#entrodder verse

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Padawan Pairing And Placement

OT Padawan Time Warp

The conundrum I’m faced with when the OT Padawans are thrown back in time is figuring out where to put them. Because they’re going to end up with Anakin or Obi-Wan.

Originally, I was going to pair them off. Give two to Anakin and two to Obi-Wan. It was probably going to be Luke and Leia to Anakin and Maia and Ezra to Obi-Wan.

BUT THEN I REALIZED. Anakin already has Ahsoka, so he’d have THREE teenagers to look after. So there was really no other option but to give Obi-Wan four teenagers to corral. Cody and Kyszeine are there, though, so he’ll survive.

I also was determining the dynamics between the OT Padawans, and which of them should never be paired together,,, so here:

Luke & Leia and Maia & Ezra

Not a great pairing for missions. Luke & Leia can get the job done, but need 20 extra minutes because they constantly bicker. Luke is a peaceful guy normally, but Leia shoves when she argues, and then all bets are off. They aren’t really great for stealth missions, better suited as direct assaults. Maia & Ezra work well together, but spend half their time and energy watching the other’s back. They can and will put the mission first, but waste valuable time making sure there won’t be a need to.

Leia & Maia and Luke & Ezra

Both of these pairings are bad choices for stealth missions. Leia & Maia bicker, but loudly. There have been multiple occasions where they ended up shouting and didn't realize. Never assign them together for stealth/diplomatic missions. Luke & Ezra fall prey to the phenomenon where when teenagers are put in a room together, they lose all braincells. The personification of looking for the lightsaber held in hand.

Maia & Luke and Leia & Ezra

The best pairings actually. Maia & Luke look like disasters, but they’re actually the most efficient of any pairing. No one knows why. Most of their plans involve either crazy flying or dropping from absurd heights to surprise the enemy. You know how Anakin is a brilliant pilot primarily because he survives terrible situations he recklessly flew into? Well Maia and Luke are just great pilots, no reckless flying added. Leia & Ezra become really responsible when they are paired together. Send them on diplomatic missions to give Obi-Wan a break. They’re crazily efficient just so they can get back to philosophical debates about how whether or not reinstating the Senate will actually do anything for Lothal poverty rates, for example. Have managed to hold a shouted debate across the battlefield and not have their performance suffer.

All four together

Work best as a team and round each other out well. They are very very chaotic. They were the only force-sensitive teenagers - only teenagers period - in the rebellion, so their “manic teen get together” energy is on all the time. However, they were raised in the rebellion, so they know how to buckle down and focus. They’re used to playing as a team and having to watch each others’ backs. Scarily competent and quick on the uptake despite never having engaged in frontline warfare. Also just a bunch of 15 year olds, so take that as you will.

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The Ralmanike

Let’s Save Ani AU

Preface

The ralmanike is a collection of myths/stories that serve as a substitute for a cultural faith. They were originally created to be cautionary tales, lessons, or just entertainment with cultural importance, and people of significance were named after them. But as time went on, Huilatir wove their dead into their stories. Each Homestead had different versions or even different stories, which were eventually collected after the Slave Revolution. These are just some of the ones I came up with.

[People who were named after them]

Tyrixe the Healer

[Allora Ixe]

hhhhh

Kahl-Enna of the Stone

[Deroq Enna]

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Entrodder who led to Freedom

[Kyszeine Entrodder, Zal Entrodder]

aaa

Vishelth who brought Vengeance

[]

aaa

Mesx the Wanderer

[]

ahahaha

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A Guide to Huilati

Let’s Save Ani Au

Preface

Huilati is a very loose and contextual language for a couple reasons. One is that making a language is hard and a lot of work, so I cheated a bit. I made phrases first and then realized there should be language rules, which I promptly decided to ignore. Two, is that the language is less meant to serve the purpose of communicating complex messages, and is more a deeper level of culture. Names have meaning, and phrases in Basic or any other language that have a deep cultural connection are translated into Huilati. Third, as more of the ralmanike is created, more of the language is created. Huilati is a constantly evolving language that is routed in the circumstance of the community. When the Slave Revolution happened, words gained new meanings. Additionally, there was more time to flesh out the language, so it’s really half-crafted. Therefore, I’ll mark significant definitions that only came about after the Revolution with *

Variations of Huilatir

Huilatir: Bounded liberty (lit.), slaves

Huilati: Language of Huilatir

Huilat: Culture of Huilatir

Huilatin: Unbounded liberty (lit.)*, freed Huilatir*

[Although this word could technically be applied to freeborns from slave families, it was only created after the Slave Revolution}

Related to the Slave Revolution

Ornaku: Villain of the free (lit.), slaver, slavemaster

Verolatun: Downfall to villains of the free (lit.), reclaiming of freedom (lit.), unchaining of bounded liberty (lit.), revolution for those who should be free (lit.), slave rebellion.

Ylondar: Forbidden from ornaku (lit.)*, planet of the free (lit.)*

Ship Names

Vishelthir: Will of Vishelth (lit.)

Verola: Death of Huilatir (lit.), reclaimed freedom (lit.), liberty

Related to the Force

Forelum: Breath of the galaxy (lit.), bridge between stars (lit.), the Force

Alokrit: One who can but does not force (lit.), one with breath (lit.), Akrolite

Jediye: Jedi

Cultural Traditions

Ralmanike: Myths with more truth than stars (lit.), a collection of stories substitute a cultural faith.

Grofeniye: The mourning practices.

Designation??

Atayama: One I gift my chains (lit.)

[A person loved and trusted deeply. Someone who is trusted to not abuse the power you give them over yourself]

Ayamata: One who holds my heart (lit.)

[A person loved platonically; applies to family or close friends]

Ataya: One who has been gifted chains (lit.), spouse

[Same connotation as Atayama, just indicates that a wedding ceremony has happened]

Tir’ama: One who shares the chain (lit.), family

[Indicates chosen family]

Tir’e: Younglings

Tir: Youngling

Expressions

Atayamara: I gift you my chains (lit.), I'm in love with you

[Intense declaration of love. Generally used romantically, but just indicates a deep trust and connection]

Ayamatara: I acknowledge you hold my heart (lit.), I love you

[Platonic/casual/familial expression of love]

Tor’o gehsaiya: Thank you for returning (lit.), welcome home (lit.), hello

[Expression of greetings indicating gratefulness for the ability to return. Originally used in the context of slaves separated for labor reuniting]

Gorokaye okatu: May you break the chain (lit.), have a good life/future

[An expression of well wishes]

Grofiye enatu: May they be free of all chains (lit.), may they rest in peace

[Expression of condolences, said during grofeniye]

Breakdown of a phrase

Dhues’e-sae forelum, prac’assa Alokrit. Dhues’e’assa Jediye: They use the Force, but are not Akrolite. They are Jedi.

Dhues’e: They (plural), they all

Dhues: They (singular)

Sae: Use

[Denotes action, indicates presence of verbs]

Prac: No, not

[A denial, a negative]

Assa: Are, is

[Indicates state of being, present tense]

Misc.

Tor’o gehsai: A handshake

[Physical greeting paired with tor’o gehsaiya]

Wryken: In general

[Used to specify a statement not referring to the immediate situation/surroundings]

{Ornaku prac’assa huilatir: The slaver is not a slave

Wryken ornaku prac’assa huilatir: Slavers are not slaves}

Notes

- I’ve decided, the language is gender neutral.

- There is no word for the. It’s specified if the noun is being talked about in general, but assumed to be referring to the current situation if not.

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Dead Rebellion Worldbuilding

OT Padawan Time Warp

The biggest difference in this rebellion is that everyone didn't split up. Luke and Leia were raised together as the rebellion grew around them.

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Ylondar Worldbuilding

Let’s Save Ani AU

Right so, Ylondar is where the Entrodders are from. It’s essentially a smaller sized Tatooine in terms of slavery. A lot of Ylondar’s slave culture is inspired by fialleril's Tatooine slave culture, which exists in-verse.

Ylondar is a relatively small planet with one sun, four moons and a diverse climate. It’s the source of a lot of exported goods, and is capable of self-sufficiency. It’s actually a pretty inconveniently place planet, which is why it isn’t under Hutt control despite being a slave planet in the Outer Rim.

The Slave Revolution marked a huge shift in the planet, so everything will be broken up as before and after.

Government Structure; Before the Revolution

The population is primarily slaves (the majority) and slavemasters. Any government structure is only accessible to the slavemasters, so it’s torn down pretty quickly in my writings. It’s also a fancy way of saying I don’t really have many ideas about it.

From what I do have, there are a bunch of cities/ports that are basically self-governed and only bother with each other so they can tell the Hutts to go away because they do have a central government, see?

Very rarely are there any regular citizens on Ylondar and most of them are freeborns from slave families, so the divide between Master and Slave is greater than on Tatooine. Ylondar is essentially just a planet-factory, so the slavemasters are overseers who live there for the sake of profiting.

Slave Culture - Huilat; Before the Revolution

The slaves on Ylondar are the Huilatir, which means bounded liberty in Huilati - the slave language. Huilat traditions are constantly evolving, similar to it’s language, and most are spoken in some nature so they can’t be stolen away by Masters.

The oldest of the Huilatir are called the Grandelders. They are regarded as the wise ones, but aren’t inherently the leaders of the community. Grandelders have a large part in corralling the community, passing on the culture, and providing advice because they were wise to have survived so long. Leaders or important members of the community are named after figures in their myths.

Huilatir don’t practice religion, because they view acknowledging a higher being as giving them power over the Huilatir. Which, you know, is something they’re already dealing with. Instead, they have the ralmanike, which are stories that are lessons or warnings or reminders.

Homestead is the slave barracks. There are multiple Homesteads across the planet, and they are one of the very few things the Masters don’t interfere with because the Huilatir were forced to build their shelter themselves. Homesteads have a hidden room where important gatherings are held, or where the infants and sick are kept, or where Huilati is taught.

Okay, so funeral practices, called a grofeniye. They don’t get the dead back a lot of the time, so there isn’t a set rule for dealing with the bodies. In terms of a service, they light a small candle and sing mourning songs until it goes out. Then, whoever died is woven into the ralmanike in someway - it can be as a minor character or a legend.

The Huilatir are very community driven, so pretty much everything is communal property. Like, obviously you should ask before you take a person’s shirt, but because they need a shirt, not necessarily because it’s theirs to own. It seems like it would be reinforcing slave mentality, but it’s more because if a community has access to a thing, it’s harder for the thing to be taken away as punishment to an individual.

In terms of lineages and things, Huilatir don’t tend to have last names: those are reserved for leaders and important people. There is more of a focus on chosen family, but there is a word for biological family in Huilati. It’s non descriptive, and just acknowledges shared blood. Biological families are kept track of by the name of an ancestor of importance (i.e. Mesx of Quirital).

Government Structure; After the Revolution

The Revolution was extremely recent, and the government is in constant development as society settle in, so a lot of my ideas are “sounds better in theory than practice”. A lot of it is riding in the fact that the entire society is made up of former slaves and people who were raised on the Huilat. But these are the barebones.

The Huilatir were reluctant to have one person or a group of people with power over the rest. They ended up with making Homesteads places people could bring their grievances to. The first built Homestead became the headquarters, but are connected to the others by holocall (like how the Jedi Council held meetings, yeah?).

There’s essentially a board of Grandelders and community leaders - renamed Organizers - that mediate issues and give guidance (I’m thinking along the lines of The Two Sons of Tatooine by ChronicBookworm). The dynamic is a lot like a Socratic Seminar, where there are people leading the discussion, but anyone can jump in and provide points. All discussions are open doors because all the Huilatir have had is people making decisions about them and for them. Ylondar is pretty isolationist, so they rarely need a designated representative, but on the occasions they do, it’s one of the Grandelders.

In terms of the economy,, I’ve said before that Ylondar could self-sufficient, and now it is. Because they don’t need to interact with other planets, there’s a lot of freedom with currency. In the end, the idea of communal possession/contribution carries over. A local ledger is created for each Homestead, where people log what task they do each day, whether it be farming or construction or cooking etc. There are more permanent jobs like teaching or running freedom raids, and those are logged in the ledger as longterm as opposed to day to day.

Obtaining products is essentially just asking tbh. Like, workers make things because they want to make them, but also to contribute to the community. They provide what the community needs first, and then provide for people who ask. Because obtaining things is really easy their isn’t a need for theft?? It just wouldn't make sense.

A thing I struggled on was how to deal with crimes. My thinking is the person is given the option between banishment, running freedom raids, or working an assigned job. The banishment is along the lines of “these are the rules of the community, and if you can't respect that, go find a community you can.”

Ylondar is decidedly neutral in conflicts, but accepts refuges and freed slaves from all planets.

Slave Culture - Huilat; After the Revolution

Okay so, there’s an influx of freed slaves from other planets because the Huilatir decide to spread freedom across the galaxy. Because of that, elements of other slave cultures are added into the Huilat, with the acceptation of religion (it’s not disallowed, but it’s recognized as a part of the other culture).

Organizers move from making decisions for the slave community to being in charge of big projects like spearheading new construction, expanding agriculture, organizing an education system, leading freedom runs etc.

Cities/ports are referenced by which Homestead they surround. Homesteads are named after one of the original figures in the ralmanike. Instead of the port Mos Eisley, for example there’s Homestead Entrodder.

Now that there is guaranteed access to the dead, there are funeral pyres. They are lit with the candle that is sung around. With the weaving the dead into the ralmanike, I imagine that there’s a statue of the local Homestead’s namesake in the center of town. At the feet of the statue is a projected holobook, essentially. The stories are all recorded and can be added to, but now all of the versions from different Homesteads are in one place. Because the revolution is added to the ralmanike, it serves as a condensed cultural history book.

One random thing is that meals, but dinner (or latemeal) especially is communal, in the sense that it’s gotten from one place. There tends to be large platters (dishes? containers?) laid out that people serve themselves from, and sharing food is a large part of  reinforcing the community or welcoming people to it.

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Akrolite Worldbuilding

Entrodder Legacy AU

Akrolian is the planet, Akrol is the native species, Akrolian is in reference to the planet (someone raised on the planet, or a product from there), Akrolite is the sect of Force-users.

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Character Profiles

OT Padawan Time Warp

Maia Entrodder-Kenobi - They/them/theirs, they like dudes. Oldest of the padawans by a couple months.

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Character Profiles

Entrodder Legacy AU

Kyszeine Entrodder - She/her/hers, heterosexual (?).

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Character Profiles

Let’s Save Ani AU

Kyszeine Entrodder - She/her/hers, heterosexual (?). Oldest Entrodder sibling.

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OT Padawan Time Warp

Spans The Clone Wars. The padawans from the Original Trilogy get thrown back in time to The Clone Wars, are faced with young versions of their parents, and proceed to cause breakdowns while trying to assassinate Palpatine and free the Vode.

Character Profiles

Dead Rebellion Worldbuilding

Padawan Pairing And Placement

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Let’s Save Ani AU

Spans the Prequel and Original Trilogy and The Clone Wars. Anakin doesn’t fall to the dark side, but everything still goes to shit. The Entrodder siblings started a slave rebellion and learned from the Akrolite much less formally. Strong themes of slave revolutions. A semi fix-it?

Character Profiles

Ylondar Worldbuilding

A Guide to Huilati

The Ralmanike

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Entrodder Legacy AU

Spans all nine movies plus Rogue One. Delves into alternate views of the Force, Han Solo is reluctantly Force-sensitive and accidentally becomes a vital part of the Entrodder freedom trail.

Character Profiles

Akrolite Worldbuilding

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Masterpost

AO3, Wattpad

DCU

The Winters Are Coming ‘Verse - Originally just giving Bruce Wayne a best friend so he had a support system and room to be a better person, but then evolved into melding the Young Justice cartoon and the comics with the addition of Gotham collecting metahumans (which Bruce can’t do anything about because they’re friends with his kids).

The Winters Are Coming - Focused a lot on world building, because I sincerely believe that had Bruce Wayne had adult friends who forced him into therapy when he started his vigilante career he would have been more well adjusted. Spans from the introduction of Bruce Wayne and Zaira Winters onward.

Twist of Fate - Rewriting the Young Justice cartoon in my universe, but the Light is defeated at the end of Season Two because I said so.

@herowatch-official - Role-play blog. Herowatch’s official Tumblr.

@calendar-man-stan - Role-play blog. Random Gothamite’s Tumblr.

Harry Potter

The Wave of a Wand ‘Verse - How inter-house friendships demonstrate that the power of friendship is actually a thing.

Us Curious Creatures - Marauders Era. Basically I made a group of penpals that ran away from me and now Sirius has another family and Remus has a girlfriend. Setting up a fix-it.

The Wave of a Wand - Golden Trio Era. Focused on inter-house friendships because it’s poor writing to say all Slytherins are evil. A fix-it.

Star Wars

Entrodder ‘Verse - Introducing the Akrolite, a sect of Force users separate from the Jedi. Themes of slave rebellion. 

Entrodder Legacy AU - Spans all nine movies plus Rogue One. Delves into alternate views of the Force, Han Solo is reluctantly Force-sensitive and accidentally becomes a vital part of the Entrodder freedom trail.

Let's Save Ani AU - Spans the Prequel and Original Trilogy and The Clone Wars. Anakin doesn’t fall to the dark side, but everything still goes to shit. The Entrodder siblings started a slave rebellion and learned from the Akrolite much less formally. Strong themes of slave revolutions. A semi fix-it?

OT Padawan Time Warp - Spans The Clone Wars. The padawans from the Original Trilogy get thrown back in time to The Clone Wars, are faced with young versions of their parents, and proceed to cause breakdowns while trying to assassinate Palpatine and free the Vode.

Sentinel ‘Verse - Investigating the Unifying Force and how it could change the course of the galaxy - and how it could save the Mandalorians.

Sentinel Saves the Day AU - Spans pre-The Phantom Menace, The Clone Wars, and the Prequel Trilogy. Obi-Wan has visions and a best friend who isn’t putting up with everyone’s bs. Jaster Mereel and the True Mandalorians live, and that changes very little actually, but just enough. A fix-it.

Anakin Dyad AU - Basically just Sentinel Saves the Day, but if Lykita and Anakin had a Dyad. A fix-it speed run.

Sith Kid ‘Verse - There’s a new Sith on the field and it’s a kid. Obi-Wan Kenobi and Plo Koon have a problem with this.

Sith Kid AU - Spans The Clone Wars. You know those fics where it's like, “Anakin was taken from slavery by Palpatine and raised a Sith”? Basically that but with another character. Codywan adopts local feral Sith child and it saves the universe. A fix-it.