Appears from the ether again, after months of only being present enough to fill my queue up, with some WIP snippets from the gen:LOCK re-write I mentioned before...
And also finally adressing these tags lmao, sorry @thesouppond I realise these are like 3 months old.
#FUCK IM JUST SEEING THIS NOW???#FUCK YEAH 2024 SEASON OF EVERYONE GETS TO REWRITE GENLOCK CAUSE FUCK S2#Ahem anyway hi genlock moot :)))#I love your writing btw! Ive read your existing GL fics theyre great!#at this point if someone can give me a GL fic i havent already met I will forever be indebted to you i am DYING for GL content
We're really out here trying our best to do better by GL than HBO did huh!! I've been loving Reloaded, it was so nice to see someone else pop up in the gL tag after it was comparatively dead for so long. I've been working on my re-write since just after s2 came out and it was lonely in there for a while there lmao.
So I'm glad you enjoyed the couple of fics I've already done! I'm re-using parts of one of them for the actual re-write since I'm going for the 'keep the basic bones of s2 but aim to fix the execution into something less shit/re-work the worst bits' and I didn't want to write that first nemesis fight over again from total scratch lmao...
I want to finish writing all of the re-write before I post it in full, but that does mean it's taking forever whoops.
I'm still not past the introduction of Sinclair as his portion is so involved and I keep getting distracted by other projects/hobbies, but I did finally get to a point where my take on Sinclair is actually fun to write! I'm keeping his boyfriend because I did at least like that Sinclair was made canonically queer and they're actually cute when I'm just doing my own thing.
So since I feel like posting some WIP bits, here's my favourite Chris/Sinclair stuff I've done so far.
“YEAH! Take that you fucked up tin can!”
Sinclair winced. The shout was like an ice pick being driven into his skull, but it was also what finally drove him to lift his head. There ahead of him, wielding a large piece of debris in one hand, was a heavyset Asian man dressed in torn clothes and covered in grime. He reared back, and for a split second Sinclair thought that projectile was for him, until he heard an impact, and the last of the humming died.
The man brushed off his hands, pride written on every feature, and in that moment he was the most beautiful thing Sinclair had ever seen.
“Coast’s clear!” the stranger called behind him. There was movement, but Sinclair didn’t care to look, his attention caught by the man’s approach. “And we’ve got a live one.”
Sinclair’s throat was so dry he broke down coughing twice, in the time it took the stranger to kneel in front of him. “I-I’m not Union. I-I know— with the uniform, and the—”
Another violent burst of coughing cut him off. The stranger handed him a canteen and a crooked smile.
“Yeah, no shit. You’ve got way too much emotion on your face to be even a defector,” he said, and if Sinclair wasn’t so busy chugging the offered water, he might have mustered a laugh. “That, plus, the lack of helmet, the collapsing, and the drone getting ready to turn you into a novelty cheese grater kinda gave it away.”
“Christ, I could kiss you right now,” Sinclair blurted and then regretted in quick succession. Fuck. He’d been in near solitary too long, his filter had worn away to nothing and he was making a damn fool of himself in front of the first sane people he’d seen in weeks.
Except the stranger just… laughed, good-naturedly. “Close, the name’s Chris, not Christ. And I’d say buy me dinner first, but it’s a bit hard out here.”
AND then a little later...
“What about the refugee railroads?”
Chris lowered his beer bottle and wiped his mouth. “Too far.”
“Vanguard safe crossings?”
“Too far.”
“The— fucking Canadian border?”
Chris laughed, “Too far. Further than either of the other things. Jesus, dude. You sure you haven’t got a concussion?”
“Mostly,” Sinclair said, rubbing his face with his intact hand. “I just— you’re going to die if you stay here. A drone only has to get lucky once.”
“And if we go deeper in, we’ll only die faster,” Chris said with a simple shrug. “We already have to pack up and move every few weeks when the line moves. And every time, the Polity border gets a little bit further away. Believe me, man, I want nothing more than to get outta here, but it’s just not happening.”
“What if I helped?”
The offer fell out before he’d consciously decided to make it, but Sinclair stood by it. Even when Chris looked at him dubiously.
“No offence, dude, but you’re just one guy. And two days ago you could barely stand.”
“And now I’m fine,” Sinclair insisted. “I’m a soldier. I was decorated for valour after I got my squad out of a run-in with the Union that should’ve killed us all. I was the only one who could even still hold a gun. I swear, I could get you somewhere safe. Are you really telling me you’d rather keep sitting around waiting to die than take a risk?”
Chris’s brow furrowed, and he didn’t answer immediately, taking another swig from his scratched up bottle of beer.
Sinclair sighed. “Look. I need to get to a Vanguard base one way or another. I don’t want to leave you guys behind if I don’t have to. I owe you my life. And maybe dinner.”
Chris almost choked on his drink.
“Wow,” he laughed, clearing his throat, “you sure pick your moments, huh?”
Sinclair shrugged. “Figure if you’re not actually into it I’ll just blame the concussion.”
“That you don’t have.”
“Exactly.”
Chris rolled his eyes, but he was smiling. “Smooth. Smooth operator. Alright, alright, fine, we’ll talk to the others in the morning. It might be a tougher sell when they’re not the ones getting dinner with a hot soldier out of it, but hey, guess we’ll see.”
“Are you looking past the just-got-done-being-tortured chic, here, or is that part of the charm?”
“Are you kidding? There’s a whole genre focused on how hot soldier guys look after they’ve been through hell.”
“Not sure that’s the intended takeaway of action movies.”
“Well,” Chris shrugged, starting to pick at a can of food, “it was definitely my takeaway.”
Sinclair laughed. Honest-to-god laughed, in a way he was surprised he was even capable of after the last few weeks. The normality of the moment was like a balm on all the aching parts of him, mental and physical alike. For a moment he could almost forget that the reason he looked like shit was because he’d just escaped the worst experience of his life. For a moment it felt like the fight was over.
Now I just have to actually get through the remainder of my Sinclair set-up and then I'll be only one chapter away from finishing the first half of the fic... so close and yet so far lmao.
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Going to call this a .5 to my other post in regards to people trying to say RWBY is essentially not progressive:
Let me present an actual case of faux-progressive (or what the ones that act like RWBY isn’t would actually say is):
Genlock s2
- Badass female main character that was seemingly repairing her relationship with her ex in Miranda in s1 > s2 made into a rank chaser, non-amicable who has a “friends w/ benefits” type of “relationship” w/ a fkboi that is hit with the first nude scene in the series
- Kazu’s struggle with identity and this may be a me thing but clearly fanserviced via normal head on feminine body; which then ofc goes into an eventual sex scene involving said feminine body nude. Following that Kazu dies.
- Val/entina ofc gets hit with the fanservice via a sex scene and feminine body is fanservice shot
- The idea of “both sides-ism” in trying to treat the Union as not really that monstrous and really they had a point in the end in essentially seeking both their own deaths as well as others. Nvm their confirmed bigoted-ness and Nazi-esque slant, cause “grey morality” + “both sides are just sides and details shouldn’t matter in judging them”
- Marin the female leader of the military = going into authoritarian mode and ends up killed
- Sinclair is mlm but only has a few slight moments to indicate it
- Cammie goes suicide route in embracing the nano tech (she comes back but had no clue that it’d be the case, instead willingly going into death)
- As part of the “both sides-ism” both Val/entina and Yaz’s stories are undermined with Yaz
So yeah, anyone trying to talk down about RWBY’s progressive elements can take that bullshit and shove it up their ass. I suffered through s2 of Genlock seeing what faux-progressive-ism looks like. Its LGBT+ and female presenting forms fanserviced to hell and back; and both sides-isms that ignore disgusting and despicable aspects of one side in order to maintain some dumbass neutrality state. Hell it didn’t even leave my love for the idea of human consciousness beyond physical bodies scifi concept alone in tying it to the “they aren’t so bad or wrong” bullshit parade of the Union. People have mentioned Genlock s2 showcasing why RWBY should never listen to the HTDM/shitdom/bitchdom and its damn well accurate, it also does the same for LGBT+ and female rep as well.
Oh and a note cause I’m still petty af over Genlock s2: I normally put spoilery stuff under the cut, cause don’t want to ruin things for others. In this case I see it as doing people a damn favor in sticking to only having watched s1 if that’s the case and not bothering with the dumpster fire insult that is s2.
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My Live Tweet thread of Gen:Lock
(I copy and pasted a Twitter Thread of my reaction to Gen:Lock. I'm more active on Twitter, so if ya want to see more from me, my @ is LeviJones101st)
I don't usually do this, but I decided to live tweet my watch through of Gen:Lock.
Let's see if this shit show was worth all the workplace abuse and fucking over of the Nomad of Nowhere.
Spoilers: I believe the answer is gonna be no.
Okay. Starting out and this is more of a small thing, but I've gotten really sick of Sci fi settings that always like showing off how super advanced they are by showing technology that does not look like it'd be used.
Like Dave and his girlfriend decided to take leave to visit his mom with……some kind of physical hologram?
Why? Why do this instead of just physically going there?
My nitpicking aside. This opener is actually really solid, establishing this mysterious threat that I totally didn't spoil myself on and making the main hero look likable.
"How did it get so close?!" Lady. If nome of you noticed that thing, ya'll would have fallen apart even if this Union thing wasn't around.
Okay, this opening episode was actually pretty good.
And….wooow that Theme Song does not match this kind of show. It's apparently a licensed song, which is just baffling to me.
They forced people from their other projects to rush their work on this show, they had a moral line not to force a rush job from Jeff and Casey Williams?
I mean, I'm happy for them not being forced to crunch out or anything, I just find it funny that's where they draw the line.
I like that Chase is actually taking all of this very well.
It's actually quite nice.
OH MY GOD! THEY SAID THE THANG! can I go home now?
Doc….I think they're meeting their future regardless……I mean the future is the time that isn't now…….so technically they'll never meet it.
Also, I do believe that people should grieve however they can……but Miranda is kind of an asshole. At least the lady in MoU said 'good to say ya again'
I actually really love Weller. He is just so casual about everything and I love it.
I'm actually getting into this show. It is a bit slow though, ESPECIALLY for an 8 episode season.
"Making soldiers out of children!" Lady. These are grown ass adults. We're these guys meant to be like teenagers originally?
WELLER! JUST TELL THEM THE SPY WASN'T COMPATIBLE!
Weller's speech about "making a difference" is actually quite nice.
I'm already halfway through S1 and while it's been slow going, I'm actually really enjoying myself so far.
Hey. They're saying the RWBY thing.
This Nemesis thing is actually pretty cool.
And the action is actually pretty solid.
Being in a digital space where you control the mech and can affect the mind and personality of the mech pilot is actually a very interesting concept.
I'm sure somewhere this idea was done before, but this is an interesting concept.
The Chase clone twist is actually very compelling.
"Your Deus Ex Machina!"
That's actually a very clever double meaning with the phrase, kudos.
It took us til the end of the season, but we finally got the genlocks in their promoted designs.
The designs do clash with the shows visual aesthetic, but they are actually cool.
Okay. Overall, this first season was actually pretty good.
I'll be watching the second season tommorow, since it's like 10:00 where I live and i have a cavity filling tommorow.
So if what I heard about Season 2 is true, ill be in for a double whammy of pain.
Got a cavity filling and I can't feel the left side of my mouth.
Sounds like the perfect condition to watch Gen:Lock S2. I might be out of it, so maybe there won't be much live tweeting.
Hopefully, people were just overexaggerating how bad it is and it's just okay at worst.
Though I doubt it given what I've heard.
Okay this theme song matches the show better……but honestly this one just sucks.
And immediately it's clear that it's a different person writing for the show.
"Kazu is just whining" no, he’s not. You're just being childish Chase.
Aside from some awkwardness with the new creative team, this first episode was actually pretty solid.
Are they…….are they trying to make the Union look like they were in the right?????¿
Also, a good showcase of why you can't just stretch something into a 16:9 screen format
The Union:
Did the priest dude just use a deadass evil switch.
Wow, they really are tying to present this as a grey on grey conflict, aren't they?
Oh my lord they are.
OH WOELW! THAT SEX SCENE JUST CAME OUT OF NOWHERE!
It was a literal sex scene jumpscare.
Hmmmmmmm. I wonder if the Union, the guys who committed mass Terrorist actions, make machines that are over the topply evil, and took over the world, are the good guys.
Yasamin is the only character making sense in this damn show.
"They were so peaceful!" NO THEY WEREN'T! WE SAW GROUPS OF PEOPLE COMMITING SUICIDE! THERE IS NO RELIGION ON THE PLANET THAT ENDORSES IT!
HOW DOES THIS HAPPEN FROM A RELIGION FUSION DANCE ANYWAY?!
Cammie girl, lass, my sister in christ….YOU LITERALLY CHANGED YOUR PERSONALITY! WHY CAN'T KAZU DO THE SAME!
Whose idea was it to throw in all the sex stuff?????? It's not gritty or gross or whatever, IT'S JUST BIZARRE!
Also, why did nobody mention this climate crisis in Season 1?
Also, are they trying to make the Union look like a cult, because that's what it looks like to me.
This shallow samurai shit made to crap on old school anime is actually crapping on bad modern anime.
No seriously, this roboshogun stuff makes me cringe so hard.
It's trying to mock old mecha anime like Gundam and the like, but instead it's giving me the vibe of a bad high-school anime that came out in the early 2010's.
Also, this might just be a me thing, but this attempt to jump around the timeline is really annoying. Just transition to one story and say their happening at the same time, yesh.
Toxic masculinity stuff. I am totally tapped out on this.
Another JumpSex. That's my new nickname for it.
AND WHY IS THIS BEING SHOW WITH INTERCUTS TO CHASE'S ACTUALLY INTERESTING STUFF.
"See how the Polity wars!" I do see……it is significantly better than how you guys do it
Wow…..Cammie is kind of a brat.
Wow. This making the polity bad shit is annoying.
And of course……Kazu's dead.
Who the fuck kills off a character after their arc just finished?!
Like……..narratively what does this accomplish????? And no 'showing the hardship of war' is not a good reason.
All this 'grey on grey morality ' shit has done is make me hate all the characters.
Except for Kazu and Yasamin…….and they killed the former. And the latter I only like because she is the only one calling out everyone's bullshit.
And now I have to listen to Marin try and justify fascism.
MAYBE TURN OFF THE SCREAMING HEADS WHEN PRESENTING YOUR SELL'S PITCH!
'Like my old one, but different' I want to throw a dictionary at your head.
This Chase corruption plot is actually cool and interesting, a shame it's not the actual focus of this damn season.
They're trying way too hard to portray the 'Flow' as a good thing.
"Man, this roboshogun thing is so graphic!"
Why are you people affected by a 2D cartoon with blood in it when you've seen a bunch of corpses.
Also, mandatory joke about how 3D characters see live action shows and that kinda thing.
Ew……just ew.
Marin is trying to stop a cult from ruling the world and everyone is trying to stop her 'evul' plan.
I hate well intentioned extremists Union. I hate it so much.
I love mechanic dude and I can never remember his name.
I have to say the LowTierGod cinematic universe is turning out to be extremely lame so far.
I praised RWBY Vol9 when It did this thing, but I think this show makes that stuff worst in hindsight.
Also, why is Cammie's model look so weird????
Does…..typo
WAITAMINUTE! YOU MEAN THE EVIL CULT WHO TRIES TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD IS EVIL?!
God, the ceo mech is so ugly
I haven't mentioned this, but man this show is so much uglier now
I actually really like the Chase plot, it's just a shame that it's buried in so much crap.
Oh my god, the last episode, I'm almost done here.
I'm all burnt out on this show. I'm just gonna point out what's funny from now.
YOU SHOULD KILL YOURSELF NOW!-The Ultimate Message of Gen:Lock
I love this dumb fucking ai thing so much.
God, at times the dialogue is so fucking bad.
God, I hate Sinclair so bad.
Also, the body horror is so lame.
Lmao! This beast thing was made out to be so big and might and yet it's so small next to the skyscrapers.
That's it? That's the climax???????????? WHAT?!
THAT'S THE CLIMAX?! THAT WAS SO ANTI CLIMATIC WHAT THE HELL!
Also, Genlock's message…..it's proud theme?!
What did Chase's sister do to get to New York exactly????
I'm gonna fucking scream.
That's it? THAT'S IT?!
Fuck this 2nd season!
Fuck the higher ups for abusing the staff!
Fuck the pornbots who keep liking this thread!
IM DONE!
I did this whole ass thread and I appreciate absolutely none of it.
On the plus side, I can feel the left side of my face again….mostly.
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