Lsh walked into the room, sipping his coffee. Cjs was running on the treadmill with his headphone on. Krs and Raon were sitting on the rug talking about something. Krs looked to be on the verge of pulling his hair out.
Lsh silently edged to where cjs had been standing.
"Do you know what they are talking about?"
"No idea. But they've been at it for an hour. Best stay away from Rok Soo. He might actually set someone on fire"
"....Right," lsh turned around and left the room altogether. He was a smart man and would stay away from krs for at least 6hrs.
Meanwhile krs and Raon:
(ch 8 is up)
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this boho cc that everyone is posting cause of horse pack is my NIGHTMARE we were supposed to get workwear not THIS
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I finished As Good As Dead 5 minutes ago and like
BWAHAHAHAAAHAHAAA
Take that back.
WHAT DO YOU MEAN, “Hey, Sarge, remember me?”
CRYING, WEEPING, PULLING MY HAIR OUT, PUNCHING THE WALL, SCREAMING WHAT THE FUCKKK
I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMOREEEE
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My second announcement is kind of longer, but here goes.
There’s been a couple of factors that’s kept me from continuing to write aside from just my time, or lack thereof, and health complications that seem to always get in the way. Not complaints but relevant factors to those waiting on updates.
1. Getting hacked twice in a row sucked ASS.
2. I’ve started to drift a bit from Bucky in general. I still love him but the lack of content of him the MCU since Endgame, or even TFATWS, has been killer. No inspiration anymore. The fandom has changed.
3. This is one that has silently bothered me the most for quite some time even though it’s been so long but it mattered to me.
Something that has also been getting in the way of me updating Take It Back 2 has been the issues I had with the first one that I never got around to fixing or acknowledging.
If you’ve read book 2 at all you might understand this a little bit better.
Granted, I was younger when I wrote the first book and i’ve grown since then, and maybe that’s why I felt the need over time to make some certain changes or explain things in the story better. Who knows. But…
* I never liked how I made it seem like the reader (Or Riley Grace, if you’ve read the OC version) was very anti money, anti having anything material. That was never my intention. And I noticed that I made her seem that way. Yes, I wanted her to be concerned that her sister was putting those things first before everything else and also concerned that something was wrong, but not that Riley/Reader was against money or life in general. She isn’t by any means frugal or cheap.
* I didn’t make it clear enough in Book 1 that there was underlying things happening to Ashlyn that was pushing her “gold digger” tendencies, or for that to appear as so, to the forefront. There was more things happening to her.
* I didn’t like how little I let it show that her and Bucky do share this love and respect that Reader, and the actual readers themselves, haven’t seen. I feel like I made Ashlyn too cold and not as much mysterious.
* I always found Bucky and Reader a bit too self centered and conceited to themselves and what they thought was an issue and making their problems seem bigger than everyone else’s. As well as making what they thought what they thought was more important than Ashlyn herself or without considering her own life and her own emotions.
* Despite Ashlyn doing what she did and behaving the way she did, something always rubbed me the wrong way about how I made the girls view her in the story. Ashlyn might not be innocent, but I did not like how I made Reader/Riley appear like she was more supported by the other girls in the story when what she had done was also not good.
* How people let what Bucky and Reader did “let it slide.”
So they were little things, but things that always bothered me and was honestly getting in the way of me continuing the sequel. It was mostly my distaste I had on the Bucky/Reader front. I wanted them to love and love deeply, but not while disregarding Ashlyn as a human being and as a woman.
So the last few weeks, i’ve gone back and i’ve corrected some major grammatical issues in the first book, but i’ve also added some sentences here and there. I’ve also added on some dialogue to correct some of the issues I had that were listed above. So I didn’t remove anything, the story is still the same, but I did add onto it.
I’m much happier with the outcome and I think it will making going forward easier for me as a story teller.
The updated one is updated on Wattpad and AO3, the Bucky/Reader version. I haven’t posted the corrected one on Tumblr yet.
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