infinityidk6

[infinityidk6]

LOOKING FOR A BETA READER!

CLOSED! THANK YOU TO MY AMAZING BETA

MHA X BSD fan fiction - In progress - No proper update schedule but aiming for biweekly

Hello! I’m InfinityIdk and I am looking for a beta reader for my MHA X BSD fan fiction Clap Snap Boom. Being posted on A03 and Wattpad.

https://archive.transformativeworks.org/works/63112105/chapters/161622361#workskin

https://www.wattpad.com/story/393137958-clap-snap-boom

About the fanfic!

Title: Clap Snap Boom!

Summary:

Reputations lead to rumours, and rumours have a tendency to run free. So when rumours of the infamous Double Black reach the Pro Heroes, the organization of the shadows is in the eyes of the light.

So now the Pros Focus is on the big bad mafia. But if they were to focus on reforming Double Black, then the situation would be put in Double Black's control.

And it would be disgusting to not save these orphans? Who had no guide in the world, who were forced and manipulated by evil men to be heartless killers by a brutal, unforgiving world?

I mean- have I mentioned they don't have parents?

_+-*-+_

Or: Double Black is put into a villain reformation program at UA as its first unwilling participants. (Though they have more control than UA thinks.)

Current word count: (around) 15k

Tone: Dark Comedy (the actually funny kind I hope)

NO smut, platonic relationships unless decided otherwise, and of course, fluff, angst, and humour

Though it will have semi graphic violence, and if gore is necessary in will be non-descript

What I’m looking for in a beta reader:

Critiques on:

Grammar

Word choice (Ex. If I’m overusing a word)

Plot/Plotholes

Characterization

Clarity

Pacing

And I’d also like to know the reaction they had to certain parts. If I’m trying to make my readers sad but the beta reads it and feels happy, I might need to tweak the tone.

Please be friendly but not people pleasing. You also do not have to be extremely professional or serious, you can give comments in abbreviations for all I care- just be creative, get your comment across, and help me improve my fan fiction. You don’t have to be a professional, just help me improve my fanfiction.

ALSO! MUST BE WELL VERSED IN THE BNHA/MHA AND BSD UNIVERSES!

[infinityidk6]

CLAP SNAP BOOM!

I’m currently writing a new MHA x BSD fanfic!!!!

It’s a “UA tries to rehabilitate SKK” fic, and currently has one chapter with more to come soon. It’s comedic, fluffy, and angsty, so it’s a good mix of your therapy and what made you need therapy

I’m not sure about romance (Dazai x Chuuya specifically), and know most are divided on the topic, so I’ll most likely write extra one shots of romance if I want to, to feed the shippers without starving my platonic SKK lovers.

So try on the fic, give me a twirl, and who knows. Maybe the fic will spin with you.

Here’s a link:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/63112105/chapters/161622361