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vicontheinternet · 2 years
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Thing that f*te the winx saga could've used to make it more ✨mature✨. I got this idea from two ppl but I literally can not find their post update: found one found the other one. If you want to take any of these ideas feel free just credit me and send a link over this way when its ready to get published.
Season 1
Have stormy take the identity of princess varanda of Callisto as a nod to the cartoon instead of Beatrix which was easy to guess
make them college age (in multiple different dubs alfea is a college)
Have the Brandon/sky switch but have it effect Brandon more because sky is closer to his father then he is because he can't be himself and have stella be in on it.
Have the love triangle be between aisha sky and bloom. Where Aisha and sky are in a arranged marriage they love each other in a platonic way but there is no love loss between them.
Split Aisha into two people aisha and layla twins/Irish twins with one having the standard mahogany brown/cinnamon brown hair and the other having the reddish brown pink highlight hair one being the fairy of oceans and tides and the other being the fairy of fluids
Have the switch be between aisha and layla who are swapping to see how each other life’s are
Give the parent plotlines that gave to Stella back to aisha (Stella’s plot with her mom is very close to Aisha’s in the cartoon at least to me.)
Introduce diaspro you know the girl who is blonde mean and in a love triangle with sky and bloom. fate!stella is practically diaspro
Do away with fate's magic system because winx club already had their own with more categories
Make Aisha a teacher assistant/student teacher instead of Farah suck up (My reasoning on this is that yes she is still the same age as the other girls namely stella but she created her own subcategory of how to use magic. She is really advanced and using advanced spell and skills to the point where some adult trouble with. I also feel like its another way for her parents to keep control over her.)
Make Aisha a specialist in a act of rebellion
Make tecna a specialist who is a gamer girl/hacker
Have diaspro and bloom be long lost sisters
Have stella and diaspro be sisters
stella, aisha and diaspro where roommate the previous year since both stella and Aisha were 17 when they debuted and have the be ra’s
instead of stella accidentally blinding her former roommate she preformed a convergence spell that was above her skill level and blinded her roommate or herself along with blewing up the dorm (which would come full circle in the way that her and her former roommate was out of balance, but when she does it with the girls it goes over smoothly. "When your hand is holding mine" they transform thanks to the power of friendship love and a Successful convergence spell and they gain transformation magic)
have stella blind herself on accident because of the bad way she was taught magic.
Have stella and Aisha be from rival kingdoms
make queen luna into countess cassandra
I like the idea of every time stella uses her power it bleaches her hair with the raw power of sun she is able to harness because the uv waves until it slowly becomes a pale blonde 
Have Aisha cling to every authority figure to fill the void that was left by her parents being so closed off towards her
Have Aisha be borderline clingy or even a little jealous towards her friends because she doesn’t understand how friendship works. Not understanding how boundaries works because her parents were not hands on parents. And just generally not understanding her emotions how to proceed them and how to express them for that reason too.
Have Aisha have a different view on love and how you should love someone and be loved by someone because of her parental trauma.
Show Aisha cracking under the pressure and expectation to be the perfect princess for her realm. Instead of the toilet incident then randomly being bad at her magic that went no where.
Instead of bloom setting the fire in her parents house out of anger have it be in her sleep have it be a throwback to the show when she was transforming in her sleep
Have mike and vanessa know about her powers and have her practice her powers safely with the help of her firefighter father
Have Vanessa be a Italian immigrant
Instead of Rosalind being trapped down there it would be Argulus a former classmate of farah’s who went to shadow haunt and got corrupted
Instead of rosalind being trapped have it be icy in alfea and Darcy in cloud tower with beatrix stormy in disguise trying to break them out
Instead of rosalind being trapped have it be the last ancestral witch
Fully comment to mixing musa with darcy
Utilize the dragon flame water star and starlight having designated host
Have daphne successfully escaped and go into hiding with bloom on earth
Say that the reason why fairies don’t transform anymore is because they wings keep getting plucked off as a throw back to the trix and galatea subsequently leaving them powerless so they evolved from it and it happened so long ago that nobody ever taught the new generation how to transform and with each generation they lost that part of them and bury it deep and deep inside of them.
Season 2
Introduce Brandon as stella's personal guard one of the solarian royal guard place there by queen luna due to Stella’s antics last season.
Introduce Brandon as relative of silva like nephew or giving Stella’s divorce parents plotlines to him saying that he grew up with both parents but after the divorce they feel out of touch because his mom took him home to her realm. Double point if he used to be friends with sky then moved to solaria as a child.
Introduce flora as the botany/earth and tecna as the air teacher
Introduce the wizards to teach a red fountain and introduce nabu that way since it was a school for wizards in s1 of the cartoon
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redhairedgirl95 · 10 months
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Wip Wednesday
Continuing my impromptu winx week, here you have Wip Wednesday (a day late, obv)
an extract from an attempt at a Fate rewrite / Fate fix / Fate continuation. Will it ever see the light of day? That is for my future self to decide.
In the meantime, enjoy <3
From season 1, episode 3. The first line is a direct quotation from the episode
“It's butt stuff. She lets you do butt stuff!” “Mind your language.” “Excuse me?” “It’s the princess you’re talking about. Hold your tongue if you don’t want to lose it.” “Oh, sorry, Brandy. I didn’t see you there.” “The name’s Brandon.” “Don’t be such a hard ass, Brandon. We all know you have a hard on for the slutty princess.” He could’ve smashed his face. He almost did, until he didn’t. His fist got intercepted by Sky. “Just ignore him, man.” “Like you do?” Brandon seemed even angrier now. “I’ve been here five minutes and you haven’t even tried to make him stop slandering the Princess.” “Did somebody say my name?” Stella smiled as she joined the guys and went to sit next to Sky, giving him a peck on the cheek. “Hello, gorgeous.” She turned to Riven and made a sort of quick nod, just to acknowledge him, before greeting her guard. “Hi, Brandon. You know you don’t have to do that every time, right? But I do appreciate it.” He had got up and bowed, waiting for her signal to be at ease. She gave it but he didn’t sit back down. “I do, Your Majesty. And it’s my pleasure.” “Oh, you wish …” “Shut it, Riven.” Stella looked confused at Riven and Sky’s exchange.
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wikate · 4 months
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ganondoodle · 2 months
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you know, i had a totk thought (uh oh)
soemthign thats really bothering me about the whole "actually, ganondorf didnt like the guy appearing out of nowhere marrying a hylian and just saying yep das our kingdom now and we can mine it barren under your nose and also i got laserbeam pebbles that i totally wont ever use on anyone come join me or die just bc of all of that but mainly bc the guy brought some weird tech with him that he dont like" - thing is that ......... we see almost not a single tech thing in the past (and for that matter see nothing of the oh so perfect and peaceful paradise hyrule was before big evil desert man didnt want to join our paradise- like what is the point about making the whole point of the game be -we need to restore hyrule to this paradise it once was- when you dont even see it or get to care about anything of it)
it might sound like a weird hangup but no really, the most we see is like two servant constructs, thats it, when they 'prepare for war' im pretty sure all you see is some lightly dressed ( ... is it just me or does their whole get up look alot like native american/other indingenous people too ... i still dont know how to feel about that- kinda adjacent to some of the sonau armor, the battery one i think??, also having that look...) hylians with spears, where the heck is all that tech?? is it implied to be all down in the mines hollowing out the underground (for no real reason either bc .... theres only two sonau left and no one else seems to want use nor need the tech otherwise there should have been more traces or soemthing left of it -unless it all just magically appeared out of nowhere in mostly prime condition while all shiekah tech jsut vaporized for bs non reasons just for it to be in tha game but oh dont you see its always been there lmao- so whats the point really????)
or up in the sky as most battle constructs are and they cant get them down in time bc *gestures vaguely*
or is it intentionally kept out of view bc idk seeing an army of robots on raurus side he can send out on a whim might not make him look as oh so good and perfect as they want him to look when he already got laserbeam pebbles (most of which hes been hoarding until ONE falls into hands not under his control) ?? like it just ... feels weird?? so many battle constructs that can even be a threat to link are jsut fully functioning strolling around in the present still, why wouldnt you want to use any of them to battle gan and if they DID why wouldnt you show that (no the 3 second unicorn cutscene doesnt count bc its just .. gan and his monsters isnt it) ?? (also ... why isnt there a big like battle ground , like fine you dont have to animate an army of monsters and robots clashing but... wouldnt it be cool to have you discover a giant flat plain in the underground (that magically got put under ground like gan just decided to stroll down there to get sealed lol) and its the only mostly empty field in the game littered with thousands of monster bones and dead constructs intermingled?? just to give it all a bit of weight?? evidence that it happened?? cool ass discovery????)
(also also i cannot let go of ganondorf apparently being sooooo anti tech but then clamgan uses the shiekah stuff??? shouldnt he also be against that then or is that suddendly fine bc- oh woops sorry, forgot clamgan is actually just something, not connected to gan at all actually, i mean why else would miasma turn into malice only to turn into miasma again haha none of that is connected actually what is a calamity anyway? also im sorry to bring this up again but i just cannot let go of the ppl in the present being so obsessed with using sonau tech in every part of their life now- they just lived through an apocalypse of a barely understood strange tech but CLEARLY this other even less understood strang tech is not dangerous at all lets make CARS OUT OF IT and what theres no danger in miasma and that tech existing at the same time LIKE SOMETHING ELSE BEFORE THAT IDK SEEMS LIKE A BAD COMBO--- oh sorry forgot that ceased to exist in both the world and peoples minds for *gestures vaguely* plot reasons- why why why are monsters mining the sonanium?? they dont even work with the yiga no that is also completely disconnected we dont wanna draw and interesting connections after all- whats the point if it means nothing but to be a loot box for the player-- actually, so much of totk is just a so built around throwing you into a box of toys with no substance to it- listen i know games are kinda like toys but if it doesnt make sense and offers you nothing interesting to think about even slightly whAT IS THE POINT)
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ogh-rambles · 1 year
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Rewriting Fate - Prologue
Prologue (You're here!) > Chapter 1
warnings? a little curse here and there, otherwise none
— In which you get isekai’d into your gacha hell, only to get sent to the past. A past where a doll dons a more innocent spirit.
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(You have no idea what just happened to you or what you did to end up here, but one thing’s for certain… This isn’t your bedroom.)
One second you were on Genshin Impact, going about your weeklies and crossing off your commissions in Inazuma. The next you’ve blacked out (which you don’t remember doing so), head spinning as you come to, bleary eyes greeted by a cloudless starry sky.
With the shock yet to hit, you’re left gingerly cradling your throbbing head as you collect yourself from the grassy floor.
“What the hell… Just happened?” You mumble to yourself, eyes flickering around to attempt to gain at least a little grip of your surroundings. 
A few arm lengths in front of you, waves of water lap gently against sand, the shore stretching out as far as your eye could see before it curves off into the distance.
You grimace.
Alone. Lost. Confused. On an unknown island? That was a thriller movie in the makings if you’ve ever heard one.
What was even better was that you could hear the faint sound of someone crying. Soft… barely-there sobs of mourning echoed from within what looked like a cave you hadn’t noticed before. An otherworldly glow seemed to flood out of the wide opening, blanketing the surrounding rocks in a sheen of blue.
“...ome… ba…” The voice being too faint to hear, you failed to catch a single word.
As much as you absolutely hated the idea of someone else being on this island with you, a twinge of guilt in you stopped you from getting up and leaving to wherever else that wasn’t… here. 
With a controlled sigh, you began to head over to the disembodied cries, frowning when they weren't getting louder the closer you moved towards where you thought they were coming from.
Reaching the opening in a few long strides, you almost fall over as you inspect the contents of the supposed cave.
Your breath catches in your throat as you realize what you are looking at.
“There’s no fucking way.”
(A… domain? Were you dreaming?)
You hastily slap yourself on the face, albeit a bit harder than you had anticipated. Cursing and pressing a tender hand against the stinging pain, you quickly determine that you are… definitely… not dreaming. 
Redirecting your attention back to the domain, you notice that the doors swing slightly ajar. Your expression sours at the implication it brings.
Since nothing was here but the domain, the crying seemed to be coming from inside the domain, in which the domain’s doors are open… You sigh, shifting nervously from foot to foot. This person was either beyond the door, or you were dealing with a rather quiet ghost.
Well. You had only one life so you should live it to the fullest right? 
(No, you lummox. You don’t just jump into the nearest magical door because you want to spice your life up.)
As you make your way closer to the doors, they appear to automatically start opening up wider, allowing you to see into the limitless starry vacuum you had always found staring back at you as you did your artifact runs.
(The sorrowful weeping grows louder and louder and you decide to put curiosity over hesitation. Whether that was a good idea or not, you were about to find out.)
Closing your eyes tight and setting your face – you step into the domain.
Before you have a moment to regret everything, almost immediately you hear the doors close behind you with a feeble clunk and (thankfully) a solid floor graces your feet.
Slowly opening your eyes, you’re faced with a beautiful Japanese-inspired interior, sunlight (or more like what you think is sunlight) filtering through bright vermillion maple leaves. It spills out onto the brittle hardwood floors, filling the room with an ethereal glow. 
The place is intricate and… and oddly familiar to you. 
(Perhaps it could be a one-time domain? You think to yourself.)
You usually forget them over-time, so you wouldn’t be surprised if this one was as well.
“No… Come back… Come back…” You flinch, finally remembering (and hearing) why you were here. “Why did you leave me…?”
(The voice is one that you’ve definitely heard before. But where from? Who was it? And why was your chest twisting and churning ever so painfully?)
You follow the whispering begs to a passageway next to the room. Carefully clambering over a steady wooden container you deemed fit for kneeling on, you peer into the hallway through a paneless window.
You almost fall off the box in shock.
(It’s… Kunikuzushi. Scaramouche. The Wanderer? Either way it’s him and you don’t know how to feel as you watch him pitifully curl into himself, arms gripping onto his sleeves.)
His head is facing you but his eyes are shut tight, a lone tear escaping every now and again, and you think you feel a pang in your chest once more. You can’t bring yourself to look away and.. Oh?
Oh.
Your eyes meet.
(Shit.)
tags! @0rah-s 🫣
a/n; i tried not to write too much for the prologue, i know most of you guys want to get straight to meeting kuni gahahahg
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laststandx3 · 6 months
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There are many bad things about wish, but one of the most annoying is how it fails to pay off its own set ups.
It's established Asha's father believes in the magic from the stars. He died of an illness (never specified), that Asha's grandfather (her father's father) never got his wish granted in YEARS, well now to me this feels targeted.
Follow my thoughts for a minute, how easy would have been with this already established set up to add the part where it's Magnifico who killed Asha's dad because he was promoting a different kind of magic that would undermine Magnifico's power? This would've established Magnifico as an actual villain from the start, manipulating people's perception of him with magic and the lengths he would go to keep his power and crown.
This would have impacted Asha's journey as well,instead of asking Magnifico to grant her grandfather's wish immediately (which imo is a good reason for him not to hire her, she literally asks for favoritism the moment she arrives), let her instead be perfect for the position, not clumsy and awkward but make her qualified and respectful of the king's secrecy about the wishes. And still she's still not hired. And then she starts questioning him, she's studied, she's ready and it's not enough and the king seemed to like her until she mentioned her father.
And then she talks with the people of rosa about the king, if that was unfair of him maybe , but the answer is that the king is good and kind and doesn't he grants everyone's wishes, isn't that so wonderful of him? (and maybe this can be a song) and at first it sounds like she just doesn't want to accept that she wasn't chosen but after the forth person answers the same exact thing, well then this starts to feel more like a script than an original thought. Just then she looks at all the wishes Magnifico's granted so far and they're all material, it's all about people owning bigger houses, better clothes, riches, nothing is about community, knowledge, about people becoming something(musicians, teachers, scientists, artists...) . The guy that got his wish granted last year also got it granted a few years ago too, Isn't that weird? Some people never get their wishes and this guy twice? And also his wish was so selfish? He wanted a swimming pool! How in the best kingdom, with the best king, nobody wishes nice things for others? And isn't that weird that she and her friends used to make graffitis and jokes on the guards but when Sleepy gave away his wish at 18 suddenly he doesn't make jokes about Magnifico's beard anymore? He's so respectful of the rules now.
And idk maybe Asha doesn't just wish upon a star and everything is given to her. Maybe Magnifico's source of magic is Star and she frees it and that's why Star tags along. The magic of the starts was real, her father was right! Star knew her dad, he tried to save the magical pet but he was killed instead! Now it's not just about freedom and justice she wants revenge. And this is maybe when she fucks up because she was too reckless, she got discovered. Her friends/family are watching how she's getting arrested/executed for treason and that's SO UNFAIR such a cognitive dissonance it breaks Magnifico's brainwash spell.
Now a song about revolution makes sense. But singing about revolution bc they want to be able to wish? Are you kidding me? Not only the movie established that you can have new wishes and that they make you whole again, but also girl, you all read the terms of services when giving Magnifico your wish. You give it to him and if he finds it worth it, it'll be granted. Making questions about the king choices is the opposite of living under a monarchy.
Ultimately I agree with everyone who says this movie feels empty, because it's true, it's a bunch of disney trope stitched together with easter eggs that don't makes us feel anything and that contradicts its own message. The fact that disney doesn't want to make grey characters anymore it's felt. And it mirrors the way people have started to see enjoying stories as media consumption, everything that alludes to people being flawed is an endorsement of abuse. So disney's characters have all turned is these empty shells of heroine tropes. They're always bubbly, their worst flaw is being clumsy, but the worst is that they're always right. Asha's quest to free the wishes is based only on her conviction that the king is wrong in not granting everyone's wish. It's never even hinted in the movie that the subjects of rosa lack something. It's a fairy-tale kingdom in every aspect (maybe the king is a bit egocentric but that hasn't hurt anyone so far), except that her grandpa's wish wasn't granted and so the king must be wrong. If it wasn't for Magnifico's long exposition of I don't accept criticism she wouldn't have questioned him. And even then, that's what living in a kingdom means, that you follow the king's rules. I'm sorry but singing about revolution and then ending the movie still under a monarchy is just contradictory with the whole premise.
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odyssean-flower · 26 days
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A sneak peek (i finished like the first third of the chapter)...
“You know, I’ve never seen you use your power like that before,” you said. Your head was still leaning against his shoulder, and his arm was still around your waist. Neither of you made any move to pull away. “I’m glad I wasn’t on the other end of that.”
“Did it frighten you?”
“To be honest…I was in too much shock at the time to be frightened even more.” Everything had happened so quickly that it was a blur in your memories. “But I do remember how scary you looked.”
“Was I?” Neuvillette stroked his chin, like this was news to him. “I will admit that the thoughts that occupied my mind at the time were not what I would call amicable. Perhaps it showed on my face.”
“I think it was a good thing. Those robbers were terrified when they saw you.”
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reisgeis · 11 months
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thinking up a dreamtale rewrite
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bluecatwriter · 3 days
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"I must only try in the future to show that I am not ungrateful to God for all His goodness to me in sending to me such a lover, such a husband, and such a friend."
I am fascinated by the implications of the first part of this sentence—I think it hints a lot at the way that Lucy has been taught to view her own happiness, that she must be incredibly grateful for anything that goes well. And not just feel gratitude, but "show" it. I wonder how much of this was rooted in her family life growing up, the pressure to show clear and demonstrative thankfulness for anything good that she received.
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me when Achilles is mentioned: :D
me when he's only mentioned for his strength and not his gay tragic whirlwind lovestory with Patroclus: D:
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vicontheinternet · 1 year
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Not to harp on f*te again but it would’ve been so interesting if they actually introduced the trix in s1 and made darcy and and musa narrative foil and not in the madona/whore complex love interest way but in the way they could’ve learned from each other. Then the Stella/beatrix plot could’ve gone to them. Like by the second season darcy would’ve manipulated riven with her powers and just mentally and then the situation with musa and Sam would lead musa to see that they really aren’t that different. Musa would definitely be a air fairy with mind capabilities and Darcy would be a light fairy with mind capability in my books.
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rivensdefenseattorney · 4 months
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Stella Character Profile
(WIP)
Basic Information
Name: Estelle Alina Eos Solana
Race: Fairy
Age: 21
Gender: Female (She/Her)
Height: 5'9 (176 cm)
Unique Features
Skin shimmers in sunlight
Tanned Skin
Background & History
Education: Alfea Interdimensional College of Fae
Year: 4
Concentrated Study: Diplomacy & Leadership in Fae Realms
Minor Studies: Enchanted Visual Arts | Diplomatic Negotiation Strategies | Elemental Combat Techniques
Favorite Class: Artisanal Magic in Visual Arts
Birthplace: Kingdom of Solaria, Illumina
Relationships
Family
Father: Radius Solana
Mother: Luna Solana
Uncle: Celsius
Step Mother: Countess Cassandra
Step-Sister: Chimera
Fiancé: Thoren
Friends
Bloom/Flora (Winx Best Friends)
Sky/Helia/Nabu (Specialist Best Friends)
Love Interests
Brandon
Personality Traits
Extroverted - Talkative, witty, and almost never run out of things to discuss. Happiness and satisfaction stem from the time she spends with the people she enjoys being with.
Impulsive/Spontaneous - May act on impulse and make decisions quickly. Enjoys living in the moment and is comfortable with unplanned adventures.
Showy - Every day is a performance, and Stella loves to put on a show. Loves to experiment with new styles, and constantly finds new ways to stick out in the crowd.
Strengths
Observant -  Natural when it comes to noticing real, tangible things and changes.
Charismatic - Has a magnetic personality that draws people towards her.
Bold - Not one to hold back, Stella doesn't mind stepping outside of her comfort zone when no one else is willing.
Weaknesses
Sensitive - Can be very vulnerable to criticism. May feel like she's been backed into a corner, sometimes reacting badly.
Poor Long-Term Planner - Rarely, if ever, considers laying out steps and consequences.
Unfocused - Anything that requires long-term dedication and focus is a particular challenge.
Fears
Heights
Darkness
Skills & Abilities
Excels in Light and Shadow Magic
Proficient in creating and dispelling illusion spells
Proficient in defensive hand-to-hand combat
Can see through most illusion spells
Can see color auras around others
Hobbies & Interests
Manages her social media presence
Designs clothing
Shopping
Hosting Social Events
Running
Making smoothies and face masks
Quirks & Habits
Follows a vegetarian diet
Color blind at night
Never seen dressed casually
Gets a spa treatment at least once a week
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Winx Rewrite Master Post
Stella's Playlist
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wikate · 4 months
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New winx oc
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maegalkarven · 7 months
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The thing what kills me what it's not even OOC for the team to work with Gortash. You can canonically do that.
Wyll and Karlach don't even leave the party if you do that, you don't even have to make a roll to convince them.
You can either abandon Ravengard or save him BEHING GORTASH'S BACK after you've already killed Orin and solidified your pact and he went to the Morphic Pool. Like this is legit the thing I did in one on my playthroughs.
He canonically only attacks you if you attack him first, give him the stones (proving yourself to be weak) or if you went to a place he Explicitly told you Not To Go.
He calls you before you enter the Iron Throne and tells you not to do that. It's a direct warning and pretty much the only line you can't cross. You can destroy Steel Watch Foundry and STILL he offers an alliance.
(Fr how desperate is he for an ally??? Hello?? @ Mr Bane's Chosen, I don't think Bane approves???? You got this whole tyranny thing a lil wrong???)
His downfall is HIMSELF; if he did not go for that dumb stones grab he'd survive, but also he KNOWS they're going to fail in confronting the Brain, he pretty much states it in the convo next to a Morphic Pool, but he still pushes to try it, to meet the downfall on his terms.
I'm pretty sure it would be possible to convince him the Elder Brain needs to be destroyed because it became uncontrollable and is too much of a threat now (the things you can't control should be destroyed, yadda yadda, survival is a strong instinct and would win against thirst for power bc power is a means of survival too and power can be achieved elsewhere, meanwhile in death he is sentenced to Bane's wrath)
All the possible scenarios where his death by Netherbrain's command does not happen cloud my mind and I suffer. They could have had it all! Even Good!tav/Durge could have a Good Ending(hero of Forgotten Realms) and alliance with Gortash.
We could have had it all!!!
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I think if I were to change Fates' story, have Mikoto survive the assassination attempt and have it turn out that she’s also been possessed like Garon was. Have Garon be the overtly cruel tyrant, but have Mikoto be evil in subtler ways that make Corrin doubt themselves. Make it so that Nohr isn't blatantly the “wrong” side, y'know?
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ogh-rambles · 1 year
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Rewriting Fate - Chapter 1
prologue > chapter 1 (you're here!) > chapter 2 (in progress...)
word-count! 1.1k
warnings! none unless u count heart-wrenching angst as one
tag-list! @shizunxie , @sam-screams , @swivy123 , @thenyxsky
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“... Who’s there?”
His raspy voice echoes around the room and you wince, head against the wall barely hidden underneath the window.
(You wonder how long he had been weeping before you found him.)
Only just a few seconds ago did you duck down after you made direct eye contact with the one… character? Person? Person, you dedicated hours to.
Leveling him up, ascending him, pulling for his damned weapon (even after losing it to Itto’s claymore), maxing out said weapon… You practically gave him the luxury Genshin treatment. Your face falls knowing how much real-world money you had to spend for this man.
Heartbeats thud deafeningly in your ears as you hear a shuffling of fabric and then an abrupt thud. Shoulders jerking, your poor heart leaps to your throat at the sound.
Hearing nothing but stillness and the sound of your unsteady breaths for the next few moments, you begin to grow worried. What if he fell over? Hurt himself? You remembered that since he's only just been 'let free to roam' by his creator — that was but a small while past his initial creation.
At this thought, you find yourself making your way into the darkened hallway.
Sure enough, he still lay there, albeit in a more crumpled manner than you last saw him in. Dark hair splayed out around his head, his veil discarded beside him. Alarmed, you rush towards him, kneeling at his side as you hover over his form.
A hand grasps blindly at your clothes, almost going limp as the prototype lifts his head. You freeze.
"...Why are you here?" He finally speaks, voice almost a whisper. You lean in a bit closer to hear what he's saying.
You let the silence linger for yet a second before responding, just as faint as he did. "Well, I heard someone crying and I..."
Your voice trails off. What did you even think to achieve, in following his cries, walking into this domain?
"I wanted to help...?" It comes out more like a question rather than an answer because, to be frank, even you didn't know why.
You hope that he doesn't ask you to elaborate because you don't believe you could give him a proper answer.
His eyes meet yours again, miserable and muddled. A look, much too innocent for who he will become... and what he would begin to execute thereafter.
Unsettled by your thoughts, you fidget under his gaze.
"Why do you wish to help... me? I don't even know who you are."
Your heart sinks at his question. What were you meant to say? 
‘Oh, it's nothing! It’s only because I know your entire backstory, and character and have read through your wiki an unhealthy amount of times.’
You'd rather eat your foot.
Reluctant to scare the traumatised doll once more, you attempt to smile at him and gently took the hand that is so tightly gripped at your sleeve.
"You don't have to know someone to want to help them." You hum, making yourself comfortable in front of him. "Plus... Who says we can't get to know each other now?"
Looking down at him with kind eyes (you hope it comes off that way), you tilt your head. "What's your name?"
(Kunikuzushi? Scaramouche? Wanderer?) He pauses, his eyes wavering and breaking away from yours. 
"I do not have one." His voice breaks, along with your heart.
You have to restrain yourself from spilling what his mother had wanted for him, that she never left him with the intent of abandoning him, never wished upon him the life he was destined to experience.
(Fate can be cruel but Gods can be even crueler, you felt.)
"That's okay. I don't need to know names to get to know you." You hum, gently squeezing his hand. "Is it alright if I ask you what happened?"
The forlorn expression quickly morphs into a face of heartache. The hand that barely clutched back in your hand tightened ever so desperately around your own, and you narrowly hold back a wince at the suddenness.
"My creator... My mother left me without saying a word." He croaked. "She didn't stop to look back at me once."
You sadly watch as he fruitlessly attempts to hold down his tears. Tears that had led a god to deem him too vulnerable, too fragile to uphold such a title as 'The Raiden Shogun's Puppet.'
You reach over, putting your unoccupied hand on his shoulder. Feeling it shudder and quiver with every concealed cry, you see his watering eyes flick over to you.
"It's okay to cry once in a while." You say. "It's only human."
He furrows his brows.
"But," He spoke in hushed tones. "I am not human and... I do not own a heart like you."
(Oh, you knew. But at this moment-- you think he feels more human than anybody else.)
"Well I think... you seem to be very human. Maybe even more human than me." 
(The dam floods and shatters, taking him along with it but he holds onto you for dear life and... and you let him. Your warmth is a sharp contrast against his cool hands and face-- though it is ever so comforting as you wrap your arms so tenderly around him.)
(He feels safe.)
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You decide to give him a name. In your head, of course, you didn't wish to give him a name that he did not choose.
You call him Kuni. For now.
Speaking of which, he had stopped sniffling quite some time ago and was now sitting up-- studying you with blatant curiosity. You sweatdrop under his fixed gaze but you're glad he looks much calmer than when you first found him.
"You never told me your name." He suddenly speaks, making you jolt a bit.
"Ah... Did I not?"
You tell him your name, with slight hesitation. 
You know you probably shouldn't interfere with his past, despite how badly you long to push him on a path to a better... happier, content life. You also know that it most definitely would change, a lot. Of things in the future.
You didn't want to risk that.
He echoed your name, looking more content as time passed. 
"Now, we know each other!" You beam, pleased now that Kuni was feeling better.
He timidly smiles back at you. (It's one so small and gentle, so out of character for his present self as ‘Scaramouche’, 'The Balladeer, the 6th of the Fatui Harbingers' and 'The Wanderer' -- you could die happy knowing that you made him smile.) 
"Yes, we do."
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