when is it my turn to get fucked senseless by my enemy-turned-lover on his fucking throne as he confesses his undying love????!
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You know I feel like the placement of Beast Yeast and Odyssey is kind of confusing for newer players, especially if they don’t really interact with the fandom and know when the stories are supposed to take place
Odyssey’s not as bad, but you unlock it after finishing Episode 12, when it only happens after Episode 14, after the Dark Cacao storyline. It’s probably not the worst thing, but if you decide to start it after Episode 12, I feel like it could be confusing as to why Dark Cacao’s there at the least, since you haven’t met him or you’ve only barely seen him if you’ve started Episode 13
But as for Beast Yeast, you unlock it after finishing Episode 8, despite it taking place after both Odyssey and probably more importantly, Episode 18. Heck, you unlock it right before the Pure Vanilla story. So I mean starting off, you might not even understand why Pure Vanilla’s there. As I recall, you don’t really know what happened to Pure Vanilla by that point and that he’s still around, we were still led to believe he’s dead, right? And then you don’t really have the full context as to why they’re in Beast Yeast, since we only get the reason at the end of Episode 18, or who the Crème Republic is that gave them the airship, and if the other Ancients are referenced later on, what the heck they’re doing there. I mean okay, it might not be incomprehensible, players can probably understand that these are story events they just haven’t seen yet, but why place unlocking it so far behind the rest of the story? Because those new players don’t have context for over half the story by this point
Yeah it’s not as confusing for us already having played the game and being there when the story updates come out, but what about newer players who don’t have that context and maybe don’t interact with the fandom that much to know what’s going on?
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Writing something with a lot of dialogue is crazy because i feel like i've written a lot already but then i check see it's just roughtly over 2000 words so far
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Daily excerpt from today's writing, chapter 18 of A Stain that Won't Dissolve:
Sebastian's smile was so warm. Then he rocked back and forward on his hips and sighed.
'Not to target you while you're still recovering or anything, but I really think we should talk about high school. It just seems like... It just seems like that's between us actually becoming friends, or whatever.'
'Like you want to be friends with someone like me,' Alex said, finding the whole thing darkly funny.
'That's just it, why wouldn't I? Like, actually, when you're not putting me down for being gay - which...is a whole other thing - or being a nerd, or being whatever, you're actually just an interesting, quiet guy. Why wouldn't I want to be friends with you?'
Alex couldn't think of what to say. Embarrassingly, there was a voice in his head shouting: Sebastian thinks I'm interesting!
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I'M GOING BACK TO WORKING ON MY PRE-CALAMITY LONGFIC AAAAAAAGGHHHHHHHHHH BELLS HERE I COME
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Everyone stop what you’re doing!
I found an old draft of Erica pov for chapter 16!!!
I have to to some editing to it so it’ll match the version I have posted, so do y’all want it to be my new priority, or should I focus on finishing the next main chapter (which I’ll finish either tomorrow or Wednesday)?
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Holy shit I may update Again Like Before tonight
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