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isasophiesstuff · 4 months ago

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Would you read it ?

Hi, I'm a German teen and I have been writing for a while now. I have written short stories and some fan fictions which are also on this platform. I love to write, and I started the side quest to write a book, with the Title Loved by death. I have Plot, Characters, all planned out, and I just finished the first chapter, but I'm questioning if anyone would actually read it, so I'm asking the people on here if they would.

So plot: The Main character, Melanthe (Meaning Dark flower by the way) Sallis, is a normal High school senior, who lives with her best friend Nisha, and works at a Bookstore to get some extra money. But as her Grandmother dies one day, she realizes she can see something nobody outside her knowledge can see, She can see the Greek Gods.

The story would be a romance between the Greek God Thanatos and the Main character Melanthe. It would be in a more modern setting, with some of the Gods having businesses or clubs just unknown to mortals. I do want to write Enemies to lovers with a bit of forbidden Love maybe since you know Death god and everything, but I'm not sure. Now to the important question, would you read it or no. And regardless of answer, why ? I'm going to put the PROLOG after the cut if you want a read of my writing style. I would be thankful for every review, don't care if bad or good, and if I get enough reviews I would start to post some updates on the book. Thank you for reading.

It started on the one day I will never forget. The day my grandmother died.

I was sitting in the living room, my grandpa sitting on the sofa while I sat in the big chair with a look at the front door I heard my sister upstairs watching videos, and my Grandmother was ironing clothes in the bedroom. A normal day at my Grandparents house, this is the one place I can let go. Well it was normal till a man stepped into the house, he was tall extremely skinny or his hands were. The rest of his body was covered in a suit, a full black suit. Maybe that’s why his skin looked so white, he nearly had similarity with a skeleton

“Excuse me, who are you ?”

I asked him, I didn’t know my grandparents had planned in any visitors, and they normally don’t when my sister and I stay at their place.

There was no answer.

“Sir, hey I asked who you were” I repeated, he didn’t even seem to acknowledge me he just started to walk up the stairs.

“Hey, what are you doing ? Where do you think you’re going, sir ?” I look at him as he walks up the stairs, for some reason I didn’t hear my grandpa ask who I am talking to, I stood up and followed the man up the stairs. Up I only saw him entering my grandmas room, where just moments before she was ironing clothes.

At this point, I wished I realized that what I saw was just that, something only I could see.

Inside the room laid my grandmother, the Iron standing on the board with the clothing, plugged out, she laid in bed the man standing before it.

Something I still highly believe I dreamed was, seeing a reflection? Ghost? It was in some way my grandmother, but it was not her at all.

My Grandmother laid dead in her bed while that man just stood there, that thing looking like her, in front of him. They most of heard me choke on my breath because they both turned to me, my grandmother with a soft smile and him, he, looked at me like I was crazy. His eyes open wide, his brows frowned.

They disappeared just moments after to be honest I don’t know if it was that or me passing out, because I realized I could see death, the god of death to be exact. I could see Thanatos

#writing #greek mythology #books #greek gods #questions #romance #enimes to lovers #forbidden love #please help

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