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What do you think of the way Hazbin hotel writes women? To be honest, I'd rather prefer a much more thoughtful analysis from you, not just a generic "at least, it writes women much better than Helluva Boss" that I often times hear.
They're about as well-written as the men, if not moreso by virtue of having more screentime. I'm not going to argue this by talking about what I like about Hazbin's women, since we all know how that will go. Rather...
One of the biggest arguments in favor of Adam returning is how incredibly flat Pentious is. He's comic relief in an awkward cringe way. He has a crush on Cherri. He learned the value of friendship and forgiveness. That's it. He's meant to be part of the main cast, but that's literally all there is to his character. The argument there is that Adam's proved to have more depth, more potential for development going forward, and to be more entertaining to the audience. Narrative reasons to bring Adam back aside, having an actor like Brightman come back for Pentious but nixing Adam would be a mistake from a marketing perspective with how weakly that character is written. I just... Where do people get off saying that Hazbin's women are badly written when Pentious is supposed to be part of the main cast?
Alastor is one dimensional as fuck. I said it. He's strong and mysterious. He's most likely evil, but helping Charlie for unknown reasons. He has an aesthetic. He has some sort of beef with Vox. That is all there is to him. It makes him a goodplot device and narrative tool, but it does not make him a well-developed character. The second someone says that Vaggie is badly written but props Alastor up as great, I accept that they know jack shit about writing, care about sexymen more than actual storytelling, and proceed to disregard everything else they have to say. (Also, "Alastor will get more development in later seasons!" But the women won't because...?)
Angel Dust is genuinely well-developed. But the next-most developmented male characters next to him are... Probably Lucifer and Husk? But. Husk's development was largely relegated to a single scene. Lucifer got one episode. They got a decent amount of depth in, but not enough to make them better than Charlie, Vaggie, or even Lute or Sera. (Emily is one-note as fuck though, I'll give them that. Relegated to the Pentious corner.)
IN SHORT the limited number of episodes and resulting rushed pacing impacted all of the characters, and if you are going to severely criticize the writing of Hazbin's female characters but say that the men are fine, I do not respect you.
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ALRIGHT, A FULL LENGTH FICTION WITH A GOODPLOT ON IT'S WAY. I'll take a few business days to write this. Now that my school is over, I got my uni starting from 19th and a wonderful pre calculus test on 20th (messed up fr). BUT I'LL POST SOON I PROMISE.
Short Update!
I worked on a short fiction titled "Heaven and Back" and ngl, i thought I was just gonna post it as a simple 1k fiction, but I thought of ways I can draft it into a better fiction. I AIN'T SURE, I REPEAT, I AIN'T SURE, but it can probably be a full lenght fiction. I've never written a long fiction cause the max I wrote were approx 6K on my Heeseung fiction. I hope you all look forward to it!
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Hush, Hiush - Hush, Hush (on Wattpad) https://www.wattpad.com/1296449061-hush-hiush-hush-hush?utm_source=web&utm_medium=tumblr&utm_content=share_reading&wp_uname=Eiji692&wp_originator=0KK5w0sBhW3csHjwEhHX88pw9JX7%2FJw7YmsqR3YhvxuHBCXLX0PbnM6TV5vVRe49Kw4PO9QJqSqPyxmh%2B9OKXQ8vNSEjcUbOAu2D3Gymn2ZPlp9%2BiJBp2vR%2B5%2B3UC%2B14 This is a summary and review of the fiction and romance novel that was published a few years ago, and was a total sensation.
#alluringcharacters#compellingstory#dangers#fallenangel#fallinlove#families#friends#goodplot#highschool#interestingcharacters#jed#newboyatschool#niceplot#nicestory#nora#powers#romance#salvation#startarelationship#strangeocurrences#topstudent#verymysterious#novela-juvenil#books#wattpad#amreading
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Hoy me quito un debe, uno de esos juegos especiales que no tenía en físico y lo que más buscaba del catálogo de #psvita. Los juegos que he jugado de este señor son algo diferente, que te evaden de tanto clónico. I finally got #paperspleased one of those special games that I was looking for a physical copy. #lucaspope games are different, they escape me from so many cloned titles #sony #indie #retrocollective #retrocollectivespain #instagamer #retrogamer #retrocollector #adventure #puzzle #goodplot #returnoftheobradinn #switch #nintendo #nintendoswitch #steam #steamdeck https://www.instagram.com/p/CfbfkuMo7pK/?igshid=NGJjMDIxMWI=
#psvita#paperspleased#lucaspope#sony#indie#retrocollective#retrocollectivespain#instagamer#retrogamer#retrocollector#adventure#puzzle#goodplot#returnoftheobradinn#switch#nintendo#nintendoswitch#steam#steamdeck
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And that's why I enjoy writing about the villain
Why being a super villain is better then being a hero
1. Super villains get the best weapons!
2. Super villain lairs are sick.
3. Looking out the window evilly while drinking wine with a fluffy cat on your lap is not only badass but classy as hell.
4. You only need to beat a hero once and you are successful. The hero has to stop you every time. They can’t kill you or they are “just as bad as you.”
5. People finding out your a villain is no big deal. You could kill them or not, it doesn’t matter.
6. You find out a hero’s secret identity you basically won.
7. Monologging is not only acceptable, it is encouraged.
8. Evil laughs are good for the soul
9. Henchmen, that’s awesome as is.
10. Killing the hero only ups your villain cred!
11. You decide where you draw the line. You aren’t bound by the law or code of good. You decide what is twisted or not.
12 The style man. Showmanship is key in this.
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Daebak, drama that could surpass Goblin since 2016 December aired. Different screenwriter, but I really attracted to the story plot, wow! Awesome VR games with just smart contact lenses... I would play this games that required to travel different place in a city just to increase your games level. 😅😂#memoriesofthealhambra #kdrama #daebak #awesome #qualitynotquantity #goodplot #👍 #hyunbin #parkshinhye #chanyeol (在 Petaling Jaya, Malaysia) https://www.instagram.com/p/Bq7gZGbnJCCYjzOCfRL_RcpM8Ua46s4RIkb8FQ0/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=1nu9gmd8zpasa
#memoriesofthealhambra#kdrama#daebak#awesome#qualitynotquantity#goodplot#👍#hyunbin#parkshinhye#chanyeol
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So #genuine #reviews in #goodreads #take_my_heart_forever #goodplot #booklover #author #goodscript #bookstagram #bookshelf
#genuine#goodreads#bookstagram#goodplot#goodscript#take_my_heart_forever#bookshelf#booklover#author#reviews
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Your goodplot!AU is fantastic already and I can't believe how easily you put together something 300% more compelling and relatable than the original
Goodplot au lmao
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I actually like this book.! Clary is actually not an annoying character bitch that makes me want to kill her in every single chapter.
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Book Review- When Arya fell through the fault.
Book Review- When Arya fell through the fault.
Title- When Arya fell through the fault
Author- Reenita Malhotra Hora
Pages- 207
Publisher- Om Books International.
Genre- Fiction / YA
RATINGS-
Cover- 4/5
Blurb- 4/5
Writing Style- 4/5
Overall- 4.5/5
BLURB– When Arya fell through the fault is the magical, coming-of- age tale of Arya, a twelve year old boy from San Francisco , who is ridiculed by bullies. Anything to do with his ethnicity-…
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When I was writing it, I too nvr thought that this would actually happen one day. The story will make a lot of ppl cry. #take_my_heart_forever #goodplot #googlebooks #goodbooks #moviescript #bookreview #bookstagram #tearsofjoy
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"I don't understand why everybody is crying a lot after reading my book... :P Khushi ke aansu may be ;) Anyway thanks for calling me the next big sensation........" #take_my_heart_forever #bookreview #bookreader #goodplot #moviescript #googlebooks
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It seems I made a lot of ppl cry ;) #take_my_heart_forever #bookreview #bookreader #moviescript #goodplot
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#take_my_heart_forever #bookreview #bookreader #goodplot #moviescript
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Please someone make a movie on my book... ;) #bookreview #bollywoodscript #take_my_heart_forever #goodplot
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Book Review- 18 via teen- BE Yourself.!!
Book Review- 18 via teen- BE Yourself.!!
Title- 18 via teen – Be Yourself
Author- Shreyasi Rhittika
Publisher- Dream House Publishers
Genre- Fiction
RATINGS-
Cover- 3/5
Blurb- 4/5
Writing style- 4/5
Overall- 3.5/5
BLURB-
18 Via Teen- Be yourself, the name says it all. It enumerated the various phases of a teen and the hopes, aspirations, apprehensions, ambiguity, insecurity, dilemma, restlessness and sensitiveness associated with…
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