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1933 Panhard & Levassor X72 Panoramique (by Wouter Bregman)
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The Quest Continues...
(part 1- part 2)
#Fourfold Soul#<- That's the title of the project I've been working on!#I am very excited to finally show off the cowboy (gender redacted) I've been cooking in a slow boil!!! Yeehaw!#Yes this is the game project. YES I am commited to the bit of having the main character go through a long running pronoun-quest.#This character does not have a name so I cannot formally tag them...#(Okay. Technically they have an internal name for coding/scripting reasons...and I have a nickname for them.#But the important part of making a video game character you get to eventually name is that the name must come from *you*!)#The girl here is a npc so she has a temporary name. So I also cannot tag her. Hmm...#I have several FFS comics thumbnailed out. This one got made first because it's the funniest without context. Lore wise it's weak.#I would love to post the sexy clown but you have to wait just a few more comics.#Fun artist woes moment to share: This is the first time I've had to colour these characters traditionally. *That* was NOT fun.#Going from a specific digital colour palette to being at the whims of my limited colour choices in markers? Hell! On! Earth!#I might also be extra frustrated because this sure is 3x the length of what I usually do for comics! I spent a Whole Day on this.#Past me thought it was soooo funny and needed all the extra panels for pacing. I hate past me. That guy needs to be exploded.
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little images while i draw something more substantial
#transformers#cyclonus#galvatron#galvacyc#my art#galvs on the LL is just so real to me now. its too real#u know i think the inclusion of an alpha male on the LL could disrupt the betamale ecosystem on there#i have another comic scripted i just need to actually draw it#''scripted'' makes it seem so formal when it is in fact nothing more than car robot fanfiction in the form of drawings#i jsut reread dark cybertron and these freaks really dont even interact with each other....... idk why but i thought i remembered#that they did...
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you ever think about how resident crypt baby ingellvar rook's baseline for how 'normal' looks in a non-nevarran is going to be varric tethras. of literally all people in the whole entire world (my heart full of endless affection for them both)
#rye and varric as the miles morales and peter b parker meme at all times hours my friends#the deaf leading the blind 2 b sure but they did save the world about it together eventually so y'know we must take those#dragon age#dragon age: the veilguard#oc: Ellaryen Ingellvar#varric tethras#varric seeing rook look confused about commonplace sights and being like 'OH yeah🥹raised in a grave I almost forgot. okay there kid?'#da:o mage origins levels of 'has never even seen a tree before'#ingellvar's combo of being incredibly well educated and sharp and also having no idea of the day to day mundane workings of the world...#it does feel a bit like 'hey you want to do an autistic reading of the main character in this game. boy do we have the background for you'#they DO have scripts that have served them well! but all of them are way too formal and old-fashioned to work outside the necropolis#and now they're stuck sweating nervously just trying to wing it. 'how to sound like a normal person. what would varric say'#(they don't know chat. they don't know)
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“a naked girl pins her anguished prey to the ground... only: no. its taissa and van, making love.”
#I CANT BELIEVE THEY ACTUALLY WROTE THIS#THE LEAKED SCRIPT PAGES ARE MAKING ME INSANE#also I am once again asking for a formal written apology from anyone who doubted me when I said tai was a top#taivan#van x taissa#taissa x van
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fucking got him
#normally the hannibal scripts are very formal and poetic and using words like Misma and Laconic so it's extra fun when they're a little goo#hannibal#hannibal s3e5
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Anyways, to those who have been wondering what we've been doing during our impromptu Tumblr Vacation or whatever we're calling it, we've been trying to find a playthrough of Baldur's Gate 3 that is made by someone who doesn't annoy the shit out of us, and also tormenting Karlach Cliffgate (as you do)
#we speak#also sleeping. we have slept a lot. being in a school environment is exhausting.#its very hard to remember how much we generally enjoy learning when the environment itself is. that#but on the plus side our shittiest possible 40-minute 1k word essay with eight trillion loose lines we Could have connected#was apparently impressive enough that the people who were meant to be assessing it for If We Could Take The Course#as a preliminary instead just forwarded it as a formal application and it got through#we know we are better at writing and deconstructing that writing than most. however.#christ man there were like a dozen cracks in that essay reasoning and a trillion threads we left dangling#we know that directing you to see what the narrative is focusing on and nothing else is a skill we're good at#but like. this is like if we just shucked a pelt off with no processing and showed it to you. its not even scraped yet.#there are little bits of metaphorical fat and gristle all over the underside of this. you can feel them when picking it up.#we lost the plot of the original prompt halfway through to argue about anthrocentrism. it's messy work.#like its decent prose and if we polished it a bit it could probably be decent within the constraints but it's a 40 minute prompt and sloppy#we tabbed out of the test tab and started writing pokemon fanfiction instead of polishing it. and you think it's impressive?#we know we've spent like more than ten years writing and have read a lot even before that we just forget people have such low standards#...god hopefully this doesnt read as bragging. we are having the experience of like#we get out of the most physically and mentally fatiguing experience we've had for like Years after doing the Bare Minimum to not die#we have been outputting work that is sloppy and we are fully aware of it because we are too tired to put full effort into schoolwork#and we are still getting like. “oh wow this is so good youre so good at making things”#like man. we can do better than this. teacher was like “wow youd be a great script writer” we are good at dialogue but better at descriptio#and we weight. a lot of our capacity for dialogue. in our ability to have cues human people do not have. this will not work well on-screen#also that industry is one of the Many Many Industries that are super mega fucked up rn#and we do not work well with constantly changing expectations#we hope this is a fun glimpse into our current life btw we are finally on break and god. this is great. we can sleep now.
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Land 1 done!
Without crossing the bridge to get rekt'd by the final boss and trigger a bad ending, of course :p
I know the game puts more emphasis on gameplay than on characters, unlike, say, FE 8x2, but damn if every little situation you recruit random characters makes me think of past FE events in different titles and it just... fits? Somehow?
Like, evil empire has trouble conquering a party of Cornia, but behold! A mysterious plague pops up, that is totally not tied to the shady as fuck necromancer who works with the evil empire and says it'd be annoying if people find a cure.
So we have some guy and his army of cleric wearing plague doctor masks trying to find a cure by, uh, experimenting/working on people who already caught the plague, even accepting to work with the evil empire because curing the plague is more important, right?
Ends justify means yadda yadda... save for the part I earlier mentionned, that it is heavily implied the evil empire is the one who created that plague to begin with!
Now, imagine in a FE game if, in the background, we had to rescue people or hear about people being afflicted by a strange and unknown disease... and if that disease was engineered by people for a further motive...
8x2? Nah.
We also have quests where people are fighting for the evil empire who is occupying their land because they believe as long as they obey their people won't be put to the sword...
(I watched my bro play the final chapter, we know how it ends lol)
Not!Cyril fighting against bandits, finding and helping a witch fend off people who are trying to "catch her" - we even get a flimsy excuse for a bikini attire in the process and an answer to the "why do i use spells to rejuvenate myself in a sexy body? It's because I won't be able to move as fast as I can now if I was a crone" other flimsy excuse, etc etc.
Now it's time to enter the land of fucked up siblings relationship (sure Virginia is Alain's cousin - who looks like his mom - and can end up with him, but this is not the kind of Jugdralian stuff I had in mind) and let me tell you, all those plot bunnies I had in Jugdral about Lester believing he was going to become Lord of Jungby all of his life, only to have his role/throne snatched before his eyes by a bum who's apparently his cousin and can use the legendary shiny bow of legend is... basically Drakengard (Drakenhold in english?), but up to eleven.
Ah, and it wouldn't be a post from me if I don't find a way to rant about the localisation lol
Josef, upon meeting Virginia, basically goes in the audio "it's been a long time since I last saw you". In the english version?
Like what are you implying Josef, she wasn't a princess when you saw her last time or didn't have the "standing" fit for a princess?
Besides, I hope the release of the october book won't blow a hole in the Josef's "you were a teenager when we last met" by releasing character ages, but that's not really that important.
This however
Alain greets his long lost cousin, nothing wrong here right?
Well, in the JP audio, he calls her with the "hime" suffix, showing as much deference as Josef, who is a retainer of the royal family. Virginia doesn't use any suffix because that's her, but in Alain's various support convos, we learn that he had to learn and to behave like a proper noble after escaping from his castle 7 years ago, and all this noble/formal stuff is something he doesn't use with his commoner friends.
Ergo, this minor thing here is important, especially in the Drakengard themes : siblings/relatives used to be close, but reuniting after a long period of time or several life changing events, they are changed and even if they want and try to, cannot be as close as they once were.
#unicorn overlord stuff#i guess the loc can fancy the script if they want#but sometimes adding too much can be counterproductive#and why the crap did they erase the suffix/aka formal way Alain uses to talk to the cousin#who was like a sister to him and to whom he used to confide to when he was a kid?#medieval 'realist!!!' flair is a box already ticked with#second son having to ascend the throne by mistake as his dad and older brother died/are missing#and the previous king accepting to foster the exiled princess only if she marries his first born#to later free and actually conquer her kingdom#granted with Alain here Virginia's dreams of restoring her land and being the next monarch melted#and this is fucking adressed in the game#both in an event in a support/rapport convo like#now that I can finally have 4 people squads the game is like#opening an entire new can of strategy/possibilities#but plz for naga's sake Travis stop tanking things with your face#you're supposed to dodge a 30% hit not eat it damn#Yana follows in her mentor's steps missing spells at 80% accuracy#I swear I legit wondered if I lost the prologue when Alcina missed at a random like lady#stop giving me more reasons to dislike you
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I am obsessed with how narratively convenient Lark's divinatory abilities are. She's the only one of the protagonists who is both pragmatic and has a working sense of self-preservation, so having some internal impulse that is actually the guiding hand of the cosmos pushing her into doing the REALLY stupid shit is both necessary and really useful.
Like, I am the type of writer who kind of scoffs at the idea that characters are beyond the writer's control and will completely screw over your outline, because on one hand, a sensible outline will follow the characters' personalities and tendencies anyway. Obviously in an ensemble cast you will need to do some wrangling, but in theory your characters are responding to varying degrees of stimuli in order to maneuver them into the places you need them to be for things to all come together in the end.
But more importantly, "curse from god" is the funniest and easiest way to push any character to do things beyond the realm of reason when necessary, and frankly, what the fuck is the point of playing god if you don't embrace that?
#midst podcast#midst spoilers#cr meta#anyway at all times I am advocating for taking full responsibility for your characters and overall story#this is also why I laugh at those posts like 'um if you're not going to treat your characters right then you shouldn't get custody of them'#sorry babe there is no CPS in my head. I am the cruel custodian and these are my poor darwinian orphans.#that's a joke but really like. look. yeah sometimes you gotta fabricate scenarios to make characters do what you want#but like... you do that by going 'who is this character and what would it take to push them to x'???#and especially in an ensemble cast sometimes that thing is 'curse from god' or 'divine insight'#fun fact: I LOATHE that post about 'my writing teacher made a joke that the characters are driving and the writer is locked in the trunk'#absolutely fucking hate it.#because THE WHOLE POINT OF FORMALLY LEARNING WRITING IS LEARNING HOW TO BE INTENTIONAL.#it is perfectly possible to write successfully without ever having a formal teacher but IF YOU HAVE A FORMAL TEACHER. UH.#like yeah yeah 'workshopping' but like. okay go build your own workshop group don't pay somebody jfc#(cuz it's not like most creative writing teachers know how to teach you to workshop. let's be fucking real.)#if you wanna learn how to workshop take a script class for the love of god.#ANYWAY rant over but I'm correct. the highest purpose of a writer is to be a control freak and to play god.
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CANT DECIDE WHETHER I WANT TO BE HIM OR DATE HIM
#FORMALLY SCRIPTING FOR OOO DR TONIGHT IM A BIT SCARED TO MAKE MYSELF AS SOMEONE WHO DOESNT ALREADY EXIST#BUT IT WILL BE WORTH IT I DONT HAVE TO CHOOSE THEN
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Local grandpa has autism, i don't make the rules
#He's just so formal#Like he has a script for any sort of interaction and its so unlike the culture He's born into#He's like super self conscious of speeching out of turn or impolitely#He's has a super strong moral sense!#I'm only a little into wano rn but dude was hyper fixated on Luffy lol#He's just giving late diagnosed#Jinbei#One piece
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i love when you can tell a character is clearly stressing out about not using keigo correctly in the original japanese but in english the formality isn’t as strict so he just seems really anxious over something barely perceivable. which is arguably even more in character for him
#eloise talks#eloise plays ffxiv#ffxiv spoilers#tbf I haven’t seen the original japnese script for this so I could be wrong#but id be surprised#what first person pronoun does graha use?#from vibes the exarch seems like a formal 私 but graha maybe 僕. 俺? eh seems a bit too rough for him#maybe if he’s trying to be more of an adventurer though
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I’ve been successfully peer reviewed and I’m pretty sure I now have tenure 💅
#196#rule#pokemon memes#neurodivergent shitposting#executive dysfunction#executive function? I don’t know her#story of my peer review:#had a formal diagnosis for adhd but not for ASD#went to a new psych to get back on medication#in the session we basically reviewed my original diagnosis#i left with a script for meds and with a shiny new ASD diagnosis#moral of the story: now that I have been peer reviewed and granted tenure#I can clearly armchair diagnose everyone in my life#and be 100% correct every time#this is not fallacious at all
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Okay I think I like raspberry pi. I think I like micro bit powered robots. It’s so much easier to learn how to make computers do bullshit things when I have a goal for an adorable tiny computer who is trying his best.
Also it’s really easy to win over staff on a technology when it is objectively adorable.
#programming#work stuff#I took one formal programming class and found it miserable#but so much of my job is using the crumbs of my computer knowledge for maximum flare#i can pretend to program in three functional languages and one Java based script language#I can hack out decent visuals from a good chunk of the Adobe suite#I do not know what I’m doing but the average person knows even less#jack of all trades
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i FINALLY finished my tactician run with shri’iia and saw the epilogue ‼️ for this run she was full Oathbreaker paladin.. I would’ve multi-classes to fighter but I wanted this to be a rp run which is kind of a bad choice for my first tactician playthrough but we didn’t need action surge by the end when we’re doing like 90 dmg smites lmfao.
anyway. THE EPILOGUE !! it was sooo cute 😭 kind of reminds me of a way shorter citadel dlc but it was def more satisfying than the previous ending.
these are my favourite dialogues though and it’s such a satisfying ending to Shri’iia’s character arc -
Shri’iia starting out as a paladin of Lolth (who worshipped her to the point of zealotry) gets forsaken by said goddess, her Oath - which is an extension of her persons and soul atp - gets broken - goes through a crisis of faith and identity, like she devoted her entire life to the spider queen how could she be abandoned so easily?, decides to pursue this strange freedom she’s been left with or else she will really have nothing, learns what that strange freedom means - she’s not bound to any tenets or dogma and every choice is hers to make for better or for worse. there is no outside approval or validation to seek, and every consequences are hers alone … accepts that newfound freedom and vows to never be bound by anything again - and if there are others who are bound against their will she will help them be free but only if they make that decision first. she will not make a decision for anyone’s path just as she won’t be following anyone’s will without question. she’s forging her own path ! going her own direction ! now she spends the rest of the journey learning more about the world because there is so much to it than what the spider queen tells you, and learning that there is more to life than living with fear and paranoia, and there is more to herself than she would’ve known and her worth is more than what she can offer to a fickle goddess who will abandon her when the mood strikes.
Like it’s SO satisfying to me watching how her character turns from someone who is so needlessly mean and cruel to someone who’s relatively decent by the end. I still think that she has a mean streak about her, and sometimes she can be kind of deranged lmfao but there is purpose and principle behind every decision she makes. Like these dialogues describes her to a T tbh like Shri’iia is not nice but she can be kind -
And before all this, Menzoberranzan was the only home she ever known. Lolth is the only thing she’s ever known. Leaving it all behind was a decision she didn’t make lightly because where else would she go when the world that you’ve known has thrown you away? And will probably hunt you down and kill you if you ever go back to it… and this new world that you’ve been thrown into is unpredictable, you don’t have that certainty or security that comes with following what is expected, but nevertheless she moves forward… she spends those days exploring this strange new world with her strange new freedom. She’s grown accustomed to the vastness of the sky, she falls in love with the stars in the night since they remind her of the glowing faerie fire in the city of spiders. She learns what home means for her, and she eventually makes it for herself bc no one can take it away if it’s hers !! She learns to love someone without the fear of betrayal and more importantly she learns to trust them !!! this line makes me saur 😭😭 because it’s like the TWO biggest fucking liars of the group who will most likely betray everyone if the need rises fall for each other then learns how to trust and eventually sees home in each other -
like they both used the other for their own gain (shri’iia to distract from the fact that her oath is broken since she’s still in denial/astarion bc he wanted to manipulate her for protection) what they failed to take in account is that they’re both clowns lmfao and not used to sincerity so when the affections actually started to become genuine and sincere, and the casual fucking turns into not so casual, and you start to overthink the smallest gestures you weren’t even paying attention to before they’re like 🧍♀️🤡🤡 ‼️ cue act 2 confession scene. then they start actually falling in love….. and learning what being in love means for them…. then they both learn how they want to be loved and how to live freely … making a home in each other … what started out as a fleeting fancy turning into something more genuine and sturdy- something they would’ve never thought of having before.
this is so long but I’m so happy with her journey she is so asos jaime writing in the white book [ he could write whatever he chose, henceforth. whatever he chose… ] coded to ME ‼️‼️‼️🫶🫶
#I loooove shri’iia so much she is my baby girl my wifey my everything#like quite literally I am her right hand arm man her confidant her silly rabbit does she call me that? no ☺️#I love her so much .. and doing a full oathbreaker run was so satisfying too bc a lot of dialogues fits with how I wanted her story to be#I also saved minthara this playthrough now I want to keep her I love the dynamic she has with shri’iia ..#like they’re both lolth paladins / oath of vengeance but minthara started out already on the top of their food chain#meanwhile shri’iia was on the bottom trying to reach the top … then the script flips and suddenly minty is following HER -#the common girl who lived in Eastmyr - who signed her autonomy away to taste a fraction of the power minthara had since birth#but instead of pursuing vengeance shri’iia decides to turn into a new path whereas minthara continued to follow it#now she’s bringing vengeance down in the underdark and recruiting drow rebels for her cause meanwhile shri’iia stayed in the surface to#learn more about the world .. like I think if she hadn’t abandoned her cause she would’ve def joined in the fuck lolth brigade#but now she’s like fuck lolth BUT I just saved the world and im looking for a cure for my vampire bf so im gonna go cash in some favours 🤭😋#I like it when they talk to each other too … just imagine how strange it is for them bc their society’s hierarchy is so ingrained in their#system that I think they will def slip back into old habits from time to time like minty treating her as some common person instead of an#equal ally loool .. and I think shri’iia will def catch herself using formalities around minty but she’d be like ? that’s not how it is#anymore … anyway long post sorry LOL I love my girl 🤭#I want to do yves playthrough next but how can I move on sigh …#shut up about bg3.
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Another batch or Mr. Puzzles quick sketches. I kept forgetting to draw his side pocket in the last couple ones. Random character featured in the little comic-ish Live Interview is some version of doodlesona. Can’t guarantee the dialogue will be believable/sound in character for Puzzles because honestly I’m still working on understanding his talking style and when he sarcastically jokes around or when he chooses to be serious and drop performance act. But in the off chance you wanna read it goes from left to right with reading
#GUYS it’s so hard drawing a character who uses his hands to communicate 24/7 jksjsksp PLEASE#my brain doesn’t know what pose to put him at any given time because he keeps SWITCHING inbetween words#he’s so animated and that’s why I love him so much expression and emotion in display#but I don’t like drawing hands at any given time if I can avoid it so screw him jskjso#the last two pages I think I’ve started to get a hang of how his expressions operate#still need to see if I can pull off the full range in my own style tho#and yes I inserted my silly doodle sona in the interview segment hello wazzup lol#although it’s very much a caricature because in reality I have no issues being on film. Been doing that since I was a toddler it’s natural#was even in a production class in high school operating camera equipment like I honestly love it#speaking of that art…still trying my best to figure out how his dialogue is meant to sound?#like I’ve always struggled with writing character dialogue I’m unfamiliar with the style of#thing is I’m good at acting the part if you give me a script to follow and example of tone inflections#but writing it from scratch is a whole nother struggle#so I’m sorry if it doesn’t feel on point I’ll try to get better at analyzing his speech patterns#honestly think I made it too formal sounding here? Or jumbled in some parts because I was stumped on how he’d translate thoughts to words#still fun interaction tho!#like I think he’d try his best to drop a few moments of empathy and try to get someone with anxiety to feel comfortable#but he’s also got the ratings to worry about and can’t afford it being ruined by someone’s anxiety hiccup#so kinda treading the line of being compassionate and giving advice to calm them v.s impatience to get the show rolling#or something idk still trying to analyze him and how he reacts to given circumstances#can you tell I think way too deeply about all this trivial stuff?#doodles#sketches
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