#It's a directing/editing problem
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#Marvel#Daredevil#Born Again#If the pacing of BA has no haters I'm dead#I've never shipped Frank/Matt#(Not because I hate it. It just didn't spark for me in the right way)#But BA 1x04 is probably the closest I've come#It almost had me I think#But UGH it's like they were playing the thing at 2x speed or something#I could barely enjoy any of it DESPITE how well some of it was written/acted#Can I get FIVE SECONDS for a character's impactful line to have an impact before we're barreling into the next bit of dialogue?????#I would have sacrificed every moment of Matt flirting with the ADA to have more time in the Frank/Matt scene#Remember in Defenders when Stick died and Matt woke up in the police station and they gave Charlie like 15 seconds to cram in mourning?#Yes he acted it great‚ as well as he could‚ but that doesn't mean the scene wasn't inappropriately rushed in spite of its weight#THAT is how I feel every. single. time BA has a dramatic scene#Dario said he doesn't like dialogue over action and I BELIEVE HIM#Don't worry you didn't have to tell us#It shows#God I hope he learns his lesson for S2#Because this is not an acting problem or even entirely a writing problem#It's a directing/editing problem
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@philosophiums and i have been nursing the beginnings of an atla au so have some preliminary designs while we cook :>
#my art#jujutsu kaisen#jjk#fanart#jjk fanart#atla!au: art#jjk atla!au#atla!au: design#lmhs#this is all im gonna be thinking abt actually JHFHGFGGH#apparently we were brainstorming fr. 10 hours...............#so yes. brain is Worms and the worms are shaped like this#ill flesh these out later but fr now i am very happy#wld like to thank bolin for his shirt and the kyoshi warriors for their usage of emerald green so megumi can have his blue tones#every1 say thank u source materiallllll#i definitely Will have to work on yuujis outfit to make it less of a direct ripoff of bolin GJFSD#as it stands his hood and shirt length r rly all that differentiate the design#oh well! problem fr future me smile#edit i fixed th shirt @ past me ur welcome
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The Medarda arc of s2 struggled to be good, because the plot viciously smothered it. You can argue that Arcane was never about politics but you cannot say the Medardas were never explicitly a family defined by politics. So when the show shifted it's priorities from a drama steeped in political conflict where even though the setting was fantastical the stakes were grounded to a shift where magic is the end all be all threat to humanity, the Medardas are rendered largely irrelevant.
In s2 Mel's agency over her own story is both largely stripped from her and poorly communicated. Arcane has Mel abducted from the plot to be the Black Rose's captive. Even when Mel manages to free herself it's not through the traits the audience understands are her strengths, her cunning and social intelligence, it's through an innate instinct that natural to her and indecipherable to the audience.
Ambessa as a character is more or less a villain of convenience, which would be fine if she wasn't immediately following Silco's act. Once Mel is removed from the story Ambessa is largely disconnected from any emotional tension fuels conflict between the characters and previously drove the plot in s1. She's there to play the worse bad guy for Caitlyn and then give Viktor the man power for the Glorious Evolution.
It's frustrating to see the Medardas used the way they are in s2 because when they're together I can see how it could be good. When they're together Mel forces emotion out of Ambessa. In Act 1, Ambessa proved she could do circles around Piltover's court, which could actually put Mel in a tight spot.
Their final scene on paper sounds like a good idea where the true resolution to Mel and Ambessa's story was that Ambessa saw Mel's own ruthless behavior as she not only betrayed Ambessa to the Black Rose, but used her as BAIT to double cross LeBlanc. Ambessa died proud that her daughter killed her the way she did, and that's so cool and tragic, but the execution was a flop.
One, their final fight is completely unimportant to the actual Glorious Evolution, Mel's grief can't even be a highlight because it's interrupted by Viktor's mind trap. Two, their fight didn't rely on any of Mel's actual strengths, just magic and the poorly explained MacGuffin LeBlanc gave her. How did Mel even know it would do that?
It's like the writers had the bones for a great story for the Medardas, but then they're like the world's worst archeologists and fit those bones together in the worst way possible because they were convinced the bones made a stegasaurus instead of a T-rex or something.
#the black rose also doesn't really do anything except kidnap Mel#they know there's an end of the world level problem but they just sit on it for no real reason#arcane critical#mel medarda#ambessa medarda#s2's priorities are mostly incompatible with the kind of characters the medardas were set up as in s1#and frankly didn't want to engage with what made them special#personally i think it's connected to how the showrunners were suprised at Silco's popularity bcuz the stuff that makes silco interesting#is the same stuff that makes mel and ambessa interesting#which is what makes it worse bcuz the blueprint was there for the medardas to shine in s2#but the plot literally ran away from them so they're both largely devices in other people's stories mel less so#you could edit mel out of the last episode and nothing would change in the end#that's how irrelevant she was to the story#actually you could do that to ambessa too they're just there to pad out the numbers to include noxian soldiers#why did mel need to be stuck in the occulorum for the black rose arc to function#they could have easily had more agents in piltover like they did with amara#and they try to ingratiate themselves with her as ambessa further alienates her o#position of power in piltover and mel doesn’t know who to trust except herself and accepts that her methods were always#as ruthless as her mother's wothout any direct bloodshed#or something like that I'm just spitballing#did anyone else notice mel and ambessa didn’t get a songle song durong the show#no blood sweat and tears doesn’t count bcuz it wasn't in the actual show#compare Ambessa's death to Silco's or even Cassandra's who had more weight and time given to it?#it's just above Heimerdinger's own “death”#that's how relevant the Medardas are to this story they're heimerdinger level
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{ Click/Tap for better quality. }
I usually don't draw something based on recent events BUT I need to for this. This. This is my epic gamer win.
#nintendo direct#tomodachi life#tomodachi life living the dream#deltarune#deltarune chapter 3#deltarune chapter 4#original art#sona art#digital art#lineless art#digital artist#artists on tumblr#cw sui mention#← In comedic manner. Just in case#Not adding the click slash tap for better quality as the transparent background will be a problem#This is just some simple for fun#Because I'm seriously so Tomodachipilled and Deltarunepilled at the moment#Also drawing the Tomodachi Life Living The Dream logo was surprisingly fun :]#Edit : NVM added the click slash tap whatever thing since it doesn't show a pure black background when viewing it (at least on mobile)
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I wanna sink my teeth into designing Ace soooooo bad but idk what the fuck the ghouls from ghost are 😭😭😭😭 SOMEBODY HELP ME I SHARE TWO WHOLE ASS LANGUAGES WITH THIS CAT AND I STILL CANT UNDERSTAND SHIT /SILLY
#if someone would be so kind as to point me in the right direction id owe them my fucking soul <33#anyway#get ready for Djevel's Descent Into Madness™ — Dtowncat Edition!#pili dtowncat#dtowncat#the realm smp#trsmp liveblogging#trsmp#live blogging#liveblogging#artist problems
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One Direction - 1D Vault Two - 2013 Memories
#one direction#trackinghappily#trackinghome#tracksintheam#1dsource#this gave me so many problems loll i didnt even want to make gifs today but i randomly decided to efgfhgdsdfdg#.gifs#my edit#1d gifs#the boys
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Within this broader condemnation of Alice's behaviour, a number of specific themes can be identified. These include sexual immorality, political influence, and [...] numerous and repeated references to greed and avarice. This is particularly striking in two literary representations which may have been inspired by Alice: Chaucer’s Wife of Bath and, most compelling, William Langland’s Lady Meed in his allegorical poem Piers Plowman, a character whose name has become a byword for venality. Meed, like Alice, established her presence at the royal court and acted as a counsellor to the king, but was eventually banished on accusations of being a whore and undermining the workings of law and justice. In particular, in introducing Meed to his audience, Langland describes her hands as covered with rings of the “purest perreize,” a word meaning precious stones or jewels, which would seem to be a play on Alice’s surname, Perrers, and thus directly identifying her with Meed. Chaucer also notably named the wife in the Wife of Bath Alisoun, raising the possibility that she was in part based on his direct contemporary Alice Perrers. The Wife had a husband named Jankyn, similar to the name of Alice’s first husband, Janyn, and was a businesswoman with a mercantile and urban background, echoing Alice’s own early life in London. The Wife was notoriously prolific in her lustful desires, but invariably they had a financial motivation, fusing, in the words of Paul Strohm, “the categories of economic and sexual assertiveness into a single epitome of contemporary male dread.”
— Laura Tompkins, '"Edward III's Gold-Digging Mistress": Alice Perrers, Gender, and Financial Power at the English Royal Court, 1360-1377", Women and Economic Power in Premodern Courts (edited by Cathleen Sarti)
#historicwomendaily#alice perrers#english history#edward iii#my post#geoffrey chaucer#to be clear 'being inspired by' doesn't mean 'being a direct analogue of'#so we obviously shouldn't (and Tompkins doesn't) look at it through that angle#also just to clarify - Langland's 'Lady Meed' is a little more complicated.#as per our current understanding of the chronology of his writing:#his 'A text' of Piers Plowman was most likely written in the late 1460s - almost a decade before the parliamentary proceedings against Alic#and thus cannot have been based purely on her but on a wider 'discourse of defamation focused on “problem” women' as Ormrod puts it#HOWEVER we know that Langland redrafted and massively edited the B and C texts from the book much later#and as Matthew Giancarlo and Gwilym Dodd have pointed out there are clear indications he was specifically influenced by Alice's#encounters with Parliament in the 1470s when it came to these texts#also forever loling at Chaucer naming The Wife 'Alisoun' and giving her a husband named Jankyn lmfao#that's hilariously on the nose#but also if they truly were inspired by Alice that's such an epic slay on her part#icon
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texture chapter 2 PLEEEK
WIP Ask Game! tw: ableism
At first the itchy shirt had merely felt bothersome but by the time they’d made it to the church it was utterly intolerable. Without even choosing to do it Christian had found himself face down in the church’s front lawn, kicking and screaming like a toddler having a tantrum. When it had passed he’d felt so horribly embarrassed and still unable to articulate what he was feeling. His parents had called him all sorts of names, utterly humiliated by his behavior. “No one believed me, of course,” Christian continues. “They still don’t. It isn’t something anyone can see so they don’t—they think I’ve made it all up or I’m being dramatic or—” Satine’s hand enters his line of sight, reaching for him but stopping halfway there as if she’s unsure whether or not Christian wants to be touched. Christian takes it in his own. “I believe you,” Satine says, and Christian looks up, able to tell by the look in her eyes that she means it. “I don’t have to see it,” she continues, placing her other hand over Christian’s, warmly squeezing his hand between both of her own. “You’ve told me it’s so and that’s enough. I believe you, Christian.”
#SORRY ive had this ask in my inbox FOREVER my first draft of this was so horrendous and i hated it so much but i think its finally starting#to cooperate? maybe??#it still needs editing and some parts need to be reworked but i like the shape/direction of it now at least#i un-hate it enough that you can have a glimpse of it now haha#idk now im questioning that. is this cooperating?? do we like it?? *screams*#sorry to all the wip asks i havent answered btw. its probably because im having similar problems and there isnt a part of that wip i like#yet haha i promise i see your ask tho#anyways i love you neurodivergent christian i love you forever and ever#moulin rouge#my fic#thank you for the ask!!
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dunno how to articulate my thoughts without sounding mean but i'll try my best; it's so exciting when jh tries a new color and it's also exciting when he also seems to be enjoying it, but i think a problem in fandom culture in general is that need to have ownership over your [thing you like], in this case, jh, a real person. like you can be sad that jh is losing or toning down his purple hair because it was a good color and he looks good, but also at the end of the day it's his hair on his head and what he wants to do w his hair is his business only.
i say this because jh said in the latest radio station that he is going to tone down his purple hair in a few days, not because he doesnt like the color, but because his hair grows outward, a common thing that happens with your hair when you are of asian or hispanic descent. he needs down perms to literally "put down" the hair instead of it sticking straight out of his head. and down perms can fuck with the color if it's dyed.
so with this in mind, jh keeps his hair "boring" and black because he would rather his hair not be sticking straight out of his head and he doesnt want to sacrifice more time at the salon for color correction when it can just be his natural color. and thats really valid of him, just as it's valid of any other member or kpop idol to constantly dye their hair. it's his choice just like theirs and fans should respect his choice more.
#like idk just in general people make comments about jh being boring just bc he dresses a certain way and has his hair a certain way#and it's annoying to me. bc it's his business only. hes wonderful exactly how he is. u should not pressure him to do something hes uncomfy#and u can prefer a more flashy idol but that doesnt mean that automatically jh's own self expression is 'bad'#hope i dont sound like a bitch but i wanted to post this bc of jh saying hes going to change his hair soon#apple lady words#i feel like this all comes back to nuance bc u can love his different hair but dont make it seem like hes boring if hes not going out of hi#comfort zone#and ik most fans respect him but some fans come across as 'owning' him and feeling like they have the final say in regard to his body#which is what i have a problem with#maybe im making a mountain out of a mole hill or this isnt even a problem#but idk. posting it. oh well#edit: this is directed at nobody
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I've been annoyed with myself for a few weeks now because I feel like there's an obvious place for the book to go in the long term where it kind of forks into two directions and idk how to reconcile them with each other at all
#I guess it being a long term problem means that I don't need a solution right this second#like I think I have a pretty good sense of direction for this opening arc#but after that I have some strong character ideas and vague plot threads to think about and that's kind of it#I can tell that I'm probably going to have to continue editing it in my head quite a bit as I get closer
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ez called me a coward and told me to add the poison (raphael) to the soup (TRverse) which, for starters, such a funny way to put it lmao, and i started to say i refuse unless i get to kill him off before he can really get up to anything but. the problem is that triggered an idea for a plot point that i'm now turning around and i'm. considering. i'm considering it.
#i've decided jay's not a murderer in College Edition. just a teenager with a load of red flags#who could be inching that direction#but. we could take him there. and rid me of raphael at the same time.#raphael is deeply unpleasant he could easily push jay's buttons enough.#and it's a fun way for me to escalate jay's behavior. lay out his red flags as we progress then cross that line.#IM NOT SET ON THIS YET. BUT IM CONSIDERING.#if im merging MMCverse i gotta bring michael over too which. god#listen i had a load of serial killer OCs in middle/high school#that was my brand lmao#i'll have 4 if i merge these verses#in college edition i'm chilling skye out. she can be a less homicidal kind of unhinged.#there's always OG verse to let her reach her full potential lmao#i'd like to chill michael out too if i bring him over but that feels wrong somehoe#i'm not sure how to scale him back without losing what makes him michael#i suppose i could try and see how i feel about that#otherwise this college is gonna have problems#though now i've got another plot point forming FUCK okay don't worry about it now#if i do this i can fit michael in somehow#and he's less repulsive than raphael he's maybe allowed to live#maybe. we'll see. you're on thin ice bucko#TRverse tag
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It’s wild to me that some of you have entire discourse accounts dedicated to shipping hate & over analyzing shipping between the anime, manga, & light novels to the point of making harassment campaigns against the authors/writers of the side stories. Yet y’all don’t send the same hate towards Ikemoto & his highly suspect ass art style with the way he draws some of these kids.
#it’s just a bit telling??#do you lot have no life?#there are clearly bigger issues in the naruto & boruto fandom than shipping wars that have been going on since like 2010#good gods please get over yourselves#naruhina sasusaku narusasu leeten I don’t care!#the konoha 13 are in one giant secret polycule for all I care! boom there’s your solution!#& while we’re at it let’s make Kiba a sensei or a ninja hound class guy rather than a pig!#boom another problem fixed! lmao#Ikemoto & the way he draws these kids is a way more pressing issue than any of your silly shipping wars#if you’re gonna send this off the walls negativity anywhere direct it at the way he draws these children Mikeo Ikemoto is weird as Hell#for the way he draws some of these characters#it’s so hard to recommend boruto & boruto two blue vortex because of this suspect art style#I’m so serious too lmao I really hope studio Pierrot fixes the boruto tbv designs#but who knows how long we’ll be waiting on that#the anime is gonna be on hiatus for a loooooong time with how little room there is for anime-only content in the pacing#* mikio ikemoto my bad I got the spelling wrong & can’t edit tags on the old tumblr mobile#mine#op#naruto#boruto#OBVIOUSLY DONT SEND HATE CAMPAIGNS TOWARDS ANYONE JUST PUTTING AS A LEGAL DISCLAIMER BUT LIKE YKNOW IF YOURE GONNA THROW STONES ANYWAY#might as well throw them somewhere actually useful
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no but seriously the fact ben schwartz gensrs might have a shot at a live action plastic man makes me break out into hives i need to intervene
#STICK TO SHAPESMITH GENSRS#and dewey duck when they gave him better things to say. hold on. wait.#ponder img ohhhhhhh ok i see now#my problem w him is whn he doesnt have good direction or a good script you can really feel the lack of a second take#mb if the script is good i mean he does look the part. ponder img.#ok i see i change my mind a little maybe. learning and growing ✨️#huri.txt#edit: TO MAKE IT CLEAR. I DONT WANT THIS AT ALL. I'M SPECIFICALLY SAYING THAT MAYBE HE ISN'T AS BAD AN ACTOR AS HE SOMETIMES IS.#i mean it i mean it. i'll intervene get the fuck away from him i'm Serious i'm 100% serious this would be my 9/11
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i am going to scream (wip rambling in the tags)
#(not subjecting this to my wip thread [hi j k l if you see this somehow] [how did i not notice your names line up in the alphabet]#because im really just waffling at this point)#it has been three(?) months and i still cannot decide if this thing is ending happily or unhappily#because it is just. so unrealistic to save LIGHT FUCKING YAGAMI from herself#i feel like this is one of those things where i have to just keep writing the plot and ill figure out the ending along the way#BUT I DON'T WANT TO. i want to know where i'm going first so i can signpost!#god#really i just need to figure out misa and soichiro and the actual plot#but like. okay. so#what actually changes for light's internal state is#1) she has a secret to keep that doesnt fit with the charming young man image but is harmless (at least relative to the murder)#2) she and L are both in on the secret#3) it is a point of commonality she has with L that isn't about ruthlessness intelligence or murder#4) it upends her entire sense of self perception#and are these points enough to save her. i dont know. i dont know#i think at the very least it makes yotsuba slightly more bearable#in the direction of L&light anyway. her relationship with her father is probably going to be worse#and of course theres still misa#who is ALSO getting her entire sense of self perception upended#i still dont know how she's going to react to pretty much anything#i have an instinctive feeling for her first reaction but it's such desperate denial that it is going to break sometime#not that she broke for five entire years of miserably happy comphet relationship in canon#but i feel like this might be more jarring than that#aaaand if so how does that change her part in yotsuba arc because she was the one who got higuchi caught and did that for light#my god why am i doing this to myself. i could have been happy i could have written a high school au.#but anyway back to light HOW AM I GOING TO GIVE HER A HAPPY ENDING WHEN SHE'S *LIGHT* AND L'S *L* AND#like the problem is it would be SO easy to give her a sad ending. so easy that i honestly dont want to. i want her to be happy it's just#the logistics#i genuinely think theres a chance i could do it theres just so many VARIABLES im going to start BITING#edit: jesus they deleted all the tags after this one. is this the thirtieth tag. it IS wow
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Rowan pov when
#the lady will (hopefully) avoid her doom#tlwhahd#original story#not me shitposting instead of writing#i've actually been trying to edit the same chapter for quite a while now#i should probably shift my focus a bit to something else for a minute#maybe that'll reset my focus and i can come back to it later#pray for me besties#writer problems#someone tell the author we want rowan's perspective#and by we i mean me#i may have a direct line of contact with the author#(because they're me lmao)#but that person#they never listen to me#such a rat honestly
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the scientist and his gf the silverer. i'm curious about how that relationship worked out
it is, against all odds, still actively working out! they're very sweet together. and also this cannot possibly end in anything but tragedy. but for now they're tooth-rottingly adorable
#the scoundrel is NOT jealous they do NOT care stop asking dont look at them dont talk to them dont even breathe in their direction#they admit to nothing and they fail at lying about everything#ask#you'd think a girl with abandonment issues + issues with people self-sacrificing would have problems dating self sacrifice doomed georg#but somehow. someway. this is working out for both of them#they match each other's freak#ft. another badly edited png in the corner bc i had to keep the joke going
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