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~ || Dancin' for diamonds 💕💋 2 || ~ S.M.G
Dom!Mingi, stripper!femreader
Content warning 🚫: Prostitution, unprotected s3x (don't be dumb.), cream pie, multiple rounds, oral/blowjob m!receiving, cuffing, pet names for m and f (baby, daddy, good girl) heavy swearing. I guess
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English is my first language, I'm just dumb so pls ignore misspelled words 💘💐
I kinda suck at writing actual sex scenes so there is a LINK +18 BEWARE
First and Second person POV 🌺
Nothing else! Enjoy!! 💋
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PREVIOUSLY:
"The...the blowjob was only $50" Y/n says confused
"I know, I want something else from you, I wanna fuck." Mingi says with a slight smirk, looking up at her, his legs still spread and pants still off.
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CHAPTER 2: Best I've ever had
"Uhm...well-...you kinda have to make a reservation for additional time and service unless I'm available." She says calmly, her tone mono but with a hint of interest
I wish I was, but bitch I'm usually busy as hell...she thinks to herself
"C'mon...30 minutes, MAX, you don't have a 30 minute window?" Mingi asks with a playful expression, looking into her eyes
"I-...well...I can check if i...do...one sec" I say as I dart my thirsty ass out of the private room, wobbling in my heels making my way to the front desk
"LAURA AM I AVAILABLE FOR AT LEAST 30 MINUTES?!" I ask one of my work friends/receptionist in a hurry
"uhmm let me check" she says, clicking random buttons on the computer "actually some dude, well, Y'know, Brandon, the one with the wife? Yeah he cancelled last minute, he told me to tell you that its him and his wife's anniversary tonight" she says with a small smirk on her face
"Thank goodness for that cheating asshole because the FINEST man I have EVER seen wants to fuck me...I'm at a lost for words like I'm honestly a little nervous to go back in there because... His eyes...they're intimidating but attractive and his lips are a pretty pink and-"
She cut her off
"Girl I LOVE that for you, but I really don't have time to hear you describe your dream fuck..." Laura says, eating a chip
"Please choke on a chip." You say playfully
"Beats choking on a dick!" She jokes back
"Whatever" you say as you walk back to the room, trying to gain that chill, laid back attitude once more
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You make it into the room, closing the door behind you
"So uh...where do we start?" She asks a little nervously
He looks around the room, looking at the bed and floor, along with the couch he's sitting on
"Let's see how long I can lift you up" he says teasingly, standing up, his pants still down, as he makes his way to her, picking her up easily and pushing her against the wall
You hit the wall with a small gasp as you feel the coldness touch your back. He breathes on your neck as he makes his way to your ear and whispers "Relax..." Before licking your ear and making his way down to your collar bones.
He made love to my neck and breast for what felt like hours
Holy fuckin shit. I usually and rightfully so HATE being licked by strangers but goodness it felt amazing coming from him. It was like his tongue was made out of a soft fabric the way it caressed my neck and collar bones so gently and the way he-
"Y/n??" He calls out
"huh?!" I say confused as he stops kissing and licking my body
"Get on the bed..."
I IMMEDIATELY walk my thirsty ass to the bed, ready and waiting. He makes his way over, crawling onto me and looking at me as if I'm some meat skewer, like wtf, but its so hot honestly. I snake my hands and arms to his back and wrapped my legs around his waist while he grinds on me slowly and starts kissing and licking me again...
It felt...good...A little too good.
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I'm usually a quiet person with strangers but this was different, it was impossible not to make some type of sound, my arousal was just too strong.
He pulls my leg higher as he grinds a little more, making sure I feel his boner and it's working, I move my body with his, matching his rhythm and pace and I take his tongue with mine.
He breaks the kiss, fully removing his pants and pulling off my expensive ass lingerie that I waited weeks for to come in the mail but its FINE, not really but, I'm sure this fuck will make it all worth it.
After what feels like an eternity of teasing he finally puts it in and oh my goodness, I don't know if its because I haven't been fucked in what felt like forever or if it was because his dick is ACTUALLY huge...
"...slowly..." I pant out as he starts thrusting in and out
"Are you a virgin? You're hella tight" he says looking down
"Uh no I just... Its been a while" I say awkwardly
Number one rule in this business is to NEVER gas up the men, their ego is not worth your pride or time, I promise you, no mans dick is ever as big as his ego.
He just chuckles and nods. After a few moments of slow thrusting he starts moving faster, hiking my leg up onto his broad shoulder and gripping my waist. I've never felt this good before...I know (WE'RE) delusional but this was the vest fuck I've had ever.
He continues thrusting at a tolerable pace, going from gripping my waist and gripping my throat.
"Turn over on all fours..." He pants out, waiting for me to turn on all fours. I turn on all fours, waiting for him to make his way into my entrance but he takes his time to put a pillow on my stomach for support, what a gentleman, anyways, he enters me slowly, thrusting like he has all damn day, gripping my hip with one hand and spanking me with the other
"Faster..." I moan out softly
Oh fuckin snap, did I just ASK for something?! I'm seriously losing the plot...
"Faster?" He asks for clarity and I nod. Why was that so fucking hot though?!?
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😉:
Mingi pushes her head down into a pillow as he starts fucking her from behind, his tall, muscular body pounding into hers like he had something prove.
I was levitating... It was like I was being rewarded for doing absolutely nothing. And for the first time EVER, I had an orgasm by a dude I'm doing a service for.
He pulls out immediately as I cum, cumming on my back and ass cheek with a grunt and lays down next to me
For what felt like hours we laid in silence, catching our breaths and calming down the adrenaline we both felt from that intense session.
He stands up, putting his boxers back on, and pulling his pants up
"Uh, thank you for the service, keep it up." He says whilst putting on his shirt.
"Um yeah...mhm..." I say quietly, still in bed, my body covered by the blanket, eyeing him as he walks out of the room.
Shit...that was something... A little too much for me honestly but I liked it, alot.
I quickly get dressed and head out of the private room, shutting off the lights and closing the door, walking back to my locker, collecting my money back and keys before heading home.
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I make it to my apartment and immediately take a shower, washing all of the lust and cum off my body as I start to think about what happened about 30 minutes ago.
Once I'm done drying off I slip into some panties and an oversized t-shirt before hopping into bed and getting on my phone... It's 10:37 PM.
I get back up and make myself something quick to eat, also bringing a bag a chips with me because this bitch likes to eat, tf...and I get back in my comfy bed and start watching my favorite show (your choice). About 10 minutes into the show, my phone goes off, its a text from my friend Gia.
"Y/n, I'm going on this double date with this guy and his friend but the problem is...I need a double. You down?"
Now why the fuck would she ask ME of all people
"Well when is it? I work tomorrow until 8."
"It's at 10:30" she replies back
I fucking bet it is , I think to myself
"I mean...I guess??"
"Good! Ty!! I'll text you details tomorrow evening"
"K" I respond, shutting off my phone and finishing my food before putting my chips away and placing my dish in the sink.
I tried to finish my show but honestly I'm way too fucked out...so I turn off my lamp and try to sleep.
I think to myself as I fall asleep.
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That is the end of a VERY long chapter 2!!
Sorry I missed so much for so long, ngl I forgot I had Tumblr 😂, let alone that I even posted anything. If you made it all the way through, tysm! And ily bitch 💘. I'll try my hardest to get better at WRITING actually smut if you want but if you like me adding videos ill gladly do so 💋 as before, lmk if you want a Chapter 3 and if I should change anything!!
xo, mingismuncher 👅❤
#ateez#song mingi#ateez mingi#mingi x reader#mingi smut#mingi audio#mingi smau#mingi#strip#dance#smut#club#Spotify
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is it okay if i drop fandom salt here out of nowhere?
u can ignore this if its not.
okay so. deltarune spoilers for newest chapters, i know ur not in the fandom but for the ppl who are
so the game has two big routes and one of the routes is the weird route, where the player has to do all sorts of contrived shit to access it, i remember when ch2 dropped and everyone didnt believe it bc it sounded too much like a creepypasta but it was real. it involved manipulating your childhood friend/party member to the point where she ended up freezing her friend so now he cant wake up anymore.
theres a new scene in the new chapters where it could be interpreted as a SA allegory.
This scene was basically just the player forcibly putting a thorned ring on the character you were manipulating then it cuts to black and shows a small sprite of a rose wilting.
note that it just shows this. I wont deny that it felt really on the nose even if its up for interpretation, but it didnt like. imply or show any Actual SA.
But people still complained, saying how could Toby show this on a game thats rated *checks* T for Teens and up where children could see.
So they changed the wilting rose to a red dot, which funnily enough, just seemed to make things worse because how could Toby not put two and two together and realize that the scene could come off as an SA allegory etc etc.
Idk man, I don't really care about the wilting rose graphic or what it implied when they changed it. But the game didn't show any sexual assault content or even imply it, it was still just one character forcing another character to do something they didn't want. Which is awful but has been present from the previous chapter and still not actual SA or even implied it. Like maybe alluded to it metaphorically, but its not like it actually happened.
People are free to interpret it as an SA allegory but its still just an allegory. And the scene only happens if you go out of your way to find it in the weird route. It doesn't happen in a normal route if you're just playing casually. You, the player, have to backtrack multiple times to find it and do really specific things and pick really specific dialogue options thats hard to come by in a normal playthrough. It's something that the player has to willingly choose to go through and actively search for.
It also just reminded me of the Jasper and Lapis discourse in the SU fandom if you remember that lol. Should SU have been rated above T and up too.
Sorry for the super late response I didnt realize how long its been I was busy goin through it but I guess I gotta just get over it. Thanks for sending me something to distract me from it.
Uhm YEAH. Getting mad a something that could possibly be interpreted as an SA allegory even when nothing of the sort is depicted or talked about and the player dont even NEED to interact with the scene if they dont want to... is dumb. Obviously. I genuinely dont know what else to say TBH its bafflingly dumb.
The Jasper/Lapis shit was dumb too... especially when the Pearl/Garnet situation happened and everyone just joked about it.
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Get to know your mutuals!
Hehe, thanks for tagging me Shana! I appreciates it ^-^
Favorite Colors: Purple is my go-to (purple next to green is love) but most anything goes. Just no green besides orange please!
(purple+green all thanks to her haha)
Currently Reading: Hm! The last two fanfictions were Firestarter and Imperfect by @pandora-writes-one-piece (love them both to bits!!), for manga One Piece Party 4 and for actual book... Sad Cypress, I think! That said I have a nasty habit of reading multiple (up to a hundred) books at the same time, reading one chapter then moving on to the next book - repeat - cycle once I'm through with all of them.
I could make an entire reading blog about the books I read honestly (I study Philosophy, never shutting the fuck up is a particular talent of mine) but I'd rather be an obsessive weirdo about my One Piece loves :)
Last Song: I've been stuck on some of my CDs again as of late! Notably I've been listening to "Keeps Gettin' Better" by Aguilera, "When I Grow Up" by The Pussycat Dolls and "Survivor" by Destiny's Child. Lots of 2000s music but I love so many tracks from the 20th century too!!
Last Film: Jungle with Danielle Radcliffe!
Sweet/Salty/Sour: Salty>Sour>Sweet but I regularly get fed up with having to eat food so technically Nothing>Anything
Tea or Coffee: Tea but mostly a coke addict
Working On: My bachelor's thesis! Just kidding, my thesis is actually working on me.
Also working on One Piece Party translations, seven different fanfictions, three different original books, so many new LoveyBug drawings, a lot (and I mean a lot) of shrink art, the Punk Captain Art Collab, three new fanfictions I've only had the rough ideas of so far and I also want to maybe record some One Piece Pirate Warriors 3 and 4 for Doflamingo scenes but gaming is such a time sink that I'm putting it off loads and loads! Oh yeah there's also some fandubs I still need to record for (I'm a voice actor) and a letter to a friend that I need to write ASAP (oh my god I'm so sorry it's taking so long I swear I love you)
I don't want to force my tag on anyone so I'll tag you @noodledrawsandstuff cause I think you might enjoy this kind of thing and then any other person who'd like being part of this is officially invited too!!
Get to know your mutuals!
*grabs mic and clears throat* Thank you so much @jintaka-hane and @igiulss for tagging me! I love these things and I love you girls! ❤️
Favorite Colors: Black, purple, and red. I was a bit of a goth teen, and my favorite colors never really got to change 😎
Currently Reading: SMUT! *snort* I used to care a lot about what I read, trying to stick to 'good literature' and the classics and all, but I'm now at a stage of my life where I stoped giving a f*ck and now I read what the hell I feel like. Judgment be damned. So I'm going through the ACOTAR series, devouring them like a madwoman. I have Edgar Allan Poe's short stories giving me the stink eye from my nightstand, and I might use him as a palate cleanser after!
Last Song: Oh, I've been cranking the Imperfect soundtrack I created on Spotify to get me in the mood for the next chapter, and the last one that played was, curiously enough, Imperfect by Stone Sour. I can't get enough of Corey Taylor, that man is a God!
Last Film: I barely watch any TV. I read and write in my spare time, so the last movie I saw was in the movie theatre and I took my son, so we got to see the live action of Lilo & Stitch! I enjoyed it a lot! 🥰
Sweet/Salty/Sour: All of them???? I mean... I can't choose! I have a very sweet tooth, but I love sour things... and salty snacks? UGH! Why are you doing this to me??? Gun to the head: sweet!
Tea or Coffee: Coffee. 100% coffee. Expressos, please. Or how we call it here in Portugal: bica. Actually was discussing this with Giuls just yesterday. I need at least 4 of them on a daily basis. 😍
Working On: Too many things at the same time, actually 😆 I'm working on Imperfect, Kid's Meet-Cute and I'm also throwing a few paragraphs for chapter 2 of All of Yourself, as well as trying to plan and write a very challenging longfic for my main account with ships like: SaNami, LawBin, Ace&Vivi and ZoTash.
I'm going to tag *checks to see who hasn't been tagged yet* @physics-of-one-piece @laidenbreecatchall @isabeauwolf and anyone else who wants to jump in on the fun wagon!
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paragon is such a wild fic cuz like..it’s weird. Dark. Messed up. The author doesn’t shy away from making Hannibal genuinely creepy. But it has just enough cute moments and introspective writing to keep you hooked
#did I skip multiple chapters at a time while reading? yeah#I’m not even going to get into the sex scenes bc I’m traumatized#had to take a lap around my room after a couple#hannibal#nbc hannibal#will graham#hannibal lecter#hannigram#nbc hannigram#mizumono
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“I have this scene in my head for my fic that I really love but i don’t feel like writing all of the other stuff to get to it.”
I see this comment like 5 times a day in fic writing spaces lol
a scene that you don’t want to write is a scene you don’t want to read. don’t write stuff you don’t want to read.
me, personally: wait until the scenes that get you to that first initial scene you were excited about are just as interesting as that scene too. it won’t be the first, second, or third thing you think of. if u have a scene you really want to write, write that, and keep writing only those exciting scenes that come to you. eventually you have a million interesting scenes for your fic and they become puzzle pieces for you to arrange and then eventually the strings come together and you realize you really do have an interesting way to get to that original scene, and you’re just as excited to write it, if you haven’t already written it when you were brainstorming other scenes earlier in the writing process that you didn’t even realize could carry your story like that.
#My process is 1) write the initial scene — the first one I thought of that inspired the fic#2) daydream (preferably to a custom playlist) and write ONLY THE DIALOGUE that I like from my daydreams#3) discover common threads while daydreaming and thus discover a theme#4) now that I have my theme; my favorite dialogue lines; and my inspiration scene I begin drafting#Drafting includes writing around the dialogue and filling in the gaps with action#I find that dialogue drives my plot usually but I’m trying to get better at throwing chaotic events at my characters#and forcing them to respond to circumstances beyond their control/beyond the consequences of their choices#Drafting is also the point where I start writing only the exciting stuff and stringing it all together like a lunatic#5) once you have enough scenes to string together and you’ve put the puzzle together: reread and revise#6) put it down and don’t touch it dont think about it don’t do anything to it for like at least 3 days to 1 week#7) reread with fresh eyes and revise again#8) repeat steps 6 and 7 until you have desired fic#Sometimes if I really don’t like the way a story is working though I’ll play around with scenes#like “what if I remove this scene? How does that affect things? Is this a loadbearing scene in the story or is it superfluous?”#“What if I delete chapters 5-15 and just totally rewrite everything in that space”#that one is a rough one to go through and is the reason why I have some fics that have never seen the light of day 😂#this is all coming from pre-2021 ghostlycod#back when I was in the marvel fandom and writing 100k self insert OC fanfics#14-18 year old me wrote like an Ancient Greek poet#pure genius masterpieces with masterclass articulation#and idk what happened but it’s like at 25 I’ve suddenly gone brain dead#I envy 14 year old me so much when I’m writing now#That girl was just humming along to Lorde on repeat creating multiple full length novels at the same time all written with English Premium
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Despite the lack of time, Yoo Joonghyuk hesitated. He hesitated while holding tightly to my collar. "…We don't have to hold another funeral, right?" I smiled because of Yoo Joonghyuk's question. "Even if I die, I will rise again." "That isn't what I mean." Yoo Joonghyuk's expression was serious. A high wind blew between me and Yoo Joonghyuk. I looked at him for a moment before asking, "Do you remember the second scenario?" The subway of Oksu Station. It was where Yoo Joonghyuk first appeared after smashing everything. He was a cold-blooded regressor who would use whatever means necessary for the results. Yoo Joonghyuk's calm eyes shook at my words. Who would've known at the time? Me and this guy, we would actually end up as companions. I hadn't wanted to admit it but now I had to. The things that hadn't seemed possible became reality. I was actually going through the scenarios with him. That's why I could now say it. Just like I did when I first met him on Han River Bridge. This was the way that suited us best. "Release your hand and get lost, you damn son of a bitch."
*Screaming*
Hey guys, remember when Heewon and Dokja had that totally random conversation about dating right in the middle of the arc about figuring out who the person Dokja loves most is?
Remember how Heewon said that Dokja's the type of person to want a "fateful meeting"?
#how can this novel be THIS GOOD?#every little clue and character detail is fitting together so perfectly#dokja's constant talk through the entire novel about how much he loves the novel and how both the novel and yjh have been there for him#the literally mirrored 'you sound so fond when you talk about THAT GUY' scenes for both dokja and yjh#the multiple main 'potential loves' not having a proper affection score#now we're calling back to that fateful meeting conversation#THE 'FATEFUL MEETING' THAT HE HAD WITH THE ONE HE LOVES MOST#THE ONE HE LOVES MOST WHO IS YJH BECAUSE YJH IS HIS BELOVED PROTAGONIST#oh man and right in the middle of this very serious fight where EVERYONE IS GOING TO DIE if you don't do something RIGHT NOW#yjh still can't stop himself from pausing just to make sure that dokja will come back to them#orv#orv spoilers#orv novel chapter 178#orv liveblog#omniscient reader's viewpoint#kdj#yjh#joongdok
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I'm going to try and finish at least one (1) fic this month even if it kills me bc jfc I'm losing my mind at how much I wanna finish sth and just keep stalling gfdi
#It'll probably be Information Asymmetry bc I have half the chapter written#I've legit struggled to get back to it mainly bc the actual stuff I've written is like... Not Exactly What I Want#And that's irritating tf outta me#I need to re read the whole part and then try and get the last chapter sorted#I'll give myself a challenge I think since it's starting to turn to summer#And my brain is full on making my body think 3/4 hours of sleep is Restful#Insomnia and summer sunshine is a horrid combination#Add in adhd meds that make my body and brain more focused and I'm kinda shit outta luck lmao#So yeah. Next few days I'm gonna look over what I've got for Information Asymmetry#And the rest of Signalling Theory series#Which means going through OneNote where I have All My Notes (there are multiple notebooks for the series lmao bc I'm a nerd)#And trying to actually get what is in my head out in text form to make it flow#I may need to do some arting to help my brain out#I do need to rewrite a scene already to work with the art piece I started for the last chapter#But I also gotta admit to myself that this might not be the Last Chapter of IA#Even tho I Really Planned It To Be#I'd like to blame all the fanfic writers I love and follow who also cannot constrain the chapter count#Y'all awful influences lmao#Nah I'm kidding. Y'all the fuckin BEST#Anyway#Kat talks#I have an Epic The Musical fic that's also started itself into existence which fuck knows what that's gonna do...
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5k my ass, we're at 10k word mark, y'all! Will we get to 15k? Probably!

#hazbin hotel#velvette#velvette hazbin hotel#the almond milk fic#fic wip#fic in progress#this is getting out of hand#we still have a fashion show to ruin and Velvette scaring the shit out of Vox and an impromptu therapy session AND a sweet epilogue to go#plus a few more scenes before that for ✨character development✨#...yeah#sounds like it's going to be closer to 20k#and I refuse to split it into multiple chapters because then I'd have to split Vox and Valentino's fics into chapters
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Me: I am so sick of feeling like shit all the time
Also me whenever it’s time to sleep: omg yay my phone
#I’ll read one more chapter#I’ll write one more scene#I’ll watch one more episode#WHY DONT YOU GO TO SLEEP!!!!#birdsong sings#it’s actually not my phone proved by multiple nights in a row staring at the ceiling for hours#but it feels like it!!!
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I know it happens often to see writers during a long fic to complain at some point about the first chapters because they got better in the meantime and they look bad to them now.
But this is the first time where I saw this happened when the writing actually got worse
#Like this fic is enraging me#Because it started okay#Simple writing that generally worked despite some awkward moments from time#And evolved into this word vomit where everything is just stated (litterally zero show and all tell) multiple times!#Like it builds zero emotions it just tells me#Conversations made less and les sense going on#I saw zero bonding between the main characters despite being together basically in every scene#It drives me insane#This person believes they got better just because they write longer chapter and longer paragraph#But they tell me litterally nothing#Or so little in proportion to the amount of words#This isn't to bashing on the writer of course#Which is why I am consciously saying nothing about the actual content of the story here#But Jesus christ#Not only i feel like the whole plot that I had interest in was ruined#But also all the potential of the writer themselves#I saw at first someone who just needed to learn some more but was doing generally fine#And instead of improvement i am seeing them getting worse and worse#If they truly believe this is better then they're beyond salvation#I am so sad for all that wasted potential#Rant#Sort of#Ignore me i just needed to express these thoughts and feelings somewhere#I don't want to upset anyone#Maybe I should just delete this post
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Sigh…
#just throwing words into the void#I really wanted to work on Satiate this weekend but that ain’t happening now#this new chapter really sucked joy from me I feel so sad#the whole fic is plotted out and multiple scenes are written it’s just hard to go into the pov of the characters#it’s just too sad#like wow I have been hyperfixated for months and now I’m just sitting here with anxiety and dread#everything is of course exasperated by my brain but still#I wish 431 was something else something more fun and lighthearted something joyful for the last time we see these characters#like we’re never gonna SEE them again and we’re left on such a note to sadness grief and melancholy#trying to think about these characters or write for them I’m not up for it and that kills me#because I’ve been so busy I’ve had no time or energy to write#and now that I do…the spark is gone replaced with dread
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snow day tomorrow. guys there WILL be jasico fic. mark my fucking worms
#stuff#i am so close to finishing this one#knocking out multiple prompts in one go with the sexy technicality of 'chapters'#and guys one of these scenes......i cant talk about it#it's. it is sooooo
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This song didn't make it onto my Spotify top plays, but it still inspired one of my favorite (if a few throwaway lines for an offscreen event) scenes in Compass...
As soon as they pull out of the courtyard, Sierra pulls out her phone, dials Uncle John, and sets it on the console. “Sierra?” The voice coming through is breathy and a little choked. “Yeah. It’s me. We’re okay. Just ran into some trouble. Motel California is officially history though.” She sighs. “It’s a long story. I’ll tell you when I get home. But we’re all okay and we still have Barrett and we’re still headed to the Silver Cells.” She gets the last part out all in a rush, hoping to pre-emptively halt any requests for her to turn back. “Thank God.” She hears a sound of creaking wood, and some kind of faint mumbled voice in the background. He’s at the church. Probably lit a candle for me as soon as he heard the signal came in. “Maira told me about the distress call. And told me not to call and distract either of you.” He chuckles weakly. “She was right.”
The minute I heard that song, the only thing in my head was the mental image of John, as soon as he realized a distress signal was coming in from Sierra's last known location, rushing to the closest church to pray for a miracle, because the one thing he can't bear is to lose the only piece of his brother he has left.
@catwingsathena @nade2308 @telltaleclerk @the-one-and-only-valkyrie and I think you might appreciate this one @ettawritesnstudies
#compass#john stoker#I need to write this as a sort of 'deleted scene'#when I originally intended this novel to be a multiple pov one it was going to be part of chapter
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Mnemotechnique is getting unreasonably long now :') 75k :')
#personal#with at least two chapters to go because i keep lengthening it aaaaaaaufughjjhjhjhhj#legit i have like 12000 more words ready to go in multiple word docs i just need to thread them together#final scene written :)) now we need to get there
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Don't torment yourself *too much* about the locked room puzzles. Think about them, sure, but you aren't really supposed to solve them individually. Arguably not even on an episode basis.
don't worry i'm trying not to! like obviously i am thinking about the logistics of how it was done etc but i think the "who" and "why" are more interesting and to get to those you don't really need to know exactly how a room was sealed from the inside - i'm focusing more on exploring the suspects and the other stuff than specifically the locked room, so please don't think i'm sitting there spiralling about a bedroom door's chain lmao.
#dialectrician#light writeup spoilers but my thinking and conclusions are being guided more by the witch narrative thematic frameworks#where i'm using that stuff to vaguely point at the scene and go 'something is not what it seems here'#since i can still entertain my culprit theories without necessarily needing to know how they locked the room#in comparison the kinzo study locked room disappearance was nicer#since the mechanism was easily understood and a probable solution had been foreshadowed for multiple chapters in advance#eva and hideyoshi are kind of dumped on you without much run-in time so you have less to work with lol
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The group confronts Kagha about her connection to the Shadow Druids. Sage is almost glad when the fighting starts; having to listen to Kagha defending her choices is grating on their nerves.
The fight ends predictably: with Kagha, the Shadow Druids and whoever else joined her side dead. Rath isn't happy and neither are most of the other druids. Sage doesn't particularly care at that point. The tieflings won't have to worry about getting kicked out before Sage and the others manage to take out the goblin threat anymore. The kids are somewhat safe for now.
When they leave the grove again, Wyll speaks up: "I have to say, I'm a tad surprised you didn't try talking her out of it. You've been surprisingly successful so far whenever you do."
Sage looks back at him, then past him at the gate receding in the distance. They shrug. "Even if I had convinced her, it probably wouldn't have changed the beliefs of the others there. And besides, she was trying to get a child killed. If we hadn't intervened that first time, Arabella would probably be dead. I don't forgive that. A better person might be glad if she changed her ways but I don't care."
They turn back, leaving the grove further behind them.
"I suppose you could be right," Wyll says, voice trailing off.
Sage shrugs again.
For everyone's sake, they hope Halsin will be alive and actually able to bring the druids back to their senses.
For some reason, Sage had always assumed druids were kinder people than most. The whole connection to nature thing and all that. Of course, that assumption had been quickly proven wrong. We don't allow drow in here this, foulbloods and outsiders and parasites that. They scoff. "Let's hope this Halsin is a better guy than most of the druids we've met so far."
On that point at least, they can all agree.
#oops what's this#another sage snippet?#was not planning on this#was thinking all day about the conclusion to their personal story in act 3 (there will be pain :3 and very deserved murder >:3)#but I played this and for the first time didn't even try convincing kagha#because sage wouldn't#they really really wouldn't#and it's a lot easier for me to roleplay now that I've finished the game twice and seen act 1 many more times#easier to let go of the compulsive 'I have to be the best possible person' thing#and tbh#in the end#it was kind of gratifying to kill the other two druids that fight alongside kagha and the shadow druids#especially that elf guy#can't stand him#glad he's dead lol#also#I'm thinking about putting these snippets on ao3 but I'm unsure if it would be better as one work with multiple chapters or a series#technically they're not chapters that build on each other but just random scenes that all revolve around sage#but posting many individual short works feels also kinda unnecessary and spammy#bg3#bg3 tav sage#my writing
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