violet like everyone must have thought. It was the love between a dragon and its rider. No bond runs deeper. And Sgaeyl being hurt broke something in Xaden that couldn’t be fixed. Their loyalty transcended everything. If that’s not tragic, I don’t know what is. Dragon loyalty is hot. Sorry not sorry.

What is Berwyn is Naolin? Okay, hear me out. Who the fuck is Berwyn? I think he has the potential to be Naolin– Tairn’s previous rider, presumed dead– is back, under a new na,e. And the “other brother” referenced? That’s Brennan, begging for Naolin’s return. The research, the resurrection, the secrets– it’s all right there. If I’m wrong, pretend I never said this. If I’m right– shit.

Violet got married and we’re not okay I’m not saying she married Bodhi.. but I am. There’s a 12-hour window she’s trying to forget, and a vibe of deep regret from everyone. What if she married for strategy? Power? Survival? What if she can’t be with Xaden anymore and Bodhi was about to turn for power? She wouldn’t be allowed to marry Xaden if he became a threat to everyone he loved. Look, her and Xaden have had a lot of conversations with different comments about Bhodi. About how he would “have to kill his last living relative” or “I should have picked the other cousin” or whatever was said. I am a little nauseous over this theory. I don’t like it. But why would she forget? Do not talk to me unless it’s to scream with me.

These theories are probably wrong. Or too right. Either way, I needed to scream about this book and none of my real-life friends have finished it yet. Until the next one drops, I will be feral in the chat (alone).

I am slightly disappointed in the pacing and confusion I have with Onyx Storm. But I do realize this is a plot device she is using and not just plot holes in the story itself. I just hope it’s wrapped with a nice bow on top.

Have your own theories? Drop them below. Let’s spiral together.

Rating: 4.5 / 5 Stars

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Iron Flame: A Wild Ride with No Room to Breathe

Rebecca Yarros, We Need to Talk.

Can Xaden and Violet catch a break for five seconds? Just five? I don’t need them wrapped in a perfect, happy romance, but I do need a moment where they’re non constantly testing their relationship like it’s the battlefield they’re about to walk onto. A date. A conversation without tension- including sexual. Just one moment where they can exist together without the weight of the world suffocating them.

From the way this book ended, though, I’m pretty sure that’s asking for too much.

Miscommunication or Just Pure Frustration?

I love Xaden and Violet’s banter. I love the tension Yarros weaves, the chemistry, and just the overall way their dynamic pulls you in. Xaden is toxic to every person in the world except Violet. I love it.

But the miscommunication trope? I believe this couple is stronger than that. I could do without it for Iron Flame. It wasn’t this bad in Fourth Wing– sure Xaden had his secrets and their conversations still felt real. Now, it’s like they can’t get through a single discussion without walls and shields going up. Pun intended. Somehow though, they still find time to be together off the pages for some weeks. Make it make sense.

Andarna is the Real Star Here

The one thing I’m truly excited about for Onyx Storm? Andarna. I knew she would be special, but how special, who knows! And I’m convinced Violet’s abilities aren’t also as developed as we think…

Here’s my personal theory: Andarna’s signet is the one tied to lighting- since Feathertails have their own connection to the venin. That would explain why Violet’s father was so invested in studying them, why his research was kept so quiet. In Fourth Wing, it was mentioned that he had studied Feathertails extensively, yet no journal was ever found. What if Brennan has it? If Feathertails are truly the missing piece, that knowledge is going to change everything.

As for Tairn’s? I’m convinced his signet is tied to the truth– an ability to know things instinctively, maybe. And if Violet has another signet in her bloodline along with Andarna’s, it would make sense. How else would her father have understood the importance of Feathertails if his own family hadn’t already been aware of it? If Violet has a third signet like Xaden has two– it would make sense at least to me. Just putting it out there.

Action in Iron Flame? Absolutely Unmatched.

For all my frustrations with the relationship drama, I can’t deny that Iron Flame delivered when it came to action. Every moment had me hooked. I flew through this book in just a few days (after a Fourth Wing refresher that did take me a few weeks), and usually, I skim action-heavy sections if they drag on for too long– but that didn’t happen here. Every fight, every twist, every moment felt earned.

At the end of the day, Iron Flame was an experience. I just need Violet to fully step into her power, Andarna to finally prove why she’s the game changer, and — if I’m lucky– Xaden and Violet to have one damn moment of peace. But knowing Yarros? That’s probably wishful thinking. We’re in for more death than we can possibly prepare for.

My Rating: 4/5 Stars

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Who Knew I’d Fall for Vikings? A Review of A Fate Inked in Blood by Danielle Jensen

. I never thought I’d fall for these themes- and also DESPISE SOME- but here I am, obsessed and begging for more.

I picked this book because of something super random: a genetic DNA test. Turns out, I have ties to Viking history. A LOT of ties. So I figured, “Why not read something that is also inked in my blood?” And let me tell you– this book felt like fate. (Pun entirely intended.)

A Protagonist Worth Rooting For

Freya is not your average heroine by any means. Her methods are entirely barbaric but every single choice is calculated and her own. (As long as its her own and she is not battling Hlin inside of her.) Is it even Hlin? There’s still so many questions I still have. Sure, she’s favored by the Gods, but what I loved most about her is her strength in the face of constantly being underestimated and controlled by others. Snorri(certified dick) still would constantly get a tongue lashing from Freya and it was some of my most favorite moments. She’s caught in a power struggle that challenges her magic and her choices, and her journey feels all too real at some moments even though we, the reader, don’t have any magic at all.

Love Him, Hate Him, Can’t Look Away

Now, let’s talk about Bjorn. I wanted to love him- I really did. At first, he gave me major Casteel Da’Neer vibes (protective, swoon-worthy, maybe a little too cocky. And I was fully on board. But then.. am I shocked at the betrayal? I don’t want to entirely spoil the shock because even I was a little spooked at that bomb at the end so I’ll save it for you guys to read but WTF? I mean, Danielle (respectfully) how am I supposed to forgive him for all of that? I’m clinging to some hope because he did lay that pipe but if there is a redemption arc coming– it better be good.

A Slow Burn Finally Worth the Wait

I don’t usually do slow burns. I need them to kiss by 180 or I’m out. I need instant sparks and instant drama straight out the gate. The love interests always need to be TESTED. But this one? I’m all in, Ms. Jensen. That cave scene? Hello? It went from literally the slowest of burns to THAT? And then THAT?

A Refreshing Twist on Some of the Same

The few times I had picked up anything Vikings or Norse Mythology related. It was almost an exact carbon copy of the same story just regurgitated in different words. I refuse to say those books. However, the way Jensen approached it is entirely different than from what I have read at least. Maybe I need to read some more. If anyone has any good recommendations, please put in the comment section below!!

A lot of Viking stories rely on the same Freya-Odin-Loki narrative, but this felt different. It’s familiar enough to draw you in but has a fresh, creative twist that kept me turning the pages. I am really taken aback by Freya’s journey and I really want to see her shine in the sequel.

Final Thoughts

If you’re into Norse mythology, Viking lore, or fantasy romance that makes you want to throw a book (in a good way), A Fate Inked in Blood is a must-read. Danielle Jensen, I’m officially a fan, and I can’t wait to dive into more of your books. And Bjorn– well, you’re still on thin ice.

Rating: 4/5 Stars

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Review: Quicksilver by Callie Hart

I was beyond excited when I finally got my hands on Quicksilver at Target the other day. While I knew it was available on Kindle Unlimited, I just had to get the physical copy because I knew– it was one I needed for the shelves. Once I started, I was absolutely right to be this excited.

Quicksilver follows the journey of protagonist Saeris Fane through the world of Yvelia, where she crosses paths with the intriguing and mysterious Kingfisher- the ultimate love interest. While the novel is heavily driven by romance and the tension of watching this love story unfold, it’s so much more than that. Quicksilver is filled with political intrigue, rich-world building, and masterful storytelling. Callie Hart truly impressed me with this book, and now I’m eagerly awaiting her next release.

What truly gripped me in Quicksilver was Hart’s ability to keep me hooked through a combination of elements: the chemistry between Kingfisher and Saeris, the fast-paced plot, and the freshness of her world-building.

Kingfisher has officially entered my top ten book boyfriends of all time. Let me know if he has entered yours! His subtle flirting, along with his morally gray character, makes him irresistibly likable. Even though the audience knows nothing about him, I found myself rooting for him from the start. Although him and Saeris have spicy chemistry, the romance does not overshadow the depth of his character. What makes Kingfisher even more compelling is the development of his story as the audience receives it. It’s the development of his story, and his connection with Saeris, that makes him unforgettable.

Saeris, as a protagonist, is a breath of fresh air in a genre that is so heavily saturated of the same female leads. As an avid fan of both fantasy and romance, I think many readers will agree when I say that it’s easy to get bored with the same types of FMCs. While Saeris shares some traits with other characters in the genre, Hart makes her stand out by giving her real, relatable, and NOTICEABLE flaws. It’s imperfections that make Saeris stand out and incredibly lovable. She was awesome every step of the way.

The pacing of the novel was perfect. The shifts between action-packed moments, the small scenes, and romantic moments were seamless– nothing felt rushed or out of place. And the world-building? Absolutely refreshing. It’s the fae world that kept me glued to the page– I read over 85% of the book in just one day! That’s how locked in I was. We also have to honorably mention one of the sassiest characters ever– Carrion Swift.

I wanted to keep this review spoiler-free for the most part, but suffice it to say that Quicksilver is a must-read. If you haven’t picked it up yet, I highly recommend doing so. I’m officially counting down the days for Callie Hart’s next–she has a new fan. And fans of ACOTAR will absolutely love this one.

Rating: 4/5 Stars

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the look of love (for writers)

"it's all in the eyes i was once told"

catching the stare of someone across a crowded room

subtle furrowing of eyebrows beyond a blank facade

coldness easing into warmth

a fond mothering gaze

corner of the lip nudged upward

forced glower/glare as they break underneath

batting their lashes, playful

a boisterous laugh

intrigue piercing the stoic

proud smugness at the other's success

lingering glances

a childish joy bursting through

pupils dilate

eyelids shut in a look of peace, calm and trust

look of longing/betrayal

"there was once a time when they were mine"

terseness

features fold into a scowl

an urgent flinching back

coldness returns (as though the warmth had never come)

lips part then purse

invasion of shock

slow stare at the floor

the ripple effect of a swallow

frustrated breath/sigh

bitter laugh in reminiscence

dread tearing through the seams of their composure

look of hatred

"darkness"

mean smirk- teeth bared grimace- scowl

dismissive gaze

gaze of contempt/impatience

threat lowering the voice

sardonic goading grins verging on manic

rolling one's eyes

flicker of irritation in the eyes

stares stubbornly ahead despite distraction

gritted teeth, clenched jaw

fierce biting remarks

even measured complexions betraying no thought

strangling oneself back from violence

utter apathy

murderous silence hanging in the stare

snobbish laughter

smiling at another's downfall

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The Mini Guide to Crafting Compelling Royal Characters for Fiction Writers

Creating royal characters can be both exciting and challenging. These regal figures often play pivotal roles in stories, capturing readers' imaginations with their power, privilege, and the weight of responsibility they carry. Whether you're writing historical fiction, fantasy, or contemporary novels featuring monarchs, this comprehensive (mini) guide will help you develop authentic, multi-dimensional royal characters that will resonate with your readers.

Understanding the Basics of Royalty

Before diving into character creation, it's essential to have a solid grasp of what royalty entails. Royalty typically refers to members of a ruling family, including kings, queens, princes, princesses, and other nobles within a monarchical system. These individuals are often born into their roles, though some may ascend to power through marriage or other means.

Key aspects to consider:

Hierarchy and succession

Royal duties and responsibilities

Protocol and etiquette

The concept of divine right (in some cultures)

The relationship between royalty and their subjects

Remember, while these elements are common in many royal systems, you have the creative freedom to adapt or reimagine them for your fictional world.

Developing Your Royal Character's Background

Every character, royal or not, needs a rich backstory. For royal characters, this background is particularly crucial as it shapes their worldview, values, and decision-making processes.

Consider the following:

a) Lineage: What is your character's family history? Are they from a long-standing dynasty or a newly established royal house?

b) Upbringing: How were they raised? Were they groomed for leadership from birth, or did they have a more sheltered upbringing?

c) Education: What kind of education did they receive? Was it formal, focusing on statecraft and diplomacy, or more well-rounded?

d) Relationships: How do they relate to their family members, courtiers, and subjects?

e) Personal experiences: What significant events have shaped their character and outlook on life?

Crafting a Unique Personality

Avoid the trap of creating one-dimensional royal stereotypes. Your character should be as complex and nuanced as any other well-developed protagonist or antagonist.

Consider these aspects:

a) Strengths and weaknesses: What are your character's admirable qualities? What flaws do they struggle with?

b) Motivations: What drives them? Is it a sense of duty, personal ambition, or something else entirely?

c) Internal conflicts: What personal struggles do they face? How do these conflicts affect their rule and relationships?

d) Hobbies and interests: What passions do they pursue outside of their royal duties?

e) Sense of humor: How do they express humor, if at all? Is it dry wit, sarcasm, or something else?

Balancing Power and Vulnerability

One of the most intriguing aspects of royal characters is the juxtaposition between their immense power and their human vulnerabilities. This balance can create compelling internal and external conflicts for your character.

Consider:

The weight of responsibility and its impact on their personal life

The isolation that often comes with a royal position

The constant scrutiny they face from the public and court

The struggle between personal desires and duty to the crown

Creating a Believable Royal World

Your royal character doesn't exist in a vacuum (I hope not). They're part of a larger royal ecosystem that includes family members, advisors, courtiers, and subjects. Developing this world adds depth and authenticity to your story.

Key elements to consider:

Court dynamics and politics

Relationships with other noble houses or kingdoms

The role of advisors and how they influence decisions

Traditions and customs specific to your royal setting

The economic and social structure of the kingdom

Addressing the Challenges of Royal Life

Royal characters face unique challenges that can drive your plot and character development. Some common themes include:

a) Succession disputes b) Balancing personal happiness with duty c) Navigating political alliances and conflicts d) Managing public opinion and maintaining legitimacy e) Dealing with threats to their rule or life

Use these challenges to create tension and drive your story forward while revealing more about your character's personality and values.

The Impact of Historical Context

If you're writing historical fiction or a fantasy inspired by real-world monarchies, it's crucial to consider the historical context. Research the time period and culture you're drawing from to ensure authenticity in your character's behavior, beliefs, and challenges.

Key areas to research:

Social norms and expectations of the time

Political systems and power structures

Technology and its impact on governance

Religious beliefs and their influence on royalty

Gender roles and how they affect royal duties and succession

Avoiding Common Pitfalls

When creating royal characters, be mindful of these common mistakes:

a) Making them too perfect or too villainous b) Ignoring the realities of royal life (e.g., lack of privacy, constant duties) c) Overlooking the impact of their decisions on their subjects d) Failing to show growth or change over the course of the story e) Relying too heavily on stereotypes or clichés

Incorporating Royal Etiquette and Protocol

Royal characters often adhere to strict codes of conduct and protocol. While you don't need to become an expert in royal etiquette, incorporating some of these elements can add authenticity to your story:

Forms of address (Your Majesty, Your Highness, etc.)

Court ceremonies and rituals

Dress codes and regalia

Rules of precedence in social situations

Diplomatic protocols when interacting with other royals or dignitaries

Exploring Different Types of Royal Characters

Remember that not all royal characters need to be ruling monarchs. Consider exploring other royal roles, such as:

The rebel prince or princess who rejects their royal duties

The reluctant heir thrust into power unexpectedly

The exiled royal fighting to reclaim their throne

The royal spouse adapting to life in the palace

The illegitimate child discovering their royal heritage

Each of these archetypes offers unique storytelling opportunities and challenges for character development.

Balancing Historical Accuracy and Creative License

If you're writing historical fiction featuring real royalty, you'll need to strike a balance between historical accuracy and creative interpretation. While it's important to respect known facts and timelines, you also have the freedom to explore the inner lives and motivations of these historical figures.

Tips for balancing accuracy and creativity:

Thoroughly research the historical figure and their time period

Clearly differentiate between historical fact and fictional interpretation

Use author's notes to explain any significant departures from known history

Focus on filling in the gaps in the historical record rather than contradicting established facts

Developing Royal Character Arcs

Like any well-rounded character, your royal protagonist should undergo growth and change throughout your story. Consider how their experiences might challenge their beliefs, alter their perspective, or force them to confront their flaws.

Possible character arcs for royal characters:

From naive idealist to pragmatic ruler

From reluctant heir to confident leader

From isolated monarch to connected leader who understands their subjects

From power-hungry tyrant to benevolent ruler (or vice versa)

Remember, character growth doesn't always have to be positive. Sometimes, the most compelling stories involve characters who face moral decline or tragic falls from grace.

Remember, while the trappings of royalty may be grand, at their core, your royal characters are still human. They love, fear, hope, and struggle like anyone else. It's this humanity, set against the backdrop of power and responsibility, that makes royal characters so fascinating to read and write about.

Happy writing, - Rin T

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what will your character do..

(reblog and brainstorm, lovelies! u can also write drabbles with theseee )

if they're met face to face with their plot, with no warning?

if they're stressed?

if they're happy? who will they want to share it with?

if they're sad? will they go to anyone for comfort? if yes, who?

if they're forced into a life of death situation?

if they're being threatened?

if they're kissed by their ex?

if they're confessed to by someone who they had no clue liked them? (given, they're single or not)

if their lover betrays them?

if they're coughing up blood out of the blue?

if there's a strange presence in the room, and it feels ominous?

if they discovered a dead body?

^ if the dead body is their best friend? (great question to start and develop a plot)

if their enemy is at their doorstep, bruised and injured?

if they had to share a bed with someone they don't particularly hate? ahem

if they had to be fed by someone they didn't like/their crush?

if their partner-to-be? enemy? pulls them into a secluded and shushes them? (their bodies pressing and all that!!)

when asked to choose between their family and their lover? (given the circumstances of ur story)

when kissed on their head by their enemy after a near death experience?

if they're dancing with a stranger, and the stranger says 'stop dancing, sweetheart and you'll hunted. do u wanna die?' ?

if they find out the food that served to them has glass dust on it? (who is it served by?)

when being pulled into a hug when they most need it by someone they least expect?

when they have to hold someone they loved at a gun point? why would it even occur?

when they have to choose between their own life and their lover's?

when they've to give up something (of great importance to the character) to save their lover?

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Review: The Light in the Flame by Jennifer L. Armentrout

Nyktos and Sera don’t miss. Ever.

I really went into this second installment incredibly worried for their relationship and wondering how they repair their inflictions on each other. I should have known that JLA pulled the strings (while still giving us the spicy scenes some of us so desperately need) and worked on some incredible character development at the same time.

In The Light in the Flame, we start to uncover even more information with main protagonist Sera about the history, politics, and heart of the Shadowlands. We start to realize just how the embers are affecting her and we are put on one incredible ride. Sera continues to be one of my favorite FMC in the FBAA universe due to her fearlessness and direct demeanor. She absolutely has her flaws, but her energy in this book explodes and really resonates with me on every page.

Kolis actually petrifies me and makes me uneasy every time I see his name on a page. He screams entitled asshole on every space he takes up and I just really don’t know how these characters will win. I am so scared for them LOL.

Nektas is a really interesting character that I believe knows more than he lets on. The way he speaks so calmly about Sera, it’s almost like a sort of knowing that she is more within the prophecy than just the embers. I really want to see more of his story and plot in the next few books and I hope we can uncover more about the history of draken and how this will affect Poppy in her fight against The Queen.

I just finished the book and my heart is still shattering. I don’t really know how there are two books after this but, I really hope that Sera can get a somewhat happier ending than what is currently going on. I feel like she truly can’t get a break and when they do have a break, he can’t TRULY love her. It’s actually like breaking my heart at this point, way more than anything in the FBAA universe.

Now that my next book will be A Soul of Ash and Blood, I will be going back into the story and keeping Sera’s powers and abilities with the embers in mind, as well as discovering all about this world’s Primals and their Ascension process. Figuring that Poppy will most likely be going into her Ascension for the next book, I wish the woman in this universe can get a fucking break! Poppy and Cas need a honeymoon in the Bahamas for a chapter or five, but once again, I understand the lore and understanding what the hell even first happened in the first FBAA books. It’ll be interesting to see all the things I have missed from Kieran and Casteel’s POV.

J.L.A has a way of having me instantly wanting to buy the next book and I can not wait to dive more into this universe.

Rating: 4/5

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Review: Kingdom of the Feared by Kerri Maniscalco

I have finally finished the Kingdom of the Wicked series and boy did that take me longer than anticipated! For me, I flew through the first two installments so this third one was a little slower for me to finish this time around.

Wrath and Emilia’s love story continues, but the long-awaited bonding is not until at least 100 pages in. (OUCH for the people that have been waiting for this joining moment for these beloved characters.) I was very excited to finally read this book and complete their love story but was met with harsh situations where these characters could not be in the same room as each other.

Wrath, as a character in KOTF, felt rushed. Maniscalco in her first two installments created Wrath as a complex demon that had a love for Emilia without the audience knowing his secret curse in book three. I was a little confused with this plot in KOTF as I felt as he had shown his love all throughout the series thus far. Maybe I am taking this too literally, but I for sure would not be invested if it wasn’t for their connection throughout the Kingdom of the Wicked series and felt that love throughout the pages. I felt as though this could potentially be sloppy writing or editing just to complete the series to make it a trilogy. I felt as though this would have better carried over into four/five books or just a duology.

I was a little confused while I was reading as there were a lot of characters that I forgot about. Maybe this is just an issue for me and not for other readers but seriously let me know, but if you tend to jump around a lot of series, make sure to remember the characters here as they fill huge plot points towards the end!

Some plot points I do feel are very “deus ex machina.” Everything just so happens to work out all the time! I really didn’t think Vittoria would get away so easily, and towards the end, I still thought she was going to do something vengeful.

Although it does seem like I am ripping this book to shreds, I really did enjoy it. It was nice to conclude Wrath and Emilia’s journey which I have been invested in for years. We, as an audience, always knew there was something more to Emilia than she let on and her not remembering, makes complete sense! It does maybe make me want to go back and see what I missed first read around for the first two novels.

As I am a fan of Maniscalco’s descriptive writing style, I will definitely be reading her next book Throne of the Fallen but I’m hoping there are slightly more adult themes and concepts. We started to get it later throughout the series– but I’m always looking for that little extra.

On to the next!

Rating: 3/5

⭐⭐⭐Rating: 3 out of 5

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How to Write Strong Dialogue

(from a writer of ten years)

So you’re back in the writing trenches. You’re staring at your computer, or your phone, or your tablet, or your journal, and trying not to lose your mind. Because what comes after the first quotation mark? Nothing feels good.

Don’t worry, friend. I’m your friendly tumblr writing guide and I’m here to help you climb out of the pit of writing despair.

I’ve created a character specifically for this exercise. His name is Amos Alejandro III, but for now we’ll just call him Amos. He’s a thirty-something construction worker with a cat who hates him, and he’s just found out he has to go on a quest across the world to save his mother’s diner.

1.) Consider the Attitude and Characteristics of Your Character

One of the biggest struggles writers face when writing dialogue is keeping characters’ dialogue “in-character”.

You’re probably thinking, “but Sparrow, I’m the creator! None of the dialogue I write can be out of character because they’re my original characters!”

WRONG. (I’m hitting the very loud ‘incorrect’ buzzer in your head right now).

Yes, you created your characters. But you created them with specific characteristics and attitudes. For example, Amos lives alone, doesn’t enjoy talking too much, and isn’t a very scholarly person. So he’s probably not going to say something like “I suggest that we pursue the path of least resistance for this upcoming quest.” He’d most likely say, “I mean, I think the easiest route is pretty self-explanatory.”

Another example is a six-year-old girl saying, “Hi, Mr. Ice Cream Man, do you have chocolate sundaes?” instead of “Hewwo, Ice Cweam Man— Chocowate Sundaes?”

Please don’t put ‘w’s in the middle of your dialogue unless you have a very good and very specific reason. I will cry.

Yes, the girl is young, but she’s not going to talk like that. Most children know how to ask questions correctly, and the ‘w’ sound, while sometimes found in a young child’s speech, does not need to be written out. Children are human.

So, consider the attitude, characteristics, and age of your character when writing dialogue!

2.) Break Up Dialogue Length

If I’m reading a novel and I see an entire page of dialogue without any breaks, I’m sobbing. You’re not a 17th century author with endless punctuation. You’re in the 21st century and people don’t read in the same way they used to.

Break up your dialogue. Use long sentences. Use one word. Use commas, use paragraph breaks. Show a character throwing a chair out a window in between sentences.

For example:

“So, you’re telling me the only way to save my Ma’s diner is to travel across five different continents, find the only remaining secret receipt card, and bring it back before she goes out of business? She didn’t have any other copies? Do I have to leave my cat behind?”

vs.

Amos ran a hand over his face. “So, you’re telling me the only way to save my Ma’s diner is to travel across five different continents, find the only remaining secret recipe card, and bring it back before she goes out of business?”

He couldn’t believe his luck. That was sarcastic, of course. This was ironically horrible.

“She didn’t have any other copies?” He leaned forward over the table and frowned. “Do I have to leave my cat behind?”

The second version is easier to digest, and I got to add some fun description of thought and action into the scene! Readers get a taste of Amos’ character in the second scene, whereas in the first scene they only got what felt like a million words of dialogue.

3.) Don’t Overuse Dialogue Tags.

DON’T OVERUSE DIALOGUE TAGS. DON’T. DON’T DON’T DON’T.

If you don’t know what a dialogue tag is, it’s a word after a sentence of dialogue that attributes that dialogue to a specific character.

For example:

“Orange juice and chicken ramen are good,” he said.

‘Said’ functions as the dialogue tag in this sentence.

Dialogue tags are good. You don’t want to completely avoid them. (I used to pride myself on how I could write stories without any dialogue tags. Don’t do that.) Readers need to know who’s speaking. But overusing them, or overusing weird or unique tags, should be avoided.

Examples:

“I’m gonna have to close my diner,” Amos’ mother said.

“Why?” Amos growled. “It’s been in the family forever.”

“I’ve lost the secret recipe card, and I can’t keep the diner open without it!” she cried.

“The Bacon Burger Extreme recipe card?” Amos questioned.

“Yes!” Amos’ mother screamed.

“Well, that’s not good,” Amos complained.

vs.

“I’m gonna have to close my diner,” Amos’ mother said, taking her son’s hand and leading him over to one of the old, grease-stained tabletops with the ripped-fabric booths.

Amos simply stared at her as they moved. “Why? It’s been in the family forever.”

“I’ve—” she looked away for a moment, then took in a breath. “I’ve lost the secret recipe card. And I can’t keep the diner open without it.”

“The Bacon Burger Extreme recipe card?”

“Yes!” She still wouldn’t meet his eyes, and her shoulders were shaking. “Yes.”

Amos sat down heavily in the booth. “Well, that’s not good.”

The first scene only gives character names and dialogue tags. There are no actions and no descriptions. The second scene, however, gives these things. It gives the reader descriptions of the diner, the characters’ actions, and attitudes. Overusing dialogue tags gets boring fast, so add interest into your writing!

So! When you’re writing, consider the attitude of your character, vary dialogue length, and don’t overuse dialogue tags.

Now climb out of the pit of writing despair. Pick up your pen or computer. And write some good dialogue!

Best,

Sparrow

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Review: The War of Two Queens by J.L.A

Another book down in the TBR! I finally feel like I’m getting somewhere here! I will be discussing some plot points in the book, I recommend you not going any further if you are not interested in finding out any spoilers.

One of the biggest setbacks, for sure, is Casteel being away for so many chapters. You know this at the start of the novel before you even begin, but it still sucks. You’re just wishing as the reader for the two to be together again. Although J.L.A does spice it up with some scenes for us and the characters based off of dream walking, it doesn’t satisfy the urge for me when the two characters are physically together. They are an electrifying duo and I hated that they were apart for even a little bit.

Where Casteel was absent for most of the novel, we finally saw wolven Kieran filling his shoes. Poppy and Kieran had a very interesting dynamic for this book. Some would stay it steps over lines, others would not and that’s not the discourse I’m here to talk about. What I am here to discuss and kinda love is that they had time to feel each other out privately and create a bond without Casteel around. I don’t think the characters would have been able to explore their connection if the King were heading to the bedroom with Poppy every five chapters.

The Joining was a little disappointing as I thought there would be more KieranxPoppy action or at least a little more detail on who was doing what but I feel like that will be for later books? If not, give justice to Kieran!!!! I think he could slay if given the chance, please. However, if this turns into some throuple action that happens when they are feeling it sometimes when they have too much wine, I AM ALL ABOUT IT.

The War of Two Queens has lived up to the years-long hype for me and there was a lot of anticipation surrounding the release. I knew going into this novel that I was to expect the unexpected and that the Joining was happening. All over Tik Tok, I tried to avoid the spoilers as much as I could for two years and I was able to avoid most.

The War of Two Queens was interesting and long. I was definitely into the storyline and understood that the story needed to be broken down again for us and at a slower pace compared to her other books in the series. The amount of development in the storyline that was done in this novel was more than all the books combined. I wish this book had more smut, but I understand we needed plot for a little bit– sadly. 300 pages without Casteel was rough but I’m so happy the gang is back and joined together again. 😉

Rating 3.5/5