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If you want to be a dog, you must learn to believe that you are not in fact a dog at all.
Sources: petshopbutch | More and More, Margaret Atwood | Roadkill, Searows | Little Beast, Richard Siken | How to Be a Dog, Andrew Kane | Let Dead Dogs Lie, silas denver melvin | For Your Own Good, Leah Horlick
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#I really wanted to add the “your psycho bit don't cur me boy” line here but it didn't flow#but know that it is here in my heart#rustmarty#marty x rust#rust cohle#marty hart#true detective#true detective s1#true detective edit#webweaving#*#*edit
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to Charles, an Edwin Payne poem.
#dead boy detectives#edwin payne#payneland#dbda#dead boy detective agency#dead boy detective fanfic#chedwin#charles rowland#charwin#charlesedwin#charles x edwin#edwin x charles#dbda fanfic#hi. wrote this a few months ago and liked it well enough to post now#it's not supposed to be hugely poetic to be honest i just wanted to take edwin's hand and guide him through the attic scene#all natural flow and feeling#recreate that heart-warmingly special and vulnerable romantic atmosphere despite its original context#tell me what you think :)#it'll be put on ao3 later! when i learn how to format it nicely#marcela writes#marcela watches dbda#original poem#poem#poetry
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Ok, I think I have a pretty good idea of why a lot of Akechi's dialogue is... like that.
So, even before his confidant truly started, I noticed that he has a real knack for directing the flow of a conversation. This is very fitting for someone who is both a detective and skilled at interviews - when there is a topic and a goal, Akechi is in his element.
All this to say, he's actually kind of controlling when it comes to conversational flow. He probes for information, or turns the conversation around to a particular topic, usually the Phantom Thieves. He manages to take a few of Joker's dialogue options and spin them so they sound mildly incriminating in the context he's placed them in - the only way to truly get around this is to pick answers that feign indifference, and even then, that's more than a bit telling. He's clearly very good at this kind of thing.
But then, we get conversations where either Joker does something he didn't expect, or else he doesn't have a particular goal in mind - and the conversation stutters. In the first instance, Joker does something (a particularly egregious example is putting his glasses on him and fluffing his hair in rank 3) which both leaves him wrong-footed and no longer in perfect control of the situation. He just kind of... freezes, for awhile. It's hilarious. He has no idea how to respond.
He picks up control again in the phone call afterwards, having chosen to play into it, turning this "fooling the crowds" into a kind of game or secret between them. Nice save.
But in instances where there isn't an obvious topic and the goal is somewhat nebulous, for instance, that one Leblanc scene, it becomes pretty apparent that Akechi doesn't have the right "script" to go off of. Again, it's particularly notable in that scene, because I'm fairly sure he didn't have any specific reason to be at Leblanc, other than him looking for a quiet spot now that public opinion has turned on him. And because there isn't anything specific he's digging for, he kind of just ends up throwing things at the wall to see what will stick. Probing for any kind of recognizable reaction that he can jump on and work with, and that just doesn't really happen in this scene.
He references Sae, a woman in a respectable position, to Sojiro, but instead of that netting a welcome, it earns his ire, given Sae's recent actions against him. He then tries to greet Joker, his... rival? friend? enemy? person who at least seems to somewhat enjoy spending time with him? But Joker's responses are somewhat short, and Akechi practically wilts. He tries to commiserate by oversharing. He tries to involve Futaba and reaches out for the only topic of interest he can think of around "young people". He compliments the coffee. He compliments Joker. He tries to invoke that connection between them. None of it is really sticking, nor does it serve as a jumping off point for him to steer the conversation, or even really start one.
So, he basically just ends up having a one-sided chat with himself and then leaves. Hilarious. Also a little sad, if I'm being honest. It's really giving "guy with no friends who only knows how to speak to adults" energy. If there's no specific purpose to the exchange, or he is not in control of its direction, he seems to be kind of out of his depth. He succeeds only in being a little awkward and confusing, more than anything.
#quick note! i still have not finished the game! please avoid spoilers also i am aware i could be very wrong here. pls be kind if i am yeah?#of course#I am going from an in-universe standpoint for fun.#I am positive it's because writers needed to shoehorn in information and it ended up making the flow of conversation awkward as a result#but i digress#i still think there's merit to this reading though because even outside of flow his word choices and some of the kind of#intense things that he'll say#really do come across as 'guy who doesn't know how to talk to people and is basically just pushing for a reaction he can work with'#anyways. just my random thoughts again#i still don't get this dude but#pretty sure he's a control freak. pretty sure he's also lonely. bad combination.#storyrambles#story plays persona 5#p5r#i think this counts as analysis. it got a bit longer than i was expecting ->#call me ace detective the way i am ace. and also a detective#analysis tag becomes kind of funny when it's about this character in particular haha#goro akechi
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ummm au where mark hoffman isn't an apprentice but he is obsessed with the jigsaw case and and and umm he really really thinks lawrence is guilty but he can't prove it because he's just a guy and does minimal work as jigsaw and and and lawrence is really smug about it and yeah i tjink that would be cool ok bye love you
#think like detective tapp#and strahm and jill in the interrogation room#do you guys get it do you see the vision#maybe lawrence can eventually coax hoffman into being an apprentice but idk#GUYYSYSSSSSS THEYRE SO COOL AUHGHH#if i make art about it then would u care...... 💔 fakes ...#i WILL make art of mark hoffman aggressively interogating totally normal guy lawrence gordon#LARRY COULD BE SO SASSY IMAGINEEE LMFAOOOOO#also sorry if the post was incoherent i heart typing with flow and filler words mwahaahaha#mark hoffman#saw 3d#lawrence gordon#saw#hoffdon#3dshipping#someone write about this and i will promptly explode in my pants
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#'you are speaking to fear'... silly#he's barely in this story only to show up at the end to display all the top scarecrow qualities i expect A+#truly he has zero idea wtf is going on he's just going with the flow#jonathan crane#detective comics 1056
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What I am about to propose is very self indulged and a dynamic just for me, but
I really want to see a quest where it's just Black Swan, Gallagher, Mr. Reca and Sampo.
#The memetic entities! (and Sampo)#The ultimate friend group#can you imagine how funny it would be to see those four working together#we've already seen Black Swan's and Sampo dynamic in the detective story quest#which was giving platonic co-parenting featuring “I just wanna go home” dad and “amused go with the flow” mum#Gallagher feels like the type of guy who will just exist go along with whatever everyone else does#at random times he'll just drop the most profound piece of knowledge/thoughts and then go back to being a chill guy#Mr Reca is just insane#he's like a “tamer” version of Sparkle in a way#The ultimate friend group (Boothill and Rappa are honorary members who appear once in a blue moon#black swan hsr#sampo koski#gallagher hsr#mr reca#honkai star rail#hsr#sorrin rambles
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OC Vibe Game: Sydney Greene
@tevivinter read my mind and knew i had too many of these made and needed to share them (thank you again for the tag friend 🫶) and i couldn’t decide between another wayhaven one and a dragon age one so i did both 🤭 this one is for my wayhaven detective sydney greene !
i posted my dragon age one here :)
i know a lot of you have done this multiple times and i don’t want to keep you in an endless loop of tags but if you’re reading this id love to see more of your ocs !! asap!!!! 🫵
#sydney was my very first wayhaven mc :)#this one actually drove me nuts cuz I couldn’t get any of the pics to flow how I want them to#detective sydney greene#the wayhaven chronicles
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There were many things Charles missed from being alive. He missed his mums homemade food, her steamy pilau with red hot spices. He missed running out of breath, the thrilling sting in his lungs after hitting a six. He missed smells, the tell-tale nicotine poison that permeated the streets. He missed hugs, real hugs. He missed the piercing cold London winter that rendered his fingers and toes numb. He missed standing in the rain, feeling the heavy droplets poke holes into his skin. It was funny. The things that he missed about life the most was what killed him.
#Dead Boy Detectives#painland#edwin x charles#what the fuck is this#i found this in my notebook#drabble#im pretty sure this is from 5 months ago#lowk doesnt flow that well#idgaf anymore
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We are gonna get married on this roof, Morgan, with the amount of emotionally vulnerable moments we've had here
#truly a magical place#where hearts open and conversations flow#the wayhaven chronicles#agent m#twc detective
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hi detective, can you find the color theory red hospital post? thank youuu
trackin' this one proved to be a bit harder than i initially anticipated. see, i knew the exact post i was lookin' for. with it bein' a famous post, i knew exactly where to look too. so i took a stroll downtown to Madame Curator's shinin' exhibition hall of cursed artifacts. however, pokin' around in there, i couldn't find what i wanted. odd, considerin' i knew she had posted this one. must be the shifting labyrinthine design of the museum playin' tricks on me. but i decided to move on anyway.
headin' down to the Search Bar, i approached Google to ask for a bit of help with this one. however, they could smell the void on me. and they were none too pleased...
"What's this? You thought you could just come crawlin' back here with your tail between your legs after takin' your business to that big shot in that ivory museum?"
"can it, Don."
i told them i could take my business to that hot-headed upstart, Firefox. or that old money kingpin, Internet Explorer. they immediately perked up.
"Hey, hey! Now, you know I was kiddin', right? We're all pals here, c'mon!"
i scoffed and asked them for what i came here for, that bein' "tumblr color theory hospital." they handed me a screenshot with no questions asked, and i started searchin' addresses. they were all turnin' up blank so i went back to Google and asked they what they was playin' at. they were scared at this point, i had them right where i wanted them. they then handed over a link to the post i wanted. a bit of reverse engineerin' of the reblogs got me what i wanted. save for one final reblog in the chain. i reiterated my request, askin' specifically for that final post to be included. finally, they handed over what i wanted. i grabbed it and filed it away.
here's your post! a bit of a long storied journey today, but that's what happens in this city sometimes. have a great day!
Post Case: Closed
#this is what happens when my creative juices start flowing#i should put this effort into my personal story im writing#but noooo it goes into a tumblr post instead lmaaooo#ask#hellsite detective#post case closed
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Anyone else feel like Kaito is almost becoming a secondary character in his own manga due to the heists slowly becoming DC clones of figuring out the tricks going on instead of just letting the heist happen and staying within Kaito's perspective.
#Like. I do wonder how much better things would have been if all we got#Was Aoko talking about her mom. And then Kaito wondering what will happen#Him picking up on the clues /he/ needs to deal with her and Naka#And us not knowing exactly what he's planning nor seeing Midoriko until the heist#I don't mind the other characters being there but. I don't need to follow the detective pov in my thief story#The DC-ified heists I do think could be fixed by just. Keeping the focus where its supposed to be; for the most part#Back when Sun Halo came out I even said it would have flowed better if we purely focused on Kaito and Aoko#And then when Hakuba shows up at the end; do a flashback to show how he got there#It doesnt fix everything; but itd make the chapters a whole lot more palatable#(But I'm sure that'd mess up Gosho's chapter by chapter structure somehow idk)#I miss old Mk's stories where anything could happen but you're always meant to support Kaito
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RainCode Possible Planned SickFic MasterList:
It is unknown when I will start writing these nor if I will write them all, but I will try to get some of them done at some point this year! The order also doesn’t matter. This is just a planned list! Nothing here is final aside of the last fic on the list!
(SOME DO CONTAIN HEAVY SPOILERS SO READ AT YOUR OWN RISK ⛔️ !)
Shattered Resolve (A Home Is Where The Heart Is Alternate Ending)-
What if Yuma got worse instead of better? And it shakes Yakou’s resolve to go through with the sacrifice/murder plan that he had in mind?
type: oneshot
Kanai Ward’s Not So Comforting Food-
Yuma gets food poisoning after eating a meat bun. Though his mind forgot, his body KNOWS something is VERY wrong with the food.
type: oneshot
A Sick Day for the NDA-
Sequel fic to Under the Weather; where everyone else in the agency catches Yuma’s cold. And a now healthier Yuma has to care for them all by himself.
type: unknown
I Can Always Rely On You (KokoWendy)-
During an investigation between the Detective and Informant, Yuma gets sick and Kurumi returns him to safety to care for him. But after Yuma gets better, Kurumi catches what Yuma had, and it’s worse. Yuma repays the favor by caring for her. And he finds out he cares a lot more for her than he thought.
type: two-parter/chapter
The Chilled Trainee-
Yuma gets put into an icy fridge for a while by peacekeepers until the NDA comes to his rescue. But by the time they return to base, he starts to suffer from hypothermia. The agency does what they can to keep him warm.
type: unknown
Truth Behind the Mask Under an Unfortunate Circumstance-
AU where Yuma finds out the truth to Makoto’s identity (and everything about Kanai Ward) sooner due to the masked individual collapsing on him from exhaustion, and his mask comes off.
type: oneshot
A Heartwarming Reunion (MakoYuma)- DONE
Postgame Fic where Makoto becomes almost dangerously ill due to overworking with no rest while already being sick. And a more serious Ex.Number One Yuma struggles to try and take care of him. He uses his memories of when the NDA cared for him before to help guide him. Finale Fic to the Sickfics of the Heart Saga.
type: multi-chapter
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Note: For the fics I have that include ship names, it will be very platonic/tame as I’m not really into romance as a genre. But it will likely still be sweet enough for shippers to enjoy c:
But yeah this is a list for me to possibly attempt whenever!
Figured I’d at least have these written down.
Lmk which ones interest you or have your attention if you want to c:
(and who knows I may get even more ideas later in the year… xD)
#rain code#master detective archives: rain code#rain code spoilers#fanfic#fanfiction#fic list#fic wip#sickfic#sick fanfic#whumpcode#pixelfics#sick whump#whump writing#ao3 writer#naturally yuma’s the victim in most of these#but in others its someone else c:#but yeah idk this is just me plotting ideas down!!#rain code really does get my sickfic idea juices flowing#never been in a fandom that gets me THIS inspired to write or draw#its no surprise a few of these ideas came from past edits or art that I made lmao#but yeah these will take a while bc I suffer serious burnout after writing a lot sadly...#hope you can be patient!#ty for your support <3
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life update: have gotten really into knitting or playing sudoku while listening to this 1920s detective series
#like i really do think detective novel audiobooks simply work quite well in such a format#when the past semester i had to read huck finn and dalloway for uni#for times sake i put on the audiobooks and did chores but it was quite hard to understand occasionally#though woolfs flow of the mind (?) technique does work well with audiobooks#i didnt quite enjoy it listening to it quite as much as i do these detective novels
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ever since coming up with the raincode roleswap, this convo has been in my head! i think its funny :)
#og post#master detective archives: rain code#master detective archives: rain code au#mdarc#mdarc roleswap#it also keeps the same flow as discovering `zilch's` body in canon#shinigami#yuma kokohead
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theres this bit in main series where abian's like celie's being reckless bc she's worried as fuck about froi & obviously you can make the argument that this is yet another misunderstanding of celie but i think the implication in main series and ferragost is that abian has the highest immunity to that problem so you'd think she'd be at least partially correct. but then you read ferragost. and celie does not give a fuckkkkk about that boy. like he's mia in charyn & she's like oh haha yeah my brothers back home (including him). which makes sense in the context of dialogue but it's the same internally
#i think there's something to be said for the context in which ferragost was published bc the foreword does mention it being accessible#to readers who aren't familiar with the series bc any serious froi tangent no matter how small would fuck with the flow + be very confusing#to those readers. but the way it comes off is that either a) isaboe is going hard on her lies-by-omission. or b) celie does not care she's#doing detective shit. her fuckhead little brother can solve his own problems
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thinking about Joel Miller set in a southern gothic background
#okay hold on but preacher joel miller#very much touch starved and depraved and morally fucked preacher joel miller who has his eyes set on the newest convert#my girlies with religous trauma stand up#i need to read an obsessive joel miller fic NOW!#im just imagining him baptizing her and only thinking about how the water flows around her curves like that scene in immaculate#i might need to write fucked up miller idk just a man in his 50s who def couldnt give 2 shits about god#obsessed with this homeschooled all her life socially depraved girl#OR detective joel who investigates a trail of homocides sharp objects style#imagining him all sweaty and in a button up with suspenders all the time for his holsters#someone talk to me about this i fear ive lost my mind#this is like all inspired by sharp objects/ starling girl/ devil all the time
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