#im not okay outtake 2

[vinelark]

please share some outtakes im on my knees

oh man most of my outtakes are like, slight paragraphs/scene rewrites, but here are some bbts lines/alternate dialogue options that didn't make the cut!

chapter 1:

But it’s not like Tim could’ve told the kidnappers to call Bruce right away, not until today’s little attempt, which was another check in the failure column. No one else knows Tim has been practically living at Wayne Manor, and if they did it might raise too many questions. Tim can’t create an unnecessary trail of connections between Bruce Wayne and a random kid, especially a random kid in a situation where superheroes and vigilantes might then show up. He knows too well how quickly those connections can snowball if someone puts together one right conclusion, like hold on, Robin just did a quadruple flip—

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sb aww are you jealous robin excuse me sb that no one’s made @robinsass yet robin absolutely not kon i said i’m not KON. sb http://twitter.com/robinsass i got u robin i’m calling oracle sb no worries i have five backup urls robin joke’s on you anyway unlike nightwing there are no hq photos of me. also i wear a cape. why do you think i wear a cape kon sb to cover the fact that you have no ass : (

chapter 2:

“Oh, no,” Tim wheezes when he’s done hacking up half the marina. He twists to sit heavily on the wet concrete and starts scrabbling at his shoelaces. “My shoes.”

Kon rolls his eyes. That’s it. No more saving rich kids; Kon is putting a wealth cap on all future damsels in distress. “I’m sure they’ll dry.” Or he can buy a new pair—Kon had looked Tim up after the whole kidnapping thing, just to make sure he healed up okay and everything. Kid’s parents are definitely loaded.

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“Hey—Superboy, hey, are you good at beer pong?”

“Uh,” Kon says. “For PR reasons I don’t think I should answer that.” The answer is that he has no clue, having never played, but if he said that then half the media would have a field day with how his lack of cliché teenage rebellion secretly indicated he wasn’t so human after all. If he lied and said yes, somehow that same half of the media would clutch their pearls over him being a Bad Influence.

“Oh,” Tim says. “Well. Well, I am very good at it.”

“Um. Okay.”

Tim’s face falls. Kon has no idea why he suddenly feels guilty about this.

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"But for the record, I’m not scared of you,” Red Hood says. “All I have to do is press a button and have Batman run you out of town if you get too annoying.”

“Batman is off-world,” Kon says, a little smugly.

Hood glares through his mask in a way that tells Kon he knows that, and is annoyed that Kon does too. Good. “Then I guess that leaves me in charge.”

chapter 3:

“What are you going to get Superboy?” Steph says. “Maybe a nice cheese plate?”

“I am going to frame Dick for tax fraud,” Tim mutters. He’s taken to hiding the charcuterie board Kon made in one of his city caches now, because Dick kept sneaking it onto the dinner table every time he visited the manor.

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“What the—” Muffled talking on the other end. “He says he’s not sure,” the girl says to someone else. “Tim, explain this to me in small words.”

“Um.” Tim rubs his temple. “I’m with Superboy. He—found me. And took me somewhere, somewhere safe, so I’m okay for now.”

It does not escape Kon’s notice that Tim doesn’t mention the part where he apparently gave his gas mask to a kid and got a full dose of fear toxin. He raises an eyebrow, but Tim is doing a great job of avoiding eye contact.

There’s a long beat. “Oh my god,” the girl says.

“Yeah.”

“Oh my god. You are so lucky I don’t have time for follow-up questions. Call me as soon as you’re home.”

(bonus chapter 4:

Kon spares a moment to be impressed that Tim has already figured out where they are, and says, “Because any good date starts with a good snack.”

Tim’s hand spasms where he’s rolling back the jacket cuffs. “A good date, huh?”)

[quietbluejay]

Pharos 2

RETURN OF THE KING

to become one with the pharos, one must learn to discard the fear of looking ridiculous also lmao the mental image wow that was the wrong thing to say, Dantioch it appears social skills are passed down in the geneseed well at least they sorted it out it's shocking to see competence in interpersonal relationships in a warhammer novel, I tell you

🙃

oh great torture time oh okay only a little torture phew this is darkly funny

don't make it weird, Skraivok

sdfkjshfdl uzumaki no wait enigma of amigara fault aw i like these guys hope nothing bad happens to them

Haley really knows how chronic pain works

huh anyways i am greatly enjoying the polux dantioch friendship which is finally being shown not told though im still disappointed we didn't see how they became besties Abnett should have put a bit more words in there

i think this is possibly the healthiest relationship i've run across in the entire black library corpus we love to see it actually wait i need to make a joke about this straining my SOD an iron warrior??? with actual self-knowledge??? apologizing???? must be fake

fun

the one man in the entire galaxy who has found a sunlamp and is getting a cure for his vitamin d deficiency

…i wonder if the servitors also are affected by the Pharos

but also like i never thought i'd be. jealous of a warhammer character is dantioch life goals or wife (?) goals

i do enjoy the ultramarines joking around about making dramatic speeches

sentences you never expect to hear from an ultramarine

ah, ultramarines

THEYRE NOT TREES THEN YOU HAVE BEEN LYING TO ME WHY ARE YOU CALLING THEM TREES they're some kind of grass, clearly like they wouldnt even look like trees no branches are described they would just look like tall grass aughhhhhhhhh i am unreasonably irked

sounds like a riveting job im sorry ill see myself out

you know if i had a nickel for every time characters were stripped naked and attached to a wall in a warhammer novel i'd have too many nickels

this is an incredible mental image

I love this aaah time for the traumatized civilians

yeah it's the same but it's not the same The Ultramarines are very good at just following orders

anyways anyone who thinks Haley is pro-Imperium can't read

man I do have to say, in a warhammer novel, there's a level of genuine suspense as to whether or not characters will die that you don't get elsewhere i mean aside from Plot Armoured Dudes

i want to see this outtake Mericus and an Ultramarine chilling in a bar yooo they did successfully save the ultramarine Mericus is one of the most unambiguously heroic figures I've run across here oh hey Guilliman has shown up

gahhhh he's leeroy jenkinsing again

THANK YOU DANTIOCH dantioch for mvp once again

and now we cut to Corvo (lol) who likes reading stories

and I hit image limit so I'll do the Sanguinius and Guilliman scene next time!

[colorisbyshe]

👀 so did you isten to any good and new music in april

i was gonna hold off and wait until jessie ware's album released tonight to make this post but i THINK im gonna want to do a mini live-blog of that album and this post is already massive enough as is sooo

April Faves!

Newly Released:

"High Life" by Bloc Party. Fun vibes. Very relaxed and I think is quite great for the warmer weather and driving with the windows down. Great riffs in this song.

"Dead Wood" by Enter Shikari. Enter Shikari is a weird band for me because I was SUUUPER into their original demos that you could download off like... mypace? And then I forgot they existed. Until this album? So that's CRAZY that they're still here it's been 15 years since I cared about them. Anyways, this song is like... kinda theatrical and WEIRD but not in a theatrical way. It has a bunch of string instruments and a sense of foreboding, I like it. One of the more "for beginners" track on a fairly experimental album. Need to listen to the album more cause I'm unsure if this is my favorite. "Bloodshot" is a great combo of more high speed electronic influences crashing their more hardcore influences. Dubstep energy without the dubstep.

"Be the One" by Bree Runway and Khalid. Radio friendly song of the summer. Vocal chemistry off the charts. Just sweet and soothing.

"GLBTM (Studio Outtakes)" by Daft Punk. Made me cry. I miss Daft Punk so fucking much. Beautiful instrumental.

"冷たい風 (30 Universe Ver)" by Penicillin. Jrock, if you couldn't tell by the Japanese title. It's okay if you don't like listening to non-English music but plEASE listen to the guitar shredding at ~2:27.

"Angel" by Shygirl and Fatima Al Qadiri. ETHEREAL AND HAUNTING.

"Coup" by Frost Children. Earlier, I made a post about how my music taste is getting worse... this album and this song inspired that post. The Medic Droid meets 100 Gecs. Just stupid electronic music it's EMBARRASSING. "Angel's Thoughts" is also an electro banger.

Choosing a song off the new Buck-Tick album is hard. It's all a banger to me but I suppose I really love Namonaki Watashi and the contrast between the way the instrumental feeling like it's sparkling and the strong emphasis of his vocals. Scarecrow is also great, just has a nice intensity throughout the whole thing.

"Midnight Dreams" by Ellie Goulding. Putting out a disco-inspired dance album in the same month as Jessie Ware was BRAVE but I think this album is pretty refreshing. It's just extremely proficient at being... a dance album Ellie Goulding would make, y'unno?

"I'll Remember for Me, I'll Remember for You" by Yaeji. An odd choice from this album, since it's more an interlude than a full song. But I just love that it's this moment of calm on an experimental, erratic and yet there's a creeping sense of... wariness over it all.

"D N D" by Apink. The only Kpop on the list so far?? Grown women showing off vocals while feeling like cotton candy.

"Vinglevingle" by Heize. More kpop except it has more a 2010s eurodance vibe but like... matured.

Came out 3/30 but that is April to me. "Zodiac Killa" by Jean Deaux. This is the type of song to play during a montage of a woman driving across the country, running over men, stopping to ransack jewelry stores, before reuniting with her lover, another woman on horseback.

Honorary Mentions:

"Say it to Me" by Otto Knows. It's a dance track. You know how it is.

"She Don't Mind" by Karencici. I could see Tinashe doing this song except it's largely in mandarin, so like... if Tinashe could sing in mandarin. Talking about Tinashe, it's not her best track, but "Who's Taking You Home" with Kyle is solid enough and also from this month.

"Isumad (Lakim Remix)" by Cookiee Kawaii. I liked this entire album but I choose this one just for having a run time over 3 minutes, a rarity for her! Funky remix. Another take on a nostalgia sound but modernized perfectly.

De De Mouse put out multiple releases, they're good. Check out De De Mouse in generic if you want like... annime OPs/EDs ramped up by funk and other more experimental influences.

Technically came out 3/31 but WHATEVER. "Vampire" by Kvi Baba, the Trigun Stampede OP guy.

Not Released in April:

"Writhe" by Daine. 100 gecs but more emo.

"Over You" by Daddy DJ. Sorry... Daddy DJ really is just like... comfort music at this point. Peak 2000s dance music.

"Mercurial" by Silica Gel, a korean rock band. Love the vocal effect for this song. Just love the resonating nature.

"Wings of Time" by Tame Impala, the song they did for Dungeons and Dragons. Throwback roooooock sound. Blare it with the windows down while driving past a beach at sunset. Trust me it's a vibe.

Revisited a looot of Utada this month. "Michi" remains a bop that stuck with me this month. Just good, mature jpop. Not alone not alone not alone!

Rest in Peace Ryuichi Sakamato. There's many songs to really attribute to such an influential figure but sometimes all you need is a straightforward song like Rain.

"Broken Mirror" by Boom Boom Satelittes is some Jrock tha tFUCKS

[darkbluekies]

☁️ (1/2) wow idk why but why is it that i only visit whenever theres dr kry and silas posts 😭 anyways IM BACK AGAIN LOL imma make it quick though 😢

— ... SO ABOUT PART 3. good god i love the dialogue tbh and AJSKFJDJD seeing dr kry and silas interact. OKAY!!!!! — i feel so bad (and angry) for y/n though cause Man... dr kry and silas really couldnt think of a better way to take care of them. like its not the worst (stares at silas' basement) but its VERY BAD — the infantilization though I SEE YOU. — loved reading the outtakes btw YOU REALLY WANTED THEM TO INFANTILIZE THE READER HUH. i can see why it didnt make the final cut though... it was too much 😭 it was getting out of hand — thank you for the teasers it kept me from going insane actually — hope theres more dr kry, silas, and y/n content in the future </3 (<— shattered heart because im so down bad for them)

Because Dr Kry + Silas = heaven ... although they could have been a bit softer. I think there will be more of them together in the future, but for now I want to focus on them individually and the others a bit more, my boy Edmund needs some love now</3

I thought that the "infantilization" (still doesn't think it counts as it because they're just teasing y/n) was okay, but it was the direction that they leave the hospital that I felt didn't fit the storyline, it just became a bit out of frame and too much.

[genpact-kinfessions]

get this right from the frozen 2 outtakes is so me and fischl post war coded

(im the no1 bennefischl propaganda sharer...its beneficial for your health, man!)

-bennettprime #🎸🥡🥢

I looked up the lyrics out of curiosity... why did I expect a happy song Are You Okay /silly (actually I take it back it seems much happier at the end, but the Start. Ough.)

& so true it's literally in the name /j

[ieroism]

`I am the master of the wicket.´

[simgerale]

MIRANDA!!!!! I said this in my tags, but I- I have THOUGHTS!! 1) LET THEM KISS (I know you said they won't for a while, but-) 2) SHE beat HIM!!!! Very good. I like this. 3) Those last poses are something I love very dearly, and ever since I saw them I have been dying for someone to use them in a context like this. Thank you for making all my dreams come true, adjkjadkj. Okay, that's it. Wait, not it's not. <3 <3 <3 Okay, now that's it. :))

i’ve been hoarding this ask for a few days cause it makes me smile BUT IM FINALLY ANSWERING IT!!! 1) patience, morri…. patience 😌 (i have a few outtakes of them kissing though not gonna lie.. will release that at the end of regal i think lol) 2) YES SHE IS A STRONG WOMAN 😤 luca was distracted the whole time but i think she still would’ve won if he was on his A-game. She was taught to sword fight from a young age! 3) ikr i’ve been waiting to use them like this too!!!! i’m so glad to be of service 😚 💛💛💛

[amjustagirl]

am i the only one who sees kita & reader as a couple that would have plenty of children HAHA not just two like atsumu/kaiyo but a few more? keke. i mean they gotta lotta time to get down and dirty ;) i also somehow find them both more on the maternal/paternal side in comparison to the other couples u've written, idky. congratulations on publishing the entire fic, it really was a joy to read, kita and reader are just so god damn pure and good and i love them together that i might cry :')

yes they wld have plenty of kiddos!!!

okay so if this helps!

Kita - 3 daughters (including Asami, who marries Miya Shoma)

Atsumu - 1 daughter (Shino) and 1 son (Shoma)

Sakusa - 1 daughter

Suna - 2 sons

Bokuto - 3 sons

Meian - 1 son (Makoto)

i've mentioned suna's son in another drabble of mine - he's playmates with shoma. and i think i've mentioned bokuto's boys too! i haven't rly thought too much abt 'samu but that will come when i finally write his story.

one day....

anw - THANK YOU for your love!! they are so cute and such a joy to write (tho they rly don't have the ridiculous banter that tsumu and kaiyo have HAHA). im kinda sad that their story is over but well. outtakes exist, as long as you want them!

[professorsparklepants]

@scribeprotra tagged me so here we go. im just doing the ones on my computer bc if i did my phone notes we'd be here all week. the ones in purple are all girl genius; the rest are naruto, miraculous ladybug, mdzs, a narnia/lotr crossover, check please, and one (1) young wizards chatfic

rules: post the names of all the files in your WIP folder, regardless of how non-descriptive or ridiculous. send me an ask with the title that most intrigues you and i’ll post a little snippet of it or tell you something about it. and then tag as many people as you have WIPs

80 going on 18

all furries will be blocked

ambient magic is the new black

but suddenly, kid fic

emo eri jpop

everything is okay and nobody is suffering au

gay outtakes

going forth by day

help i've fallen in to ancient egypt and i can't get up

i was enabled into this!

I'M ALWAYS A SLUT FOR FICTIONAL GODS

if im going down im going down screaming about chivalric romance

kushia uzumaki for godaime 2k5ever

little blind and black tiger

magical ice rinks~~~~~

much ado about a midsummer's tale as you like it

over ambitious nonsense

rest in fucking pieces hashirama

shit let's be wizards

sleeping beauty au

sleeping beauty au 2

spectre sibs

susan/boromir 5+1 (split into "Rivendell (the tenth walker)" "Gondor (The Chatelaine)" "Minas Tirth (The Marksman)" "Nurn (The Gentle Queen" "Amon Henn (the Lady of the Horn)" and "The Lone Islands (The Son of Adam)"

the heterodyne twins and the beetleburg cypher

the sleeping prince

the waking princess

[qyu-inactive]

MY THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS ABOUT OUTTAKES 16-18.5 BECAUSE I HAVE SO MANY

We have been blessed with 3.5 glorious new parts to the wonderful Losty Aone/ Mountain Man Series by the wonderful, amazing, awe-inspiring @shhhlikeme and i am emotional and have many many feelings about it all.

Outtake 16 

I love that we got to see this from the reeader’s point of view, it was nice to see our losty y/n and see how their feeling. It was a nice break from feeling sad about Aone’s broken heart.

This part made me laugh ahaha

After dating and breaking up with him, Aone had females constantly approaching him. A/N: Not constantly but it felt that way for you ofc lol

the jealously😂, the Author’s note too like “it wasnt like that at all” 😂 this emotional person (y/n) is just  blowing up the situation. 

and then this:

In other words: They want what you had. 

i mean of course they would, Aone is the sweetest boy but only to someone he loves. Aone’s heart is too strong to let waver to someone knew so quick

This whole outtake all i could think about was that Y/n really needs to get back with her mountain man, first they want to break up so Aone finds someone new but then doesnt want him to find someone new. Like cleary y/n is not being honest with herself or Aone. 

When they went to the library, ahhh y/n really just imagining the worst scnenarios in their head😂

“Oh,” your stomach flipped. “He looks so cute.” You put on a 🥺 face when you noticed how utterly adorable a standing Takanobu looked

🥺🥺🥺 Aone is always such a cutie, and y/n really broke this man’s heart😭 I know it was insecurites but still. These two are so in love but just wont get back together. 

The outfit y/n is wearing😍 you always pick these really cute and sexy outfits and I appreciate y/ns confidence and style but it is not me 😂😂 but Aone thirsting over his girl tho, i would dress up like that if it meant getting looked by Aone like that 😂

I love Aone’s plan, like he is such a sweetheart and he’s making me all soft at all his effort to win his girl back🥺🥺

This outtake really gave up all the feels y/n is feeling with breaking up with Aone and I am enjoing it 😂. At the same time though I just want these to love birds to get back together ahhhhh. 

One of the things I really love about this story is how strong the friendship is and how we see the outside characters really show how much they care. A lot of stories (like shojou, oh man you dont know how much shoujo manga ive read haha) just sideline their friends after the start talking to their love interest or they dont even have friends at all in the whole story. I really enjoyed seeing Katana be a voice of reason in our losty’s life. And of course the K_nji’s being our boy Aone’s best friends. 

Outtake 17

okay we starting with the real friends the K_nji’s warning our boy Aone about the situation. I love them and how much they care 😂. They can be dumbasses but still, I appreciate their effort. 

The University—our University— sent her a uniform that’s a size or two too small.

Does this mean they’re going to the same university? or am I reading too much into it? It might have been mentioned before but I cant remember off the top of my head. Also Aone really living his best life and his worst life rn 😂😂  like he gets to see his girl in a super tight cheer leading uniform and spend one on one time with her but he cant do anything about his desires. His confidence tho haha  “I’ve seen Y/N in a cheerleading uniform before” not like this you havent😏 

Aone Takanobu can truly say—if he could speak—that he will never even question Futakuchi again.

Again I just really love their friendship, parts like this really get me 😂😂😂

When y/n took out Aone’s jacket automatically🥺🥺 my hearttttt, and how long Aone’s jacket is on them🥺🥺 this whole part made me so softtt. Like imagine wearing his jacket🥺🥺 it would be so comfy and warm. 

There are so many golden lines I loved from this part, but Aone’s spank bank is just a phrase I wasnt expectng to read but it is gold. Im sure his bank is full and loaded😂

Then some random gross guy comes up to y/n, like the audacity of this guy.

He had such a disgusting grin on his face

🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 this guy can back offfff. 

I really love when Aone comes in to protect the reader🥺🥺 he’s not the iron wall for nothing too. 

Your knight has arrived. Your ex-knight. ☹️

and then you go and hurt me again😭😭

I really wanted Aone to just kick a dude in the chest, like step the fuck off 😂😂. 

“Take one more step toward her.” Aone growled in the smoothest voice.

“I dare you.” Aone added, for good measure.

Im absolutely swooning, Aoneeeeee🥺🥺🥺. And the fact that he wanted the reader to come with him so she wouldnt get anyone bothering her😭😭 he’s such a gentlemen. No one bothers Aone’s girl whose not his girl at the moment, especially guys who arent wanted

now onto the fun part of this outtake😏 I wasn’t expecting to see texts but it was definitely a nice addtion!! Our poor Aone soo horny and sweet, I dont know if the dead squirrels worked hahaha. 

but he couldn’t help but wonder how he was going to edit all of this together in the time frame he promised he would with only one hand.

this went over my head when i read it the first time omg😂😂😂 Im sure Aone can do it, he’s a very capable man. This whole section had me laughing but also feeling slightly bad for Aone, again his poor horny heart right now is conflicted but very much fed. Im glad he was able to get a break, I dont think his length could wait (im not used to using subtle language hahaha) anyway this whole part was fun to read. 

Aone bit his juicy bottom lip,

I legit bit my lip just before reading this part😂

Outtake 18 & 18.5

Now we’re hitting the climax!! (after Aone just hit his climax and is about to hit again😗)

—who imo really should return to their own homes now but would rather not—

I mean do these two even have their own homes anymore😂, theyre basically apart of the Aone family now. Family who also understand when to leave their horny pal alone for time being. 

OKAY ONTO THE IMPORTANT PART!!! AHHHHHHHH. 

“Aone-senpai, do you even have snapchat?!”

“Obviously not.” Kenji answered for his friend, being snappy.

“WELL HE SHOULD GET IT BECAUSE I SAW—“

Did Kanji see Y/N and Takeru?????? I also cant believe I learnt Takeru was a third year from this series, I always thought he was a second year for some reason. I think cos he was ennoshita’s rival. not important rn lmao

“—because Aone-senpai is jacking off again. It makes you feel lighter, and happier—so that’s why,”

this boy, there are some things you just shouldnt say out loud. Some things can be left unsaid (not like im blunt with my friends sometimes haha but still) 

When Kenji had found out about why y/n dumped Aone😭😭😭😭 I’m glad he found out earlier then Aone, I wouldnt have wanted him to yell at the reader again.

Anyone that can do that, be so selfless—is good enough for his best friend.

🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

“I can tell its her because that’s your sweater she’s wearing. Right? It says Takanobu on the back, and I remember seeing Y/N steal it out of your bag after practice once.”

🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺these parts really just made me soft. like the fact that y/n still had the jacket and wanted to wear it out. and the absolute coincedence that they were in the same cinema as Aone. 

“Y/N.—Sh-She-She is wearing my attire. What does that mean?”

Yeah, big guy.

Yeah, you have a chance.

Y/N still has a little….tiny bit of feelings for you

YES YES YES FINALLY , I wanted to cry here😭😭 AND THEN KENJI CONFIRMED IT ALL AND AONE THE MAN WENT AND TRIED TO GET HIS GIRL. THIS REALLY IS THE DRAMATIC PART IN THE MOVIE. AND THEN THIS [redacted] TAKERU CAME AND AHHHHH 

(Aone would know that face, he only saw it everyday he’s looked in the mirror for the past 3 years)

Absolutely dead. All hope—gone.

You make me happy and then just rip out my heart like 2 minutes later. I was going from crying happy tears to sad tears in like a heartbeat. 

ALSO YOU DONT KNOW HOW UPSET I WAS WHEN I GOT TO THE END OF PART 18 I DIDNT REALISE THERE WAS 18.5 AND WAS AFRAID THAT THIS WAS IT AHHHHHH. I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO PLAY WITH MY FEELINGS THEN JUST LEAVE. 

“I’m worried about you.” She finished, looking more serious than you’ve ever seen her.

y/n really has some good friends with her🥺

uhhh then Takeru comes in, I dont really hate him but no one stands in between our losties love, they deserve each other and no one can stand between them. 

“But, tonight, if you need a shoulder to cry on, I’m just one theatre over… Okay? I have a pretty comfortable shoulder, so just text me.”

Okay this was pretty nice of Takeru, like cheesy but at least he cares and isnt staring at y/n like a peace of meat he wants to devour...

You sent it. Received a response within seconds saying he was on his way.

This boy, hes got a good heart but this isn’t your story bud, im sorry.

There! Kenji-san and Koganagewa-san, two males who were looking at you and Takeru as if you two were the villains in the movie that just popped out of the screen.

if this doesnt go well these two seem like they’re going to fight y/n outside the cinema😭😂 I couldnt imagine getting death stares from the K_njis especially after hurting Aone basically twice now.

Finding HIM was all that mattered.

OKAY THIS WHOLE PART, LIKE YES GO GET YOUR MAN PLEASE. LIKE Y/N CANT JUST LEAVE THIS RIGHT HERE LIKE THIS. 

white hair visible only because his head was down, forehead kissing the steering wheel, his shoulders vibrating slightly because he is crying. It’s him.

I cant take anymore sad Aone😭😭 He needs the biggest hug and his girl to be his girl again. He has gone through so much.

“Kenji-san, please leave me—““Not Justin Bieber look-alike!”

I cant with the Justin Bieber look-alike. 😂😂

Im just going to talk about my feelings for this part, but the whole confesson. I felt like crying, i feel like crying now reading it😭 it was just so beautiful. Like y/n explaing everything and saying Aone is the only man she’ll ever love. Throughout the series we really go to understand Aone’s feelings so deeply and how passionate he is but we didnt really get to see how y/n felt as much so reading this made me happy for Aone for the fact that his girl loves him as much as he loves her. They really were lost for each other, lost with out each other, but together they were 

Found.

okay maybe im tearing up now😭😭

One more marathon to go and our happy couple can live happily. The fact that this story is nearly over is a little sad but I’m happy our losties found each other. Im thinking since the next parts will be the last I’ll talk about overall themes I liked and my favourite moments as well. 

[verannaca]

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Major Frozen 2 Spoilers Below!

You’d never be able to tell by reading this that I’m a whole-ass adult, AND a writer :’)

HERE’S SOME THOUGHT BLURBS

• Vuelie smacked with nostalgia holy sHIT • Pretty snowflakes proves this movie is Frozen • BABY ANNA • "wait, what?" • baby anna with attitude • snuggles • iduna/ERW has an amazing voice?? • "you'll be drowned" foreshadowing?? • Elsa freezes the railing and just awkwardly leaves it?? a queen • ANNNAAA • Anna and Olaf • Olaf being poetic?? • poor sweet anna isnt lonely anymore :') • SOOMMEE THINGS NEVER CHANGE this was catchy as heck • "holding on tight to you" that kristanna twirl SENT ME • "irredeemable monster" "greatest mistake of your life" "WOULDNT EVEN KISS YOU" • AURORA • Kristoff getting prepared to spend a LONG time in that room, if u know what im saying ;;;))) • bedtime snuggles and it's now canon that EA call each other "Darling" • anna representing women who drool n snore, and elsas a FUCKING MOUTH BREATHER • elsa's grumpy face >:(      (she’s so cute what the heck) • INTO THE UNKNOOOWWNNNN ft aurora • uh oh kingdom's in danger again THANKSELSA • KA helping the citizens as a true Queen and King would (sPOILERS) • "youve been hearing this voice and u didnt think to tell me" the offence is beautiful • elsa's pouty hesitation before she tells anna what happened • ELSA'S FACE the entire time KA & Olaf plan to go with her on the adventure, she was NOT having any of it • olaf being annoying for x minutes straight • anna ready to get dicked up on a sleigh ride even tho her sis is sleeping 5 feet away from her lmao MOOD • "crazy? you didnt say i was crazy - you think im c R A Z Y?" HER FACE SENT ME • kristoff bumbling everything RIP • aurora is back • elsa runs in heels through rocky land and somehow doesnt break her ankles, 10/10 (i mean anna did the same but it’s expected of her lmao) • olaf being annoying pt2 (sorry, he’s cute ig) • anna getting mad at the mist • anna walking towards the cliff to view the dam and looking like an autumn goddess • sven is a terrible wingman • "WE WILL DIE" good job kristoff • elsa not caring about anna's worry • olaf had a song here i think?? • WIND • elsa looks good when messy idc idc • "THAT'S MY SISTER" that's an outtake line from Frozen!!!! • surprise statues • anna rips a sword out of ice with her bare hands n no one thinks anything of it • northuldra ppl • honeymaren eyefucking elsa (we see u) • olaf's funniest scene lmao • "one with power, and one powerless" ANNAS FACE OF OFFENCE HAHAHAHA IT'S OKAY BB YOU HAVE THE POWER OF LOVE • "oh, anna" oh mattias, we feel u • fire spirit • ANNA COUGHING • BRUNNIIIIIII • bruni & elsa head tilts • "they're all looking at us, arent they" yes elsa because ur talking to a fucking salamander • anna gets mad cuz elsa gets mad cuz anna ran into fire cuz elsa ran into fire • iduna was northuldra (neat) • vuelie but different??? • kristoff made a friend!! • insecure anna + a mutual lacking communication = :( • a sad failed proposal • A SHIPWRECK¿? • this is v dark for disney holy shi • the horror in elsa's voice "what were they doing in the dark sea?!" • they watch their parent's final moments • the horror in iduna's voice "the waves are too high" • this is a kid's movie, yes? • elsa flees, anna follows • THE GUILT ohmygosh poor elsa :( • anna tries v hard, but i can only imagine her own agony??? she's tryna take care of elsa but who's taking care of anna?? :(((( • elsa becomes manipulative?? JUST EXPLAIN THAT IT'S DANGEROUS AND REQUIRES MAGIC • elsa does the thing • anna and olaf are v angry (same) • anna loses her cloak & shows her beautiful jacket?? thank u anna • DARK SEA • elsa battles the ocean that swallowed her parents • Nokk tries to drown her?? dragging her through the water by her hand was INTENSE • i know she doesnt get cold n thats fine but damn homegirl must REALLY workout at home (the shoulders prove it) but she swam for how long and didn't lose energy??? • SHOW YOURSELF I CRIED • the ice was so beautiful and she looked so free n happy, loose hair n no shoes • the song was amazing holy heck • IDUNA WAS THE SIREN, I CALLED IT, HELLO THANK U • elsa's literally like "ok boomer" at her grandfather who's an ass • she goes too far into ahtohallen • inappropriate but ohmygod the ice detail on her skin when she was freezing was crazy??? her hair got whiter n all that BUT THE SNOWFLAKES ON HER SKIN, that was unbelievable • surprise surprise old white guy in power kills innocent poc • elsa freezes like anna did, cuz anna was frozen and elsa is frozen 2 (heh) • back to the cave with anna and olaf • anna knows what has to be done to set things right because she’s the hero and always has to make the painful sacrifices • anna sets off to do whats right but OLAF • rip olaf • anna sits in the cold ALL FUCKING NIGHT DID ANYONE ELSE NOTICE THAT, I AM NOT OKAY • the next right thing B R O K E me. kbell captures such agony so beautifully ohmygod, it was incredible. easily the best song in the franchise. • "SO I'LL WALK THROUGH THIS NIGHT, stumbling blindly towards the light" her voice • anna finds her courage to leave the cave • "when it's clear that everything will NEVER BE THE SAME AGAIN" CAN YOU HEAR ME SOBBING AT THE ABSOLUTE ANGUISH IN HER VOICE • this woman has lost everything and SHES STILL GOING, YES ANNA, GO • giants!!! • anna mimicking the behaviour she was against for most of the movie • "I'M HERE, WHAT DO YOU NEED?" this is so important • no questions asked, this is what's happening, kristoff is the real mvp • mattias lets anna destroy the dam • anna becomes suicidal?????? girl stop i- • the dam falls • ANNA ALMOST FALLS- • wait mattias has her • and kristoff has her!! • and she looks ready to keep crying now that the adrenalin is gone • ELSA THAWS but does she REALLY do the right thing??? idk i think she should've let the wave destroy whatever was in its path, otherwise whats the point? wouldve had better symbolism • the Northuldra people are free and happy but poor anna is still sad :( idk why people were saying she got over elsas death too quickly when homegirl was never gonna smile again • "i'm sorry i left you behind. i was just so desperate to protect her." • "it's okay. my love is not fragile." • anna tries to continue on, imagine what was going through her head AHHH • wait there she is • e l s a • on a horse • anna slides down the cliffside, elsa slides off that horse in a v godly manner • ANNA REPRESENTS WOMEN WHO UGLY CRY, THANK U ANNA • elsa is lowkey emotionless but honestly do we expect anything else from her by this point? (no shade hahahaha) • "a bridge has two sides, and mother has two daughters" yes thank u for making anna important • so is elsa a ghost now orrrr • WHO CARES, KRISTANNA PROPOSAL • we were v robbed of that kiss tho • anna's squeal of pure joy when asked • sven representing all of us • "do u wanna build a snowman" bitch it's been like 16 years, ur a bit late but OKAY • olaf is back • GROUP HUG • honeymaren wants elsa to stay "because it's where she belongs" ;;;;)))))) • elsa realises anna would be a better queen • QUEEN ANNA • Q U E E N  A N N A • YESSSSSS • we're robbed of the coronation but that's fine ig • kristoff in fancy clothes??? • "i prefer you in leather anyway" so anna is a top, nice to know • olaf's comment on kristoff probably not being able to "last an hour" ;;;))))) not if annas a top LMAO STOP • mattias found his person, congrats • anna is the people's queen • a statue is revealed, baby iduna is v cute • elsa is in the forest with bruni n everyone else • friday is gamenight • elsa rides off into the sunset i guess?? • THE END • oh and olaf has an ending scene • "elsa DEAD" • "olaf DEAD" • "anna cries" • everyone cries

okay thanks for reading lmao bye

[heyitsyn]

anyways as the writer, who do YOU think deserves y/n, like on surface level, of course oikawa, he cares for her and notices little things about her-- but like I've said he changes all too late, its difficult to be with someone when they don't recognize their own flaws, I also think that's why y/n kept rejecting him and his advances, the classic "you're not like other girls, I like chasing you" but idk .. like he seems to really care about her but let's his insecurities get in the way, he'd be a great father and boyfriend tho. like I noticed during the series oikawa tends to open himself up more and more, but then at the route (he closes himself up) and I think that's EXACTLY what oikawa would do, like as much as everyone hated the angst (not bc of ur writing, its great, but bc angst makes us sad :((), I think it was great for him, his character, he would shut himself off as soon as he felt himself falling way too deep, if you do write an oikawa redemption thing (I forgot if you were or not so sorry if you were already done-) it'd be so..refreshing to see him change for the better, knowing y/n isn't gonna leave, knowing she makes him the happiest person alive, allowing himself to show her everything and JUST LIKE WITH JOE JONAS AND I FORHIT HER NAME.. as soon as you'd be like I think we should take a break hed pick up his act because, fuck, he's never felt this way before, and he certainly doesn't want to let it go. -🍡

ooooo personally? hmm i actually think iwaizumi? not saying that because i’m a hajime stan but because out of the candidates, he would be the one who would be more capable and responsible and mature enough to have a relationship that wouldn’t fail. of course he’s still human and he makes mistakes and might do or say the wrong thing but i think he developed a sense of logical reasoning by being oikawa tooru’s best friend since he has always had to talk oikawa out of stupid things and told him to think carefully. that feat helps him have a better communication with y/n and talk things out rather than be petty and leave. and he’s a parental figure with the team and looks out for them and puts them first so naturally, you would be taken cared of and wouldn’t have to worry if iwa is involved. and he has his goals, he knows what he wants and he will get them and hes very hardworking and puts his everything into his passions and interest so your relationship with him would be a very fullfilling one that you don’t have to worry about him not giving effort.

now for oikawa, IM SO HAPPY AND I APPRECIATE YOU LOOKING DEEPLY INTO IT because it was lowkey difficult to write him lol like i had to be more careful with his scenes rather than the others because youre right, my goal was to make oikawa open up more and more as the series and parts went on as a way to show that he was getting more and more comfortable with you therefore he would slowly fall in love with you since you cant exactly fall in love with someone you’re not comfortable with, yknow? AND THANK YOU OMG IVE BEEN KINDA GUILTY ABOUT IT BECAUSE I JUST HIT YALL WITH THE ANGST AND I PERSONALLY DIDNT KNOW HOW TO RECOVER FROM THAT LOL LIKE I WAS SCARED OF WRITING ANYTHING TOO ANGSTY FROM THEN ON SINCE YALL WERE TELLING ME IT MADE YOU CRY AHAHAHA but thank you so much for noticing that and saying that!!! i was just talking to a moot a few weeks back and i was telling them that i try not to make the character as fanon by sticking to their canon personalities but putting my own outtake into it? idk its kinda hard to explain lol but i tried to put myself into his shoes and was like, ‘okay, how would oikawa tooru react? based on his personality, how would he feel and how would he react to this?’ and im happy it worked bc you said that. AND YEAA i have an oikawa route ver. 2 in my drafts but if yall want, i can make a part two lol but rn im kinda swamped with finals ahahaha but um that will be coming up soon!

also, yes he would be such a great father and a husband but in a way, he uses you and your children as an excuse to put you all first then him even though he needs his problems solved and fixed. his insecurities and inferiority complex probably hurts him a lot too especially if the kids were to say they liked iwa better and joke and tease him about it which makes him feel really insecure and covers it up. i feel like his mood swings would hurt your family a lot and you would argue which makes you feel like the kids shouldn’t be in this environment and especially after one nasty fight, you even told him you would divorce him if he wouldnt start fixing himself because that was the only way you could get him to do it. even back then, the only way he would focus on himself is if everything he loves is being threatened to be taken away and ig thats both a selfish yet selfless thing to do? like he doesnt care about himself and puts you and the family first because youre more important but also selfish because he doesnt care what you think and doesnt consider your opinions about his problems because he just does what he wants and you cant stop him.

again, oikawa is probably one of the most complex anime characters ive had to research lol because the show kinda gives us a bit of an insight to who he is but we arent given anything else so its up to us to figure him out and everyone has their own opinion about him and thats where fanon oikawa comes in and although theres a lot of people who hate him, in the end there are others who relate to him (as an oiks kinnie myself) and knows that theres something going on underneath that and ive had a lot of fun trying to decipher aaaaa reference to one of my favorite fics oikawa

[thatbloodhoundaccent]

masterlist of bloodhound recordings

jfc i didnt realize there’s so many now

i need to update this list

Generic

may the gods will it

allfather give me sight

a bad beginning

Lovey

proposal

nighttime and stars

elliott and bh in a firefight

do you understand my love

i love everything about you

in the kitchen singing

irresponsible

yandere (tw: unhealthy relationship)

chill out

“i love you”

you tripped

fellag

trying to ask you out on a date

elliott, estoy loca por ti

rain

love from caustic

elskan are you wearing my jacket  (short)

mirage why do u have a picture of me (short)

you can hug me

are you dating him?

Comfort

Re: Suicidal Feeling

panic attack

nightmares

hold you

safe

for anon

bad home life

migraines

dont be scared

losing a loved one

Sleepy

napping hound

sleepy time

wake yo ass up

sleepyhead

go to bed

bedtime

nap turned into sleep

Suggestive

exhilarating hunt

call me a dog

you wanted my attention

theres a knife

harsh scolding

Bird

good morning arthur

about the raven

shooting at arthur

love is stored in the arthur

arthur steals shit

AU

werewolf bloodhound 2 (suggestive)

werewolf bloodhound

vampire bloodhound

Collabs

Bloodhound found the profile (Pumpkin Saga, pt. 1)

Settling (Pumpkin Saga, pt. 2)

Training Range (Pumpkin Saga, pt. 3)

Nox Gas (Pumpkin Saga, pt. 4)

gunplay w/ Mirage (suggestive!!)

pining

in the games 

drunken bloodhound

flirting

dont let go 

magic trick

sir this is a chilis

Octane and BH Meet

Argument

Tantrum

Commissions

Nataly

Meme 

eat ass suck a dick and sell drugs

how did you say that with your mouth?

that wasnt very cash money of you

this bitch called me ugly - i said bitch where?

weird flex but okay

pussy pops

elliott and mozambiques

sicko mode

elliott wtf is an uwu

horny on main for the allfather

owo what’s this

dummy thicc cheeks

elliott and nipple piercings

i am jus... a litle creecher... 

quoth the raven: dummy thicc

sovereign of crows

hewwo miwage??

bruno mars is gay

my emotional support dumbass

let us get this bread

if it were not for the laws of this land

asscheeks 2

there are only 2 genders - knife and knife 2

damn mirage you’re thicker than a bowl of oatmeal

do you have a moment to discuss the allfather

the gods yeeteth and yoink away

this bitch is empty --- yeet!

every second youre not running im getting closer

the motherfucking tea

uh oh sisters

Random

in the cafeteria

congrats on transitioning!

happy pride month!!!

shakespeare (i bite my thumb at you sir)

this denim hat is gucci

fuck they are all puncing me to death

the allfather told me to kick your ass

octane might be a little bit reckless

elliott what the fuck

it will be less suffocating for you

on wraith

elliott youre not a baby

elliott stop jumping into my arms

fuck fuck shit gods damn it

bloodhound says trans rights

skull town

singing

kachow

octane and his grenade

i do not have rabies

mondays are nsfw

well done elliott

three little pigs

bh works at a mcdonalds

i am surrounded by idiots

just “mirage”

octane pinging

everyone hide your pumpkins, mirage is here

aw shit here we go again

nani the fuck?

gotta feed my tamagotchis

bad pick up lines

i want to kiss mirages stupid fucking face

bunch of little audios!! (collection)

happy birthday

does it look like i give a fuck

advertising crisis

Outtakes

dummy thicc

its ogre

surprise!! (lots of laughing)

pussy pops 

damn!!

Shitposts

im so full

i dont want to go to work

thats a spicy meatball

yelling

[backstreets]

album: the river. artist: orville peck 🤔

the river:

Opinion on cover design: not my favourite but i am obsessed with the fact bruce just took an outtake from the darkness shoot because he was so desperate to put the album out. and the fact he chose THAT photo. okay moody king. 

Favourite song: hungry heart... it was the song that really got me into bruce and i have a hungry heart tattoo... also the second verse always knocks me out...

Least favourite song: ....... maybe... the price you pay..... idk its not one i listen to often.. but its not BAD

Underrated track: (idk if this is underrated but i needed to say something about it because i have been listening non stop and its making me crazyyyy..... wreck on the highway... illegal) as for actually underrated songs... uhh idk if the album has any....

Overrated track: ... stolen car..

Rate: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10

orville peck (dont know too much so im gonna do the other rating)

First song youtube took me to: summertime

First Impression: not really my thing but i respect the drip

Do I like it?: its alright.. not really my thing

Would I listen to more from them?: nah... but the looks....

Rate (from what I heard): 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10

[ieroism]

`I am the master of the wicket.´

[ziamfanfiction]

this past week’s ziam ao3 feed

hello! im doing 2 weeks in a row coz school has been crazy and i didn’t have time last week so yeah. remember to leave kudos and comments!

fics posted/updated from September 10th to the 23rd

The Power of Payne by OllyCudmore (wip, rape/non-con warning)

Alpha Liam Payne has just moved to the small town of Autumn Plains with his parents. In a world where most alphas have already claimed an omega by their nineteenth birthday, Payno is on the prowl...

The New Teacher by mmaree (wip)

Being a novice teacher is tough, but being a novice teacher at Payne Academy is even tougher. Fortunately for Zayn, the other teachers on the staff seem friendly enough…at first.

***

Or the one where Zayn’s dream job slowly turns into his worst nightmare. And his worst nightmare may or may not be named Dr. Payne.

i will stand by you - because if it's not ok, it's not the end by ZeeThorn (wip, rape/non-con warning)

One day, Liam walked in on his best friend since forever being beaten senseless and Liam refuses to settle for that.

Or.

The first day of the rest of Zayn's life.

Love Drunk by Mystic_charlie (wip, mcd warning)

Zayn meets up with Liam Payne to sing a collab it turns into something they would have never suspected....

A Royal Tale by StoryAnonGuy33 (wip)

"That doesn't matter Liam, you know I'd never treat you differently because of status. I'd never let something small like that stop us from being together" Zayn explained. "What of your father? The kingdom, an heir..." Liam listed off, that lump in his throat back again.

Or where Liam is a member of Zayn's royal guard, journeying with him to a neighboring kingdom. Though the two soon find themselves dealing with more than mutual affection.

In Reality by Mystic_charlie (wip, mcd warning)

after a fatal incident in Zayn's life he finds himself in a terrible foster home with bad depression, he goes to highschool with his best friend Harry and his sassy boyfriend Louis.

Everyday Zayn gets picked on by the same kid everyday, a lot of the time he doesn't know why but his sisters use to say that guys pick on you when the like you, Zayn didn't believe that though, he hated Liam as much as Liam hated him and he hoped it was Hate

Tumblr Drabbles by Gummiebear (wip)

A collection of all the drabbles and prompts I have written on Tumblr

Twelve Fic Outtakes/Deleted Scenes by watyonameisgurl (wip)

Pretty much exactly what the title says and what I've hinted at in numerous end notes of the main fic for like forever - a collection of outtakes/deleted scenes (and possibly even some eventual alternate scenarios if I feel up to exploring that) from the Twelve fic verse

[DO NOT READ if you haven't finished the first fic in the verse yet]

Two Point 0 by watyonameisgurl

“Because healing is messy and ugly and slow and doesn’t just happen in a progressive line. Sometimes...sometimes it’s gonna feel like you’re going backwards or sideways or every direction but forward, and you might not ever feel the same as you were, you might always be different from the person you used to be, but sometimes that’s okay...”

Zayn looks out at the sea of faces staring back at him, fights down the anxiety still threatening to overwhelm him even though he’s almost through now. He’d known this wouldn’t be easy, but there’s so many of them, looking to him. And seeing all of them here, now, in front him—even if it still isn’t all of them—is a bit overwhelming. As he looks around though he catches sight of Liam in the sea of faces, smiling proudly, and that’s all it takes. He can already feel himself relaxing, powering through the last of what he wants and needs to say. Counting down the moments until he’s back by Liam’s side again, safe and sound and that’s what gets him through.

[Or: Zayn keeps healing, Liam does too. But it’s not easy when there are so many forces still so determined not to let them. And fighting them alone is one thing. But the problem is it’s not just Zayn's fight anymore.]

The Threequel by watyonameisgurl (wip)

[AKA 3.0 AKA The Extended Epilogue AKA The Adventures of the Rogue Supersoldiers]

Zayn’s still got unfinished business to take care of and he fully intends on crossing all his T’s and dotting all his I’s. T’s and I’s by which he means leveling some threats and doling out a few black eyes while tracking down the remaining bastards that managed to get away or get off scot-free. Though that won’t be for long if he can help it. Because he’s out for justice and unlike the courts he won’t be letting anyone off quite so easily. And this time he’s not alone either.

Nice Piece Of Art by LZSHIP (wip, mcd warning)

Liam’s depression and decision to end his life lands him in the psychiatric unit of a Brooklyn hospital where he meets Zayn, whom he might have already met before.

Shawcross Park by Niler (wip)

Liam isn't a singer, a dancer or even a builder.

Zayn is one of the above.

Piece By Piece by LonelyAquarian (wip)

After 18 years of marriage to lawyer Harry Styles, Liam is shocked when Harry announces he's ending their marriage and shacking up with Louis Tomlinson. Liam retreats to the house of his best friend Niall, who helps him destroy much of Harry's property, earning him house arrest. While Harry prepares for the trial of a corrupt client, Liam is courted by Zayn Malik, an affectionate moving man who restores Liam’s faith in life and in love, piece by piece.

You Make Me Strong by Anonymous

Liam stepped closer towards Zayn and stared longingly into his eyes.

‘Let me show you what I thought of those letters, Zayn.’

He dropped to his knees and ran his index finger slowly but firmly up the inseam of Zayn’s tight jeans. When he looked back up, his pupils were dark and wide.

‘Let me show you how much I missed you. Let me welcome you home properly.’

~~~

How do you tell someone that you love them?

Zayn does so in letters to his boyfriend Liam whilst he is away on a three-month artists’ retreat in Argentina.

Then he returns home…