Crescent Hotel: Part 1: Discontinued
"What's up guys, it's Sam and Colby." Colby said, doing the intro. Sam was standing in front, holding the camera. [Y/N], Colby's girlfriend, was standing next to Colby, holding his hand. The bell started tolling right as Colby said the intro, making everyone flip out. [Y/N]'s eyes widened.
"You just said that at the exact same time the bell started ringing!" [Y/N] shouted, laughing. Celina's eyes widened.
"It's an omen!" She said, making [Y/N] laugh even more. Sam looked at Colby.
"How did you time that?" He asked. Sam then looked at the camera again. "Alright, before we show you who we have with us today, can we just take a moment to appreciate, [Y/N]'s shirt." Sam said. [Y/N] let go of Colby's hand and pulled down on her shirt, showing what was on it.
“I ain't afraid of no ghost!" [Y/N] shouted. Colby gave her a face of disbelief. [Y/N] smiled and nodded. "Actually, that's, that's a lie. I am afraid of them." She said, making everyone laugh. Sam looked at [Y/N].
"[Y/N], would you like to do the honors?" He asked. [Y/N] quickly raced behind the two women who were with the group, wrapping her arms around their shoulders.
"Ladies and gentlemen and others! We are here today, with CelinaSpookyBoo, and KallMeKris!" [Y/N] shouted excitedly. Kris gave a wide smile and Celina waved aggressively at the camera. Sam smiled.
"Aka, literally the biggest tick-tockers in all of Canada." Sam said. "Everyone obviously loves Celina. Kris, how you feeling right now?" Sam asked. Kris shrugged.
"I got a lot to live up to, apparently," she said, making everyone laugh. "But I'm excited, I'm terrified!" Kris said. [Y/N] looked at Kris.
"Are you, like, super into ghost stuff?" She asked. Kris looked at the woman.
"I'm super into ghost stuff." Kris said. [Y/N] smiled.
"Good. Cause you're going to be spending the entire night, with someone who can see the dead." [Y/N] said, smiling. Celina burst out laughing at that. She then looked at [Y/N].
"Wait, you're serious?" She asked. [Y/N] nodded, laughing.
"Yeah, I'm serious!" She said. Colby looked at his girlfriend.
"So, [Y/N], could you quickly explain, for Celina and Kris, and for our viewers who don't know, basically, who and what you are?" He asked. [Y/N] nodded. She clapped her hands.
"So, as many of you know, my name is [Y/N] [L/N], and I am a medium," [Y/N] explained, smiling. "So, there are different types of Mediums. There are the mediums that can pick up on auras and tell you about what they feel is going to happen to you in the future, like Nadia from the Stanley Hotel series, she is the type of medium that can pick up on auras. She is what is known as a psychic medium." [Y/N] explained. " Then, there are mediums that can see and feel different energies of spirits and entities, which is what I can do." [Y/N] explained. "My best friend, Amanda, she is also a Medium. If you all remember Amanda from the Conjuring House Series, Amanda can speak to, see and feel different spirits she comes across." [Y/N] said. Celina looked at [Y/N].
"So, when you see these spirits and entities, do they like, show themselves as they were, like when they were alive?" Celina asked. [Y/N] nodded.
"That's a great question. It really depends. Sometimes I can see spirits and entities extremely clear, like clear as day, and other times, they're just like, a blur, like they are just a shadow figure." [Y/N] explained. Kris nodded.
“That is weirdly specific and kind of terrifying.” Kris said. Celina looked at [Y/N].
“So, like what are you feeling right now? What kind of energies are you picking up?” Celina asked. [Y/N] sighed and stayed quiet for a moment, trying to pick up on the different energies.
“So, I’m sort of feeling like, a lot of the spirits and energies here aren’t like, out to hurt anyone, and they’re not dangerous, um,” she went quiet, trying to find the right words. “They’re more, I guess you could say, curious. I might be able to feel more once we get inside.” [Y/N] said.
After getting inside, [Y/N] gasped and walked over to a chair.
“Oh my gosh! That is the cutest thing I have ever seen!” [Y/N] said. In the chair, curled up, was a fluffy kitty. [Y/N] and Kris immediately knelt before the cat and started gently petting it. Colby looked at Sam.
“Yo, could this be the cat General Manager?” Colby asked. Sam nodded.
“This could be the General manager, Morris.” Sam said. [Y/N] looked up at the two boys.
“Wait, are you two serious?” She asked. Sam nodded.
“When this hotel was first started, they had a General Manager which was the cat. It was like a little orange tabby cat.” Colby explained. Sam looked at his best friend.
“A cat was the general manager?” He asked. Colby nodded.
“They made the cat a General Manager, and then when it passed away there were, like, 300 people that showed up to its Death Ceremony.” Colby said. [Y/N] looked at her boyfriend weirdly.
“Death Ceremony?” She asked. Colby shook his head.
“I meant funeral!” He said, laughing. Kris looked at him.
“I love death ceremony way more!” She said, making everyone laugh. [Y/N] laughed and nodded.
“Way cooler!” She said. Kris kept gently petting the cat.
“So, is this who I come to if I need more pillows?” Kris asked. Sam and Colby nodded.
“Yes.” They said at the same time. After fawning over the cat a little more, the group headed up he stairs. Sam was walking in front, filming. [Y/N] was walking behind him, holding Colby’s hand. Then came Celina and Kris. They all looked around in aw.
“I love these walls!” [Y/N] said, as Sam turned around to film his friends. The group stopped and looked at [Y/N].
“Do you feel anything here, babe?” Colby asked, leaning against the railing. [Y/N] sighed. Her shoulders tensed up. It was clear that she was feeling a little nervous. She played with her fingers slightly, twisting the promise ring that Colby had given her around her finger.
“Um,” she let out a breath. “I, um, I definitely feel different energy on this staircase. Um, it’s, it’s like it’s,” her eyes moved around, trying to find the best description.
“Molding together?” Kris offered. [Y/N] nodded.
“Yes, molding together, thank you.” She said. Kris nodded. [Y/N] looked at Colby and the others.
“It feels like the energy is all, molded together. It’s really hard to get a read on it all. There is one presence that, I’m kind of weary of, but, I’m not quite sure who or what it is yet.”
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//I am so, so, so sorry for the long delay. Since I had moved into my apartment, I had felt really, really uncomfortable, like, energy wise and spiritually. I had been putting off this series and the Conjuring Series until I felt more comfortable, and I felt like continuing this series might have made me feel even more uncomfortable. I will try to overcome that uncomfortable feeling and get you all more chapters. I hope you all can forgive me for getting this out so late.//
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how to write teenagers
disclaimer: i am in my 20's. it wasn't too long ago that i was a teenager, but admittingly i am not perfect and there might be errors.
Edit: yes i used psychonauts 2 as an example, this does not mean all examples apply to psychonauts 2. This is a GENERAL writing advice post for people who need help, and this is a collection of tropes that personally annoy me.
I am playing psychonauts 2 for the first time (no spoilers not finished with the game yet )
i wont spoil anything but i will say this: the interns are fucking awful.
which is bizzare because the child characters from the first game were still side characters, but had so much personality.
so here is me ranting about badly written teen characters (In general media) in hopes to prevent this annoying trope
1- teenagers are not sociopathic monsters
yes some teenagers are terrible. yes high school bullies are a thing.
but guess what? people don't magically become horrible once they turn 13. most teens who put down and bully people have hard home lives.
stop with this annoying "lol lets just bully a random stranger for no reason" trope. Its lazy. if you want a good bully character give them a deeper reason then "well teenagers are just awful!" (looking at YOU psychonauts 2)
2- actually talk to teenagers/ write for the era it takes place in
while teens have simmular attitudes than previous generations, a lot of how kids in that age group think are dependent on trends.
being a teenager is a very sponge-ey time in their lives. Its the part where you are old enough to understand deep topics, but not the nuance of it all. at that age, kids re often trying to learn about the world and... you guessed it, become adults.
not all teenagers are rebellious "i am going to do this specifically cus i was told not to" types either.
stop writing teenagers like how you saw them in the 80's. not every kid is gonna act like the cast of footloose. In my high school experience, a lot of kids my age were very chill and tended to themselves.
3- did you know that you actually retain your personality when you turn 13 ? and that not every kid is a tik tocker attention whore with a phone? who knew?
did you know that SHY teenagers exist? that not all teenagers are insecure mentally insane fucks who have to bend their entire personality and thoughts JUST to get attention and to fit in?
its almost as if teenagers are people with different interests and personality traits and not identical mannequins with a self image complex
not every teenager is a hot topic dweller who does illegal and stupid shit for no reason. Like adults, teenagers are a tad deeper than that.
4- Teenagers are also naive and stupid sometimes.
yes i know I just talked about how old people just write about the parts of teenagers they hate and nothing else, but bear with me.
don't write your teen like a shorter adult.
instead use this opportunity to grow the character ! this is such a malleable age for them to grow as people and i rarely see anyone utilize this!
they are young and dumb and learning about the world! that is perfect breeding ground for writing! why don't people use this more??
good example of this: Homestuck.
no i am not going to explan homestuck's plot. I dont have 5 years to write this post. Just know that the characters in that comic utilize the age of the characters well without making them stereotypical "ugh smartphones amirite fellow zoomers?"
5- the age of the kid MATTERS
a 13 year old acting like an immature prick? yeah thats normal. people in that age tend to be edgy and annoying.
17 year old acting like an immature prick? that guy is well beyond "immature kid" age and is just a prick.
The older the kid, the more impactful their actions are. A tween is more likely to grow out of traits more than a 17 year old.
I roll my eyes when i see "bully teen group" trope in shows when the kids are seniors and then they expect me to forgive the kids at the end. NO. you kids are almost 18, that isn't teen angst you are all damn near adults.
let me say this again: talk to teenagers if you are unsure how they act. there is a reason why its problematic for a 17 year old to date a 13 year old even though there is only a 4 year gap. teenagers develop QUICKLY as they age.
a 13 year old and a 17 year old will have vastly different maturity level
while a 30 yr old and a 35 year old will probably be the same level of maturity.
age matters.
and finally
6- stop being a condescending douche.
yes. we get it. its cringe that the 14 year old kid thinks referencing death and depression is "deep"
but also fuck off. this kid is growing and trying to become an adult. show some sympathy.
yes. i know you think your kid's date isn't as important because said kid is going to grow out of it, but don't condescend your audience: they are at a developing age and while it doesn't matter to you, IT MATTERS TO THEM.
I have always hated stuff like the hunger games and divergent. I think they are terrible series specifically made to pander to kids looking for an escapist fantasy.
But you know what? these shows were not made for me, because i am not a teenager. let these kids have their fun.
and if you are making a show/book/etc for teenagers, then you need to put your contempt for kids aside to actually write for them instead of acting like you are all high and mighty.
(an example of this done wrong: every bad boomer comic in existence)
and honestly ? if you are middle aged and you are putting down someone 1/4 your age for just exiting, it's not impressive. It's sad and pathetic and you need to rethink your life.
and yes, i know people put down homestuck for being... homestuck, but homestuck has a wonderful portrayal of teenagers and how they really act. give it a read if you have literally all the freetime in the world.
don't read beyond the epilogues tho. HS^2 is dead to me.
thank you for reading my bullshit homies.
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