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i’m in the corners of hsr that no one has ever heard or seen before

phainon fans r scary how the fuck r yall getting like. over 20k stellar jade I DONT EVEN HAVE THAT MUCH. SINCE WHEN HAVE YALL BEEN SAVING HELLO?????? I SAW SOMEONE W LIKE OVET 31k. HOW.

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yeah so.. how was that trailer guys!

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that phainon trailer?!? that man has risen and idk if i’m devastated or down bad for his new form

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putting this out there ik ppl say and or confirmed sunday doesn’t have his lower wings (or the back ones i mean) but that man HAS to have something right? like i refuse to let go of the dream of him having his biblical accurate wings.

i got mischievous thoughts in my mind at that fact tho.. i’m gonna ignore canon this time and blindly believe that kfc man has some weird angel properties and that when he goes through molting it’s so time consuming that if he trusts you enough, would allow you to help him just this one time. he has them confined in his clothes 24/7 and has to let ‘em breathe during that time specially so one hundred percent they’re sensitive. now that i think about it he’s gotta be so sweaty omgg. ignoring that… i’m there’s gotta be some sensuality that ensues for sure.

incorporating this as we speak (i nod as im typing away on my fic )

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wgatever .

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how do you guys feel about a slight oc insert? i know it was meant to be an x reader for my sunday fanfic, but i realized that the characterization is vital when it comes to some of the descriptions. only at moments, not trying to overwhelm it with physicality and self reflection lol

le sigh am i really going for an oc route? maybe. but i still want to give it its liberty to be read as a reader insert so i’ll wrap it up as it’s supposed to be

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i lied about this btw. wooops. so i’ll put it out today. wink wonk.

hello!! i write everything and nothing in this blog. majority consists of fanfic, headcanons, imagines, etc..

just pushing this out so tumblr doesn’t reduce my audience like last time lol

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muahaha i can now finally world build u guys i finally got to download honkai star rail once more and guess who’s the first one to greet me?

yeah pooks here. anyways this makes it a LOT more easier to write so stay tuned for my summary release!!

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2006

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✏️ Writing Dialogue That Sounds Like Real People, Not Theater Kids on Red Bull

(a crash course in vibes, verbal economy, and making your characters shut up already)

Okay. We need to talk about dialogue. Specifically: why everyone in your draft sounds like they’re in a high school improv group doing a dramatic reading of Riverdale fanfiction.

Before you panic, this is normal. Early dialogue is almost always too much. Too polished. Too "scripted." So if yours feels off? You’re not failing. You’re just doing Draft Zero Dialogue, and it’s time to revise it like a boss.

Here’s how to fix it.

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🎭 STEP ONE: DETOX THEATER ENERGY I say this with love: your characters are not all quippy geniuses. They do not need to deliver emotional monologues at every plot beat. They can just say things. Weird, half-finished, awkward things.

Real people:

interrupt each other

trail off mid-thought

dodge questions

contradict themselves

repeat stuff

change the subject randomly

Let your characters sound messy. Not every line needs to sparkle. In fact, the more effort you put into making dialogue ✨perfect✨, the more fake it sounds. Cut 30% of your clever lines and see what happens.

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🎤 STEP TWO: GIVE EACH CHARACTER A VERBAL FINGERPRINT The fastest way to make dialogue feel alive? Make everyone speak differently. Think rhythm, grammar, vocabulary, tone.

Some dials you can twist:

Long-winded vs. clipped

Formal vs. casual

Emojis of speech: sarcasm, filler words, expletives, slang

Sentence structure: do they talk in fragments? Run-ons? Spirals?

Emotion control: are they blunt, diplomatic, avoidant, performative?

Here’s a shortcut: imagine what your character sounds like over text. Are they the “lol okay” type or the “okie dokie artichokie 🌈✨” one? Now translate that into speech.

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🧠 STEP THREE: FUNCTION > FILLER Every line of dialogue should do something. Reveal something. Move something. Change something.

Ask:

Does this line push the plot forward?

Does it show character motivation/conflict/dynamic?

Does it create tension, add context, or raise a question?

If it’s just noise? It’s dead air. Cut it. Replace it with a glance. A gesture. A silence that says more.

TIP: look at a dialogue scene and remove every third line. Does the scene still work? Probably better.

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💥 STEP FOUR: REACTIVITY IS THE GOLD STANDARD Characters don’t talk into a void. They respond. And how they respond = the real juice.

Don’t just write back-and-forth ping pong. Write conflict, dodge, misunderstanding. If one character says something vulnerable, the other might joke. Or ignore it. Or say something cruel. That’s tension.

Dialogue is not just information exchange. It’s emotional strategy.

Try this exercise: A says something revealing. B lies. A notices, but pretends they don’t. B changes the subject. Now you’ve got a real scene.

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🔍 STEP FIVE: PAY ATTENTION TO POWER Every convo has a power dynamic, even if it’s tiny. Who’s steering? Who’s withholding? Who’s deflecting, chasing, challenging?

Power can shift line to line. That shift = tension. And tension = narrative fuel.

Write conversations like chess matches, not ping pong.

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✂️ STEP SIX: SCISSORS ARE YOUR BEST FRIEND The best dialogue is often the second draft. Or third. Or fourth. First drafts are just you figuring out what everyone wants to say. Later drafts figure out what they actually would say.

Things to cut:

Greetings/closings ("Hi!" "Bye!"--skip it unless it serves tone)

Exposition disguised as chat

Obvious thoughts spoken aloud

Explaining jokes

Repeating what we already know

Readers are smart. Let them fill in blanks.

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🎧 STEP SEVEN: READ IT OUT LOUD (YES, REALLY) If you hate this step: too bad. It works. Read it. Mumbling is fine. Cringe is part of the ritual.

Ask yourself:

Would someone actually say this?

Does this sound like one person speaking, or a puppet show with one hand?

Where does the rhythm trip? Where’s the breath?

If you can’t say it out loud without wincing, the reader won’t make it either. Respect the vibe.

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🏁 TL;DR: If you want your dialogue to sound like real people, let your characters be real. Messy. Annoying. Human. Let them interrupt and lie and joke badly and say the wrong thing at the worst time.

Cut the improv class energy. Kill the urge to be ✨brilliant✨. And listen to how people talk when they’re scared, tired, pissed off, in love, or trying not to say what they mean.

That’s where the good stuff is.

—rin t. // thewriteadviceforwriters // official advocate of awkward silences and one-word replies

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Hello! I'm currently in the works for a sunday x reader fic, my take on it if you will. Welcome to this new blog btw!! Still in the works TT

It's a slow-burn . Unfortunately for me. Fortunately for you. A bucket of popcorn for us both. But I'm really proud with how far ahead I've already set the story up. It's planned, it's being written, and it will soon be posted!

I only wanted to come on here and announce a warning, as my phone gave out 3 months ago and had to stop playing hsr for the lack of space. Was I caught up to the lore? no. Will I do my research for you guys? of course. I genuinely only played Penacony and it stuck to me. I am not an avid player currently and wont be for later on </3. Nothing bothersome. Correction for accuracy is always appreciated but should never be the main concern.

Accuracy is expected but can be an oversight simultaneously. That is a something I have already concluded. SO what im reeeally trying to say is pls read and enjoy xoxox XD.

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hello!! i write everything and nothing in this blog. majority consists of fanfic, headcanons, imagines, etc..

just pushing this out so tumblr doesn’t reduce my audience like last time lol