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A Review Of Our Love is Shown in the Letting Go by Xxbottlecapxx

https://archiveofourown.org/works/51562321?view_adult=true

Steve's mother comes home after the earthquakes that happened in Hawkins to collect Steve so they can move far away from what reminds her of her ex-husband. She finds a bunch of strangers in her house with Steve and tries to drag him away. During her visit she learns about his new disabilities and relationships, changing her view of her son forever.

4/5 I love the description and dialogue! High quality! They story is moving and believable. The realism is important to a smooth flow in the story and world building. It's done very well, and I enjoy the fact that there's time taken to help us envision where we are. It's written in a uncommon perspective, and that balances out the missing pieces that the readers know, but does well in combating if you're not familiar. Most of the medical terms are accurate and that preserves the believability of of the fic. Cute gays, and positive interactions in the group. I am happy with the flow and character dynamics. One complaint I have— that is okay, and acceptable— are the grammatical mistakes. I think if the author took some time to reread their story and touch it up, it'd be perfect. Not to say that it's sloppy! To the untrained eye, it's awesome! I say well done! This is a Stranger Things fic. Steddie ship, and some cute shits that support their mom.

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A Review Of From Eden by AquaQuadrant

https://archiveofourown.org/works/58231990/chapters/148285654

Tango is used for a mob farm. He escapes and the Universe brings him to Hermitcraft. Little does he know that he Overworld doupleganger gets trapped in Hels, the place he fled. There is no way out of Hels without help. It's a terrible place, and Tango still fears that he will be sent back there if the others find out. He carefully avoids talking about his past, but it all comes crashing down when his trauma comes back to haunt him and his soulmate, Jimmy, during Double Life.

5/5 I have very little critique for this story. It's one of my favorites! I highly recommend that you read this if you are a Hermitcraft fan, and don't mind a little traffic light shipping. This is a Ranchers fic. It is w o n d e r f u l. The dynamic between soulmates is beautiful, especially when it comes to the way that the both of them treat their trauma. The depth of the story and context is done really well, and it's pace is almost perfect! I was a little impatient in a few places where we were in Hels with the other guy (I won't spoil) but that was because I wanted more time with the Ranchers. The realism in the characters reactions and behavior is awesome, and it's balanced well with the story's content. I could read this over and over again and learn new perspectives. It jumps back and forth from a few different POVS, but I think that adds to the story. One thing I did wish for was more time spent with Tango's backstory after leaving Hels. And the end did feel a little rush, but it's not too noticeable. Dialogue is done well, and the scene design is brilliant; I could SEE where everything was taking place. I can't express how much I love this fic. Definitely recommended to any hungry Life Series fan. first read this on their tumblr, https://www.tumblr.com/aquaquadrant/700769139366690816/hels-to-pay-au-directory?source=share, and I was blown away.

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A Review Of 'No Better Version of Me' by koreanrage, ReformedTsundere

https://archiveofourown.org/works/56085235/chapters/142454515

After Steve finds himself back in a body that never knew The Avengers, he must discover his purpose after steadying the ground beneath his feet with the help of his friends. Feeling powerless, can he really be worth much without his status as the great Captain America?

4/5 I really enjoyed this! I think the biggest thing that really stood out to me was the detail in emotion and environment. I feel like there could have been more pertaining to a deeper understanding of what Steve was struggling with and more plot to his recovery, but I think the cozy writing style made up for that! I appreciate the emphasis on the overall theme of the story; There is no better version of yourself that you should be comparing yourself to. I think it was packaged very nicely with how it ended. This is a Stucky endgame. But it’s done so delicately that you can’t help but be in awe with the tenderness of a single moment.