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nothing funnier than a CG team busting ass to create crazy visuals to see every hair follicle and the light reflecting in character's eyes and minute facial expressions animated smoothly just for it all to end up looking like ass anyways
#.txt#there were a lot of things bad about mufasa but the lack of people critiquing the CG makes me feel like a lonely ship captain#all the critiques are like yeah it was shit but it had beitiful animation#no it fucking didnt!!!#the lions looked like they were imported into the background wrong and should be walking on a different plane#using humans to mocap the front of the lions i think wa satupid it doesnt translate the best#the facial expressions dont translate the best either#the expressions they wanted would have been better 2D or 3D animated not how they did it#mult times i was like lions dont walk like that. lions dont do that behavior#'but its fictional' ok so then dont try to make it look realistic bc it translates like ass!!!#anyways also the songs were bad i immediately knew they were lin manual#and pacing and plot was bad#the voice acting was weak#mads was alright and so was john but everyone else meh#also casting the white guy to play the whote lion is funny as fuck
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now that we're a little away from it, are people ready to admit that 814 sucked ass, too? and I'm not talking in a hindsight, seen through post-816 glasses way, no the episode always sucked. and we said that. but people were all like "wait and see!! don't judge a two parter based on one episode!" well we waited. and we saw. still sucks ass
#911.txt#there were sooo many bad things about that episode man#weak plot missing eddie terrible editing masks obliterating the acting missing eddie#didn't know who was who for a solid 15 mins missing eddie#boring episode overall terrible pacing MISSING EDDIE#and plot holes or whatever#but most importantly#missing eddie
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"And are these fanfics better than published novels in the room with us right now?"
#I say while currently delighting in a fanfic I would consider at the level of Douglas Adams or P.G. Wodehouse#but the thing is. okay.#Fanfic depends on familiarity with and affection for the source material.#Which is not a bad thing! But it's like saying that a well-decorated bathroom is better than a house.#it's. it's not.#Yes the writing quality can be excellent. Yes the plotting and pacing and dialogue and world-expansion and etc. can be spectacular.#But you can't move into it like you can a novel.
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#the trainee the series#the trainee series#the trainee ep12#janeryan#jane x ryan#offgun#off jumpol#gun atthaphan#gmmtv#thai bl#bl drama#bye bye the trainee!#all in all a show with good messages about life and a good cast#but also with terrible romance plots; a strange pacing and unreasonable character choices and developments#too bad#at least we know OG can do better
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A taste of Schadenfreude

Fic fanart for AngeliaDark on ao3 <333


I really really love this fic if u cant tell already(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Kinda late but big spoilers for chap 2 n a bit of the later ones(slide 4) ig:)??? Still go check it out if u r comfortable,maybe say hi to me in the comments I'm Angst_bb_angst ( ╹▽╹ )


Also adamsapple brainrot<333 like Petrigrof is amazing in its own genre don't get me wrong I love them till death but boi don't I miss bickering enemies to lovers typa ship
#hazbin hotel#lucifer morningstar#fic fanart#hazbin hotel adam#lucifer x adam#fic reccomendations#adamsapple#adamapple#hazbin hotel fanart#digital art#artists on tumblr#hazbin hotel lucifer#ship art#i like how the fandom stuff seem to be higher quality#in plot than the actual show#like the pacing is really bad
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just finished omori manga chapter 7 and i am DYING laughing. this shit isnt even bad anymore its just funny bad. oh my god
#im hollering reading this because oh my god#the whole thing is a mix between “oh. what were they thinking/neg” and “HOLY FUCKING SHIT WHAT WERE THEY THINKING/pos”#like WHAT. space pirate oc. spaceboy ex machina. completely forgetting the fundamentals of how the truth is handled in headspace. cackling#also i know its a manga but... the sweetheart battle is GOLD#shes just wiping the floor with these kids while hero's like “oh no... her power level... its too strong...” and same with omori when he-#-doesn't succumb. i CANNOT take this manga seriously jesus christ#also side note yes you're reading this correctly!! sweetheart's entire plot line is resolved in ONE (1) chapter#like. sorry what. the horrendous pacing is getting worse and worse i reckon we'll be in blackspace in like three chapters#but!!! some things i liked#PHOBIA BOSSES ARE BACK!!!! arachnophobia is here!!! even though the way they handle it is not canon compliant but that's progress#they keep the censored kissing joke too but its arguably better here because of how detailed and romantic the panel is so. points there#one of my fav jokes from the og game#and uh. oh the sprout moles are fucking adorable i loved those#omori#but yeah tldr i cannot find it in my heart to be mad at this anymore. it is just hilariously bad to me which is a major improvement compare#-to my previous opinion of it like twenty minutes ago which was that it was just Bad#anyway. i try not to complain much on this page but god i cannot ignore this shit anymore its SO BAD ITS FUNNY#cleg's omanga tirades
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Oh production knew what they were doing all right.
Shen Song x Gongsun Li eps 1-6
It only gets more bromantic from here. 🤭
#towards the truth#cdrama#the ai subs are so so bad unfortunately#but the series is actually not bad in terms of plot and pacing#bromance aside
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Hot take; I don’t like Sweet Vitriol. Not because I don’t like Cobel but because I think she didn’t deserve to be completely written out of the show.
#like#I’m not even going to get into the complete mistake that was putting two solo episodes back to back#with the first episode being an engaging lore reveal staring one of the most beloved characters in the show#giving us insight on the main plot’s big mystery#having it followed by a slow paced interpretive episode starring a character no one outside of tumblr really appreciates#but like I also think all of Sweet Vitriol should have been a C plot to the main MarkGemma mystery and Irving/Seths/Hellynas investigations#because Cobel is IMPORTANT#she was the main big bad of season one#she DESERVES the screen time#she DESERVES the importance#and more importantly she DESERVES a place in the show#she was completely fucked out of the story line in season 2 and shoe horned back in so unnaturally#and she doesn’t DESERVE THATTT#I think having her segments split along the rest of the episodes as a C plot would have made her transition back in with the mains#for episodes 9/10 so much more natural#I have#a lot of problems with season 2#rants#rants that may not make sense#severance#severance spoilers#severance season 2#severance 2#text post#harmony cobel
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the vampire!lila fanfic is being written. she has just kidnapped a bleeding, magicless, whining kell. 😈😈😈
#it’s only going to be a oneshot though#i was not THAT inspired#let’s be real#would write more but i can’t stand looking at my own writing#makes me gag#also i’m really bad at pacing#and plot#this thing has like no story#lila bard#kell maresh#kellila#a darker shade of magic#adsom#writing#fanfic
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Being on Tumblr when Blades 2 was releasing was hell. All the posts were either ‘I hate Shadow!Nia she’s such a fucking bitch’ and ‘Shadow!Nia is so much better because she’s such a fucking bitch (and makes my MC look better)’ and no one genuinely interested in what it meant for her character
#except oomfs<33 where’s that one jam post about nia haters….#playchoices#choices#pixelberry#blades of light and shadow#nia ellarious#bolas#anyway i genuinely believe b2 was the best blades book. sure it had some pacing issues#but plot character and themes-wise it was the strongest#also while aerin was missing from most the book i don’t think it was necessarily a bad thing#like yes it was done super clunky but his b3 arc is good#so i just take it as b2 wasn’t his book and that’s literally okay#only people who also like b2 can make arguments for b3 as the best book. if you hated b2 your opinion means nothing
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do u ever just watch a movie and think "this should have been a multi-season tv series with a run-time spanning multiple days instead of them trying to cram all that plot into 1.5 hours"
#mickey 17#they did NOT give that plot enough time to breathe it was so rushed and weirdly paced#the movie was mid as fuck and i would even venture as far as to say it was kinda bad. but it had some rlly great ideas and potential#esp with the characters and their dynamics with each other#but it felt like the equivalent of making a movie out of a sparknotes entry or something#like we were just getting the edited highlights instead of a real plot
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I love Christopher
#I like to think he says this like he’s trying to spare the blades feelings btw#just adds some ambiance to it for me idk#the last hours#the shadowhunter chronicles#literature#christopher lightwood#anyway this reread is reminding me that once my coworker had finished#TID (I made him read it) one of his biggest criticisms was that Henry wasn’t really a character#just an autism caricature that functioned to love the plot along occasionally#and like…. I see where he’s coming from#but I remember feeling that way about Christopher the first time I read CoG#and I really think that would have been alleviated with better pacing *cough cough* 4th book *cough cough*#but it’s not as bad upon reread as I was making myself remember#the pacing of this fight scene is bad tho#and the one at the picnic#didn’t mean to get all negative here in the tags whoooops#mine#not me going off in the tags
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dangerous romance is fun because its completely character driven and none of the characters know if they want to be in a romcom or a drama
#like ive seen critisisms saying that the plot/pacing/etc is bad#but i genuinely think that dangerous romance is appealing bc its a bunch of tropes in a trench coat#and it *works* bc the setup with the characters is good enough that as long as theyre in character (which they are) they can do anything#and it feels like it fits#the downside is not everybody likes the characters#dangerous romance#book’s quotes
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not to keep complaining about bad severance takes but I just saw someone say this season was shit and all buildup and no payoff and I felt like I was having an aneurysm
#dylan says things#like I do think it was a messier season than the first especially in terms of pacing#but like. genuinely what do you mean there was no payoff#like yeah not everything wrapped up but like. We're getting a season 3 we don't want everything wrapped up#they got gemma out and the innies character arcs absolutely had fucking payoff are you kidding me#and we got like a bunch of answers about stuff also?#mark didn't finish reintegrating helly/helena stuff is still up in the air Milchick's still going through his arc#it's not a bad thing that these are still relevant plot points going into the next season good lord#what payoff were you looking for exactly?#severance#severance season 2
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i'm at that stage of MA thesis writing where i'm doing all sorts of Activities that is NOT writing my thesis. in other news i started watching Rings of Power
#it's a sneaky one bc when i'm actively watching i have a good time but afterwards i begin to notice the flaws#kate hawley you can do amazing costumes i'm sorry you were probs under tremendous crunch and budget restrictions#but charles edwards as celebrimbor HIIIII#i hope nothing bad happens to mr whimsical hubris#<- says a frog who read the silmarillion so knows Exactly what happens to him down the line#also it's like keeps jumping from one plot to another but it somehow moves at a snail's pace. how.
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seen lots of people angry and/or confused as to why people didn’t like ep8 of severance — it wasn’t very good. hope this helps!
#to claim it’s because it was a filler episode or giving background info or not about the main cast is laughable tbh#as if we didn’t just have an incredibly popular and acclaimed episode on gemma’s background that did very little to further the plot#as if everyone didn’t lose their minds over that gay tlou episode a couple years ago that focused on side characters#like that’s not the issue mary#the episode was dry and the pacing was bad !#severance spoilers#severance
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