#also need to think about the timeloop
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midnight--capricorn · 4 months ago
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rewriting this one part has been one of my favourite parts of this go me
I think it could probably take a little more from the original but this one definitely isn't focusing as hard on how Kyle feels that can come later we need to actually get the action in here
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peoplesprincessgeorge · 1 year ago
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galex + txt posts = true <3
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kivaember · 2 months ago
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my fave thing with the 1999 fic is when arthur (and the hex) are going to finally comprehend the full horror that is a time loop staked to a person dying
like you can argue this means that drifter is immortal but is it immortality when drifter actually experiences that death and actually dies, and you as their comrade has to watch them fucking die and then in the next moment, see them perfectly fine acting like that death was no big deal bc "haha i've had worse".
and there's always a lag between drifter dying the loop restarts too, long enough for the hex to have that brief moment of doubt of wait is this death permanent-?
like, there's no winning here, is there? you either become apathetic to drifter dying, or you have to keep experiencing the horror of watching your close friend die (potentially in horrible ways considering techrot) so you dont become apathetic. its made even worse when drifter acts like its nbd.
idk i feel like there's SUCH a good bit of drama to dig into here, just from the sheer dissonance between the hex and drifter on this particular subject. drifter's been dying for centuries, they really arent fazed anymore, but theyve always died alone and in isolation.
now they die in front of their friends, and that somehow makes it a thousand times worse, bc those friends get upset and yell at them and they dont really get it bc its not permanent? they all know its not permanent? look theyre fine? was it bc they died messily? theyll try to do it more cleanly or out of sight next time but its not like they actively choose to die so they make no promises (then the hex gets increasingly frustrated that they dont get it).
anyway i just think this is a neat subject to poke at a little... also not at all a spoiler for the next chapter for the 1999 fic. nope. no siree...
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yuri-is-online · 1 year ago
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Ok but how did ace even get a girlfriend in the first place? Did she confess and he just went along with it? Did he think having a girlfriend would make him seem cooler? Was it a dare or something? Cause for someone like ace to just go ghost on her and not have an actual talk, kind of makes me feel like these two were not friends before they were partners.
So then, fast forward to nrc, ace is trying so hard to lose the feelings he has for his best friend. Because that's all they are: friends, homies, if you (duece) will. Yuu has the cream of the crop to pick from, he's kind of at a disadvantage here.
Plus, whose to say their entire dynamic won't change the second they get together? He doesn't want to get bored and start to hate one of his dearest friends by proxy, so might as well just play it safe and suffer a little than take that risk and the both of you suffer a lot 🤷‍♂️.
Meanwhile yuu, who still has their old phone/mp3 player, has been playing Jenny by Studiokillers on repeat. Lying in their bed, just down horrendous for this absolute ball of boyish mischief. How dare he, honestly?
Well. At least he gives them a lot of openings to flirt with him?
*disclaimer, I was home schooled so my actual knowledge about middle school dating is beyond non-existent so take what I say with a grain of salt
The information we get about Ace's girlfriend comes from his suitor suit vignette and he does not mention how they actually got together, just some of the things that they did and how boring Ace thought all of them were. And I agree! The way they broke up does not make it sound like they were friends before dating, though they could have been casual acquaintances. The way Ace likes to goof around makes me think he was probably pretty popular, and had a lot of those types of relationships. His description of the relationship makes me think he probably went out with her because he thought she was cute and that it would be fun to have a girlfriend, but didn't actually stop to think about who she was as a person or what dating actually means. And hey, he was in middle school. He was going to be a bit stupid about those sort of things. The experience seems to have made him think a lot about what he wants in a partner, and we know from Ortho he was telling the truth when he's forced to spell it out:
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His voice lines flesh out what he wants a bit more; he says he thinks it's important to find someone you have fun with and that he wants to get married later in life. So Ace knows what he wants... he just gets really embarrassed when called out on it and refuses to talk honestly about his feelings (though he kind of does that in general hehe)
So flashing forward to NRC. Ace knows what he wants and Yuu is such a perfect fit it hurts. Best friends to lovers is a popular trope in fiction sure, but in real life? At a school? Yeah right, Ace still has to see them every day if they break up, and not to mention... I feel like Ace, Deuce, Grim, and Yuu sort of fell into their dynamic almost immediately after the mine adventure and didn't ever stop to think about it because of how natural the friendship felt. And Ace knows if things end badly he's losing the whole squad, so yeah. Better to just swallow this and stay where he is. He's still in school! He doesn't need to think about dating! He's got a housewarden to surpass, upperclassmen he admires, and a bunch of idiots to take care of. He can worry about dating later. Besides, these feelings will go away after graduation he's delusional sure of it!!!
Meanwhile, back at the ranch Ramshackle Yuu is literally in a living hell. Maybe they're a bit more emotionally mature than Ace and they just know this could work out but THEY CAN'T TELL IF HE LIKES THEM BACK BECAUSE HE KEEPS GETTING SHY AND MAKING JOKES FML!!!! But like he also lets them steal his gym shirt :ccc and he gets pouty when someone else makes an offer :ccc and really smug when Yuu says no ccc: so like maaaybe? Or maybe not and this meaningless flirting is all they'll ever have and they just. Try to be ok with it and they sort of hate themselves for it.
until Sebek properly joins the friend group and looses his fucking shit
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iamhereinthebg · 2 months ago
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Thank for all the recents question! Just gonna say that I will not answer the asks about my opinion on the recent arc/chapter storyline (what is happening right now, not lore related questions/the clock keepers stuff)
I was already giving the writing "a kinda chance" with the new timeline arc because time travel stuff are really not my cup of tea and are usually really bad
But this new chapter and last arc really don't comfort me and shows that "timetravel and time related stories can only be kinda okay if it's the center of the story" and they really are proving my point once again
I don't like things enough in the storyline rn to give a real opinion that isn't just me whining about how scared I am for the future storylines and how bad I think it is because it's not finished and I don't wanna spread ""depressing"" reviews about the state of the story rn :00 it may change, but for now I will refrain to answer bc I am too focused on the fact that I think it sucks x))
Thanks again for all the asks though that's really nice! I will do my best to answer them before next chapter 🙏
#toilet bound hanako kun#tbhk#jshk#jibaku shounen hanako kun#ramblings#I will start answering not next week but the one after dljdkkd#wanted to elaborate bc I got a lot of those and I don't wanna think too hard on the story rn uzhdjbd#and I also don't think the fandom needs my negativity on the writing XD#Tbhk is an okay tuer story but I truly think the writing is not that good#I really hope my opinion will change with the whole arc/manga but for now I truly don't really like it so I don't wanna talk about it#the fear for a timeloop makes me mostly laugh hystericaly than anything else bc imagine not giving that much of a fck#about most of your characters help me#and chpater 101 doesn't comfort me with this hand and all bc I don't wanna Nene to be the only character in this manga#she is the protagonisy and is so so so important in most storylines#but this is too much for me for a manga which is not centered around a character suffering in a timeloop#it just doesn't work in a story like that for me tbhk is a timeloop already with Nene and Amane#this is not needed to make Nene the only one remembering#or it's just an easy way out to finish the manga in a bad way bc they don't want to write for it anymore#this is how I am seeing it for now#and even for Nene's character I don't see a world where a pacing for a story like this rn could work#it would be so rushed it would feel like a joke mostly#ANYWAYS#that's all I will say on this#and once again that's my opinion#my friends told me often I am complicated to please with stories and welp here we go again ig rip
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missholloween · 10 months ago
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After finishing In Stars and Time today and as a big fan of both Madoka Magica and Majora's mask, I think being in a loop would fix Owen Carvour.
It might not seem so at first: after the fall, he's in a really bad place mentally (who wouldn't), and being in a timeloop would probably only make it worse, especially if his actions don't have any consequences. However, if enough time passes inside of the loop ans he can't get out, he'll end up breaking, thus becoming emotionally vulnerable. Don't you want to see Owen being honest with Curt after the fall? Talk about everything he went through, the betrayal, the anger, the grief? What if he just... Gave up, and Curt saw it? What would he do, if he saw the love of his life even more shattered than in the musical itself?
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loveologystudies · 1 year ago
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thinking about isat flight rising au.......
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arodykeism · 9 months ago
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some bobbles (+ two unfinished things)
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#bonk.png#undescribed#exocolonist#i was a teenage exocolonist#iwatec#iwatex#anyway first thing bc its the shortest i dont think sol would actually id as anything n prefer to be unlabeled#bc of like. the timeloop stuff n every life kind of blending together BUT i think it'd be funny as hell if they were aro#n just never became aware of this bc their self reflection skills in regards to shit unrelated to the loop are That Bad#also im aro n like when characters are aro + love it when characters are kind of deranged about their friends#speaking of which madoka au! forever ago i drew the 🤝 meme with sol n homura n now im coming back to that#its not a 1 to 1 au straight up the commonalities begin n end at ''tammy & sol are kind of like madoka/homura''#stuff i got down for it in a sleep deprived haze were that sol nemmie n tangent were the only magical girls#n tammy hasnt been offered to become one nemmie n tangent arent aware that sol is a magical girl for a while#friendgroup at school is nemmie cal tammy n sol (tangent goes to a different school n is separate until she teams up with nemmie)#nemmie n tang team up bc somehow witch attacks keep being diverted from certain locations n grief seeds are disappearing#which is actually sol's doing theyre moving witches away from areas tammy will be n the grief seeds are to 1. discourage nem n tang from#fighting witches n 2. so sol can stockpile them basically bc they use timetravel a lot n need to keep their gem clean#the timeloop has progress (to an extent) its not a singular month looping its kind of like. video game save mechanics#like reloading the save u have before a bossfight n then if ur not adequately prepared reloading a save u have farther back#n then continuing on until u get stuck on a specific fight again yknow#theres more but moving on to the two unfinished things those are meant to be like a utdr au (specifically dr)#in a similar manner to the previous au of same premise n setting but different story bc theyre different characters#there's a lot less set for this au its entirely just playing in the sand n has nothing beyond vague role assignments#the first one that's like lineart in different colors is entirely scrapped bc i didnt like how it was turning out (meant to be darkworld fit#second one i struggled BADLY with marz oh my god this au is literally primarily for having fun with character designs but oh my god.#as it says there shes meant to be a modern art styled metal monster (got the metal idea from her dads' names n the modern art bc shesrefined#n sleek) but i had no actual idea how to convey that n i was trying to tackle it from a pixel art angle this time n i could notfigure it out#n then nomi nomi was super easy literally didnt even sketch them theyre a tiny pixie im sorry marz T-T#probably not gonna touch on this stuff again cause i was fixing on exo to avoid thinking about my bday but its happened so im fine now 👍
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arolesbianism · 11 months ago
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Time for more eternal gales isat au, this time featuring Sier as Isabeau, creating a sprite I can never use next to Aris’ because despite my best efforts it would make them look tall
#keese draws#eternal gales#oc#oc art#isat#in stars and time#this one didn’t take nearly as long as the aris one but I think I suffered for it more from the clothes alone#siffrin made me forget I suck at drawing clothes rip#this was also harder because of how much trickier it was to try and adapt siers design to feel fitting enough for my standards#they have a very stylized design compared to most of the others#I kind of took the lazy route out by keeping most of their original shapes in tact but it’s fine#sier in this au would serve the needed role of emotionally intelligent bestie who is also too scared to cross boundaries to do much#but despite this I do think they’d actually get the suspicion quest in this au#mostly because mase is a furry artist not a nerd and sier would be more likely to look at aris and go bro. are you in a fucking timeloop.#it also differs in that aris doesn’t yell at sier abt it instead looping before they can finish because she can’t handle hearing them be#right on the money about this thing that she thought she was handling perfectly#she doesn’t want to fail them she doesn’t want them to realize she’s failed them she doesn’t want to be a burden she doesn’t want them to#‘realize’ they’re better off without her#aris is Incredibly resistant to accepting help on most serious issues because shes convinced that it’s her responsibility to deal with it#by herself and that if she can’t then she’s a failure and worse than useless#I mean in canon eternal gales she literally loses her eye and arm because of that#in this au she just lost them how sif lost his eye but she still has. complexes abt all that.#but yeah sier also differs wildly from isa in many Many other ways as does the rest of the cast from their assigned characters#for sier they rly aren’t the jock of the group at all instead being more of the guy who keeps the mood lighthearted at all times lest they#die of stress because the others haven’t said anything in a whole 30 seconds#aka they’re the self assigned peacekeeper who doesn’t actually need to constantly keep the peace because no one’s fighting but they still#feel like they need to so they dance and dance and dance for their friends until they collapse from exhaustion#metaphorically ofc#this is why they’re both terrified to confront aris when she starts acting a bit fucked up but also why they still do sometimes anyways#they talk abt this a lil bit in their friend quest as they talk abt how they want to change but are scared to
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all-lars-bars · 3 months ago
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Mmmmmm. The Bioshock 2 ISAT AU in my head goes crazy
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You mentioning timeloops got me thinking of the idea some people have had about the mc looping back whenever they die in a noble fight, but expanding it to be: everytime the mc dies, they loop back, but so does the other time traveler, Ingo. Who has no idea what's happening or why. Just think about all the times a person can die in their first run of the game! It'd be disorienting to be involved in any kind of time travel shenanigans, but to be along for someone else's ride, without there seeming to be any rhyme or reason to why you're skipping back would be so scary. Especially if no one else seemed to notice the changes and you already had an untrustworthy memory.
Or alternate idea: everytime Ingo dies he loops back to the start of the day, but whenever he does Emmet does too. Pretty sure Emmet could figure out it has something to do with Ingo, but it'd be a scary mystery as to why. He was already worried about Ingo the entire time he was missing, but when he started periodically looping back it got even worse. Could also be combined with some sort of wound or phantom pain transfer; whatever happens to Ingo happens to Emmet. In one way, great, because at least he knows his brother is alive! In many ways, not great, because what the fuuuck
this absolute CALLED SHOT of a plot point in the timeloop fic i can't finish writing whkjwhwjkwh. ok well in that one it's not just "loop back to start of day on death," it's that hisui's trapped in a permanent loop of mmm a little over a week before the world ends, and ingo's the only person conscious of the resetting. it's all very majora's mask. and then over on the other side of the rift, emmet is, yes, ALSO trapped in the loop, and while ingo gets the visual cue of "oops, planet rolled over and died again," emmet has literally. no. fucking. idea. why this is happening, other than that it MUST have something to do with the thing that stole his brother, since that appears to him to be point where it resets to.
imagine how painful it would be to be constantly resetting to the moment just after losing him. trying over and over and over but you're always just a little bit too late. and then on the other side, since the loop starts when ingo arrives, imagine having your entire living memory be a transient and ephemeral thing. the inevitability that every single memory you form will eventually be erased from reality, and you're the only one still carrying it. after the fact of having your entire life stolen once already.
uhhh i got a little distracted oops what were we talking about. OH THAT FIRST IDEA IS ALSO REALLY GOOD. you're right the idea of just being dragged along on someone else's timeloop ride is fuuun. getting to be the passenger, remembering previous iterations but having absolutely no control over it. and especially if this is on top of oop-ingo's dissociative episodes. sometimes he skips a day, and then some other times he makes up for it by doing a day twice. or more than twice sometimes, if the protag's really stuck on a thing. that is actually so fucked up. just no correlation between your personal awareness of time and the actual apparent reality whatsoever.
oouohg and then. fuck now you've got me going. but. i feel like a hallmark of timeloop fics is the target becoming sort of blasé about their mortality or like, the experience of pain. because on the one hand, they have infinite retries so it's nbd. on the other hand, because it's so "simple" to try again, they feel like they have a moral obligation to get it right. do it better. good enough is never good enough when you can try again and again and again for perfect. all it costs is a few moments of pain and then you can save that person, shortcut those hours, be faster be smarter know better– so that's the protag's angle. that's what they're living through, being the center of it.
okok now. now imagine they make it to the highlands, or wherever, having had three regions and three nobles to get comfy with this perfectionist ruleset. except, now they're being shepherded around by ingo. and ingo remembers. and crucially they do not yet know that ingo remembers.
i think i'm imagining they ignore ingo's warning about the alpha crobat, bc, look this is the fast way, charge ahead and get killed. and before ingo can even begin to process any of that, like oh fuck or why did you just run in there or oh fuck, did that kid just die—blink. day resets. and obviously, he can't be sure, but he has to think about that connection, like. it was almost the exact same instant, those two things happened. so he's thinking, while they run the day through again. and then this time he's fast enough to snag them before they can run towards the death monster, like ABSOLUTELY NOT, and when he does they go "huh. that's new."
and he's like FUCK DO YOU MEAN, THAT'S NEW???
and then oops! cat's out of the bag! no takesies backsies protag i don't think you're getting out of this one clean. and then ingo has to deal with the sudden information that the source of his torture for the past few months or however long it's been if you're counting undone days or not, is a teenager dying over and over bc god told them to. what's he even supposed to do with that.
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asheoninactive · 1 year ago
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Fascinated by the ososan fandom’s habit of making osomatsu a mastermind/guy who knows everything when it comes to the AUs where something . Bad is happening I guess
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kneworder · 9 months ago
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i have all these draft documents of half finished fics full of lines i love but that are so fundamentally flawed i can't figure out how to finish them and can't kill my darlings mercilessly enough to get past the roadblocks so i just reread them over and over and think damn this is kinda fire. wish it was anywhere near shareable.
#UGHHHHH 10k allydia fic full of dead end plotlines that lives in my google drive you will always be famous to me and me alone#allison is resurrected and i have this short bit about the five stages of grief vs the five stages of decomposition but idk if i can keep i#bc it works better if allison was dead longer. but i LIKE those lines............#i have like the barest of bones for like 6 different parts of the tw hunger games au fics......#scott one is at 4500k but i decided a while ago i need to change one of the main plot points and it's killing me bc that's like 90% of it#but i like the writing and it's like three scenes from completion!! but i can't bring myself to be happy with where i brought the plot 😔#SICK AND TWISTED!!!!!!!!!!#the tua fic that is my white whale..... reverse robins plot points plan and like four different false start documents......#the robins ghost au i never figured out a plot for....... the tommy dies instead of barb au........ THE JASON CARVER TIMELOOP STORY.......#i really like the opening i wrote for the jason time loop but that's all i wrote bc i realized i'd have to figure out a plot and rewatch s4#and like. :/ idk if i'm willing to do all that. for jason carver?? well.#i have this criminal minds fic where reid gets the flu bc he refuses to get vaccinated bc he's terrified of needles after georgia#and jj shows up to check on him bc she's also dealing w the georgia anniversary so she's desperate for proof of life#and it's like 80% done but i stopped super caring about cm a few years ago and now every time i remember it i'm like :/#i could spruce that up and post it if i really wanted to! it's not bad at all! but will i ever do that.........#OH MY GOD the like 4k i wrote from the POV of this girl stalking reid?? like i wanted to do a casefic from the unsub's perspective#i forgot about that one i was really invested in it for a while actually did a lot of research and really tried to make her sympathetic#shoutout to the random extra from that episode w jason alexander who i decided was gonna be Gwen The Stalker <3#throwback to my criminal minds era that was wild#anyways truly it is the allydia one the twthg xovers the reverse robins and the tua longfic that haunt me constantly#i always cycle between thinking about one of them on and off
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floorpancakes · 23 days ago
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lovebird is a real piece of work cause he'll just casually walk up to doumeki at festival number #1234 and say some out of pocket shit like 'i know you love me so i made a world where we don't have to think about anything else ever again that's so cool right? doesn't it just make you so happy?' while his long hair flies around him like mariko oniisama e and doumeki would immediately fold at least the first 500 times he says the exact same line cause of course you would
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apigeonisapigeon · 1 month ago
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house cat ocs: firmly rooted in the home universe. these guys aren't going anywhere except maybe the vet
purse dog ocs: i'm taking these guys to the amusement park. i'm taking them to the home depot. i'm taking them to the steampunk murder mystery and then i'm taking them directly to outer space
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valiant-portabella-pirkko · 11 months ago
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character pics below the cut!
Harbinger Saoirse - Portabella Pirkko - Dragonheart Pirkko
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Saoirse the Flame - Ceara the Defiant - High Sovereign Ruju
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Ruju the Spitfire - Explorer Sylffa - Dreamer Seren
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Frida Banes
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