The Unfiltered Truth About Writing a Book
Dive deep into the candid and challenging journey of book writing with our guest, Patrick, as he shares his raw experiences and invaluable tips. From grappling with the difficulties of authorship to the transformative advice of an experienced editor, Patrick unveils the often untold struggles and triumphs of creating a literary masterpiece. This episode is a must-listen for aspiring authors and anyone curious about the behind-the-scenes of book writing." Highlights: - 00:01:00** - Patrick's Initial Struggles with Book Writing - 00:02:00** - The Vital Role of a Good Editor - 00:03:00** - Overcoming Writing Challenges and Structure Changes - *00:04:00* - Cutting Down from 700 to 250 Pages - *00:05:00* - The Discipline of Writing: Treating it Like a Sport - *00:06:00* - The Importance of Accountability in Writing Timestamps: - *00:00:00* - Introduction to Book Writing Challenges - *00:01:00* - The Hardest Aspects of Writing a Book - *00:02:00* - Finding the Right Editor and Rewriting - *00:03:00* - Structure Change: From First to Third Person - *00:04:00* - Trimming Down the Manuscript - *00:05:00* - Developing Writing Discipline - *00:06:00* - Making Yourself Accountable Why Watch - *For Aspiring Authors:* Gain honest insights and practical advice from someone who has endured the book writing process. - *For Book Enthusiasts:* Understand the complexities and dedication required behind every page of a book. - *For Personal Growth:* Learn about the discipline, resilience, and accountability necessary in any creative endeavor. -
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ok im waffling on about fallout instead of having breakfast but i saw a criticism of how the prisoners were treated that's stuck with me.
spoilers!
so i think the criticism wasn't incorrect, per se: it condemned the way the show portrayed the vault dweller's naive intention to rehabilitate their murderous captives. it found fault with a common, and horrible, message that tv shows like to say, which is that carcerial violence and even the death penalty is the only effective way to deal with criminals, who are a fundamentally Bad category of human. im sick of that message too! but i think that wasn't what was going on here, actually.
so like, the vault dwellers had only ever experienced violent loss the once, and didn't really know how to cope other than denial and repression of the ordeal. but they were all hopeful and enthusiastic that their prisoners, the invaders that came to kill them all and take their stuff, could be eventually welcomed into the community as their comrades. the champions of this cause were nebbishy dorks and painfully out of touch academics. this is pretty normal for how prison reformers are portrayed, if extremely fucking annoying for those of us who ARE in favor of prison reform.
but so of course when the son of the former overseer, Norm, speaks up and suggests killing the prisoners, because why should they share resources with invaders who explicitly wanted to keep hurting them? why should they show mercy to their attackers? everyone is appalled by this suggestion. because they had to reinvent the whole concept of vengeance right then and there, because grudges and cycles of violence are anathema to a bottle society like theirs. they have been raised all their lives to forgive and forget and now, put to the test, they're recommitting to this ethos: get along, let the past go, look towards the future, believe the best of everyone.
but the prisoners die, anyway. the prisoners are killed with rat poison. and the thing is that Norm who suggested it didn't do it himself. and the prison guard who's blamed for it, even though she privately agreed with Norm that the prisoners are dangerous and unforgiveable, she didn't do it either. it's not a moment of triumphant, cathartic vengeance and it doesn't prove that there's no way to negotiate with terrorists and invaders but kill them like vermin because that's not what the message is meant to be.
the message is that norm stands there in the middle of these inconvenient prisoners, these corpses dressed in his own people's uniforms, and he looks at the new overseer. and he knows that she killed them, and she knows that he knows. she wanted him to know. this is her message and he's reading her loud and clear. and he doesn't look like a guy who's just been backed up by authority, who's just been validated in his desire for the ultimate control over those who have wronged him.
he's scared and pale and the music is ominous as fuck. and he's inside the cell, he's directly in the middle of it.
because what just happened is that he realized his entire society is being held prisoner, and the overseer is the one with the rat poison. and that he doesn't know, anymore, what freedom and safety and justice actually mean, just that he doesn't have them and he doesn't know where to find them.
that's what that scene meant. not that rehabilitative justice is a pathetic delusion of people who have no idea how to make hard choices.
but that before you advocate for killing prisoners, you might want to see how big that prison is, first.
and which side of the bars you're standing on.
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Not The Blood Son
Damian is not Bruce Wayne's biological son. A fact that no one was aware of, not even Talia herself.
This was because Ra found the DNA of a being related to the Lazarus pits, and was willing to make a clone for further study; However, he lost the sample. On the other hand, Talia, who was trying to created a kid of her and her beloved used the wrong sample.
Talia never realized this due to Damian's resemblance to Bruce. When Damian got to the mansion, Bruce take Talia's word for it, of course, she ran some blood tests but the computer started crashing at that point, showing the result to be 'similar'. He decided to do new tests later, but that result was enough at the time.
Everything Damian was proud of: his heritage, his own as the only blood son, his right to be "Batman", was gone as soon as his mother revealed the truth. His father, of course, said that he was still his son regardless of blood but Damian was not happy with that.
He was supposed to be different from his brothers, he was supposed to be Batman, but if he wasn't... who was he? What was his true purpose? what was the right path to choose?
Determined to find a new purpose, Damian decided to search for his biological father. Something in which his family offered him support. The problem was that the only information they had came from Ra and one of his former business associates. A certain "Plasmius", Damian's father had no other description beyond "Related to the Lazarus pits"
Danny Fenton, finally out of the hero life, and living with his "cousin" in Amity (and the Infinite Realms) had no idea how much was about to change his quiet retirement life.
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Living weapon whumpees that attack their caretakers when they try to feed them.
Conditioned whumpees that beg their caretakers to return them to whumper.
Interrogated whumpees that are positive their caretakers are playing mind games.
Lab whumpees that vehemently refuse to receive any medical treatment, not even from their caretakers.
Villain whumpees that don't know how to manage emotions, and lash out at their caretakers, spitting words that really hurt.
Whumpees that are hard to care for, and caretakers that carry on nontheless.
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