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Hello! I would love to know what your answers are for questions 16, 18, 25! (from the get to know the author asks)

Hey Sen, thanks for the ask! Here it goes :))

16) are there any characters who haunt you?

If this is referring to a character who has stayed with me for a long time that would be Faolin, an elf warrior of sorts from the Inheritance cycle by Christopher Paolini. I read it in 2015 I think and in canon, Faolin dies at the very beginning of the first book, and we only get a few extra details about him as the series continues.

But since he was said to be very close to the elven princess Arya, who was my favorite character 👀 I sorta made an au in my mind where he didn't actually die and he's not an elf exactly but a separate yet similar race and he sorta shows up again to train Eragon, reconnect with Arya and help save the world. So um yeah he and his story keep popping up in my head occasionally 😅

18) were there any works you read that affected you so much that it influenced your writing style? What were they?

Hmm affected me, yes, influenced my style, probably not XD. That would be the Book Thief by Marcus Zusak. This is probably my favorite book of all time, I'm blown away every time by the narrative perspective, the emotion he manages to convey and the DAMN BEAUTIFUL WRITING!

I don't mean plot stuff necessarily, but the descriptions, the way things are expressed, seriously, I find them stunning, so masterfully are the words used, just- wow. And yeah, it hasn't influenced my style, mine is kinda too stiff and technical right now, but honestly, the Book Thief is like my goal and inspiration in terms of beautiful use of works and impact.

25) copy/paste a few sentences or a short paragraph that you're particularly proud of

Hahaha short paragraph they say 😅

(From my Tower of God fic)

<<"You...! How did you-" Malek managed to say.

The girl laughed. "How did I not crack my head open and die at the bottom of that pit, you mean? Well you've got my Mizuchi blood to thank for that!"

She raised her bangs to show what had probably been a nasty wound on her forehead, but that had long stopped bleeding and was already closing itself. And despite that and other scrapes and scratches she had all over her legs and arms, she seemed very upbeat. Suspiciously so...

"Thanks for the fun challenge, I'm glad we got to play one last game before we-"

"What the hell are you talking about?" he cut her off. "It wasn't a game!" 

Her smile dropped at that and her eyebrows furrowed considering this, "It wasn't? So you actually... you actually meant for me to stay down there?" A flash of understanding and all glee was gone from her eyes. "You meant for me to die.">> 

(From a sorta original story I started writing but didn't get too far on)

<<With one last petulant wail, the beast stumbled and fell. Its great horned head hit the ground with a thud and its amber eyes, ever so scrutinizing before, stopped dead in their sockets.

The land has yearned for blood and blood it had received. The very sky of Ewhain was torn apart that day, the day the tyrant king Kantor took his last breath.>>

Haha, thanks again for asking, this has been lots of fun! :3

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Related to chapter 4 of Something to Someone

The Mizuchi senses

Shizuko and her group went through that test in the dark maze, right? But she wasn't as bothered by the bad lighting as the others and that's because... (drum roll) sight is actually one of the weaker sense in a Mizuchi.

If you were to rank the classic five from worst to best, you'd have:

Taste - basically zero; because they eat shinsu and that has no taste almost, it never really got to develop; food/drink would have to have a really strong flavor for them to pick up on it

Sight - almost as good a regular human's, just less focused with things that are closer, because those are analyzed more via smell and feeling

Hearing - practically just like a human's; they've learned not to depend on it too much, because underwater, for example, sounds are distorted anyway

Smell - a keener sense of smell than humans have, they're able to detect scents even if they're subtle or farther away and also follow them to discover the origin

Touch/feeling - by far the strongest sense the Mizuchi have, though it's not so much about direct contact as the ability to be more aware of shinsu in the environment and in living creatures, its flow, quality, density etc.

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Chapter 4

In which the plot thickens :p

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send an ask: get to know your author

1) is there a story you’re holding off on writing for some reason?

2) what work of yours, if any, are you the most embarrassed about existing?

3) what order do you write in? front of book to back? chronological? favorite scenes first? something else?

4) favorite character you’ve written

5) character you were most surprised to end up writing

6) something you would go back and change in your writing that it’s too late/complicated to change now

7) when asked, are you embarrassed or enthusiastic to tell people that you write?

8) favorite genre to write

9) what, if anything, do you do for inspiration?

10) write in silence or with background noise? with people or alone?

11) what aspect of your writing do you think has most improved since you started writing?

12) your weaknesses as an author

13) your strengths as an author

14) do you make playlists for your current wips?

15) why did you start writing?

16) are there any characters who haunt you?

17) if you could give your fledgling author self any advice, what would it be?

18) were there any works you read that affected you so much that it influenced your writing style? what were they?

19) when it comes to more complicated narratives, how do you keep track of outlines, characters, development, timeline, ect.?

20) do you write in long sit-down sessions or in little spurts?

21) what do you think when you read over your older work?

22) are there any subjects that make you uncomfortable to write?

23) any obscure life experiences that you feel have helped your writing?

24) have you ever become an expert on something you previously knew nothing about, in order to better a scene or a story?

25) copy/paste a few sentences or a short paragraph that you’re particularly proud of

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Reblog if it's okay to befriend you, ask questions, ask for advice, rant, vent, let something off your chest, or just have a nice chat.

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*adding to chapter 3 of Something to Someone

(Just to explain some stuff because I somehow doubt I'll be able to express it clearly in writing and I'm just too eager to share TvT)

About Mizuchi feeding

So you know how Shizuko is planning to eat a pigeon, or to be specific, the shinsu of a pigeon?

Well, that's a Mizuchi thing :D the Mizuchi feed on the shinsu of living creatures. Like humans have meat, vegetables etc to get nutrients from, they have shinsu fulfilling the energy needs. To extract it, they'd normally need an exit place like a wound of any type, but with greater control over shinsu in general, they could just pull it out.

Note that the shinsu that exists normally in the environment is not of the same quality as the one in creatures and thus doesn't represent a meal.

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Chapter 3 yeyy

And we get into some worldbuilding 👀

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Share a spoiler (or two) you’ve been dying to share about your OC! :)

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First off, thank you for the invitation! :)) I’ve been dying to share some stuff about my OC, but with my writing speed right now, I probably won’t get to any of this soon. XD So the ask came at a great time.

Sooo my OC Shizuko is a Mizuchi, a race I’ve made up for Tower of God, and these guys, they’re practically notorious for being the most unambitious creatures (I won’t go into why that is because it’s part of the lore I hope to include in the fic 👀). And because they are like this, they generally make it their goal to- um find a goal. XD Shizuko was raised in this environment, pushed to find a purpose for herself.

Buuuuuut being the MC, she’s not like the others of her kind :)) (how exactly will come up later). That said, her older brother that she was closest to did find something he wanted to do with his life, but that got him banished from the town. This created a serious internal struggle (as you’d expect from a kid) and she started to doubt the teachings of the elders. How come we’re encouraged to find a goal, but when he found his, he was sent away…? Shizuko was thinking of running away and joining him, but that’s when Headon came and invited her to enter the Tower. Dun dun duuun may the fic begin! :D

Also also Shizuko loves music :p listening to it or singing along (no one said on-key).

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Related to chapter 2 of "Something to Someone"

The Mizuchi tail modes

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Chapter 2 is hereeee :D

(Where stuff starts to get good, hopefully)

I'll also post some bonus stuff here in a bit, stay tuned :))

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In connection to chapter 1 of "Something to Someone"

Introducing Shizuko, this is kinda what I imagined her looking like

Also a first glance at a Mizuchi

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Hi, Moon is back :3

This time with a Tower of God fanfic ^^

Wealth, honor, power, whatever you desire can be found in the tower. But can you find your desire in the tower?

Young Shizuko is the first of her race to enter in a long time and it quickly becomes clear she is not welcome there. Most agree she is too foreign, too dangerous to allow to live or thrive in the inner tower.

But you just have to ask the right people...

(Aka this writer thought it'd be fun forcing canon characters to deal with a kid)

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The end is near, the end is here TwT

I present to you- Chapter 11, the finale part 2

A fitting end to the story I'd say XD extra angst, reunions are also fun and some other unrealistic stuff :p

It was a lot of fun writing this, hope you enjoyed it too and thank you for the attention! :))

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Finale part 1 is here XD

Want a fireworks festival? And some heartfelt conversation? OvO

Also some teens being dumb and emotional and getting everyone in trouble? XD

All in this chapter of ^^

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Chapter 9 is fine OwO

In which

Moon tried to use a pretty cute trope with moderate effectiveness

INTERNSHIP WEEEK

I say no more, read for yourself ;))

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Chapter 8 is saved...

One word: carpets

Ok, some more words: ghost buddy in action

All in chapter 8, don't miss it! :))

PS: I sound more like those people advertising on tv by the chapter TwT oops

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Chapter 7 weee

I finally managed some fluff-

Then veered off course back into angst TwT sigh

Also some familiar ground in the form of canon events isn't that nice...?

PS I might or might not be a tease XD