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theexaltedbride · 2 months ago

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White Rabbit X Human Childhood Friend (GN)

Rabbit's first meeting with a real human, and his first time on Earth, had been a mistake. But one which would change the course of his life.

As one of the fastest member of his group, he tended to act as a runner, scout, and scavenger, scurrying through tunnels and across the surface of Makai where he could find tight spaces to hide from larger demons and avoid the noxious air.

Sometimes this would require him to run ahead of his people for days at a time, looking for safe places for them to hide and rest while they scavenged for supplies or things to trade. It was during one of these scouting trips that Rabbit found a curious grotto, like a spiral carved into stone, the eye of a storm, where the air was fresh and clean, hidden in a little cave where Rabbit could easily climb in and wondered at where the air was coming from. Until his fur stood on end, like static electricity coursing through his body, until with a loud crash and spark, he was pulled through and thrown into our world.

It was all such a shock to his senses that he couldn't handle it. Going from a world of darkness to seeing the sun for the first time, the sounds of nature, going from a toxic and polluted planet to one with actual fresh air, so many healthy colors he couldn't even imagine.

Rabbit broke down, tripping over himself, shouting and crying and running through the forest in disbelief. He didn't even have the words to describe what he saw all around him, his senses were unaccustomed to the alien atmosphere surrounding him and Rabbit simply couldn't cope. His life till then had been full of so much fear and horror that to see beauty and safety left him unable to understand anything around him.

That's how he first ran into you (quite literally). You were running through the woods behind your family home, enjoying the halcyon days of summer vacation from school without any summer programs. A time to run and play and pretend you were a knight or magic user vanquishing dragons and saving the day. A nicely shaped stick you found was your weapon and your magic wand.

You were busy in the midst of chasing down foul monsters when Rabbit slammed into you while running through the unfamiliar forests, so out of it with shock and terror he didn't see you while running away, and you both fell to the ground with a loud crash, though Rabbit fell much harder. You were left seeing stars for a moment, until your vision cleared and despite some bruising, you were left in astonishment of what you saw before you.

You found Rabbit trembling and cowering against a tree. He was dressed in tattered rags, cuts and bruises showing underneath his fur, and his snowy coat of fur was matted with dirt and mud. A single look at you and Rabbit held up his hands as if expecting you to hit him with your stick, as he begged for mercy. His words were hoarse and scratchy from the day he'd been having so far, and although you couldn't understand his speech, you did understand his body language.

Fear. So much fear. It made you feel bad. No matter how much you tried to calm him he still cowered away, so you waited and thought of how to get Rabbit to relax.

You had a lunchbox with you, your parents knew you loved running round the woods behind your house, so they at least made sure to have a sandwich and some juice boxes, so you opened up your lunchbox and unwrapped the sandwich, leaving it close to Rabbit and stepping back.

After a few moments Rabbit finally began to calm down, and after finally settling down he noticed the food you'd left for him, and finally began to realize he wasn't in any danger.

Rabbit ate the sandwich with a desperation you'd never seen from anyone or anything before. Food was never to be wasted, and being offered it was something he'd only experienced from the others of his caravan. But once he took the first bite of earth food, he was instantly hooked.

In his entire life he'd never tasted food so good or fresh before, and consumed the sandwich so fast he actually started choking, and after drinking down both of your juice boxes, he cleared his airway enough to finally offer his thanks.

Though you couldn't really understand him that well.

Rabbit could barely speak, as much from fear as from his poor state of health. But the two of you conversed for close to an hour, trading words with one another, he had no idea where he was, and you didn't know what 'Makai' was, but your young mind understood the basics of 'I'm a lost kid'.

So, you of course offered to bring him home with you. If he was lost then your parents would know what to do. They could help him return home and meet his rabbit family and then you could both be friends.

What innocent times they were.

You offered your hand to Rabbit, and he accepted it, allowing you to guide him back to your home and to where your parents received quite the shock at seeing you bring in a young rabbit person in tattered rags.

Just as Rabbit had been shocked at seeing our world, so were your parents at seeing a nonhuman creature being brought home like it was your friend. They were afraid to approach, and each time rabbit looked at them or made a move they would tense up in fear at what he was. Their minds couldn't process what they were seeing, and their main concern was you being so close, to the point of actually shouting for you to step away from Rabbit.

"Get away from that thing!" They'd yelled, and Rabbit's ears flinched at the sudden sound of the raised voices. But you wrapped your arms around Rabbit and told your parents he was your new friend.

But Rabbit was already at his breaking point. His mind was drowned in fear, and he was overwhelmed by the desire to flee.

Rabbit had already been nervous when he was first brought to your home, but upon seeing the reaction he triggered, he just couldn't stay. Nor did he want you to be in trouble for what he did, so he allowed himself to take the blame, by suddenly shoving you away and onto your back, before bolting out of the door and back towards the woods.

He'd actually pushed you too hard and you'd hit the kitchen table, pushing it back slightly and leaving you with a nasty bruise, but Rabbit was already on the move out the back door and running to the woods with the kind of speed rabbits were known for.

Your parents had been shocked and worried about you and this gave Rabbit a chance to slip away, and he hoped that the blame would be placed on him and not on you.

Rabbit ran away in pure fear, running faster. It was the kind of life he would have killed for, but...he was too afraid to stay. He felt as if he didn't belong, he felt filthy, monstrous, this wasn't his place, and so he ran...he ran all the way back to that portal in Makai, and for a solid week he failed to return.

Your parents told you not to go back into the woods, but you still found chances to sneak out and find him. Two weeks after he'd first found you, the two of you finally met once more, with you sitting and having a sandwich in the woods and noticing Rabbit slowly leaning his head around a tree and approaching you slowly before he sat near you.

"You're mean." You'd said to the Rabbit, "You didn't have to push me that hard."

"Sorry." Rabbit managed to squeak out, his throat rough and scratchy.

"I was scared. " Rabbit admitted, and shuffled closer to you, sitting near you but still out of arm's reach, his gaze on the ground as he did feel bad about hurting you.

"I know...I forgive you." You told Rabbit and gave him a hug. Rabbit's eyes went wide and his ears twitched at the sudden touch and forgiveness.

He reached his arms out and returned the hug to you.

For the rest of the day the two of you, a young human and a young Makaian demon sat and spoke, traded stories and again shared food. Though Rabbit didn't have much food to share with you.

He had been figuring out which plants were alright to eat, and which would make him sick. Some were not for eating but they looked pretty and those he gave to you as a gift, and you promised to give him a gift in return.

As the weeks went by and summer vacation turned to fall and neared Halloween, Rabbit still visited you at least once a week, and was always happy to spend time with you, playing games, eating strange earther foods, and learning about the world. You'd bring him homework and notes from school so that you could help him learn to read (even a few you'd stolen from the school library so he could keep and learn to sound out words) when he was back on Makai. But the one which enraptured Rabbit the most was Alice in Wonderland.

It wasn't hard to see why, to Rabbit this was his Wonderland, a strange place with rules that didn't make sense, and yet worked on its own logic. You even convinced your parents to give you a copy or two for your birthday so you could show him how different they could sometimes be.

You let him keep the copy of Alice in Wonderland that he liked best, as a gift, though Rabbit kept promising to return it each time you parted.

Eventually Rabbit stopped coming to see you. Days turned to weeks, months, then years, and decades without ever seeing Rabbit.

He just stopped showing up, and you were left wondering if the stories he shared about his homeworld were true, and it really was so dangerous that....maybe he'd been eaten. The thought of it terrified you, but there was no way to know for sure.

So you waited, and waited....and waited....

For years your family convinced you that you'd remembered it wrong. That it had just been some strange homeless child who you turned into an imaginary friend. After so long you started to believe it too.

Rabbit went to pains to hide the portal to Makai from you, saying his home was too dangerous, and despite your best efforts you weren't able to find it, nor could you find any sign of Rabbit.

You stopped going back into the woods eventually, starting to believe that maybe it was all in your head, especially as rabbit stopped coming, and eventually it just became a curious moment in your life.

Until the Rabbit returned.

You'd taken to sometimes looking out for your neighbors and watching over their kids when they were busy with work or needed an impromptu babysitter, and were watching over the kid of your neighbor from across the street. It was a nice way of making friends with neighbors.

It was during one of those days that you had a most unexpected visitor.

"It's the Easter Bunny!" The child said as they pointed out the window, towards the woods at the back of your home, and true to his word...you could see Rabbit strolling up the way to the backyard and casually hopping over the small picket fence there.

At first you didn't know what to think. A creature from your own dreams was walking up the backstep to your home, and looking up to the backdoor.

It was like a flood of memories came to you in that moment, and even through you knew you should have moved the kid somewhere else to stay out of this, but you just wanted to see Rabbit, after all this time.

He only knocked once on the back door before you opened it for him, and for the first time in years, you locked eyes with your best friend.

The moment he saw you, he knew who you were. There was fear in Rabbit's eyes, but it was slowly replaced with relief.

"I hope that I'm not intruding on you." Rabbit said with a respectful bow of his head. He held one hand behind his back, and a bundle of freshly picked flowers in the other hand, the same flowers he used to pick for you long ago.

"You've changed. But...you're still the same." Rabbit smiled, relief washing over him as his shoulders sank and it looked as if a great weight had been lifted off of him.

"You got taller, Rabbit. And dapper too!" You said to him, and he couldn't help but blush.

"I still have the old books. I'm afraid they're not in as good a condition as they were when you first lent them to me." He said and for a moment the two of you simply looked to one another, a silent thanks exchanged between the two of you, for still trying to find one another after all this time.

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-Rabbit received quite a shock at seeing you had a kid with you, and had initially assumed you'd started a family in his absence, he tried to hide it but when you told him you were just babysitting for a neighbor there was clear relief written on his face.

-Despite the initial surprise, Rabbit is actually pretty good with kids, even if a lot of the things they talk about confuse him and make no sense. (Poor Rabbit is out of touch but you've been able to explain things to him. Even if a fair bit of it is just as strange to you as it is to him.)

-Rabbit is relieved to know that your parents actually moved out and left you the house, it means he can really visit as much as he likes and get to stay the night when he needs a break from Makai and spend more time with you.

-Rabbit reveals to you that he's actually been visiting Earth for some time now, but had no idea where exactly your home was located so he couldn't come back until the portal which led to your home was made secure again.

-Since you and Rabbit began meeting again, it has taken some work to keep the neighbor's kid from snitching that there's a real bunnyman walking around, but thankfully most don't actually believe him when he says it. Still, the kid keeps trying to bring his friends to see 'The Bunnyman', and both you and Rabbit have had to try and obscure the portal to Makai, as well as allow them to see glimpses of Rabbit going in a different direction to lead them away from it and think he lives in a burrow elsewhere.

You've had to run interference sometimes and the neighbors now think you have a boyfriend into some weird kinky roleplays who accidentally showed up at the wrong time. Honestly for as awkward as it makes things at least it's better than anyone thinking there's a real demon Rabbit walking around.

-Rabbit dislikes that it's turning him into a local legend (it has forced him to alter plans to use this portal as a way to hide Makaians on Earth in your region) and mostly because he allowed his own feelings to get the better of him. He knew he should have waited till night to see if you still lived in your own home. But he just needed to see you so badly, he needed to see if you were still there, and soothe his aching heart.

-Rabbit explained to you why he was unable to return to Earth. The other end of the portal went to his home of Makai, and in it the exact region where the rift between worlds was located, had been taken under the sway of a local demon lord, making it too dangerous to actually return. Rabbit's people had to flee lest they be captured, enslaved, or even killed.

But in truth, he also feared leading other demons to your home and getting you hurt again... So, rabbit tried to hide that portal until he was sure he'd secured that territory and the local portals so no unwanted guests would make use of it.

-Rabbit did try to find the way through, but it just wasn't safe for him yet, and he had to follow his people's caravan, while slowly planning how to return to Earth, and how to help his people escape the harshness of Makai.

-Rabbit is honest with you that in the years since you first met he did have other lovers, they didn't pan out for one reason or another, but when the time comes he wants to go slow with you and make it work as much as possible.

-Rabbit's first encounter with your parents had taught him a valuable lesson, that humans feared what they didn't understand. Other encounters with humans (and DarkCom) taught him that they would hate and attack that which was different. But you and the neighborhood kids who think he's the Easter Bunny have shown him that not every human is inherently a threat.

Some, can even be amazing and loving beyond anything he could have imagined.

-Rabbit and you have both had to go through a transition period and re-learning how to interact with one another. You both still remembered the other person as they were when you were young. You've both changed a lot since then. You have matured, and while you're not the same as you once were, the core of who you are, that little spark, is still there and it still pulls the two of you in like the gravity of a star.

-You and Rabbit both had to go through a phase of comparing memories and seeing how your tastes have changed. His palate no longer enjoys those old sandwiches you shared with him long ago, and he's set out to try and find a kind of tea you can enjoy with him.

-When its dark and no one is around, Rabbit likes to go on walks with you through the woods, and more than once you've both started playing the old games you used to when you were younger, hide and seek, tag, and more.

-By the end of your long walks, you always end up smiling, panting, and sitting just a little closer next to each other.

-Halloween very quickly becomes Rabbit's favorite time of year. He can walk out in the open without anyone thinking him weird or monstrous. He never got the chance to go trick or treating with you when you were little, but now gets to experience it by proxy when going with you and being a chaperone for the local kids you take care of.

The kids always insist that he's the real Easter Bunny, and Rabbit looks for other rabbits to compare himself to (From the March Hare to Bugs Bunny), and everyone just laughs it off.

Even if your neighbors only further think that you and your 'boyfriend' are kind of freaks for the weird games you two seem to play. (Though Martha from down the street a few houses down seems into it and makes Rabbit uncomfortable by trying to press him for information about what he and you get up to and why he wears a Rabbit mask, and what other kinds of masks he wears).

-Your parents have even begun hearing about your new boyfriend and started to press you to tell them more about him, and one surprise visit led to Rabbit having to jump out of an open window and make a mad dash to the woods so your parents wouldn't catch him and you in a compromising position. Maybe one day you'll tell them the truth, but not yet.

-Much as Rabbit would love to stay with you every second of every day, he has a duty to his people and he always has to return to them and help them. But he never fails to promise you that he will return, and by now you know he means it when he says it.

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Couple's Music.

"We'll be fine." Epic The Musical.

"A thousand years" Sting.

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sheslikealionimagines · 1 month ago

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Sharp Tongues and Soft Landings

Pairings: Chu x Fem!OC

Rating: T (language)

Words: 9.7k

Genre: Slice of life, romanctic comedy

Status: Complete (one shot)

Summary: Misao can survive demon ambushes, rooftop brawls, and diplomatic disasters—but wearing a yukata and catching feelings for Chu might actually kill her. He’s loud, drunk half the time, and says the exact wrong thing just when it matters most… which unfortunately only makes her fall harder. Between taiko contests, public humiliation, and a love confession that almost gets derailed by garlic chicken, they stumble into romance the only way they know how—kicking, screaming, and accidentally holding hands.

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The mountain air was sharp and fresh, cutting through the last wisps of fog like a blade. Outside Genkai’s temple, the clearing buzzed with movement and anticipation—sunlight glinting off sweat-slicked skin, fists cracking against palms, feet thudding against packed dirt. Overhead, the trees whispered of summer, and the scent of festival food drifted faintly up from the village below.

Tonight was the Firefly Festival.

The full roster was out—nearly everyone training, or pretending to.

Kurama and Touya moved in a mirrored kata near the edge of the grounds, their motion fluid and silent, like clockwork set to poetry. Kuwabara and Rinku were locked in an uneven battle that had somehow turned into a full-on wrestling match, mostly involving Kuwabara shouting insults while Rinku clung to his back like n angry barnacle.

Jin darted overhead in looping, gleeful arcs, riding the breeze. “You're all movin’ like snails! Come on, where’s the fire? There’s food tonight, and I plan on earnin’ every bite!”

He whooshed low enough to tousle Kuwabara’s hair, narrowly avoiding a flailing fist and a shouted curse.

Yusuke leaned against the temple’s outer wall with Hiei perched silently above him on the rafters, arms crossed, red eyes narrowed in that vague expression of disdain he wore like armor. Yusuke had a rice ball in one hand, and amusement in the other.

At the center of the chaos, Chu and Misao were sparring.

It was loud. It was fast. And it was good.

“You call that a kick?” Chu barked, catching her leg with his forearm. “I’ve seen firecrackers hit harder.”

“Maybe you should go spar a firecracker,” Misao snapped, twisting and ducking low beneath his follow-up swing.

Their rhythm had a pulse—familiar and ferocious. Misao’s strikes were tight, disciplined, honed from years of street-fighting turned structured. Chu’s counters were raw and brawler-born, guided more by instinct than form. Together, they moved like magnets—pull, clash, recoil, repeat.

She hadn’t always moved like this. When Yusuke and Chu first found her—bloodied, cornered, and stubbornly defiant in Makai—she hadn’t had form or control, just raw fury and cracked knuckles. No one had claimed her, and she hadn’t asked for saving. But Yusuke saw something in her fire. Chu saw something familiar in her fists. Genkai, eventually, saw potential. And somehow, without quite realizing how, Misao became one of them.

Now, she moved like she belonged.

Watching from the porch, Genkai sipped her tea.

“Finally stopped holding back,” she muttered.

Shishiwakamaru, seated nearby with a towel around his neck, glanced up. “They’re getting sharper. I almost want to bet on who eats dirt first.”

Suzuki didn’t even look up from his compact mirror. “My money’s on Chu. Misao’s had a mean left hook since spring.”

On cue, Misao surged forward, ducked low, and swept Chu’s legs out from under him.

He hit the ground with a thud—not hard, not clumsy, just enough to flatten him.

She stayed crouched beside him, one hand planted in the dirt, catching her breath.

Chu looked up at her and grinned. “Cheap shot.”

She grinned back. “Clean shot.”

He held up a hand, and she grabbed it to pull him up. No drama. No stumble. Just muscle memory and mutual respect.

“Still countin’ it as a fluke,” he muttered, brushing off his pants.

“You always do.”

From the edge of the field, Yusuke nodded. “Sharp work. Both of you.”

Kuwabara, still dragging Rinku behind him, hollered, “Let’s go, tag me in! I wanna try!”

Rinku immediately shouted, “No!”

Genkai didn’t blink. “If anyone gets blood on the temple steps again, I’m throwing everyone off the mountain.”

Jin landed beside the sparring ring with a laugh. “Lookin’ good, you two! But if I don’t get to punch someone soon, I’m gonna explode into confetti.”

Chu rolled his shoulders. “I’m sure Kuwabara’s free in ten seconds.”

“Make it five,” Rinku said, already scrambling away.

Before another match could start, Botan’s voice rang out from above, bright and undeniably determined: “There you are!”

She floated down, parasol twirling, with Keiko and Yukina flanking her like a cheerful honor guard.

“We have hairpins to test, eyeliner to argue about, and exactly one girl to drag through it all,” Keiko said.

“And a yukata to try on,” Yukina added sweetly.

“I agreed to none of this,” Misao said, already backing up.

Botan hooked her arm through hers. “You didn’t have to. Girl code. You’re coming.”

Chu gave her a look of mock sympathy. “Good luck.”

Misao rolled her eyes but didn’t fight it. Much.

“I swear, if any of you try blush again—“

“No promises!” Botan sang.

Jin leaned toward Chu as the girls disappeared into the temple. “She’s tougher than half of us, and they’re gonna take her down with lipstick.”

“Tragic,” Chu said, shaking his head. “I hope she survives.”

Yusuke clapped both of them on the shoulder. “C’mon, if she doesn’t, we’ll avenge her with fireworks and bad decisions.”

Suzuki sighed theatrically. “I do love a good transformation arc. Let’s just hope it doesn’t involve glitter.”

Genkai stood and dusted off her hands. “If you’re all done wasting air, someone sweep the damn yard.”

No one moved.

She sighed. “Didn’t think so.”

The breeze rolled down from the peaks, warmer now, tinged with the promise of lanterns, fireflies, and the strange kind of quiet that only comes before the start of something bigger.

And tonight, it would all begin.

“No. Absolutely not.”

Misao’s tone was sharp and immovable, the kind that should have ended the conversation right then. But Botan, ever persistent, barely blinked at the declaration.

“What? Why not?!” the ferry girl gasped, as if Misao had just suggested canceling the festival altogether.

With a frown tugging at her lips, Misao folded her arms tightly across her chest. Her short auburn hair, choppy and windswept from years of fights and long journeys, fell across her brow like a warning. “I’ve never worn traditional clothing. Not in the Human World. Not in the Demon World. So why in all the hells would I start now?”

Botan looked utterly scandalized. She stood in a lavender yukata scattered with soft pink sakura blossoms, her hair swept into an elegant bun, accented by shimmering jade pins. Keiko, beside her, wore a pale green ensemble adorned with delicate silver butterflies. Her cheeks were lightly dusted with blush, her eyes framed in warm, neutral tones. The two of them looked like they had stepped out of a seasonal postcard.

Yukina sat quietly nearby, her posture as poised as a porcelain doll’s. Her pink kimono caught the sunlight like rose quartz, and the silver ornaments in her hair twinkled as she moved. She said nothing at first, only watched.

Keiko huffed, balling a fist in front of her chest. “Because it’s a festival! Everyone wears yukata—it’s tradition.”

“Yes, quite right!” Botan chirped, stepping forward to thrust a folded navy garment into Misao’s arms. “At least try it on. You might be surprised. It could look stunning on you.”

Misao didn’t even glance down. Her brown eyes—dark, steady, and difficult to read—stayed fixed on Botan’s face. “No.”

Botan threw her arms in the air, clearly exasperated. “If you’re not going to wear this, then what are you planning to show up in?”

Misao’s gaze dropped to her current outfit—her usual gray tunic and slim black pants, tailored to move easily, fight easily, survive easily. Her tanned skin bore faint scars just visible along her forearms, reminders of skirmishes won and near-misses she didn’t care to relive. Function had always trumped fashion in her world. Long ago, she’d learned that anything too delicate wouldn’t last, and neither would the people who wore it.

Keiko stared at her outfit as if it had personally offended her. “You can’t be serious! You were actually going to wear that? Misao, everyone is going to be there tonight.”

Her jaw tightened. “And? They all know what I look like.”

Botan leaned in close to Keiko and whispered—far too loudly to actually be discreet. “No wonder he hasn’t made a move. She’s completely clueless!”

The comment shot up a warning in Misao’s chest like a flare. Her brown eyes narrowed at the pair, prepared to fire back, but a soft voice from the corner of the room gently derailed the moment.

“I made this yukata with you in mind.”

Yukina’s words were quiet, but they landed heavily. Misao turned, blinking once, then again. Her gaze softened, the tension in her shoulders faltering. Yukina was looking at her with an expression that held no judgment, only quiet hope. The faintest smile curved her lips.

“I put a lot of thought into it,” the ice maiden continued. “But if you don’t want to wear it, I’ll understand. Festivals are supposed to be fun, not uncomfortable.”

Misao hesitated.

Of all people, it was Yukina who had first extended a hand to her. The one who had healed her wounds after Chu and Yusuke dragged her half-dead from a blood-soaked battlefield. The first person who had seen her not as a threat, or a weapon—but simply as someone who needed a place to heal. That bond had never faded.

“You made it?” Misao asked, her voice lower now.

Yukina nodded. “Yes. I think it would suit you.”

Misao exhaled, her shoulders sagging with a quiet surrender. Her scowl lingered, but the edge had dulled.

“If I wear it… will it make you happy?”

Yukina smiled gently. “Yes.”

A long pause. Then, with a sigh that sounded like defeat, Misao looked away. A strand of auburn hair fell across her cheek as she nodded. “Fine.”

Botan let out a delighted squeal. Keiko clapped her hands like she’d just won a bet. Yukina gave a grateful smile, laying a small hand on Misao’s arm. She didn’t say another word, but she didn’t have to.

Suddenly, Botan clapped her hands together with purpose. “No time to waste! We leave in an hour!”

Misao barely had time to process that before she was being dragged by the wrist toward the vanity at the edge of the room. She stumbled into the cushioned stool with a look of confusion.

Botan was already gathering makeup palettes and lip glosses like a woman on a mission.

“Wait, hold on—what are you doing?” Misao asked warily.

“Hair and makeup, of course!” Botan replied cheerfully, snatching up a blush brush. “We can’t mess up the yukata. That means we do the glam first!”

“I didn’t agree to that,” Misao deadpanned.

Keiko leaned over her shoulder, hands planted firmly on either side. “You can’t wear a yukata without the full treatment. You’ll throw the whole look off.”

“I’m already going to look wrong regardless,” Misao muttered under her breath, eyes flicking briefly to her reflection—tanned skin, short hair too unruly for pins, brown eyes that always looked a little too tired.

“Oh, hush.” Botan beamed, dabbing blush on her cheeks before she could flinch. “Getting dressed up is part of the fun! You never know who you might catch the eye of tonight.”

Misao jerked slightly, narrowly dodging the powder brush. “I’m not trying to catch anyone’s anything.”

But even as the words left her mouth, a certain face floated into her mind—rugged, sharp-eyed, with a grin that could set a fuse. Chu. The only one who made her feel unmoored and steady at the same time. And damn him, he probably knew it, too.

Yukina giggled behind her. “It sounds like she might already have someone in mind.”

Keiko’s eyebrow arched. “Do we know him?”

Misao shook her head and scowled into the vanity mirror. “I have no idea what you’re talking about.”

The girls exchanged a knowing laugh behind her.

She clenched her jaw, eyes fixed forward. Let them laugh. It wasn’t like she could hide it forever—Chu had long since taken up too much space in her chest. And for better or worse, she’d given up pretending otherwise.

Botan sighed dramatically, her hands on her hips. “Are you going to fight us on everything tonight? Honestly, Misao, you’re being childish.”

Misao grumbled but said nothing. She had already pushed Botan to the brink of war. And at this point… what was the harm in a little makeup?

She exhaled, jaw tight. “Fine. Do what you want.”

Like a storm dissipating in an instant, Botan beamed with renewed vigor and twirled the brush once more.

“That’s better! This shade brings out your cheeks perfectly. You already look more alive!”

“Oh, goody,” Misao mumbled, rolling her eyes.

Behind her, Keiko and Yukina giggled while Botan resumed her work with far too much enthusiasm.

Over an hour later, Misao found herself being practically herded out of Genkai’s shrine by the three girls, feet stumbling in unfamiliar wooden sandals, the navy-blue and gold yukata tight around her legs. She hated how restricted it felt, how unnatural the swish of fabric was when she moved.

“I feel ridiculous,” she muttered through gritted teeth as she nearly tripped down the last step.

Botan looked over her shoulder. “Oh, stop whining. You don’t look ridiculous.”

Yukina smiled gently. “It’s just the shoes. They’re tricky at first.”

“Tricky? They’re designed by sadists,” Misao grumbled, scowling at her feet.

Just then, Keiko’s phone buzzed. She glanced at the screen and gasped. “We’re late! Everyone’s waiting for us!”

Botan looked at her watch and yelped. “Golly, is it that time already?! Move, ladies!”

They broke into a brisk pace toward the glow of festival lights ahead.

Colorful paper lanterns lit the path like stars scattered through the trees. The scent of grilled meat and candied fruit filled the air, mixing with the distant hum of music and laughter. Misao’s stomach growled.

For a moment, she forgot the pinch of her sandals. The night shimmered with the kind of magic that didn’t need spells to exist.

“Come on, slowpokes!” Yusuke’s voice rang out ahead. “We’re gonna miss everything!”

Keiko waved as they approached the group. “Calm down! We’re here!”

Yusuke folded his arms, squinting. “I’ll never understand why it takes so long for women to get ready—”

“Yukina, my love!” Kuwabara’s voice interrupted, bounding over like a loyal golden retriever.

“You look radiant tonight,” he gushed, capturing her hands.

Yukina smiled. “Thank you, Kazuma. You look very handsome too.”

Keiko jabbed a finger toward them, glaring at Yusuke. “See? That’s how you greet your girlfriend.”

Yusuke opened his mouth to respond—but was promptly smacked upside the head by Botan’s fan.

And just like that, Misao smiled despite herself.

She might’ve felt like a misfit in silk, but damn it if this wasn’t her strange, chaotic family.

Yusuke rubbed the fresh welt forming on his head, shooting a wounded glare at Botan. “What the hell, Botan?!”

“You earned that one,” she sniffed, fan snapping shut with a satisfied flick.

Misao watched the exchange from a short distance, her arms crossed tightly over her midsection, her body language a fortress. The familiar back-and-forth—their bickering, their easy laughter, the sharp edge dulled by affection—was so quintessentially them. This was how every gathering began. Noise, teasing, barely-veiled chaos. It was infuriating, comforting. Safe.

She’d never say it aloud, but it was one of the few places in either world where she felt… tethered. Not just tolerated, but wanted.

“Hello, Misao.”

The voice beside her was soft and warm, like the breeze that rustled the lanterns above them. She turned to see Kurama standing at her side, ever composed in a deep green kimono threaded with patterns of creeping vines and flowering branches. His hands were tucked into his sleeves, posture relaxed, a faint smile curving his lips.

“Kurama,” she said with a small nod. “Evening.”

And then her eyes flicked to the figure at his shoulder—the glower, the crimson eyes, the arms folded in quiet contempt.

“Hiei,” she added, voice amused. “I see the crowd hasn’t mellowed you.”

Hiei responded with a grunt. His fingers twitched against the black-and-white striped fabric of his yukata, his gaze fixed on Kuwabara and Yukina with lethal focus. He was seething in silence, and Misao didn’t need mind-reading powers to know he was two seconds from immolating the loud mouthed man if he said one more flowery thing to his sister.

It made her grin despite herself. The demon’s protective streak hadn’t changed a bit.

Kurama’s eyes followed hers, and a shared understanding passed between them like a current.

“You’ve been unusually quiet tonight,” Kurama remarked gently, glancing sidelong at her.

Misao gave a dry laugh. “Trying to stay invisible. Not exactly easy in this… thing.” She plucked at the edge of her yukata like it was made of thorns. “It feels like a costume. Like I’m pretending to be someone I’m not.”

Kurama tilted his head. “You wear it well.”

She looked away, uncomfortable under his sincerity. “You’re just being polite.”

“Not at all,” he said smoothly. Then, without missing a beat, he turned to Hiei. “Wouldn’t you agree?”

Hiei’s gaze flicked to her—brief, cutting, assessing. Then he looked away again, expression unreadable. “She looks… like the rest of you.”

Which, coming from Hiei, was practically a poetic outburst.

A flush crept into her cheeks. She smirked faintly and looked down, muttering, “Thanks, I think.”

Kurama’s eyes glittered, but he let the moment pass. She was grateful for that.

Her gaze drifted back to the group, scanning the crowd. Something tugged at her, something she didn’t want to name. “Where’s everyone else? I thought we were the ones running late.”

Kurama clasped his hands behind his back. “Rinku was getting restless. Chu volunteered to take him to the goldfish booths before they closed. The others wandered off to look at trinkets.”

“Ah.” She kept her tone neutral, though her stomach gave a small, traitorous flutter at Chu’s name.

Before the thought could linger, Yusuke’s voice barked from the front of the group. “Hiei, Kurama, enough flirting—let’s get—”

He froze mid-sentence. His eyes locked on her, blinking as if he couldn’t quite process what he was seeing.

“Misao?”

Her scowl was automatic. “Who else would it be, dumbass?”

“Oh my god,” he muttered, stepping closer. “It is you. I didn’t even recognize you under all that… whatever that is.”

He reached out and bunched the sleeve of her yukata like a child inspecting an unfamiliar animal.

She slapped his hand away. “Hands off, detective.”

Yusuke blinked, still stunned.

She rolled her shoulders back, adjusted the strap of her concealed kodachi under the neckline of her yukata, and smirked up at him. “I might be in a dress, but I can still bury you six feet under if you touch me again.”

Yusuke burst out laughing, slapping Kuwabara on the back as he joined the girls. “She’s still got it.”

Kuwabara’s jaw dropped when he laid eyes on her. “Whoa! Misao?! You actually look like—like a girl!”

Botan smacked his shoulder with a scowl. “She is a girl, you oaf! You boys have the emotional range of a teaspoon!”

Misao clenched her fists at her sides, shoulders rigid. The compliments—even the clumsy, backhanded ones—left her raw. Too exposed. This wasn’t her element. She preferred shadows, sparring matches, snarky barbs shared across campfires. Not the kind of attention that made her feel like she was wearing someone else’s skin.

“Shouldn’t we head in?” she said abruptly, voice clipped. “We’ll miss the whole festival standing here.”

Yusuke, oblivious as ever, waved a hand. “Yeah, yeah. Come on. The others are probably halfway drunk already.”

They started walking, the chatter and laughter folding around her like a blanket that didn’t quite fit. Misao trailed slightly behind, her pace slowed by the unfamiliar swish of silk and the cursed wooden sandals biting into the soles of her feet.

But slowly… the sounds of the festival began to pull her in.

Music drifted from a nearby shamisen player, blending with the clatter of booths and the laughter of children. Strings of paper lanterns bobbed overhead, casting a warm amber glow across rows of colorful stalls. The air was thick with the scent of fried dough, grilled skewers, and the syrupy chill of shaved ice. It was alive. Messy. Human.

Her stomach growled.

She veered toward a food stand on instinct. The stall was loud and crowded, the vendor’s booming Kansai dialect carrying over the din. His laughter stopped short when he caught sight of her.

“Well now, what’ve we got here?” he grinned. “A pretty young lady with good taste. What can I getcha?”

She smiled. “One Asahi draft, and an order of garlic chicken,.”

“Comin’ right up!”

A blur of purple interrupted her peripheral vision.

“Hold that order, sir!” Botan rushed up beside her, hand raised dramatically.

The vendor blinked, confused. “Uh… okay?”

Misao turned, scowl forming. “What the hell, Botan? I’m starving.”

“You ordered garlic chicken and beer,” Botan hissed, folding her arms. “Do you want to smell like a brewery with halitosis? We’re at a festival, not some seedy bar!”

Misao looked completely unbothered. “So? I care about taste, not social consequences.”

Botan gave her a flat stare. “But what about Chu?”

The name hit harder than it should have.

Misao stiffened, eyes widening slightly. “…Excuse me?”

Botan grinned, far too innocently. “I’m just saying. He might not be so impressed if your breath could peel paint.”

Misao opened her mouth, closed it again, then glared. “I didn’t realize I was auditioning for courtship tonight.”

“Right. And I suppose the reason you asked about his whereabouts not two minutes ago was purely out of logistics, hm?” Botan teased, hands on her hips. “Just eat something that doesn’t reek of dragon breath, will you?”

Misao grit her teeth but waved the vendor off. “Fine. Cancel the garlic chicken. But I’m keeping the beer.”

The vendor chuckled, pouring the draft with a sympathetic look. “A smart man wouldn’t argue with a lady drinkin’ beer.”

She accepted the glass with a muttered thanks, shooting a side-glare at Botan, who only beamed in smug triumph.

The crowd shifted like a tide around her—bright yukatas swirling past, children darting between legs with candy apples in hand, vendors calling out in rhythmic chants. Misao took a long sip of her beer, the cool bitterness grounding her as Botan hummed beside her, far too satisfied with her matchmaking meddling.

She was just about to tell her to shove it when she felt the shift.

A flicker in the corner of her vision—familiar voices rising behind the bubble of noise. Laughter, loud and raucous, like thunder cracking over a calm sky.

“Oi, Rinku, I told ya, you scoop ‘em fast, then stare at ‘em. Ya can’t do both!”

“You said I had good instincts!”

“Yeah, but instincts don’t help when ya freeze up like a fish yourself!”

Misao turned slowly, her stomach coiling with a knot she refused to name.

And there he was.

Chu stood tall above the crowd, goldfish bag slung lazily over one shoulder, the other arm resting behind his head as he laughed, grinning ear to ear. His hair was slightly damp from sweat, tied back messily at the nape of his neck. A few strands had fallen loose across his temple. The blue and white of his festival yukata was half-untied already—his chest exposed more than it was covered, of course—but it suited him in that untamed, effortless way everything seemed to.

Rinku bounced beside him, a massive grin plastered across his face as he proudly held up his second fish in a small plastic bag. His sleeves flared as he jumped in place, laughing at something Chu muttered under his breath.

And then—

Chu’s eyes found her.

It was subtle at first. A glance toward the group, the usual habit of checking who had arrived. But when his gaze landed on her, it stalled. His body paused mid-step, his mouth still open as if mid-joke—and then nothing.

His expression shifted, slowly but unmistakably.

The grin faded. His brows lifted a fraction. His eyes narrowed—focused, uncertain—like he was trying to reconcile something familiar with something unexpected. It was the look of a man realizing the ground beneath him wasn’t quite what he thought it was.

Misao stood still, half-turned toward him, beer glass raised near her chest. The soft lantern light caught the navy silk of her yukata, making the gold embroidery along the sleeves glint faintly. Her short auburn hair, smoothed back with more effort than she’d ever admit, still managed to fall slightly askew, a few stubborn strands brushing her brow. Her tanned skin was warmed by the glow, her brown eyes steady and unreadable as she met his stare. Her lips—painted a muted rose she hadn’t chosen—parted slightly, but she said nothing.

He blinked. Once.

And then the corner of his mouth twitched—just a little.

Not his usual wide grin. Not his wolfish, cocky smirk. This was something softer. Something bewildered.

Rinku tugged at his arm. “Chu? You good?”

Chu didn’t answer right away.

He stepped forward, slow and deliberate, like approaching something dangerous—or sacred. His gaze never left her.

“Well, I’ll be damned,” he muttered, finally close enough to hear. “You look…”

He trailed off, voice thick with something she couldn’t quite name. Awe? Confusion? Hunger?

Misao raised an eyebrow, heart pounding despite her best efforts. “If you say ‘different,’ I swear I’ll throw this drink in your face.”

He snorted, the spell breaking just a little, though his eyes still hadn’t moved.

“I was gonna say bloody stunning,” he admitted, scratching the back of his head. “But, y’know. That works too.”

Her cheeks burned. She told herself it was from the beer.

Botan made a delighted noise beside her and Rinku, clueless but excited, threw both hands in the air. “Right?! I told him she’d show up looking like a badass samurai princess or something.”

Misao gave the boy a dry look. “You said that?”

“Well… no. But I was thinking it.”

Chu chuckled, and it was quieter this time. Almost reverent. His voice dropped low as he said, “Didn’t know you could clean up like this.”

She took another sip of her beer to hide the way her throat had gone dry. “Neither did I.”

There was a beat of silence between them. Long enough to feel heavy. Her fingers tightened around the cool glass, unsure what to do with the way he was looking at her now. Not like a sparring partner. Not like a drinking buddy. But like he’d just stumbled into something he wasn’t ready for.

Then, with a crooked grin, he leaned in slightly.

“You do this for me, Misao?”

The question was casual, playful. But there was something in it—something earnest. Something vulnerable.

Her heart thudded against her ribs.

“I did it because Botan blackmailed me with social humiliation,” she said flatly.

But he didn’t flinch. His grin widened just enough to show a hint of tooth.

“Still,” he murmured. “Reckon I’ve never seen anything better.”

She turned her head quickly, hiding behind her glass.

The beer tasted bitter now.

But her lips twitched anyway.

Just as the air between you and Chu started to shift—thick with something unspoken and electric—another voice crashed into the moment like a thrown brick.

“There she is! I knew you had it in you!”

You barely had time to turn before Jin swooped in like a gust of wind, his wild hair tousled from the breeze and his grin bright enough to rival the lanterns overhead. His arms spread wide as if to declare you a festival attraction.

“Look at you!” he exclaimed, hands fluttering around you as he circled like a hawk. “All dolled up and radiant! I almost mistook you for a noblewoman—or maybe a dangerous shrine spirit come to tempt unsuspecting warriors.”

He winked dramatically. “If that’s the case, I volunteer to be tempted.”

Misao blinked, deadpan. “You’ve been into the festival sake, haven’t you?”

Jin beamed, completely unfazed. “Only enough to make me charming.”

Before she could respond, another voice floated in, smooth and theatrical.

“Well, well, well. What do we have here?”

Shishiwakamaru strolled into view, arms folded neatly into the sleeves of his rich indigo yukata, the hem embroidered with silver waves that shimmered in the lantern light. His hair was pulled back into a tight knot, and his smirk was already insufferable.

“I had a feeling tonight would reveal… intrigue.” His gaze slid from Misao to Chu and back. “And I was right.”

“Oh gods,” Misao muttered.

“Is it hot in here?” came Suzuki’s voice, sing-song and obnoxiously delighted. He practically glided over in a flare of pink and gold robes, an actual flower tucked behind one ear. “Or is it just the overwhelming romantic tension choking the oxygen out of this entire square?”

“Romantic tension?” Jin gasped, spinning toward Misao with mock shock. “Is there romantic tension?!”

Chu pinched the bridge of his nose. “You lot are worse than a damn gossip circle at a tea house.”

“I prefer to think of us as emotionally enlightened,” Suzuki said proudly, spinning in place. “Besides, it’s obvious. Look at her—” he gestured to Misao, “—a vision of deadly elegance. And him—” now he gestured to Chu, “—looking like a butcher’s apprentice who accidentally wandered into a fairytale and doesn’t know what to do with his feelings.”

“I know exactly what to do with my feelings,” Chu growled. “Punchin’ you is high on the list.”

Touya appeared beside them with his usual quiet timing, folding his arms as he glanced between everyone. “You’re all remarkably loud.”

“You’re one to talk,” Jin snorted. “You tried to win the taiko contest by freezing your drumsticks midair like a snow god.”

“They were perfectly timed percussion strikes,” Touya corrected calmly. Then, to Misao: “You look nice.”

“Thanks,” she said, almost relieved by his normal tone. “You look… efficient.”

That earned the faintest quirk of a smile from him.

Meanwhile, Shishiwakamaru turned to Chu, the smirk never leaving his face. “You know, you could’ve just told her she was beautiful and left it at that. But no. You had to go and look like a stunned ogre at his first moonlight ball.”

Chu grunted, shoving his hands in his pockets. “Didn’t see you makin’ any better moves tonight.”

“Oh, I don’t need to,” Shishiwakamaru said with a flourish. “I have presence.”

Misao took a long sip of her beer. “I regret returning to this group.”

“Too late,” Botan sang. “We’re part of the package now.”

Chu leaned closer to Misao, voice low. “I can throw Jin into the goldfish pond if you give me a signal.”

“You’d have to get past Suzuki first.”

“He’s light. I could lift him.”

“I heard that!” Suzuki called, clearly unbothered.

Misao’s mouth twitched again, betraying a smile she wasn’t trying all that hard to suppress. She looked up at Chu, something in her gaze softer now, easier.

Despite the ridiculousness of it all—the glitter, the taunts, the chaos—it somehow felt right.

Her world had always been sharp edges and silence. But here, surrounded by friends too loud for their own good and a man who saw her clearer than she ever expected, things didn’t feel so dangerous.

Just messy.

And maybe… kind of wonderful.

Still, Misao needed a minute.

She drained the last of her beer and muttered, “I’m getting takoyaki.”

Chu raised a brow. “You runnin’ from compliments again?”

“I’m running from you,” she deadpanned, stepping back into the flow of the crowd.

Behind her, Jin cackled. “Oooooh! Burned like a festival lantern!”

Chu just smirked, eyes following her retreat. “She’s comin’ back.”

Kurama—who’d reappeared with a cup of plum wine and impeccable timing—sipped thoughtfully. “Of course she is.”

She moved quickly—too quickly for someone in unfamiliar shoes—trying not to trip over the hem of her yukata as she made her way toward the takoyaki stand. The laughter still echoed behind her, Chu’s included, rough and low and undeniably warm. It made her chest feel tight. Not in the dangerous way she was used to—not the alert tension of a blade swinging too close—but in the unfamiliar, unsteadying way of being seen.

Not for her strength.

Not for her scars.

But for something she hadn’t meant to show at all.

She cursed under her breath as she stepped out of the crowd’s main flow, pressing a palm to her chest like she could will the fluttering there into stillness.

What the hell was wrong with her?

It was just Chu. Chu, who drank too much and laughed too loud and wrestled like the world was his playground. Chu, who had patched her up with calloused hands after her last near-disaster in the Makai and who had quietly passed her the strongest sake he had when her hands wouldn’t stop shaking after. Chu, who called her “hellcat” when she was mad and “danger kitten” when she wasn’t, and who never—not once—treated her like she was something fragile.

And now he was looking at her like she was something else entirely.

Something beautiful.

That thought alone made her want to claw out of her own skin.

Misao had built her armor slowly, one jagged piece at a time. Years of hard lessons and harder choices had shaped her—taught her how to survive, how to stand alone, how to be unshakeable. And she was good at it. Comfortable in the role. It was easy, compared to this.

Because this—this slow burn under her ribs, this unbearable awareness of his eyes on her, this warmth that crept into her throat and stayed there like a swallowed ember—this was terrifying.

She didn’t know how to be soft. Not in a way that wouldn’t snap.

And gods, she didn’t want to hope. Not for something she couldn’t punch. Not for someone who could see past the blade she always held to the world’s throat.

She reached the food stall and barked out her order a little too sharply, her voice hoarse from the effort of keeping it even.

As the vendor handed her the tray of takoyaki and another draft, her eyes caught a flicker of movement in the reflection of the lacquered counter.

Chu, weaving through the crowd. Heading straight toward her.

Her breath hitched.

She didn’t move.

He stopped a pace or two behind her. Close enough that she could feel his presence like a second heartbeat. His voice, when it came, was low. Careful.

“You alright?”

She hated how much the question hit her. How genuine it sounded.

She gave a noncommittal shrug. “Why wouldn’t I be?”

He didn’t respond right away. Didn’t push. Just let the silence stretch long enough that it felt like an invitation.

Finally, she added—quietly, reluctantly—“I’m not used to… all of this.”

“The crowd?” he asked.

“The attention.”

He was quiet again.

Then—softly, “It’s not just the yukata, y’know.”

She glanced over her shoulder.

His eyes were steady. No trace of teasing this time.

“You’re always like this. Strong. Sharp. Got that spark in ya. But tonight… it’s like I’m seein’ it with fresh eyes.”

She looked away. Her heart beat too fast.

“And I don’t mind admitin’…” he added, scratching the back of his neck, “It’s knockin’ me a bit sideways.”

The words hung between them, fragile as glass.

Misao turned fully then, holding out the tray of takoyaki like a shield.

“Eat. Before you get sentimental and say something even more unbearable.”

Chu grinned—but he took the food.

And when his fingers brushed hers, just briefly, the heat that bloomed in her chest was anything but unbearable.

It was dangerous.

And it was hers.

The tray of takoyaki became an unspoken truce between them—passed back and forth like a peace offering neither of them could quite articulate. They stood close, shoulder to shoulder near the edge of the festival path, the glow of the lanterns casting long shadows across the stones at their feet.

Chu didn’t talk much, which was unusual for him. No boisterous jokes, no crass teasing. Just silence and small bites, like he didn’t trust his mouth not to betray something if he opened it too wide.

Misao pretended not to notice. She took a slow sip of her beer, feeling the cool bitterness run down her throat as she watched a child trip near a game booth and get immediately scooped up by his father. The scene should’ve distracted her.

But she was too aware of Chu beside her. Of the quiet tension building with every second he didn’t look away.

Her heart was a traitor.

“So,” she said after a moment, trying to will some distance into her voice. “How many drinks have you had tonight?”

“Only two.” He licked some sauce from his thumb. “Three, if you count the one I nicked from Jin when he wasn’t lookin’.”

“You usually start the night at a six. This feels dangerously responsible.”

He shot her a sidelong glance, a crooked grin playing at his lips. “Didn’t want to get sloshed before seein’ you.”

Her hand froze around her glass.

He saw it—smirked wider—and she hated how fast her pulse jumped.

“I mean,” he added, tone too casual, “someone’s gotta stay upright in case you trip over that fancy dress.”

“Yukata,” she corrected dryly.

“Right, right. Yukata.” His eyes raked down her frame—quick, almost respectful. Almost. “Suits you.”

She gave him a look, but there was no real fire behind it. “You’re lucky I’m holding a drink.”

He chuckled. “So threatenin’. Always gets me goin’.”

She turned fully toward him, expression flat. “You flirting with me, Chu?”

He blinked, then grinned like she’d dared him to jump off a cliff.

“Would it work if I was?”

Their eyes locked. For the first time all evening, neither of them looked away.

The tension stretched, taut as a bowstring. Her breath hitched. His smile faded into something quieter.

Something real.

But just as Misao opened her mouth, Rinku’s voice cut through the air like a firecracker.

“Hey! There’s a taiko drum competition starting! Winner gets free skewers and a bottle of sake!”

Chu blinked, startled, and turned. “A bottle, ya say?”

“You coming?” Rinku called, already jogging toward the noise. “Or are you too old and slow now?”

“I’ll show you slow, ya little—” Chu turned to chase him, his laugh echoing behind him as he took off.

And just like that, the moment snapped.

The heat between them was gone, scattered like dust in the breeze.

Misao stared after him for a beat, her hands tight around her beer glass.

She could still feel where his eyes had rested.

Still hear the change in his voice.

Still feel the words he hadn’t said—hovering between her ribs like smoke.

She turned away, exhaling slow.

This was getting dangerous.

And she wasn’t sure if she wanted it to stop.

It was later now—later in the kind of way where the edges of the festival had begun to blur. The music had mellowed into softer, nostalgic songs. Fireflies bobbed lazily above the booths. Most of the families had wandered off with sleepy kids on their backs, leaving behind a more raucous crowd—older, louder, and looser-limbed with drink.

Yusuke and Keiko had already wandered off toward the ring toss stalls, their voices rising in a familiar back-and-forth rhythm that teetered between argument and flirtation. Kuwabara, predictably, had glued himself to Yukina’s side, proudly carrying every prize he’d won in increasingly oversized bags as she smiled and thanked him with quiet grace.

Somewhere closer to the festival stage, Shishiwakamaru and Suzuki had posted up near a sake booth—Suzuki basking in the glow of compliments from drunken strangers enchanted by his glittering robes, while Shishiwakamaru held court like a disgraced noble, dramatically critiquing the snack stand presentation and claiming, loudly, that the takoyaki had “no culinary vision.”

Closer to the heart of the festival, Rinku, Kurama, Botan, Jin, and Touya lingered near the central booths—keeping half an eye on Misao while pretending they weren’t. Jin was elbow-deep in a cotton candy disaster, sticky-handed and laughing through it. Botan whispered commentary like a live romance broadcast, practically vibrating with glee. Kurama, ever composed, merely observed with the faintest hint of amusement. Beside him, Touya stood with quiet detachment, arms loosely folded, but his gaze flicked to Misao more often than he let on—cool eyes catching every shift in her posture, every flare of emotion she tried to mask.

As for Hiei—he had disappeared hours ago, likely perched on a rooftop or shadowed treetop somewhere, watching everything and commenting on nothing.

Misao sat at the edge of the low table, posture tight, hands folded in her lap. The din of the festival swirled around them—laughter, music, the clink of dishes—but the air at their table felt thicker. Tighter. Like a storm waiting for a spark.

Chu was across from her, stretched out like a king with a girl under each arm, their painted smiles all wine-slick and hungry for attention. They poured him drinks, giggled at every crooked smirk he gave them, soaking up his slurred charm like it was worth something.

Misao’s eyes flicked over the girls, unimpressed. Her mouth barely moved as she muttered into her cup, “Takes a lot of perfume to cover the stink of desperation.”

She hadn’t meant it to carry. But it did.

The girl on Chu’s left paused mid-laugh. Her lips twitched—just a fraction—and she shot Misao a sharp, sidelong look.

Then, casually, she lifted her hand in an exaggerated wave to a passerby. “Hey!”

The motion knocked her bottle just enough to tip.

A stream of plum wine sloshed across the table and splashed squarely onto Misao’s chest. Cold. Sticky. Immediate.

“Oh,” the girl cooed, all false surprise. “Oops.”

Misao froze. Her gaze dropped to the wine-soaked fabric of her yukata. The dark liquid spread over the navy silk, leeching into the delicate gold embroidery—ruining it.

Chu turned, blinking—then laughed. Loud, unbothered. “Well, hell,” he said, grinning, “guess you needed coolin’ off anyway.”

He tossed back another swig of sake, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. “She’s always been like that, y’know,” he added to the girls. “All sharp tongue and cold shoulders—like someone dared a cactus to walk upright.”

That got them going. Both girls laughed—one of them outright snorted—and Chu leaned into it, smug and oblivious, drunk on their attention.

Misao didn’t move.

The wine dripped from the hem of her sleeve. Her hands stayed curled in her lap, wet now. Her breath came slow and tight, her face unreadable.

But inside, the sting was spreading faster than the stain.

She’d tried. Just this once. She wore the damn yukata. Let Botan talk her into the makeup. Bit her tongue to keep things easy.

And still—still—it ended like this.

With him laughing. With strangers mocking the armor he used to respect. With her sitting there, the joke at her own table.

Slowly, deliberately, she pushed back from the table. The legs scraped against the wood, too loud.

No one stopped her.

She stood. Looked at Chu once.

He was still laughing.

She turned and walked—through the press of bodies, past the lanterns, past the smells of festival food turned sour in her nose.

Behind her, Botan’s voice called gently, “Misao?”

“Leave it,” she said, without turning back. “Let him keep showing off. No use giving him an audience.”

And then she disappeared into the dark edge of the festival, where the laughter couldn’t reach her.

Where maybe, for once, she could stop pretending it didn’t matter.

But it did.

Because for a breath—a single, stupid breath—she’d thought he saw her.

Damn him.

Back at the festival, Chu was still laughing—until he looked around and noticed something was off.

Rinku had stopped laughing. Jin was frowning. Even Botan, who never looked outright angry, had a tightness around her eyes as she glared at him from across the food stand. Touya stood just behind them, expression unreadable, but the temperature around him had dropped perceptibly. He said nothing—but the stillness in his posture was sharp as ice, and twice as cold.

“What?” Chu asked, blinking. “What’d I say?”

No one answered.

Until Kurama stepped forward, voice cool and pointed.

“You said too much.”

Chu’s stomach dropped.

He turned in the direction Misao had been, but she was gone.

And for the first time that night, the heat of the sake in his veins turned cold.

The laughter had long since died out.

The weight of silence hit harder than the alcohol now, creeping cold along Chu’s spine as he stood frozen amid the echo of his own voice. The girls who’d been hanging off his arms had drifted away once they sensed the mood shift, leaving only a faint trace of perfume and awkward distance behind.

Kurama’s gaze lingered on him—disappointed, unblinking.

“Where is she?” Chu asked, throat dry.

Botan crossed her arms, fanning herself more from agitation than heat. “Left. Fast. Which you might’ve noticed if your head hadn’t been stuck between your ego and a sake cup.”

“I didn’t mean it like that,” Chu muttered, but it sounded weak even to his own ears.

“No,” Botan said, sharp, “you never do.”

That hit harder than expected.

Chu ran a hand through his hair, suddenly feeling the sweat stick at his neck and chest. The booze that had carried him through the evening now settled like lead in his gut.

He turned on his heel without another word and started moving—fast. He knew Misao well enough to guess where she’d go. Somewhere quiet. Somewhere she could punch a wall or seethe alone without having to explain herself.

Because that’s what she’d do.

Because that’s who she was.

And he’d just made her feel small in front of strangers.

He found her near the edge of the woods behind the festival stalls, sitting on the old shrine steps that overlooked the lake. The lantern light didn’t reach this far—just a distant flicker at her back, as if the night itself had swallowed her whole. The reflection of the moon shimmered in the water below like a lie—calm, detached, untouchable.

She didn’t look up when he approached.

“Misao.”

Stillness. Her shoulders didn’t move. Her hands rested in her lap, fingers curled tight.

“I was a bloody idiot.”

A slow exhale. Not a sigh. Sharper. Controlled. “Yeah,” she said, not looking at him. “You were.”

He took a hesitant step forward, the gravel crunching under his heel. “I didn’t mean for it to go like that.”

Her head turned—just slightly.

“You didn’t mean to humiliate me?” Her voice wasn’t loud, but it was blade-sharp. “Didn’t mean to laugh while they spilled wine down my front like it was some game?”

He flinched. “I—I didn’t know she was gonna do that.”

Misao stood slowly.

Then turned to face him.

The damp silk of her yukata clung to her in places, stained dark where the plum wine had soaked in. A few strands of her short hair had come loose in the heat of the night, clinging damply to her cheek. She didn’t brush them away. Her lips—still painted—were pressed into a flat line.

“You didn’t stop her either,” she said. “You didn’t say a godsdamn thing when it happened. Just laughed. You joined in.”

Chu opened his mouth. Closed it. Looked at the ground like it might give him a better answer.

“I didn’t know what to do,” he muttered. “You sat down looking like that, and I—I didn’t know how to act normal. You were… beautiful. And quiet. And close. And I panicked.”

“So you made me the joke.”

“I wasn’t thinking. I just—was showin’ off. Actin’ like a jackass.” He scrubbed a hand down his face. “I was tryin’ to play it cool. Like nothin’ had changed.”

“Well, it did,” she snapped. “Because I sat there—at that table—with you. Next to you. And you let them laugh. Let them spill their drinks on me like I was just… some sideshow.”

Her voice shook now, but it wasn’t weakness. It was fury barely contained.

“I didn’t want to wear this,” she said, fingers bunching the damp fabric at her sides. “I only did because Yukina asked. Because everyone else wanted to include me, and I thought—just this once—I’d try.”

She blinked hard. Swallowed.

“I thought maybe you’d see me.”

The words cracked something open in him. Deeper than guilt. More like shame.

“I do see you, Misao.”

Her eyes met his—raw and unsparing.

“No. You saw what you wanted to. Something to mock. Something easy.”

“Not easy,” he said, shaking his head. “Never easy. You scare the shit outta me most days.”

That almost got a laugh. Almost.

She looked away, jaw tight. “I don’t care that you’re rough. Or loud. Or drunk. I care that when it mattered… you made me feel small.”

His throat closed around the apology. Useless now.

“I don’t know how to fix that,” he said quietly.

“Maybe you don’t,” she replied, voice dull. “Maybe you just sit with it.”

He stepped closer.

“I’ll sit. As long as it takes.”

She stared at him for a long moment—searching for a lie, maybe.

Then, finally, she turned back toward the lake and sank down onto the step beside him. Not close. But not far.

“…Good,” she said.

The silence that followed didn’t hurt the way it had before.

Not as much.

Not quite.

The Next Day

The morning mist hadn’t burned off yet.

It clung low across the stone courtyard outside Genkai’s temple, softening the hard edges of the world in a pale, silvery veil. Birds stirred somewhere in the trees. A breeze rolled down the mountain like a breath held too long.

Misao moved through her forms, precise and silent, each motion cutting through the air with quiet purpose. Her short hair stuck slightly to her brow with sweat, but she didn’t stop. The early light caught the sharp angles of her stance, the deliberate way she exhaled through each strike.

She hadn’t slept much. Not after the festival. Not after that scene.

When the sound of footsteps crunched lightly on gravel, she didn’t turn. Just finished her last movement, grounded her stance, and let her arms fall to her sides.

“Figured you’d be out here,” came Chu’s voice—hoarse from the night, quieter than usual.

Still, she didn’t look at him. Not yet.

He came closer, hands shoved in his pockets, the way he always did when he didn’t know what to do with them. He lingered a few paces off, respectful now in a way that was new.

“I been thinkin’ about what you said,” he started.

She didn’t stop him.

Chu rubbed the back of his neck, glancing toward the ground like it might give him the words. “I said those things at the festival ’cause I didn’t know how to say the right ones. Didn’t wanna look soft. Like I was wrapped around someone who could gut me with a look.”

That earned him a glance. Just a flicker.

“I’ve been gone for you for ages,” he said, more quietly now. “Way before the yukata. Way before the firework show went to hell.”

She turned toward him fully, arms crossed. Guarded. Listening.

Chu exhaled, his voice rough with something unsaid. “You walk like you don’t owe the world a damn thing. You fight like you’ve earned every inch of your peace. And when you talk, even when you’re bein’ mean, it’s always honest.”

He hesitated, then looked up. “I admire the hell outta you, Misao. Always have. But somewhere along the way, that admiration turned into somethin’ else. Somethin’ that’s been chewin’ on me for months.”

She didn’t speak.

But inside, everything shifted.

The words scraped places she didn’t let many people near. Her chest tightened. Not in anger—but in that sharp, aching way that came from recognizing the damage fear could do when left unchecked.

He took one careful step closer. “I love you,” he said, simple as breath. “I ain’t good at sayin’ it right. Or bein’ the kinda man who deserves you. But I do.”

She stared at him. And for a long moment, her expression was stone.

Then, slowly—very slowly—she let out a breath.

“You really are terrible at this,” she said.

His eyes narrowed, lips twitching. “That bad, huh?”

She shook her head. “Just… very you.”

Chu gave a half-laugh. “That a compliment?”

“I haven’t decided yet.”

She looked past him for a moment, toward the trail that wound through the trees below. Mist still hovered above the leaves, catching sunlight like spun glass.

“Do you know how hard it is to let someone in?” she asked, voice quiet. “How long it took me to stop seeing connection as a weakness? To look at you and not just see another door waiting to close?”

Chu swallowed, jaw tight.

“I didn’t want this,” she murmured. “Didn’t plan it. But you… you were like rotgut. Loud. Unfiltered. Always crashing into things.”

“Usually walls. And my dignity.”

Her mouth twitched.

She turned toward him again. Stepped a little closer.

“You got under the armor,” she said. “And I hate that you did it. And I hate that I like it.”

His voice was barely a breath. “But?”

She stared up at him. Early sun caught in her lashes.

“But I love you too, Chu. Even when I want to hit you. Especially then.”

He let out a shaky, disbelieving laugh. “Well, shit. If I knew you were gonna say that, I’d’ve—”

She grabbed him by the front of his shirt and kissed him.

It wasn’t elegant. It wasn’t smooth.

But it was real.

And when they broke apart, breath mingling, the fog beginning to lift, the world felt sharper. Clearer.

They weren’t perfect.

But for the first time, they weren’t pretending otherwise.

And somehow, that was enough.

The morning fog had finally burned off by the time breakfast made it to the long, low table inside Genkai’s main hall. The air was filled with the smell of miso soup, grilled fish, and freshly steamed rice. The soft clatter of chopsticks and bowls mingled with the occasional groggy mutter or stifled yawn as everyone gathered, slowly recovering from the chaos of the night before.

Misao sat near the end of the table with a cup of tea, posture relaxed, eyes lowered. Chu sat beside her—beside her—close enough that their arms occasionally brushed. He wasn’t making a show of it. He wasn’t even talking that much. Just… there.

And that was enough to set the entire group on edge.

Yusuke, halfway through stuffing his face, blinked. Froze. Slowly set his bowl down like he was handling something radioactive. “Okay. What the hell is this?”

“Good morning to you too,” Misao said dryly, sipping her tea.

Yusuke pointed his chopsticks between the two of them like they were a murder scene. “No, no, no—this is new. You’re sitting together. You’re not scowling. He’s not hitting on every girl in a ten-mile radius. What happened? Who are you and what have you done with the violence couple?”

Keiko, more composed, hid a smile behind her hand. “They do look different this morning.”

Kuwabara leaned in, eyes wide. “Wait. Did they—did they hook up?!”

He immediately turned beet red and waved his hands. “I mean—not that it’s our business! But also kinda is?!”

Botan grinned like the cat who’d eaten not only the canary but also the entire aviary. “Oh, it happened.”

Misao’s brow twitched. “Botan—”

“Oh, don’t even try to deny it,” Botan sang. “I saw you two this morning, coming back from the courtyard. I don’t know what happened out there, but someone finally admitted something.”

Chu looked smug. “Might’ve said a thing or two.”

Misao elbowed him under the table. “You also said you were terrible at it.”

He shrugged. “Still counts.”

Yukina offered a gentle smile, her voice soft and sincere: “I’m really happy for you both—you deserve something kind in your lives.”

Across the table, Rinku dropped his chopsticks with a clatter. “Wait—so you guys are, like… together now? For real?”

Chu opened his mouth, but Jin cut in with a delighted whoop. “Finally! I was startin’ to think we’d have to lock ya in a closet like a school play!”

Shishiwakamaru, who had been silently eating like a civilized person, quirked a brow. “Well. That explains the intense emotional tension we’ve all been choking on for the past few weeks.”

Suzuki fanned himself dramatically. “Ah, young love—so violent, so unpredictable. Like a cherry blossom drifting in a hurricane.”

Misao shot him a look. “Pretty sure the hurricane part’s accurate.”

Kurama, ever the diplomat, chuckled softly. “I’m glad you worked it out. Though I admit, I expected a bit more bloodshed first.”

Chu grinned and reached for more rice. “There was almost a bottle to the face.”

“And it would’ve been deserved,” Misao muttered.

“Still worth it,” Chu replied, nudging her knee beneath the table.

Touya, quiet until now, sipped his tea and spoke with calm precision. “It’s good to see balance restored. Of a sort.”

Misao gave him a glance. “That’s what you’re calling this?”

He gave the faintest of smiles. “You’re both… less volatile. For now.”

“Give it a week,” Rinku muttered.

From her place near the corner, Genkai made a soft, unimpressed noise. “Tch. Took you long enough.”

Everyone turned to look at her. She didn’t even glance up from her rice.

Yusuke blinked. “Wait, you knew?”

“I’m not blind. Or stupid.” Genkai set her bowl down. “They’ve been dancing around each other like badly written soap characters for months.”

Keiko choked on a laugh.

Botan leaned toward Genkai with a wink. “You could’ve said something!”

“And spoil the fun? Please.” She rolled her eyes. “At least now I don’t have to listen to the passive-aggressive sparring during morning drills. That was getting old.”

Chu looked oddly pleased. “So we’ve got the Genkai seal of approval?”

She stared at him flatly. “Don’t push it.”

For a moment, the table went quiet—just the faint clink of dishes and the sound of Jin slurping his soup far too enthusiastically.

Then Yusuke leaned back with a dramatic sigh. “Ugh. You two are domestic now. I miss when you just glared at each other and made small children cry.”

Misao took a slow sip of her tea, eyes half-lidded. “Those were the days.”

Then she smirked. “But no.”

Chu threw an arm over her shoulder with exaggerated flair. “Sorry, mate. This hellcat’s spoken for.”

Yusuke dropped his head dramatically onto the table. “I hate this timeline.”

Kurama smiled. “I don’t.”

Keiko leaned against Yusuke’s shoulder, smirking. “It’s the best timeline.”

And Misao—who never smiled easily, never let herself soften in front of this many people—reached for Chu’s hand under the table and didn’t let go.

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So, I love the Makai Tree arc from the Sailor Moon R anime.

I love the voices for Ail (Alan) and En (Ann) in the old DiC dub.

But dear God, do I absolutely HATE how the old DiC dub butchered their conclusion.

The arc was being fairly well translated, all things considered, until we hit the last three episodes. In Episode 11, the dub script does not appear to be caught up with the visual storytelling. The episode keeps on cutting to this shot of the Makai Tree as things go wrong:

This is meant to signify that the Makai Tree, which is a tree that takes in energy and then gives it back to its children (Ail and En in this case), has been getting the wrong energy from its children and as such is giving the wrong energy back. Energy that is forcibly taken from others out of selfishness will convert into negative energy that only heightens Ail and En's bad qualities. That is why Ail and En are suddenly contemplating murdering Mamoru and Usagi respectively out of jealousy even when they hadn't ever done so in the past, and why Cardians under their control are going crazy and lashing out indiscriminately. But in the dub:

Ann: That's weird. Every time someone's nice to me, I feel so much better; I keep seeing the Doom Tree, growing strong and healthy.

OK, first off, that's not the Doom Tree. In case you didn't notice, there is a tortoise and a hare at the bottom of the screen. This whole scene is meant to be Usagi offering to help Natsumi with her schoolwork because she thinks she's ahead in their wager and she may as well be kind to her losing rival, with Natsumi thinking this is like the Earth story of the Tortoise and the Hare where the hare loses a race because of its overconfidence in beating the tortoise.

So that's the first of three problems with this scene's translation. The second problem is that Serena says that she's willing to try and get along with Ann because Alan turned out to be such a cool guy so she wants to give his sister a chance, and....huh? Serena's interactions with Alan (as are Usagi's with Seijuro) have consisted him always weirding her out with his pretentious flirtations, him being a rival to her love interest, and one of her friends losing her crush on him when she learns about his messed up views on love. So there has been nothing about him to make her think he's "such a cool guy". In the original, Usagi is willing to get along with Natsumi for the same reason she's willing to get along with Seijuro: she's kind to a fault and wants to see the best in everyone even if she quarrels with them or finds them irritating. Her entire romance with Mamoru and her friendship with Rei hinges on this quality!

Third and most importantly, turning this scene into a touchy-feely bonding moment between Serena and Ann implies Ann is improving, that she's starting to learn the error of her ways, when as I stated before it's literally the opposite: she's supposed to be getting worse. She literally attempts to kill Usagi right after this conversation, and then again in the subsequent two-part finale. So this creates a huge whiplash effect and renders things incoherent. Is the dub suggesting Alan and Ann would improve if they only stopped intaking energy at all, even when they would literally die if they did that? A point they beat into our heads repeatedly?

And then there's the finale. Beyond more mention of "the Negaverse" since DiC wants to fool people into thinking these clearly unconnected villain groups are part of a single whole, we get perhaps the most insulting, totally-missing-the-point alteration of dialogue in the series.

Here's the accurately translated Viz version.

Ail: Why did you risk your life like that? Usagi: I'm willing to risk my life…to protect anyone I truly love. (Ail is shocked). En: My, how noble of you. (En pushes Usagi backward with another blast.) En: C'mon, time to beg for help, you weak little human. Usagi: I don't care what happens to me. Just please spare Mamoru's life. En: What a stupid request to make! But if you think your own life's not precious; oh well, then. (En keeps blasting only for Mamoru to shield Usagi each time.) Ail: ….Beautiful….so very beautiful….Is this what it means to love? En: Ail? Ail: En, I see now. Love can not be forced. En: Huh? Ail: Don't you get it? Love is something that is built together….by caring for each other. En: You don't know what you're saying! Makoto: He's right! When you truly love someone, the strength of that love gives you the courage to overcome anything. (En is about to lash out again when the Moonlight Knight appears.) Moonlight Knight: All the creatures of the universe are friends. Instead of fighting against them, open up your heart to them. (En is visibly on the verge of tears). En: That's easy to say! But you could never understand all the pain that we've been through! Our pain comes from us wandering the entire universe for so long with no-one ever caring about us! Ail: En… En: We had to take whatever we could! And if we hadn't done that, we never would've survived! Moonlight Knight: Nothing good comes out of stealing. It only brings shame, heartache and hate. En: YOU SHUT UP! (En blasts the Moonlight Knight into the Makai Tree, which absorbs him and goes haywire.)

The purpose here is not only to show Ail learning the true meaning of love through introspection and showcasing how En can't do the same because she's consumed by her negative emotions built up over a long time, which is why she ends up learning through the emotional impulse of protecting Ail than from harm instead, but also to show that Ail and En are not evil. It's a point En's voice actress even made: they are misguided but not malicious at heart. They are turned evil through the bad energy from the Makai Tree, but that makes them no more culpable than Mamoru/Endymion before them or Chibiusa/Black Lady after them. That's why Usagi, Makoto and the Moonlight Knight are trying to talk sense into them.

And now here's the DiC dub.

Alan: She's even braver than I thought. Serena: You don't know what bravery is! Or friendship! All you know is EVIL! (Alan is shocked.) Ann: That's right! So glad you finally noticed! (Ann pushes Serena backward with another blast.) Ann: Renounce your love for Darien and I might spare you. Serena: No! I'll never renounce my feelings! True love can't be taken away by anyone! Ann: You're a sentimental fool but I can make you change your mind in a flash, Romeo! (Ann keeps blasting only for Darien to shield Serena each time.) Alan: I've never see anyone…so sad! Maybe…maybe this is wrong. Ann: What is? Alan: This destroying love. It's such a beautiful thing. Can't you see how they love each other? Even if she is our enemy, it'd be wrong to destroy them. Ann: You're just weak, Alan! Lita: No, you're the one who's weak! You don't have any real friends! And the only emotions you know are hatred and vengeance and jealousy! Ann: Can it! (The Moonlight Knight appears.) Moonlight Knight (asshole tone): It's a bad scene, Sailor Scouts, but nothing we can't handle! These poor misfits can be beat! (Ann is visibly on the verge of tears). Ann: Misfits!? You have no idea who you're talking to, Turban Boy! Listen! It takes more than some stupid little rose to beat the power of the Negaverse! You'll see what this misfit can do! Moonlight Knight (asshole tone): Your jealousy has blinded you, Ann! You just can't bear that Darien's dumped you! Ann: He has noooooot! (Ann blasts the Moonlight Knight into the Doom Tree, which absorbs him and goes haywire.)

WOW. So not only are Alan and Ann made out to look worse than their original counterparts with Alan's shock now coming from called nothing but evil then being half-assed with saying "maybe" what they're doing is wrong and Ann behaving nothing but evil (complete with "Negaverse" dialogue) with her sad rant about the pain and loneliness she's suffered being removed (even Ail's "En..." is just cut altogether), but Serena, Lita and the Moonlight Knight all just insult them rather than try to reach out to them. "No bravery or friendship, nothing but evil", "weak with no real friends and only knowing hatred, vengeance and jealousy", "poor misfits angry at being 'dumped' that have to be 'beat' instead of healed"....it's horrendously out-of-character for all involved and against the message of the arc and arguably the whole anime metaseries. It's like DiC took Sailor Moon's "I'll punish you!" catchphrase to the most literal extreme and made her a hero who punishes evildoers indiscriminately instead of a hero who tries to reach out and help evildoers she knows have good in them and/or are in pain like Ail/Alan and En/Ann. And much like the scene in detention, it also creates a huge whiplash when Alan and Ann end up being redeemed. The heroes tell us they're evil and weak cowards who can't feel anything positive, then they proceed to prove them spectacularly wrong and there's just no commentary on it and seemingly no awareness on how bad it makes them look. Geez, I didn't care for the Moonlight Knight to start with; now I hate him!

So thanks a lot, DiC, you fumbled the ball in the very last inning.

Buuuuut maybe I can forgive you just for this:

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