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#hellav boss rewrite
fizzy0bloom · 1 year
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how to fix s2ep 2:
well that ep was something for sure
My grip with it is that Loona and Octavia barely had any time together till the end, and it felt bland for me, and the plot lines are just all over the place.
and, of course, blitz and stolas.
1: Just Loona and via having fun no need for the other plot lines :
Just like the title said, it just intrudes on Loona and Octavia's having quality step-sibling time and getting to know each other better. simple and short 
2: Same thing, but loona and via get more time but -:
So a fight ensued between loona and moxxie  loona is lazy; m&m are calssit again, and then showing blitz trying to fix it but ending up with him trying to groud her, so she storms off because her father sided with them then her (she doesn't hit him but just screems and hits the door), which left blitz rethinking what he did and what m&m did. (Loona isn't incoont, but she felt bad because her father sided with Calsist.)
Meanwhile, octavia is trying to talk to her mother and father, but they are busy bitching with each other. and Barly told her anything or take her to her magic lessons (I couldn't think of a better step up, sorry), she felt neglectful again. after they promised to care for her again 
So she ran off—not to the earth yet. (Loona and Via follow each other on Instagram or whatever they call it there.)
Loona is outside, smoking or drinking. and open her account and see a new post by via venting, or maybe she's online and posted something, idk. So loona thinks to herself that she didn't immediately know her future sister and that she and her may share the same interests. Maybe she wants a new friend. So she messages her and asks her to meet and have fun.
via agree, since she doesn't have anything to do. 
They both start to talk sh*t about their situation. and other stuff; they are both on the same page. Loona then asks her if she has ever seen Earth. and was surprised. She didn't go 
yk what happens next :) Let's say they are having a blast there hehe with a cute montage of Loona being a big sister to her 
Meanwhile, Blitz got worried because his daughter did not answer his calls after talking with m&m about their classism and promising them that he would work on Loona's behavior.
He then notices that the book is gone! then called stolas 
They both agreed to ignore what happened before and focus on finding their kids while m&m stayed in the office or helped, but they didn't get much screen time.
They found them with Stolas magic later on. because Blitz called him late (Loona is an adult too, so he wasn't that worried).
They have an awkward time, but then Loona expresses her feelings to her dad, and they begin to talk 
For Via and Stolas, Via only said sorry for going out and got home fast, leaving her dad confused.
Stolas Look at Blitz and tell him to be more careful. next time 
(Btw, they all have their human disguises too, just to remind you )
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