if we’ve gotta live underground and everybody’s got cancer/ will poetry be enuf? // Eisa Davis to Ntozake Shange
dear ntozake,
I got sacks of mercury under the skin beneath my eyes
either cried too much or i’m abt to
the cool war’s burnin up my retina again
does poetry start where life ends?
i know i’m supposed to be cool:
i wear corrective lenses that feature
high definition tragedy.
baby in the dumpster ethnic cleansing
assassinations multinational mergers
i’m supposed to shake my head
write a poem
believe in ripples.
but i ain’t cool.
i emit inhuman noises
i imagine terrorist acts as i flick my imaginary ash
onto the imaginary tray
i imagine going insane with a purpose
and writing it down feels sorta unnecessary
does poetry end where life begins?
berkeley girl black girl red diaper baby
born of the blood of the struggle
but with reaganomics and prince pickin up steam in ‘81
nothing came between me and my calvins
10 yrs old unpressed hair playin beethoven
readin madeleine l’engle got scared in my pants when i heard
this girl testifying ‘TOUSSAINT’
in the black repertory group youth ensemble
i was just sittin in a rockin chair pretendin to be 82
and talkin like I knew all bout langston’s ‘rivers’
i wasn’t as good as her
and i definitely wadn’t cool
so i gave up drama
and decided to bake soufflés
zake
you wda beat me up in the playground
if we’da grown up together
and you did
eighth grade ‘he dropped em’
at the regional oratorical competition
i saw another fly honey rip it
this time it’s ‘a nite with beau willie brown’
i was bleedin on the ground
i became yours
no more soufflés
i jacked for colored girls right off my mama’s shelf
my mama fania who was sweatin with you
and raymond sawyer and ed mock
and halifu osumare
dancin on the grass back in the day
in you i found a groove
never knew i had one like that
did that monologue over and over
alone in my room
my bunk bed the proscenium arch
13 yrs old screamin and cryin abt my kids
gettin dropped out a window
didn't know a damn thing about rivers
but i knew abt my heart fallin five stories
you were never abbreviated or lower case to me
you just pimped that irony
that global badass mackadocious funkology
you not only had hígado
you had ben-wa balls in yr pussy
betsey brown on my godmother's couch
nappy edges in mendocino at the mouth of big river
spell #7 after the earthquake in silverlake
the love space demands had to be in brooklyn
yr poems are invitations to live in yr body
love letters yr admirers dream they coulda written themselves
no one cd find a category that was yr size
blackety black but never blacker than thou
you teased me into sassiness when i had none to speak of
made profane into sacred but never formed a church
sanctified women's lives
whether we were reading nietzsche or a box of kotex
we were magical and regular
you many-tongued st louis woman of barnard and barcelona
you left us the residue of yr lust
left us to wander life as freely as sassafrass cypress and indigo
and even the unedumacated could get yr virtuosity
cuz you always fried it up in grease
you built an aqueduct from lorraine hansberry's groundwater
and it bubbled straight to george c wolfe
you never read what the critics said
and you scrunched up the flesh between yr eyebrows
like everybody else in my family
but zake
is poetry enuf?
i beg the question cuz you grew me up
you and adrienne kennedy and anna deavere smith
and all my mothers
you blew out the candles on my 26th
so when there's mercury under the skin beneath my eyes
and the world ain't so cool
do you write a poem
or a will?
like leroi jones said if bessie smith had killed some white people
she wouldn't have needed that music
so do we all write like amiri baraka does
or do we all get our nat turner on?
i beg the question cuz i wanna get my life right
do some real work
and i really don't want to kill any white folk
i mean can we talk abt this
maybe it's just my red diaper that's itchin
but i still got that will to uplift the race
sans bootstraps or talented tenths or paper bag tests
this time we uplift the human race
and i know the rainbow might be
but is poetry enuf?
it's a naive question but i'm old enuf to ask them once in a while
if we do finally unload the canon
clean it out
stock up on some more colorful balls
ain't we only gettin the ones that are available at a store near you?
doesn't the market end up setting the new standards anyway?
is poetry enuf if it ain't sellin?
if ain't nobody readin it?
can poetry keep a man who can't read
from droppin his kids out a window?
and how can i call a ceasefire to this cool war
in stanzas of eights
when we've declared poetry a no fly zone?
we have learned to protect it and its potential politics
like a mother
shoot down anyone who might overdetermine a poem's meaning
(while we poets divebomb everyone else's politics with impunity
like we're the United States or something)
if poetry is just poetry
we save it from the conservatives
but doesn't that mean it's of no use to the progressives?
is poetry enuf?
cuz that's all i'm doin.
makin up stories on stage on the page
keepin the beat
and that's all my friends are doin
and that's what a lot of folks my age are doin
but if we've gone and burnt up everything in the sky
if there's nothin else to eat but landfill stroganoff
if we've gotta live underground and everybody's got cancer
will poetry be enuf?
my aunt angela says i can do my thang
and keep swinging left hooks to oppression
if i stay up stay into it stay involved
just one form of praxis will do.
it's just my guilt that thinks i need twenty-two
what's enuf?
shouldn't i (or somebody) be our secular bodhisattva
become a real power player but skip the talk show
can't we stabilize, rekindle collectives
and cooperatives and collaborations
therapeutic communities that double
as creative juggernauts
a publishing house a theatre where the plays
cost less than the movies
get the neighborhood coven back together
take dance breaks in the cubicles
sing until the flourescent lights burst into snow
i ask you because you changed me zake
you changed thousands of women
and i know poetry can't be enuf if you drunk
i ain't tryin ta walk off wid alla yr stuff
and i got nuttin but love for ya
so that's why i gotta know
i'm sittin on my bed encircled by every book
you've ever published
they're open like fans
marking pages with the flint of genius
all i want is for this circle to grow
so tell me:
is this where poetry and life are twins?
i felt so crumpled up when i started writing you
poetry seemed so useless and dingy
next to all the bright red bad news
but now that the poem is over i feel wide open
like an infant of the spring just tell me how
to feed this light
to my responsibilities
and poetry just might be enuf
love
eisa
With the stress of Roe vs Wade potentially facing a repeal this summer, we want to let the women in our lives know they are not alone in their frustration. The fight women have been waging for their intellectual and bodily freedom has been a long one, so we wanted to revisit some history about the first women-owned feminist press in California, the Shameless Hussy Press! Poet and soon to be publisher Alta Gerrey founded the press in Oakland, California, in 1969, and would publish four women who later became prominent feminist writers: Pat Parker, Mitsuye Yamada, Ntozake Shange, and Susan Griffin. Alta published her own titles under her Shameless Hussy Press imprint, including three poetry collections preserved in our collection: Letters to Women, published around 1970; Song of the Wife; Song of the Mistress, published in 1971; No Visible Means of Support, published in 1971.
Alta’s sarcastic and straightforward writing style is reflected in the Shameless Hussy Press aesthetic. In her first collection, Letters to Women, she includes the iconic feminist symbol of a fist within the symbol of Venus and her copyright statement reads:
for underground reproduction without profit, there is no copyright. for moneymakers, this is copyright, and you gotta pay.
Alta emphasizes the aid of her friends and family in producing her book, and poetry aimed at letting women know that they were not alone in whatever injustices and hardships they faced, whether gender inequality and sexism, marriage and divorce, rape, mental illness, or raising children.
Alta’s second collection, Song of the Wife; Song of the Mistress, with drawings by Martha Kuech, reflects the intimacy the poet felt with her readers and how she used poetry as the outlet for emotions that could be a burden too heavy to carry at times. Letters to Women is dedicated “to every woman who is as isolated as i,” but Song of the Wife; Song of the Mistress "isn’t dedicated to anybody. eat yr hearts out.” Alta had a love for improper grammar, punctuation, and unconventional spelling. The first half of this second book reproduces a handwritten cursive script, presumably Alta’s handwriting, and the second half switches back to typewriter print. This title and Alta’s third collection, No Visible Means of Support, were both published after the Shameless Hussy Press had moved down the Bay to San Lorenzo, California, from its original location in Berkeley. Alta made the choice to move her independent press after the sabotage of a friend’s press in the same area, as well as to protect her daughter and herself from death threats she received for her work in the lesbian, feminist, and activist communities.
Shameless Hussy Press was the first to publish Ntozake’s Shange’s poetic performance work, For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide When the Rainbow Is Enuf, which was later adapted into an Obie award-winning Broadway theater production. In 1976, Shameless Hussy published Camp Notes and Other Poems by Mitsuye Yamada, revolving around her experiences in the internment camps and the pain she felt at being perceived as an outsider.
The formation of the Shameless Hussy Press by Alta and the Women’s Press Collective by Judy Grahn, with aid from Pat Parker (who I posted about earlier), was quite inspirational for second wave of feminism. The four women who brought the feminist and lesbian publishing community to the foreground in California, Alta, Susie Griffin, Judy Grahn, and Pat Parker, had all met originally as neighbors over tea, but decided it was time to take action in their communities. Alta said in an interview that the group would often argue over how political their writing should be, wondering whether they should, “stick to the personal. [but] Susie kept saying, ‘the personal is political.’”
Griffin’s works were said to have launched ecofeminism in the United States as she rose to become one of the most influential American feminist writers of the 20th century. Alta’s Shameless Hussy Press gave these influential women the opportunity to be published outside the patriarchy of mainstream publishing, allowing them to completely claim their work as their own. Shameless Hussy ran from 1969-1989, despite being a one-woman-publishing house, publishing over fifty titles in its 20-y3qr existence.
–Isabelle, Special Collections Undergraduate Writing Intern
Studying Ms. Shange’s work as she is the pioneer of the choreopoem
I’ve been reading an anthology of her work and my favorite pieces seem to be from Nappy Edges, a Daughter’s Geography, & For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide / When the Rainbow is Enuf
I’ve also been watching interviews of Ms. Shange and how she describes the joy of movement and music and creation — I love joy. I want to live and love right here forever
Rapist doesn’t have to be a stranger to be legitimate.
Someone you never saw, but if you’ve been public with him, dance one dance, kissed him goodbye lightly, with a closed mouth,
Pressing charges would be as hard as trying to keep your legs closed from 5 fools trying to run a train on you
these men are friends of ours,who smile nice,stay employed and take us out to dinner, lock the door behind you, & we are left wit the scares
being betrayed by men who know us & expect like the stranger
we always thought waz comin that we will submit
we must have known women relinquish all personal rights
in the presence of a man who apparently could be considered a rapist
especially if he has been considered a friend
& is no less worthy of being beat within an inch of his life
being publicly ridiculed havin two fists shoved up his ass than the stranger we always thought it would be who never showed up
cuz it turns out the nature of rape has changed
we can now meet them in circles we frequent for companionship
we see them at the coffeehouse wit someone else we know
we could even have em over for dinner & get raped in our own houses
by invitation a friend
For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide / When the Rainbow Is Enuf
Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf?: The show examines the complexities of the marriage of a middle-aged couple, Martha and George. Late one evening, after a university faculty party, they receive an unwitting younger couple, Nick and Honey, as guests, and draw them into their bitter and frustrated relationship.
for colored girls who have considered suicide/when the rainbow is enuf: The play follows seven nameless woman through a world of racism, oppression, and sexism. These women of color are named after the colors of the rainbow: Lady in Red, Lady in Blue, Lady in Purple, Lady in Yellow, Lady in Brown, Lady in Green, and Lady in Orange. They tell their stories and the stories of other women they know through poetry, music, and dance. It is a piece that flows effortlessly from one story into the next, never really taking a moment to breathe. The women often help each other tell their stories by acting as a chorus or stepping into the shoes of another character.
Propaganda under the cut!
Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf?:
the only play ive read that really made me feel anything tbh. the tension all throughout it. the ending!!! the confusion and the sudden realisation.... the reality & illusion thing. Aughhhh
It's like eavesdropping on a couple fighting at a restaurant, but you're in their living room and they also invited over people they met for the first time that night
watching this feels like you've been invited to a dinner party and the couple hosting start bickering and you're feeling kind of awkward and then they start going straight for each other's metaphorical throats and acting like it's a game. every time you try to speak up or say "oh wow it's late we should be going" they make another excuse or they turn it on you. such chaos, such fun
it's straight people in a very toxic relationship who has out their drama in front of everyone and also it was written by a gay man and it is very funny
for colored girls who have considered suicide/when the rainbow is enuf:
A groundbreaking play/choreopoem about the lives of black women
here are some of my favorite poems, many of which are by my favorite poets
"danse russe" by william carlos williams
"feeling fucked up" by etheridge knight
"for black poets who think of suicide" by etheridge knight
"the idea of ancestry" by etheridge knight
"october" by mary oliver
"i am now able" by leonard cohen
"loving" by jack veasey
"donner party" by richard brautigan
"the shipfitter's wife" by dorianne laux
"the passionate shepherd to his love" by christopher marlowe
"tanka" by sonia sanchez
"first came the lion-rider" by kenneth patchen
"a meeting" by wendell berry
all of for colored girls who have considered suicide/when the rainbow is enuf by ntozake shange
note: digital versions of most books can be found on Z-library]
'*' indicates a trigger warning (direct references to death, abuse, violence, obvious triggers for mental illnesses)
Books
Little Fires Everywhere by Celeste Ng
The Inseparables by Simone de Beauvoir
Masterpieces of Art: Vincent Van Gogh by Stephanie Cotela Tanner
The Deep by Rivers Solomon
A Little Life by Hanya Yanagihara*
Articles + essays
How Britain's Opium Trade Impoverished Indians (rec from @/apricitystudies)
Bad Therapy*
Life After a Traumatic Event and the Problem with the Resilience Narrative (rec from @/apricitystudies)
Bias in Mental Health Diagnosis Gets in the Way of Treatment
Waking Up Late Doesn't Mean You're Not Successful
Brain Function of Night Owls and Larks Differ
Muslim Feminism is not a Paradox
How Do Women Really Wield Power?
Little Archer, Big Mystery
The Anxiety of Influencers (rec from @/saintbronte)
Leaked Amazon Memo Shows the Company is Running Out of People to Hire
Can they hear the desperation even thru the zipper? Ok we're good them lil bro hang in there. I'd give you a hand but you've had enuf applause with enuf wrong reasons to stand ovations to observe with poetry reading roars of thumbs snapping recognition. Embarrassment is not only my forte it's also in my baggage. The only skeletons in my closet are laying on the fucking tabletop, and I'd sit and peruse all to abuse in time as if that's exactly what I intend, but I'd still come up obstinate, abstinent, and magnified out of living into still life caricature without life applied I can only declare myself satanic and thus I'm need of anithhe bad claim to instigate the tenses and intemses of relatives and authorities who've looked so long at what they still see needs looked into or am I wrong to heckle the girls for this or grams, or PayPal pen palls I'll send your invoice to for that thing you and I both have no idea where this is going if it isn't fucking soon. I like the way I crave you, and disruption, and the way tinder touches the flame. Fear in the boredom is sought after for adrenaline missed so long it's like a inch long growing off the side of my bloody ear for left sided sakes. That clearly ain't right or new at this point in this narrative without. Witjout, like you never have to use axle grease if your on stilts, and you'll always be the highest aashole anybody looks up too. So fetch another snatch and grab of disastrous, and throw it and the baby the f outta here. My pockets have pants sown into the edges. And it's wearing me out.
you almost got it-you really did
‘born of the blood of struggle’ we all were/ even if we don’t
know it/ what if poetry isn’t enuf?
whatchu gonna do then?
paint ?
dance ?
put your back field in motion & wait for james brown to fall on his knees
like it’s too much for him/ what?
too much for james?
yeah/ didn’t you ever see the sweat from his brow/ a libation of passion
make a semi-circle fronta his body/ a half-moon of exertion
washin’ away any hope he had of/ standin’ it/ can’t stand it
& he falls to his knees and three jamesian niggahs in a stroll
so sharp it hurts bring him a cape that shines likes the northern
star/shinin' i say like you imagined the grease in the parts of yr hair
or yr legs/or yr mother's face after rehearsal after she had you/
james falls to his knees cuz he “cain't take it"/he's pleadin’
please please please don't go
we look to see who brought james brown to the floor /
so weak/ we think/ so overwrought with the power of love
that’s why poetry is enuf/ eisa/ it brings us to our knees
& when we look up from our puddles of sweat/
the world's still right there & the children still have bruises
tiny white satin caskets & their mothers weep like mary shda
there is nothing more sacred than a glimpse of power of the universe
it brought james brown to his knees lil anthony too/ even jackie wilson
arrogant pretty muthafuckah he was/ dropped no knee pads in the face
of the might we have to contend with/ & sometimes yng blk boys bleed
to death face down on asphalt cuz fallin' to they knees was not cool/
the way to go/it ain't fallin' to our knees is a public admission
a great big ol' scarlet letter that we cain't/ don't wanna escape any
feelin'/ any sensation of bein' alive can come right down on us/ & yes
my tears & sweat may decorate the ground like a veve in haiti or a sand
drawing in melbourne/ but in the swooning/ in the delirium/ of a felt life
lies a poem to be proud of/ does it matter?
can ya stand up, chile?
the point is not to fall down & get up dustin' our bottoms/
i always hated it when folks said that to me/ the point
eisa/ is to fall on your knees & let the joy of survivin'
bring you to yr feet/ yr bottom's not dirty/ didn't even graze the earth/
no it's the stuff of livin' fully that makes the spirit of the poem
let you show yr face again & again & again
i usedta hide myself in jewelry or huge dark glasses
big hats long pillowin' skirts/ anythin' to protect me/ from the gazes
somebody'd see i'd lived a lil bit/ felt somethin' too terrible for casual
conversation
& all this was obvious from lookin' in my eyes/ that's why i usedta read
poem after
poem with my eyes shut/ quite a feat/ cept the memory'd take over &
leave
my tequila bodyguard in a corner somewhere out the way of the pain
in my eyes that simply came through my body/ they say
my hands sculpt the air with words/ my face becomes the visage of a
character's voice/ i don't know
i left my craft to chance & fear someone wd see i care too much
take me for a chump
laugh & go home
this is not what happened?
is poetry enuf to man a picket line/ to answer to phones at the
rape crisis center/ to shield women entering abortion clinics from
demons with
crosses & illiterate signs defiling the horizon at dawn/ to keep our
children
from believin' that they can buy hope with a pair of sneakers or another
nasty
filter for cheap glass pipe/ no/ no/ a million times no
but
poetry can bring those bleeding women & children outta time
up close enuf for us to see feel ourselves there/ then the separations
what makes me/ me & you/ you/// drops away & the truth that we
constantly avoid/ shut our eyes to/ hold our breath hopin' we won't be found out/
surfaces/ darlin'/ & we are all everyone of those dark & hurtin' places/
those dry bloodied memories are no less ours than the mornin/ yes
the mournin' we may be honorable enuf to endure with our eyes open
the coroner cannot simply bring her hand gently down our eyelids/
leavin'
us to the silence of not life/ the solitude of the unreachable
can ya stand up, 'chile?
hands stretched out to touch again
not so you can get up & conquer the world/
you did that when you cdnt raise yr head & yr body trembled so/
you scared yr mama that was when the poem took over & you gave you
back
what you discovered you didn't haveta give up/
all that fullness of breath/ houdini in an emotional maze/ free at last
but nobody can see how you did it/ 'how'd she get out'/
nobody'll know less you tell em/
do you really wanna write/
from twenty thousand leagues under a stranger's wailin?
can you move gracefully randomly thru the landmines that
are yr own angola/ hey, your bosnia!
are you shamed sometimes there's no feelin' you
can recognize in yr left leg? does the bleeding you'll do anyway
offend you or can you make a sacred drawing like ana mendieta that will
heal us all? do i believe in magic?
hell yeah.
shd you?
i don't know.
don't know how yr gonna find yr way out the maze/ ancient as it is
no one can tell you the secret/ not me/ not aunt angela/ not yr mama
beautiful as she is/ i usedta watch her legs cut thru space like a ninja in
ballet
shoes/ i wanted to be tall & clear-eyed like yr mama/ & you come tellin'
me
i cd beat you up in a school yard/ no
my daddy wda bought the school yard & paid kids not to hurt me/
so what you see is not what you get
i am not a poem/ i am savannah's mother/ savannah sat with her bottle
thru
the children's class at stanze's once we moved to texas/ but i was always
lookin’ for your mother's legs to come slicing the air/ ten years later/
2000 miles
away/ed mock dead/ tower of power fallen/ sly stone disappeared/
oakland
like the back of my hand/ now unknown/ "get it & feel good" i usedta
say
sometimes still do/ diffrence is i cherish stupid lil things now/ did yr
mama
tell you raymond asked our whole class after a bout with possessed
drummers and
gravity/ if we ever took our dance clothes off/ he could smell us comin'
cross the
Bay Bridge/ he shouted & pranced like somekinda stallion/ like his sweat
didn't
stink too/workin' in the other realm is dirty work/ makes us smell bad/
did yr
mama tell ya? i know she didn't let ya believe makin' art was not a messy
business/
she cdn't have/ we were trained too well
is poetry enuf, eisa?
that's gonna be up to you?
is poetry enuf for me?
why do you think i wrote 'for colored girls'
i wanted yall to come out from under yr starched pinafores & pressed
heads
with some notion of dream & sanctity of spirit/
looks like some of it worked
but remember i'm still writin' still dancin'
fell on my knees so many times now/ i wrote rev. ike for a prayer cloth
it's serious like that
peaceful like that
i sweat when i write/ do you?
the original aboriginal dancin' girl
love,
ntozake
the thing about cramming taking the fun and beauty out of languages is SO fucking real and i hate it sm (thanks indian education <3).
this reminds me of sanskrit when i learnt it in school bc at one point i started to hate in it 10th standard bc ONLY the marks mattered (plus the teacher who took out tuition at home was a bhakt who said the most inane and genocidal shit about muslim folks but that's another story)
and fuck...tamil sounds difficult to learn sdkhksdf. reminds me so much of malayalam with its koot-aksharam which are so difficult to figure out lol. according to my mom, malayalam grammar is hella difficult too so...yay
anyway power to tamil poets aksjhksd with all those strict grammar rules like wtf. thinking of shakespeare on the other hand who did whatever the fuck he wanted to do
(also psst psst gimme some good tamil poem recs na...i will try and search for its translations)
asdhsfhsk yeah the indian education system is so fucked in several aspects :') and yeah shitty teachers just ruin everything (the entitlement some of them have-)
tamil used to be so easy to learn back in like 1st-3rd grade bc as a mother tongue it was just very simple as we werent expected to actually write in like very proper tamil and the lessons were simple enuf. shit went bad in 4th grade and its been downhill ever since. the lessons are fun when u learn them but even then the teachers need to be like nice and interactive or you'll just fall asleep during class (which has unfortunately happened more than once this year for me)
and like when our teacher was talking about the yaapu illakkanam (grammar for poetry) i remember the whole class just groaning bc the only thing we were thinking was "if its so difficult why do we still have so many poems to study😭😭" i truly do not understand how thiruvalluvar, bhaarathiyar, avvaiyar and so much more wrote so many works- like ?????! honestly speaking english writer's have so much creative freedom and like they do smth that "breaks" the rules of grammar? boom genius who goes beyond what is accepted and is considered one of the greatest ever ashdsjfkgh
and for the poem recs hmm-
i mean we have the staple thirukkural and avvaiyaar's athichoodi. the latter was one of the first ever set of poems we were taught when our languages started, its pretty simple to understand and like the starting letter of each line is in the order of the uyirezhuthukkal. and we have like 20 thirukkurals to learn each year so- (i have to learn and memorise ten and their meanings for just tmrw's exam :'])
but the poem i was talking about in post was இளைய தோழனுக்கு by மு.மேத்தா... and honestly that is one of the very few poems, like i said, that i actually enjoy fdhfjshgk
and sorry to disappoint, but even tho i have been studying and speaking in tamil for as long as i can remember, i cant remember any of the good poems ive read/learned 😭😭 my mind is just like blank except for the stuff ive studied for tmrw :')))
(will definitely let you know if i remember or come across smth nice, maybe that will help me actually develop an interest in the language...)
I'm been tracking my productivity in my Slingshot organizer. I got a HOT PINK cover and I love it!
Been trying to log in at least some writing/revising/recording time when I'm actively working on my manuscript and adding to it in some way
Also trying to log in time studying poetry. I started my winter break studying forms and Langston Hughes. Sidetracked into some Bad Bunny for a minute. Kid's dope, what can I say...
Right now I am on my 2nd read through of For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide / When The Rainbow Is Enuf by Ntozake Shange
I read it through out loud first and now I'm going through line by line and annotating, paying special attention to the visual cues in each line
I have found that I am drawn to Ms. Shange's pacing and how she navigates that with or without the use of slashes, line breaks, or capitalization (at first glance, you wonder why she chose to use a certain technique here and not there to arrive at the same effect. on second glance, there is a genius to her consistency).
Then I'll be off to find footage of different performances of this choreopoem so I can pay special attention to the blockage, the use of music and dance, as well as delivery of lines. & I'll be annotating along the way lol it'll be fun
Other things I've tracked: my period (yay no more creepy period apps) & my sobriety (no alcohol going on 5 days now, ayee. i didn't give up weed tho. i love weed)
"dark phrases" – Lady in Brown with Ladies in Red, Blue, Orange, Green, Yellow and Purple
dark phrases of womenhood
of never having been a girl
half-notes scattered
without rhythm
no tune distraught
laughter falling over a black girls shoulder
it’s funny
it’s hysterical
the melody-less-ness of her dance
don’t tell nobody, don’t tell a soul
she’s dancin on beer cans and shingles
this must be the spook house
another song with no singers
lyrics
no voices & uninterrupted solos
unseen performances
are we ghouls?
children of horror?
the joke?
don’t tell nobody, don’t tell a soul
are we animals? have we gone crazy?
I can’t hear anythin
but maddening screams
& the soft strains of death
& you promised me, you promised
somebody, anybody
sing a black girls song
bring her out to know herself
to know you
but sing her rhythms
Carin
struggle
hard times
sing her song of life
shes been dead so long
closed in silence so long
she doesn’t know the sound of her own voice
her infinite beauty
she’s half-notes scattered
without rhythm
no tune
sing her sighs
sing the song of her possibilities
sing a righteous gospel
let her be born
let her be born and handled warmly
& this is for colored girls who have considered suicide
but are moving to the ends of their own rainbows
For Colored Girls Who Have Considered Suicide / When the Rainbow Is Enuf
“i found god in myself / & i loved her/ i loved her fiercely”
— Ntozake Shange, from For colored girls who have considered suicide/When the rainbow is enuf
for colored girls who have considered suicide/when the rainbow is enuf: The play follows seven nameless woman through a world of racism, oppression, and sexism. These women of color are named after the colors of the rainbow: Lady in Red, Lady in Blue, Lady in Purple, Lady in Yellow, Lady in Brown, Lady in Green, and Lady in Orange. They tell their stories and the stories of other women they know through poetry, music, and dance. It is a piece that flows effortlessly from one story into the next, never really taking a moment to breathe. The women often help each other tell their stories by acting as a chorus or stepping into the shoes of another character.
Gruesome Playground Injuries: It’s not your typical love story: Doug and Kayleen meet at the nurse’s office in their elementary school; she’s got a painful stomach ache, and he’s all banged up from a running dive off the roof of the school. Over the next thirty years, these scar-crossed lovers meet again and again, brought together by injury, heartbreak, and their own self-destructive tendencies.
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for colored girls who have considered suicide/when the rainbow is enuf:
A groundbreaking play/choreopoem about the lives of black women
Gruesome Playground Injuries:
two people but they end up only meeting/talking when they're injured and it's very dramatic and cool and they both need so much therapy and also allows for fun stage makeup