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𝐅𝐋𝐈𝐆𝐇𝐓 𝐎𝐅 𝐀 𝐖𝐀𝐑𝐑𝐈𝐎𝐑 - book one

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Born as a human princess but with an inhuman body and powers, Elize was wanted to be dead.

But her mother, the queen of humans, brought her away, gave her to their greatest enemy so she could survive. It only costed a bergain and her freedom.

Years passes by while Elize grew up as the queen of beings, Aidene Azar, wanted her to be: in satin, gold and crowns, cruel and mercyless. As a marionette, caged up and dacing on strings.

Until Elize fled, until she started fighting, until she met him, William Asher Wind, a human man.

It was time to stand up, destroy everything and create from nothing.

“It is time. Rise.”

Who are you?

“I am the flying warrior and I will destroy everything they have known.”

GENRE: high dark fantasy

STATUS: between first and second draft

THEMES: friendship, love, family, trust vs betrayal, power, human vs magic, war, self love, protest, revolution, royality, found family, mental illnesses, healing, destruction&creation, elements, magic

POV: first person, past (Elize and Liam)

CHARACTERS:

Elize Emlyn van River-Lethe, Wild Gladiolus

William Asher Wind

Luciana Falmarin

Caelum Drayce Monar

Zillah Érebos

Genedy Larken Críantrùm

Nordika Astropi

Elysian Hyperion Soléa

Ragnar Ryker van Lethe

Ariawen van River-Lethe

Aidene Azar

The Seven

The gods of Tríscéalta

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➺ [ 𝘕𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘮𝘦𝘢𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴 ] - [ The five bonds ]

— “ᵀʰᵉʸ ʷᵉʳᵉ ˡⁱᵏᵉ ᵗʰᵉ ˢᵏʸ. ᵀʰᵉʸ ᶜᵒᵐᵖˡᵉᵗᵉ ᵉᵃᶜʰ ᵒᵗʰᵉʳ.

ᴱˡⁱˢᵉ ᵃⁿᵈ ᴸⁱᵃᵐ ʷᵉʳᵉ ᵗʰᵉ ˢᵗᵃʳˢ, ˢʰⁱⁿⁱⁿᵍ ᵃⁿᵈ ᵘⁿⁱqᵘᵉ. ᵀʰᵉʸ ˢʰᵒʷᵉᵈ ᵉᵛᵉʳʸᵒⁿᵉ ᵗᵒ ʷⁱˢʰ ᵃⁿᵈ ʰᵒᵖᵉ, ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ⁱᶠ ᵗʰᵉ ᵗⁱᵐᵉˢ ᵃʳᵉ ᵈᵃʳᵏ. ᴴᵒʷᵉᵛᵉʳ, ˢᵗᵃʳˢ ᶜᵒᵘˡᵈⁿ’ᵗ ˢʰⁱⁿᵉ ʷⁱᵗʰᵒᵘᵗ ᵈᵃʳᵏⁿᵉˢˢ.

ᶻⁱˡˡᵃʰ ᵃⁿᵈ ᶜᵃᵉˡᵘᵐ ʷᵉʳᵉ ᵈᵃʳᵏⁿᵉˢˢ, ˢᵒᵐᵉᵗⁱᵐᵉˢ ᵃ ᵇⁱᵗ ʳᵒᵘᵍʰ ᵃⁿᵈ ˢᵒᵐᵉ ᵃʳᵉ ᵃᶠʳᵃⁱᵈ ᵒᶠ ⁱᵗ ᶠⁱʳˢᵗ ᵇᵘᵗ ʷʰᵉⁿ ʸᵒᵘ ᵍᵉᵗ ᵗᵒ ᵏⁿᵒʷ ⁱᵗ ᵃⁿᵈ ⁱᵗ’ˢ ˢᵉᶜʳᵉᵗˢ... ᴼʰ, ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ ʷⁱˡˡ ⁿᵉᵛᵉʳ ᵇᵉ ˢᵒᵐᵉᵗʰⁱⁿᵍ ᵐᵒʳᵉ ᶜᵒᵐᶠᵒʳᵗⁱⁿᵍ ᵗʰᵃⁿ ᵗʰᵉ ᵈᵃʳᵏⁿᵉˢˢ.

ᴮᵘᵗ, ᵒʰ ᵈᵉᵃʳ, ˡᵒᵛᵉˡʸ ᴸᵘᶜⁱᵃⁿᵃ ...

ˢʰᵉ ʰᵃˢ ᵃˡʷᵃʸˢ ᵇᵉᵉⁿ ᵗʰᵉ ˢᵘⁿ.”

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How Cuddleable Are Your OCs?

Ahhhh thank you @somuchtowrite!! This tag game is SO adorable, I love it sooo much!!✨

Elise: Are you a stranger? Most important: Are you a THREAT to the forest and beings? If yes, -30/10. You’ll get stabbed and killed probably. So people really don’t want to get into her reach. She has been lonely for like 17 years... But the other way: If you did get her trust she is the most cuddly person ever but only to like 5 personas on this earth. 8/10 She is (compared to others) small, has a cold body temperature and is very thin but she has soft feather wings and she can easily fall asleep on your chest without you getting uncomfortable coz she is light af

Liam: 13/10. This boy needs a hug all the time but only if you are one of the persons he holds in his broken heart. Still, he is thin and TALL but who cares, you’ll hugged everywhere !! And he will stroke your hair and sing softly to you until you fall asleep

Luciana: 10/10. She LOVES warm hugs and her skin is (even if she’s being) warm coz she is staying in the sun a lot!! So basically you have to jump right into water to hug her but goddamn it’s worth it

Caelum: 7/10. He will destroy your hair while he hugs you coz he is a big bro but if you are sad there is no one who can comfort you better than him and make you laugh again

Zillah: honestly she tries to be a cold bitch™️ all the time but fails if you really know her and go hug her. She will have a mental breakdown right away and start sobbing so prepare. Anyway 8/10

Sloane: honestly BACK OFF if you don’t wanna get killed. Children please be careful -3/10

Epona: she is too creepy-cute you don’t wanna hug her tbh haha... but is like a 5/10. If you are either Eryx or Sloane it’s okay I guess

Hollis: 11/10 Girl loves hugging just randomly. So if you feel someone jumping on you - don’t worry it’s just hyperactive Hollis who has her five minutes and needs random hugs

Hazel: girly is so sleepy w o w. Will fall into your arms and start napping just randomly coz she is either baking or being dreamy all the time. Anyway, she is soft and smells like fresh cookies and you will LOVE hugging her 10/10

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Character Introduction

Name: Luciana Falmarin

Age: 20 years

Race: being, water nymph

Looks:

-red water hair

-light brown-golden eyes

-golden skin

-some light blue fishscales on legs or a mermaid tail

-5”11

-Elise wears her actual scars

-feminine body

Outfit: If she doesn’t ‘wear’ her mermaid tail she is wearing silky dresses with flower embroideries.

She loves to wear jewellery but she hates weapons. She is often to find with a golden hairbrush even if she can’t brush her hair because it’s made of water.

Personality: She is super bubbly, friendly and sweet. She is a little sunshine, always smiling, laughing, talking and dancing.

But she can be very ignorant because she hates problems and doesn’t want to talk about them. She tries to ignore them and to distract because it helpes her more than finding a solution.

Elise suffers under these ignorance because she needs to know what’s going on and how to help herself but Luciana thinks distraction would help better.

Luciana wants to help but she doesn’t ask how.

Powers: water bending, change her form, breath under water

Story:

Her sister never knew who her father was but one thing was clear-

They didn’t have the same one.

While all her sisters had pale skin, light blue, green, violet or grey eyes and blue water hair Luciana was the complete opposite.

If a being isn’t loyal in marriage it’s a shame for the whole family.

And it was Luciana’s fault that her family was ashamed.

Still, the beings loved her. Luciana was so sweet and friendly but her sisters hated her with all their hearts.

They banned her from their home the river, forbid her to eat the same as they did, they took everything from her.

Luciana didn’t have a choice.

She had to steal if she wanted to live.

Then she met her. She met Elise.

Elise cared for her, brought her food, made her new clothes.

Even when it was time for Luciana’s punishment Elise helped.

She took the punishment on her.

And because it was Elise who would take the scars, the beings made the punishment even worse.

Elise got the maximal penalty.

The scars stayed forever, Elise couldn’t heal them.

And it was all Luciana’s fault.

Tagging:

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(Hope you like my sweet girl)