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"Happy Birthday atem!!!~", mana yelled hugging the pharao tightly. She leaned in and whispered in his ear, "Don't go to sleep early tonight, I'll come and give you your present~". With that mana leaned away, let go of atem and looked at him with a teasing smirk. "Bye for now my pharao~", mana said in a polite manner and waved at the guards, happily walking away.
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The magican came as promised and climbed up over the balcony, entering atems bed chambers. "Atem? Oh! Lucky me, so you are still awake!", mana smiled, running towards him and giggeled. She couldn't help it. Feeling pure happiness as soon as she sees him. Truth be told she missed him all day and couldn't wait for this moment to come.
"Are you ready for your present? If you are.. come and follow me! We have somewhere to be~", mana held her hand out to him and waited for his answer, "eh.. also please don't ask how I made it possible. I made suuuper sure that isn't dangerous at all! And you'll be save all the way!!!", mana smiled with a bright grin as she walked him out of the palace to some horses. "It isn't far from here, it's place I found by myself and I wanted to show it to you", mana explained while climbing onto her horse, then holding her hand out for the pharao. "D-Don't look at me like that.. Let me be your knight in shining amor for tonight! Sit behind me!", the magican blushed as she looked away from his eyes. The gaze seemed to heated. Mana didn't know how to act at the current moment. She wondered if this was to much..
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"We are here!! Wait! Wait! Sit, don't get up yet!", mana held atem back in panic. After all she had this all so well planed and organized. It would be sad if it didn't work out well. So mana jumped quickly down from the horse and turned around, holding her hand out towards him, "May I?", she smiled gently at him.
"Don't worry what I want to show you is just up ahead!", mana said while she walked through a gate, it was covered in beautiful flowers and plants. Walking inside, there was a small, yet so breathtaking garden. With a big fountain in the middle. A cute swing hung down from the trees and roses, flowers, plants everywhere. Some butterflys and fireflys flew in the air, setting the right mood. While walking through the middle of it, there was a table, with two seats. One looking like a throne while the other looked like a normal chair. Their names were written on them.
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"Please sit down atem~", mana smiled while she pointed towards the throne. "I made this for both of us. I'm not best cook so I mostly just brought some fruits and chocolate.. I still hope you'll enjoy it~". With that the magican snipped her finger and the box disappeared. Instead a plates with fruits and sweets appeared on the table, "Don't worry they are all fresh~", mana giggled while eating one of the grapes, "see?", while chewing it and shwalloing it.
The magican noticed atem's gaze right away. Yes.. she should explain. Of course he would be confused. Maybe this was really to much. But the book said that you treat the person you love like this.. maybe the book lied? What a mess..
With a blush mana stood up and walked infront of the pharao. "My dear atem, I'm sorry for acting all mysteryious. I wish you happy birthday. And this garden as everything in it is my present for you! I created this garden in the thought of you!" the magican smiled with a special gaze in her eyes. She looked at him with pure love. Spreading her arms out to her sides as to show of the garden, "The whole garden", then she pointed on the seats and the food, "plus everything in it belongs to you".
Mana took one last step closer to him as she hugged herself, "even me~", she whispered so only he could hear, blushing cutely. With that mana turned around, blushing heavily, her heart beating faster as usually. Not wanting to look at him. Was she scared? Maybe? Would atem understand what she was trying to say? Maybe? Hopefully?
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(Here you go! As I said I would write something~ I really hope this was okay! I connected a view points of the headcanons here, you will find out later~ 💜 )
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salacca · 9 months
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[ Look Ma, I Gave In And Made It A Multi-Muse ]
Mun 34/N • Proship Friendly • Dead Dove Connoisseur Lazy • Sporadic • Not writing you a novel
Muses Canons and Originals • Adding more as I go Key characters include: Snake Fruit Cookie, Dark Link, Majora, Copy X MKII, Gaster, Lethys, Relm Arrowny, Robo Knux, a plethora of OCs... Just check the muse page.
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ghostlygravekeeper · 9 months
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It gets boring being the only one who doesn't sleep.
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thegreatlaalma · 1 month
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Hello to the Riptide Pirates! I've heard about their growth recently, when I saw them they didn't even have a captain (not one really well established at least). Glad to know they're doing fine.
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Enough about that, it's time to properly introduce myself! I am the great La Alma, Paramount Champion for a couple years (until some pirates ended up showing me a good fight). Currently, I'm off becoming a chef!
I use he/they, but neos are always a welcomed change! I'm unsure what else to add on here, so I guess we'll talk more later, Mana!
its cheri once again, the list at @oncewaskas will be updated later. for this account, use sol/sols when talking to me tysm!!
okay tag time
#the great la alma! - in character
#suplexed out of character - an out of character (ooc) tag
#to tell one a tale - answering asks
#stepping into the ring! - interactions
#chers played favorites before - if im talking to myself (not on an rp blog) or someone in the server (not on an rp blog) or my sibling, this is the tag for it
as always, wont be 100 percent canon, will have hcs, and spoilers for riptide
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mementio-mori · 3 months
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The one you followed my Terra blog with
Oh, Finnegan. Buckle up cause this is gonna be an essay.
- Finnegan Vanhorn was born the younger son to a rather afluent family alongside his sister, Lydia. Though she did her best to spend time with him, he's spent most of his years as a kid alone due to neglect. This spurred into a habit of him sneaking out to do what he pleased. He eventually picked up a job as a... Well, he calls himself a monster hunter to put it shortly, but he was an agent of a government initiative made to combat the influx of monsters and criminals in his home city.
(This itteration is mainly based off a different one in another RP, an esper that goes by "the Timekeeper". But he has bits of every itteration weaved into him.)
- He eventually took up learning about the multiverse and began brainstorming a device that would help him traverse through reality plenums by harnessing the mana that attracted said monsters. Mind you, he started when he was thirteen. It took years to perfect the technology. He dubbed it the Syllogis.
- During his travels he'd cross paths with a witch named Oliver, his best friend. The two had stuck by each other ever since.
- You may catch mentions of "Project Bronze", or see Finn get called that. The details are still vague as hell, perhaps intentionally. If Finn had any memories of whatever experiments he had to endure, there'd be nothing but fog.
(When I said he had other itterations weaved in him, that wordplay is intentional. He's said to be tied with many, MANY, MANY, other versions of himself, along with a few of the people he knows now. Man's had dreams and nightmares of what those versions had to go through before. I even joked about him not actually being human. There is a hypothetical conspiracy board.)
- He didn't start out with a profile, only as an anon nicknamed Clock Anon. He first popped up on Janurary 12th of last year.
(He's been here for a yeaaarrrr!!! :D)
- Finn ended up leaving his home reality to live with his current boyfriend, their one-year anniversary coming up next month. And after an incident revolving some troublesome fae that he still hasn't forgiven anyone for not letting him kill, he ended up quitting his old job. He works as a florist now.
(There was a third for a while, but... we don't talk about him anymore.)
- AuDHD go brrr.
- Disaster bi.
- His favorite flower is the Lily of the Valley.
- He likes red velvet sweets and mocha. And ice cream.
(Sweet tooth go brrrr.)
- Weapons geek, has a fondness for knives. Or bladed weapons in general.
- He also has a twin brother/clone, Orpheus. Orph's also an imp. Yeah he came into the picture much later, I dunno what he classifies as at this point and neither does the imp.
- Oh I forgot the man has regen healing. Side effect of the experiments.
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nevertem · 5 months
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Nevertem 18+ Pharaoh Atem & Priestess Mana & Priest Mahado RP Blog Headcanons About Rules
Icons, graphics, and headers by @tournesolette
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yuriprince · 9 months
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remembering the time i tried rping with fates!mana and had a hinata rp blog reply to some of my posts 👀
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mahoushojoumonster · 2 years
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“I have a lot of regrets, but I'm not going to think of them as regrets”
Indie Low Active and Semi-Selective RP Blog for DMG / Mana from Yu-Gi-Oh DM. Sideblog to and loved by @cherri-blah. Mun and Muse are 25+
Magic Anons: None | Accepting but Selective
Side Muses: Dark Magician / Mahaad | Kuriboh
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ꕥ NOTE: BLOG STILL UNDER CONSTRUCTION!
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ofgentleresolve-a · 2 years
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Jeoseungsaja
spread the crowns ( ft. crown opinion meme w/ @thegreenswillcome but also @jeoseungsaja )
[ ♛ ] send me your a url and i’ll tell you the following;
my opinion on;
character in general: tVN goblin’s reaper is a canon character?? who said that?? i thought alex created reaper JFKLSJDL okay but seriously, i adore ALL THREE versions of essentially the same soul ( reincarnation, multiple lives, I LIVE FOR THAT KIND OF STUFF :’D )- the fact that reaper, hyuk, and yeo are all so distinctly unique in their personalities, voices, backstories, preferences ( like how yeo likes sweets, but hyuk prefers bitter flavors ), and even character arcs...AND EVEN THEN?? they all resonate with one another?? the attributes of this soul is still there?? alex you literally created your own lore and IT’S SO JUICY and sorry tVN, it’s like lena said, i’m here for alex’s canon, i will not be accepting anything else- how they play them: where am i supposed to start with this?? well first i’d like to say i adore all three of them, reaper, the competent, but messenger who really really deserves a break, i’m sorry for all the chaos and headaches my muses are giving him JFKLSDJF, wang yeo, the extra(tm) fox with a heart of gold ( i can’t wait to see him interact more with mana 🥺 ), and then finally my grumpy child-in-law, lee hyuk bc ALEX HELP I LOVE HIM SO MUCH I WANT TO PROTECC HIM WITH MY LIFE, I DON’T CARE IF HE SCOWLS AT ME 🥺🥺🥺 okay but seriously i think all three of them are written beautifully, and maybe i’m sounding like a broken record here, but alex’s portrayal is never like?? overexaggerated?? like for example, yes, one of hyuk’s defining characteristics is his grumpiness, but he’s never outright mean, that side portrayed realistically in that there always a reason ( however minuscle jskdlfj ) for him to act up, it’s not like he’s always rude for no apparent reason....basically what i’m trying to say is that alex writes people not archetype and that is just skill in and of itself <3 the mun: someone i would gladly throw hands for. and yes, i know, i’m being biased, but i am legitimately serious when i say that alex is one of the NICEST ppl on this hellsite. not only is she an excellent writer both in content and style, but she also just?? genuinely cares about all of her partners?? and like this care also extends outside of the dash too?? literally, words cannot describe how much i completely adore alex and how LUCKY i feel to have the privilege to write, plot, and just be friends with her in general. she is absolutely one of the best things that has come out of my time on tumblr and i hope to be able to write and be friends with her for a very long time to come 😊
do i;
follow them: alex you could open an rp blog for a blob of slime and i would STILL want to interact with it JFKLSJD rp with them: hahaha totally not like we have 283940238 threads ( jk i love them all and i’ll take MORE!! HAPPILY :D ) want to rp with them: to the ends of the earth!! ship their character with mine: *motions to hyurick, the reason i fill bathtubs with my tears on a daily basis, but also....there are a few other potentials i’m seeing?? maybe?? alex hit me up JFKLSDJF :’D*
what is my;
overall opinion:
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( ft. me every time i see alex on my dash/inbox/dms JFKLSDJF )
**Note: Mun’s answer are all to be completely honest. Don’t send url if you don’t want brutal honesty.
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darkburning · 1 year
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is there any other muse in this fandom you’d like to RP? // is there a muse you played on more platforms or in different moments of your life? //  did you have a muse you tried to play, but didn’t feel connected to?
𝐁𝐄𝐋𝐀𝐓𝐄𝐃 𝐌𝐔𝐍𝐃𝐀𝐘 𝐁𝐔𝐓 𝐓𝐔𝐄𝐒𝐃𝐀𝐘
#6/7/8
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6. once i did consider kisara, probably like years ago, but in reality i really doubt that i have the motivation to try her out. frankly it was simply because i had the psd for her, but aside from that i don't think i would make a good kisara. another character i actually did try out was asuka tenjoin from GX a very long time ago. however, i confess i don't remember much of her muse so --- i don't think i have the confidence or motivation to pick her up again. mana is enough for me in this fandom, especially after all my monkey brain i had invested in her characterization.
7. well.... there is stella, to no one's surprise ---- especially you. she is the muse i will always come back too, and the one i stubbornly refuse to abandon. of course, if we are talking about the long distant past : i did rp maria kurenai in multiple platforms : deviant art , rp forums, and tumblr for a time ( which wow you also followed ). however, i do have a big preference with tumblr for better or for worst.... so i really don't have much muse outside of this hellhole lol.
8. i tried roleplay tifa, a long time ago. mostly because of peer pressure and whatnot, but i simply couldn't find her voice ---- and the duplicate drama was rampant at the time. but overall, if i do make a blog for said muse i usually feel very invested and vibe well with the character. it was really only that tifa attempt that i simply did not feel the need too lol.
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When the rain falls..
Warnings:
angst, sad, dark themes, suicide mentioning, death mentioning, tiny bit smut/nsfw (just 2-lines), depression?, panic attack?, soulmate au, mana is reborn, timeline-parallels, vaseshipping, this is all MY AU & it's far from canon!
(I woke up & choose angst! I cried while writing this! Please enjoy~ ♡ )
(Also: Please DON'T repost/use/ reupload this without asking me first!! It's mine, not yours!! )
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[[ Modern- Au]]
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"I feel like I'm missing something...",
the girl whispered to herself, sitting on the window from her house. The former magican looked outside, closing her eyes as the raindrops fell from the grey sky. She was listening closely to the sounds of the falling water hitting the ground.
A sigh left mana. Somehow she felt nostalgic, almost sad. The moment the girl opened her eyes, a single tear ran down her cheek. But mana didn't really understand her feelings towards the rain. Just that the same feeling happening over & over again. The former magican couldn't remember when it started or why it started. 'Maybe some trauma??', she thought.
Her thoughts were cut off by the ringing of her door. Mana jumped up, running towards the door,
"I'M COMING~!",
the girl yelled while running down the stairs, opening the door. A big smile formed on her face as she saw 'HIM' standing infront of her. Holding an umbrella over his head and a bag with snack & drinks in the other. The guitar-bag hanging over his shoulder, with the black leader jacket he was wearing, it suited him so well. He looked like the perfect boyfriend-material--
Quickly shaking her head the girl stepped a bit to the side,
"Hello atem~ Come in!! I hope you didn't get to wet because of sudden rain?",
the former magican smiled at the boy infront of her. Gently taking his umbrella from him, closing the door once he was inside. Mana couldn't explain this feeling but the sadness was gone now, everytime atem was around she felt pure happiness, saftey and just so complete.
"Mana?.. Did you cry?",
atem's worried voice made her look up. She didn't even notice the tear that had escaped her eye earlier. Just as atem's hand gently touched her cheek and wiped it away, the girl noticed what he meant. A blush covered her face as she looked up at the boy. His eyes were full of worry, but also something else. 'Was that.. guilt? But why?.. It's not like he did something bad?' , the former magican thought confused.
Mana smiled at atem and took his hand in her's as she answered,
"Don't worry, it's nothing serious! I just have some weird connection with the rain since I can think. I always cry when it rains, somehow I feel sad. I also always forget my umbrella when I go out! But no one knows why, not even the doctor could help the situation. So don't worry okay? It's normal!",
mana softly pressed against his hand and intertwined their fingers,
"I would rather hear the new song you told me about. Is that okay?~",
a giggle left her mouth as she walked him towards her livingroom, ignoring the thunder & lighting outside. The rain seemed to get worse but all mana could hear was atem's beautiful voice.
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[[ Ancient AU ]]
[[ Timeline without Atem ]]
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The sky was dark. The air was cold. The rain was strong and didn't seem to stop anytime soon. If someone wouldn't know any better they would think this was a ghost-town. Yet a girl walked through the empty streets, calmly as if the rain doesn't even exist to her. The cold, dark weather didn't seem to bother her either. She seemed far away, lost. But yet the people of the town admired her, called her a "fairy" or a "blessing of the gods".
To herself mana was no such thing. Mana hated herself more than anyone ever could. She couldn't even protect those close to her. Now everyone she once loved was gone. How many months ago was it? Or had it already been years??
Looking down in a puddle, the magican saw herself in it. Ahh, true she was all grown-up now. She looked way older than she remembered. So it must've been years already, right?? Mana sighed, jumping in the puddle as she bit her lip, 'Who even cares?? Time is useless anyway!!' , the girl yelled on the inside.
Continueing the walk through the rain the girl lost any sense of thought, any sort of meaning. Just walking, walking, walking on. A loud thunder made mana look up. Looking around, her mouth opened but no sound came out. She was in shock. Silence. Just the rain and the thunder was heard. Infront of the magican were a bunch of old ruins. Some of them visible, some of them hidden by the sand. 'Time is really moving on fast huh?' , the magican let out a deep breath.
Some of the ruins looked odly familiar to mana. She wondered why. Was she here before?? Looking around herself. Sand, sand, more sand, sa- no wait!! These things hidden in the sand.. Here was once a town??? But now nothing of it was left.. But why does this all seem odly familiar to the girl??
"Maybe I'm really going crazy huh??",
mana grumbled, shaking her head while walking through the ruins. She came to an sudden stop, 'Wow!! How was that possible??'. Before her was a garden. In between the bunch of old ruins was a beautiful, still fresh garden! It looked like it was well taken care of. 'But how?? Did someone use magic??' , this caught mana's interest! Which was a very hard thing to do now-days!
Continueing to look around in the garden, the girl didn't find anything. But mana made herself a note to come back here on a day when the weather was better. This needs more research! It could be dangerous or of great use!! While moving on, walking towards the next ruin, it all of sudden got dark behind her. Quickly mana turned around, ready to fight. 'What??' , the garden had turned dark, it looked dirty, completly the opposite from before. The magican didn't believe her eyes.
"So IT is me just losing my mind.. well good to know",
the magican grabbed her head, while walking outside in the rain again. The weather was still the same. Yet mana still didn't understand the feeling of knowing this all. Even if she did find out, would it even matter?? It wouldn't change anything! It wouldn't bring 'HIM' back! It couldn't bring the person back she loved most!
Lost in thoughts mana stumbled over something on the floor, she fell face first in the wet, dirty sand.
"Eww..", the magican grumbled, slowly sitting up, rubbing the dirt off her face, the girl looked back to see what she had fallen over. 'This stupid thing..' ,
In a heartbeat she could feel her heart tighten up. Her breath got stuck, knot building in her throat. Eyes widened with every passing second. Her hands started to shake, one slowly reaching out. She could feel her stomatch hurting as the memorys rained down on her,
" What brings you here today mana?~"
" Did you sneak in through my balcony again?~"
"How is your magic trainging going?~"
" Thank you for your support mana! It means much to me~"
" Are you hiding here from mahad again?~"
" You did amazing mana! I'm so proud of you!"
" You're as beautiful as the stars! Mana.. you truly mean much to me~"
" My cape is way to big for you.. but I guess you look adorable?"
" Well done mana! Soon you could even beat me haha~"
" It may seem childish to you! But mana is the one & only that I adore and love! I want her by my side for now and forever!~"
" Are you nervous? I thought you loved me?~"
"You don't know what you do to me, kitten~"
"Please, be mine?~"
"Mana, will you give yourself to me? For now & forever? May our souls & our hearts always find each other!"
" You look so beautiful in the morning sun mana~"
"I will never leave you mana! Take this necklace as a promise!"
" Even if there are moments we can not be together, you'll shine like gold in my memorys!~"
"Mana.. I do really love you~"
" Wait for me! I'll be back!! My beloved mana!~"
Tears ran down mana's face, looking at the hidden throne under the sand. The throne that had belonged to 'HIM'. A loud cry escaped mana. Now she remembered why this place seemed so familiar. 30 years ago this place was once her home. Her childhood. But now.. everything was gone, destroyed, washed away by the rain.
The girl picked herself up, her legs shaking, her sight blurry by the still overflowing tears. She started to run, running away from the memorys, from the painful past. Now the magican remembered why she moved away, why she tried to forget it all. How often had she nightmares?? How often did she break down?? How often did she try to end her live by herself? End it all!! But mana couldn't...
'What if 'HE' came back? What if 'HE' is still alive?' , small pieces of hope sometimes crossed her mind.
So the magican continued to walk through the rain, continued to help the people of the town, continued to use magic. But yet, the sadness, the emptiness never disappeared. The smile never appeared on her face ever again.
Mana didn't even notice that as soon as she came back to the magical-garden it started to bloom again. Thanks to her the garden was fresh again. Thanks to her the past was still alive. Neither did the ancient-mana know that both, her & atem hadn't giving up yet and would meet once again, in the future!
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(I hope you enjoyed~ ♡ )
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celestialprayer · 6 months
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Hey! Thanks for peeking in on my Dragalia Lost RP Blog! Chances are, you have no idea who my character is or what Dragalia Lost Is about, and my pages aren’t helping. That’s okay! I’m under no delusion that Dragalia Lost took off any harder than it tragically actually did, nor do I think my actual about page as it is - or even as it probably will be - actually suffices.
Instead of making you wait for a long About page you probably won’t have the time to read anyways (meant with no disrespect! We’re all busy people), have the significant bullet points of the character I’m writing.
Zena is the youngest (twin) member of the royal family of a country known as New Alberia. Her role is acting as the Auspex - the mana-gifted princess that acts to keep the world and its mana purified and protected. At least, for as long as she could hold such a peaceful position in peaceful times…
To disrespect a great game by simplifying the plot, Zena is a deeply traumatized character whose backstory consists of being possessed by a great evil and harming/killing her family and the people of her family’s kingdom that she truly loves and adores; losing her beloved brother to said possession and living in her world after, a world that now feared and resented her; traveling across alternate realities to find a world that can actually win, so she can save her own world, only to witness the tragic devastation of so many others; ultimately saving her world, only to witness its end very shortly after; and ultimately being left to save what’s left of a reality that isn’t her’s.
Unlike canon, where everything is restored with a neat little bow and some Convenient Amnesia after, Zena restores possibility to reality and grants the multiverse new life with the help of allies; here, she brings back the successful reality back, but as a new origin point, rather than restoring everything, leaving her without a world of her own. She holds everything; the loss, the trauma, the guilt, and the hope; with her from there on.
For crossover’s sake, she has also been dimensionally displaced after all’s said and done, as a result of her being left only in a world that already HAS its version of her. With no place in the world she helped save, she can only wait for a world that will take her.
My goal with writing Zena is to put a focus on her moving forward separate from her trauma, with only herself clinging to the pain she’s felt. She has to say goodbye to a lot to face tomorrow, and what I want most is for her to form new bonds she can never give away, that can grant her a new life after all she lost, even if she’s starting from nothing.
My central focus, given I’m writing a rather niche character, IS to be crossover friendly, and in fact crossover-reliant. Zena is a Lost presence from an ended world with nowhere to go but where fate has brought her. The crux of many of her interactions will be finding a place for herself wherever she’s found herself. Note that I can, in fact, stick with Dragalia characters and keep her in her world, but a lack of Dragalia blogs makes this hard to rely on.
Though traumatized and rather lonely, Zena is a loving, hopeful and gentle soul, and predominately a healer. While she wields offensive capabilities with light and dark magic she can use to protect what she loves, she would rather use her power to heal than destroy. She is very friendly and while somewhat embittered by everything she’s gone through, she’ll express nothing but kindness unless given a reason not to. Through and through, in spite of everything, she’s the same auspex she once was… just with a much heavier weight to bear, and memories of a world that was now her’s alone.
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soul-dwelling · 1 year
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It's weird that even if she was his first atempt, Mana seemed to be a more dynamic, dimmensional and active in the story charachter than either Patty or Iris/Amaterasu. Patty seemed to get the wackyness dialed up so much that she was more of a cartoon than someone one can take serious and in fireforce it seemed like splitting the charachter into two resulted in two nothingburgers - one "nice one" and one crazy evil one - both shallow as Elon Musks conscience
LOL, is this because of stuff I wrote on this blog and on wikis about Mana, Patty, and Iris looking the same? (And Mana and Patty having the same cowboy hat in artwork?) 
I do think Patty is a bit one-dimensional--which is probably why she’s my favorite character to write in any RP or fiction. She is the perfect character to have say just about anything. You need a funny line? She can deliver it. You need a serious moment to land? She is the least expected to give it, so when she does deliver it, you take it seriously. It’s why having her as a cartoon works for me. 
But that also means I then find Mana to actually be less dynamic and dimensional. 
I mean, she does take part in the action--but still a bit less than the others. We have her moping about not having a friend. We don’t get to finally see her confront her family. She’s knocked out in a fight she had no way to compete in. She’s dressed up and dumped down a sewer--to save her, so that means she needed a rescue. And she gets only one major fight left in the series before the finale--a good fight to be sure, given how she wrecks Agai’s robot, minus the “Tool gets a nosebleed due to Mana falling onto him.” 
But she doesn’t feel like she gets her full potential. Patty gets to be saved by Liz from poverty--but she also is a beast in the fight against the desert train. Iris may be underdeveloped--but her meditations on what her faith means are compelling. 
Mana? Mana feels like she is here to have that confrontation with her family, to show she can make friends with goofballs like Shotaro and Yohei and Tool and whoever else she would meet on her journey, to rub it in her family’s face and show she is strong because she has gone toe to toe alongside her friends…and B Ichi just didn’t do more with the story to give her that moment. 
It feels like an incomplete story, whereas Patty and Iris, however much I didn’t like aspects of the manga they come from, got to have stories that teased out just enough of their overall personality that I can imagine writing them. 
But writing Mana? That is something I’m not sure how to do, because she feels underdeveloped unless you can write her into a fight sequence or finally have her face off against her family…and then what? How does she regard Shotaro? What is so compelling about their friendship to make it stand out more? Same with her regard with Tool. She’s kind of flirty with Yohei, which is gross. 
As for the dynamic of Iris and Amaterasu…yeah, that collapsed. It’s boring. 
It reduces Iris to just a doppel, the embodiment of what people think their god Amaterasu is, minimizing agency for Iris. And once we have a chance to give Iris that agency, she’s stuffed in the fridge so that Ohkubo can give Shinra a motivation he already has and doesn’t need enhanced. We needed that moment of Iris, upon hearing she is just a doppel, reassert her own humanity, whether on her own, by her memories of what Shinra said, by what she imagines her sisters would say--or, as bad as it would be, having someone else give her the pep talk. But really, I wish it was Iris coming to this conclusion on her own, not needing Shinra to shout that she is valid regardless where she came from. (Then again, maybe Shinra shouting it would make their romantic relationship actually mean something instead of coming across as a last-minute reveal as part of the stupid harem plot.) 
Amaterasu needed more development. Give me a story that shows her first reactions to Jonah trapping her. Give me a short story showing how her mind breaks. Give me her Dabi from My Hero Academia story, of someone whose fall into villainy is not entirely self-motivated but the desperate response of someone who can’t find another escape.
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