actual-corpse · 7 months ago
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Giving your character extra arms is bad if you suck at poses.
I don't suck at poses.... I'm just trying to keep the shapes of Luna Moth Girl clean.
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pwnyta · 4 years ago
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OK GONNA GRIPE!! Everyone in the world (like 5-6 people) said im allowed to and encouraged me but honestly most of my gripes are Bakugo as a character so I’ll try a little fix it... it will be under the cut.
BUT GRIPES-
The Sports Festival. I loved it... I thought it was great with some exceptions-
Bakugo v Uraraka is the most obvious example of Horikoshi bending characters to make Bakugo seem better than he is. Literally the whole festival no one says shit about the female contestants, its not a plot point, no ones bothered when Tokoyami vs Momo happens but Bakugo fights Uraraka and the whole ass stadium starts running their mouths about Bakugo being kind of an asshole and being mean to Uraraka cuz shes a soft girl even though shes holding her own and Momo panicked and lost in a sad way.
Bakugo attacked Shouto after knocking him out but he doesnt get disqualified. Even if Horikoshi wanted to set up the LoV targeting him he coulda just had them see the footage of Bakugo attacking Todo and his reaction to disqualification and figuring that hed be more willing to turn coat.
The relationships with Endeavor with Shoto and All Might is one of those things that seems like its going to be a set up for something... But never goes anywhere. All Might hadnt spoke to Endeavor for years before that moment when he asks Endeavor for advice on how to train kids because he was impressed with Shoutos performance but Endeavors like ‘I’ll turn him into someone who can surpass you thats why I MADE HIM‘ and All Mights like ‘wtf? wat‘ but it goes no where...
//end Sports festival kinda...
I have so many issues with how Horikoshi built Shouto as a character to be like on the same level as Deku and Bakugo but hes not apart of that group. Their connection as kids is All Might... Shouto should have learned about one for all and the three of them should grow together more.
IDKY Shouto has this past where All Might is his hero, hes one of the big three, but hes excluded.
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All im saying is Shouto (and honestly Bakugo) could have used a lot more screen time.
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During the training camp arc Tokoyami loses control of his Quirk and almost kills a handful of his classmates and is also grabbed by the LoV with Bakugo... and it NEVER COMES UP AGAIN.
Of course the traitor plot line thats ignored for a million years only to be brought up again just to say it never actually mattered... is another one of those ‘This was a good set up for something and you did nothing with it...‘ situation. I still think Kouda is possible. Theres no reason the Principal is an animal... theres no reason why Kouda could be able to pass the entrance exam where Shinso couldnt they basically have the same Quirk. Kouda is quiet and unassuming and he can communicate very easily in secret and could theoretically control Nezu and make him say shit like ‘Theres no war in Ba Sing Se‘ and everyone would just accept it.... But like its been so long why even bother... itd be weird.
Honestly Shinsos whole... thing is also weird. But he was brought back for... like no real pay off. His tragic story doesnt even make sense... people mocking him for having a ‘villains’ Quirk... this is similar to the Bakugo/Uraraka thing. Because thats not a thing... we dont see that literally anywhere else. I mean Shouji mentions that people think his face is a little scary but thats it. There are pros with scary Quirks and even scarier looks, Tokoyami has a literal sentient DARKNESS living in him and a bird face.... but Shinso has problems? Really.
The same can be said about the CRC. Theres a whole hate group youve created to bring up to make Spinner a little more sympathetic but its never been mentioned before or since even though there are characters in the main crew with animal/creature characteristics. Again Tokoyami is right there.
Kirishima is a weird character to have made as prominent as he is because hes got literally no connection to the main story. Shouto shoulda had his screentime. I love Kirishima and his little story with Fatgum and fighting that big bitch was fucking bitchin... but like? Why Kirishima... also whats with Crimson Riot? What does he or Kirishima have to do with anything.
Shouto has the connections. It shoulda been Shouto.
How the fuck did Hawks get away with tricking the LoV with a fake body of Best Jeanist? Why not just have Hawks kill him... it makes more sense and it helps build a case for the corrupt hero society(or at least the higher ups) a little if theyre willing to kill one of their own. I like Best Jeanist but its fucking weird.
And Ive already bitched enough about the corruption of hero society and the lack of evidence story-wise...
I genuinely thought something would go down with Tensei because him being attacked made no sense even though Stain is shown to be very consistent in his belief to the point of endangering himself as shown when he literally went out of his way to save Deku. So why the fuck did he attack Tensei when everything weve seen of the guy is just a good, considerate, selfless hero.
He could have also been used to set up the corruption BUT NOTHING COMES OF IT.
And I mean like some of this stuff could come up later... but its been drawn out so long its weird... a lot of this shit would likely have a continuous direct effect on the story at large if Horikoshi just didnt... ignore it.
NOW BAKUGO. But because everyone knows I hate him Im gonna put my money where my mouth is and try to make him a little better... Cuz hes fucking garbage.
OK First up... Keep him exactly how he is until this moment exactly-
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This is the worst moment for me with Bakugo because I thought he looked like that because he was shocked at himself for doing something so fucked up.
Cuz he does want to be a hero and he looks up to All Might.
So after this moment he dials it back a little on the douchebaggery.... hes sorta more distant and still kind of a jerk but but hes more avoiding Deku/conflict until we get to the Sports Festival!
He cant help himself hes competitive and aggressive and the steeper the competition gets the more he falls back into being that hyper aggressive violent person he wants to not be.
The Sports Festival goes as expected and its not until after and he sees himself that he gets uncomfortable again and tries to mellow out again.
Then the practical exam happens and hes paired with Deku but instead of being needlessly antagonistic they actually DO work together... they can bicker and have different ideas of how to win but then get desperate by the end and actually work together cuz THIS-
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WAS SO SHITTY. It didnt need to happen. Also earlier when Bakugo is being an asshole in class Aizawa fully acknowledges Bakugo going down a dark path... and does like nothing about it... (You cant really blame him... Baku gets away with everything.)
ANYWAYS. So they reluctantly work together and work well together... Bakugo still feels kinda shitty and annoyed that Deku is at his level..
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When Bakugo gets snatched by the LoV I think could REALLY be the biggest turning point...
Instead of Bakugo just continuing on like he does maybe this would be a great moment for him to realize that dark path hes been on. The Villains speak to him and theyre like ‘youd be a great villain‘ and its like that scene in Dr Who when Nine flips out and screams at the last Dalek tells it to go and die... and the Dalek goes ‘Youd make a good Dalek‘ which just gut punches him.
Its like that Bakugo thinks about the shits hes been doing after the villains think they can convince him to join them, he thinks about All Might and his life long dream to be a hero and hes disturbed that he COULD be a villain.
They take off the cuffs... he attacks them as per usual but its not with that cocky attitude.
///Bakugo gets saved
He thanks Kirishima... and thanks the others. It can be a cute moment GDI!
The fight between Bakugo and Deku could be Bakugo asking Deku to spar. Thats what he wants. He wants to test the both of them and Deku agrees so when Aizawa gets pissed at them both ITS DESERVED instead of Aizawa punishing Deku for defending himself.
And that can still be the moment Bakugo has his little breakdown and blaming himself for All Mights retirement.
And then just go from there... Bakugos character development coulda been smooth
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illusionlockarchive · 7 years ago
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sending an ask because ballora deserves a smooch.... also because i still dont get the story of sl and you seem like a pal who could help me out
she does!! as do all the sl animatronics.. but basically, youve come to the right place bc i love... i love sister location so so much you have no idea!! so ill try my best:
basically, somewhere between the fnaf games, william afton (purple guy as hes named in the books n in this game) disappears off to start his own company, afton robotics, n makes his own pizza place with dancing animatronics. but of course, being the purple shit himself, he makes all his robots built in with child kidnapping/killing devices. the problem? these things r sentient. n they dont wanna kill children. most specifically, baby, the biggest of the animatronics, n the main character. so like, william sets out a grand opening day to test these things right? well, in that very day, his daughter (oh i know. i hate the implication of him reproducing as well. bear with me) goes without his permission up to baby, when shes all alone. n it just so happens that the child kidnapping/killing device activates when kids r all alone, so ding a ling! we got ourselves a murder! this is all, mind you, told in a flashback, by baby, who recalls it with confusion n shock, it seems she rly wasnt in control of the device built inside her, n she says sometimes she still talks to the little girls’ spirit.
anyway a little bit later, william decided it wasnt such a good idea to have these things so out in the open since one FUCKING ATE HIS DAUGHTER so he gets the brilliant idea of instead make it a rental company (you can rent the robots to parties n stuff) n screw off the map. years later even, he guilts his poor abused son, michael afton, to go into the facility the robots were locked up at n fix the mess HE made. so michael comes in as a new technician, n obviously, the robots dont recognize him at first, n some try to kill him with only the intent of getting past him n escaping, while baby has a more... intricate escape plan for everyone. basically, they wanna escape bc: 1. being a robot with a formed sentient conscience n being forced to kill kids at their parties SUCKS MAN THE PRESSURE IS TOO GREAT n 2. on top of that, theyre constantly abused by being given ‘controlled shocks’ (yeah actually electric shocks, MEANT TO HURT) to ‘make sure theyre up for their next performance’.
so yeah, basically, purple guy aka william afton pushes his son michael into this mess of abused traumatized vengeful robots HE MADE, n now he has to survive their wrath. only baby, who wants to get through it without havng to kill a person, is helping n guiding him. anyway, almost by the end of the game were introduced to the ‘scooper’, a device that is used to basically ‘scoop’ out the insides of the animatronics to fix them. in the last night, all the animatronics r scooped, n later, baby leads you to the scooper room, n scoops you. but then you go: ‘hey wait! wasnt she supposed to not kill me?’ well, baby doesnt really know how humans work. she thinks you wouldnt die, n actually, yes, by some miracle, michael is alive! so baby, fuses with the endoeskeletons of her friends to form ennard, a huge endoeskeleton of all of them together, n enters michael to be able to escape unnoticed.
this, however, proves unfruitful, as later its revealed the animatronics confused michael for his father, n they have some disagreements. baby seems to not mind who is it that theyre using n considers herself the leader, arguing that they wouldnt have gotten as far without her. the others disapprove of her behavior though, n the fact that she, you know, put them inside their shitty creator, so they all agree to abandon her, by ejecting her out of michael, whose skin, at this point, looks pretty rotten (literally). this is where it gets foggy: somewhere around the line, michael either: a) finds his dads spring bonnie suit n goes hunt him down, while leaving an eerie message for him or b) becomes the purple guy/springtrap from fnaf 3 as he was only trying to dismantle the animatronics to free their souls, but was again, mistaken for his father. people cant rly agree on their theories to those last two options. i personally choose option ‘a’ because, duh, michael... still innocent. oh also dont worry about his dead sisters ghost, shes ok, its implied she just kinda, frees herself when he takes ennard out i think.
theres also an alternate secret ending thats considered ‘fake’ but very good in which michael finds a secret room n stalls for a long time there, while ennard tries to get in, until ennard agrees to find another way out, n so they both go home n watch some soap operas while eating popcorn. im not kidding. thats literally it. i rly wish it was the canon ending kjhfklhjf
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